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Hi, I am interested in working on this translation bounty. I will submit a PM and accept the bounty shortly.

It's editing in progress for this bounty



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This post has been edited by feathered: May 1 2019, 09:46

I would like to accept the bounty for:
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17950

I'll probably translate the author's comments unless I get too lazy.

Also, is there a reason why the TOC on page 4 isn't translated?

Here is the completed script for the bounty for "Eclair wo Motto Monde Miyou!", let me know if there's anything I should fix.

Bounty Page: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=19455
Gallery Page: https://e-hentai.org/g/889336/847549df9d/

==== FILE BEGIN
Title-PseudoRomaji: Eclair wo Motto Monde Miyou!
Title-English: Let's Massage Eclair More!

Translator: Shark Man 12345
Version: 2

Notes:
Legend: {} Alternatives and Meanings Notes for Proofreader and Editor
() Placement & Font Information for Editor


|||| Page 1
: エクレをもっと揉んでみよう
Let's Massage Eclair More!

: (Inside Warning Label) 成人向け
For Adults

: (Under Warning Label) 18歳未満の // 購入・閲覧禁止
Buying or reading not allowed for individuals under 18.


|||| Page 2
: エクレをもっと揉んでみよう
Let's Massage Eclair More!

: (Inside Warning Label) 成人向け
For Adults

: (Under Warning Label) 18歳未満の // 購入・閲覧禁止
Buying or reading not allowed for individuals under 18.

|||| Page 3
--- Panel 1
: うああああああっっっっっー！
Uaaagh!

: 痛ああああああいっ…！
That huuuurts...!

--- Panel 2
: どうするエクレ？
What're you gonna do, Eclair?

: ギブアップする？
Give up?

: (SFX, both right and left) ギリ
Twist {or Creak}

--- Panel 3
: ダ、ダメだ
N.. No,

: まだまだ...ー
Not yet...

: うああああっ
Uaaagh,

: 痛ああああ...ー！
Ouuuuch...! {Owwwww...!}

|||| Page 4
--- Panel 1
: (SFX)ぎゅうぅぅぅ
Squeeze

--- Panel 2
: エクレ // ホントに大丈夫？
Eclair, are you really ok?

: あっ、ああ
Ah, yeah,

: その痛いのがなんともいい感じ...だ...
That pain sort of feels good...

--- Panel 3
: あぁっ♡
Ahh♡

--- Panel 4
: (Side Title) エクレをもっと揉んでみよう！
Let's Massage Eclair More! {The "More" is in the bubble. If you can manage to recreate the logo somehow, you could put "More" in a bubble at the bottom perhaps}

: 勇者さま！ // プロレスで // ありますか！
Hero! // Are you two wrestling!?

: リコもやるであります！
Riko wants to wrestle too!

|||| Page 5
--- Panel 1
: リ、リコ、ー // これはプロレスじゃなくて // マサージしてるんだよ？
Ri.. Riko, This isn't wrestling, this is a massage, ok?

: よくプロレス知ってたね。
I'm surprised you know this is wrestling. {Not sure how to make this shorter, maybe "Well said", if you run out of space}

: (SFX, top) ドスッ！！
Thud {Thunk}

: お前たち // 私の上ではしゃぐな！
Hey, don't play around on top of me!

: っていうか降りろ！
Actually, just get off!

: リコも勇者様にマッサージ // してもらいたいであります♪
Riko wants to give the hero a massage too!♪

--- Panel 2
: 勇者様達の邪魔しちゃいけませんよ、リコ
You mustn't bother them, Riko.

: はいであります // 姫様
Ahh, you're right, Princess.

: ごめんねリコ
Sorry, Riko.

--- Panel 3
: エクレ、私たちは戻りますので
Eclair, we're going back, so

: ゆっくり体を休めてくださいね
Take it easy and rest up, alright?

: であります
{ Honestly just erase this sub-textbox, it's only Riko's speech thing, which it sounds like FFFansubs cuts out, so I'm gonna do the same. If you need something here, maybe "Ok?" }

: 申し訳ありません姫様 // このような格好のままで
Sorry for just laying here, Princess. {This isn't quite the literal meaning, but better than the literal in English}

--- Panel 4 (Just the right textbox on its own)
: 騒がしかったな
What a racket. {More literal: "That/she was sure noisy"}

--- Panel 5
: それでは続きを // してもらおうか、勇者♪
Okay then, let's continue, hero.♪

|||| Page 6
--- Panel 1
: う、うん
Ah, ok.

: ーって
Wait...

--- Panel 2
: (Top, Right) いつのまにか
Since when were

: (Top, Left) まる見え...!
her panties showing {I think I would recommend combining these two into one line}

: (SFX, bottom) ふり ふり
Swish Swish

--- Panel 3
: (SFX) パシッ
Fwhoosh

--- Panel 4
: 足の裏はもういい // 他の場所を頼む
The bottom of my feet are fine, do somewhere else.

: は、はぁ
Ah, ok.

: じゃぁ腰でー
I'll do your back then. {More literally "waist", but back sorta sounds better?}

--- Panel 5
: あぁ、頼む
Ah, sounds good {maybe change "sounds good" to "ok" if too long}

: (Small) んっ♡
Mmm♡


: 前も言ったが尻尾の付け根はダメだぞ？
I already told you this, but don't touch the root of my tail, ok?

|||| Page 7
--- Panel 1
: (Top Right) んっ♡
Mmm♡

: (SFX, Both at right) もぞ
Squirm {Shuffle, Snuggle, Fidget}

: (SFX, Both at left) ぐいっ
Squeeze

: (Bottom Left) んっ♡
Mmm♡

--- Panel 2
: お、おい
H.. Hey

: (SFX) かあっ
Blush

: だからその辺はー
I told you, not there...

--- Panel 3
: え？
Hmm?

: 何か言った？
Did you say something?

: (SFX) コッン
Flumpf {Flap; this is his hair falling on her I think}

: !!
!!

--- Panel 4
: どうかしたエクレ？
What's wrong, Eclair?

: うわああああああ // あああああっ!!
Aaaaaaah!!

: (SFX) ドギ マギ
Flustered {The words on both sides connect to mean flustered or embarrassed}

|||| Page 8
--- Panel 1
: もう、暴れちゃダメだよ
Come on now, don't struggle.

--- Panel 2
: (SFX (all 3)) ドキ
Thump {Heartbeat}

: あっ // ああっ
Ah.. Ahh...

--- Panel 3
: ほら
Look

: (SFX, both) ぐいっ
Grab {Squeeze, Stretch, Lift}

: こんなになちゃってる
You struggled so much that your panties are showing. {<- A more literal translation is "It's getting like this", but that doesn't make sense in English}

--- Panel 4
: (SFX, left and right top) パチン
Smack {Slap, Snap}

: (SFX, ビクッ)
Flinch

: !?
!?

--- Panel 5
: ボ、ボクは今一体ー
What the heck am I...

: (SFX) はっっっ
Gasp

: (The middle bubble) 何をやっているんだー！？
Doing!? {Basically they both speak this bubble.}

--- Panel 6
: こいつは一体ー
What the hell is he...

: (SFX, both) ふる
Shake

|||| Page 9
--- Panel 1
: ダメだこの状況ー // 早くなんとかしないと！
This is bad, I need to do something fast! {"This is a bad situation, I need to do something fast!"}

: ととと、とりあえず // 元通りにー
A.. An.. Anyways, I need to put them back how they were...

--- Panel 2 (Subpanel in 1)
: (SFX) ぐいっ
Grab {Squeeze, Stretch, Lift}

: (SFX) パチン
Slap {Smack, Snap}

--- Panel 3
: ーって違う！ // そうじゃない！
Wait no! Not like that!

: (Handwritten left of face) おわった
It's over.

--- Panel 4
: ~~~~~!!
~~~~!!

--- Panel 5
: 何をバカな遊びをしているんだコイツは
What kind of stupid game is he playing!? {Maybe "What is he playing at!?"}

: (SFX, both bottom) ふる
Shake

: おおお落ち着くんだ私
I... I need to calm down. {Maybe "C... Calm down, Eclair" sounds better? It's her telling herself to calm down.}

|||| Page 10
--- Panel 1
: こういう時こそ // 冷静な対処をー
Especially at times like these, I need to keep composed.

--- Panel 2
: つっっっ、続けてくれないか // （マッサージを）
C... Could you please continue? (The massage)

--- Panel 3
: う、
Uh,

: うんー
Yeah.

: (SFX) ぎゅ♡
Squeeze♡

-- Panel 4
: (SFX) ビクン
Flinch

: (SFX, both) ぐいっ
Stretch

-- Panel 5
: あぁ、わすれていた // コイツも本物のバカだった
Oh yeah, I forgot, this guy is a real idiot. {Maybe "this guy is a" to "this guy's a"}

: (SFX) ぷる
Shake {"Rattle", this is a stronger shake than before}

: (SFX) ぐっ
Squeeze {Hold on, grab}

|||| Page 11
--- Panel 1
: (SFX, both on bottom) ぐいっ
Stretch

: んっ
Mmm

: お、おい
H.. Hey...

--- Panel 2
: (SFX, both top) ぐいっ
Stretch

: (SFX, both bottom) もじ
Fidget

--- Panel 3
: (SFX) ぎゅうっ♡
Squeeze♡

: (SFX) もぞっ
Snuggle {Fidget, Shuffle}

--- Panel 4
: も、もう少し
C.. Could you

: 優しくしてくれないかー
Be a little more gentle?

--- Panel 5
: えっ...
Hmm?

: う、うん
Uh, sure.

: (SFX, large bottom) スッ...
Slide

: (SFX, all 3) ドキ
Thump {heartbeat}

: ー // これでいい？
Like this?

|||| Page 12
--- Panel 1
: おっ
H...

: おいっー
Hey.

--- Panel 2
: (SFX, both) ぐに
Squish

--- Panel 3
: ー // このエロ勇者め
What a perverted hero. {"Such a perverted hero."}

--- Panel 4
: (SFX, upper both sides) すり
Rub {Slide, slip}

: (SFX, lower) スッ...
Slide

--- Panel 5
: やっぱり
Ahh,

: 気持ちいいんだ // ...
This feels just as good as I thought...

--- Panel 6
: ぐいっ
Slide {Slip aside}

: くちっ...
Squelch

|||| Page 13
--- Panel 5
: すごい...
Amazing...

: 女の子のココって // こんなになるんだ...
Girls get so wet down here...

: いっ.. // 言うな...
Sh.. Shut up.

: (SFX, twice at bottom) くちっ
Squelch

--- Panel 2
: くちゅっ...
Rub {Stroke}

--- Panel 3
: シュッ
Swish {Rub, stroke ,, It's slightly different than the previous rub}

-- Panel 4
: んんっ♡
Mmm♡

: ふーっ
Fuu {Hah; Some sort of breath out sound}

: ふーっ
Fuu {Hah; Same as above}

--- Panel 5
: (SFX, big upper) つぷっ
Squish {Splash}

: (SFX, both lower) くちゅ
Squelch

: んんーっ♡
Mmmn♡

--- Panel 6
: (SFX, right) ビクン
Twitch {Flinch}

: (SFX, big top right) つぼっ
Splish

: (SFX, bottom middle) ぴゅっ
Squirt {Splurt}

: んぁっ♡
Ngaah♡

: (SFX, left) ビクン
Twitch {Flinch}

|||| Page 14
--- Panel 1
: お、お前さえ良ければー
As long as it's you,

: はーっ♡
Haa♡

: もっと...マッサージを // 続けていいぞ...♡
It's okay if we go on with the massage...♡

--- Panel 2
: んっ♡
Nn♡

: あっ♡
Ah♡

--- Panel 3
: はぁ♡
Haa♡ {Hah♡}

: はぁ♡
Haa♡ {Hah♡}

: (SFX) ぎゅうっ♡
Squeeze♡

--- Panel 4
: んっ♡
Nn♡ {Mm}

: んんっ♡
Nngh♡

: 痛い...
It hurts...

: (SFX, both) ぬっぷ
Fwump

--- Panel 5
痛いがー
It hurts, but...

|||| Page 15
--- Panel 1
: (SFX) つぷっ
Squish {Fwhump}

: んっ♡
Nn♡

: そのままー
Just like that...

--- Panel 2

: んっ...
Nn

: くぅっ♡
Ahh♡

--- Panel 3
: (SFX) ずぽっ！
Thwump!

--- Panel 4
: (SFX, both right) ぬっぷ
Fhwump

: エクレ...大丈夫？
Eclair, you ok? {"Eclair, are you ok?"}

: すわっ♡
Ahh,♡

: いい感じだ♡
Yeah, it feels good.♡

: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: 痛気持ちいいというかー
The pain feels good, or actually...

--- Panel 5
: んっ♡
Nn♡

: 入り口あたりや奥のー
The entrance and deep inside... {"Entrance" sounds sorta awkward, maybe "Mouth", but that may imply actual mouth? Or "opening"?}

: (small) んっ♡
Nn♡

: (SFX, right) ずぷぷっ♡
Shwhump♡

: (SFX, left) ずぷっ
Thwump

: その辺が特に
Feel especially good.

: んんっ♡
Nngh♡

|||| Page 16
--- Panel 1
: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: エクレの膣内、気持ちよくて // 止まらない...!
You feel so good inside, I can't stop!

: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: これじゃどちらがマサージ // しているかわからないな♡
I don't get what about this is a massage...♡ {Maybe "How is this still a massage?" or "What part of this is a massage?"}

--- Panel 2 (small top)
: (SFX) ぬっ...
Slide...

: (SFX) んっ♡
Nn♡

--- Panel 3 (small bottom)
: (SFX) つぷっ♡
Thwump♡

: (SFX) コツン
Thunk {Shunk}

: (At the very bottom left of this panel) んんっ♡
Nngh♡

--- Panel 4
: (SFX, both) ぬっぷ
Fwump

: エクレ...ボク、もう...
Eclair, I'm about to... {maybe "about to" to "almost"?}

: 膣内はダメだぞ // お、お前との子はまだ早い...
Not inside, I.. I don't want to have your baby yet. {Maybe "baby with you yet" instead of "your baby yet". The 3 slanted lines at the bottom are embarrassment lines, keep them if you can, maybe even move them to a better place}

: うん
Ok

--- Panel 5
: ぬぽっ！
Shwump! {"Flurp"? The idea is it's coming out pretty fast}

|||| Page 17
--- Panel 1
: (All 3, top, right of head, above left buttcheek) はぁ♡
Haa♡

: そんなにたくさん // 射精るんだー
So much is coming out {"You're sure cumming a lot"}

: (SFX, both) ぴゅうっ
Splurt {Spurt, Splash}

: (SFX, all 3 at bottom) ビクン
Twitch

--- Panel 2
: (SFX) ぎゅ♡
Squeeze

: 凄く良かったぞ
That was really good,

: また...マッサージ頼む♡
Give me another massage some time♡

--- Panel 3
{No Text}

--- Panel 4
: (SFX) じ〜っ
Stare

: ...
...

--- Panel 5
: やっぱりプロレスでありますね！
I knew you guys were wrestling!

: (Under the panel) おわり
The End


|||| Page 18
: ■ あとがき
■ Afterword

: まいど、BOMでございます！ // ようやくエクレのターンです！
Thanks for your purchase, I am BOM! // Eclair's turn has finally come!

: とりあえず本編では着衣エッチ // が過ぎて全然脱いでいないので、 // 表紙絵を剥くみました〜。
First off, since this volume is all clothed sex, and they don't take anything off, I tried to peel off clothes in the cover art.

: 今回は出オチ感の強いネタで始 // まって、その後はBD特典CDの // ネタを拾ってみましたが、如何 // でしたでしょうか？
This time I started with some appearance gags, and then used some material from the Blu-ray's special edition CD. How was it? {I think he's talking about where his story came from here. The "appearance gags" is in relation to Riko appearing at the beginning of the story.}

: 中の人繋がりで『せかつよ』 // ネタなら、そこはリコじゃなく // てユッキーだろ！とも思ったの // ですが、ことの最中にリコが乱入、 // っていう初期の構想の名残りと // いうことで、そのままにしてあ // あわけなのです。
Insiders may know from the "Sekatsuyo" material that that isn't Riko, that is Yukki, or so I thought, but I already had Riko bursting in mid-action so I left it that way. {I'm only about 70% sure on this line's translation}

: ってところで、今回はココまで！ // それではまた機会があればお会い // いたしましょう。
Anyways, that's all for this time! If we have the chance, let's meet again some time!

: 2014年 1月 BOM
January 2014 BOM

: Serenta presents // エクレをもっと揉んでみよう！
Serenta presents // Let's Massage Eclair More!

: 奥付
Publication Information

: 発行日：2014年 1がつ19日 初版
Publication Date: January 19th, 2014, First Edition

: 描いた人：ＢＯＭ
Artist: BOM

: 連絡先：{you can read the rest and copy it if you're doing this page, I don't want to set off any forum link censorship}
Contact Address: {Just copy the rest, thanks}

: 印刷所：サンライズパブリケーション株式会社 {Same with the link here}
: Printing office: Sunrise Publication Corporation {Link would go here, thanks}

: 18歳未満の方へ頒布できません。複製および無断転載はお断りします。
Do not distribute to minors under 18. Also, unauthorized reproduction and duplication are strictly forbidden.
==== FILE END

I just Posted this on my MasterQ/CSSN Forum, but I'm Posting it here in case readers aren't aware of, or read, those...
-------------------

...To Whomit May Concern: Starting tomorrow, April the 23rd, I will be 'offline' anywhere from 3 to 7 days, depending.
I'm responsible for all the Pre-Hospital and Post-Hospital logistics regarding my 91-year-old Father having semi-serious surgery for the 1st time in his life. And for Chauffeuring him back-and-forth...

This isn't news most of you wanted to hear, but I didn't schedule the operation.

I say "3-7 days' because I have no idea how long the '24-hour-a-day' watch will continue...
One plans for the worst and hopes for the best.

I'll let you know when I have the free time to devote to proofreading again...

Thought you had the right to know...
PE

To PureEnergy: Best of luck, I hope everything goes smoothly.


To Red_Piotrus:
Here is version 3 of the "Eclair wo Motto Monde Miyou!" script.
Bounty Page: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=19455
Gallery Page: https://e-hentai.org/g/889336/847549df9d//

==== FILE BEGIN
Title-PseudoRomaji: Eclair wo Motto Monde Miyou!
Title-English: Let's Massage Eclair More!

Translator: Shark Man 12345
Version: 3

Notes:
Legend: {} Alternatives and Meanings Notes for Proofreader and Editor
() Placement & Font Information for Editor


|||| Page 1
: エクレをもっと揉んでみよう
Let's Massage Eclair More!

: (Inside Warning Label) 成人向け
For Adults

: (Under Warning Label) 18歳未満の // 購入・閲覧禁止
Buying or reading not allowed for individuals under 18.


|||| Page 2
: エクレをもっと揉んでみよう
Let's Massage Eclair More!

: (Inside Warning Label) 成人向け
For Adults

: (Under Warning Label) 18歳未満の // 購入・閲覧禁止
Buying or reading not allowed for individuals under 18.

|||| Page 3
--- Panel 1
: うああああああっっっっっー！
Uaaagh!

: 痛ああああああいっ…！
That huuuurts...!

--- Panel 2
: どうするエクレ？
What're you gonna do, Eclair?

: ギブアップする？
Give up?

: (SFX, both right and left) ギリ
Twist {or Creak}

--- Panel 3
: ダ、ダメだ
N.. No,

: まだまだ...ー
Not yet...

: うああああっ
Uaaagh,

: 痛ああああ...ー！
Ouuuuch...! {Owwwww...!}

|||| Page 4
--- Panel 1
: (SFX)ぎゅうぅぅぅ
Squeeze

--- Panel 2
: エクレ // ホントに大丈夫？
Eclair, are you really ok?

: あっ、ああ
Ah, yeah,

: その痛いのがなんともいい感じ...だ...
That pain sort of feels good...

--- Panel 3
: あぁっ♡
Ahh♡

--- Panel 4
: (Side Title) エクレをもっと揉んでみよう！
Let's Massage Eclair More! {The "More" is in the bubble. If you can manage to recreate the logo somehow, you could put "More" in a bubble at the bottom perhaps}

: 勇者さま！ // プロレスで // ありますか！
Hero! // Are you two wrestling de arimasuka!? {Riko uses this speech pattern. If it is too difficult to fit in editing, just remove them and erase and redraw the bubble where it is just "De arimasu", thanks.}

: リコもやるであります！
Riko wants to wrestle too de arimasu!

|||| Page 5
--- Panel 1
: リ、リコ、ー // これはプロレスじゃなくて // マサージしてるんだよ？
Ri.. Riko, This isn't wrestling, this is a massage, ok?

: よくプロレス知ってたね。
I'm surprised you know this is wrestling. {Not sure how to make this shorter, maybe "Well said", if you run out of space}

: (SFX, top) ドスッ！！
Thud {Thunk}

: お前たち // 私の上ではしゃぐな！
Hey, don't play around on top of me!

: っていうか降りろ！
Actually, just get off!

: リコも勇者様にマッサージ // してもらいたいであります♪
Riko wants to give the hero a massage too de arimasu!♪

--- Panel 2
: 勇者様達の邪魔しちゃいけませんよ、リコ
You mustn't bother them, Riko.

: はいであります // 姫様
Ahh, you're right de arimasu, Princess.

: ごめんねリコ
Sorry, Riko.

--- Panel 3
: エクレ、私たちは戻りますので
Eclair, we're going back, so

: ゆっくり体を休めてくださいね
Take it easy and rest, alright?

: であります
De arimasu.

: 申し訳ありません姫様 // このような格好のままで
Sorry for just laying here, Princess. {This isn't quite the literal meaning, but better than the literal in English}

--- Panel 4 (Just the right textbox on its own)
: 騒がしかったな
What a racket. {More literal: "That/she was sure noisy"}

--- Panel 5
: それでは続きを // してもらおうか、勇者♪
Okay then, let's continue, hero.♪

|||| Page 6
--- Panel 1
: う、うん
Ah, ok.

: ーって
Wait...

--- Panel 2
: (Top, Right) いつのまにか
Since when were

: (Top, Left) まる見え...!
her panties showing {I think I would recommend combining these two into one line}

: (SFX, bottom) ふり ふり
Swish Swish

--- Panel 3
: (SFX) パシッ
Fwhoosh

--- Panel 4
: 足の裏はもういい // 他の場所を頼む
The bottom of my feet are fine, massage somewhere else.

: は、はぁ
Ah, ok.

: じゃぁ腰でー
I'll do your back then. {More literally "waist", but back sorta sounds better?}

--- Panel 5
: あぁ、頼む
Ah, sounds good {maybe change "sounds good" to "ok" if too long}

: (Small) んっ♡
Mmm♡


: 前も言ったが尻尾の付け根はダメだぞ？
I already told you this, but don't touch the root of my tail, ok?

|||| Page 7
--- Panel 1
: (Top Right) んっ♡
Mmm♡

: (SFX, Both at right) もぞ
Squirm {Shuffle, Snuggle, Fidget}

: (SFX, Both at left) ぐいっ
Squeeze

: (Bottom Left) んっ♡
Mmm♡

--- Panel 2
: お、おい
H.. Hey

: (SFX) かあっ
Blush

: だからその辺はー
I told you, not there...

--- Panel 3
: え？
Hmm?

: 何か言った？
Did you say something?

: (SFX) コッン
Flumpf {Flap; this is his hair falling on her I think}

: !!
!!

--- Panel 4
: どうかしたエクレ？
What's wrong, Eclair?

: うわああああああ // あああああっ!!
Aaaaaaah!!

: (SFX) ドギ マギ
Flustered {The words on both sides connect to mean flustered or embarrassed}

|||| Page 8
--- Panel 1
: もう、暴れちゃダメだよ
Come on now, don't struggle.

--- Panel 2
: (SFX (all 3)) ドキ
Thump {Heartbeat}

: あっ // ああっ
Ah.. Ahh...

--- Panel 3
: ほら
Look

: (SFX, both) ぐいっ
Grab {Squeeze, Stretch, Lift}

: こんなになちゃってる
You struggled so much that your panties are showing. {<- A more literal translation is "It's getting like this", but that doesn't make sense in English}

--- Panel 4
: (SFX, left and right top) パチン
Smack {Slap, Snap}

: (SFX, ビクッ)
Flinch

: !?
!?

--- Panel 5
: ボ、ボクは今一体ー
What the heck am I...

: (SFX) はっっっ
Gasp

: (The middle bubble) 何をやっているんだー！？
Doing!? {Basically they both speak this bubble.}

--- Panel 6
: こいつは一体ー
What the hell is he...

: (SFX, both) ふる
Shake

|||| Page 9
--- Panel 1
: ダメだこの状況ー // 早くなんとかしないと！
This is bad, I need to do something fast! {"This is a bad situation, I need to do something fast!"}

: ととと、とりあえず // 元通りにー
A.. An.. Anyways, I need to put it back to how it was...

--- Panel 2 (Subpanel in 1)
: (SFX) ぐいっ
Grab {Squeeze, Stretch, Lift}

: (SFX) パチン
Slap {Smack, Snap}

--- Panel 3
: ーって違う！ // そうじゃない！
Wait no! Not like that!

: (Handwritten left of face) おわった
It's over.

--- Panel 4
: ~~~~~!!
~~~~!!

--- Panel 5
: 何をバカな遊びをしているんだコイツは
What kind of stupid game is he playing!? {Maybe "What is he playing at!?"}

: (SFX, both bottom) ふる
Shake

: おおお落ち着くんだ私
I... I need to calm down. {Maybe "C... Calm down, Eclair" sounds better? It's her telling herself to calm down.}

|||| Page 10
--- Panel 1
: こういう時こそ // 冷静な対処をー
Especially at times like these, I need to keep composed.

--- Panel 2
: つっっっ、続けてくれないか // （マッサージを）
C... Could you please continue? (The massage)

--- Panel 3
: う、
Uh,

: うんー
Yeah.

: (SFX) ぎゅ♡
Squeeze♡

-- Panel 4
: (SFX) ビクン
Flinch

: (SFX, both) ぐいっ
Stretch

-- Panel 5
: あぁ、わすれていた // コイツも本物のバカだった
Oh yeah, I forgot, this guy is a real idiot. {Maybe "this guy is a" to "this guy's a"}

: (SFX) ぷる
Shake {"Rattle", this is a stronger shake than before}

: (SFX) ぐっ
Squeeze {Hold on, grab}

|||| Page 11
--- Panel 1
: (SFX, both on bottom) ぐいっ
Stretch

: んっ
Mmm

: お、おい
H.. Hey...

--- Panel 2
: (SFX, both top) ぐいっ
Stretch

: (SFX, both bottom) もじ
Fidget

--- Panel 3
: (SFX) ぎゅうっ♡
Squeeze♡

: (SFX) もぞっ
Snuggle {Fidget, Shuffle}

--- Panel 4
: も、もう少し
C.. Could you

: 優しくしてくれないかー
Be a little more gentle?

--- Panel 5
: えっ...
Hmm?

: う、うん
Uh, sure.

: (SFX, large bottom) スッ...
Slide

: (SFX, all 3) ドキ
Thump {heartbeat}

: ー // これでいい？
Like this?

|||| Page 12
--- Panel 1
: おっ
H...

: おいっー
Hey.

--- Panel 2
: (SFX, both) ぐに
Squish

--- Panel 3
: ー // このエロ勇者め
What a pervert hero. {"Such a perverted hero."}

--- Panel 4
: (SFX, upper both sides) すり
Rub {Slide, slip}

: (SFX, lower) スッ...
Slide

--- Panel 5
: やっぱり
Ahh,

: 気持ちいいんだ // ...
This feels just as good as I thought...

--- Panel 6
: ぐいっ
Slide {Slip aside}

: くちっ...
Squelch

|||| Page 13
--- Panel 5
: すごい...
Amazing...

: 女の子のココって // こんなになるんだ...
Girls get so wet down here...

: いっ.. // 言うな...
Sh.. Shut up.

: (SFX, twice at bottom) くちっ
Squelch

--- Panel 2
: くちゅっ...
Rub {Stroke}

--- Panel 3
: シュッ
Swish {Rub, stroke ,, It's slightly different than the previous rub}

-- Panel 4
: んんっ♡
Mmm♡

: ふーっ
Fuu {Hah; Some sort of breath out sound}

: ふーっ
Fuu {Hah; Same as above}

--- Panel 5
: (SFX, big upper) つぷっ
Squish {Splash}

: (SFX, both lower) くちゅ
Squelch

: んんーっ♡
Mmmn♡

--- Panel 6
: (SFX, right) ビクン
Twitch {Flinch}

: (SFX, big top right) つぼっ
Splish

: (SFX, bottom middle) ぴゅっ
Squirt {Splurt}

: んぁっ♡
Ngaah♡

: (SFX, left) ビクン
Twitch {Flinch}

|||| Page 14
--- Panel 1
: お、お前さえ良ければー
As long as it's you,

: はーっ♡
Haa♡

: もっと...マッサージを // 続けていいぞ...♡
It's okay if we go on with the massage...♡

--- Panel 2
: んっ♡
Nn♡

: あっ♡
Ah♡

--- Panel 3
: はぁ♡
Haa♡ {Hah♡}

: はぁ♡
Haa♡ {Hah♡}

: (SFX) ぎゅうっ♡
Squeeze♡

--- Panel 4
: んっ♡
Nn♡ {Mm}

: んんっ♡
Nngh♡

: 痛い...
It hurts...

: (SFX, both) ぬっぷ
Fwump

--- Panel 5
痛いがー
It hurts, but...

|||| Page 15
--- Panel 1
: (SFX) つぷっ
Squish {Fwhump}

: んっ♡
Nn♡

: そのままー
Just like that...

--- Panel 2

: んっ...
Nn

: くぅっ♡
Ahh♡

--- Panel 3
: (SFX) ずぽっ！
Thwump!

--- Panel 4
: (SFX, both right) ぬっぷ
Fhwump

: エクレ...大丈夫？
Eclair, you ok? {"Eclair, are you ok?"}

: すわっ♡
Ahh,♡

: いい感じだ♡
Yeah, it feels good.♡

: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: 痛気持ちいいというかー
The pain feels good, or actually...

--- Panel 5
: んっ♡
Nn♡

: 入り口あたりや奥のー
The front and the inside... {Posibilities for "Front": "Lips", "Mouth". Possibilities for "inside": "deep inside" "the depths"}

: (small) んっ♡
Nn♡

: (SFX, right) ずぷぷっ♡
Shwhump♡

: (SFX, left) ずぷっ
Thwump

: その辺が特に
Feel especially good.

: んんっ♡
Nngh♡

|||| Page 16
--- Panel 1
: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: エクレの膣内、気持ちよくて // 止まらない...!
You feel so good inside, I can't stop!

: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: はぁ♡
Haa♡

: これじゃどちらがマサージ // しているかわからないな♡
What part of this is still a massage?♡ {"How is this still a massage?" or "I don't get what about this is still a massage..."}

--- Panel 2 (small top)
: (SFX) ぬっ...
Slide...

: (SFX) んっ♡
Nn♡

--- Panel 3 (small bottom)
: (SFX) つぷっ♡
Thwump♡

: (SFX) コツン
Thunk {Shunk}

: (At the very bottom left of this panel) んんっ♡
Nngh♡

--- Panel 4
: (SFX, both) ぬっぷ
Fwump

: エクレ...ボク、もう...
Eclair, I'm about to... {maybe "about to" to "almost"?}

: 膣内はダメだぞ // お、お前との子はまだ早い...
Not inside, I.. I don't want to have your baby yet. {Maybe "baby with you yet" instead of "your baby yet". The 3 slanted lines at the bottom are embarrassment lines, keep them if you can, maybe even move them to a better place}

: うん
Ok

--- Panel 5
: ぬぽっ！
Shwump! {"Flurp"? The idea is it's coming out pretty fast}

|||| Page 17
--- Panel 1
: (All 3, top, right of head, above left buttcheek) はぁ♡
Haa♡

: そんなにたくさん // 射精るんだー
So much is coming out {"You're sure cumming a lot"}

: (SFX, both) ぴゅうっ
Splurt {Spurt, Splash}

: (SFX, all 3 at bottom) ビクン
Twitch

--- Panel 2
: (SFX) ぎゅ♡
Squeeze

: 凄く良かったぞ
That was really good,

: また...マッサージ頼む♡
Give me another massage some time♡

--- Panel 3
{No Text}

--- Panel 4
: (SFX) じ〜っ
Stare

: ...
...

--- Panel 5
: やっぱりプロレスでありますね！
I knew you guys were wrestling de arimasu!

: ちがう！
No! {"Not quite!" "Not really!"}

: (Under the panel) おわり
The End


|||| Page 18
: ■ あとがき
■ Afterword

: まいど、BOMでございます！ // ようやくエクレのターンです！
Thanks for your purchase, I am BOM! // Eclair's turn has finally come!

: とりあえず本編では着衣エッチ // が過ぎて全然脱いでいないので、 // 表紙絵を剥くみました〜。
First off, since this volume is all clothed sex, and they don't take anything off, I tried to peel off clothes in the cover art.

: 今回は出オチ感の強いネタで始 // まって、その後はBD特典CDの // ネタを拾ってみましたが、如何 // でしたでしょうか？
This time I started with some appearance gags, and then used some material from the Blu-ray's special edition CD. How was it? {I think he's talking about where his story came from here. The "appearance gags" is in relation to Riko appearing at the beginning of the story.}

: 中の人繋がりで『せかつよ』 // ネタなら、そこはリコじゃなく // てユッキーだろ！とも思ったの // ですが、ことの最中にリコが乱入、 // っていう初期の構想の名残りと // いうことで、そのままにしてあ // あわけなのです。
Insiders may know from the "Sekatsuyo" material that that isn't Riko, that is Yukki, or so I thought, but I already had Riko bursting in mid-action so I left it that way. {I'm only about 70% sure on this line's translation}

: ってところで、今回はココまで！ // それではまた機会があればお会い // いたしましょう。
Anyways, that's all for this time! If we have the chance, let's meet again some time!

: 2014年 1月 BOM
January 2014 BOM

: Serenta presents // エクレをもっと揉んでみよう！
Serenta presents // Let's Massage Eclair More!

: 奥付
Publication Information

: 発行日：2014年 1がつ19日 初版
Publication Date: January 19th, 2014, First Edition

: 描いた人：ＢＯＭ
Artist: BOM

: 連絡先：{you can read the rest and copy it if you're doing this page, I don't want to set off any forum link censorship}
Contact Address: {Just copy the rest, thanks}

: 印刷所：サンライズパブリケーション株式会社 {Same with the link here}
: Printing office: Sunrise Publication Corporation {Link would go here, thanks}

: 18歳未満の方へ頒布できません。複製および無断転載はお断りします。
Do not distribute to minors under 18. Also, unauthorized reproduction and duplication are strictly forbidden.
==== FILE END

This post has been edited by Shark Man 12345: Apr 23 2019, 20:25

Accepted bounty for Purple Haze's Birdy CGset.

Accepted bounty for Purple Haze's Birdy CGset.

And done.

As before, my usual script pattern is:

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This post has been edited by Wrath88: Apr 25 2019, 16:15

And done.

As before, my usual script pattern is:

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Char2: (Bubble 1 text)

PAGE X+1
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Sorry, I didn't know I had to embed the file into the doc. I've edited the above post to show it now.

Hey, I just accepted the bounty for (SC37) [Ichinichi Sanjou (Jinguu Kozue)] Bou Noudai no Joousama (Moyashimon)

If possible, I'd like to remain anonymous in the credits.

Finished the above translation

Since this is my first work, if the formatting or anything is wrong, please tell me and I'll fix it.

--- Page 1
某農大の女王様
The Queen of Bounoudai
Note: I think the english version translates bounoudai into "Agriculture University"


--- Page 3
沢木ー
Hey Sawaki,

僕らバイトあるからそろそろ寮に戻るわ
Since we have part time jobs, we're heading back to the dorm

おつかれーっす
Good work today

長谷川さんまだ残ってるはずだからわかんないところは教えてもらえよ
Since Hasegawa-san should still be here, if there's anything you don't understand, just ask her
Note: translated はず (expectation) into "should"

*ぴしゃんっ*
pishan~
note: sound of door closing

*かッ　かッ　かッ*
clack clack
note: sound of high heel footsteps approaching

*ガララ*
rattle rattle
note: sound of a door being opened harshly


--- Page 4
残ってるの沢木だけ？
So, you're the only one left?
Note: lit. only Sawaki is left?

*グイ*
*scrape*
note: sound of chair being pulled over floor

長谷川さん？
Hasegawa-san?

えーと
umm,

酔っています？
Have you been drinking?

一杯しか　飲んでないわよ
Only just a little
note: the spacing between boxes indicates her speech is a bit slow, since she's drunk.

*ドスンッ*
thump
note: sound of her sitting on him

*ひいいいいいいい*
ehhhhhh~!
note: internal shock/exasperation.

あれ
eh?

もう帰るの
already going home?
note: rhetorical question. more of a statement.

長谷川くんにお酒預けたんだけど
I gave Hasegawa-kun some alcohol so
note: lit. entrusted some alcohol

せっかくだから君たちも飲んで行きなさい
why don't you guys also go back and enjoy some too?

戻るか？
should we go back?

いや、骨を後で拾いに行こう
nope, we'll take of the aftermath
note: lit collecting the ashes of the dead, since drunk Hasegawa is such a tough experience.

--- Page 5
あ
ah

えと
um

長谷川さん？
Hasegawa-san?

にゃははは
hahaha
note: nyahaha

沢木ちっさいー
you're so small

蛍ーーー
Kei...

美里さん　川濱さん　タスケテーーー
Misato-san, Kawahama-san, please help

噛み切っていい？
mind if I have a taste?
note: lit. take a bite

。。。勘弁してください
please spare me
note: please have mercy

*じゅるじゅる*
slurp slurp

けち！
stingy!
note: in the scrooge sense

*ぐぐぐ*
gripping/tugging noises

--- Page 6

*ゾクゾク*
tremble/shudder sounds

ん
unn
note: moan

長谷川さん
Hasegawa-san

爪
your nails..

痛いんですけど
they hurt a little

*ギリギリ*
*scratching*
note: from the nails

ご　ごめんなさいっ
ah...sorry...
note: says sorry because she glares at him

爪立てたままでいですっ
it's okay to dig your nails in, I suppose
note: acting in a resigned manner.

ギロッ
*glare*

う　か
*grunting noise

ただやすまけるな
Tadayasu is losing huh
note: the moyashimon are observing him. small, high pitched voices

やりかえせ
fight back!
note: the moyashimon are encouraging him

抵抗したら殺される
she'll kill me if I put up a fight
lit: If I resist, I'll be killed

う。。わ
w..wow

居たい気持ちいい...
it hurts, but it feels kinda good...
note: the pain feels good

*ギリギリ*
rough scratching

*かプかプ*
sound of wrapping lips around something

--- Page 7

*ガリ*
big gulp

*んぷっ*
phew!
note: sound of finally releasing it from of her mouth

*ビュ！ビュク*
spurt spurt
note: ejaculation sound

す
so-

すみませんっ
sorry

*じりじりじりじり*
sound effect for drawing closer

ニャハハハ　痛いのスキ？
hahaha are you a masochist?

--- Page 8
いやいやいやいやっ
oh no no no, not at all.
note: rejecting the idea that he's a masochist

*むぎゅうう*
squeeze

ふひひひひひ
fuhihihihi
note: sound of laughter

*すりすり*
rub rub
note: sound of rubbing against him.

出たばっかだから無理っすよ
no way, it's useless, I just came.
note: lit. I just came so I won't be able to go again

*ガプ*
nibble
note: sound of a love bite

あんたまだ若いでしょ
you're still young, aren't you

...ほら
...look

--- Page 9

どうせなら及川みたいな
Anyway, isn't it like doing it with Oikawa?


若い子の方がよかったかな？
I wonder if she's better
note: I wonder if that young girl was better

*くにゅくにゅ*
rub rub
note: rubbing sounds

うくっ
ugh

長谷川さん　まずいっす
Hasegawa, I can't hold it anymore
note: in the "this is bad, I can't hold it anymore" meaning

こんなに気持ちいいのは
it feels so good
note: reverse this and the previous sentence to get: "it feels so good I can't hold it in anymore; this is bad"

沢木
Sawaki,

擦り合ってるのよ
rubbing against each other...
note: combine with the next 3 boxes to get, lit. the act of rubbing against each other, isn't it natural that it feels good?

気持ちよくて
isn't feeling good...
note: "isn't" comes from the next page's 「しょ」. "isn't feeling

*ズッ* *ズププ*
shlap
note: sliding, slapping noise. this is all over the page.

--- Page 10
当然しょ？
natural?

*にゅぶにゅぶ*
nyubu nyubu
note: sound effect for insertion to the hilt. I have no idea how to express this in english, sorry.

*ブルン　ブルン*
quiver quiver
note: sound effect for shivering

*ドクっドクっ*
doku doku
note: ejaculation sound. pumping of liquid.

馬鹿
idiot

早すぎ...
that was too quick

*ポタポタ*
drip drip

--- Page 11
*ドサッ*
thud
note: sound of her collapsing

....長谷川さん？
....Hasegawa-san?

*すーすー*
snore/snooze
note: sleeping sounds

眠るならせめて抜いた後にしてくださいよ...
If you're going to fall asleep, at least take it out first
note: lit. if you're going to fall alseep, at least do it after you take it out

どーすんですか
what should I do now...
note: in the "I need to take care of her

--- Page 12
*ダダダダダ*
thump thump thump
note: sound of running footsteps

*バタンッ*
slam
note: sound of door opening

沢木ーーっ
Sawaki!

無事かーーっ？
There weren't any problems, right?!

もう手遅れっすよ
you're way too late

長谷川さんが慣れるの待ってましたね
She already ran out of energy.
note: lit. I was waiting for her to collapse. aka, hold out against her.

すまん
sorry
note: small text

--- Page 13
発行日: 2007/10/08
date of publication: 2007/10/08

発行:一日三錠　（神宮梢）
publication: Ichinichi Sanjou (Jinguu Kozue)

印刷: FREAK
printing: FREAK

連絡先: fwnp5905@mb.infoweb.ne.jp
contact: fwnp5905@mb.infoweb.ne.jp

18歳以下の購入閲⋆覧を禁止します
purchasing for people under 18 is prohibited

Hi, I'll start working on this bounty now.

I'll post it the script here when I'm done

Hi, I'll start working on this bounty now.

I'll post it the script here when I'm done

Finished 1st version of the translation.
Would really appreciate if someone could give any feedback as English is not my native language (especially advice for English SFX)

Here's the link to the E-Hentai gallery (https://e-hentai.org/g/778222/e968eb0678/)
And nhentai link if the E-Hentai gallery link is broken (https://nhentai.net/g/125389/)

P1
Upper right text:
xx Month xx Day
Joined a guild and met Sachi.
She looked lonely so I fucked her.

Sachi [I'm scared of dying...]
Kirito [Came to my house then]
She became my housekeeper until the game is cleared.
She should be safe now.

Text bubble:
Kirito-kun

SFX:
びく Biku (Twitch)
ギュ Gyu (Squeeze)
ぶぽん / ぶぱ Bupon / Bupa (Ass splashing, e.g. whoop, wham)
ぐぽ Gupo (Splurting sound, e.g. splish, splosh)

P2
Upper right text:
xx Month xx Day
I met a girl called Silica
She's sad that her friend Pina died so itold her she can meet Pina again if she gave birth to it.
I felt guilty so I searched for a resurrection item later for her.

Bottom right text:
Silica [Kirito's so strong] (Note: Not sure about honorific, alt is Kirito-san)
Kirito [I'm not that strong]
I told her I'm not that strong even though I'm one of the top clearer (Note: Kirito apparently tried to be humble here)

Text bubble
It's too... big
It's coming inside
Your semen is entering me...

SFX bubble
あ A (Ah)
はひ Hahi (Uhn)

SFX
びく / びくん Biku / Bikun (Twitch)
ずぷ / ずちゅ Zupu / Zuchu (Dick penetrating wet pussy, e.g. schlip, schlop)
ぞく Zoku (Shivering sound)
どく Doku (Splurting sound, e.g.splurt)

P3
Upper right text:
xx Month xx Day
Went to a snow mountain with Lizbeth to strengthen my sword
We got lost in the mountain so we fucked to keep warm
I'll probably have her maintain my sword regularly from now on (including my "sword" down there)

Text bubble:
It's hitting so deep

SFX bubble:
あは Aha (Ahn)
は Ha (Haah)
ん N (Uhn...)
あ A (Ah)

SFX:
グチャ Gucha (Blanket crumpling)
ずぷん /　ず / ずちゃ Zupun / Zu / Zucha (Sounds of penis sliding in wet pussy, e.g. schlip, schlop)
ぱん Pan (Ass slapping together, e.g. whop)
ぐりゅ Guryu (Sound of dick in the pussy)
ぐぷ Gupu (Sound of gentle penetration, e.g. Thmp)
びゅるるるる Byururururu (Continuous ejaculation, e.g. Splorrt)
どく Doku (Splurting sounds, e.g. splurt)

P4
Upper right text:
xx Month xx Day
Asuna invited me to her house for a meal (alt. treat or dinner)
I know for sure that she likes me so I fucked her without any reservation

Text bubble:
Eh
Wait...
I don't mean to ...
Your dick felt good

SFX bubble:
あひ Ahi (Ahh sound)

SFX:
ず　Zu (Sliding sound, e.g. schlip)
びく / びくん Biku / Bikun (Twitch)
ぱん Pan (Ass slapping sound, e.g. Whap)
ぐぱん / ぐぽん Gupan / Gupon (Ass slamming / vigorous penetration, e.g. Wham)
ぬちゃ / ぐちゃ Nucha / Gucha (Splurting sound, e.g. schlorp)
じゅぼ Jyubo (Deep penetration sound, e.g. squeeze)
ぐぽ Gupo (Penetration sound, e.g. thump)

P5
Bottom right text:
xx Month xx Day
I met Yui, a girl who calls me Papa, inside a forest
She's so innocent that I told her not to follow a stranger
Just what you'd expect from a clearer

Text bubble:
I took off my clothes. Is this fine?
Ahn... Papa
I'm going to have Papa's baby


SFX bubble:
はあ　Haahn
ひぅ Hyu (Nnhn)
は Ha...

SFX:
ずちゅ / ず / ずりゅん Zucha / Zu / Zuryun (Various sliding sound, e.g. schlip, schlop, squish)
どぷぷ Dopupu (Semen entering pussy, e.g. splurt)

P6
Upper right text:
When I came back to the real world after finishing the game, Suguha is attacking me while I'm asleep
It's not my style to make a girl embarassed so I pretended to be asleep
I'm a gentleman in the real world

SFX bubble:
ふ / ふう　/ ふー Fuhn (Sucking sound)
んむ Nnhm
ん Nnhn
おにいひゃん Brother... (Onii-chan...)

SFX:
ぎゅぽ / じゅぼ Gyubo / Jyubo (Sucking sound, e.g. suck, slrrpt)
もちゅるる / じゅるる　Mochururu　/ Jyururu (Sucking sound, e.g. schlrpt)
びく Biku (Twitch)
ぱん Pan (Ass slamming, e.g. wham)
ぶるぶる Buruburu (Tremble, twitch)
ちゅう / ちゅー Chuu (Kiss, e.g. mmmh)
ぎゅぽ Gyupo (Vigorous ass slamming, e.g. wham)
ぐちょ Gucho (Dick inside wet pussy, e.g. schlop)

P7
Middle left text:
xx Month xx Day
I got lost when I started ALO
I met Leafa in a forest when my life is almot depleted from stress and she showed me the way to the town

Text bubble:
I can't believe we're walking in town while Kirito's inside of me
I'm so embarassed (Note: Might be happy? Direct translation is her head is at boiling point)

SFX bubble:
ふ / ふう　/ ふー Fuhn (Uhn)

SFX:
びく Biku (Twitch)
ぎゅー Gyuu (Hugs tigthly, squeeze)
ずっ / ずぶぶ Zu / Zububu (Penetration sound, e.g. schlip, schlorp)
びと Bito (Squeeze tightly, e.g. squeeze)
くぷ　Kupu (Slurping sound, e.g. slurp)
ぐちゅ　/ ぐぷ / ぎゅぷ Guchu / Gupu / Gyupu (Slurping sound, stronger than kupu, e.g. shlurp)

P8:
Postscript

Nice to meet you, I'm Maa-kun.

The SAO anime I've been waiting for finally started!
Sword Art Online sure is exciting! I've read all the light novel so I've been looking forward to watch the anime. Although I'm kind of diappointed that the anime won't cover the part where Shinon appears...
As the setting of the anime is in an online game, I have a lot of idea as a former online gamer (Note: apparently author used to be something like a NEET only playing online game). Most are too maniac to use though...LOL
How far will Kirito's harem grow? Just what you'd expect of a Beater
I'm looking forward to see it.

I'm thinking of participating in SAO-only event if I have the time for it. Then I'll enter Winter Comiket if I get a spot! I want to make some goods for Winter Comiket...

Let's meet again!

Colophon (Publication Information)
Publication date : 2012/10/28
Publication : Marked-Two
Publisher : Maa-kun
Printing : Sun Group
Email : marked_two@live.jp
Blog : [negativelove.blog21.fc2.com] http://negativelove.blog21.fc2.com/
Unauthorized reproduction and duplication strictly prohibited.
For adult only

I finished working on https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=19446 .

[pastebin.com] Script Proofread by KWI_IBUKI

This post has been edited by brandmahr: May 12 2019, 09:01

Hi, I'll start working on this bounty now.

I'll post it the script here when I'm done

[pastebin.com] Updated script for the bounty

I forgot to check this but is there any preference for honorifics or well-known Japanese word like Onii-chan, etc?

I would like to accept the bounty for:
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=17950

I'll probably translate the author's comments unless I get too lazy.

Also, is there a reason why the TOC on page 4 isn't translated?

Finalized script + uu4638's partial script = Complete Script
[docs.google.com] https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yPGgIYF...dit?usp=sharing

This post has been edited by Finestela: May 20 2019, 16:17

Going to try TLing this bounty now.

I'll post the draft here when it's finished.

2nd version of (SC37) [Ichinichi Sanjou (Jinguu Kozue)] Bou Noudai no Joousama (Moyashimon)

Fixed the punctuation, capitalization, sfx formatting, and the comments by the proofreader.

--- Page 1
某農大の女王様
The Queen of Bounoudai


--- Page 3
沢木ー
Hey Sawaki,

僕らバイトあるからそろそろ寮に戻るわ
Since we have part time jobs, we're heading back to the dorm.

おつかれーっす
Good work today

長谷川さんまだ残ってるはずだからわかんないところは教えてもらえよ
Since Hasegawa-san should still be here, if there's anything you don't understand, just ask her.

SFX: ぴしゃんっ
Pishan~

SFX: かッ　かッ　かッ
Clack Clack

SFX: ガララ
Rattle Rattle


--- Page 4
残ってるの沢木だけ？
So, you're the only one left?

SFX: グイ
Scrape

長谷川さん？
Hasegawa-san?

えーと
Umm,

酔っています？
Have you been drinking?

一杯しか　飲んでないわよ
Only just a little.

SFX: ドスンッ
Thump

SFX: ひいいいいいいい
Ehhhhhh~!

あれ
Eh?

もう帰るの
You going home already?

長谷川くんにお酒預けたんだけど
I gave Hasegawa-kun some alcohol so,

せっかくだから君たちも飲んで行きなさい
why don't you guys also go back and enjoy some too?

戻るか？
Should we go back?

いや、骨を後で拾いに行こう
No, let's just collect his bones later.

--- Page 5
あ
Ah

えと
Um

長谷川さん？
Hasegawa-san?

にゃははは
Nyahahaha

沢木ちっさいー
You're so small!

蛍ーーー
Kei...

美里さん　川濱さん　タスケテーーー
Misato-san, Kawahama-san, save me...!

噛み切っていい？
Mind if I have a taste?

。。。勘弁してください
...Please spare me...

SFX: じゅるじゅる
Slurp

けち！
Stingy!

SFX: ぐぐぐ
Grip {Tug}

--- Page 6

SFX: ゾクゾク
Tremble {Shudder}

ん
Mn

長谷川さん
Hasegawa-san,

爪
Your nails..

痛いんですけど
They hurt a little.

SFX: ギリギリ
Scratch {Claw}

ご　ごめんなさいっ
Ah...sorry...

爪立てたままでいですっ
I suppose it's okay to dig your nails in.

SFX: ギロッ
Glare

う
U...

わ
Wa..

ただやすまけるな
Don't give up, Tadayasu!

やりかえせ
Fight back!

抵抗したら殺される
She'll kill me if I put up a fight.

う。。わ
W..wow

居たい気持ちいい...
It hurts, but it feels kinda good...

SFX: ギリギリ
Scratch {Claw}

SFX: かプかプ
Lick

--- Page 7

SFX: ガリ
Gulp

SFX: んぷっ
Phew!

SFX: ビュ！ビュク*
Spurt Spurt

す
So-

すみませんっ
sorry

SFX: じりじりじりじり
*Draws Close*

ニャハハハ　痛いのスキ？
Nyahahaha, are you a masochist?

--- Page 8
いやいやいやいやっ
No, no, no, not at all.

SFX: むぎゅうう
Squeeze

ふひひひひひ
Fuhehehehe

SFX: すりすり
Rub

出たばっかだから無理っすよ
No way, it's useless, I just came.

SFX: ガプ
Nibble

あんたまだ若いでしょ
You're still young, aren't you?

...ほら
...Look

--- Page 9

どうせなら及川みたいな
Anyway, isn't it like doing it with Oikawa?


若い子の方がよかったかな？
Would you be happier with a younger girl?

SFX: くにゅくにゅ
Rub

うくっ
Urk

長谷川さん　まずいっす
Hasegawa, I can't hold it anymore!

こんなに気持ちいいのは
It feels so good!

沢木
Sawaki,

擦り合ってるのよ
We're rubbing against each other.

気持ちよくて
Isn't feeling good...

SFX: ズッ* *ズププ
Shlap

--- Page 10
当然しょ？
...natural?

SFX: にゅぶにゅぶ
Nyubu nyubu {Shluk}
note: sound effect for insertion to the hilt.

SFX: ブルン　ブルン
Quiver

SFX: ドクっドクっ
Doku Doku

馬鹿
Idiot

早すぎ...
That was too quick...

SFX: ポタポタ
Drip

--- Page 11
SFX: ドサッ
Thud

....長谷川さん？
....Hasegawa-san?

SFX: すーすー
Zzz....

眠るならせめて抜いた後にしてくださいよ...
If you're going to fall asleep, at least take it out first.

どーすんですか
What should I do now...

--- Page 12
SFX: ダダダダダ
Thump Thump Thump

SFX: バタンッ
Slam

沢木ーーっ
Sawaki!

無事かーーっ？
You alright!?

もう手遅れっすよ
You're way too late.

長谷川さんが慣れるの待ってましたね
You were waiting for Hasegawa-san to pass out, weren't you.

すまん
Sorry..

--- Page 13
発行日: 2007/10/08
Date of publication: 2007/10/08

発行:一日三錠　（神宮梢）
Publication: Ichinichi Sanjou (Jinguu Kozue)

印刷: FREAK
Printing: FREAK

連絡先: fwnp5905@mb.infoweb.ne.jp
Contact: fwnp5905@mb.infoweb.ne.jp

18歳以下の購入閲⋆覧を禁止します
Purchasing for people under 18 is prohibited

This post has been edited by Firew: Apr 30 2019, 18:26

anon TL send me script for https://e-hentai.org/g/1108167/7e9df1eb8b/

bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=19539

here it is

----

I recommend keeping hearts and exclamation marks and question marks (!, ?) roughly as in the RAW. I did not always transcribe them here.

I TLed SFXes but there's a ton and many are similar, so I often give a generla idea what to use. I don't think anyone will care if you mix a few of them.

title: Smashing into Senpai's Heart!

1
top right, in bubble: humming (she is humming to herself, lalala, etc.). SFX: vaccum machine noise?
top middle: in bubble: Oh, what is this? SFX: more vaccum noise
top left: Fou-fou? (that's the animal making noise, see [fategrandorder.fandom.com] https://fategrandorder.fandom.com/wiki/Fou for context). SFX: Aha. Porn book title: who cares, leave in JPN, it's hentai after all, lol.
middle right bubble: What is this?
middle bubble: Fou!?
left bubble: It's... porn!
bottom square bubble: I accidentally found something shocking under Senpai's bed!
SFXes at the bottom of the page: white - Tremble, animal - staring, black - shocked

2
SFXes in the top right: animal - fidget (in bubbles: Fou), girl - sweat (top SFXes), fidget (lower SFXes)
middle right bubble: Why would he have this?
top left bubble: I wonder what is inside such books...
SFXes for that bubble: book - open, girl - peek
middle left bubble: text - He really... enjoys this? SFXes here: Oh, wow, gosh, and so on
bottom left: He is such a nice person, he helped me so often, he is so reliable, and now...!!

3
top right bubble, middle right text: Senpai is a man, and there are so many sexy female servants around Chaldea...
trb, bottom left: Maybe he reads this as training against temptations?
trb, text at the top: Just look at you! SFXs: inconsequential stuff like Mhm, ho-ho, hu-hu-hu. Except the one on girl's face, which is shocked
Left bubble, text on top: In this case I have to be strong too!
and on bottom: And we have to work together as always... even if I lack experience in those matters...!!
SFXes here: tremble, book - squeeze
top right bubble: Top left text: As his kouhai (TL note may be useful here: kouhai means junior) I have to be of use to my senpai!
Animal: Fou. I'll just stop writing animal bubbles unless they are different, it's Fou, plus whatever exclamation marks are in the RAW , !, ?, etc.
SFX in the bottom right: stand
SFX for animal: suprised, startled
SFX for the girl: what's the SFX for making a decision? Ugh. How about 'tense' on the left, and frown on the right...
left panel, text: I need to study this material more, but not here. Fou, not a word of this to Senpai, ok?
SFXes: Ssshhh, door: open or slide
Bottom left bubble: animal, so Fou?!

4
top bubble, text on the right: I never imagined...! Wow, so this is possible? It's... interesting...
left text: Hmmm, I see...
below it: Wow, you can do this? And... even this?!
and below it: It's much more complex then I thought it would be... but I can master this too!
SFXes here: focused (on her face), tense (outside), and a bunch of mhm, hmm, and so on
bottom right: Mash, are you inside? Answer on the left is: Y, yes! SFXes here: Tremble
even more on the bottom right: SFXes: heart beat/badump, text: Why... why is he here? If he sees this...!
bottom left: text: Now... maybe the chance to put my research into practice!! SFXes here: heart beat/badump, breathing deeply

5
top right: Please come in! / responsse: Th... thanks! Door SFX: open
top middle: text: Uh, I, errr, I have a question. SFX: embarrassed, nevrous, fidgeting
top left: I heard from Dr. Roman you cleaned my room, errr, thanks, and, errr, while cleaning, maybe, you, errr... SFX: silence
top right: bubbles: A moment please!! Below it: Where you looking for this? SFXes here: smile, big smile, happy expression, and so on
bottom left text: Ah, yes, this, can I tak...
SFXes: girl: heart-beat/badump, boy: reach/grab
panel under that: Mash?! Errr, I...
bottom right: Senpai, can you stit down for a moment? SFX: stomp, creak
bottom left: Ok, now... SFX: door closing

6
Top text, right: Please excuse me.
Left: Errr, Mash, wait, what are you...?!
SFX here: crawl, heart-beat/badump, button opening, squish (boobs)
middle right text: You kept some important secrets from me!
middle left: It's a kouhai (junior) job to help her Senpai with all things! Why didn't you ask me for help earlier!
leftomost: You are too close!
SFXes here: Glare
bottom: I didn't realize until recently, but now I know that sexual frustration can have serious physical and mental consequences for males!
What if you come down with them while we are on the mission?! (heart)
Wai, wait! We can't...
SFXes here: put hand inside, search for,

7
Top text, right: Ah..! So this is... your penis...
below it small bubble: Ah, Mash...
to the left, middle bubble: It is so cute... a bit squishy, and a bit trembling...
SFXes here: big on penis - Tremble, others - touch, ah, oh
Top: girl, right: and also.... left: Ah! How come you...
SFXes here: move, lick
Below: No, it's not like that!
SFX for penis rub: rub, touch, slide, twich, fap, pump, they do switch a bit from one similar scene to another, just chose your favorite in any combo
Below it from the right: The magazine, did you...
Girl: SFX in the bubble, Ah
Bubbles: Yes! All training missions require intense study, so I did just that. I tried to memorize all the details!
SFXes here: just like in the top left, same situation, same ones. On her face: lick, on her hand: rub, and so on
Bottom left bubbles: If I am right... this should good, right?
small bubble: ah, aah

8
Top right: It's getting much bigger... this top part, I think if I do this it should make him feel even better!
Next from the right: Mash... that's too strong! I can't...
SFXes: just like above
SFX in the middle on her face: smile
SFX in the top left: squeeze
text: When I push the bottom part, his whole body shakes... Senpai is so cute!
middle right: SFX on guy face: bite, clench. Bubbles: Mash! Ah! New SFX on the penis: splurt (go figure...)
text in the bottom right: I still can't believe we are actually doing this... I think this is called a handjob... that's the least I can do considering all that I owe him
and it is clear from his face he likes it a lot
and if so I have no choice but to continue

9
top right: Mash... Mash!
SFX: lick
SFX left: squeeze, splurt
text: I am... all spent
bottom left SFX: Ah, I am going to, again...
bottom right: No, wait, you need to wait!
SFX on penis: grip, new on top: drip
text below: Uh, why can't I...?
middle bubble: The textbook said that it will feel best if you wait until the end
left buble: No, you got it wrong, that book wasn't exactly...
SFX on face: trembling

10
bubble top right: Wait...!
text outside bubble: I can help him more
bubble middle: If you suck it now I...
SFX here: ha, ah
left, text outside bubble: It is my duty to... give him the best release possible!
SFX here: suck
SFX eleswhere: suck, kiss, twich, the usual

11
SFX on ass: shake
SFX on girl face: dizzy
text top right: He is not cumming yet but almost...
bubble: No, you have to stop this!
text top left: He can't lie to me, my mouth feels the truth
bubble lower: If you keep doing this then, then, I, in your mouth...
text on penis: Even my tiniest tongue movement makes him react so much...
text bottom: He looks so happy and that makes me just as happy too!
text bottom left: I am so happy that I want to continue this for ever and ever!
in bubble, just some moans

12
text top right: If I keep sucking this and if I try to synchronize with him...
text top left: I can put his penis entirely in my mouth... I think this should please him...
text middle right: Now I can try to pleasure him with my cheeks... and if I move slowly...
bubble: Mash! It's too much!
bubble bottom right: It's so good!
text: He got even bigger then before... he should be ready to finish soon... so now I have to suck it out again, but faster this time...
bubble: It's coming... I am going to cum now!

13
text on her face: Senpai's thick cum is here, feeling my mouth!
bubble in the middle: Oh, Mash!
text near the bubble: The book said men want to have women drink it all so... here it goes
text in the bottom right: and when he is done trembling... then the 'cumming' part is done too
small bubbles: moans
SFXes: the usual, tremble, splurt

14
top right: Ha, suprise, he is not done yet!
bubbles: moans
middle right bubble: No worries, I am his best kouhai and I will swallow all of it without failure!
SFX on penis: Super suck!
bubble: Ma...ash... you can stop now, it's ok!
SFX on her face/body: tremble, shake. On the right, on throad: swallow
Bubble right: Ok, Senpai, I think we are done with the first battle!
Bubble left: Battle? What battle? And why the first?

15
SFXes on top: heart-beat/badump
Bubble: Now, now it's time...
Bubble lower: ... for this. A bit embarassing, but if its for Senpai, then... I can...
SFX for clothes: slide, ruffle, drop
bubble top right: Maaa... Mash?!
bubble middle left: No, you don't have to, you've done enough!
SFX on the guy face: Gasp
SFX on the bottom left: snuggle, shake
bubble: No, not enough yet!

16
Bubble: My duty as your kouhai is not over yet!
new SFX amit various shakes and twiches: Climb (in the top right)
Bubble top left: and it seems this part us not exhausted yet
Bubble bottom right: Stopping now would mean the training is not complete
Eeeeh?
Bubbles left bottom: So bear with me a bit longer...
SFX on her boobs: mount, ride
No, we really don't have to...
SFXes here: kiss, lick

17
top right: new SFX: open
text on top left: Senpai! X2
all other text in bubbles are just moans, no new SFX, reuse twitches, shakes, whatever

18
bubble right - moans
bubble left: I feel amazing... Senpai's think is all the way inside me!
bubble bottom right: I will... start moving now!
No, wait, slow down!

19
bubbles top left: Senpai, I didn't know this training would feel so good for me too. I hope it feels at least as good for you too!
Mash! I, I can't...
Ah! I think I can move faster now....
new SFX on their bodies: hug
SFX around X-ray: squeeze
SFX middle right: thrust or shove
text in the middle panel: It feels so amazing... I am one with Senpai!
text in the bottom: I want to keep him inside me for ever!
bubbles: Senpai! I... I love you! So very much!

20
text middle right: But can I really be so happy? Is it fair?
text middle left: I can't believe we are allowed to do something that feels so very, very good
text bottom right: I feel so good I am loosing control...
text bottom left: Can it be that it is even bigger then before?
Bubble: If you keep doing all this I can't hold it long...

21
SFX top right: lick
Bubble top right: Mash!
text top right: Senpai, it is ok if you cum!
SFX middle and left: thrust, shove. On the very left: hold
Bubble: Yes! I... It is ok! I am re, reaady! Ah! You can do it! Where... whenever... youuu w-want! (her speech here is not very clear)
Bubble: You... can cum... any, anytime... Ah!
SFX middle: splurt near penis, hug, shiver, tremble otherwise
SFX bottom: more hugs, kisses, Mhhhm, Ahhh. Bubble is all Oh Ah. On her face: dizzy
Text bottom right: He did it! There's so much of his baby milk inside... and it keeps flooding me!
Text bottom middle: I think the manual called it... a creampie... so warm! I love it!

22
SFX on penis: splurt, big one: bounce. Other SFXes: ah, oh
Bubble middle right: Oooh, it looks all wet and slimy now...
Bubble lefT: Ah, it looks like your weapon still has some ammo left... it is still moving!
SFX on the penis: Twitch. On boy's face: heart-beat/badump
Text to the right of his face: Wha...
SFX bottom middle: rub, kiss
Bubble bottomm right: After the excercise is complete, the female partner has to clean up everyhing. It was very clear in the manual. Let me take care of this.
Bubble to the bottom: Clear how? It's... ah...
Text on the dic: His penis is still so lively...
Bubbles: Ah! Suck! Ah!
Text left bottom: Just like before, I will use my lips, and gently take it all the way into my mouth and throat...

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Top right bubble: Ah! W-wait... why don't you...
Left bubble: Ah!
SFxes here: suck, splurt
Text middle right: Now I can feel his baby milk on my face... it is even warmer!
Bubble middle: It's so much...
SFXes here: Ah, oh, around penis: drip
Text left middle: Maybe I should swallow more, but I also want to just see it and touch it...
SFX bottom right: heart-beat/badump
Bubble: If you keep... Second bubble: acting in such a sexy way...
Bubble left: ...then I will stop holding back! SFX: push Also: Kyaaa!

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Bubble top right: Your body is so soft and plump!
Bubble under: just moans
SFX here: thrust, push
Bubble left: It's so deep inside, ah! I l-love it!
Bubble leftmost: It feels amazing!
Bubbles in the middle: Senpai! Hug me! And kiss me! Kiss me more!
Bubbles left middle: I love you, Senpai! I love you so much!
SFXes here: thrusts everywhere. A few shakes/trembles/shivers
Bubbles bottom right: Mash, I can't hold it long! I am going to cum inside you again!
Bubbles left bottom: I will too! I can feel something... something big! Aaah! I am coming too!

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SFX on hands: Grab! Squeeze! SFX on teeth: Clench!
SFX elsewhere: shake, moans. Lower around penis: pump, splurt,
Bubble bottom right: T-this... felt so g-good! Next: Ah! Mash!
Bubbles left bottom: Thank you, Sepnpai... I want to give something back to you!
SFXes here: moans, dizzy (on penis, more splurts/squeezes)

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Bubble top right: Mash, it's great!
Left top bubble: Ah, right there, keep doing that!
SFXes here: weird one, just use thrusts and ahs
Bubble middle right: But if you suck so strongly...
Below it: Senpai! x2
text middle: Cum for me again!
BubbleS: I am cumming! I am cumming! Right: moans
SFX: thrembles, splurts, moans
SFX bottom right: Grab, push. Bubble: I am sorry, but please swallow all of it for me!
Bubbles middle/left: Ah, I love this mouth of yours... it is a perfect thoat cock sleeve...

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SFX here: pump, shake
Bubbles: 1, moans, 2-3: It's in so deep! Ah! It feels so amazing! Oh! 4: I can't stop!
Bubble middle right: I am sorry, I am going to cum again!
Bubbles left bottom: Mash! Mash! Here is another load!
SFX: splurt, pump, some sucks and slurps

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Bubble top right: Ah, it's morning?
Bubble below it top right: Good times never last long, do they? Text on male: not long? Exhausted. SFX: prone.
Top center: But... SFX: lick, smile
Top left: Don't worry, Senpai! The manual was very clear that men need this service many times a day to stay in top form!
SFX here: Glare! fist-Clench! Text bottom right here: Huh?
Bubbles below it: right: Mash, we really need to slow down and talk about... left: W..what? Eh? SFX: Sitting
Center: I checked and there are no missions today, so good news Senpai! We should have tome for 20 more sessions like this!
SFX: Shocked! Small bubble to the left: W...what?
Bubble bottom right: Senpai...
SFX around her body: move closer
Bubble middle: Do you want to say... all of this was a mistake?
SFX on male: sweat
Bubble: No, of course not, what I meant is...
Bubble bottom left: In that case, time is precious, let's get started again!
SFX: Jump
Last bubble: W...wait! Ah!

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Apr 30 2019, 11:23