[X] My Assistant

Proofing noes for [Silent] part. Changed parts in red. Questions to TL in green. Some minor spelling and such not market (please use a spellchecker next time). Overall, 99% good, just few sentences to work out and we will be good for editing.

// does not mean alternative choices, right? Because I am assuming they are different panels. If they are alternates, I leave them both if they seem ok (editor can chose).

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# ん。。。
Mm...
//Mmh

# ふ。。。あっ。。。
Ha...ahh...
//Haah...

@ ハッ
Haahh

@ ハッ
Haahh

$ ツ。。。
*SLIPPY*

@ グツ
*GROPE*

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@ はっ
Haah

@ ふっ。。。
Haah...

$ ザッ
[*It's SFX for white noise and I guess it is to show that it's a recorded video.(Or someone's recording it.) There's so many 'ザッ' all around this episode so I'll just skip it.]

$ ニュルッ
*WET*

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３

$ ヂュル
*SLURP*

$ ヂュルウ
*SLURRP*

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４

@ んは
Mmmhh

@ ふはっ
Haahh

$ プッ
*DRIP*

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# 見線こっち
Look this way.
// Look at the camera.

# そう、
Right, right here.

@ は
Hahh

@ はっ
Hahh

@ ！

@ はっ
Hahh
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# 。。。夜の // ここ
...It's past 10 and...

# これから
I'm in the old clubroom... of the automobile club

# 状況を
From now on... I'll make an... experience-based report

# えー。。。// 体験レポ＿トを
Uh-... to introduce our club activity
// to everyone who... is interested in... I mean...

@ はっ
Haahh

@ はっ
Haahh

$ ぶるっ
*QUIVER*

$ ぶるっ
*QUIVER*

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# え。。。暗い。。。// もっと
Oh... Do I look...depressed?
//More cheerfully...? You mean...

# はい。。。あの
Like that video... O.K...

@ するる
*SLIDE*

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# えー。。。// これから
Um-...
//From now on, you'll see the record of our activity, that is of the automobile club.

# 一体 // 。。。と言って
What's this automobile club? Let me introduce it to you.
//And it won't be boring.

# 興味が
If you're interested, please join our club...!
We always welcome you

$ ピッ
*BEEP*

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# こんな
Like this...? ...Yes...

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# ん。。。ふ。。。// 挨拶。。。
Mmm... Haahh...
//This is... a greeting.

# ん。。。コミュニケーションを
Mmm... Greeting is a very important thing... in communicating with... others

# こう。。。して // 唇を
We... entangle our tongues like this... Mmm... Haahh...
//Like every otherMmm...college student do...

# 。。。しすぎると
...I keep doing it and I start to feel dazed...

$ チュル
*SLOSH*

$ チュッ
*CHU*

$ クチュッ
*SLOSH*

$ ギッ
*RUSTLE*

$ ギシッ
*RUSTLE*
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# 。。。この部室 // いいムードに
...This clubroom is pretty small so...
//Once the mood gets right, it easily spreads to everyone

# そうなると
And usually... it leads to some erotic thing I GET WHAT YOU MEAN BUT WE NEED A BETTER EXPRESSION AND I CANNOT COME UP WITH ONE... ANY SUGGESTIONS, ANYONE?.

$ はふ
*BLUSH*
(*It's liberal translation)

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# 今日は // たっぷり
Today I'll show you
//the detailed picture of it

# これも // 部の活動
It's the part of
//the club activity.

@ ぐっ
*GROPE*
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# 最初は
It begins with careful stimulation of my intimate part

# 指で // 自分
He pokes it with his finger, or uses some toys
//Or makes me do it by myself...

$ ピッ
*BEEP*

$ ブルッ
*QUIVER*

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# そうやって
He saw my... pussy get wet and dripping and

# 。。。アレを
...Now he's ready...right?

# だから // これから
I know what he is ready for
//I'll be stuck with this... My body starts to throb at that thought.

@ は
Hahh

@ は
Hahh

$ ぶるっ
*QUIVER*

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# 。。。今 // あちらで
...And
//The others just started to play rock scissors paper over there.

# もっと　（ＨＷ）
Explain it

# 話。。。　（ＨＷ）
In detail...

# 。。。一発
...There's always competition because they all want to be the first.

@ はっ
Haah

@ はっ
Haah

@ ずっぷ
*SLURP*

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# 。。。きゃっ
...Kiya

# これから
I'll be stuck with this excellent THING - WHAT THING?from now.

# 。。。いつも最初に
He always makes me to watch it first.
(*Or just 'He always show it to me first')

@ かあ
*BLUSH*

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# えー。。。
Uh-... we're at the height of it(*)...
[*The original word is '本番(HonBan)' and it's literally means the actual performance before the audience. So I can say that it's an antonym of rehearsal. But in this case, it means sexual intercouse with insertion, not a blowjob or handjob or sumata.]
Uh-... we're at the height of the performance

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# 。。。いつもは
...We talk about many things while we're doing it...

# 講義とか// 部の大会とか // けっこうね？
About lecture
//About club meeting
//It's student-like topics, isn't it? Tell me something.

# 。。。緊張して // いつもは
...He looks strained.
//He's cheerful in usual.

@ はっ
Haahh

@ は
Haah

@ はっ
Haahh

$ ずっ (X 2)
*SLURP* (X 2)

$ ちゅく (X 2)
*SLOSH* (X 2)

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# はいっ
Alright
We're taking commemorative photograph.

# かなり
It's touching my deepest place.

# 今日は
And I'm squeezing it tightly, as usually.

# 。。。乱れすぎ
...Was that too nasty?

@ ずっぷ
*SLURP*

@ はっ
Haahh

@ はっ
Haahh

$ ヌプ
*WET*
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# んー。。。
Mmm-...

# どぴゅってして。。。 // 。。。ね？
Give me your cum...
//...Will you?

$ チュル
*SLOSH*

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# きゃっ。。。
Kiya...

# 今。。。びゅく//中に
It's... flushing
//Gushing in

# たくさん//二回三回と
He's letting out so much...
Ah...A...h
//Twice, three times, and again...!
[*Or just 'Again, again, and again...!'] BETTER

@ はっ
Haahh

@ はっ
Haahh

$ ド
*GUSH*

$ ドッ
*GUSH*

$ ドッ
*GUSH*

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# えー。。。//夜の１２
Uh-...
//It's midnight.

# 。。。なかだし
He just cummed inside me.

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# 。。。ほんとは//自動車部では
...As a general rule, he shouldn't do that but
//It's normal in automobile club.

# 。。。私も
...And I like it too...

@ はっ
Haahh

@ はっ
Haahh

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# 次は
Now it's time to show my skill

# 。。。ぞの前に
...But before that

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# 。。。やっぱり//改まって
...It's
//pretty embarrassing

# 照れちゃい
To take off my clothes by myself.

$ シュル
*SLIP (OFF)*

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＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
# どきどきします
My heart is pounding

# とても強い
It smells so strong

$ ゴシッ (X 2)
*RUB* (X 2)

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
# それが//たまりません
I just
//can't stop...

# んふっ
Mmmhh

$ はっ
Haahh

$ はっ
Haahh

$ かぷん
*SQUISH*

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# ん。。。
Mmm...
Mm-mm...

# ふん。。。ん。。。っ
Mmhh...Mm...h

@ じゅる//じゅるる
*SLURP*
//*SLURP*

$ はふ
Haahh

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# とっても//おいしい
Delicious milk
//just came out.

$ ふっ
Haah

$ はふっ
Haahh

$ ズルルッ
*DROOL*

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# おしゃぶり
It's licking time now.

# 実はかなり
In fact, I'm pretty good at this.

# 順番に//いろんな形
I suck them in turn
//I never get tired of watching their various shapes.

# おっぱいを//たっぷりでると
I like to use my breasts
//Because it makes them cum so much.

@ はっ
Haahh

@ はっ
Haahh

@ はっ
Haahh

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# ああっと
Before I knew it I'm surrounded

# なんと言う事//大学生で
Look what's going on here!
//I'm about to be gang banged in college!

# 。。。でもすでに
...Well, I'm already stuck - DOESN'T MAKE SENSE... TOUCHED? TEASED? so many times and I'm just ready.

$ キュッ
*GROPE*

$ キュッ
*GROPE*

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# 撮れてますか？
Are you recording this?
Really?

# これビデオに
So you're making a video of this?

@ は
Haah

@ はっ
Haahh

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# ちょっと//かも。。。
It's little embarrassing
//I think...

$ グプッ
*SLURP*

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# どうやら
Somehow it seems

# 乱交に
To turn into a gang bang

# わたしも
I should take my heart to swing my waste - EXPRESSION DOESN'T MAKE SENSE, REDO SENTENCE PLEASE harder.

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# きゃ。。。//深夜の２
Kiya...
//It's little after two... in the morning

# ご覧の通り//後ろもしっかり
As you can see
We're at the height of a gang bang.
//They're using my other hole, too.

# ちなみに//。。。まだまだ
And it's about...the fourth time...? I think so.
//...They don't look tired yet.

@ はっ (X 3)
Haahh (X 3)

$ ズップ (X 2)
*SLURP* (X 2)

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@ んっ//うっ
Mmh
//Mmhh

@ んぶっ
Mmbh

$ ドグッ
*SPLASH*

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# あは。。。//おいしく
Haha...
I'm sandwiched...
//I'm ready to be eaten
(*Or just 'They're going to eat me.)
[*'食べる(Eat)' is also informal expression for 'to have sex']

# くるしい　（ＨＷ）
Stuffy

@ あっ
Ahh

@ ん。。。
Mmm...

$ ズップ (X 2)
*SLURP* (X 2)

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# あー。。。
Ah-...

@ はっ (X 3)
Haah (X 3)

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@ んぶー。。。
Mmmbh-...
(*↑Does it look weird?)

@ んぶー。。。
Mmmbh-...

@ ビッ
*TWITCH*

$ とびゅるっ
*SQUIRT*

$ ドッ (X 3)
*THUMP*

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# 顔にだされ
They came on my face.
//...It's warm

# とろとろ//ぶっかけ？
And sticky
//Bukkake?

@ はっ
Haahh

@ はっ
Haahh

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# ああっ
Aahh

# また
And again
Together at the same time...

$ ズップ
*SLURP*

$ ズッ
*SLOSH*

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# どっ。。。//あがってきました
It's... It's getting hotter
//And now it's a huge gang bang...!

@ はあ
Haahh

@ はあ
Haahh

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@ はふっ
Hawwhh

@ はっ
Haah

@ ビッ
*TWITCH*

@ んっ
Mmmh

@ ふん
Hawwmm

@ んふう
Mmmhh

@ ふん
Hawwhh

@ ふうん
Mmmhh

@ ふうん
Mhmmm

@ んふうっ
Mmmhhhh

$ ド (X 4)
*THUMP* (X 4(

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# かっかなり
They're doing it pretty hard...

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
@ あんっ//はっ
Anhh
//Haahh

@ ああ
Aaah

@ ああ
Aaah

$ ぶるっ (X 2)
*QUIVER* (X 2)
$ ドビュッ (X 2)
*SQUIRT* (X 2)

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# やっ
No

# だめ//だめっ
Stop
//Wait

# またっ//あっ
Again
//Ah

# ひっ//あっ
Hii
//Ah

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
# いっ//く
I'm
//cumming

# ひっ//あ
Hii
//Ah

# ああっ//ああっ
Aaah
//Aah

# あは//あはっ
Ahn
//Haahh

# あーっ//ああーっ
A-h
//Aa-h

$ ドッド
*THUMP*

$ ドッ
*THUMP*

$ ドッ
*THUMP*

$ びく
*TWITCH*

$ びくん
*TWITCH*

$ びくっ
*TWITHC*

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
# は。。。っ//は
Haahh...h
//Hahh

# な。。。
How... How many times have you...?

# おかしく//はっ
It's making me crazy
//Haahh

# はっ
Haahh

# すごく。。。//どろどろ
So...
//Squishy

# して。。。
Feel like I'm...

# とけぞう。。。
Melting...

@ あ
Ah

@ は
Hahh

@ はあ

$ ぶる
*QUIVER*

$ ぶるっ
*QUIVER*

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# もっと？//あ。。。
More? More?
//Ah...

# だすの？
Gonna cum? Cum?

# おまんこに？//はい。。。
In my pussy? Inside?
Alright...

@ はっ
Haahh

$ ぞくっ
*SHIVER*

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# ね？//ひ
Huh?
//Hii

# ね？//ひっ
Huh?
//Hii

# いいの？//ひ
Feel good?
//Hii

# いいでしょ？//ひっ
Do you feel good?
//Hii

# どうぞっ//どうぞっ
Please
//Please

@ ひっ
Hii

@ はっ
Haahh

@ はっ
Haahh

@ はっ
Haahh

$ ビクン
*TWITCH*

$ ビグッ
*TWITCH*

$ ド　　　（Ｘ４）
*THUMP* (X 4)

$ ぶちゅ　（Ｘ２）
*SLURP* (X 2)

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@ あはあ
AAAAHH

@ はっ
Haahh

@ あーっ
Aa-hh

@ はっ
Haahh

@ ひっ
Hii

@ あっ
Ahh

@ はっ
Haahh

$ ズッ　　（Ｘ２）
*SLOSH* (X 2)

$ ズプ
*SLURP*

$ ギッ　　（Ｘ３）
*CREAK* (X 3)

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＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
# 。。。。。。えー。。。//間もなく
.....Uh-...
//It's almost morning... I think

# 少休止に。。。
I'm taking... short break.

@ は//ふ
Haah
//Haah

@ はっ
Haahh

@ は
Hahh

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
# 。。。本当に
...I know that you may not believe

# 。。。と思われる
...That we actually did it all-night long but

$ ツ。。。
*SLIP*

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# 証拠//こんなに
Here's the proof...
//We have done this much)

# 女の子としては
As a girl, it's pleasing and also embarrassing...I don't know what to say

@ クイッ
*GRIP*

@ ぶく
*BLUB*

@ ぶくっ
*BLUB*

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
# でも
But it was great

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＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
# とりあえず//自動車部
Give me your thoughts about this.
(*Or 'SImple closing ment please')
Tell me what you think about this

$ シュル。。。
*SLIP*

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
# 。。。どうでしたか？//自動車部
...How was it?
//It was a record of automobile club's nighttime activity...

# どんな雰囲気か//少しでも
I hope you felt
//the atmosphere of our club through
this video

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
# 興味のある方は
Please come and join us if you're interested.
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and here is the [infection] part

And the infection. I skip the SFX outside of bubble. I'll do it if editor want to do the SFX.

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＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃どうして
Why do you hide it from me!?

＃部室
You were in the club room.
I remember.

＃知ってる
　知ってるん
You must know something
//You know something, right!?

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃って言われ
Do we know something?

＃。。。なあ
...No

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃お？
Oh?

＃い。。。
　その上
You...you've always abused her
And now you even...

＄ぐっ
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Ｐ２４
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃きゃっ。。。
Kiya...

＃おいおい
　いきなり
Hey,
//You treat me like a scum, huh?
If it's Belldandy talking about herself, I'd say whore. If it's a guy, I'd say garbage.

＃いたっ。。。
Ouch...

＄どっ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃。。。あんまり
...I didn't treat her that bad.

＃やっ。。。
No...
Get off me...
Wait...!

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃さっ。。。散?
You... You wrecked her just for fun...

＃そっその上
And you even sell SUCH A THING...!

＃かえしなさいっ
Return it
Return it!!

＄ギッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃それは
It is you who made THOSE THINGS, isn't it?

＃回収する
Don't you think you should think about it before you blame me?

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
＃俺たちだけ
Am I the only one who is responsible for that?

＃敎育
Do I have to teach you about that?

＃うっ。。。
Ooh...

＃そう云うコト
Come to think about it-...

＄ぐっ

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ２５
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃やっ。。。
　いやっ
No...
//No

＃あんた部長
You're the club president, right?
Why are you trying to take that back?

＃相当
You're pretty striving for that but
tha't impossible.

You want that so badly but that's impossible.

＃やあ。。。
Stop...

＠ギュッ

＠ぐっ

＄ドッ　　（X３）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃てってっ。。。
　手を
Ge, get...
//Get off me

＃へー。。。
　やっぱ
　あんな部に
Ooh-...
//You're not familiar with this.
//Although you are the president of THAT CLUB

＃かっ関係
T,That's has nothing to do with this

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃まあ見た通り
No wonder. As I see it,

＃興味はあるけど
You're interested in it.
But unfortunately, you don't have any partner... right?

＠！！

＄ビクッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃やっ
　いやっ
No
//No...

＃おおっと
Oh, don't worry
I don't feel any sex appeal from you.

＃そんな調子じゃ
Actually no one does, I guess?

＠ぐいっ
*PUSH*

＠ぐい
*PUSH*

＠ひっ
Hii

＠わっ
Woa

＄ドキッ

＄ドキッ

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ２６
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃あっ
Hmm... may be you're jealous of her.

＃。。。だから
　どう頑張っても
...And that's why you ignored THAT.
//Because you can't be like her, whatever you do.

＠カチン

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃ばっ
Don't... Don't fool me...!

＃あの
That club
That club is

＃あなた達が
Not what you think it is...!

＃今は。。。今は
Senpai... Senpai is just bearing it now but...

＃だから。。。！！
But...!

＄ドキッ　　（Ｘ４）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃。。。で？
　その先輩は
...But what?
//That Senpai is willing to sells her body to us

＃あいつ等だって
　。。。誰も
And they're benefited from it.
//...No one's loosing anything.

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃だっ
　。。。だから
　。。。だから
Bu
//...But
//...But

＃何とか
　なんとか。。。！
I have to...
//Do something...!

＄ギッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
＃。。。ふ-ん
...Heh.
(*It's actually snorting. Laughing at her)

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ２７
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃。。。それじゃ
　間に
...Alright
Go to the toilet in the East building now.
//I think you can't be in the time but
Who knows.

＃それとビデオは
And I won't return that video since we never sold it.

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃。。。。。。。

＃頑張らなきゃ
I have to do
//whatever I can...

＄チャッ

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ２８
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＄ダ　　（Ｘ４）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＠？

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＄ヒュッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＄バキン

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ２９
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃。。。怪我したく
　今すぐに
...If you don't want to be hurt.
//Get out

＃出て行き
RIght now...

＃本気です
　本気ですよ
I'm serious.
I'm serious.

＠ハッ　　（Ｘ２）
Haahh (X 2)

＄ジャリ

＄パキン

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃。。。なんだ？
...What's this? Who is she?

＃。。。やべ。。。
...It's not good...

＃部著だろ？
She's the club president.
I guess we have to...

＃仕方ね-。。。
Guess we have no option...

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＠ちぇ
*TSK*

＠ギュッ
*GRAP*

＠ギュッ
*GRAP*

＄ドキ　　（Ｘ２）

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３０
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃せっ
　せんぱい。。。
Se, Senpai...

＃大丈。。。夫
Are you... alrig...

$ザッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＠ギッ
*CREAK*

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃は-。。。
Haa-...

＃は-。。。
Haah-...

＄トプ　　（Ｘ４）

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３１
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃いっ
　今。。。
I'll
//I'll

＃ふきっ
　拭きます
Wa, Wash
//Washi it right now... Oh... Ah...

＠わ
*MUDDLE*

＠わっ
*MUDDLE*

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃。。。あ
　あ。。。
...Ah
//Ah...

＃ごめ。。。
　。。。なさい
I'm...
//...sorry

＃少し。。。
　気を。。。
I got...
//for a moment

＄ズルッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃えっ！？
Huh!?

＃ど。。。
　どうぞ。。。
P...
//Please...

＃はっ？
　なっ
What?
//What are you talking about!?

＠は

＠はっ

＄ズイッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃。。。お使い
...Please

＃。。。ください
...Use me

＠はっ
Haah

＠はっ
Haah

＄トロッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
＃やっ。。。
No...

＃だっ。。。。！
Stop...!

＃汚な。。。
It's (dirty)...

＄ドッ

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３２
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃すいま。。。
What... you... mean

＃。。。ないを
　。。。して。。。
...You're
//...sorry...

＄ぞゆっ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃で。。。
　でば。。。
Th...
Then...

＃少し。。。
　ますが。。。
It's little...
//messed but...

＃こちらを。。。
　使えます。。。
use...
//my... here... please...

＠はっ　　（Ｘ２）
Haah (X 2)

＠ぐっ
*GAPE*

＄ピュッ

＄ブピュッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃すこし。。。
It's...

＃。。。なら
...still

＄ブピッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃力が。。。
tight...

＃入ります
enough...

＄キュッ

＄プッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
＃。。。ほら
...Look

＄トプ　　（Ｘ２）

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３３
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１

＃だめ。。。
　ダメ
Stop...
//Please STOP...

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃わたし。。。
　わたしが
I'll...
//I'll

＃。。。なんとか
...do something with this so

＃。。。そんあコト
　。。。しないで。。。
...Stop
...saying such a things...

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃あ-。。。
Ah-...

＃あっ。。
　はっ
Ah...
//Haah

＃あはっ。。。
　あ。。。
Ahaah...
//Ah...

＄ズプ

＄ズップ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃はっ。。。
Haah...

＃あっ。。。
Haah...

＄ジュプ

＄ズボ

＄ジュプ

＄ボ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
＃んっ
　ん。。。
Mmmh
//Mmm...

＃うん。。。
Unn...

＄グキュッ

＄ドップ

＄ドッ

＄ドップ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝６
＃っあ
　ああっ
Ah
//AAhh

＄ビュプ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝７
＃は-。。。
Haa-...

＃は-。。。
Haa-...

＠はっ
Haah

＠はっ
Haah

＄ズルッ

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３４
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃うんっ。。。
Unnh...

＃んんっ。。。
Mmmh...

＃んっ
Mmh

＃ん
Mm

＃ん-っ。。。
Mm...h...

＠はっ
Haah

＠はっ
Haahh

＃ふっ
Fuu

＄ドッ　（Ｘ３）

＄ビュル

＄ビュルッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃なっ。。。
What...

＃何を。。。！？
What are you...!?

＄ぞっ

＄ぞわわ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃す。。。
　少しでも
I...
//I want to

＃は。。。
　入るように
have...
//it inside me

＠はふ

＠はっ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃ひっ。。。
　あっ
Hii...
//Ah

＃あはっ。。。
Ahaah...

＃あ-。。。っ
A-...h

＃あ-。。。っ
A-...h

＄ガクン

＄ぶるっ

＄ぶるるっ

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３５
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃。。。ど。。。
...W...

＄ザザザ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃。。。どうして
...Why

＃。。。先輩。。。
...are you...

＄ザザザワ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃は-。。。
Haa-...

＃は-。。。
Haa-...

＃。。。笑うん
　。。。どうして。。。
...Smiling
//Senpai...

＠はっ

＠はふ

＄トプ　　（Ｘ３）

＄トプッ　　（Ｘ２）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃わ。。。
　。。。わたし．。。
It...
//...It just...

＃な
　なにをしても
　それで。。。
F
//Feels good... no matter...what...

＃ふわふわ
　。。。ういてる
they do
//...to me... I...

＃おちてる
I can't... stop...

＠はふ
Hafuu

＠はっ
Haah

＠ふ
Fu

＄ゾッ　　（Ｘ２）

＄ゾ　　（Ｘ２）

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３６
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃やめて下
　色情狂じゃ
Please stop
//That's just a nymphomaniac!

＃違うでしょ
You're not
You're not!!

＄バン”

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃いやらしい
You're making vulgar voices!

＃何が
What's so good?

＃なにが
What's so good about this thing!?

＠あ
Ah

＠は
Haa

＠は
Haa

＠んは
Mmhaa

＄ドッ

＄ビグ

＄グイッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃こんな
　こんなに
You
//You just

＃ボロボロに
Gave yourself to the men

＃誰かも
You don't even know who they are

＃何度も
Again
and again

＄ブキュッ

＄プッ

＄プッ

＄グチュ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃こんな
And you're messed up like this

＃こんな場所に
You're gang banged in this dirty place...!

＄ギッ

＄ギギッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
＃こっ
　こえを
S
//Stop that nasty moaning!!

＃そんあに
Do you really feel that good!?

＠あん
　あ
Ahn
//Ah

＠ああ
　ん
Aah
//Mm

＠あんあ
Ahaa

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３７
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃いっ。。。いい
It's... good
It's cumming!
It's cumming!!

＃やらしいっ
You dirty...!!

＃こんなのが
Do you really like it?

＃気持ち
It's disgusting!!

＠あっ
Ah

＠ああん
AAhh

＠はっ
Haah

＠ハッ
Haah

＠ハッ
Haah

＠ぶちゅ
*SLURP*

＠ぷちゅ
*SLURP*

＄ドッ

＄ズルッ

＄ドッ

＄ドッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃あっ
Ah

＃おまんこ
My pussy
Ahaa
It's good

＃うるさいっ
Bag it
Bag it

＃そんなに
　勝手に
If you like it that much
//Have it your way
Have it your way!

＠はっ　　（Ｘ４）
Haah (X 4)

＄ぶるんっ

＄ぷじゅっ

＄ぷじゅ

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３８
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＠ひっ
　あ
Hii
//Ah

＠っあ
　はっ
Ah
//Haah

＠あっ
　あっ
Ah
//Ah

＄ビュル　　（Ｘ３）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃あ。。。
　。。。あ。。。
Ah...
//...Ah...

＃ああ。。。っ
AAh...h

＠はふ
Hahh

＠ふう
Fuu

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ３９
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃。。。

＃。。。きたない。。。
...dirty...

＄ズッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃。。。ぞうですか
　。。。そんなに
...Now I see
...You really like this.

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃！

＃それじゃあ
　私も
Then
//Let me help you with this, too.

＄グッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃。。。？

＠はっ
Haah

＠はっ
Haah

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
＃。。。先輩。。。。
　こうゆうのが
...Senpai...
//really like the things like this, huh?

＄ツ。。。

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ４０
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃先輩が
　正気じゃ
As Senpai
//is not a sane person.,
＃わたしだって
I have to

＃もともじゃ
be little insane
to play with you...

＄ゾク

＄ゾクッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃んっ
　ん
　んっ。。。
Mmm
//Mm
//Mmmh...

＃悪いのは。。。
It's all because of you...
Senpai...
＄ぶるっ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃目を
　信じて
You opened my eyes...
//I trusted you...
But you...

＄ドズン　　（Ｘ２）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃ずっと憧れて
　ぞんあコト
I admired you...
//But you show me how you enjoyed these things...!!

＄ドグン　　（Ｘ２）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
＃ひあっ！？
　なっ。。。
Hiya!?
//What...

＠ペロ
*LICK*

＄ぶるるっ
ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ４１
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃ああっ
AAh

＃んっ
Mmh...

＄ツル

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃はっ
Haah

＃んっ
Mmmh

＄ッ　　（Ｘ３）

＄ツプ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃な。。。
What...

＃なんで。。。
　ぞんな。。。
Are you...
//Doing... it's

＄ビグッ　　（Ｘ２）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃。。。なれ
...You'll
//...feel good

＃気持ち。。。
Once you...
＃なるん。。。
get...
familiar...
＠はっｔ　　（Ｘ３）

＠プクン

$ドッ（Ｘ４）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝５
＄キュッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝６
＄ツ。。。

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝７
＄チュル　　（Ｘ２）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝８
#身体が。。。
Your body...

＃そういう。。。
will learn... that...

＠チュッ
*LICK*

＠くっ
*GROPE*

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ４２
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃ヘンタイ。。。
Pervert...
(*Original word is 'Hentai')

＃。。。今すぐ
...I'll

＃よごして。。。
　。。。あげます。。。
Mess you up...
//...right now...

＄ぶるっ　　（Ｘ４）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃。。。どうして
　非道い
...Now I see
...the reason
//why everyone did cruel things

＃。。。少し
　わかった。。。
...to you
//It's...

＄ドッ　　（Ｘ３）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃その顔。。。
　。。。です。。。
It's...
...Your face...

＄ポッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃あっ
Ah

＃あっ
Ah

＃滅茶苦茶に。。。
It makes me...

＃よごしたく。。。
want to...
...mess you up...

＄パシャ　　（Ｘ５）

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ４３
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃これでも。。。
　いいですか？
Do you even...
//like this?

＃みんなに。。。
　まるで。。。
Raped...
by everyone...
//And treated like...
THIS PLACE

＃。。。そのもの。。。
...Just like...

＠んっ

＠うん

＄パシャ　　（Ｘ４）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＠プチ

＄ブルルル

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃。。。ココは。。。
　そのための。。。
...THIS is...
//the place...
made...
...for THIS...

＃。。。気にせずに。。。
...So don't be bothered...

＠はっ　　（Ｘ２）
Haah (X 2)

＄パシャ　　（Ｘ２）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃。。。頭が
　私。。。
...I feel like I'm losing my mind...
//Or...
＃。。。もう
...Already lost it, I guess

＠ハッ　　（Ｘ２）
Haah (X 2)

＠ハ
Haa

＄パシャ　（Ｘ３）

＄パシャッ

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ４４
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃も。。。
　どうでも
W...
//Whatever...

＃あ-っ。。。
A-h...

＃あ-っ。。。
A-h...

＠はっ
Haah

＠は
Haa

＄パシャッ　　（Ｘ２）

＄パシャアッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃っ！！
Mmm!!

＄ツプ

＄パタ　　（Ｘ２）

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃ん。。。
　ふ。。。
Mmm...
//Fu...

＃かわ。。。
　いい。。
It's...
//cute...

＠はっ
Haah

＠ふっ
Fuuh

＠はっ
Haah

＠ちゅ
*CHU*

＠くちゅ
*SLOSH*

＄ぶるる

＄ジョッ。。。

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝４
＃っあ
　。。。はっ
MmAAh...
//Fuu...

＃もっと。。。
　だして。。。
Give me...
//more...

＠んふ
Mmmh

＠こくっ (X 2)
*GULP* (X 2)
＠んふ
Mmmh

＄ジュッ。。。

＄ショッ

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ４５
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１
＃ひっ。。。
Hii...

＃んっ
　んん。。。
Mmmh
//Mmm...

＃あは。。。あ-。。。
AAhh... Ah-...

＃あ。。。あ。。。
Ah... Ah...

＠はふ
Hahh

＠はっ　　（Ｘ２）
Haah (X 2)

＠クチュ　（Ｘ２）
*SLURP* *SLURP* (X 2)

＄ぶるっ　　（Ｘ３）

＄パシャ

＄パシャシャッ

＄パシャッ

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃ずっと。。。
...I can see...

＃。。。今まで。。。
...that you...

＃苦しんで。。。
have always suffered...

＠ふっ
Fuuh

＠はっ
Haah

＄ピクン

＄ぶるっ　　（Ｘ２）

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ４６
＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝１

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝２
＃。。。私で
...I can help you...

＃その苦しみを。。。
　やわらげて。。。
soothing that pain...
//...if you let me...

＠はっ　　（Ｘ２）
Haah (X 2)

＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝３
＃。。。ふたりで
...We can do it
...together...

ーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
Ｐ４５
■今回は
I used black too much for this time and it's gloomy. Even little sick...
Sigh...

■えー。。。。。。、
Uh-..., I'm gathering my heart.
I'm alright, I'm alright, I'm fine, I'm fine.
So... according to the book I recently read, the imagination and intuition is the most important factor in the field.
......in deed.
in deed....dddd.....ddddd.....
(Falling to the deepest bottom)

(*I can't read this sentence.)

(Returned)
...Hmm.
I barely shook off the Blacky in my mind.
Keep it up, me.
I can be the detective heroin cat if I do my best.
...I wish.

■For that reason, Fujishima-Sensei, Director Gouda, Every fan of Goddess, especially of Hasegawa,
I'm sorry sorry sorry sorry, from the bottom of my heart.
I'm reflecting on myself deeper than the sea.

■Cast off every 2003 year's anguish, I'll WASH my HEART and keep it up.

「HeHehHe... Will it be that easy?」

Oh, Blacky is back.
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"// does not mean alternative choices, right? "

"//" mean overlap bubble/connected bubble.

Right.

Uh, btw, did I or anyone else proofread 3d+?

https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=3383540

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10627

or did it slip my / our minds? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Anyway, project bounties / plans

silent bell infection TL bounty for asdkg to claim https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10628

next TL project Skuld story from [RPG COMPANY2 (Toumi Haruka)] MOVIE STAR IIb TL bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10629

silent bell infection editing bounty - https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10830

future TL to bountify - silent bell patients https://e-hentai.org/g/14285/28117212ba/ , silent bell outbreak https://e-hentai.org/g/345551/e002cf3891/ , silent bell orchid https://e-hentai.org/g/80360/214b0249e2/

would be nice to do all of those this year...

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Aug 12 2014, 06:44

Silent Bell

# そうなると
And usually... it leads to some erotic thing I GET WHAT YOU MEAN BUT WE NEED A BETTER EXPRESSION AND I CANNOT COME UP WITH ONE... ANY SUGGESTIONS, ANYONE?.

-->It's ’Ｈな’　and yeah, I can't figure out proper expression. It's a word used to talk about sex jokingly, or cutely (and even girly, I think).

# これから
I'll be stuck with this excellent THING - WHAT THING?from now.

-->Oh, the 'thing' means 'dick'.

# 。。。でもすでに
...Well, I'm already stuck - DOESN'T MAKE SENSE... TOUCHED? TEASED? so many times and I'm just ready.

-->It's means... 'Guys already sticked they're dick into her many times', and I made it passive form, following the original Japanese. But I think I made it too literal.

# わたしも
I should take my heart to swing my waste - EXPRESSION DOESN'T MAKE SENSE, REDO SENTENCE PLEASE harder.

--> Oh dear, it's swing my waist, no waste...

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INFECTION

＃おいおい
　いきなり
Hey,
//You treat me like a scum, huh?
If it's Belldandy talking about herself, I'd say whore. If it's a guy, I'd say garbage.

---> It's 'garbage', then.

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And no one proof read 3d+, as I remember.

This post has been edited by asdkg: Aug 12 2014, 08:22

Proofed 3d+ with my comments. As before, my changes are in red, and any questions are in green.

Here's the completed version.

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P5
F1, T/R
-B1, Skuld
=== Ooooh...

-B2, S
--- So cuuuuute...
F2, T/L
-HW, SFX
=== *FLUFFY* *FLUFFY*
F3, Up-Middle/Left
-B1, Guy
=== You know what?
=== That type leaped into fame after shown on the TV

-B2, S
=== Huh?

-B3, S
=== Hmm...

-B4, Guy
=== You really have to take good care of him, because
=== Muchkin is easy to have hernia unless you exercise it properly. WHAT IS A MUCHKIN? ANYWAY I'D SAY "THIS TYPE CAN VERY EASILY GET HERNIA UNLESS THEY EXERCISE PROPERLY
=== If you are interested, why don't we talk more somewhere else?(*)
*** (*He's trying to pick her up)
F4, B/R
-HW, Clerk
=== Huh?

-B1, Mister
=== Alright, give me one cat. Would you send it to me by this evening?
=== With all accessories.

-B2, Skuld
=== Hey hey hey H-E-Y
=== Wait a minute what are you talking about!?

-HW, SFX
=== *FLAP* *FLAP*
F5, Down-Middle/Left
-B1, S
=== It's not buying some ice cream. It's living thing!

-B2, S
=== You spend your money so easily
=== It's so troubling, Mister!

-B3, SFX
=== *GRN*

-B4, S
=== What's that platinum card? I DON'T THINK WHAT'S IS THE BEST QUESTION HERE...
=== Takako-san gonna spank your the butt

-B5, M
=== Hm? Are you fine? (*without a cat)
F6, B/L
-HW, SFX
=== *THUD*

-B1, Guy
=== Uncle(*)...?
=== Hardly(**)...
*** (*Japanese word is 'おじさま' and it can be both 'Mister(Non-relative male)' and 'Uncle(related in blood)'
*** (**Lietral translation is 'They don't resemble each other at all') I LIKE THIS BETTER

-B2, Another Guy
=== Without the fact that they smell the same scent of soap(*)...
*** (*Or 'They even smell the same scent of soap...')
They smell of the same soap

-B3, Guy
=== Really!?
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P6
F1, T/R
-B1, S
=== Phew... Feel like someone still doesn't understand...

F2, T/L
-B1, M
=== That was unbelievable.
=== I can't believe they tried to shamelessly pick up a kid like you.

-B2, M
=== You should learn to be careful
=== There are a lot of lowlifes out there

-B3, S
=== K-I-D like me?
F3, M/L
-B1, S
=== You must meant the cute, charming, delicate beauty, M.I.S.T.E.R♡

-B2, S
=== So cute that
=== Make everyone's heart beat as hard as it could(*)♡ You got it? Got it?
*** (*It's pun that comes from similar pronunciation between キュ?ト(Kiyu-To, cute) and きゅっと(Kiyu-t-to, SFX for grasping or squeezing something)
*** Please fix it if you think out some better pun.
F4, B/L
-B1, S
=== Cute, delicate beauty...?
=== Well that pun was not like a kid for sure.

-HWs, SFX
=== *SWING* *SWING* *SWING*

-B2, S
=== Your bad puns are starting to rub off on me!
=== I think I can be the champion if there's a contest for corny puns.

F5, B/L
-B1, M
=== Watching you sitting there so carelessly makes me want to do some naughty things
=== But! I cannot as I don't have hand now(*)
*** (*It's pun again. 'Have no hand(手がない)' means 'have no choice' or 'can't do anything' He's saying' I don't have hand', because he put his hand into her cloth.)

-B2, S
=== ...That's my pun teacher
=== You can ruin the mood in a second...
=== (Small letters) You can say it again...

-HWs, Blue, SFX
=== *Chill*

-HWs, Red, SFX
=== *FUMBLE*
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P7
F1, T/R
-B1, S
=== Hmm...?
=== You smell of alcohol... I think I told you to stop drinking.

-Hws, SFX
=== *Touch*
F2, T/L
-B1, S
=== Geez... We came here because you said you're tired from walking but...
=== You don't seem to be tired at all...

-B2~3, SFX
=== *grope* *grope*
F3, T/L, under the F2
-B1, S
=== Ah...

-B2~3, SFX
=== *grope* *grope*

-B4, ?
=== Mm...

-B5, M
=== It is nonsense of you to say so, while you're sitting here showing off your panties
F4, middle
-B1, S
=== Kiyaah
=== It's so quick...

-B2, S
=== You know we shouldn't do this before we get back home
=== Do you want Takako-San to be mad!?

-HWs, SFX
=== Ha-... Ha-... (Panting, full of lust)
=== *TWITCH* *TWITCH*

-B3, M
=== You know I'm not gonna stop with only kiss, don't you?
=== I'm not saying let's go all out. A little, Just a little, O.K?
F5, bottom right
-B1, S
=== Looks like it's a chance for me to tease you
=== Let's see... I understand that you want more than just a kiss, as you are with a beauty like me and...

-B2, S
=== Considering that you showed me around since this morning...

-B3, S
=== It won't make me a lewd girl if I give you a little reward, right?

-B4, SFX
=== *SLIP*
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Page 8
F1, T
-B1, S
=== Whoa Whoa... Whoooa
=== No... It's embarrassing

-B2, S
=== You are too bold, Mister...
F2, Up-Middle
-B1, M
=== It gets like a marshmallow when I play with it. It's so lovely

-B2, SFX
=== *FUMBLE*

-HW, SFX
=== *TWITCH* X2

-B2, S
=== No-
=== Don't talk right in front of there... Your breath tickles me...(*)

=== Mmm...
F3, Down-middle, right
-B1, S
=== Auh...
=== Tickle... It's tickling~...

-B2~5, Clockwise from top
=== *BRUSH*
=== *LICK* (Or *RUB*
=== *LICK*
=== *TOUCH*
F3, Down-middle, left
-B1, S
=== Mmm~... (HW in bubble)
=== Mister's tonuge... Ah... it is thick...

-B2, S
=== Do, Don't... Don't do lick-lick like that...
*** (She's lisping like baby, but hard to express that in Eng)

-B3~5, Clockwise from top right, SFX
=== *TWITCH*
=== *WET*
=== *WET*

-B6, S
=== Auuh...
F4, bottom
-B1, M
=== I won't spare you if you do it so well

=== I'm not sure it's because of her influence, but anyway, you're getting to know how your feminine charms quite well

-B2, M
=== No man could resist you if you tempt them with this unfair body.

-B3, S
=== ...Ooh

-B4,5 SFX
=== *TOUCH* *TOUCH*

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P 9
F1, top right
-B1, S
=== Mmm... More kiss...?

- B2, SFX
=== *DROOL*

-B3, S
=== ... O.K...
F2, top left
-B1, S
=== Mmm... Hmmm...

-B2, SFX
=== *MUMBLE*

-B3,4 SFX
=== *SLOPPY* *SLOPPY*

-B5, S
=== Ummm... Mmm♡
F2, middle
-B1, S
=== So Mister wants to
=== Do it to the end because I'm so cute, right? RIght?

-B2~3, SFX
=== *BLUSH* X2

-B3, M
=== Hey, Don't get carried away and provoke me.
F3, bottom right
-B1, S
=== I mean, Um...
=== I think it's not bad to DO it all the way...♡
=== I, isn't it...?

-B2, S
=== ...Suddenly you become willing

=== But no.

-B3, S
=== I'll have my real fun after we're back to home
=== ...Anyway, I'm putting in
F4, bottom left
-B1~2, yellow, SFX
=== *PRESS* X2

-B3, S
=== Mm... Hmmm

-B4, S
=== Ah
=== Ah...♡

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P 10
F1, top
-B1, S
=== ...Um, hello? Right here?
=== There're many place better than here on chair...

-B2, M
=== It's easier to move my waist here
=== And it would be better for you because you don't have to feel my big belly, isn't it?
F2, middle
-B1, S
=== Ooh..., Aah... Came... It came in
=== It's... Mm...(Small word)

=== Mister's... It scratches my inside.... It's... stiff...
=== so stiff... (Small word)

-B2, S
=== I can't believe that I can take such a thing in me...

-B3, S
=== Ooh... My belly is full... the whole thing came in... Ah-...

=== Ah-... Ah-... We are so naughty... Hmm... Mmm...

-B4, SFX
=== *BLUSH*

-B5~6, SFX
=== *WET* *WET*

B6, SFX
=== *QUEEF*
F3, bottom
-B1, M
=== Ooh-... I can't! I can't hold back anymore

-B2, S
=== Wa, Wai... Wait Mister
=== You are... You are doing it seriously
=== Ah... (Small word)
-B3, S
=== Ooh... Ah
=== It's... It's... deepest place... No...
=B4, S
=== Scratching... It's scratching
=== My inside... (Small word)
=== Ah... (HW)

-B5~7, red, SFX
=== Ah X3

-B8~9, yellow, SFX
=== *QUEEF* *QUEEF*

-B10, yellow, SFX
=== *SLURP*

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P11
F1, top right
-B1, S
=== Ha...(Pant)

-B2, S
== Ha... (Pant)
F2, top left
-B1, HW, M
=== Oisho

-B2, HW, S
=== Oh
=== Woah...
-B3, Pink, HW, SFX
=== (*Surprised* looks good but it's too long for this tiny bubble)
How about just ???

-B4, Pink, HW, SFX
=== *HOLD*
F3, bottom right
-B1, M
=== Phew-...This is what I can do only with a tiny little girl

=== I saw you flapping your skirt in the street and I think you lost your youthful innocence

=== Then I think that may be you can feel like child again if I swing you on my lap so...(*)
*** (*'Flappin skirt' means 'tempting', not hard to imagine. He made a pun with two word 'ふわり(SFX for flag or cloth flattering)' and ふわふわ(SFX for swinging)'.)
NO IDEA HOW TO MAKE IT INTO A BETTER PUN

-B2, S
=== So you were watching me with such a lustful thoughts
=== You are no different from that guy who tried to pick me up.
F4, bottom left
-B1, M
=== Look, my big belly is pretty convenient right now.

-B2, S
=== Woa...
=== You're like a giant stuffed doll

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P 12
F1 top right
-B1, M
=== Phew-...
=== Now that I think about it, it's not good

-B2, S
=== Wait Wait, What are you concerned about
=== in the middle of this!?

-B3, M
=== I promised Takako not to do anything to you before we get back to home
F2, top left
-B1, S
=== You're really under her thumb...

-B2, S
=== Does she have you by the balls?

-B3, M
=== Hey Hey what's this bad mouth on this pretty face...
F3, Middle
-B1, M
=== It will be nonsense if someone decides to have only one book in his life, saying

-B2, M
=== "Life is short. So I can't read that book if I read this book"

-B3, S
=== Huh?

-B4, S
=== Hmm-... I don't get it...
=== Are we talking about Takako-San?

-B5, S
=== You're mysterious
=== You make me want to know what kind of book you are and I think I'm gonna read you all
F4, bottom
-B1, M
=== Well, let's save the pleasure for the later.
=== Oh, I can say it's a 'Slurping Beauty'(*) (Small words)
*** (* Another pun, between '美女(Bi Jyo, the beauty)' and 'ひじょひじょ(Bi Jyo Bi Jyo, smoother expression of ぴちゃぴちゃ(*SPLASH*) I translate it 'Slurping Beauty', with the 'Sleeping Beauty')
GOOD

-B2, HW, S
=== Ah...

-B3, HW, Pink, S
=== Ha...(Pant)

-B4, S
=== I told you, Your jokes are so lame...

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P13
F2, middle right
-B1, S
=== Wow- Looks delicious-!
=== You're a really good at cooking, like my big sister
F3, up-middle left
-Box, S thinking
=== Arrgh she doesn't respond to me...
F4, down-middle right
-B1, Takako
=== -So, where did you go today?

-B2, S
=== Umm...
=== You, You know, I didn't bring my clothes so we had to go shopping...

-B3, T
=== Oh, that's good
=== I always sigh when I open my closet because there's nothing but same old stuff.

-Box, S thinking
=== She's angry She's angry...
F5, bottom
-B1, M
=== Today? Ah, do you remember that new hotel we talked about before? She said she want to visit it so we spend some time there.

-B2, S
=== Woahhhhh I didn't say that I didin't say that!

-HWs, S
=== Mister

=== Read the mood Read the mood

-B3, T
=== Hmm? Didn't we three promised to play together today?
=== I think I need to make you spit(*)... tell the truth
*** (*Original Japanese is 吐く(vomit). So she was about to say little rough word, and then she respoke it in not rough word.)

-B4, M
=== We went there, and we cummed there.
*** (*Another pun. '行く' means 'go' and it also means 'cum'. Fortunately it can be a English pun, go and cum(come))

-B5, S
=== No-o♡
=== I mean, you idiot! Do you really have to male such a lame joke right no(w)...

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P 14
F1, top right
-B1, T
=== Looks like you two enjoyed your weekend, left me home alone

=== Guess I have to make the best out if it, for example I can clean this room spotless while I'm here.
F2, top right
-Box, S thinking
=== Angry... She's angry...
=== She looks mild but she's angry...
F3, top middle
-Box1, S thinking
=== I know... I know another person who has the same smell

-Box2, S thinking
=== My spider sense is telling me that she's the same type as my natural enemy...

-B1, T (or U?)
=== I'm really glad to see you enjoy my dish...

=== which I made with painstaking care while you two were having fun

-B2, U
=== So it won't be a too much to ask you to wash the dishes, prepare my bath, and make my tea, will it?
F4, top left
-B1, S
=== I... I think I'm willing to do it...
F5, middle
-Box1, S thinking
=== She even looks like THIS(*Urd) to me now

-Box2, S thinking
=== So I even took a step forward and call her by HER(Urd) name.
=== ...only in my mind
F6, bottom
-Box1, S thinking
=== ('And naturally, I am not on the bottom of this house hierarchy)

-B1, S
=== It's worse than it was at Keiichi's house...

=== *SOB*

-Box2, S thinking
=== Somehow I feel like I won't be able to stand against her equally for my whole life...

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P 15
F1, top right
-B1, yellow, SFX
=== *GROPE*

-B2, pink, SFX
=== Ah
F2, top left
-B1, SFX
=== Mm (Mumble)
F3, middle
-B1, U
=== I can see that your waste WAIST?feels heavy... But THIS is still stiff ...

=== And responding well. Though it looks little tired...

-B2, U
=== But I don't feel like forgiving you at all.

=== What should I do?
F4, bottom
-B1, U
=== Even if we let that hotel thing slide, We still have that promise, to play all together.

=== So I want to know whether you're going to keep that promise or not.
-B2, U
=== And I guess there's only one way
=== to find out it♪.
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P16
F2, top left
-Box1, S thinking
=== After dinner, he usually watches baseball game or reads newspaper.

-Box2, S thinking
=== Or does such things.

-Box3, S thinking
=== Rule no.1
=== You can't refuse other's approach in house without proper reason.
F4, middle left
-B1, U
=== Oh dear...
=== Why are these so heavy like this?
F5, bottom right
-B1, U
=== Mmm...
=== It's so amazing even though it's not fully grown yet

=== My heart beats faster just by looking♪

-Box 1, S
=== ...Urd's (blow job) is so passionate that makes me embarrassed even though I'm only watching it
F6, bottom left
-B1, U
=== Mmmf... Can anyone do it so neat like me?

-B2, U
=== I can take care of this like that everyday.

-Box1, S thinking
=== I think I can copy her
=== ...May be...
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P17
F1, top right
-B1, U
=== Hmmm, what?
=== You want here too?

-B2~3, SFX
=== *GROPE* *GROPE*
F2, top left
-B1, U
=== Hhmmm♪(*)
=== This is what she cannot do
*** (*Original Japanese is ふふ(fu fu))

-B2, U
=== Let me clean this up for you

=== Mmm- Hey, don't move
=== It's so cute♡
F3, middle
-B1, U
=== Mm, Mmmm-...m...

-B2, U
=== Men have a really amazing things on them

=== I'm sure that God made this for me to play with

-B3, U
=== It makes me dazed with only a single touch...
F4, bottom right
-B1, U
=== Ha(*)... As I'm trying so hard
=== You better work even harded to give me what I want

-B2, U
=== with your cute balls♡
F5, bottom middle
-B1, U
=== ...-Unless I'm gonna do this and

-B2, U
=== Eat you up♡

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P18
F2, top left
-B1, U
=== Look, it came out♡

=== Oh dear It's too much
=== ...It's like a little boy

-B2, U
=== You came pretty fast and I guess that means...

=== You controlled yourself in that hotel to keep the promise♡
F3, middle right
-B1, U
=== I should give you a reward

=== I wonder if there is a girl that can swallow this big thing completely, what do you think?

=== Well I'm up for a challenge♡
F5, middle left
-B1~2, SFX
=== *Mm...* X3

-B3, SFX
=== *Hmf*(*)
*** (*It's a... SFX for holding back vomit... or about to vomit... I don't know what word would suit on this and May be it'll be better not to TL or edit this...)

-B4, U
===Almost... there...
F6, bottom
-B1, U
=== Wait a... it's...

=== The whole... came...
*** (*It's... It's too... Oh no)
-B2, SFX
=== *SPOUT*

-B3, SFX
=== *COUGH* *COUGH*

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P19
F1, top right
-B1~2, SFX
=== *COUGH* X2

-B3, U
=== I... I failed my challenge but
=== I'll do what small one can't...

=== I massaged it with oil while waiting...
F2, top left
-B1, U
=== Look Can you feel it's moist?
F3, under the F2
-B1, U
=== Mmm... It gets so stiff and it's making some crackling sound...

=== Makes my heart goes pit-a-pat...
F4, bottom
-B1, U
=== Hmmm...♡
=== It doesn't stop
=== It keeps flowing out more and more...

-B2, U
=== Can't take it anymore?
=== It's Twitching...

=== Here, here, let it out
=== The milk you held back in there...♪

-B3, U
=== Pour it out
=== On those nasty tits...

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P20
F2, right
-B1, HW, U
=== Aah...♡

=== Great...

-B2, HW, U
=== Great...♡
F3, top left
-B1, U
=== Oh♡
=== What's this
=== It's so much...♡

-B2, U
=== Great...♡♡
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P21
F1, top
-B1, M
=== Phew-...
=== Didn't you say that you cleaned it whole day?

=== Hard to believe that seeing you unconcerned about it getting dirty
F2, middle
-B1, U
=== Don't care
=== It doesn't matter if you buy me some new one♪

=== Let's go shopping tomorrow

-B2, U
=== Look...
=== There was still so much left♡
=== I'll let you spit it out

=== Tomorrow, we can just rest,
=== and then we can go shopping♪

-B3, M
=== No, tomorrow is...
F3, bottom right
-B1, U
=== It'll be a perfect day, don't you think so?

=== Stop just standing there and come over here
=== You want to play, don't you?

-B2, U
=== Looks like you are holding it back.
F4, bottom left
-B1, U
=== I'll give you a reward too
=== For keeping our promise

-B2, S
=== ...Ooh

-Box1, S thinking
=== We are in closed space so
=== When someone get aroused
=== ...it infects the others
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P22
F1, top right
-B1, U
=== It's here♡
=== You haven't taken your time to touch those this carefully, have you?

-B2, S
=== Hyiaah

-B3, U
=== Now tell me.
== What are those?

-B4, S
=== Wa, waaah
=== It's warm!
=== And it's squishy~

=== It... It's ba...

-B5, U
=== You're a shy girl
=== ...How cute

=== Looks like papa likes it pretty much, when we both grab it♡
F2, top left
-B1, S
=== ahaha
=== it's Great...
=== It's so sticky

=== It will make me go pit a pat if I lick this.
=== Does every male has a thing like this?

-B2, U
=== Still can't see that?
=== He's the STICKIEST among the male♪

-B3, U
=== That's like you indeed
=== You must have experienced many, so no wonder you can see that
F3, bottom left
-B1, U
=== That's a bit harsh
=== You are saying too much
=== ... cute girl

-B2, S
=== ...huh?
F4, upper one in bottom right
-B1, U
=== The naughty mouth that bites need to be punished, right...?

-B2, S
=== Ouuuu... Th, That's, my, nose...
F5, under F4
-B1, S
=== Ooh...

-B2, S
=== Ah...

B2, U
=== See that?
=== I want to get along with you

=== So let's take care of each other
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P23
F1, top right
-B1, S
=== ...It became healthy again
=== Feels like it's full of it...

=== Though I don't know about it that well...
-B2, U
=== Look, it's bulged out♡
=== How about fondling it?
=== It will cum soon if we do so

-B3, U
=== Just imagine it's an ice lolly
=== And let your tongue crawl on it slowly♪
F3, left middle
-B1, S
=== Mmm... It's delicious
=== I want to lick this candy more...

-B2, U
=== It tastes like milk
=== ...You want to drink it, right?

-B3, S
=== Yes...♡ This dick milk♡

=== ...Wait what do you want me to say...? (Small word)
F4, right middle
-B1, U
=== Why are you becoming a shy girl now?
=== Sometimes you need to shake off your shyness, O.K?

-HW
=== (Her face is)too close

-B2, S
=== I I I... I know but...

-B3, U
=== You don't want to get along with me?
F5, bottom right
-B1, S
=== O-h♡
=== Mister's candy balls are so cute♡

-HW
=== Oh... Just say it!!

-B2, S
=== I want to drink delicious dick milk- ♡

=== I'm nuzzling it so give me a dick milk
=== give me, give me-♡
F6, bottom left
-B1, U
=== Good, You did it well♡
=== Let's make him far gone together♡
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P24
F2, top left
-B1, S
=== The... the lump of lust... it is...♡

-B2, S
=== M,

=== Mister...
=== You're pretty great when you're teasing,

=== But not really strong when you're being teased, right?
=== Surprised...

-B3, U
=== He's looks weak, isn't he?
=== Don't you want to find out how weak can we make him together?
F3, left middle
-B1, U
=== ...Hmm

=== Actually I wanted to hurt you when you came as a new lover but

=== Feels like you have something special
=== ...Not bad
F4, bottom
-B1, U
=== Let's see♪

=== I can see on your face that you can't be quite happy with only a tongue

=== What, Do, You, Want?

-B2, S
=== Right...
=== He looks like he can't...
=== control himself anymore and wants to put his dick in...

-B3, S
=== I can feel that Mister's candy balls are raring to do...♪
-B4, S
=== Mister-
=== Who do you want to do with...?

=== Whose P.U.S.S.Y do you want to see?
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P25
F1, top right
-B1, S
=== How about this?
=== Isn't it cute

-B2, SFX
=== *BLUSH*

-B3, S
=== It's tiny so
=== It'll feel so good when you're squeezing into it

-B4, S
=== Want to put it in?
=== You want to put it in?
F2, bottom right
-B1, S
=== Look it's H.E.R.E♡
=== Just stick your dick into it

-B2, S
=== And you can fill it with your nasty semen
F3, top left
-B1, U
=== You can't hold back anymore, can you?

=== You want to taste the pleasure of fucking a girl, driving it in to its end...?
-B2, U
=== If you want that, you better choose the one that will let you feel as good as you want

-B3, U
=== The place where you can do every nasty thing is here♡
-F4, bottom right
-B1, U
=== I'll let you CUM. SO. GOOD
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Page26
F2, top right
-B1, S
=== Wow♡ Amazing he cummed with only hearing us

=== Mister, you're so cute

-B2, U
=== Hmm, Hmm-♪
=== What a frank boy

=== But, I won't stop until I find out who you really want to do it with♪
F3, middle
-B1, S
=== Aha it's all wet and I feel good somehow

=== How do you feel?
=== Hurry, make it bigger♡
=== A cute girl is waiting for it-

-B2, U
=== It's getting bigger, bigger♪

=== When he and I met each other for the first time,
=== he kept it hard for three days and three nights♪
=== I was totally worn-out

-B3, S
=== Wow It's great-♡

-B4, U
=== And I completely fell for him
F4, bottom
-B1, U
=== So you have to take responsibility

=== Don't even think about saying 'I have to go now' or something

-B2, U
=== The fun time has just begun♪
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Page 27
F1, top right
-B1, U
=== How are the things there?

-B2, S
=== It It's... little embarrassing- I guess...
F2, next to F1
-B1, U
=== Well then, I'm going in♡

-B2, U
=== Hmmm it's feels stimulating♡
F3, top left
-B1, U
=== Hey hey
=== How do you like this quartet of bouncing tits...?

-B2, S
=== And the couple of cute pus...sies♡

-B3, U
=== You can't fully enjoy it in one day so

=== Let's continue until tomorrow

-B4, U
=== Wow...
=== He's twitching
F4, middle right
-B1, S
=== Mister, let's kiss
=== Chu♡
F5, middle left
-B1, S
=== Hmmm... It's not a naughty kiss like usual

=== You can't do it well because you're gonna cum if you do some lick-lick?
F6, bottom
-B1, U
=== That's right. You're really good.
=== Make him feel too good♡

-B2, U
=== You want to drive whole thing of your hard-erected dick into her tiny young pussy and...

=== Make her scream and suffer in pleasure thrusting her waist, right?

-B3, S
=== No~
=== Mister you are so L.E.W.D♡

=== You want?
=== You want to do that to me?
-B4, S
=== It's good, It's good-

=== you can F.U.C.K. M.E♡
-B5, S
=== With your dick,
=== As hard as you want
=== hurry, hurry♡
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P28
F2, top middle
-B1~3, HW, S
=== Hyi
=== A
=== A

=== Ah...

=== Ah
F3, top left
-B1, S
=== Great...♡
=== ...Don't stare at me so much-

-B2, S
=== It feels funny-...
=== I feel something hot around here...

=== It's not that I cummed with this
=== at all...♡
F5, bottom
-B1, S
=== M-mmm...
=== Dick milk...

=== Gonna lick it

-B2, S
=== It's delicious, Mister♡

=== Let's play with a pussy
=== Put it in, put it in♡

B3, U
=== No, not yet. He didn't answer to the question

=== Which one?
=== The girl you want to put it in♡
-B4, U
=== Come on, tell me♡
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P29
F1, top right
-B1, S
=== Wow♡
=== It's standing up again?
=== Can you still erect?

=== Look, do you want to do it?
=== Do you want to put it it?
F2, top left
-B1, S
=== Look-

=== I'll show you my secret P.L.A.C.E♡

-B2, S
=== Great...
=== Is that because you're with two girls?

-B3, S
=== You want to put your dick...♡
=== in here, right-?

=== I know, I know
=== I can see that from your about-to-burst dick♡
F3, bottom
-B1, S
=== Look-...
=== Recall that feeling... when you were in here

=== Squeeeeeze...♡
-B2, S
=== Uh oh?
=== Are you looking at the place below...?

=== There...
=== I haven't done it there
-B3, S
=== He he...
=== Do you want to be my first?

=== Oh-...
=== What should I do-...♡
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P30
F1, top
-B1, U
=== Hmmm...
=== Guess I have to try harder♡

=== H-e-r-e♪
=== It jiggles and it's hot♡

-B2~3, SFX
=== *FLARE* *FLARE*

-B4, U
=== Don't you want to grap this ass and poke it as hard as you want?
F2, bottom
-B1, S, top right
=== Come to me, quickly-
=== I'm waiting

=== For Mister's twitching D.I.C.K♡

-B2, U, top left
=== Dig it as much as you want

=== Let's play nasty P.U.S.S.Y thing with me♡

-B3, S
=== Hurry~
=== Make me feel good-
=== Let's have sex until it's all melted down♡

-B4, S
=== It's O.K if you let all your semen out♡
=== I'll love you G.O.O.D♡
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Page31
F2, top
-B1, S
=== Oooo~h...

=== Not... any... more...

-B2, U
=== A, Are you, still...?
=== Really...?

=== I, I'll let you off with this for today...
F3, bottom
-B1, U
=== ...Hey
=== I'll let you do

-B2, U
=== When we are together so...

=== So let's do it together tomorrow
=== ... O.K.?

=== ...O.K?
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Page 32
F1, top right
-Box1, S thinking
=== ...-However
=== We ended up spending the weekend without him
F3
-B1, S
=== Even the street looks lonely somehow
=== When it's just the two of us...

-B3, S
=== Don't you want to go out?

-Box1, S thinking
=== She doesn't say anything in the situation like this.
=== That's the difference between her and Urd...
F4
-Box1, S thinking
=== ...No

=== Urd must feel and think about so many things...
-Box2, S thinking
=== And big sister, too..?

=== Does everyone live everyday doing that...?
F5
-B1, U
=== Well, let's go

-B2, S
=== Huh?

-B3, U
=== Can't change anything if we're just standing here looking down somewhere
=== Are you going?
=== Or not?

-B4, S
=== Oh, yeah
=== I'll go!
=== Guess I have to appreciate it beforehand. thank you for your lunch(*)
=== (It is natural that Urd(Takako?) buys their lunch if they go out. And Skuld is mentioning it before they go out)

-B5, U
== ... You are becoming more and more brazen
F6, bottom
-Box1, S thinking
=== Little did I know at that time.

-Box2, S thinking
=== That people have such complicated thoughts

-Box3, S thinking
=== When I get to know that
=== It's already...
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THOSE ARE PARTS OF THE SCRIPT ABOVE?

Skip to the P 35
F1
- You smell of drink...

F3
- You sit here showing off your panty and now you're saying such a thing.

F4
- You know we shouldn't DO before we get back home

F6
- I know it's bad but I feel like giving you some reward♪(*)
*(*It's little different from original Japanese becasue I can't figure out how to experess 'ちゃう' in English)

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P36
F1
- Mmm... More...? ...O.K...

F4
- I, I think it's good to DO it to the end...

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P37
F3
-Right
=== So you were watching me with lustful thoughts

-Left
=== Phew-... Guess this is the benefit of light little girl
=== Get you on my laps, and swing... or something

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
P38
F4
=== How come are these so heavy?

F5
=== So good even though it's not fully grown yet

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
P39
F2
=== What's this amount... It's like you're in puberty

F3
=== Have anyone swallowed whole part of this huge thing...?

F5
=== Almost... done... a, almost... Mm...

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P40
F1
=== I... I'll do what small cups can't do...

F2
=== Slow, and tenderly...

F5
=== You can't take it anymore? It's twitching...
== Hey hey come out clogged milk...♪

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Skip to P42
F1
=== You haven't touch it carefully like this, right?

=== Now tell me, what are you fondling?

F2
=== Is this the unusualness of him?

=== He's the S.T.I.C.K.I.E.S.T one among the male♪

F3
=== You don't have to say such an unnecessary thing...

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P43
F1
=== How about fondling there? Looks like he's about to cum.
F3
=== Don't you want to drink some milk?

=== Yes, I want a dick milk... Do I really have to say these things?

F4
=== Are you still being shy? Sometimes you need to shake off your shyness.

F5
=== Mister's candy ball, is so cute-
=== Give me milk I'm nuzzling it-

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
P44
F3
=== Why don't we find it out together?

F4
=== Feels like you have something special ...Not bad

F5
=== Who do you want to DO with...? Which pussy do you want to see?

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P45
F1
=== Look Look how about this? Isn't it cute?

F2
=== You can fill here with your nasty semen

F3
=== The place where you can do every dirty thing you want... is here

F4
=== I'll M.A.K.E you cum so good

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P46
F3
=== Do, Don't stare at me so much-...

F5
-Right
=== Mmm-... Delicious milk...

-Left
=== Hey, tell me♪ Which want do you want to do with?

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P47
F1
=== Oh dear... You're so nasty

F2
=== Look, you want to put your dick... in here rigth, right?
=== Oh no~ I made it too hard and big what should I do♪

F3
-Right
=== Look at this- Isn't it cute?

-Left
=== Um- ...Are you watching my... another hole?

F4
=== Do you want to be my... first?

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P48
F1
=== Heh... Look at my ass, it's hot and jiggling

F2
-top right
=== Let's do a dirty thing with me♪

-bottom left
=== Hurry~ Let's do some wet thing♡

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P49
While I'm drawing this, I found myself loving that pictures-only part and I put it in
May be someone would wonder why the color is different, well consider it's because Skuld can imagine it more clearly without sound
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Sound off version wasn't a deal, as I expected.

MOVIE STAR IIb

Skuld story (P21-29)

P21

F1

sfx(keyboard): Tap

1-...why / ...do you keep / ...doing things like this
2-...Oneesama (Big-sister if you prefere a more "western" approach, i'll keep translating as Oneesama though, let you and/or the ditor choose)

F3

1- ...NO really / I can't blame you
2-... Because / I'm the same...

F4

sfx: cuddle cuddle
sfx: shiver
1- ...There's no way... / To stop this...
2- ...Is there... Oneesama...

P22

F1

1- ...How many times... has it been / ... I guess it doesn't matter
sfx: cuddle
sfx: stretch
2- ...nobody is coming right? / Because I'm not doing something bad...

F2

sfx: shiver
sfx: heart beat heart beat

F3

1- O.. Oneesama too
2- Is... doing it so...
3- Haaaaa....
4- Haaaa....
sfx: whatever sound your shirt makes when you pry it open

F4

sfx: the sound here is "kin" but I can't place it tbh
sfx: heart beat (x4)
1- It can't be... bad
2- Something... this good
3- Everyone... is doing it too... I want to do it as well...

P23

F1

1- ...Ah...Me too
2- ... I'm the same?
3- Doing the same thing... / As Oneesama

F2

1- Yes... that's right...
2- That's... what I'm thinking...

F3

1- ... I see now
2- That's why... Urd warned me...
3- ...Because we're the same

P 24

F1

1- Un...
2- Ah...
3- Wa (this could be either a "Wa!" of surprise or maybe she tried to say "watashi" ie "I" but was interupted)... Oneesama...

F2

1- Fu
2- ...
3- Un...
4- ... it feels good... / This... is...

F3

1- U...n
2- Ha
3- If I came... where you are / Could we... do it... together...

F4

1- ... Together... Just... like this...
2- Ha...
3- Hau...
4- Me to... / Just like... you...

25

F1

1- U...
sfx: squeak squeak
2- O...Nee...Sama
3- Un.../ Ha...
4- Fu...

F2

1- Ha
2- Just... / A bit... more
3- ha
4- ... I think...
sfx(back): shiver/tremble
sfx(pussy): shiver (no pussy and backs don't make the same sounds when shivering, don't ask)
5- Me too...
-6 Unn... / Where... Is it...
sfx(back): shiver/tremble

F3

1- Around... here / Maybe?
sfx: touch touch
2- I'm... / Not sure...

F4

1- Ah... Ah
sfx(around bust and head): shiver/tremble
2- Ha
3- Fu
5- Just... a bit more / I think... Somewhere
sfx: squash squash
6- It's the same... / ...I know...
7- I could... / Feel... Better...
sfx(legs): shiver/tremble (yeah again, but different sound, because legs)

F5

1- Ha
2- Ha
3- Ha
4- Ha
sfx: shiver
5- I really don't know... / ...where... is it
6- Somewhere... very good / I want to... touch it...

P26

F1

sfx(around body): tremble tremble
sfx(pussy): squish sqash
1- Just...
2- Ha
3- A bit... / A bit more...
4- Something like... this
6- ha
7- ha
8- Un / U....n
9- Ha
10- Ah... / AhAh...
11- It's... / Coming...
12- I can't... stop...

F2

1- Ah...
2- Ha...
sfx: squish
sfx: shiver
3- Un... / UnUn...

F3

sfx:shiver
1- Hya...!!! / Ah...
sfx: shiver
sfx: squish
2- Ah...
3- un....

F4

1- Just... like
2- One...Sa...Ma
3- Hya...!!!
4- Ha
sfx(body): tremble
sfx(pussy): squish sqash
5- I... want to / to it...
6- Ah...
7- Ha
8- Ah...

P27

F1

1-Just like... Nee...Sama / Better...
2- Haaaa.....
3- ...Un... / Haaaa....a
4- ha
5- Ha
6- Ha
7- Ha
sfx(body): tremble tremble
sfx(pussy): squash squash
sfx(bottom): heart beat heart beat
8- Haa....
9- It... / Feels... Goood...

F2

1- I wonder... / why...
sfx(pussy): touch touch
sfx (bottom): heart beat
2- It feels... / This... Good...

F3

1- Fuuu....
sfx: lick

P28

F1

sfx1: movement
Sfx2: surprise

F2

1- Wa...
2- Wa...
3- He came home

F3

sfx: blush
1- Hyaa...
2- Risky...
sfx: heart beat (x3)

F4

1- Something... everyone does...

F5

1- Not... / Only me...

to be continued

P29

Movie Star IIb
release date:
Manufacture: (I think that's it, but it's made hard to read because of quality here)
Written by:

Looks good to me. Pending any other comments, I'll accept the bounty after the weekend. Editing bounty will be posted shortly, but we are already running a script editing backlog here...

Update: editing bounty for the above script: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10925

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Aug 28 2014, 06:02

yo, if there's nothing wrong with the work can I get the bounty please? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)

yo, if there's nothing wrong with the work can I get the bounty please? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)

Sure - accepted.

Working on SILENT BELL infection bounty.

On Page 6 of Silent bell there is no translation for what is in the rectangular box. Unless I'm missing it...

and on page 8 (And usually... it leads to some erotic thing I GET WHAT YOU MEAN BUT WE NEED A BETTER EXPRESSION AND I CANNOT COME UP WITH ONE... ANY SUGGESTIONS, ANYONE?.)
Lol is there a consensus yet.

page 13 # 。。。でもすでに
...Well, I'm already stuck - DOESN'T MAKE SENSE... TOUCHED? TEASED? so many times and I'm just ready.
I went with (...Well, I'm already wet so I’m ready for it!) if that's not ok any idea? seems to match the art and flow though.

# わたしも
I should take my heart to swing my waste - EXPRESSION DOESN'T MAKE SENSE, REDO SENTENCE PLEASE harder.
My version (I have to put my heart into it now and try harder.)

Example of the text layout and font used.
[imgur.com] http://imgur.com/a/pyFwy
(If Imgur doesnt work just let me know)

This post has been edited by warw90: Sep 7 2014, 05:22

i asked th TL to comment on this few days ago....

Sent you a PM about editing MOVIE STAR IIb.

Sure, I'll bump it u/p

Hopefully we will get the proofreading comments on the above soon...

In the meantime, the new TL bounty is for the SB patients: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11105

Actually, we do have answers at here.

Also, ulti says:

The vertical box on image42 is, in context, something like "Go ahead and describe the situation." Strictly speaking there is no verb, but the implication is clear.

For image44, the whole bubble is something like "And that's how... the [Ecchi] things usually start." I gather that there's been some discussion in your thread about how "ecchi" should be translated. Frankly, the easiest option is just to leave it as ecchi. The majority of people will know just what you mean. If you hate that, then "perverted" is an old standby, or "sexy."

Hi
I've seen, MOVIE STAR 3d+ is open to edit. https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10627

The gallery i've found: https://e-hentai.org/g/125146/ee13ae7905/
And i have the proofed text.

I'll do it as the editor of your version of MOVIE STAR IIa https://e-hentai.org/g/656804/79204144c6/
with white bubbles, etc. ok?

Yep, that's ok. Please update this with progress report or confirmation, thanks!

hi,
i'm mostly done.
but i have 3 problems/questions:

1. P06/F5/B4 - what question do you prefer? (script)
2. P14/F6/Box1 - parenthesis and apostrophe; is it correct?
3. P29/F1/B2 - no text

this is the current version. I've marked the problems
[www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/lm6s15

If I understand your questions correctly

1. THIS TYPE CAN VERY EASILY GET HERNIA UNLESS THEY EXERCISE PROPERLY

2. Uh, where?

3. With the TL being inactive I'll ask someone else to comment here.