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Red's Former 51st Individual Bounty] Now Project for all [RPG COMPANY] (Ah! My Goddess) dojins-> [English], Reward: 50,000 Credits + 50 Hath

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Dec 24 2013, 18:16 Post #1
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,492 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 365 (Godslayer) +K	Please see later posts for the most current bounties. Or best, search bounties with strings EHCOVE RPG. View Full Bounty Translate the listed dojin into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.<br /><br />In addition to the carriers listed, you can also just post the translation in the forums or PM me with it.<br /><br />Dojin: https://e-hentai.org/g/147946/94f745e280/ (RAW)<br /><br />If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post in the relevant forum thread (which has more details on the bounty): <br /><br />Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.<br /><br />In addition to the carriers listed, you should post the translation in the forums. Related Image: (IMG:https://repo.e-hentai.org/bounty/36/36f6ea780de1c3b07510a7d2160e76e11c300a02-367316.jpg-thumb.jpg) Also: * Due to potential misunderstandings about how to split the bounty between translators and editors that resulted in my recent bounties costing me 50%-100% more than listed price, I am now splitting the bounty between translating and editing. The first bounty that goes up in the system is for translating only. Once I have the translation, I'll post the editing bounty; * broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted; * yes, please translate (or at least summarize) any existing author's rants, credits, titles of content, and so on, if present; * yes, please translate into English non-moan SFXes (examples: bounce, giggle, jinngle, creak); * if you do the translating, you should accept the bounty, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it; * if you do the editing: please note I would like to upload the gallery to e-h system myself; I am not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What I pay out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year. If you end up posting the translated doujin to the e-h galleries, I'll probably halve the bounty (if you did the translation and editing), or refuse to pay (if you did the editing only; note that the translator will still get fully paid by me); * crappy editing will not be accepted; * please include credits with the translator name (unless they requested here to be anonymous), yourself as an editor (if you want), and my nickname (and those of others who contributed to this bounty significantly) as the sponsor, as well as the name of any other major sponsors for the translation and editing (check bounties). Also, note this is an [EHCOVE] release, add a link to the name of our site (E-hentai) as the host, and invite readers to use our bounty system or join us as editors/translators. Sample credit pages: link;link, link and (now that's cool!) link; * those bounties are for the hard work (translation and editing). If you just found the gallery somewhere and just uploaded it here, you are not eligible for my bounties, but I will still give you a reward - 5+5 (apply for it here); * if you find a hq version of the J raw, whether it has or hasn't been translated, I'll reward you for it with a 2+2 reward (apply for it here (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) ); * if you are new to the bounties/this forum, check helpful links/guides here This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Sep 10 2014, 06:14

May 8 2014, 21:01 Post #2
asdkg Casual Poster Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 218 Joined: 18-June 13 Level 500 (Godslayer) +K	Let me start from Page 6 cuz there's nothing to translate in first 5 pages. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 6. 1st frame, top (Three boxes on the top) So many people I don't know in somewhere I don't know in the street I don't know ...And, that make me unhappy 2nd frame, middle-up left (Single box on the Middle left) Beautiful theorems and formulars make me happy because I 'KNOW' them 3rd frame, middle-down ldft (4 bubbles, two girls talking) It can't be But she is I heard that- he said she's his niece Real-ly? 4th frame, bottom (Box) ...Do you know? (Box) What I came here for? ******************************************************************************* Page 7. 1st frame, top right (Bubble, Man) Well Well Well What shoud we start from? (Bubble, Skuld thinking) He's just a middle-aged man seeing him now... I'm little worried (SFX in the Yellow bubble) It's "Kiyoto" and it's word for shaking one's head to say 'No' or 'I don't know'. 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, M) Oh dear dear I didn't noticed that because I was too drunken last night but... Looking well now and I see that you're so adorable (Bubble, M) I'm so flattered by showing you off as my niece to my fellows (Bubble, Skuld thinking) Looks w,weeeeird...but he doesn't looks... violent... 3rd frame, middle-up left (Bubble M) By the way, you know that, right? You came here because we made a promise If you say or do something that embarasses me 4th frame ,middle-down left (Bubble, M) I'll be really pleased. (Bubble, Skuld) Aaaaaagh(KiyaAk) Huh!? 5th frame, bottom (Bubble, Man) It...It's too loud! You must not speak out loud in here... (Box) He doesn't look like a bad man but (Bubble, S) Because you suddenly surprised me! (Bubble, S) I, is it alright if you take me to place like this!? (Bubble, M) Probably Anyway, why don't we start immoral lesson (The last box) ...I can't say he's gentle ***************************************************************************** Page 8. 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) ...This is the place where big sister(お姉さま) called me from... (Box) ...Yesterday... (Box between two bubbles) ...I don't want to go in here... 2nd frame, top left (Box) I made up my mind, Knocked on the door and Opened it up and, just as I expected(案の上)... (I'm pretty sure it is typo due to Kanji transfer program's error, because both 定 and 上 are read 'じょう(JiyoU)'. (yellow bubble) UWa(SFX for being surprised) (Bubble, S) AhaAh! Naked... Big sister, Called me from hotel, And... and... (Bubble, M) Oh... right I see I see He-y A girl has come... looks like a... princess-! I can't figure out what's happenig(Small fonts on the left) 3rd frame, middle left (Box) Yes... Big sister was there 4th frame, Middle (Box) Being nailed by the man() (Literal Translation : Being pressed by a man) (Bubble, Verdandi) So... you came here (Bubble, V) It's O.K. Don't be bothered with... this 5th frame, bottom (Box) She saw me came in but... she never... It was like she was enjoying it... (Bubble, V) Wait... for a while... I have somethig to tellyou after this. (Man saying) Hey Hey Hey What you mean 'afther this'? Don't be hard on me ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 9. 1st frame, top (Bubble, M) Are you telling me to stop though we are enjoying this much It's so cheeky (Bubble, M) Ah...♡ I'm... sorry I'm just... (Box) I could see it right away, that Big sister was compeletly wet() (or melted, following the original Japanese) (Bubble, M) We've been up there in heaven() so many times together but you treat me so coldly (up there in heaven : idiomatic expression for feeling orgasm. I think it's little overworried but she's actually Goddess so...) (Box) She used to be a shy but at that time she was talking like something has bursted out in her mind(). (It's 'talk like broken dike, literally translated, and it's idiomatic expression used when someone suddenly start to say furiously, especially after not saying anything for long time) (Bubble, V) Ah♡ That's... right Move..it Please Move...it♡ 2nd frame, middle right (Pink bubble, lowest on the frame) PiKuPik (SFX for twitch) 4th frame, middle (Bubble, V) Ca...Can you see...!? Look... It's It's like...Sleipnir♡ (3 Pink bubbles) GyuPu GyuPu (SFX for a... squeep? I saw that on South Park(Episode about Canadian womens) but I can't remember exact word. Anyway it's for the sound made when pennis goes into vagina and air inside is squeezed and pass through the very narrow space between pennis and vagina. Like fart.) (Box) She says the word that makes me couldn't believe my ears When she got wet... (Bubble, V) He's the only one... that keeps IT(or THAT?) up erected no matter how many times I do!! (Box) She sounds arousing even to me so To male, it's... (Bubble, V) Can't remember how many times he cumed anymore... It's carrying me away... W,what should...I do 5th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) You said It's like a horse()? (Sleifnir) Then I should do it like a horse! (Bubble, V) Yes... So squirt it...♡ To me...♡ (Box) She's so weak at being scolded() because she's passive ('弱い'(Yo-Wa-I, weak) in this page is a expression of someone's sensitive(sexually) place like 'Her ears are weak' or 'Her weak point is ear'. So it means that she is passive(or masochistic) and feels pleasure by being scolded. Driven skillfully to the corner, and has no way to escape ...then she easily falls into submission (Bubble, M) So you wanna my seed huh? What a horny horse (Bubble, V) Aha...♡ Seed... you mean... sperm Then, then this is a couplation...♡ (Box) May be she wasn't able to resist When he fondled that feeling of fallen with skillful touch... 6th frame, bottom left (Bubble, V) Give it to me again please... (Box) She's responding with nothing but her instinct. Just like a animal... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 10. First frame in top right (Box) I don't know when that feeling has emerged from... (Box) But I think that restriction of being 'Goddess' has triggered it. (Bubble, Skuld thinking) They're not the people I saw in clubroom (Bubble, Skuld thinking) Doesn't looks bad but... (The words(遠い目), not in the bubble, neither box) Looking elsewhere... 2nd frame, big one on the top left) (Bubble, V) They introduced to me... the people comes to clubroom It's not that long since we were getting along but()... (Bubble, V) Look, they're so experienced() and... treat me like a little girl and... (or Good at it) (Box) Big sister got wet lying with her legs opened ...innocently() (Or without shame) (Box) Her figure, innocently exposing her naked body in front of other people, was like a that of pet obeying its owner... (Yellow bubble around you know) Hi-Ku-N Hi-Ku-Hi (SFX for twitch) 3rd and 4th frame, middle (Box) ...By the way Big sister's genital looks special even to me It draws in softly and itss innocent and adorable... (Box) Slightly opened lips are so vulnerable() and shy (* Original word is 可憐(Ka-Re-N) and it means 'poor' or 'pitiful' but It is also used for describing beautiful woman who makes other people want to protect her) But, now it is disgraced() and loosed obscenely more than any others (literal translation is 'got dirty') (Box) It's drooling its come(), which got sticky and stringy... (Original word is '蜜', the Honey.) 4th Frame on the bottom right) (Bubble, V) We talked about many thing and it drifted to things about you()...! (Skuld, in original sentence) (Bubble, V) Look, you said that it's too stuffy staying inside all the time, right...? 5th Frame on the bottom left) (Bubble, V) So I talked about it and he said he would take care of you (Not in the bubble, neither box) ...What? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 11 First frame, on the top (Bubble, V) He'll teach you many things from tommorow... (Box) I don't want to hear I don't want to hear such a thing...! (Bubble, V) Don't forget your job and don't trouble other people. I talked with Mr.Hasegaw so... don't worry (Box) It... It's obvious that he's going to do THINGS that he couldn't do in clubromm... 2nd frame, from middle right and down to bottom left) (Bubble, V) It's allright... You know that I always care about you... Don't be shy... just go and see it... (Box) So this PARTY is an reward for...(them about taking care of Skuld) 3rd frame, middle left) (Bubble, V) Everyone, it's my younger sister please take good care of her() (I don't know how to translate 'よろしくお願い' in situation like this) (Box) ...Big sister looks pleased, and she introduced me to others so... I don't want to say it but... 4rd fream, bottom left (Box) SLEIFNIL!! (Box) It can't be... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 12 First frame, on the top right (Box) ...So, this is the story about why I came with this Sleifnil guy, to his office (Bubble, Skuld) Huh...? Is it? I'm not sure... (Box) He just don't stop chattering, and it's little amusing... He has the gift of gab 2nd frame, top middle (Bubble, S) He doesn't look that bad, seeing him after I calmed down Except telling me some boring jokes (Box) No wonder. It's my big sister... She never make mistake on important things... 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, Man) And, it's like I was in my car, in the middle of the street and... (Bubble, S) R,Really? (Box) This wide-open personality... it's like Urd That's the reason why I can talk with him without hurting my feeling... (Bubble, Man) I got it recorded 4th frame, bottom (Box) And somehow we start to watch his 'tape in the hole'() together before I knew it (I made it out from English expression 'ace in the hole' but I'm not really sure about it because he's not fighting aginst someone with this tape) (Bubble, S) Wwwwwwwwwwwhat!? Wa...Wa Wait...! Is this... wait, is that O.K.!? (Bubble, S) Nooooooh It can't be it can't be- (Box) Just like deceived by deft, sophiscated temptation... 5th frame, bottom right (Box) Meanwhile, he left to prepare the meeting so I watched it alone (Box) ...I see the girl, looks younger than me, is doing GREAT THING and my brain is broght down. (Bubble, S) Looks like they're having fun but... again? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page13 First frame, on the top right (Bubble, Man) Are you O.K? (Bubble, Man) Oh, you look even more adorable blushing your face (Bubble, Skuld thinking) It catches my eyes... I can't stop watching his... THERE... (Box) I'm totally carried along to this strange air... 2nd frame, on the top middle (Bubble, S) F...feel like I am the only one... that doing something... shameful... (Bubble, M) Oh, then you would be pleased if I get naked, don't you? I'm ready in anytime. (Bubble, S) Huh! 3rd frame, on the top-half of page (Box) The air just got hot Before I think out what to say...! (Bubble, Man) Let's see Let's see... You can show it to me just a little bit can't you? Well Well You're wearing cute underwear. 4th frame, on the bottom right (Bubble, Man) How about this? I hope you like this (Box) The voice suddenly reaches to my ears... It's...! 5th frame, on the bottom left (Bubble, S) Big sister!? (Box) Heavy breathing... Dirty conversation... It's the one of yesterday! (Box) Her vivid, wet voice sets the fire on this amorous air... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 14 First frame, on the top right (Bubble, M) You're a misterious girl You don't look like used to these things but You don't look like scared of it neither (Bubble, M) Tickle, Tickle (Pink Bubble) Tsu...(SFX for touching or rubbing something softly) (Box) Thick, and huge finger... It moves so skillfully that almost makes me feel odious.() (The Original Word is 'にくらしい/くらい', means 'almost(くらい) odious(にくらしい)'. May be 'Provokingly(or Enviously) skillful' could be the another option but I can't really decide it. Enviously doesn't looks like a good idea because Skuld would not want to have finger skill of his' 2nd frame, left to the 1st one (Bubble, M) Oh, Oh? You're making starange voice (Pink Bubble) Tap Tap (Pink Bubble) Push(or Press) (Box) He pokes my sensitive PLACE With very subtle intensity... 3rd frame, top left (Box) Little fire is lighted inside of me... and it starts to melt my body slowly (Bubble, S) Why do I... feel... (Box) Slightly warm breath has leaked from me and... It caught in my nose and I can hear myself making nasal voice()... (Original Japanese is 'はなにかかった声' and it means the nasal voice or coquettish voice. (Like the one that kids make when badgering their parents or girls tempting guys or during the... you know)) 4th frame(Or the 3rd, cuz they're not seperated by actual line) (Bubble, Man) So this is the one, right? The thing that you keep staring at. Alright Then, let me help you. (Box) He slowly takes down his pants in front of me... (Bubble, Skuld thinking) Why... (am I taking my panty off) by myself... Aah, dear... What am I... doing... (Pink bubble, right on the Skuld's panty) Slide (Box) It's just like yesterday... Just like when his doing it with big sister...! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 15 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) No...h... (Bubble, Man) Dear Dear... I guess you forgot it, even though it was just yesterday. (Bubble, Man) What would you do cute young lady? (Box) Like a sly conjurer... not shwoing what he got in his hand He lures me, skillfully, He's driving me... 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, S Thinking) I...It's a Pennis... ... definately... (Bubbles, S thinking) Aghhhhh I've never seen... the o, one like this... (Box) Sleifnil...! (Box) Dense and unusual smell... Feels like my nose is getting numb and... It absorbs my attention at once... 3rd frame, bottom right (Box) My head is spinning... faster... and faster... (Bubble, M) Look, it's not that shameful we both took our underwear off isn't it? (Box) ...I nodded my head 3rd frame, bottom left (Box) Without hurry(Or leisurely)... He teases me like taking a deep breath (2 Pink bubbles) Poke Poke (Box) He touchs and fondles me and slowly... like creeping little by little it slides into me... (2 pink bubbles) splash splash(Or sloppy) (Box) His thick finger is searching my secret inner place...! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 16 1st frame, top right (3 Pink bubbles) Splash X3 (Same as the ones on the page 15) (Bubble, Man) Good Good, It starts to make a wet sound You're pretty sensitive 2nd frame, top middle (Box) A chill creeps on my skin, makes me shiver... And it runs to my finger tip I can feel the heat gathering up in my shivering body... 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, S) T, this is... great... I'm surprised... I've never, seen... such a... thing (Box) My eyes must be moist... and filled with lust... more than ever... 4th frame, bottom right (Box) Big sister's drowsy voice flooded into my ears and... (Box) It triggered, me... (Box) He watches me as if he's testing me... And oddly, It is me that gets anxious... (Box) No his but my breath gets faster, and louder... (Box) Can not resist to this sticky air, anymore...! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 17 1st frame, top (Box) Just like... Just like (her, or yesterday)] I will be... 2nd frame., middle right (Bubble, M) Oh, drat Time for the meeting (Bubble, M) Sorry but guess we should have fun little later 3rd frame, the biggest one (Bubble, S) Ah... (Bubble, S) No... No... (Bubble...) I'm... Look... (Box) Then I found myself... shivering so hard that I couldn't stop it by myself... (Box) My body is desiring... Urge accelerates itself... Like a broken engine... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 18 1st frame, top right, with nothing but one bubble (Bubble, S) Er... look... 2nd frame, top (Box) We left his office at afternoon and bought lunchboxes. (Box) We walked through the downtown ...Going down this way it's... (Bubble, S) Where could we eat this? 3rd frame, bottom right (Bubble, S) .......oh Noooo.....h 4th frame, bottom left (Bubble, M) It will be the huge trouble if my co-workers saw us. Come on, come on (Box) We walk through the entrance, leaving the passengers raising their eyebrows behind. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 19 1st frame, top right (Bubble, V) ...That's right in the other word ...mating... something like that... It doesn't matter how you call it. 2nd frame, top left (Box) ...suddenly (Box) The things that big sister told me has came across my mind. (Bubble, V) You must be confused if I tell you that you should be shame first. But Skuld, I think it would be good for you because you may learn something through this... (Bubble, V) Sometimes you take things too seriously... 3rd frame(Or 4th), bottom right (Bubble, V) I think it's good to do something by your feeling (Bubble, V) It's very pleasing 4th frame, bottom left (Box) ...This is the place for nothing but DOING IT (Box) Now, I just take a step into this room and... (Pink bubble) Gulp (Swallowing one's saliva because of anxiety) (Box) It would be a step forward in my life... (Bubble, M) Well, then come here... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 20 1st frame, on the top (Box) Under the cheap lamp...! (2 Pink bubbles) Splash X2 (Box) So hurried that didn't spend any time taking off the clothes and... (Bubble, M) Oh, Ohh Tight It's tight... (Box) I'm, mating...!! (Bubble, M) I haven't met the one with this tightness for long time...! 2nd & 3rd frame, on the middle (Box) Mating...! His genital and my genital are joined together and... (Box) We are... mating... 4th frame, bottom (Bubble, M) Are you fine with this hard? How about this hard? Looks like you're working hard It's holding (pennis of) MINE pretty tight (Bubble, M) Ah, it's top-grade... Feels so good I'm about to love it... This hole() is worth swinging (my dick in it) (Original Word is 穴 and it means hole. As you may guess, It is used as a vulglar word of female genital.) (Box) It's definately nothing but mating... (Box) Just like animals Only to satisfy... one's sexual urge Two genitals are joined, and rub each other, and It feels better and better...! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 21 1st frame, top (Box) He change the position that I can't move my body and he cum (Box) Gathered sperm is flowing into me... (2 Pink bubbles) Splash* X2 (Bubble, M) Oooooh Can't hold it... (Box) It splashes so hard that I can hear it I can not do anything but receiving it flowing into me...! 2nd frame, middle (Bubble, M) It's not enough for me at all You don't have to do nothing so, so... (Box) Sloppy... hot, sitcky sperm... is flooding out (Bubble, M) It's so tiny hole but... Much easier to move in this way...! (Box) He doesn't get tired and start to move again... and twine around me... (2 Pink bubbles) ByuPu GuByu ByuPU (Samme as the one on page 9) 3rd frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) See, it reached to your deepest place...! It must be the first time(that something's reached that place) even for a girl like you I'll teach you what it is like (Bubble, S) No...h Did you, know that...? (Bubble, S) No... You are... such a naughty...man...! 3rd frame, bottom right (Box) Getting on his belly... He's totally taking the lead Huge pennis penetrates me and my waist twitches upward...! (Box) He cummed again...! Bursting sperm hits me and I'm getting fainted... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 22 1st frame, top right (Bubble, M) You look even cuter when you're undoing the buttons() Oh... please don't take off the shirts (or That motion undoing the buttons is good too) (Box) ...Even though he asks me some strange things (Bubble, S) Huh? Huuh...? I don't care but... You have... strange taste... (Box) It's hard... to refuse... After once I... did it with him... I can't treat him coldly 2nd frame, top left (Box) T, this (pose) is... No.. I can't think straight... (3 pink bubble) Drool* Squirt squirt (Bubble, Man) Looks like your waist went limp()... Right right... I'm ready to do it Well, what does this cute hip wants? Where does it wants ? (Box) I don't answer to his dirty questions... That's ... easier... (Bubble, S) I... I... don't... know (pink bubble) Grasp* 3rd frame, middle left (Box) He grasped my 'embrassment' and I couldn't say anything... (Bubble, M) He-ey Let's comebine() (Original word is '合體' and it's usually used in robot animation. Also saying sex jokingly' (Bubble, M) DIck feels so good doesn't it? (Box) ...! His dirty words arouses me 4th frame, bottom (3 pink bubbles) Sloppy Splash (Box) I move my hip closer to him hearing his dirty words... (Box) To feel better and better ...by joining with him... (Bubble, M) How about this, Feels good right? It's a dick can you feel it? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 23 1st frame, top (Box) ...little by little My body... turns... into jelly (Bubble, M) Oh, Oh What a naughty It's like sticking on my dick (Box) We have sex... again... and again... without thinking anything... (Bubble, M) Now I see that you're really fast learner... (Box) For nothing... but, to feel, good... only... 2nd frame, bottom right (Box) May be... it's O.K... to stop...supperess... what I feel... (2 pink box) Sloppy Sloppy (Box) I'm not a... kid... anymore I already... had sex and... and I felt... good... 3rd frame, bottom left (Box) little by little... Naughty thinkings fills my brain... and whirls around in there (Box) He pours out sperm into me, like tempting me (3 pink bubbles) Squirt X3 (Box) Sperm... knocks inside of my belly... makes me faint over and over... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 24 1st frame, top left (Bubble, S) I just laughed at that time but actually I was really surprised 2nd frame, top middle (Bubble, M) ...I must say that you're living very unusual life... (Bubbl, S) Big sister never explained anything to me and... (Bubble, S) My eyes nearly popped out when I just enter that room. (Bubble, M) Your big sister, huh? She's like... looks fammiliar with these things (Box) ...It's strange 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, S) Me? No, I'm not familiar with such a things (Bubble, pink one) Hm (or Yum) (Bubble, S) I've never been to... the place like this before (Box) (That I'm talking with him) Without being shy... In the place like this With this (loose) appearance like this(or figure?)... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) That innocence and flat breast You're just like my daughter (Bubble, K) Whaat? If you say a thing without delicacy() again I'm gonna explode you... (About saying her breast is flat) (Bubble, M) What, you gonna threaten me to give up man's ideal? You're asking the impossible 5th frame, middle left (Box) May be this is why big sister sent me here... There's so many different people, and diffent thinking... (Bubble, M) How about some after-meal exercise? 6th frame, bottom left (Box) My heart tottaly melted and relaxed after this... (Box) I felt pleasure while learning about many kinds of positions()... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 25 1st frame top right (Bubble, S) The best? 2nd frame top middle (Bubble, S) L, let me think Hm... Uh... Well T, the one that... from behind... may be? (Bubble, S) N...o You ask me strange thing so suddenly. 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, M) I can't ask such a question to my daughter Come on, I thought we are friends now. (Bubble, S) Freinds... Do you think so...? (Box) Strange... He's saying definately dirty things to me but... I don't really feel uncomfortable... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M, covered by next bubble) You know, so called sex frie (Bubble, S) Just expected! I knew that you gonna say that (Bubble, S) Noooooh you pervert, perveeeeeert Ooooh It's hardened again 5th frame, bottme left (Yellow bubble) Feels good may be... (2 Pink bubble) Spank* Spank (or slap... or fap?) (Box) He made me cum over and over untill it's erection ends... No wonder he calls me sex friend... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 26 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) Phew... (Box) Suddenly... I get sober and... I found that sense of shame has came back to me... 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, S) This bathroom is g, great, isn't it? (Bubble, M) Right, Right... Come to think of bathroom, yesterday we did GREAT thing with your big sister. (Bubble, S) Huh? ...After that? With all of you guys...? 3rd frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) The girl that we just gang-banged said to me innocently, 'Please let me wash you'... 4th (Bubble, M) So we washed each other untill she became pleased to cry (Bubble, M) It made me hot beyond my age Then she regained her strength and She is nice girl (Not in the bubble or box neither, on the Skuld) Was that so? Hmm... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 27 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) How... (Bubble, S) Howwwwcome...! 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, S) N-o-t anymore~~ I just washed myself-! (Bubble, M) I know, I know I don't have time, too I left my works undone... (Bubble, M) Well guess there's a bad thing about doing it with a young girl 3rd frame, middle left (Bubble, S) TTTTTT then-.... (Bubble, S) This is the LAST O.K.? I'm telling you seriously... It's just... to help you... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) Wait Wait Isn't that you who want to do it? Look, I can't see that well because it's behind your belly but You're moving your hand, aren't you? (Bubble, S) N, NN No I'm not I'm nooot Ha... Ha...Ha 5th frame, middle left (Box) Licking Sleifnil for the first time in my life... (Box) I move my mouth as hard as I can to make him cum faster but... 6th frame, bottom right (Box) He holds my head and start to move his waist... (Box) It would be faster if I couplate with him... I guess... (Pink bubble) Squirt Squirt ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 28 1st frame, top right (Box) ...Although We were still in heat after we returned to his work (Box) He got an erection while his working and caught me... 2nd frame, top middle (Box) Fumble each other's genital and rub together (Box) Twine around each other only to have pleasure 3rd frame, top left (Box) I like this animal-like thing... (Box) This dirty, reproductive urge makes me thirilled... 4th frame, bottom right (Box) He's immersed in my body... (Bubble, M) Yes Yes It's... Oh... Ooh...! (Box) And I'm getting immersed in his desire... 5th frame, bottom left (Box) He wants to cum into me... (Box) And I can't stop myself wanting his sperm...! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 29 3rd frame, bottom right (Box) ...He rubs his remained sperm on me... (Box) Looks like he likes that sticky thing plastered on my hair... 4th frame, middle left (Bubble, S) Uhhhh.... It smells so strongly... Anyone could know it... (Pink Bubble) Sticky 5th frame, bottom left (Box) After he cummed I... (Box) ...Reminding what I did that time ...still makes me feel dizzy. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 30 1st frame, top right (Box) I told him it's all over me and I can not wear this cloth anymore and He gave me some cloth to change... (Yellow bubble) Mimetic word for 'Baggy'(or 'Loose') 2nd frame, top left (Not in the box or bubble) President, It's sexual harrassment (Not in the~) No it's not. It's skinship. (Not in the~) I'll sue you (Not in the~) No anything but that... (Box) In the office room filled with suset... We fool around doing silly things... 3rd frame, middle left (Box) He graps my breast but It's not unpleasant... (Bubble, M) You need some improvement in this part. (Bubble, S) It's sexual harrassment (Box) I certainly become frank... and daring 4thr frame, bottom (Bubble, S) Look, mister Do you like my body...? ...O.K I'll be yours (Bubble, S) Teach me more and more... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 31 1st frame, top (Bubble, extra with short hair) -Hey, don't you think so? It's suspicious- Absolutely suspicious- (Bubble, extra with short hair) I heard it from president's office I swear (Bubble, extra with long hair) But... he said, she is his niece... didn't he? (Bubble, extra with short hair) Nonsense! Do you believe that? She doesn't resemble him at all I have seen his wife before and She doesn't resemble his wife neither 2nd frame, middle right (Bubble, ?) ...It can't... (Bubble, E.w.L.H, guessing by tone) But she's a little girl... (Bubble, E.w.S.H, guessing by tone) Right but, there's something about that man so-called president! He looks so excited today (Pink letter) Twitch (Bubble, E.w.L.H, guessing~) Um... 3rd frame, bottom (Yellow letter) Sneak Sneak (Bubble, E.w.L.H) B, but I think I can get(or understand) it... (that he goes out with little girl) He's like... you know, he amuses people around him... don't you think so? (Bubble, E.w.S.H) Whaaaaat Oh dear what kind of taste(in man) is that? (Bubble, E.w.L.H) No I'm just... 4th frame, bottom left (Bubble, E.w.S.H) Hm... right If he works on hard and... Consider all the possibility then, It's not impossible...May be? (Bubble, E.w.L.H) Haha... right, right... (Bubble, S thinking) You are pretty hot, Mister. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 32 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) Nooooooooo!! 2nd frame, top right (Bubble, S) H, How could you take me to this place... I can't believe it...! (Box) Among the work, The place we arranged to meet is... 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, M) Hey hey, What happend to that curiousity you just showed? Where is that daring girl? (Bubble, S) You're Mr.pervert... Nasty... Vulgar... immoral... (Box) Opposite to what I'm saying, I'm walking in...! I can't run away (Bubble, M) This place is detached and hard to be found. People rarely use here. 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) Phew... I was so busy that I forgot to relieve myself (Box) I won't be fooled He will stop at the narrow point...() (He won't really do it) He's testing me... 5th frame, bottom left (Bubble, S) !! No... W Wait... (Bubble, M) Sorry I think I drank too much last night (Bubble, S) No way... You're really... No...o... (Bubble, M) Never seen this before? Take a look if you're interested I don't mind. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 33 1st frame, top (Box) There's no reason I want to see it ...But this scene I'm watching for the first time in my life strongly impresses me ... (Box) In the dead ahead of me Sleifnil started to spout it without any hesitation (Handwritings) Startle (Box) Hard to breath... Thick air sticks to throat and make my heart beats fater... (Box) I can't move... He fingers it with wicked smile on his face 2nd frame, middle right (Box, center of page) It finished spouting with satisfaction and then 3rd frame, middle left (Box) Slowly... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, S) N...o... (Bubble, S) Mister... Not in ...here... (Bubble, M) Your voice is shaking You get excited that much What a bad girl (Handwritings) Startle 5th frame, bottom left (Bubble, S) Ah... Mister... No... No... (Bubble, M) Oh look at this Here's another toilet I got it I got it Let me see... I gotta relive myself in here too (2 pink bubble) Splash (Handwritings) tremble (Bubble, M) It doesn't even have cover Very good It's a tiny toilet but I think I can use it tight. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 34 1st frame, top right (Pass 4 bubbles cuz it's just a moan) (Box) Still in the standing position... He cummed for a surprisingly long time... (3 pink bubbles) Drool (Box) Just like that persistent sex... It runs down so slowly and draw some patterns on the floor... 2nd frame, top left (Box) Do... Do I look like I'm ...peeing?() (Or 'Looks like you're peeing') (Box) After saying what suddenly came to me ...I flinched (Pink bubble) Gulp 3rd frame, under the 2nd frame (Bubble, S) I won't forgive you no matter what you say Waaaaagh (Bubble, S) Won't say anything then (Box) Because I realize that it may be true...() (Realize that sex=pee to him or to human beings) 4th frame, middle (Bubble, M) It's not over yet (Bubble, M) Sit over there (Bubble, S) Uh... (Buuble, M) I didn't get refreshed yet 5th frame, bottom right (Box) Usualness and unusualness Morality and immorality (Box) The boundary between them is shaking and... vanishing... 6th frame, bottom left (Box) Or probably it's already melted and vanished long time ago (Box) And already flowed far away... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P.35 1st frame, top right (Box) I open my leg... As he told me (Box) As he called me toilet 2nd frame, top right (Box) His palm, holding up me, is little cold... (Box) The air in the stall gets greasy heated by our hot breathes... (Bubble, M) You really squeeze It's a good hole... You have really nice pussy♡ (Box) Two genitals are joining together They rub each other and Stick to each other ...I did hard to give as good as I got but (Box) Irresistable pleasure breaks me down Every time he pokes me... (Bubble, S, top left of frame) Ah... I... like your THAT, too... It feels... so good So good... (Bubble, M) Yes Yes You like my THAT (Bubble, S) At first ...I ...though your... THAT... is like... the one ... of horse... (Bubble, S) I'm gonna... couplate, with horse... I though so ...Haha... (Bubble, S) I thought I can't take it... ...But I did ...actually... Surprised... 3rd frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) You were worried becuase of your tiny hole How do you like this Mr.Horse? (Bubble, S) It makes me passed out When whole thing came in♡ Feel like I'm gonna ...fertilized ...for real... (Box) He could know it ...without asking me From my my naughtly responding genital... 4th frame, bottom left (Bubble, M) Don't worry. I'm the man of honor... I'll take my responsibility so take my seed and get a baby...♡ (Bubble, S) Ah♡ Ah... Aah... Aa...h (3 pink bubbles) Squirt* (Bubble, M) ...How about living together for a while? (Bubble, S) Ah... Huh...? Yyyyyou mean getting married...!? Ah I... haven't... (Bubble, M) Wait, Wait I'm just saying that I could live with you to teach this tiny pussy (Box) Suddenly... I was proposed during the couplation and I cummed a bit()... (cummed lightly? slightly? Gotta find it out of other translated comics) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 36 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) E...Ev Everyday...? Then...aaaaah It will be, wide-opened I can't, do it... that much... (Bubble, M) You know I'm an animal It will be easier if you become a animal like me, for sure. 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, M) Let me see what you learned. (Bubble, M) How do you gonna please me? (Pink bubble) Squirt (Bubble, S) No... It's all sudden... (Bubble, S) N...o... (Bubble, M) Do you really want to give up easily? 3rd frame (3 Bubbles all together, S) Er... Er... It's... I, I, III I'll be your toilet so... let it out in... here... everyday I want you to c, cu, cu, cum in me...♡ ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 37 1st frame, top right (Box) Silence for a while... We two, were provoked and get excited to the bone and we are doing it seriously... (2 pink bubbles) Sloppy (Box) He cummed great amount of sperm still hugging my hip... I cum, twitching my body over and over In the place I never been before... 2nd frame, top left (Box) I immadiately started my job as his toilet and then... (Box) Someone came in...! (Pink bubble) Squirt 3rd frame, bottom right (Box) He told me to make some plausible(or likely) sound to tirck that someone. (Box) He got an erection watching my red-flamed face... (Box) While someone was relieving himself out there... He was relieving himself on me... (Box) While moving my hand desperately... I got aroused and cummed agian and again... (2 pink bubbles) Sloppy 4th frame, bottom left (Box) Knowing that there are still people coming and going out there (Box) We surrendered to lust and twine around each other to let off that lust... (Box) Harrassed by his slight pricking movement, the excitement and the shame are mixed up and I almost lost myself (Box) He holds me on his lap, with my legs nastily opened. He lashes my hole and the moment it rise up its pleasure to the top... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 38 1st and 2nd frame, Top right (Box) It stiffened, in a moment (Box) Then spurts out the sperm have been caught in it at once...! 3rd frame, top left (Box) My body twitches and welcomes that sperm ... (Bubble, S) S... Sperm... Sperm... Just came... (Box) I'm so sorry that his dick is cumming... Flooding sperm is so lovely... (Bubble, S) Ho... Hot... It's hot... Aah... Good... It's so good More... (Bubble, S) Mo... more Give me... More... Cu...Cum... Cum I'm cumming Cu Cum... 4th frame, bottom (Bubble, S) Sperm... It's.. great (Bubble, S) Sperm is comming out Sperm... Cum I'm cumming (Bubble, M) Yes... Good... Just like that Squeeze it all out... (4 Pink bubbles) Squirt ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 39 1st frame, top right (Box) I can't stop loving this moment of blank Come to think of it I feel like I just Said something... 2nd and 3rd frame (Box) Oh (Handwriting) Bonk (Box) Ouch 4th frame, top left (Handwriting) Ooh... Somebody should clean this up... 5th frame, bottom right (Bubble, S) ...Guess we are in a big trouble (Bubbel, S) No one's here No one's here Alright! (Bubble, M) Oh, it's just in time ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 40 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) Wait Wait.. Wait Wait a minute...! 2nd frame, top left (BUbble, S) He(Taxi driver) is, He is watching us~ No... Do you really have to do this right now...? (Bubble, M) Don't you remember what you are? Tell me what are you. You said you will be mine didn't you? 3rd frame, bottom right (3 Bubble together, S) ...I'm... your toilet for ...cou...couplation ...and letting ...out...sperm (Big handwriting) Blush 4th frame, bottom middle (Bubble, M) Very good! Run faster driver I can't wait to love this young lady (Bubble, S) Noooo (Bubble, handwriting within, Driver) Gee... Please... Mister 5th frame, bottom left (Bubble, S) Hm... So you're living here? (Bubble, M) I gotta teach you a lot of things since I took a charge to take care of you. And this is a proper place for that. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 41 1st frame, top right (Yellow hand written letter) Pin-Pon (Door bell ringing) (Bubble, Girl came out from the room()) Yes♪ (Is she one of original characters?) 2nd frame, top right (Bubble, Girl) Welcome home papa()♪ (Bubble, M) -Yeah, I'm home() 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, Girl) ...Oh my We have a guest...? (Bubble, Girl) Is she your daug... No, you can't be... (Bubble, Girl) Uh... You are... definately... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, S) Huh...? Oh... (Bubble, S) U, Um... Uh... (Box) ...Like this 5th frame, bottom left (Bubble, Girl) ...Oh dear! You bad man Did you mess around with such a young girl? (Bubble, Girl) You(Skuld) still have puzzled face Well it's pretty complicated but... Let's get along with each other well.() (Or just let's be friends) (Bubble, GIrl) Come in, please... (Box) Another new door... (Box) Just appeared in front of me... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I'm done but I'm afraid it's not perfect. Please reply on it or PM me if there's some miss. This post has been edited by asdkg: May 11 2014, 02:29

May 13 2014, 17:05 Post #3
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,492 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 365 (Godslayer) +K	copyediting in progress, any problematic sentences I couldn't proofread are in red QUOTE(asdkg @ May 8 2014, 14:01) Let me start from Page 6 cuz there's nothing to translate in first 5 pages. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 6. 1st frame, top (Three boxes on the top) So many people I don't know somewhere I don't know where on the street I don't know ...And, that make me unhappy 2nd frame, middle-up left (Single box on the Middle left) Beautiful theorems and formulas make me happy because I 'KNOW' them 3rd frame, middle-down ldft (4 bubbles, two girls talking) It can't be But she is I heard that- he said she's his niece Real-ly? 4th frame, bottom (Box) ...Do you know? (Box) What I came here for? ******************************************************************************* Page 7. 1st frame, top right (Bubble, Man) Well Well Well What should we start from? (Bubble, Skuld thinking) He's just a middle-aged man. Seeing him now... I'm little worried (SFX in the Yellow bubble) It's "Kiyoto" and it's word for shaking one's head to say 'No' or 'I don't know'. 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, M) Oh dear dear I didn't notice that because I was too drunken last night but... Looking now and I see that you're so adorable (Bubble, M) I'm so flattered by showing you off as my niece to my fellows (Bubble, Skuld thinking) Looks w,weeeeird...but he doesn't looks... violent... 3rd frame, middle-up left (Bubble M) By the way, you know that, right? You came here because we made a promise If you say or do something that embarrasses me 4th frame ,middle-down left (Bubble, M) I'll be really pleased. (Bubble, Skuld) Aaaaaagh(KiyaAk) Huh!? 5th frame, bottom (Bubble, Man) It...It's too loud! You must not speak out loud in here... (Box) He doesn't look like a bad man but (Bubble, S) Because you suddenly surprised me! (Bubble, S) I, is it alright if you take me to place like this!? (Bubble, M) Probably Anyway, why don't we start the immoral lesson (The last box) ...I can't say he's gentle ***************************************************************************** Page 8. 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) ...This is the place where big sister called me from... (Box) ...Yesterday... (Box between two bubbles) ...I don't want to go in here... 2nd frame, top left (Box) I made up my mind, Knocked on the door and Opened it up and, just as I expected... (yellow bubble) UWa(SFX for being surprised) (Bubble, S) AhaAh! Naked... Big sister, Called me from hotel, And... and... (Bubble, M) Oh... right I see I see He-y! A girl has come... looks like a... princess-! I can't figure out what's happening (Small fonts on the left) 3rd frame, middle left (Box) Yes... Big sister was there 4th frame, Middle (Box) Being groped by a man (Bubble, Verdandi) So... you came here (Bubble, V) It's O.K. Don't be bothered with... this 5th frame, bottom (Box) She saw me came in but... she never... It was like she was enjoying it... (Bubble, V) Wait... for a while... I have something to tell you after this. (Man saying) Hey Hey Hey What you mean 'after this'? Don't be hard on me ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 9. 1st frame, top (Bubble, M) Are you telling me to stop though we are enjoying this much It's so cheeky (Bubble, M) Ah...♡ I'm... sorry I'm just... (Box) I could see it right away, that big sister was completely wet (Bubble, M) We've been up there in heaven so many times together but you treat me so coldly (Box) She used to be shy but at that time she was talking desperately (Bubble, V) Ah♡ That's... right Move..it Please Move...it♡ 2nd frame, middle right (Pink bubble, lowest on the frame) PiKuPik (SFX for twitch) 4th frame, middle (Bubble, V) Ca...Can you see...!? Look... It's It's like...Sleipnir♡ (3 Pink bubbles) GyuPu GyuPu (SFX for a... squeep? I saw that on South Park(Episode about Canadian women) but I can't remember exact word. Anyway it's for the sound made when penis goes into vagina and air inside is squeezed and pass through the very narrow space between penis and vagina. Like fart.) (Box) She says words that I cannot believe I hear When she got wet... (Bubble, V) He's the only one... that keeps it up no matter how many times I do!! (Box) She sounds sexy even to me so To the men, it's... (Bubble, V) Can't remember how many times he came anymore... It's carrying me away... W,what should...I do 5th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) You said It's like Sleipnir's? Then I should do it like a horse! (Bubble, V) Yes... So squirt it...♡ To me...♡ (Box) She's so weak to being scolded because she's so submissive Driven skillfully to a corner, and with no way to escape ...then she easily falls into a role of a sub (Bubble, M) So you wanna my seed huh? What a horny mare (Bubble, V) Aha...♡ Seed... you mean... sperm Then, then this is a copulation...♡ (Box) Maybe she wasn't able to resist His manipulative skill 6th frame, bottom left (Bubble, V) Give it to me again please... (Box) She's responding with nothing but her instinct. Just like a animal... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 10. First frame in top right (Box) I don't know when that feeling has emerged... (Box) But I think that restriction of being a 'Goddess' has triggered it. (Bubble, Skuld thinking) They're not the people I saw in clubroom (Bubble, Skuld thinking) Doesn't looks bad but... (The words(遠い目), not in the bubble, neither box) Looking elsewhere... 2nd frame, big one on the top left) (Bubble, V) They introduced to me... the people in the clubroom It's not that long since we started getting along but... (Bubble, V) Look, they're so experienced and... treat me like a little girl and... (Box) Big sister got wet lying with her legs opened shamelessly... (Box) Her figure, innocently exposing her naked body in front of other people, was like a that of a pet obeying its owner... (Yellow bubble around you know) Hi-Ku-N Hi-Ku-Hi (SFX for twitch) 3rd and 4th frame, middle (Box) ...By the way Big sister's genitals look special even to me They are soft and innocent and adorable... (Box) Slightly opened lips are so vulnerable and shy But, now they are is disgraced, loose and obscene more than any others (Box) It's drooling its juice, sticky and stringy... 4th Frame on the bottom right) (Bubble, V) We talked about many thing and it drifted to things about you()...! (Skuld, in original sentence) (Bubble, V) Look, you said that it's too stuffy staying inside all the time, right...? 5th Frame on the bottom left) (Bubble, V) So I talked about it and he said he would take care of you (Not in the bubble, neither box) ...What? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 11 First frame, on the top (Bubble, V) He'll teach you many things from tomorrow... (Box) I don't want to hear I don't want to hear such a thing...! (Bubble, V) Don't forget your job and don't trouble other people. I talked with Mr.Hasegawa so... don't worry (Box) It... It's obvious that he's going to do THINGS that he couldn't do in clubroom... 2nd frame, from middle right and down to bottom left) (Bubble, V) It's alright... You know that I've always cared about you... Don't be shy... just go and see it... (Box) So this PARTY is an reward for...them for taking care of Skuld 3rd frame, middle left) (Bubble, V) Everyone, it's my younger sister please take good care of her (Box) ...Big sister looks pleased, and she introduced me to others so... I don't want to say it but... 4rd fream, bottom left (Box) SLEIPNIR!! (Box) It can't be... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 12 First frame, on the top right (Box) ...So, this is the story about why I came with this Sleipnir guy, to his office (Bubble, Skuld) Huh...? Is it? I'm not sure... (Box) He just doesn't stop chattering, and it's little amusing... He is good with words 2nd frame, top middle (Bubble, S) He doesn't look that bad, seeing him after I calmed down Except telling me some boring jokes (Box) No wonder. It's my big sister... She never makes mistake in important things... 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, Man) And, it's like I was in my car, in the middle of the street and... (Bubble, S) R,Really? (Box) This wide-open personality... it's like Urd That's the reason why I can talk with him without hurting my feeling... (Bubble, Man) I got it recorded 4th frame, bottom (Box) And somehow we start to watch his special tape together before I knew it (Bubble, S) Wwwwwwwwwwwhat!? Wa...Wa Wait...! Is this... wait, is that O.K.!? (Bubble, S) Nooooooh It can't be it can't be- (Box) ...deceived by temptation... 5th frame, bottom right (Box) Meanwhile, he left to prepare for a meeting so I watched it alone (Box) ...I see the girl, looks younger than me, is doing THINGS and my brain shuts down. (Bubble, S) Looks like they're having fun but... again? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page13 First frame, on the top right (Bubble, Man) Are you O.K? (Bubble, Man) Oh, you look even more adorable blushing your face (Bubble, Skuld thinking) It catches my eyes... I can't stop watching his... THERE... (Box) I'm totally carried away by this weird feeling 2nd frame, on the top middle (Bubble, S) F...feel like I am the only one... doing something... shameful... (Bubble, M) Oh, then you would be pleased if I get naked, don't you? I'm ready in anytime. (Bubble, S) Huh! 3rd frame, on the top-half of page (Box) The air just got hot Before I figure out what to say...! (Bubble, Man) Let's see Let's see... You can show it to me just a little bit can't you? Well Well You're wearing cute underwear. 4th frame, on the bottom right (Bubble, Man) How about this? I hope you like this (Box) The voice suddenly reaches to my ears... It's...! 5th frame, on the bottom left (Bubble, S) Big sister!? (Box) Heavy breathing... Dirty conversation... It's the one from yesterday! (Box) Her vivid, wet voice sets this amorous air on fire... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 14 First frame, on the top right (Bubble, M) You're a mysterious girl You don't look like you are used to this but You don't look afraid of it neither (Bubble, M) Tickle, Tickle (Pink Bubble) Tsu...(SFX for touching or rubbing something softly) (Box) Thick, and huge finger... It moves so skillfully that makes me confused 2nd frame, left to the 1st one (Bubble, M) Oh, Oh? You're making strange voice (Pink Bubble) Tap Tap (Pink Bubble) Push(or Press) (Box) He pokes my sensitive PLACE With subtle intensity... 3rd frame, top left (Box) Little fire lights inside me... it starts to melt my body slowly (Bubble, S) Why do I... feel... (Box) Slightly warm breath has leaked from me and... It is caught in my nose and I can hear myself making coquettish noises... 4th frame(Or the 3rd, cuz they're not seperated by actual line) (Bubble, Man) So this is the one, right? The thing that you keep staring at. Alright Then, let me help you. (Box) He slowly takes down his pants in front of me... (Bubble, Skuld thinking) Why... (am I taking my panties off) by myself... Aah, dear... What am I... doing... (Pink bubble, right on the Skuld's panty) Slide (Box) It's just like yesterday... Just like when he was doing it with big sister...! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 15 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) No...h... (Bubble, Man) Dear Dear... I guess you forgot it, even though it was just yesterday. (Bubble, Man) What would you do, cute young lady? (Box) Like a sly conjurer... not showing what he gots in his hand He lures me, skillfully, He's driving me... 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, S Thinking) I...It's a penis... ... definitely... (Bubbles, S thinking) Aghhhhh I've never seen... o, one like this... (Box) Sleipnir...! (Box) Dense and unusual smell... Feels like my nose is getting numb and... It absorbs my attention at once... 3rd frame, bottom right (Box) My head is spinning... faster... and faster... (Bubble, M) Look, it's not that shameful we both took our underwear off isn't it? (Box) ...I nodded 3rd frame, bottom left (Box) leisurely... He teases me (2 Pink bubbles) Poke Poke (Box) He touches and fondles me and slowly... like something crawling little by little it slides into me... (2 pink bubbles) splash splash(Or sloppy) (Box) His thick finger is searching for the secrets of my inner place...! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 16 1st frame, top right (3 Pink bubbles) Splash X3 (Same as the ones on the page 15) (Bubble, Man) Good Good, It starts to make a wet sound You're pretty sensitive 2nd frame, top middle (Box) A chill breaks out on my skin, makes me shiver... And it runs to my finger tip I can feel the heat gathering up in my shivering body... 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, S) T, this is... great... I'm surprised... I've never, seen... such a... thing (Box) My eyes must be moist... and filled with lust... more than ever... 4th frame, bottom right (Box) Big sister's drowsy voice flooded into my ears and... (Box) It triggered, my... (Box) He watches me as if he's testing me... And oddly, It is me that gets anxious... (Box) No his but my breath gets faster, and louder... (Box) Can not resist this atmosphere, anymore...! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 17 1st frame, top (Box) Just like... Just like (her, or yesterday)] I will be... 2nd frame., middle right (Bubble, M) Oh, drat Time for the meeting (Bubble, M) Sorry but we should have fun little later 3rd frame, the biggest one (Bubble, S) Ah... (Bubble, S) No... No... (Bubble...) I'm... Look... (Box) Then I found myself... shivering so hard that I couldn't stop it by myself... (Box) My body desires... Urges grow stronger... Like a broken engine... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 18 1st frame, top right, with nothing but one bubble (Bubble, S) Er... look... 2nd frame, top (Box) We left his office at afternoon and bought lunchboxes. (Box) We walked through the downtown ...Going down this way it's... (Bubble, S) Where could we eat this? 3rd frame, bottom right (Bubble, S) .......oh Noooo.....h 4th frame, bottom left (Bubble, M) It will be the huge trouble if my co-workers saw us. Come on, come on (Box) We walk through the entrance, leaving behind the passengers raising their eyebrows . ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 19 1st frame, top right (Bubble, V) ...That's right in the other word ...mating... something like that... It doesn't matter how you call it. 2nd frame, top left (Box) ...suddenly (Box) The things that big sister told me has came across my mind. (Bubble, V) You must be confused if I tell you that you should be ashamed at first. But Skuld, I think it would be good for you because you may learn something through this... (Bubble, V) Sometimes you take things too seriously... 3rd frame(Or 4th), bottom right (Bubble, V) I think it's good to do something following your feelings (Bubble, V) It's very pleasing 4th frame, bottom left (Box) ...This is the place for nothing but DOING IT (Box) Now, I just take a step into this room and... (Pink bubble) Gulp (Swallowing one's saliva because of anxiety) (Box) It would be a step forward in my life... (Bubble, M) Well, then come here... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 20 1st frame, on the top (Box) Under the cheap lamp...! (2 Pink bubbles) Splash X2 (Box) So in hurry that I didn't spend any time taking off the clothes and... (Bubble, M) Oh, Ohh Tight It's tight... (Box) I'm, mating...!! (Bubble, M) I haven't met one so tight in a long time...! 2nd & 3rd frame, on the middle (Box) Mating...! His genitals and my genitals are joined together and... (Box) We are... mating... 4th frame, bottom (Bubble, M) Are you fine with us doing it hard? How about this? Looks like you're doing well You are holding my penis pretty tightly (Bubble, M) Ah, it's top-grade... Feels so good I'm about to lose it... This hole is worth plunging (Box) It's definitely nothing but mating... (Box) Just like animals Only to satisfy... one's sexual urge Two genitals are joined, and rub each other, and It feels better and better...! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 21 1st frame, top (Box) He changes the position so I can't move my body and he cums (Box) All sperm is flowing into me... (2 Pink bubbles) Splash X2 (Bubble, M) Oooooh Can't hold it... (Box) It splashes so hard that I can hear it I can not do anything but receive the flow...! 2nd frame, middle (Bubble, M) It's not enough for me at all You don't have to do anything so, so... (Box) Sloppy... hot, sticky sperm... is flooding out (Bubble, M) It's such a tiny hole but... Much easier to move this way...! (Box) He doesn't get tired and starts to move again... around me... (2 Pink bubbles) ByuPu GuByu ByuPU (Same as the one on page 9) 3rd frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) See, it reached your deepest place...! It must be the first time even for a girl like you I'll teach you what it is like (Bubble, S) No...h Did you, know that...? (Bubble, S) No... You are... such a naughty...man...! 3rd frame, bottom right (Box) Getting on his belly... He's totally taking the lead Huge penis penetrates me and my waist twitches upward...! (Box) He came again...! Bursting sperm hits me and I'm getting light headed... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 22 1st frame, top right (Bubble, M) You look even cuter when you're undoing the buttons() Oh... please don't take off the shirt (Box) ...Even though he asks me some strange things (Bubble, S) Huh? Huuh...? I don't care but... You have... strange taste... (Box) It's hard... to refuse... After once I... did it with him... I can't treat him coldly 2nd frame, top left (Box) T, this (pose) is... No.. I can't think straight... (3 pink bubble) Drool Squirt squirt (Bubble, Man) Looks like your body went limp... Right right... I'm ready to do it Well, what does this cute hip wants? Where does it want ? (Box) I don't answer his dirty questions... That's ... easier... (Bubble, S) I... I... don't... know (pink bubble) Grasp 3rd frame, middle left (Box) He was using my embarrassment against me and I couldn't say anything... (Bubble, M) He-ey Let's combine! (Bubble, M) Dick feels so good doesn't it? (Box) ...! His dirty words arouse me 4th frame, bottom (3 pink bubbles) Sloppy Splash (Box) I move my hip closer to him hearing his dirty words... (Box) To feel better and better ...by joining with him... (Bubble, M) How about this, Feels good right? It's a dick can you feel it? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 23 1st frame, top (Box) ...little by little My body... turns... into jelly (Bubble, M) Oh, Oh How naughty sticking on my dick (Box) We have sex... again... and again... without thinking anything... (Bubble, M) Now I see that you really are a fast learner... (Box) For nothing... but, to feel, good... only... 2nd frame, bottom right (Box) May be... it's O.K... to stop...suppress... what I feel... (2 pink box) Sloppy Sloppy (Box) I'm not a... kid... anymore I already... had sex and... and I felt... good... 3rd frame, bottom left (Box) little by little... Naughty thoughts fills my brain... and whirl around in there (Box) He pours out sperm into me, like tempting me (3 pink bubbles) Squirt X3 (Box) Sperm... flows inside my belly... makes me faint over and over... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 24 1st frame, top left (Bubble, S) I just laughed at that time but actually I was really surprised 2nd frame, top middle (Bubble, M) ...I must say that you're living a very unusual life... (Bubbl, S) Big sister never explained anything to me and... (Bubble, S) My eyes nearly popped out when I just enter that room. (Bubble, M) Your big sister, huh? She's like... experienced with these things (Box) ...It's strange 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, S) Me? No, I'm not familiar with such a things (Bubble) Hm (Bubble, S) I've never been to... the place like this before (Box) (That I'm talking with him) Without being shy... In the place like this With this loose appearance ... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) That innocence and flat breasts You're just like my daughter (Bubble, K) Whaat? If you say indelicate thing again I'm gonna explode you... (Bubble, M) What, you gonna threaten me to give up man's ideal? You're asking the impossible 5th frame, middle left (Box) May be this is why big sister sent me here... There're so many different people, with different views... (Bubble, M) How about some after-meal exercise? 6th frame, bottom left (Box) My heart totally melted and relaxed after this... (Box) I felt pleasure while learning about many kinds of positions... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 25 1st frame top right (Bubble, S) The best? 2nd frame top middle (Bubble, S) L, let me think Hm... Uh... Well T, the one that... from behind... may be? (Bubble, S) N...o You ask me strange things so suddenly. 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, M) I can't ask such a question to my daughter Come on, I thought we are friends now. (Bubble, S) Friends... Do you think so...? (Box) Strange... He's saying definitely dirty things to me but... I don't really feel uncomfortable... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M, covered by next bubble) You know, so called sex friends (Bubble, S) Just as expected! I knew you were gonna say that (Bubble, S) Noooooh you pervert, perveeeeeert Ooooh It's hard again 5th frame, bottme left (Yellow bubble) Feels good maybe... (2 Pink bubble) Spank Spank (or slap... or fap?) (Box) He made me cum over and over until his erection ended... No wonder he calls me sex friend... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 26 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) Phew... (Box) Suddenly... I get sober and... I found that sense of shame has came back to me... 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, S) This bathroom is g, great, isn't it? (Bubble, M) Right, Right... Come to think of bathroom, yesterday we did GREAT thing with your big sister. (Bubble, S) Huh? ...After that? With all of you guys...? 3rd frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) The girl that we just gang-banged said to me innocently, 'Please let me wash you'... 4th (Bubble, M) So we washed each other and I made her so happy she cried (Bubble, M) It made me horny beyond my age Then she regained her strength and She is nice girl (Not in the bubble or box neither, on the Skuld) Was that so? Hmm... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 27 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) How... (Bubble, S) Howwwwcome...! 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, S) N-o-t anymore~~ I just washed myself-! (Bubble, M) I know, I know I don't have time, too I left my work undone... (Bubble, M) Well I guess it's a bad thing doing it with a young girl 3rd frame, middle left (Bubble, S) TTTTTT then-.... (Bubble, S) This is the LAST O.K.? I'm telling you seriously... It's just... to help you... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) Wait Wait Isn't that you who want to do it? Look, I can't see that well because it's behind your belly but You're moving your hand, aren't you? (Bubble, S) N, NN No I'm not I'm nooot Ha... Ha...Ha 5th frame, middle left (Box) Licking Sleipnir for the first time in my life... (Box) I move my mouth as hard as I can to make him cum faster but... 6th frame, bottom right (Box) He holds my head and start to move his waist... (Box) It would be faster if I could mate with him... I guess... (Pink bubble) Squirt Squirt ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 28 1st frame, top right (Box) ...Although We were still in heat after we returned to his work (Box) He got an erection while working and caught me... 2nd frame, top middle (Box) Touching our genitals and rubbing them together (Box) Playing around with each other only to have pleasure 3rd frame, top left (Box) I like this animal-like thing... (Box) This dirty, reproductive urge makes me thrilled... 4th frame, bottom right (Box) He's immersed in my body... (Bubble, M) Yes Yes It's... Oh... Ooh...! (Box) And I'm getting immersed in his desire... 5th frame, bottom left (Box) He wants to cum in me... (Box) And I can't stop myself from wanting his sperm...! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 29 3rd frame, bottom right (Box) ...He rubs his remaining sperm on me... (Box) Looks like he likes that sticky thing plastered on my hair... 4th frame, middle left (Bubble, S) Uhhhh.... It smells so strongly... Anyone could know it... (Pink Bubble) Sticky 5th frame, bottom left (Box) After he came I... (Box) ...Remembering what I did that time ...still makes me feel dizzy. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 30 1st frame, top right (Box) I told him it's all over me and I can not wear those clothes anymore and He gave me others to change into... (Yellow bubble) Mimetic word for 'Baggy'(or 'Loose') 2nd frame, top left (Not in the box or bubble) President, It's sexual harassment (Not in the~) No it's not. It's skinship. (Not in the~) I'll sue you (Not in the~) No anything but that... (Box) In the office room filled with sunset... We fool around doing silly things... 3rd frame, middle left (Box) He grasps my breast but It's not unpleasant... (Bubble, M) You need some improvement in this part. (Bubble, S) It's sexual harassment (Box) I certainly become frank... and daring 4thr frame, bottom (Bubble, S) Look, mister Do you like my body...? ...O.K I'll be yours (Bubble, S) Teach me more and more... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 31 1st frame, top (Bubble, extra with short hair) -Hey, don't you think so? It's suspicious- Absolutely suspicious- (Bubble, extra with short hair) I heard it from president's office I swear (Bubble, extra with long hair) But... he said, she is his niece... didn't he? (Bubble, extra with short hair) Nonsense! Do you believe that? She doesn't resemble him at all I have seen his wife before and She doesn't resemble his wife neither 2nd frame, middle right (Bubble, ?) ...It can't... (Bubble, E.w.L.H, guessing by tone) But she's a little girl... (Bubble, E.w.S.H, guessing by tone) Right but, there's something about that man, the so-called president! He looked so excited today (Pink letter) Twitch (Bubble, E.w.L.H, guessing~) Um... 3rd frame, bottom (Yellow letter) Sneak Sneak (Bubble, E.w.L.H) B, but I think I can understand it... He's like... you know, he amuses people around him... don't you think so? (Bubble, E.w.S.H) Whaaaaat Oh dear what kind of taste in men is that? (Bubble, E.w.L.H) No I'm just... 4th frame, bottom left (Bubble, E.w.S.H) Hm... right If he works hard and... Considering all possibilities then, It's not impossible...perhaps? (Bubble, E.w.L.H) Haha... right, right... (Bubble, S thinking) You are pretty hot, Mister. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 32 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) Nooooooooo!! 2nd frame, top right (Bubble, S) H, How could you take me to this place... I can't believe it...! (Box) During work The place we arranged to meet is... 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, M) Hey hey, What happened to that curiosity you just showed? Where is that daring girl? (Bubble, S) You're Mr.pervert... Nasty... Vulgar... immoral... (Box) Opposite to what I'm saying, I'm walking in...! I can't run away (Bubble, M) This place is enclosed and hard to found. People rarely come here. 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) Phew... I was so busy that I forgot to relieve myself (Box) I won't be fooled He won't really do it He's testing me... 5th frame, bottom left (Bubble, S) !! No... W Wait... (Bubble, M) Sorry I think I drank too much last night (Bubble, S) No way... You're really... No...o... (Bubble, M) Never seen this before? Take a look if you're interested I don't mind. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 33 1st frame, top (Box) There's no reason I want to see it ...But this scene I'm watching for the first time in my life strongly impresses me ... (Box) In the dead ahead of me Sleipnir started without any hesitation (Handwritings) Startle (Box) Hard to breath... Thick air sticks to throat and makes my heart beats faster... (Box) I can't move... He fingers it with wicked smile on his face 2nd frame, middle right (Box, center of page) It finished with satisfaction and then 3rd frame, middle left (Box) Slowly... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, S) N...o... (Bubble, S) Mister... Not in ...here... (Bubble, M) Your voice is shaking You get excited that much What a bad girl (Handwritings) Startle 5th frame, bottom left (Bubble, S) Ah... Mister... No... No... (Bubble, M) Oh look at this Here's another toilet I got it I got it Let me see... I gotta relive myself in here too (2 pink bubble) Splash (Handwritings) tremble (Bubble, M) It doesn't even have cover Very good It's a tiny toilet but I think I can use it. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 34 1st frame, top right (Pass 4 bubbles cuz it's just a moan) (Box) Still in the standing position... He came for a surprisingly long time... (3 pink bubbles) Drool (Box) Just like that persistent sex... It runs down so slowly and draw some patterns on the floor... 2nd frame, top left (Box) Do... Do I look like I'm ...peeing?() (Box) After saying what suddenly came to me ...I flinched (Pink bubble) Gulp* 3rd frame, under the 2nd frame (Bubble, S) I won't forgive you no matter what you say Waaaaagh (Bubble, S) Won't say anything then (Box) Because I realize that it may be true... 4th frame, middle (Bubble, M) It's not over yet (Bubble, M) Sit over there (Bubble, S) Uh... (Buuble, M) I didn't freshen up yet 5th frame, bottom right (Box) Usual and unusual Morality and immorality (Box) The boundary between them is shaking and... vanishing... 6th frame, bottom left (Box) Or probably it's already melted and vanished long time ago (Box) And already flowed far away... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P.35 1st frame, top right (Box) I open my legs... As he told me (Box) As he called me a toilet 2nd frame, top right (Box) His palm, holding me up , is little cold... (Box) The air in the stall gets stuffy heated by our hot breaths... (Bubble, M) You really squeeze It's a good hole... You have really nice pussy♡ (Box) Two genitals are joining together They rub each other and Stick to each other ...I tried hard to give as good as I got but (Box) Irresistible pleasure breaks me down Every time he pokes me... (Bubble, S, top left of frame) Ah... I... like your.. THING, too... It feels... so good So good... (Bubble, M) Yes Yes You like my... THING (Bubble, S) At first ...I ...though your... THING... is like... the one ... of horse... (Bubble, S) I'm gonna... mate, with horse... I though so ...Haha... (Bubble, S) I thought I can't take it... ...But I did ...actually... Surprised... 3rd frame, bottom right (Bubble, M) You were worried because of your tiny hole How do you like this Mr.Horse? (Bubble, S) It makes me faint When all of that thing came in♡ Feel like I'm gonna ...get pregnant...for real... (Box) He could know it... without asking Thanks to my treacherous twitching vagina... 4th frame, bottom left (Bubble, M) Don't worry. I'm a man of honor... I'll take my responsibility so take my seed and get a baby...♡ (Bubble, S) Ah♡ Ah... Aah... Aa...h (3 pink bubbles) Squirt (Bubble, M) ...How about living together for a while? (Bubble, S) Ah... Huh...? Yyyyyou mean getting married...!? Ah I... haven't... (Bubble, M) Wait, Wait I'm just saying that I could live with you to teach this tiny pussy (Box) Suddenly... I was proposed during the mating and I came a bit more ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 36 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) E...Ev Everyday...? Then...aaaaah It will be, wide-opened I can't, do it... that much... (Bubble, M) You know I'm an animal It will be easier if you become a animal like me, for sure. 2nd frame, top left (Bubble, M) Let me see what you learned. (Bubble, M) How are you gonna please me? (Pink bubble) Squirt (Bubble, S) No... It's all sudden... (Bubble, S) N...o... (Bubble, M) Do you really want to give up easily? 3rd frame (3 Bubbles all together, S) Er... Er... It's... I, I, III I'll be your toilet so... let it out in... here... everyday I want you to c, cu, cu, cum in me...♡ ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 37 1st frame, top right (Box) Silence for a while... We two, were provoked and get excited and we are doing it seriously... (2 pink bubbles) Sloppy (Box) He released a great amount of sperm still hugging my hip... I cum, twitching my body over and over In the place I never been before... 2nd frame, top left (Box) I immediately started my job as his toilet and then... (Box) Someone came in...! (Pink bubble) Squirt 3rd frame, bottom right (Box) He told me to make some plausible(or likely) sound to trick that someone. (Box) He got an erection watching my red face... (Box) While someone was relieving himself out there... He was relieving himself on me... (Box) While moving my hand desperately... I got aroused and came again and again... (2 pink bubbles) Sloppy 4th frame, bottom left (Box) Knowing that there are still people coming and going out there (Box) We surrendered to lust and pressed to each other to let some steam off... (Box) Spiked by his pricking movement, the excitement and the shame are mixed up and I almost lost myself (Box) He holds me on his lap, with my legs nastily opened. He touches my hole and in a moment the pleasure raises even higher... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 38 1st and 2nd frame, Top right (Box) It stiffened, in a moment (Box) Then spurted out the sperm it was storing all at once...! 3rd frame, top left (Box) My body twitches and welcomes that sperm ... (Bubble, S) S... Sperm... Sperm... Just came... (Box) I'm so sorry that his dick is cumming... Flooding sperm is so lovely... (Bubble, S) Ho... Hot... It's hot... Aah... Good... It's so good More... (Bubble, S) Mo... more Give me... More... Cu...Cum... Cum I'm cumming Cu Cum... 4th frame, bottom (Bubble, S) Sperm... It's.. great (Bubble, S) Sperm is coming out Sperm... Cum I'm cumming (Bubble, M) Yes... Good... Just like that Squeeze it all out... (4 Pink bubbles) Squirt ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 39 1st frame, top right (Box) I can't stop loving this moment of nothingness Come to think of it I feel like I just Said something... 2nd and 3rd frame (Box) Oh (Handwriting) Bonk (Box) Ouch 4th frame, top left (Handwriting) Ooh... Somebody should clean this up... 5th frame, bottom right (Bubble, S) ...Guess we are in a big trouble (Bubbel, S) No one's here No one's here Alright! (Bubble, M) Oh, it's just in time ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 40 1st frame, top right (Bubble, S) Wait Wait.. Wait Wait a minute...! 2nd frame, top left (BUbble, S) He(Taxi driver) is, He is watching us~ No... Do you really have to do this right now...? (Bubble, M) Don't you remember what you are? Tell me what you are. You said you will be mine didn't you? 3rd frame, bottom right (3 Bubble together, S) ...I'm... your toilet for ...co...copulation ...and letting ...out...sperm (Big handwriting) Blush 4th frame, bottom middle (Bubble, M) Very good! Run faster driver I can't wait to make love to this young lady (Bubble, S) Noooo (Bubble, handwriting within, Driver) Gee... Please... Mister 5th frame, bottom left (Bubble, S) Hm... So you live here? (Bubble, M) I gotta teach you a lot of things since I took charge of taking care of you. And this is a proper place for that. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 41 1st frame, top right (Yellow hand written letter) Pin-Pon (Door bell ringing) (Bubble, Girl came out from the room) Yes♪ 2nd frame, top right (Bubble, Girl) Welcome home papa♪ (Bubble, M) -Yeah, I'm home 3rd frame, top left (Bubble, Girl) ...Oh my We have a guest...? (Bubble, Girl) Is she your daug... No, you can't be... (Bubble, Girl) Uh... You are... definitely... 4th frame, bottom right (Bubble, S) Huh...? Oh... (Bubble, S) U, Um... Uh... (Box) ...Like this 5th frame, bottom left (Bubble, Girl) ...Oh dear! You bad man Did you mess around with such a young girl? (Bubble, Girl) Looks like you didn't understand what's going on Well it's pretty complicated but... Let's be friends (Bubble, GIrl) Come in, please... (Box) Another new door... (Box) Just appeared in front of me... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: May 15 2014, 18:42

May 14 2014, 09:48 Post #4
asdkg Casual Poster Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 218 Joined: 18-June 13 Level 500 (Godslayer) +K	--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 9 When he fondled that feeling of fallen with skillful touch... そのおちた感情を巧みに撫でられる -> Fixed : When he skillfully touched(manipulated) her corrupted emotion(mind) Page 13 I'm totally carried along to this strange air... すっかりおかしな雰囲気にのまれて ->'のまれて' means 'being swept' or 'being swayed'. Or 'affected by something'. So this sentence means that Skuld start to feel little aroused because of strange mood around them. Fixed : Totally Affected(or Swept, Swayed) by this strange mood and... Page 22 He grasped my 'embarrassment' and I couldn't say anything... "恥ずかしい" を握られるとなにも言えなくなる ->'握られる' means 'being grasped' or 'being held'. So it's like... he's taking control over Skuld and by asking 'emabarrassing' questions(Or saying embarrassing things). Fixed : He plays with(or tease?) my 'embarrassment' and I couldn't say anything... He held my embarrassment and ~ Page 26 Pleased to cry ないて喜ぶまで ->Literal translation for 'ないて喜ぶ' is a... 'be happy with crying'. So it means someone's so touched or pleased too much and it make them even cry. Like actresses do when they got some award on big stage. So it means he and other guys 'washed' Verdandy and 'made her happy' until she cries. Fixed : So we washed until she start to cry. Page 32 Among the work 仕事の合間 -> It's nothing but my mistake. 'During' and 'Among' is expressed in same word in my language so... Fixed : During the work In spare time from his work(<-This is closer to the actual meaning of original Japanese) Page 35 He could know it... without asking me From my my naughtly responding genital... ->Oh it's combination of typo and bad translation... I'm sorry. He ask skuld "How do you like Mr.Horse?" in last bubble, and Skuld think that he could know it even if he didn't ask her, because he could know how Skuld like his horse dick by her pussy's movement, responding to his dick. Fixed : He could know it... without question Through(or By) my nasty responding(OR twitching) genital Page 36 You(Skuld) still have puzzled face あなたもまだぜんぜん... ...わかってない顔してるし -> 'わかってない顔' is like... 'I-don't-understand-anything face' or 'I-didn't-know face' She(the girl came out from door) was talking with the man, and then she saw Skuld and says to Skuld, 'Looks like you didn't knew(expected) anything' Fixed : Your face is still saying, 'What is that?' Or Looks like you didn't understand anything(OR what's going on) yet. Or You still have I-don't-get-it face on you(<-Closest to original meaning but most ankward...) --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Feel free to fix any sentence in my work if it's confusing, awkward or... too formal. Um, for example, I translated '性器' to 'genital', '穴' to 'hole", and 'まんこ' to 'pussy' because it's closest word for original word but if you think 'Who says(or think) word like 'genital' when having sex unless he/she's not a urologist?', just change it and make it smoother. Or expression like 'body got limp'. I believe that there's other words just fits in that situation but I can't find it out. I really don't have sense of slang or informal expression. Or actual English spoken in the everyday life. Oh, and if I can be in the part of credit page, please name me as "MyFellaTeemo" ^오^ This post has been edited by asdkg: May 14 2014, 10:02

May 16 2014, 13:13 Post #5
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,492 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 365 (Godslayer) +K	All right, looks good to go. As I am not seeing any other comments, I think you could claim the bounty in a few days. Meanwhile, here's the editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10312

Jun 3 2014, 23:32 Post #6
Desworks Lurker Group: Recruits Posts: 5 Joined: 28-August 12 Level 159 (Destined) +K	I've got a first draft up to page 16 done and available for viewing and feedback here: [www.mediafire.com] MOVIE STAR IIIc This post has been edited by Desworks: Jun 3 2014, 23:35

Jun 4 2014, 07:56 Post #7
Ser Maggot Tired all the time Group: Members Posts: 249 Joined: 14-June 12 Level 90 (Lord) +K	Some minor nitpicks would be just text alignment on some texts. Also, the bubbles are not "clean" in a sense, you could use quick selection tool or the wand tool instead of marquee to remove the text. But I guess it wouldn't matter since it's not that noticeable for the average reader. Other than that, it's turning out well. Looks nice. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) This post has been edited by Ser Maggot: Jun 4 2014, 08:06

Jun 4 2014, 19:03 Post #8
Desworks Lurker Group: Recruits Posts: 5 Joined: 28-August 12 Level 159 (Destined) +K	QUOTE(Ser Maggot @ Jun 4 2014, 06:56) Some minor nitpicks would be just text alignment on some texts. Also, the bubbles are not "clean" in a sense, you could use quick selection tool or the wand tool instead of marquee to remove the text. But I guess it wouldn't matter since it's not that noticeable for the average reader. Good call on the wand tool. The marquee whiteout effect was annoying me and that appears to have improved things noticeably. As for the text alignment, I'm planning on doing a final adjustment pass once all the pages are typeset. That'll hopefully clear up those. Edit: A second pass up to page 28 is now available for feedback here: [www.mediafire.com] MOVIE STAR IIIc (Second Draft) This post has been edited by Desworks: Jun 5 2014, 20:08

Jun 8 2014, 11:33 Post #9
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,492 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 365 (Godslayer) +K	Looks pretty good to me, unless anyone has any comments I think that quality satisfies the bounty.

Jun 8 2014, 19:22 Post #10
Ser Maggot Tired all the time Group: Members Posts: 249 Joined: 14-June 12 Level 90 (Lord) +K	Ah, just a few more things. As much as possible, try to follow the shape of the bubble when entering the text, avoid text that are too cramped and are hitting the bubble outline. Second box, I'm not sure if what I provided is good practice (periods hitting the next set of words) , but that's how I would've done it. Your call. [attachembed=44543] I would also hyphenate if it would benefit on how the formation of the text will look. Long words like "embarrassing", "unconsciousness" and etc, are definitely harder to fit on a smaller bubble. It's your call on how you would handle it, just make sure it wouldn't be hard for the readers. Lastly, proofread on the go. Sometimes, spelling mistakes can escape and sentence construction can be a bit flawed. For example, page 007, 2nd panel, first bubble: "because I was too drunken last night..." page 009, last bubble, ..."like a animal..." I'm pretty sure I've missed more. Good luck, looking forward to this one finally finish! This post has been edited by Ser Maggot: Jun 8 2014, 19:40

Jun 13 2014, 07:55 Post #11
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,492 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 365 (Godslayer) +K	By the way, I suggest using translated SFXes, but keeping Kiyaaa rather than Aaaaargh.

Jun 18 2014, 10:27 Post #12
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,492 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 365 (Godslayer) +K	Oh, I haven't posted it here before: TL bounty for the next book in the series https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10042 Also, based on the post in the forums by Doomdragon2, the story order is From what I know the storyline is like this 1+ (contain also the previous Movie star secret), Silent Bell_infection (part of), Silent Bell_patients (part of), IIa (first half), IIb+ (first half), IIb (8 pic not in the IIb+), IIb+ (second half), IIa (second half), IIIa, Silent Bell_outbreak (part of), IIIb (part of first half), Silent Bell_outbreak (4pics), IIIb (last part of the first half), Silent Bell_outbreak (2pics), IIIb (second half), IIIc, IIId+, Silent Bell_Orchid, Silent Bell_upstage, Silent Bell_Hotspring, Vb the rest I don't know (if somebody can help) We have Vc, Vd, Ve, VIa, VIc, VId, VIf, VIh, VIIIa, and CandY bell 8 I think must fit somewhere (the other candy Bell are with the main "BELL" stories). So actually we jumped ahead and skipped a few entries; the first untranslated one is https://e-hentai.org/g/93626/f6727b3597/ (Silent Bell_infection) so it will probably be bountified when IIId+ is done, followed by https://e-hentai.org/g/14285/28117212ba/ (Silent Bell_patients) , the Skuld story from IIb https://e-hentai.org/g/146949/bbecb51275/ (as the rest wast translated in IIb+), https://e-hentai.org/g/345551/e002cf3891/ (Silent Bell_outbreak) and then we catch up with the IIId_ release, with https://e-hentai.org/g/80360/214b0249e2/ (Silent Bell_Orchid) being the next project. Let me know how does that sound... This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jun 18 2014, 10:39

Jun 19 2014, 01:54 Post #13
Doomdragon2 Legendary Poster Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 11,447 Joined: 9-December 10 Level 500 (Ponyslayer) +K	QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Jun 18 2014, 10:27) Oh, I haven't posted it here before: TL bounty for the next book in the series https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10042 Also, based on the post in the forums by Doomdragon2, the story order is From what I know the storyline is like this 1+ (contain also the previous Movie star secret), Silent Bell_infection (part of), Silent Bell_patients (part of), IIa (first half), IIb+ (first half), IIb (8 pic not in the IIb+), IIb+ (second half), IIa (second half), IIIa, Silent Bell_outbreak (part of), IIIb (part of first half), Silent Bell_outbreak (4pics), IIIb (last part of the first half), Silent Bell_outbreak (2pics), IIIb (second half), IIIc, IIId+, Silent Bell_Orchid, Silent Bell_upstage, Silent Bell_Hotspring, Vb the rest I don't know (if somebody can help) We have Vc, Vd, Ve, VIa, VIc, VId, VIf, VIh, VIIIa, and CandY bell 8 I think must fit somewhere (the other candy Bell are with the main "BELL" stories). So actually we jumped ahead and skipped a few entries; the first untranslated one is https://e-hentai.org/g/93626/f6727b3597/ (Silent Bell_infection) so it will probably be bountified when IIId+ is done, followed by https://e-hentai.org/g/14285/28117212ba/ (Silent Bell_patients) , the Skuld story from IIb https://e-hentai.org/g/146949/bbecb51275/ (as the rest wast translated in IIb+), https://e-hentai.org/g/345551/e002cf3891/ (Silent Bell_outbreak) and then we catch up with the IIId_ release, with https://e-hentai.org/g/80360/214b0249e2/ (Silent Bell_Orchid) being the next project. Let me know how does that sound... Maybe I there are some mistake. I made the above storyline with careful observation, from the chapters links in the various versions and most of all the compilation uploaded (now expunged) by Darknemo2000 4 years ago (https://e-hentai.org/g/291896/e90ccc1aa7/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/291899/c55fea8db1/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/291900/b031e00dca/). Please tell me if there are mistakes.

Jun 29 2014, 19:05 Post #14
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,492 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 365 (Godslayer) +K	Minor update: Deskana has not been active since June 15th. I am waiting for him to respond to SM's comments from https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=3318639 I am willing to wait till late July, but at that time I'll have to look for a new editor (through only minor things will need to be tweaked...)

Jul 1 2014, 15:34 Post #15
asdkg Casual Poster Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 218 Joined: 18-June 13 Level 500 (Godslayer) +K	QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Jun 29 2014, 19:05) Minor update: Deskana has not been active since June 15th. I am waiting for him to respond to SM's comments from https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=3318639 I am willing to wait till late July, but at that time I'll have to look for a new editor (through only minor things will need to be tweaked...) We have his legacy - ZIP file of 28 pages - so it could be done quicker if we have to find another editor. But he's return is the best, for sure.

Jul 1 2014, 22:12 Post #16
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,492 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 365 (Godslayer) +K	QUOTE(asdkg @ Jul 1 2014, 08:34) We have his legacy - ZIP file of 28 pages - so it could be done quicker if we have to find another editor. But he's return is the best, for sure. Yep. A week or two waiting is not a problem, but either way I want to have this released by the end of July.

Jul 4 2014, 12:49 Post #17
asdkg Casual Poster Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 218 Joined: 18-June 13 Level 500 (Godslayer) +K	I'm doing Movie Star 3d and I found it's pretty bad because of that man's puns... I'm spending much more time in making English sentence than reading Japanese. Plus I was little busy and um... to be honest, I had a crash on a hot, 20 grade forged mmax block chance force shield on a auction and I spend my shrinked free time watching and bidding on her. And unfortunately some guy NTRed her with his fat wallet... Anyway, I'll post first 13 pages as an midterm report. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P5 F1, T/R -B1, Skuld === Ooooh... -B2, S --- Cuuuuute... F2, T/L -HW, SFX === FLUFFY FLUFFY F3, Up-Middle/Left -B1, Another customer(?) === You know what? === That species(or kind? type?) leaped into fame after shown on the TV -B2, S === Huh? -B3, S === Hmm... -B4, Guy === You really have to take good care of him, because === Muchkin is easy to have hernia unless you exercise it properly. === If you are interested, why don't we have a talk in somewhere else?() ** (He's trying to pick her up) F4, B/R -HW, Clerk === Huh? -B1, Mister === Alright, give me one cat. Would you send it to me by this evening? === With every necessaries. -B2, Skuld === Hey hey hey H-E-Y === Wait a minute what are you talking about!? -HW, SFX === FLAP* FLAP F5, Down-Middle/Left -B1, S === We're not buying some ice cream. It's living thing! -B2, S === You spend money so easily === It's so troubling, Mister! -B3, SFX === GRN -B4, S === What's that platinum card? === Takako-san gonna spank you in the butt -B5, M === Hm? Are you O.K? (without cat) F6, B/L -HW, SFX === THUD -B1, Guy === Mister(Uncle)()...? === Hardly think so()... *** (Original Japanese is 'おじさま' and it can be both 'Mister(Non-relative male)' and 'Uncle(related in blood)' (Lietral translation is 'They don't resemble each other at all') -B2, Another Guy === Without the fact that they smell the same scent of soap... -B3, Guy === Really!? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P6 F1, T/R -B1, S === Phew... Feel like someone's still don't understand... F2, T/L -B1, M === That was gone too far. === I can't believe they tried to come on to kid like you without qualm -B2, M === You should learn figuring out people === There's a lot of scums out there -B3, S === K-I-D like me? F3, M/L -B1, S === It's called, the charm of cute, delicate beauty, M.I.S.T.E.R♡ -B2, S === So cute that === Make everyone's heart beat as hard as it could()♡ You got it? Got it? ** (It's pun that comes from similar pronunciation between キュ-ト(Kiyu-To, cute) and きゅっと(Kiyu-t-to, SFX for grasping or squeezing something) ** Please fix it if you think out some better pun. F4, B/L -B1, S === Cute, delicate beauty...? === Well that pun was not like a kid for sure. -HWs, SFX === SWING SWING SWING -B2, S === You rubbed off your sense of pun on me! === I think I can be the champion if there's contest for corny puns. *** (Little puns included but It's out of my ability... Sorry.) F5, B/L -B1, M === It makes me want to do some bad things watching you sitting there so carelessly === But! It's not my bad because I don't have hand now(). It's not my bad. *** (It's pun again. 'Have no hand(手がない)' means 'have no choice' or 'can't do anything' He's saying' I don't have hand', putting his hand in her cloth. -B2, S === ...That's my pun teacher === You just freeze() this room in a second... === (Small letters) You even say it once again... *** (In Japan (and in Korea), people say 'it's cold' or 'It's a cold joke' when they hear some lame jokes) -HWs, Blue, SFX === Chill* -HWs, Red, SFX === FUMBLE ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P7 F1, T/R -B1, S === Hmm...? === I smell drink on you... I think I told you stop it -Hws, SFX === Touch F2, T/L -B1, S === Geez... We came here because you said you're tired from walking but... === You can't seem to be tired at all... -B2~3, SFX === grope grope F3, T/L, under the F2 -B1, S === Ah... -B2~3, SFX === grope grope -B4, ? === Mm... -B5, M === It is nonsense that you sit here showing off your panty and say such a thing *** (LT : You sit here showing off your panty and now you say such a thing) F4, middle -B1, S === Kiyaah === So fast... -B2, S === I told you I won't DO before we get back to home === Do you want Takako-San to be mad!? -HWs, SFX === Ha-... Ha-... (Panting, full of lust) === TWITCH* TWITCH -B3, M === You know I'm not gonna stop with only kiss, don't you? === I'm not saying let's bang till all is blue. A little, Just a little, O.K? F5, bottom right -B1, S === Looks like it's a chance for me to tease you === Let's see... I understand that you want some more than kiss since you are dating with a beauty like me and... -B2, S === Considering that you guided me touring around from this morning... -B3, S === It won't make me a lewd girl if I give you a little prize, right? -B4, SFX === SLIP --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 8 F1, T -B1, S === Whoa Whoa... Whoooa === No... It's embarrassing -B2, S === You are too bold, Mister... F2, Up-Middle -B1, M === It gets fleecy like marshmallow when I fumble It's so lovely -B2, SFX === FUMBLE -HW, SFX === TWITCH X2 -B2, S === No- === Don't talk right in front of there... Your breath tickles me...() ** (Hard to make a sentence... L.T is : No- / Don't talk in that close range that your breath reaches me) === Mmm... F3, Down-middle, right -B1, S === Auh... === Tickle... It's tickling~... -B2~5, Clockwise from top === BRUSH* === LICK (Or RUB === LICK === TOUCH F3, Down-middle, left -B1, S === Mmm~... (HW in bubble) === Mister's tonuge... Ah... is thick... -B2, S === Do, Don't... Don't do lick-lick like that... *** (She's lisping like baby, but hard to express that in Eng) -B3~5, Clockwise from top right, SFX === TWITCH === WET === WET -B6, S === Auuh... F4, bottom -B1, M === I won't spare you if you do the pretty === I'm not sure it's because SHE() influenced you, but anyway, you're slowly realizing what's the weapon of girl, ** (* Original word is 'アイツ' and it can be both girl and man but hardly a man in this case) -B2, M === No man could not resist it if you play impish() with this unfairly sweet() body. ** (* Original word is '小?魔' and please tell me if there's another profer(or widely used) expression) * ( Original word is '反則的' and it means 'foul-like(only means foul plays in sports.'反則' is not a equal word of 'evil' or 'dirty')' or 'violating') * ( I was thinking about word 'ill', becuase it's a negative word which used to express compliment) -B3, S === ...Ooh -B4,5 SFX === TOUCH TOUCH -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P 9 F1, top right -B1, S === Mmm... More kiss...? - B2, SFX === DROOL -B3, S === ... O.K... F2, top left -B1, S === Mmm... Hmmm... -B2, SFX === MUMBLE -B3,4 SFX === SLOPPY SLOPPY -B5, S === Ummm... Mmm♡ F2, middle -B1, S === So Mister want === to bang till all is blue because I'm so cute, right? RIght? -B2~3, SFX === BLUSH X2 -B3, M === Hey, Don't be carried away and provoke me. F3, bottom right -B1, S === I mean, Um... === I think it's not bad to bang untill all is blue...♡ === I, isn't it...? -B2, S === ...Suddenly you become yielding === But no. -B3, S === I'll have my main game after we're back to home === ...Anyway, I'm putting in F4, bottom left -B1~2, yellow, SFX === PRESS X2 -B3, S === Mm... Hmmm -B4, S === Ah === Ah...♡ -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P 10 F1, top -B1, S === ...Um, hello? Right here? === There's many place better than chair... -B2, M === It's easier to move my waist on here === And it would be better for you because you don't need to be pressed by my big belly, isn't it? F2, middle -B1, S === Ooh..., Aah... Came... It came in === It's... Mm...(Small word) === Mister's... It scratches my inside.... It's... stiff... === so stiff... (Small word) -B2, S === I can't believe that I can take such a thing in me... -B3, S === Ooh... My belly is full... the whole thing came in... Ah-... === Ah-... Ah-... We two are so nasty... Hmm... Mmm... -B4, SFX === BLUSH -B5~6, SFX === WET WET B6, SFX === QUEEF F3, bottom -B1, M === Ooh-... I can't! I can't hold back anymore -B2, S === Wa, Wai... Wait Mister === You are... You are doing it Seriously === Ah... (Small word) -B3, S === Ooh... Ah === It's... It's crumpling my womb... No... =B4, S === Scratching... It's scratching === My inside... (Small word) === Ah... (HW) -B5~7, red, SFX === Ah X3 -B8~9, yellow, SFX === QUEEF QUEEF -B10, yellow, SFX === SLURP -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P11 F1, top right -B1, S === Ha...(Pant) -B2, S == Ha... (Pant) F2, top left -B1, HW, M === Oisho -B2, HW, S === Oh === Woah... -B3, Pink, HW, SFX === (Surprised looks good but it's too long for this tiny bubble) -B4, Pink, HW, SFX === HOLD F3, bottom right -B1, M === Phew-... Guess this is the benefit of light little girl === I saw you flapping your skirt in the street and I think you loose your childlike innocent === Then I think that may be you can feel like child again if I swing you on my laps so...() ** ('Flappin skirt' means 'tempting', not hard to imagine. He made a pun with two word 'ふわり(SFX for flag or cloth flattering)' and ふわふわ(SFX for swinging)'.) -B2, S === So you were watching me with lustful thoughts === You are no different with that guy who try to pick me up. F4, bottom left -B1, M === Look, my big belly is pretty convenient for now. -B2, S === Woa... === You're like giant stuffed doll --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P 12 F1 top right -B1, M === Phew-... === From the think about it, it's not good -B2, S === Wait Wait, What are you concerning about === in the middle of this in the position like this!? -B3, M === I promised to Takako not to do anything to you before we get back to home F2, top left -B1, S === You're really under her thumb... -B2, S === Does she have you by the balls? -B3, M === Hey Hey what's this bad mouth on this pretty face... F3, Middle -B1, M === It will be nonsense if someone decides to have only one book in his life, saying -B2, M === "Life is short. So I can't read that book if I read this book" -B3, S === Huh? -B4, S === Hmm-... I don't get it... === Are we talking about Takako-San? -B5, S === You're misterious === You make me want to know what kind of book you are and I think I'm gonna read you all F4, bottom -B1, M === Well, let's spare the pleasure for the later. === Oh, I can say it's a 'Slurping Beauty'() *** (* Another pun, between '美女(Bi Jyo, the beauty)' and 'ひじょひじょ(Bi Jyo Bi Jyo, smoother expression of ぴちゃぴちゃ(SPLASH) I translate it 'Slurping Beauty', with the 'Sleeping Beauty') -B2, HW, S === Ah... -B3, HW, Pink, S === Ha...(sigh) -B4, S === I told you, Your joke is so lame... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ What I really fear is that I may overlooked Mister's pun in my previous work, 3c. I believe I would get it if there's some pun but... things can happen. This post has been edited by asdkg: Jul 4 2014, 12:54

Jul 6 2014, 06:56 Post #18
asdkg Casual Poster Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 218 Joined: 18-June 13 Level 500 (Godslayer) +K	Here's the completed version. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P5 F1, T/R -B1, Skuld === Ooooh... -B2, S --- So cuuuuute... F2, T/L -HW, SFX === FLUFFY FLUFFY F3, Up-Middle/Left -B1, Guy === You know what? === That species(or kind? type?) leaped into fame after shown on the TV -B2, S === Huh? -B3, S === Hmm... -B4, Guy === You really have to take good care of him, because === Muchkin is easy to have hernia unless you exercise it properly. === If you are interested, why don't we have a talk in somewhere else?() ** (He's trying to pick her up) F4, B/R -HW, Clerk === Huh? -B1, Mister === Alright, give me one cat. Would you send it to me by this evening? === With every necessaries. -B2, Skuld === Hey hey hey H-E-Y === Wait a minute what are you talking about!? -HW, SFX === FLAP* FLAP F5, Down-Middle/Left -B1, S === It's not buying some ice cream. It's living thing! -B2, S === You spend your money so easily === It's so troubling, Mister! -B3, SFX === GRN -B4, S === What's that platinum card? === Takako-san gonna spank you in the butt -B5, M === Hm? Are you fine? (without cat) F6, B/L -HW, SFX === THUD* -B1, Guy === Uncle()...? === Hardly think so()... ** (Japanese word is 'おじさま' and it can be both 'Mister(Non-relative male)' and 'Uncle(related in blood)' (Lietral translation is 'They don't resemble each other at all') -B2, Another Guy === Without the fact that they smell the same scent of soap()... ** (Or 'They even smell the same scent of soap...') -B3, Guy === Really!? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P6 F1, T/R -B1, S === Phew... Feel like someone's still don't understand... F2, T/L -B1, M === That was unbeliavable. === I can't believe they tried to hook a kid like you without shame. -B2, M === You should learn figuring out people === There are a lot of scums out there -B3, S === K-I-D like me? F3, M/L -B1, S === You must misspoke the cute, charming, delicate beauty, M.I.S.T.E.R♡ -B2, S === So cute that === Make everyone's heart beat as hard as it could()♡ You got it? Got it? *** (It's pun that comes from similar pronunciation between キュ?ト(Kiyu-To, cute) and きゅっと(Kiyu-t-to, SFX for grasping or squeezing something) ** Please fix it if you think out some better pun. F4, B/L -B1, S === Cute, delicate beauty...? === Well that pun was not like a kid for sure. -HWs, SFX === SWING SWING SWING -B2, S === You rubbed off your sense of pun on me! === I think I can be the champion if there's contest for corny puns. F5, B/L -B1, M === It makes me want to do some bad things watching you sitting there so carelessly === But! It's not my bad because I don't have hand now(). It's not my bad. ** (It's pun again. 'Have no hand(手がない)' means 'have no choice' or 'can't do anything' He's saying' I don't have hand', because he put his hand into her cloth.) -B2, S === ...That's my pun teacher === You just freeze() this room in a moment... === (Small letters) You even say it once again... *** (In Japan (and also in Korea, interestingly), people say 'it's cold' or 'It's a cold joke' when they hear some lame jokes) -HWs, Blue, SFX === Chill* -HWs, Red, SFX === FUMBLE ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P7 F1, T/R -B1, S === Hmm...? === You smell of drink... I think I told you to stop drinking. -Hws, SFX === Touch F2, T/L -B1, S === Geez... We came here because you said you're tired from walking but... === You can't seem to be tired at all... -B2~3, SFX === grope grope F3, T/L, under the F2 -B1, S === Ah... -B2~3, SFX === grope grope -B4, ? === Mm... -B5, M === It is nonsense of you to say so, while you're sitting here showing off your panty *** (LT : You sit here showing off your panty and now you're saying such a thing) F4, middle -B1, S === Kiyaah === It's so quick... -B2, S === You know we shouldn't DO before we get back home === Do you want Takako-San to be mad!? -HWs, SFX === Ha-... Ha-... (Panting, full of lust) === TWITCH* TWITCH -B3, M === You know I'm not gonna stop with only kiss, don't you? === I'm not saying let's DO it to the end. A little, Just a little, O.K? F5, bottom right -B1, S === Looks like it's a chance for me to tease you === Let's see... I understand that you want some more than kiss, as you are dating with a beauty like me and... -B2, S === Considering that you guided me touring around from this morning... -B3, S === It won't make me a lewd girl if I give you a little prize, right? -B4, SFX === SLIP --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 8 F1, T -B1, S === Whoa Whoa... Whoooa === No... It's embarrassing -B2, S === You are too bold, Mister... F2, Up-Middle -B1, M === It gets fleecy like marshmallow when I fumble. It's so lovely -B2, SFX === FUMBLE -HW, SFX === TWITCH X2 -B2, S === No- === Don't talk right in front of there... Your breath tickles me...() ** (Hard to make it in one sentence... L.T is : No- / Don't talk in that close range that your breath reaches me) === Mmm... F3, Down-middle, right -B1, S === Auh... === Tickle... It's tickling~... -B2~5, Clockwise from top === BRUSH* === LICK (Or RUB === LICK === TOUCH F3, Down-middle, left -B1, S === Mmm~... (HW in bubble) === Mister's tonuge... Ah... is thick... -B2, S === Do, Don't... Don't do lick-lick like that... *** (She's lisping like baby, but hard to express that in Eng) -B3~5, Clockwise from top right, SFX === TWITCH === WET === WET -B6, S === Auuh... F4, bottom -B1, M === I won't spare you if you do the pretty === I'm not sure it's because SHE() influenced you, but anyway, you're slowly getting to know how to use the weapon of girl, ** (* Original word is 'アイツ' and it can be both girl and man but hardly a man in this case) -B2, M === No man could resist to you if you play impish() with this unfairly sweet() body. ** (* Original word is '小?魔' and please tell me if there's another profer(or widely used) expression) * ( Original word is '反則的' and it means 'foul-like(only means foul plays in sports.'反則' is not a equal word of 'evil' or 'dirty')' or 'violating') * ( I was thinking about word 'ill', becuase it's a negative word which used to express compliment) -B3, S === ...Ooh -B4,5 SFX === TOUCH TOUCH -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P 9 F1, top right -B1, S === Mmm... More kiss...? - B2, SFX === DROOL -B3, S === ... O.K... F2, top left -B1, S === Mmm... Hmmm... -B2, SFX === MUMBLE -B3,4 SFX === SLOPPY SLOPPY -B5, S === Ummm... Mmm♡ F2, middle -B1, S === So Mister want to === Do it to the end because I'm so cute, right? RIght? -B2~3, SFX === BLUSH X2 -B3, M === Hey, Don't be carried away and provoke me. F3, bottom right -B1, S === I mean, Um... === I think it's not bad to DO it to the end...♡ === I, isn't it...? -B2, S === ...Suddenly you become yielding === But no. -B3, S === I'll have my real fun after we're back to home === ...Anyway, I'm putting in F4, bottom left -B1~2, yellow, SFX === PRESS X2 -B3, S === Mm... Hmmm -B4, S === Ah === Ah...♡ -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P 10 F1, top -B1, S === ...Um, hello? Right here? === There's many place better than here on chair... -B2, M === It's easier to move my waist on here === And it would be better for you because you don't need to be pressed by my big belly, isn't it? F2, middle -B1, S === Ooh..., Aah... Came... It came in === It's... Mm...(Small word) === Mister's... It scratches my inside.... It's... stiff... === so stiff... (Small word) -B2, S === I can't believe that I can take such a thing in me... -B3, S === Ooh... My belly is full... the whole thing came in... Ah-... === Ah-... Ah-... We two are so nasty... Hmm... Mmm... -B4, SFX === BLUSH -B5~6, SFX === WET WET B6, SFX === QUEEF F3, bottom -B1, M === Ooh-... I can't! I can't hold back anymore -B2, S === Wa, Wai... Wait Mister === You are... You are doing it seriously === Ah... (Small word) -B3, S === Ooh... Ah === It's... It's crumpling deepest place... No... =B4, S === Scratching... It's scratching === My inside... (Small word) === Ah... (HW) -B5~7, red, SFX === Ah X3 -B8~9, yellow, SFX === QUEEF QUEEF -B10, yellow, SFX === SLURP -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P11 F1, top right -B1, S === Ha...(Pant) -B2, S == Ha... (Pant) F2, top left -B1, HW, M === Oisho -B2, HW, S === Oh === Woah... -B3, Pink, HW, SFX === (Surprised looks good but it's too long for this tiny bubble) -B4, Pink, HW, SFX === HOLD F3, bottom right -B1, M === Phew-...This is what I can do only with light little girl === I saw you flapping your skirt in the street and I think you loose your childlike innocent === Then I think that may be you can feel like child again if I swing you on my laps so...() ** ('Flappin skirt' means 'tempting', not hard to imagine. He made a pun with two word 'ふわり(SFX for flag or cloth flattering)' and ふわふわ(SFX for swinging)'.) -B2, S === So you were watching me with such a lustful thoughts === You are no different from that guy who try to pick me up. F4, bottom left -B1, M === Look, my big belly is pretty convenient for now. -B2, S === Woa... === You're like giant stuffed doll --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P 12 F1 top right -B1, M === Phew-... === From the think about it, it's not good -B2, S === Wait Wait, What are you concerning about === in the middle of this in the position like this!? -B3, M === I promised Takako not to do anything to you before we get back to home F2, top left -B1, S === You're really under her thumb... -B2, S === Does she have you by the balls? -B3, M === Hey Hey what's this bad mouth on this pretty face... F3, Middle -B1, M === It will be nonsense if someone decides to have only one book in his life, saying -B2, M === "Life is short. So I can't read that book if I read this book" -B3, S === Huh? -B4, S === Hmm-... I don't get it... === Are we talking about Takako-San? -B5, S === You're misterious === You make me want to know what kind of book you are and I think I'm gonna read you all F4, bottom -B1, M === Well, let's spare the pleasure for the later. === Oh, I can say it's a 'Slurping Beauty'() (Small words) *** (* Another pun, between '美女(Bi Jyo, the beauty)' and 'ひじょひじょ(Bi Jyo Bi Jyo, smoother expression of ぴちゃぴちゃ(SPLASH) I translate it 'Slurping Beauty', with the 'Sleeping Beauty') -B2, HW, S === Ah... -B3, HW, Pink, S === Ha...(Pant) -B4, S === I told you, Your joke is so lame... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P13 F2, middle right -B1, S === Wow- Looks delicious-! === You're a really good at cooking, like my big sister F3, up-middle left -Box, S thinking === Arrgh she doesn't respond to my pick-off throw... F4, down-middle right -B1, Takako === -So, where did you go today? -B2, S === Umm... === You, You know, I didn't bring my cloth so we had shopping... -B3, T === Oh, that's good === I always sigh when I open my closet because there's nothing but same old cloth. -Box, S thinking === She's angry She's angry... F5, bottom -B1, M === Today? Ah, do you remeber that new hotel we talked about before? She said she want to visit there so we spend some time there. -B2, S === Woahhhhh I didn't say that I didin't say that! -HWs, S === Mister === Read the mood Read the mood -B3, T === Hmm? Didn't we three promised to play ALL together today? === I think I need to make you spit()... tell the truth ** (Original Japanese is 吐く(vomit). So she was about to say little rough word, and then she respoke it in not rough word.) -B4, M === We went there, and we cummed there. ** (Another pun. '行く' means 'go' and it also means 'cum'. Fortunately it can be a English pun, go and cum(come)) -B5, S === No-o♡ === I mean, you idiot! Do you really have to say such a lame joke right no(w)... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P 14 F1, top right -B1, T === Looks like you two enjoyed your weekend, left me in home alone === Guess I have to appreciate that, because I can clean this room beyond recognition while I'm left in home. F2, top right -Box, S thinking === Black... She's black... === She looks mild but she's black... ** (Black = Evil) F3, top middle -Box1, S thinking === I know... I know another person who has same smell -Box2, S thinking === My spider sense is telling me that she's a same type of my natural enemy... -B1, T (or U?) === I'm really glad to see you enjoy my dish... === which I made with painstaking care while you two were having fun -B2, U === So it won't be a too much asking if I ask you to wash the dish, prepare my bath, and make my tea, will it? F4, top left -B1, S === I... I think I'm willing to do... F5, middle -Box1, S thinking === She even looks like THIS(Urd) to me now -Box2, S thinking === So I even took a step forward and call her by HER(Urd) name. === ...only in my mind F6, bottom -Box1, S thinking === ...And naturally, the hierarchy in this house became like this.() === (...Or 'And naturally, I become the bottom in the hierarchy of this house) -B1, S === I'm in the lower status than was in Keiichi's house... === SOB -Box2, S thinking === Somehow I feel like I won't be able to stand against her equally for my whole life... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P 15 F1, top right -B1, yellow, SFX === GROPE -B2, pink, SFX === Ah F2, top left -B1, SFX === Mm (Mumble) F3, middle -B1, U === I can see that your waste feels heavy... But THIS is still stiff ... === And responding well. Though it looks little tired... -B2, U === But I don't feel like forgiving you at all. === What should I do? F4, bottom -B1, U === Even if we let that hotel thing leave aside, We still have that promise, to play all together. === So I want to know that you're going to keep that promise or not. -B2, U === And I guess there's only one way === to check it♪. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P16 F2, top left -Box1, S thinking === After dinner, he usually watches Base Ball game or read news paper. -Box2, S thinking === Or does such a thing. -Box3, S thinking === Rule no.1 === You can't refuse other's approach in house without proper reason. F4, middle left -B1, U === Oh dear... === Why are these so heavy like this? F5, bottom right -B1, U === Mmm... === It's so amzing even though it's not fully grown yet === My heart beats faster just by looking it♪ -Box 1, S === ...Urd's (blow job) is so passionate that makes me embarassed even though I'm only watching it F6, bottom left -B1, U === Mmmf... Does anyone does it so neatly like me? -B2, U === I give courteous care to this everyday. -Box1, S thinking === I think I can copy her === ...May be... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P17 F1, top right -B1, U === Hmmm, what? === You want here too? -B2~3, SFX === GROPE GROPE F2, top left -B1, U === Hhmmm♪() === This is what she can not do ** (Original Japanese is ふふ(fu fu)) -B2, U === Let me clean here for you === Mmm- Hey, don't move === It's so cute♡ F3, middle -B1, U === Mm, Mmmm-...m... -B2, U === Men have a really amazing thing on them === I'm sure that God made this for me to play with -B3, U === It makes me dazed when with only touch... F4, bottom right -B1, U === Ha()... As I'm giving my love this much === You better work hard to give me what I want -B2, U === with your cute balls♡ F5, bottom middle -B1, U === ...-Unless I'm gonna do like this and -B2, U === Eat you up♡ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P18 F2, top left -B1, U === Look, it came out♡ === Oh dear It's too much === ...It's crying like little boy -B2, U === You cummed pretty fast and I guess that means... === You controlled yourself in that hotel to keep the promise♡ F3, middle right -B1, U === I should give you a reward === May be no girl can swallow this big thing to the end, don't you think so? === Well I'm challenging it♡ F5, middle left -B1~2, SFX === Mm... X3 -B3, SFX === Hmf() ** (It's a... SFX for holding back vomit... or about to vomit... I don't know what word would suit on this and May be it'll be better not to TL or edit this...) -B4, U ===Almost... there... F6, bottom -B1, U === Wait a... it's fail... === The whole dinner came... ** (It's... It's too... Oh no) -B2, SFX === SPOUT* -B3, SFX === COUGH COUGH ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P19 F1, top right -B1~2, SFX === COUGH X2 -B3, U === I... I failed my challange but === I'll do what small cups can't to you... === I massaged it with oil while I'm waiting... F2, top left -B1, U === Look Can you feel it's moist? F3, under the F2 -B1, U === Mmm... It gets so stiff and it's like making some crackling sound... === Makes my heart goes pit-a-pat... F4, bottom -B1, U === Hmmm...♡ === It doesn't stop === It keeps flowing out more and more... -B2, U === Can't take it anymore? === It's Twitching... === Here, here, let it out === The milk you held back in there...♪ -B3, U === Pour it out === On this nasty tits... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P20 F2, right -B1, HW, U === Aah...♡ === Great... -B2, HW, U === Great...♡ F3, top left -B1, U === Oh♡ === What's this === It's so much...♡ -B2, U === Great...♡♡ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P21 F1, top -B1, M === Phew-... === Didn't you say that you cleaned it whole day? === Hard to believe that seeing you unconcerned about it getting dirty F2, middle -B1, U === Don't mind === It doesn't matter if you buy me some new one♪ === Let's go shopping tommorow -B2, U === Look... === It's still left so much♡ === I'll let you spit it all === Tommorow, we just laze around well at ease, === and then we go to shopping♪ -B3, M === No, tommorow is... F3, bottom right -B1, U === It'll be a perfect day, don't you think so? === Stop standing there vacantly and come here === You want to play, don't you? -B2, U === Looks like you are holding it back. F4, bottom left -B1, U === I'll give you a reaward too === For keeping our promise -B2, S === ...Ooh -Box1, S thinking === We are in closed space so === When someone get aroused === ...it infects the others ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P22 F1, top right -B1, U === It's here♡ === You haven't taken your time to touch those this carfully, have you? -B2, S === Hyiaah -B3, U === Now tell me. == What are those? -B4, S === Wa, waaah === It's warm! === And it's squishy~ === It... It's ba... -B5, U === You're a shy girl === ...How cute === Looks like papa likes it pretty much, we both grabbing it♡ F2, top left -B1, S === ahaha === it's Great... === It's so sticky === It will make me go pit a pat if I lick this. === Does every male spill a thing like this? -B2, U === Still can't see that? === He's the STICKIEST among the male♪ -B3, U === That's like you indeed === You must have experienced many, so no wonder you can see that F3, bottom left -B1, U === Unnecessary words === You say what you don't need to say === ... cute girl -B2, S === ...huh? F4, upper one in bottom right -B1, U === The unmannered mouth that hurts other's feeling need to be punished, right...? -B2, S === Ouuuu... Th, That's, my, nose... F5, under F4 -B1, S === Ooh... -B2, S === Ah... B2, U === See that? === I want to get along with you === So let's care about each other ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P23 F1, top right -B1, S === ...It became healthy again === Feels like it's full of it... === Though I don't know about it that well... -B2, U === Look, its vessel is bulged out♡ === How about fondling it? === It will cum soon if we do so -B3, U === Just imagine it's an ice lolly === And let your tongue crawl on it slowly♪ F3, left middle -B1, S === Mmm... It's delicious === I want to lick this candy more... -B2, U === It tastes like milk === ...You want to drink it, right? -B3, S === Yes...♡ This dick milk♡ === ...Wait what do you want me to say...? (Small word) F4, right middle -B1, U === Why are you becoming a shy girl now? === Sometimes you need to shake off your shyness, O.K? -HW === (Her face is)too close -B2, S === I I I... I know but... -B3, U === You don't want to get along with me? F5, bottom right -B1, S === O-h♡ === Mister's candy balls are so cute♡ -HW === Oh... Just say it!! -B2, S === I want to drink delicious dick milk- ♡ === I'm nuzzling it so give me a dick milk === give me, give me-♡ F6, bottom left -B1, U === Good, You did it well♡ === Let's make him far gone together♡ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P24 F2, top left -B1, S === The... the lump of lust... it is...♡ -B2, S === M, === Mister... === You're pretty great when you're teasing, === But not really strong when you're being teased, right? === Surprised... -B3, U === He's looks weak, isn't he? === Don't you want to find out how he is weak together? F3, left middle -B1, U === ...Hmm === Actually I wanted to hurt you when you came as a new lover but === Feels like you have something special === ...Not bad F4, bottom -B1, U === Let's see♪ === I can see on your face that you can't be quite happy with only tongue === What, Do, You, Want? -B2, S === Right... === He looks like he can't... === control himself anymore wanting to put his dick in... -B3, S === I can feel that Mister's candy balls are raring to do...♪ -B4, S === Mister- === Who do you want to do with...? === Whose P.U.S.S.Y do you want to see? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P25 F1, top right -B1, S === How about this? === Isn't it cute -B2, SFX === BLUSH -B3, S === It's tiny so === It'll feel so good when you're squeezing into it -B4, S === Want to put it in? === You want to put it in? F2, bottom right -B1, S === Look it's H.E.R.E♡ === Just stick your dick into it -B2, S === And you can fill it with your nasty semen F3, top left -B1, U === You can't hold back anymore, can you? === You want to taste the pleasure of fucking a female, driving it in to its end...? -B2, U === If you want that, you better choose the one that let you feel as good as you want -B3, U === The place where you can do every nasty thing is here♡ -F4, bottom right -B1, U === I'll let you CUM. SO. GOOD ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page26 F2, top right -B1, S === Wow♡ Amazing he cummed with only heaing us === Mister, you're so cute -B2, U === Hmm, Hmm-♪ === What a frank boy === But, I won't stop untill I find out who you really want to do with♪ F3, middle -B1, S === Aha it's all wet and I feel good somehow === How do you feel? === Hurry, make it bigger♡ === A cute girl is waiting for it- -B2, U === It's getting bigger, bigger♪ === When he and I met each other for first time, === he kept it hardened for three days and three nights♪ === I was totally worn-out -B3, S === Wow It's great-♡ -B4, U === And I completely fell for him at his THAT F4, bottom -B1, U === So you have to take resposibility for that === Don't even think about saying 'I have to go now' or something -B2, U === The fun time has just begun♪ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 27 F1, top right -B1, U === How are the things there? -B2, S === It It's... little embrassing- I guess... F2, next to F1 -B1, U === Well then, I'm going in♡ -B2, U === Hmmm it's feels stimulating♡ F3, top left -B1, U === Hey hey === How do you like this quartet of bouncing tits...? -B2, S === And the couple of cute pus...sy♡ -B3, U === You can't fully enjoy it in only today so === Let's continue it to tomorrow -B4, U === Wow... === He's twitching F4, middle right -B1, S === Mister, let's kiss === Chu♡ F5, middle left -B1, S === Hmmm... It's not a nasty kiss as usual === You can't do it well because you're gonna cum if you do some lick-lick? F6, bottom -B1, U === That's right. You're really good. === Make him feel too good♡ -B2, U === You want to drive whole thing of your hard-erected dick into her tiny young pussy and... === Make her scream and suffer in pleasure twisting her waist, right? -B3, S === No~ === Mister you are so L.E.W.D♡ === You want? === You want to do that to me? -B4, S === It's good, It's good- === you can F.U.C.K.M.E♡ -B5, S === With your dick, === As hard as you want === hurry, hurry♡ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P28 F2, top middle -B1~3, HW, S === Hyi === A === A === Ah... === Ah F3, top left -B1, S === Great...♡ === ...Don't stare at me so much- -B2, S === It feels funny-... === I feel something hot around here... === It's not that I cummed with this === at all...♡ F5, bottom -B1, S === M-mmm... === Dick milk... === Gonna lick it -B2, S === It's delicious, Mister♡ === Let's play with pussy === Put it in, put it in♡ B3, U === No, not yet. He didn't answer to the question === Which one? === The girl you want to put it in to be served♡ -B4, U === Come on, tell me♡ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P29 F1, top right -B1, S === Wow♡ === It's standing up agian? === Can you still erect? === Look, do you want to do it? === Do you want to put it it? F2, top left -B1, S === Look- === I'll show you my secret P.L.A.C.E♡ -B2, S === Great... === Is that because you're with two girls? -B3, S === You want to put your dick...♡ === in here, right-? === I know, I know === I can see that from your about-to-butst dick♡ F3, bottom -B1, S === Look-... === Recall that feeling... when you were in here === Squeeeeeze...♡ -B2, S === Uh oh? === Are you looking at the place little below...? === There... === I haven't done it with there -B3, S === He he... === Do you want to be my first? === Oh-... === What should I do-...♡ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P30 F1, top -B1, U === Hmmm... === Guess I have to try harder♡ === H-e-r-e♪ === It jiggles and it's hot♡ -B2~3, SFX === FLARE FLARE -B4, U === Don't you want to grap this ass and poke it as hard as you want? F2, bottom -B1, S, top right === Come to me, quickly- === I'm waiting === For Mister's twitching D.I.C.K♡ -B2, U, top left === Dig it as much as you want === Let's play nasty P.U.S.S.Y thing with me♡ -B3, S === Hurry~ === Make me feel good- === Let's have sex feels it's melting down♡() === (Alt. : Let's have sex until it's all melted down♡) -B4, S === It's O.K if you spout all your semen out♡ === I'll love you G.O.O.D♡ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page31 F2, top -B1, S === Oooo~h... === Not... any... more... -B2, U === A, Are you, still...? === Really...? === I, I'll let you off with this for today... F3, bottom -B1, U === ...Hey === I'll let you do -B2, U === When we are together so... === So let's do it together tommorow === ... O.K.? === ...O.K? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Page 32 F1, top right -Box1, S thinking === ...-However === We come to spend the weekend without him F3 -B1, S === Even the street looks lonely somehow === When it's just two of us... -B3, S === Don't you want to go out? -Box1, S thinking === She doesn't say anything in the situation like this. === That's the little difference between her and Urd... F4 -Box1, S thinking === ...No === Urd must feel and think about so many things... -Box2, S thinking === And big sister, too..? === Does everyone live everyday doing that...? F5 -B1, U === Well, let's go -B2, S === Huh? -B3, U === Can't chage anything if we're just standing here looking down somewhere === Are you going? === Or not? -B4, S === Oh, yeah === I'll go! === Guess I have to appriciate it beforehand. thank you for your lunch() === (It is natural that Urd(Takako?) buys their lunch if they go out. And Skuld is mentioning it before they go out) -B5, U == ... You are becoming brazen more and more F6, bottom -Box1, S thinking === Little did I know at that time. -Box2, S thinking === That people are living with complicated thoughts === And how complicated that thoughts are -Box3, S thinking === When I get to know that === It's already... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Skip to the P 35 F1 - You smell of drink... F3 - You sit here showing off your panty and now you're saying such a thing. F4 - You know we shouldn't DO before we get back home F6 - I know it's bad but I feel like giving you some reward♪() (It's little different from original Japanese becasue I can't figure out how to experess 'ちゃう' in English) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P36 F1 - Mmm... More...? ...O.K... F4 - I, I think it's good to DO it to the end... ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P37 F3 -Right === So you were watching me with lustful thoughts -Left === Phew-... Guess this is the benefit of light little girl === Get you on my laps, and swing... or something ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P38 F4 === How come are these so heavy? F5 === So good even though it's not fully grown yet ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P39 F2 === What's this amount... It's like you're in puberty F3 === Have anyone swallowed whole part of this huge thing...? F5 === Almost... done... a, almost... Mm... ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P40 F1 === I... I'll do what small cups can't do... F2 === Slow, and tenderly... F5 === You can't take it anymore? It's twitching... == Hey hey come out clogged milk...♪ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Skip to P42 F1 === You haven't touch it carefully like this, right? === Now tell me, what are you fondling? F2 === Is this the unusualness of him? === He's the S.T.I.C.K.I.E.S.T one among the male♪ F3 === You don't have to say such an unnecessary thing... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P43 F1 === How about fondling there? Looks like he's about to cum. F3 === Don't you want to drink some milk? === Yes, I want a dick milk... Do I really have to say these things? F4 === Are you still being shy? Sometimes you need to shake off your shyness. F5 === Mister's candy ball, is so cute- === Give me milk I'm nuzzling it- ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P44 F3 === Why don't we find it out together? F4 === Feels like you have something special ...Not bad F5 === Who do you want to DO with...? Which pussy do you want to see? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P45 F1 === Look Look how about this? Isn't it cute? F2 === You can fill here with your nasty semen F3 === The place where you can do every dirty thing you want... is here F4 === I'll M.A.K.E you cum so good ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P46 F3 === Do, Don't stare at me so much-... F5 -Right === Mmm-... Delicious milk... -Left === Hey, tell me♪ Which want do you want to do with? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P47 F1 === Oh dear... You're so nasty F2 === Look, you want to put your dick... in here rigth, right? === Oh no~ I made it too hard and big what should I do♪ F3 -Right === Look at this- Isn't it cute? -Left === Um- ...Are you watching my... another hole? F4 === Do you want to be my... first? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- P48 F1 === Heh... Look at my ass, it's hot and jiggling F2 -top right === Let's do a dirty thing with me♪ -bottom left === Hurry~ Let's do some wet thing♡ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ P49 While I'm drawing this, I found myself loving that pictures-only part and I put it in May be someone would wonder why the color is different, well consider it's because Skuld can imagine it more clearly without sound ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Sound off version wasn't a deal, as I expected. This post has been edited by asdkg: Jul 8 2014, 10:30

Jul 6 2014, 07:11 Post #19
asdkg Casual Poster Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 218 Joined: 18-June 13 Level 500 (Godslayer) +K	I think there can be many things that I may have to explain. But I'll do that after proofread, because I can't be sure about if I made it clear enough or not before someone read it. There are so many things that make me confused or suffered in this one, like 1. That naughty Urd in this book, is not Urd, in fact. 2. Puns and informal words. 3. Even though that Urd is not real Urd, Skuld call her Urd, and that Urd doesn't care about it even though she's not Urd in fact. 4. I made Skuld say 'xxxk mx' 5. Is Mister dead? He doesn't say anything. 6. The whole dinner... 7. Because of 3., I can't figure out who is that 'Urd' in Skuld's last narration. It's not translation-related-problem except 2. but... wow. This post has been edited by asdkg: Jul 6 2014, 07:33

Jul 8 2014, 15:18 Post #20
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,492 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 365 (Godslayer) +K	Updating with open bounties for this project/series asdkg, please claim your TL bounty for 3d+ IIIc editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10583 (Desworks is still inactive, I'll give him about two more weeks and then I am considering him gone and opening this to another editor) 3d+ editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10627 Silent Bell infection (oldest RPG untranslated OMG work) TL bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10628 Skuld story from [RPG COMPANY2 (Toumi Haruka)] MOVIE STAR IIb TL bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10629 This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jul 8 2014, 15:19

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