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> Red's Former 51st Individual Bounty] Now Project for all [RPG COMPANY] (Ah! My Goddess) dojins-> [English], Reward: 50,000 Credits + 50 Hath

 
post Feb 14 2016, 15:51
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Not a big deal (and I appreciate's everyone's comments) but (as KD noted) we should be having this discussion in https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showt...3963&st=360

This thread is supposed to be for the RPG COMPANY OMG series only. The other thread is for the vast majority of projects that do not have a dedicated thread.
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post Nov 25 2016, 12:57
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QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Sep 23 2014, 21:09) *

Hopefully we will get the proofreading comments on the above soon...

In the meantime, the new TL bounty is for the SB patients: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11105

I'm interested in this.
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post Nov 26 2016, 04:04
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QUOTE(LeGenjutsu @ Nov 25 2016, 05:57) *

I'm interested in this.


Glad to hear, that project has been waiting for a TL for a while! (2 years, lol).

I know the scan is not great, couldn't find a better one...
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post Nov 26 2016, 09:26
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QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Nov 26 2016, 09:04) *

Glad to hear, that project has been waiting for a TL for a while! (2 years, lol).

I know the scan is not great, couldn't find a better one...

Yup! Here you are!
[textuploader.com] Script
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post Nov 28 2016, 05:24
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QUOTE(LeGenjutsu @ Nov 26 2016, 14:26) *

Yup! Here you are!
[textuploader.com] Script

No reply? Should I withdraw the claim?
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post Nov 30 2016, 05:16
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QUOTE(LeGenjutsu @ Nov 27 2016, 22:24) *

No reply? Should I withdraw the claim?


Sorry, I was a bit busy. Unfortunately our senior TL advises against accepting the script due to too many errors. I will PM you with more info on errors in the near future. Thanks for trying to help!

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post Jan 26 2017, 18:54
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I'm starting on this bounty: https://e-hentai.org/g/14285/28117212ba/
Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/14285/28117212ba/

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post Jan 27 2017, 01:32
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Great. I hope the scan quality will be ok, it's not particularly high res (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)

You may want to check with LeGenjutsu for his script, it was a bit too rough for us, but not a rewrite. Maybe it will help?

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post Oct 9 2017, 13:21
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Is this where we post to accept bounties? Eg, for the SILENT BELL outbreak doujin?
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post Oct 12 2017, 07:42
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For this particular series, yes, since I started this thread for the project way before I decided to combine later release into a single thread. Since there are quite a few books left in that series, let's resurrect this (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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post Mar 16 2018, 07:19
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A bit late, and partially my fault, because I forgot to follow up on TL's PM (but they never contacted me again)..

I did receive the script: [justpaste.it] https://justpaste.it/1dz3z
I will attach it to the bottom of this PM in case the site goes down etc.

The problem is, well, here is our senior EHCOVE TLs opinion: " This is a very hard project, due in part to all the kansaiben. To my mind it's about 60-70% accurate, and I just can't help him rewrite that much of this. "

So, this is not bad, but a bit below what we would prefer in terms of quality. And the bottom line is, we need a new translator who can proofread/polish this, particularly as Kusojijii has been inactive since January. Any one interested in helping?

The relevant bounty link is: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11362
I am fine with Kuso taking half of it, assuming he actually becomes active again, otherwise the entire bounty can go to the person who helps to finish this.

===============
5:
Er... // Thank you all for being here today!
We are the blue rose of Nekomi U, the automotive club!
And what's happening today is this!
Wanted! New club members!
We are having a public event to judge new entrants!
To all who have applied beforehand, please try your best!
The automotive club needs
young power right now!

7:
So, we'll need a small explanation later but
our tradition is "the few elite".
This time, we have plans to accept a small amount of people.
And the things we are after are firstly physical strength, secondly guts,
and thirdly a vitality that few can hope to imitate!
Yes! And to ascertain that comes our club's goddess,
to perform a physical strength measurement!

8:
[[Getting me to hear you is also part of the examination... everyone please try your best!]]
I'll bet you're all brimming with anticipation!
If you openly join our club, you just might get to do
amazing things as much as you want!
Today, if you're right here, // it means you wanted to see for yourself, right?
Can you guess what those things could be?
Isn't this fun?
Let's all try our best!

9:
Now, any brave heroes willing to shout out their names?
We will have an examination of course, but the first is always special!
---
...hm?
Er, // um...?
---
No guts to be found here at all...
This is an rare chance, though?
Eh, sempai?
[[Then, allow me...]]

10:
Goodness! What a gallant thing for the judge herself to do!
Everyone, please keep calm! Don't attack her or anything!
[[go ahead]]
whoah...
Come on now! You can't withdraw if you want to be called a man!
Oh? What's this? You're massaging them alright?
Hah! How about we continue this upstage, then!

11:
How nice! Things are finally heating up!
Thus begins the physical strength measurement by Bell-sempai! Good luck!
Whoah...
Wh-- // whoah...
Is this good?
Whatever the case, those hands are caressing that butt like mad!
That's a club entrant for you; burly!
How are you feeling?
Feels like a lie...

12:
Now, one wrong step and we just might turn this into a studio for some weird movie.
However, let me state that if you falter now you won't be accepted into the automobile club!
You will not be graced by the goddess on this stage!
Those hands are getting bolder by the minute! I'm so jealous!
How very soft, no? Let us not just look at it, let's get a feel of that sensation!

13:
Now, the target for today's examination is not just gentlemen!
We are broadly searching for new personnel.
[If the rumours have reached you, do not hesitate to call to us!]
The gate to a completely different world is in front of your eyes! // Whoever feels brave, please step forward!

14:
[[Once more <3]]
Oh my, how hot, how hot!
The place has suddenly become feverish!
Sempai, how about we begin about now?
Quite some time has passed.
The exam will happen atop this chair. Consequently, take the basic position please...
[[I'm fine whenever]]
The grading will consist of meauring the elapsed time.
Plus, Bell-sempai can add impression points to be counted with the tally.

15:
During the examination, if you rest intentionally you'll be eliminated.
Pinching your own body and other physical stuff gets you a penalty.
Each time you do it, 30% of your time will be taken off.
Err, senpai, the participant still appears to be a little nervous, ah...
Oooh, how nice! It's a rare chance, so be braver!
There appear to be many [naive] people here!
[[This is an examination, so please try your best...]]
Er... Henceforth, please begin about now.
However slow the movement, as long as you don't stop you will not be penalised.

16:
p1, Upper right bubble: For your, er, approach during the exam, as long as you do not change your position too much, you are free to use any technique you have in mind.
p1, Upper left bubble: Ah, the usual stuff is OK I think, but if you don't want to please restrain yourself to nearby.
p1, Middle bubble: The finish can be wherever you'd like, but in consideration to the next participant,
p1, Lower bubble: Eh... Um... please avoid being too flashy or excessive.
[[I'll examine everyone here. There are two, but to be fair please use the upper one.]]
The small stuff will be gradually explained live.
And now, the long-awaited---
hwb: Aaa!
hwb: Huuuh?!
...Er... Don't tell me... this is...
Goodness, how slovenly.
hw: talk about a disappointment.

17:
[[But I haven't done anything yet...]]
Oooh, how decisive of her!
[In here, the talent to shoulder our club is...?]
No helping it. Let us liven the exibition up a bit.
I had prepared this for just this case...
Dadaaan!

18:
[[I have to... use this?]]
Well then, let's use this to get a step ahead in pleasure!
[[But it's kind of embarassing...]]
How splendid! This bashful expression is so timely!
By the way this design and construction is original (lulz) by the club.

19:
Good so far? Well then, let's...
...flip all switches at once.
Now, that thing ought to be moving about inside this body.
How about it? A simple tool can [create something so delicious!]

20:
How erotic she has become! Put a toy inside a beautiful woman and a whole new world arises.
[[This is quite strong... it's moving a lot.]]
Please think about it! What a scrumptious examination, no?
[For now, by merely participating you can get such pleasant thoughts.]
Even if you lose, this is a chance to get a shot at such a beauty!
*cough* I'm sorry, I'm beginning to lose my own composure.

21:
But well, // we might be the merrymaking automobile club, but we can give you some more service.
Senpaaaai, could we hope for something a little more stimulating?
hwb: [if that's \|\ alright]
How nice! How irresistible! [How I wish someone would do that to me too!]
You too can be as stimulating as you want, but if you aren't self-confident it will end in the blink of an eye.

22:
Well then, we are worried about the club member decrease of our automotive club.
[[Come be our friend and take part in our activities! It's so fun.]]
We once had several members, but they have been decreasing of late.
Due to those activities, we had throngs of people wanting to join...
[With all those into account, we are doing this to increase the number of our applicants.]

23:
We'd preferably want some cheerful, energetic and fresh new applicants!
If you're just strong, then senpai can teach you all of the rest.
Oh wait! What an embarrassing{sp?}, borderline obscene way to lick it!
Huh? What? Look... down?

24:
Oh no, it's all so clearly visible!
Errrr, um, that's right! // Now let's measure your physical strength!
[[Are you looking? I've become [like this]...]] {I know there's a better way to put that, but I can't think of anything.}
We can't forget that we came here for exams, now, can we?

25:
So now, the thing you have all been waiting for!
[[Are you all here? Then, let's begin! Please do your best!]]
The automobile club entrance exam opens to the public!

26:
Well then, it's now late at night and the examination has reached its climax...
Right now... oh, it's seven-eights over!
The [grace period / easy time] is over too, so it's only extremely high-level contents from now on.
So, how many of you will proceed to the next examination?
It will be announced in a short while.
Furthermore, the secondary examination will take place tonight and tomorrow in the clubroom, in several groups.
[It will be overnight, so if you require it please contact us beforehand.]

27:
So, you've spent all that time here?
Don't hide away if you hate it that much.
Come // over here?
You know, don't you? How things are...
So you don't have to hide any more.
We have been
waiting for you.

30:
Ooh... // Amazing...
{3 possible meanings for this bubble. Please ask someone more experienced to arbitrate.}
Isn't that a crime or something?
Ah... // I've seen a video like this before.
But still, she's so cute. // [I can't get tired of her at all.]
Ah...
TKTK
She's really draining me though.
She cums with abandon and makes us cum with abandon too... what a busy person.

31:
We won't rest just yet.
You said the first 3 laps are with no rest, right?
c'mon.
Oooh! // Here it comes!
Outside? What a [waste].
I just pulled out. I'm not used to orgies.
Well then next... // [Let's see how many times I can get it up again.

32:
Over here.
For you to have come over here, // you must be curious, right?
You'll catch a cold over there, // so how about you come on in?
What condition is she in? // Nevermind, it's obvious.
We're just doing whatever.
I see! Nice to see you're excited.
Yeah, thanks to y---wait, who is that there?
Come on, now.
This girl // is the little sister of Bell-senpai we'd talked about. // Skuld-chan.
Come on, // greet the nice gentlemen.

33:
Furreal? She's adorable. // Is it alright to bring her here?
Is she curious?
hwb: are you OK
hwb: let's sit
It's alright! // We [are teaching / will teach] her with the utmost patience! {Depends on whether they're referring to Skuld or Belldandy}
Are you scared? It's alright.
This is just // people relieving their stress.
[An orgy is just a normal beginning.] // They're just having a bit of fun.
Your sis is really taking care of us!
We're really thankful.
Amazing, isn't it? Doesn't it get you excited?
Eh?! // Erm...
But too bad... // you were expecting the same as me.

34:
Whoah! Again...
Sorry! // Your sister is just so hot.
We can't hold back at all.
I was so waiting for this! Here, lick.
You're even drooling already.
How lively!
The girl over there // [keep looking. She is shuddering!]

35:
You're so sweaty.
I see... // so you're the same as senpai.
Kh... I can't stop...
It's the first time it's felt so hot!
You're... so... big again...
Is it... // tough for you?
Go ahead... // like this...

36:
{various grunts}
Amazing...
Was it... // that good for...
you?
Phew! You're so skilled! // You can milk me dry so quickly.
Well... // I still have
[ a ways to go.]
But my hips are killing me...
Ey wait. // We were five against one and lost?
We haven't lost. // We're just getting started.
Whatever. // I'm up.
Amazeballs!
You're still hard, aren't you? // C'mon.
Argh, amazing...

37:
[You... // you're so fucking soft...]
hwb: So good \\\ so good // aah \\\ move more // move more
Come // on!
I'm cumming! // I'm so cumming!
Phew! // Uhh, Amazing...
Wasn't that // a little... quick...
Yeah, I get it. // But we still got time.
Please... // [rape] me more...
You don't have to ask!
Well?
This is // what you wanted to see, right?

38:
... // Skuld?
I know about it, see?
You... // came here without saying anything.
Ah... // ah...
[They aren't raping me or anything.]
I see... it's about time to think about this yourself.
Though I do think... it's a little early.
I...I // er
want to... // know
why you are... // doing this... // with people
other than Keiichi, // onee-sama. {Feel free to switch the words so they fit in the bubbles better.

39:
Oof, the atmosphere got suddenly heavy.
Don't go having weird dialogues by yourselves.
[You're wondering why I am doing all this?]
But of course // because it feels so good!
Y'see, she // likes this way more than anything else.
Look, when you do this with a human...
hm...
See? It makes you happy.
Ah... hah...
That's all that goes through her head.
[Pull on this]

40:
That's interesting, come over here.
Eh...
Let's make your sister happy.
Ah! // this feels...
Oh well // Come on, milk her.
Eek! // Wai---
Looks like it hurts to pull. // Oh right, do this.
Ah // ah
Skuld // I'm lactating
[Look] // [if you do it right she really feels it.]
She's really guzzling.
Kya... Onee...sa...ma...
Is that really alright?! // Look at this...

41:
So // so good
Keep // doing this
One--- // Eeeh?
Wa // wa // so much...
I'm sorry... // I was surprised...
It's so good! // Amazing...
Can I // Beg you... more?
Oh my... // that was a thrill...
Onee... sama
You were // so good...

42:
Were you startled? // Is this your first time seeing this?
Eh...?
Ah, don't worry so much. // See how well we're getting along with your sis?
You came because you were curious, no?
...!!!
How old are you?? Oh, but maybe it's better to not know.
S, Sis---
No, no. // They're too busy over there.
You... don't *really* hate this, do you? I mean, look
if I do this
Eek! // No...

43:
Cute!
Ah // no
Eek! // Onee-sama!
ST--- // STOP
This guy // is weird
It's nothing // to be afraid of.
I mean, look at me.
See? It's nothing // unpleasant.
hah...
huh...
Ama...zing // there's so... much...
milk... // both of you...

44:
Ooh, // Cute!
No, // stop!
Look, // let's take of that shirt.
Stop! // stop!
Onee-sama, // stop them!
Are you going to just watch? // won't you come over here?
I have no interest in men.
There's nothing for me to enjoy there.
It's... alright.
Come on, // be... like me...
hwb: I'm getting all sticky again
hwb: Go ahead anytime
If you... remember this... // you can be... happy too...
I mean
Two in one day? // You're really spoiling us!

45:
Whoah! // She's so cute and pretty!
hwb: {Various disapproving cries}
Her voice is so sexy.
It's also my first time // hearing her make such voices.
Now you know more about her, right?
I... wonder. // She still has childish points...
Geheh, like her pussy?
Well... // I can't make her say that.
TKTKTKTK
koufun suru de // anna ko ni iwaretara
tobikakatte moude
Konna fuu ni... sasete?
{"Seyaseya". No idea what it means.}
That might be difficult... she's a little shy...

46:
Are you still scared? // [though you came here because you were wishing for it...]
But, take a good look... aren't they amazingly burly? // They taught me things I couldn't even imagine...
If you do this, if you just stroke yourself, // you'll feel amazing... [it's so good... isn't it?]
So, please go ahead // and receive their teachings.
Well then, go right ahead!
Oooh, cute!

47:
She's rather fresh, unlike *someone*.
Well, //

50:


51:
Aaah! // Great... you're so fucking cute!
Dude, if she's so good let me have her too!
Uhii... it really turned into an orgy!
[She's in pristine condition! Now if only I can get her off before the day is done...]
No, if we just took her 2-3 at once...

52:
If I'm your first man...
am I your first here too?
You'll get experience everywhere soon.
So... let us // teach you more disgusting things.
Whoah! they're sucking each other's lips!
Oh well... // you taught her up to the French kiss...
Save some for us too!
I'm... close...
You are inexperienced... // so let me cum... inside you...

53:
Oh, oh
Oh, oh // She is wringing me!!
hwb: N... // NOO!
hwb: STOP IT!! // DON'T DO THIS!
She's so [frail], isn't she?
hwb: [DON'T DO THIS!] {Chanto shinai to...}
Don't worry so much. // Just enjoy it.
I can't stop... I can cum, right?!
I'll make it good for you later!
Yes, go ahead! // Please teach her all about it!
I want to ask about her first impressions too...

54:
This one came!
Aha... // Thank you!
Come on, Skuld, // It's so warm, so much...
It's so cosy... // I want her to learn so soon...
This unending deliciousness...

57:
We'll have so much fun in the future.
There are lots of things worth teaching you.

58:
Odd. // [I'm not getting tired at all.]
WHA---
Oh! // Are you tired of me already?
But we were having so much fun...
No, not us! We would // never...
Kidding!
Who could get tired of something as good as this?

59:
That said
[I don't think they'd forgive themselves if they got tired...] // But is this a good thing, I wonder?
Whar are you talking about?
[I thought there might be people like this in the world, too.]
[I've searched for people happy to be satisfied, or people happy to keep wanting for something...]
[...and I still haven't found any.]

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post Apr 12 2018, 06:19
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Well, I had a look at it, and along about page 16 it became apparent that this is 'way above my pay grade', as they'd say in the military... biggrin.gif

I did ID some typos and tried tweaking some sentences (which are included below) but the range of what the characters could be saying vs what might be a good translation is beyond my ability to even guess at...

So 'fraid I wasn't much help on this one... sad.gif

PE
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[EHCOVE] [RPG COMPANY ] SILENT BELL outbreak (Ah! My Goddess)

PE NOTE: The image [page] numbers don't match the pages listed here - add 2346 to the page # to get the image #...]

===============

7:
So, we'll need a small explanation later but
our tradition is "the few elite".
------not sure if this should be something like "We'll need a small biography later..."[from the applicants], or "We'll be explaining things a bit later..."[later on]...
This time, we have plans to accept a small amount of people.
---This time we plan to accept a small number of people.
------tweak...
And the things we are after are firstly physical strength, secondly guts,
and thirdly a vitality that few can hope to imitate!
---And the things we are after are, firstly: physical strength, secondly: guts,
and thirdly: a vitality that few can hope to imitate!
------tweaked...
Yes! And to ascertain that comes our club's goddess,
to perform a physical strength measurement!
---Yes! And to ascertain that, here's our club's goddess,
to perform a physical strength measurement!
------tweak...


8:
[[Getting me to hear you is also part of the examination... everyone please try your best!]]
---[[Allowing me to hear you is also part of the examination... everyone please try your best!]]
------I guessed at a tweak...as I'm not sure what's meant by this...
I'll bet you're all brimming with anticipation!
---I'll bet you're all brim-full of anticipation!
------'possible' tweak...
If you openly join our club, you just might get to do
amazing things as much as you want!
------not sure what's meant by 'openly'...should it be 'freely'..?(even that sounds odd...)
Today, if you're right here, // it means you wanted to see for yourself, right?
---Today, if you're here, // it means you wanted to see for yourself, right?
------1st 'right' is redundant...

9:
Eh, sempai?
---Eh, senpai?
------typo....

10:
whoah...
---Whoah...
------typo...

Oh? What's this? You're massaging them alright?
---Oh? What's this? You're massaging them already?
------'possible' tweak...

11:
Thus begins the physical strength measurement by Bell-sempai! Good luck!
---Thus begins the physical strength measurement by Bell-senpai! Good luck!
------typo...

14:
Sempai, how about we begin about now?
---Senpai, how about we begin right now?
------typo...tweak....

The exam will happen atop this chair.
---The exam will happen using this chair.
---The exam will take place using this chair.
---This chair will be used for the exam.
------tweaks...

The grading will consist of meauring the elapsed time.
---The grading will consist of measuring the elapsed time.
------typo...
Plus, Bell-sempai can add impression points to be counted with the tally.
---Plus, Bell-senpai can add impression points to be counted with the tally.
------typo...

15:
During the examination, if you rest intentionally you'll be eliminated.
---If you take a rest during the examination, you'll be eliminated.
------tweaked...

However slow the movement, as long as you don't stop you will not be penalised.
---However slow the movement, as long as you don't stop, you will not be penalized.
------comma needed...typo...

17:
No helping it. Let us liven the exibition up a bit.
---No helping it. Let us liven the exhibition up a bit.
------typo...

24:
We can't forget that we came here for exams, now, can we?
---We can't forget that we came here for exams, now can we?
------typo...

31:
c'mon.
---C'mon.
------typo...

32:
What condition is she in? // Nevermind, it's obvious.
---What condition is she in? // Never mind, it's obvious.
------typo...

33:
Furreal? She's adorable. // Is it alright to bring her here?
---For real? She's adorable. // Is it alright to bring her here?
------typo...or slang expression...?

59:
Whar are you talking about?
---What are you talking about?
------typo...
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Done
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5:
Er... // Thank you all for being here today!
We are the Blue Rose automotive club from Nekomi Engineering University.
And what's happening today is this!
Wanted! New club members!
We are having a public interview for new applicants!
To all who have applied beforehand, please try your best!
The automotive club needs
young power right now!

7:
So, we'll explain more about it later, but
Our tradition is "the few elite".
This time too, we only plans to accept a few people.
And the quality we seek are: firstly physical strength, secondly guts,
and thirdly, the outstanding vitality to accomplish the impossible!
And yes! The examination will be done by our club's goddess,
a serious physical strength measurement!

8:
[[Making me talk is also part of the examination... everyone please try your best!]]
I'll bet you're all brimming with anticipation!
If you openly join our club, you just might get to do
all kinds of amazing things as much as you want!
You who came here today // it means you wanted to see “that” for yourself, right?
Can you guess what those things could be?
Isn't this fun?
Let's make best out of them!

9:
Now, any brave heroes willing to shout out their names?
We will still have an examination of course, but the first is always special!
---
...hm?
Er, // um...?
---
No guts to be found here at all...
This is an rare chance, though?
Eh, sempai?
[[Then, allow me...]]

10:
Goodness! What a gallant action for the judge herself!
Everyone, please keep calm! Don't attack her or anything!
[[go ahead]]
whoah...
Come on now! You can't withdraw now if you want to be called a man!
Oh? What's this? You're massaging them alright?
Hah! How about we continue this upstage, then!

11:
How nice! Things are finally heating up!
Thus begins the physical strength measurement by Bell-sempai! Good luck!
Whoah...
Wh-- // whoah...
Are you sure?
Those hands are caressing that butt like mad! Why do you even ask.
That's what we want to see from apllicant; burly!
How are you feeling?
Feels like a lie...

12:
Now, one wrong step and we just might turn this into a studio for some weird movie.
However, let me state that if you falter now you won't be accepted into the automobile club!
You will not be graced by the goddess on this stage!
Those hands are getting bolder by the minute! I'm so jealous!
That soft sensation! You can feel it by just looking at the action!

13:
Now, the target for today's examination is not just gentlemen!
We are broadly searching for new personnel.
If the rumors have reached you ears, ladies, do not hesitate to call to us!
The gate to a completely different world is in front of your eyes! // Whoever feels brave, please step forward!

14:
[[Once more <3]]
Oh my, how hot, how hot!
The place has suddenly become feverish!
Sempai, how about we begin about now?
Quite some time has passed.
The exam will happen atop this chair. Consequently, take the basic position please...
[[I'm fine whenever]]
The grading will consist of measuring the elapsed time.
Plus, Impression points from Bell-sempai. Then, we will have our result for the examination.

15:
During the examination, if you rest intentionally you'll be eliminated.
Pinching your own body and other physical stuff gets you a penalty.
Each time you do it, 30% of your time will be taken off.
Err, senpai, the participant still appears to be a little nervous, ah...
Oooh, how nice! It's a rare chance, so be braver!
There appear to be many [naive] people here!
[[This is an examination, so please try your best...]]
Er... Henceforth, please begin about now.
No matter how slow you move, as long as you don't stop you will not be penalized.

16:
p1, Upper right bubble: For your, er, approach during the exam, as long as you do not change your position too much, you are free to use any technique you have in mind.
p1, Upper left bubble: Ah, the usual stuff is OK I think, but if you don't want to please restrain yourself to nearby.
p1, Middle bubble: The finish can be wherever you'd like, but in consideration to the next participant,
p1, Lower bubble: Eh... Um... please avoid being too flashy… or excessive…
[[I'll examine everyone here. There are two, but just to be fair, please use the upper one.]]
The small stuff will be gradually explained live.
And now, the long-awaited---
hwb: Aaa!
hwb: Huuuh?!
...Er... Don't tell me... this is...
Goodness, how feeble.
hw: we just heated up for nothing.

17:
[[But I haven't done anything yet...]]
And I though he is really determined for this…
In here, the talent to shoulder our club is...?
Alright. Let us liven the exhibition up a bit.
I had prepared this for just this case...
Dadaaan!

18:
[[I have to... use this?]]
Well then, let's use this to get a step ahead in pleasure!
[[But it's kind of embarrassing...]]
How splendid! This bashful expression is so timely!
By the way this design and construction is original (lulz) by the club.

19:
Good so far? Well then, let's...
...flip all switches at once.
Now, that thing ought to be moving about inside this body.
How about it? A simple tool can is doing this pleasant work for you!

20:
How erotic she has become! Adults toy inside the beauty a whole new world arises.
[[This is quite strong... it's moving a lot.]]
Please think about it! What a scrumptious examination, no?
[For now, by merely participating you can get such pleasant memory]
Even if you lose, this is a chance to get a shot at such a beauty!
*cough* I'm sorry, I'm beginning to lose my own composure.

21:
But well, // we are the merrymaking automobile club, we are going give you some more service.
Senpaaaai, could we hope for something a little more stimulating?
hwb: [if that's \|\ alright]
How nice! How irresistible! I wish someone would do that to me too!
You take that way too, but if you aren't self-confident about it, it will end in the blink of an eye.

22:
Well then, we are worried about the club member decrease of our automotive club.
[[Come be our friend and take part in our activities! It's so fun.]]
We once had quite a lot of members joined in, but they have been decreasing lately.
Due to those activities, we had throngs of people wanting to join...
With all those into account, we are doing this to increase the number of our applicants.

23:
We'd preferably want some cheerful, energetic and fresh new members!
Just being strong is enough for now, senpai can teach you all of the rest later.
Oh wait! What an embarrassing borderline obscene view!
Huh? What? Look... down?

24:
Oh no, it's all so clearly visible!
Errrr, um, that's right! // Now let's measure your physical strength!
[[Can you see it? I've become [like this]...]]
It’s already so…Let’s hope she didn’t forget about the examination.

25:
So now, the thing you have all been waiting for!
[[Are you all saved up for it? Then, let's begin! Please do your best!]]
The automobile club entrance exam starts now!

26:
Well then, it's now late at night and the examination has reached its climax...
Right now... oh, it's seven-eights over!
The [grace period / easy time] is over too, so it's only extremely high-level contents from now on.
So, how many of you will proceed to the next examination?
It will be announced in a short while.
Furthermore, the secondary examination will take place tonight and tomorrow in the clubroom, in several groups.
[It will be overnight, so make your contact beforehand if needed.]

27:
So, you've spent all that time here?
Don't hide away if you hate it that much.
Come // over here?
You know, don't you? How things are...
So you don't have to hide anymore.
We have been
waiting for you.

30:
Ooh... // Amazing...
How should I put it, It feels like we are standing on the line here
Isn't that a crime or something?
Ah... // I've seen a video like this before.
But still, she's so cute. // [I can't get tired of her at all.]
Ah... but you totally incited me for all this
Nonono, let’s play it peacefully.
…She's really draining me though.
She cums with abandon and makes us cum with abandon too... what a busy person.

31:
We won't rest just yet.
You said the first 3 laps are with no rest, right?
c'mon.
Oooh! // Here it comes!
Outside? Still holding yourself, eh?
I just pulled out. I'm not used to orgies.
Well then, next... I will never get tired.
With this view in front of me.

32:
Over here.
You have come this far, you are not afraid anymore, right?
You'll catch a cold over there, // so how about you come on in?
What condition is she in? // Nevermind, it's obvious.
We're just doing whatever.
I see! Nice to see you're excited.
Yeah, thanks to you---what? who is that there?
Come on, now.
This girl // is the little sister of Bell-senpai we'd talked about. // Skuld-chan.
Come on, // greet the nice gentlemen.

33:
Furreal? She's adorable. // Is it alright to bring her to place like this?
Is she curious?
hwb: are you OK
hwb: let's sit
It's alright! // We will teach you hand over hand.
Are you scared? It's alright.
This is just // they are just excited.
It’s their first orgy // They're just having a bit of fun.
Your sis is really taking care of us!
We're really thankful.
Amazing, isn't it? Doesn't it get you excited?
Eh?! // Erm...
But too bad... // you were expecting the same as me.

34:
Whoah! Again...
Sorry! // Your sister is just so hot.
We can't hold back at all.
I was so waiting for this! Here, lick.
Do it with your drooling mouth.
How lively!
The girl over there // She is looking, and getting excited.

35:
You're so sweaty.
I see... // so you're the same as senpai.
Kh... I can't stop...
It's the first time it's felt so hot!
You're... so... big again...
Is it... // tough for you?
Go ahead... // like this...

36:
{various grunts}
Amazing...
It feels….so good… ahh… I can’t hold it…
Phew! You're so skilled! // You can milk me dry so quickly.
Ahh. You sure saved up for this.
[ a ways to go.]
Aaaa…But my hips hurt...
Ey wait. // We were five against one and lost?
We’re not lost yet. // We can still get it up.
Whatever. // I'm next.
Amazeballs!
You're still hard, aren't you? // C'mon.
Argh, amazing...

37:
[You... // you're so fucking soft...]
hwb: So good \\\ so good // aah \\\ move more // move more
Come // on!
I'm cumming! // I'm so cumming!
Phew! // Uhh, Amazing...
Wasn't that // a little... quick...
Yeah, I know. // But we still got time.
Please... // fuck me a bit longer...
You wouldn’t say that later.
Well?
This is // what you wanted to see, right?

38:
... // Skuld?
Oneesan, you knew about it?
You... // came here without asking anything.
Ah... // ah...
I’m not blaming you or anything.
Yeah…When I was thinking about it
Though I do think... it's a little hasty.
I...I // er
want to... // know
why you are... // doing this... // with people
other than Keiichi, // onee-sama. {Feel free to switch the words so they fit in the bubbles better.

39:
Oof, the atmosphere got suddenly heavy.
Don't go having a clueless conversation with yourselves.
Sp, You're wondering why I am doing all this?
It’s simple // because it feels so good!
Y'see, she // likes this way more than anything else.
Look, I can even do this in front of people...
hm...
See? It makes you happy.
Ah... hah...
That's all that goes through her head.
Just can’t hold it back
It’s still sticking up[Pull on this]

40:
Come over here. It’s really fun
Eh...
Let's make your sister happy.
Ah! // this feels...
Oh well // Come on, milk her.
Eek! // Wai---
Looks like it hurts to pull. // but if you do this.
Ah // ah
Skuld // I'm lactating
Heya // if you do it right she really feels it.
She's really guzzling.
Kya... Onee...sa...ma...
Is that really alright?! // Look at this...

41:
So // you’re so good
Keep // doing this
One--- // Eeeh?(sis)
Wa // wa // so much...
I'm sorry... // For surprising you...
It's so good! // Amazing...
Can you // Give me... more?
Oh my... // that was a thrill...
Onee... sama
You were // so good...

42:
Were you startled? // Is this your first time seeing something like this?
Eh...?
Ah, don't worry. // See how well we're getting along with your sis?
You came because you were curious, no?
...!!!
How old are you?? Oh, but maybe it's better to not know.
S, Sis---
No, no. // They're too busy over there.
You... don't *really* hate this, do you? I mean, look
even if I do this
Eek! // No...

43:
Cute!
Ah // no
Eek! // Onee-sama!
ST--- // STOP HIM
This guy // is weird
It's nothing // to be afraid of.
I mean, look at me.
See? She is so happy
hah...
huh...
Ama...zing // there's so... much...
milk... // both of you...

44:
Ooh, // Cute!
No, // stop!
Look, // let's take off that shirt.
Stop! // stop!
Onee-sama, // stop them!
Are you going to just watch? // won't you come over here?
I have no interest in men.
There's nothing for me to enjoy there.
It's... alright.
Come on, // be... like me...
hwb: I'm getting all sticky again
hwb: Go ahead anytime
If you... learn this... // you can be... happy too...
I mean
Two in one day? // You're really spoiling us!

45:
Whoah! // She's so cute and pretty!
hwb: {Various disapproving cries}
She is making some sexy noise.
It's also my first time // hearing her making such noise.
Now you know more about her, right?
Is…that so? // She still has childish points...
Geheh, can she say the word like “pussy”?
Well... // You want her to say that?
It arouses me if she says that
I will jump on her right away
And make her…like this?
Hell yeah
That might be difficult... she's a little shy...

46:
Are you still scared? // though you came here because you were wishing for it...
But, take a good look... aren't they amazingly burly? // They will teach you things you couldn't even imagine...
If you do this, just by touching it, // you'll feel amazing... [it's so good... You won’t find it anywhere else…isn't it?]
So, please go ahead // and receive their teachings.
Well then, Let’s get started!
Oooh, cute!

47:
She's rather fresh, unlike *someone*.
Well, //If you want to compare, compare the actual feelings…
If you say so.// Don’t you think you should show your sister how it’s done?
…And by that you mean…?
Like how you drain me out with your “professional acting”?
…he said it. Skuld
Oh…She is still tightened up
But…I’m fully erected, thanks to that
Ah…Wearing her down like this is also fun.
Oh…//Woa…
…How it is? Getting insert…like this…
Look! There is nothing…. difficult…about it, right?
At start…You keep your legs open…and leave the rest to them
…If you get used to it. You will be covered by happiness.
It’s ok…You will get used to it soon…

48:
Well then, the first time...
Ahhh, ahhh. Is it really ok?
If she really doesn’t want it // she can brush it away…
She too…in her heart…
You looked different. But are the same on the inside.

49:
Hwh: sex and penetration noises
I will get better // soon..!
Woah…// It’s so tight…and small...
Just a bit longer…it’s really thick here…Just endure a bit longer…
Woah…it’s getting wet…
Oh…No…He really penetrated my pussy…

50:
Skuld…// she is already making such noise…
It looks like she really loves it
Ah…so good…//I will take her now…
It feels so…good…
Annn…// he said such cold things to me…
So lonely…
I have to get some consolation...

51:
Aaah! // Great... you're so fucking cute!
Dude, if she's so good, let me have her too!
Uhii... it really turned into an orgy!
She's in pristine condition! Now if only I can get her off before the day is over...
No, if we just take her with 2-3 men at once...

52:
If I'm your first man...
Is “this” your first too?
You'll get experience everywhere soon…
So... let us // teach you more naughty things.
Whoah! they're sucking each other's lips!
Oh well... // you taught her up to the French kiss...
Save some for us too!
I'm... close...
You are inexperienced... // so let me cum... inside you...

53:
Oh, oh
Oh, oh // She is wringing me!!
hwb: N... // NOO!
hwb: STOP IT!! // DON'T DO THIS!
She's doing so well, isn't she?
hwb: [DON'T DO THIS!]
Don't worry so much. // Just enjoy it.
I can't stop... I can cum, right?!
I'll make it good for you later!
Yes, go ahead! // Please teach her all about it!
I want to ask about her first impressions too...

54:
uh…This one…came!
Aha... // Thank you!
Come on, Skuld, // It's so warm, so much...
It's so cozy... // I want her to learn so soon...
This irresistible deliciousness...

57:
We look forward to the future
There are lots of things worth teaching you.

58:
Odd. // [I'm not getting tired at all.]
WHA---
Oh! // Are you tired of me already?
But we were having so much fun...
No, not us! We would // never...
Kidding!
Who could get tired of something as good as this?

59:
That said
“Getting tired” will not be forgiven// But, is this a good thing, I wonder?
What are you talking about?
I thought there might be people like that in the world, too.
I've been searching… It is happier to be satisfied or is it happier to keep wanting
...and I still don’t understand.


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[RPG COMPANY ] SILENT BELL outbreak (Ah! My Goddess)


There are a number of sentences that I have marked with [???] as they are ambiguous or include words from seemingly different versions of the sentences...
PE
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7:
This time too, we only plans to accept a few people.
---This time too, we only plan to accept a few people.
------typo...
And the quality we seek are: firstly physical strength, secondly guts,
and thirdly, the outstanding vitality to accomplish the impossible!
---And the qualities we seek are: firstly, physical strength; secondly, guts;
and thirdly, the outstanding vitality to accomplish the impossible!
------typos...
And yes! The examination will be done by our club's goddess,
a serious physical strength measurement!
---And yes! The examination will be done by our club's goddess,
who's doing a serious physical strength measurement!
---And yes! The examination will be done by our club's goddess,
and it's a serious physical strength measurement!
------tweaks...(because the original made it sound like the club's goddess was 'a serious physical strength measurement'...)

8:
Let's make best out of them!
---Let's make the best of them!
------article needed... unneeded word...

9:
Eh, sempai?
---Eh, Senpai?
------typos...

10:
whoah...
---Whoah...
------typo...

[???]Oh? What's this? You're massaging them alright?
---Oh? What's this? You're massaging them already?
------not sure why "alright?" is used here...as that's usually used to ask permission and/or confirm that a requested action is acceptable...

11:
That's what we want to see from apllicant; burly!
---1)That's what we want to see from an applicant; burly!
---2)That's what we want to see in an applicant; burly!
------article needed... typo... "burly" is an old-fashioned word meaning "rough", "muscular", "rugged", and sometimes "heavy" or "large"... if that's what it means here, then the 2nd suggestion ("[...] in an applicant; burly!") should be used...

13:
[???]We are broadly searching for new personnel.
---We are unbiased in our search for new personnel.
------"broadly" is in the wrong place, and doesn't fit the rest of the statement... "unbiased" is the only word I can think of that includes both sexes...
If the rumors have reached you ears, ladies, do not hesitate to call to us!
---If the rumors have reached your ears, ladies, do not hesitate to call to us!
------typo...

14:
Sempai, how about we begin about now?
--- Senpai, how about we begin about now?
------typo...

Plus, Impression points from Bell-sempai. Then, we will have our result for the examination.
---Plus, Impression points from Bell-senpai. Then, we will have our result for the examination.
------typo...


15:
Err, senpai, the participant still appears to be a little nervous, ah...
---Err, Senpai, the participant still appears to be a little nervous, ah...
------typo...

[???]Er... Henceforth, please begin about now.
---Er... Please begin about now.
------"Henceforth" means "from now on" or "in the future", but that contradicts "begin about now"...unless she is referring to a special spoken phrase/command, or a 'hand sign/signal'..?

16:
[???]p1, Upper left bubble: Ah, the usual stuff is OK I think, but if you don't want to please restrain yourself to nearby.
---p1, Upper left bubble: Ah, the usual stuff is OK I think, but if you don't want to, please restrain yourself to something close to hand.
---p1, Upper left bubble: Ah, the usual stuff is OK I think, but if you don't want to, please restrain yourself.
------comma needed... but guessed on the ending as "restrain yourself to nearby" is confusing...

[???]The small stuff will be gradually explained live.
---The small stuff will be gradually explained as it happens.
---The small stuff will be gradually explained on-the-air.
------tweaked..but guessed about "explained live"...as "live" can mean many things...

hw: we just heated up for nothing.
---hw: we got excited for nothing.
------tweak...guessed at what "heated up" means...

17:
[???]And I though he is really determined for this…
---And though he is really determined to do this…
---And I thought he is really determined to do this…
---And I thought he was really determined to do this…
------not sure if there's a typo or unneeded word, so guessed at her statement...
[???]In here, the talent to shoulder our club is...?
------"shoulder our club" is confusing... "strengthen"..."help"..."improve"..."bolster"...???

I had prepared this for just this case...
Dadaaan!
---I had prepared this for just this happening...
Dadaaan!
---I had prepared this for just this occurrence...
Dadaaan!
------tweaks...

18:
Well then, let's use this to get a step ahead in pleasure!
---Well then, let's use this to move a step ahead in pleasure!
---Well then, let's use this to move a pleasurable step ahead!
------tweaked...but "in pleasure" is a bit confusing...

By the way this design and construction is original (lulz) by the club.
---By the way, the club originated (lulz) the design and construction of this.
------tweaked...but "(lulz)" may not be in the right place...

19:
How about it? A simple tool can is doing this pleasant work for you!
---How about it? A simple tool can do this pleasant work for you!
---How about it? A simple tool is doing this pleasant work for you!
------not sure which word is redundant...

20:
How erotic she has become! Adults toy inside the beauty a whole new world arises.
---How erotic she has become! With an adult toy inside the beauty, a whole new world arises.
---How erotic she has become! An adult toy inside the beauty creates a whole new world.
------typos... tweaks...

[For now, by merely participating you can get such pleasant memory]
---[For now, by merely participating you can have such a pleasant memory]
---[For now, by merely participating you create such a pleasant memory]
------tweaks...

21:
But well, // we are the merrymaking automobile club, we are going give you some more service.
---But well, // we are the merrymaking automobile club, so we are going give you some more service.
---But well, // we are the merrymaking automobile club, and we are going give you some more service.
------tweaks...

[???]You take that way too, but if you aren't self-confident about it, it will end in the blink of an eye.
------not sure what this means or refers to...

22:
Well then, we are worried about the club member decrease of our automotive club.
---Well then, we are worried about the decreasing club membership in our automotive club.
---Well then, we are worried about our decreasing automotive club membership.
------tweaks...
[[Come be our friend and take part in our activities! It's so fun.]]
---[[Come be our friend and take part in our activities! It's such fun.]]
------tweak...
[???]We once had quite a lot of members joined in, but they have been decreasing lately.
---We once had quite a lot of members joining, but lately they have been decreasing.
---We once had quite a lot of members but lately the numbers have been decreasing.
------tweaks...but not sure if she's taking about members joining or that had joined...

[???]With all those into account, we are doing this to increase the number of our applicants.
---Taking all those things into account, we are doing this to increase the number of our applicants.
------guessed about what "With all those into account" means...

23:
We'd preferably want some cheerful, energetic and fresh new members!
---We'd prefer some cheerful, energetic and fresh new members!
------tweaked...
Just being strong is enough for now, senpai can teach you all of the rest later.
---Just being strong is enough for now, Senpai can teach you all of the rest later.
------typo...

26:
[???]The [grace period / easy time] is over too, so it's only extremely high-level contents from now on.
------what's meant by "contents"...?

[It will be overnight, so make your contact beforehand if needed.]
---[It will be overnight, so arrange your partner beforehand if needed.]
------tweaked... but guessed at meaning...

30:
[???]How should I put it, It feels like we are standing on the line here
---How should I put it, it feels like we are standing on the line here.
------typo... period needed... but what's meant by "standing on the line"?

Ah... but you totally incited me for all this
---Ah... but you totally excited me for all this.
------tweaked, but guessed at meaning...

31:
You said the first 3 laps are with no rest, right?
---You said the first 3 laps are without rest, right?
------'possible' tweak...
c'mon.
---C'mon.
------typo...

32:
You have come this far, you are not afraid anymore, right?
---You have come this far, so you are not afraid anymore, right?
------tweaked...

33:
Furreal? She's adorable. // Is it alright to bring her to place like this?
---For real? She's adorable. // Is it alright to bring her to a place like this?
------typo or 'slurred-slang'? article needed...

[???]It's alright! // We will teach you hand over hand.
---It's alright! // We will teach you hand-over-hand.
------usually hyphenated, but I don't understand why it's used here, as "hand-over-hand" means alternating hands when climbing/pulling on a rope or handling something like a long plank...

35:
I see... // so you're the same as senpai.
---I see... // so you're the same as Senpai.
------typo...

38:
I...I // er
want to... // know
why you are... // doing this... // with people
other than Keiichi, // onee-sama.
---I...I // er
---want to... // know
---why you are... // doing this... // with people
---other than Keiichi, // Onee-sama.
------typo...

39:
Oof, the atmosphere got suddenly heavy.
---Oof, suddenly the atmosphere got heavy.
---Oof, the atmosphere got heavy all of a sudden.
------tweaks...

hm...
---Hm...
------typo...?

45:
Hell yeah
---Hell yeah.
------typo...

46:
Are you still scared? // though you came here because you were wishing for it...
---Are you still scared? // though you came here because you wished to...
---Are you still scared? // though you came here because you wanted to...
------tweaks...

47:
But…I’m fully erected, thanks to that
---But…I’m fully erect, thanks to that,
------typos...

…How it is? Getting insert…like this…
---…How it is? Getting an insert…like this…
--- …How it is? Getting something in…like this…
------tweaks...

At start…You keep your legs open…and leave the rest to them
---At the start…You keep your legs open…and leave the rest to them,
---To start…You keep your legs open…and leave the rest to them.
------tweaks...
…If you get used to it. You will be covered by happiness.
---…If you get used to it. You will be covered in happiness.
------more common wording...

59:
I've been searching… It is happier to be satisfied or is it happier to keep wanting
...and I still don’t understand.
---I've been searching… It is happier to be satisfied or is it happier to keep wanting...?
...and I still don’t understand.
------think it needs to end in a question mark... and be two sentences...

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post Jun 26 2018, 00:25
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Sorry about all the typos.
Btw, sorry for keeping you waiting. I was actually checking in to the forum every day for your contact, thinking that you will PM me. Please PM me if you have problem/questions.

10.
Oh? What's this? You're massaging them properly(しっかり)

11
That's what we want to see in an applicant; burly!
---last word is for たくましい, I suppose resolute or bold might work better for this situation.

13.
We are doing a wide search for new personnel.

15.
Er... therefore, please begin about now.

16.
Ah, most of play are acceptable. But, if she doesn’t like it, please just stop.


The small stuff will be gradually explained during LIVE action.

17,
And I thought he was really determined to do this…


In here, the talent that will power our club is...?

I had prepared this for just this occurrence...
Dadaaan!

18.
Well then, let's use this to get a head-start on pleasure!

By the way, the club originated the design and construction of this. (lulz)

19.
How about it? A simple tool is doing this pleasant work for you!


20
How erotic she has become! With an adult toy inside the beauty, a whole new world arises.

[For now, by merely participating you create such a pleasant memory]

21.
But well, // we are the merrymaking automobile club, so we are going give you some more service.

You can take that way too, but if you aren't really good at it, it will end in the blink of an eye.
I think it’s referring to oral play.

22.
Well then, we are worried about the decreasing membership in our automotive club.

We once had quite a lot of members but lately the numbers have been decreasing.
---it’s not very clear in Japanese either, I’m guessing members that had joined.

23.
We’ve got some really good results. Maybe you can even say that was some high-level performance.

It will last through the night, so make your phone calls beforehand if needed.

30.
How should I put it, it feels like we are straddling the line here.

Ah... but you totally stirred me up for all this.

33.
For real? She's adorable. // Is it alright to bring her to a place like this?

It's alright! // We will teach you the 'hands-on' way.

39.
Oof, the atmosphere got heavy all of a sudden

Nm…
46.
Are you still scared? // though you came here because you wanted to...

47.
How it is? Getting an insert…like this…

To start…You keep your legs open…and leave the rest to them.

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To commemorate our latest release (SILENT BELL outbreak to be released in few hours give or take), here's the old reading list by Doomdragon2, updated with new links. Presented in suggested reading order, with dates of releases of RAW dojins added if someone cares to rearrange this into chronological release list.

I will update the rest with links and comments, time permitting. Feel free to tell me what's wrong/missing. Also to do: [www.doujinshi.org] check mugi for any missing books not scanned yet. Also if you can read JPN maybe you can dig out some info at [rpgcompany.blog2.fc2.com] http://rpgcompany.blog2.fc2.com/ or [web.archive.org] https://web.archive.org/web/20161105183943/...om:80/openbook/

-1998-08-14 Wedding bell ch. 3 starting on p.59 TRANSLATED (the first two and the wedding intermission don't seem much related, seem different story by the same author), later collected in the 2003-08-01 BELLS COLLECTION 1995-2003 ch1. The revised book has NOT (re)TRANSLATED

-1995-12-29 Liberty bell TRANSLATED, later collected in the BELLS COLLECTION 1995-2003 ch2

-1996-08-03 Megami Tamashii | Ah My Goddess Spirits ch2 starting on p.12 TRANSLATED (the others are not related, different author)

-1999-08-13 Silent Bell - Ah! My Goddess Outside-Story The Latter Half - 2 and 3 TRANSLATED collected in the BELLS COLLECTION 1995-2003 ch3 and ch4 (BELLS COLLECTION 1995-2003 have also some bonus pics outside the story)

-2003-03-31 silent bell aberration chapters 1-3 NOT TRANSLATED (1999-12-01 Silent Bell -Echo- Ah! My Goddess Outside-Story was inserted as silent bell aberration ch1, the chapter in Fujishima Spirits 2 (from 2000) was inserted as ch.2, the chapter in Fujishima Spirits 4 (from 2003) was inserted as silent bell ch.3) ch.4 seems to happen after silent bell infection. Just to confirm, no, Echo, FS2 and FS4 have not been translated so far.

[movie star saga starts around here]

2006-10-01 movie star1+ aka movie star 1 plus TRANSLATED (contains and adds to the 2004 doujin NIT MCC movie star secret)

2003-11-30 Silent Bell_infection ch.2 TRANSLATED (ch.1 is a shorter version of the first movie star included in color the above movie star+, ch.2 is the real infection)

2003-03-31 Silent Bell_aberration ch.4 NOT TRANSLATED goes here?

[start of movie star II mostly focused on Belldandy and Sora]

2004-11-30 Silent Bell patients NOT TRANSLATED but this is effectively two pages of ch.1 "latent" as ch.2 is b&w version of movie star IIa and ch.3 is the b&w version of movie star IIb+, both IIa and IIb+ have been translated.

2007-10-31 movie star IIa first half TRANSLATED. Naming note: front cover is not readable, middle pages say IIa but end cover says 2a.

2007-04-22 movie star IIb+ first half TRANSLATED (remake of the first half of movie star IIb). Naming note: cover has IIb Plus, as do pages in the middle, but end cover has 2b Plus.

2005-06-19 movie star IIb TRANSLATED second half (not on the movie star IIb+) Naming note: cover and back cover have IIb.

2007-04-22 movie star IIb+ second half TRANSLATED

2007-10-31 movie star IIa second half TRANSLATED

[start of movie star III mostly focused on Skuld]

2006-04-23 movie star IIIa TRANSLATED (first half is the remake colorized of silent bell outbreak ch.1 except last 2 pages of out ch.1). Naming note: front page has clear IIIa as does the middle page but end cover 3a. It seems that around that time ~2006 the dojins started to have inconsistent roman and arabic numerals on front and back pages, making figuring out the best title a pain.

Silent Bell outbreak last 2 pages of ch.1 (not in movie star IIIa) that's outbreak pages 25 and 26 and fist 2 pages of ch.2 ) not in movie star IIIb) that's the outbreak 30, 31

2006-12-29 movie star IIIb TRANSLATED first 11 pages of first half (continued colorized remake of silent bell outbreak). Also, naming note: front page has clear IIIb as does the third page but end cover 3b.

Silent Bell outbreak ch.2 4 pics listed above (not in movie star IIIb) that's outbreak pages 39-42

2006-12-29 movie star IIIb movie star IIIb TRANSLATED (last part of the first half, continues the colorized outbreak remake)

Silent Bell outbreak ch2 last 2pics (not in movie star IIIb) those are outbreak pages 58, 59)

2006-12-29 movie star IIIb (second half) TRANSLATED

2007-06-17 movie star IIIc TRANSLATED. Naming note: same as in IIIb

2009-06-07 movie star 3d+ TRANSLATED We do not have any information on 3d including whether it exists. And yes, it is 3d not IIId according to third page and the back cover (front cover is illegible).

[intro of another character, Chihiro Fujimi?]

stuff from here on is generally NOT TRANSLATED

2008-12-30 Silent Bell Orchid

2007-07-31 Silent Bell upstage

[there is no indication that movie star IV / 4 series exists, it would cover the Fujimi arc?]

[the start to the hot spring saga of movie star V / 5 and introduction of keiichi's mother, Takano]

2007-12-31 Silent Bell Hotspring ch.1 maybe to be remade colorized in movie star Va that does not seem to have been scanned or perhaps even made, not seeing it on mugi)

2008-04-20 movie star Vb aka 5b (alt RAW) (remake colorized of Silent bell Hotspring ch2). And yes, it does not help that the artist is not consistent with roman and arabic numerals. Front page is not readable, end cover has 5b, 3rd page has Vb. Generally it seems that the artist switched from roman to arabic numerals around that time in the series... for a while

[from here on it seem pretty linear with the hot spring saga]

2008-08-15 Movie star 5c front cover not readable, third page and end cover have 5c...

2009-08-01 Movie star 5d front cover not readable, third page and end cover have 5d

2010-08-13 Movie star 5e front cover not readable, back cover says 5e

(any one have seen the Vf / 5f?) not scanned? does it exist?

2013-08-10 Movie star 5g (alt RAW) both front and end cover say 5g

Vh / 5h does not seem to exist/be scanned

2008-11-01 Movie star 6a Cover has VIa, middle and back cover 6a, sigh

Movie star VIb / 6b not scanned? does it exist?

2010-02-07 Movie star 6c Cover has VIc, middle and back cover 6c

2010-06-20 Movie star 6d Cover has VIdm middle and back 6d

Movie star VIe / 6f not scanned? does it exist?

2011-08-12 Movie star 6f All pages (front, middle, back) say 6f. Finally consistent again.

Movie star VIg / 6g not scanned? does it exist?

2011-12-29 Movie star 6h All pages (front, middle, back) say 6h

[Movie star VII not scanned? does it/they exist?]

2010-12-29 Movie star 8a. Front has VIIIa, middle and back 8a. But this was released before VIf, so basically year 2011 marks the 'back to consistent naming' using roman numerals.

[no other parts of Movie Star 8 exist?]

2014-08-15 Movie star 9a. Consistent use of 9a throughout.

2015-05-02 Movie star 9b. TRANSLATED

[no other parts of Movie Star 9 exist?]

2014-12-28 Movie star 10a

[no other parts of Movie Star 10 exist?]

2016-08-13 Movie Star 11a TRANSLATED

2017-08-12 Movie Star 12a

2018-08-11 Movie Star 13a

2019-04-29 Movie Star 14a


and Candy bell 8 likely fits somewhere here (the other candy Bell are with the main "BELL" stories).

Nearly forgetting, we have the outside stories it seem (?) not related to the above ones

1998-08-14 Wedding bell ch.1 e ch.2 and intermission (I think a stand alone not really related to the outside stories?)

2001-08-10 Fujishima Spirits 3 Fujishima Spirits ch.3 "love live" TRANSLATED (other stories not related because done by different authors?)

2001-12-30 Candy bell - Ah! My Goddess Outside-Story (continuation of love live)

2002-12-30 Candy Bell 2 Ah! My Goddess Outside-Story

2003-08-17 Candy bell 3 Ah! My Goddess Outside-Story (prelude to mint candy)

2005-07-31 Candy Bell 4 Pure Mint Candy

2006-08-13 Candy bell 5 38oC+sweet "H"eart (remake of Pure Mint Candy -Pilot ver.- ) (not sure but it make more sense here since there is the start of the mint candy saga in Candy bell 4 and you don't see the young boy anymore)

[mint candy saga]

2008-08-17 Candy bell 6 Pure Mint Candy 2 "SPOILED"

2009-12-29 Candy bell 7 Pure Mint Candy 3

[the start of another saga?+

2012-12-29 Candy bell 8 very very strawberry

2015-08-15 Cand Bell 9

2015-12-30 Candy Bell 10

2016-12-29 Candy Bell 11

2017-12-30 Candy Bell 12

2018-12-29 Candy Bell 13

I am not sure were to put Very Sweet Candy

recent bad translation of Urd story not related because different author?

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Hello, I hope this is the right place to post this, this is where the bounty page linked me to, but I notice it isn't the unnumbered bounty page I used last time.

I accepted the translation bounty for "Eclair o Motto Monde Miyou!"
Bounty Page: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=19455
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I already have about 5 true pages done. I will probably finish the first draft this weekend. I might be busy for 3 weeks after this weekend, but I should have at least enough time to revise if needed.
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Bounty link was wrong, my bad, but it's not a biggie, I got your PM (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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Accepted bounty for VanDerGraf.

Bounty page: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=21095]
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Will have it done within the week, within today if possible.

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I would like to accept the bounty for VanDerGraf.

Bounty page: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=20707
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Will have it done in two weeks from today.
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