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This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jul 24 2014, 06:21

Here's the prototype and it may need to be proofread and trimmed, just like a previous work.
Tell me if there's anything that is awkward or incomprehensible or bad.
Postscript was the hardest part...

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Page 5
2nd frame, left
-B1, KOS-MOS
=== Ah... Allen(*)... Please sto(p)...
*** (*Not sure about English name)

-B2, K
=== We can't do that now in here!

-B3, SFX
=== *SLIDE*



3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, Allen
=== Hehe♪ Everyone would know this if you keep making loud voice♪

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Page 6
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Heh... it's no use trying to deactivate the vocalization circuit LOL

-B2, SFX
=== JIGGLE

2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== It would be waste of your nice panting voice (if you just keep quite).
=== I already banned you from changing mode autonomically.

-B2, SFX
=== PUSH (Or Press)

-B3, K
=== Agh...


3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Huh?

-B2, K
=== Mmg...


4th frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== (You're wet though)I didn't do anything yet.
=== Are you expecting something?

-B2, K
=== No...

-2 Large Hand Writings, Bottom right & bottom left of frame, SFX
=== *SHIVER*

-B3~4, SFX
=== *WET...*
=== *SLOPPY...*

-B5, K
=== N...
=== No I'm not...

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Page 7
1st frame, top
-B1, A
=== Then is it because you like the situation like this?

-B2, K
=== Mm...gh..

-B3, K
=== H...mm...

-B4, A
=== Though you're being teased right next to everyone♪


2nd frame, bottom
-B1, A
=== What's this?
=== Unbelievably naughty robot girl you are

-B2, SFX
=== *STRINGY* (or *STICKY*)

-B3, K
=== No...o...
=== It can't...

-4 thick handwritings, From top left to the middle right of frame, SFX
=== *BLUSH*

-B4, A
=== Dispart your gears.(=Take off your cloth)

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Page 8
2nd frame, Big one on the top
-B1, K
=== M...mm...

-B2, K
=== H... Mm...


3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Mg... Hmf...


-B2, K
=== Mm... Hm...


4th frame, bottom left
-Handwriting, SFX
=== *DRIBBLE*

-B1, K
=== H...m... Mm...m...

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Page 9
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Hya...
=== Mm... Hm...M...

-B2, SFX
=== *BRUSH*

-B3, A
=== Hmm,
=== You're getting better in this Kosmos-San♪


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Mmg...

-B2, K
=== Mm...

-B3, A
=== I should reward you for that. Naughty Kosmos...


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== Hyaa...

-B2, A
=== (Following the previous line(2nd frame B3)Loves this place being licked like this, right?♪

-B3, SFX
=== *GAPE*

-B4, SFX
=== *TICKLE* *TICKLE*
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Page 10
1st frame, right
-B1, K
=== Ah...H... Aah...

-B2, K
=== Allen...
=== That's... No...

-HW, SFX
=== *JIGGLE*

-B3~4, SFX
=== *SLOSH* X3


2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== St..op...

-HWs, top left and bottom right of frame, SFX
=== *LICK* (Or *Roll*?)
*** (*Original word is 'れろ', the SFX from JoJo's bizzare adventure part3.(In the scene wich Kakyoin rolls cherry on his tongue)


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== Mm... H...

-B2, SFX
=== *FLINCH*

-B3, K
=== ...Ahh...?

-B4, SFX
=== *AWAY...*
*** (*SFX for detaching his tongue(and head) from Kosmos)
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Page 11
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== What? Do you want some more?

-B2, SFX
=== *HEARTTHUMP*

-B3, A
=== Hmm. I'm all fine with that but...(=I will lick you more if you want)


2nd frame, top left
-HW, SFX
=== *BLUSH*

-B1, K
=== ...Uh...

-B2. K
=== Um...

-B3, A
=== This position makes my neck strained.
=== So I won't do it anymore-♪


3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== Mm...

-B2, K
=== Ah...

-B3, SFX
=== *DITHER* (or *FIDGET*)

-B4, SFX
=== *OPEN*

-B5, A
=== Hehe♪
=== ...Well, Miss Kosmos(*), What do you want me to do in where?
=== I need a clear explanation spoken in your own mouth♪
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Page 12
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== ...Ah... Mm...

-B2, K
=== I... I...want
=== My artificial genital's... cli...toris...
=== to be irritated by... Allen's tongue... please...

-B3, SFX
=== *DRIP*


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Look♪
=== You can say what you want clearly.

-B2, SFX
=== *SPLASH*

-B3, K
=== Hyaa!!


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Raise your leg!

-B2, K
=== Kya...

-HW, SFX
=== *PUSH*
*** (* SFX for grabbing Kosmos' leg and opening it but I can't think out better word)

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Page 13
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Allen... No...

-B2, K
=== Don't put... your tongue in...
=== Kyah!!

-HW, SFX
=== *TREMBLE*X2

-B3, SFX
=== *CHUPA* *CHUPA*

-HW, bottom right of frame, SFX

-B4, SFX
=== *LICK*


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Ah... HM... Mm...

-B2~3, SFX
=== *CHUPA* *CHUP...*

-HW, SFX
=== *TREMBLE* *TREMBLE...*

-B4, K (Continues to the next frame)
=== Mgh... Ah... Ah...
=== Ahmm...!!(*)
*** (*Covered in her mouth while groaning)

3rd frame, bottom left

-B5, SFX
=== *SLOSH*

-B6, K
=== Hm... Mmm...

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Page 14
1st frame, top right
-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOSH*


2nd frame, top
-B1, K
=== Hya...

-B2, SFX
=== *TEARS* or *DRIP* or *MOISTY*

-B3, A
=== ...Well then...♪

-B4, K
=== Ha...(*sound for gasping)

-B5, K
=== ...Hah...'

-B6, A
=== What do you want for the next?
=== Dear naughty robot girl(*)♪
*** (*Literal translation is 'Naughty robot girl-San')


3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== A...llen...
=== Into me...

-B2, K
=== Insert Allen's genital...
=== Into... me... plea..se...

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Page 15
1st frame, top right
-B1, SFX
=== *SLOPPY*

-B2, A
=== Here it is horny robot girl♡


2nd frame, top
-B1, K
=== Mmg... Ha...

-B2, K
=== Kya-mm...
=== Ah... Aah...


-B3, K
=== Agh... Hm...Mmg...


3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Ahg...

-B2, A
=== You begs for dick with your own mouth.
=== It was well worth teaching you.

-B3, K
=== Mmg... Mmh♡
=== Ah...h...

-B3~4, SFX
=== *WET* X2


4th frame, bottom left
-B1, SFX
=== * SLOPPY*


5th frame, bottom left
-B1, SFX
=== *SLOPPY*

-B2, A
=== He-y♪
=== You like rubbing the rim of opening softly, right?

-B3, K
=== Hyah...

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Page 16
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Kya...

-B2, A
=== But♪
=== I can't be satisfied with it so I won't do it softly♪

-B3, K
=== Allen...
=== No...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPLASH* X3


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== ...Argh...!!
=== It's too fast...(Small words)

-B2, K
=== Haaah...

-B3, K
=== Ah... Mhg...

-HW, SFX
=== *SQUIRT*


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== ...Ah...
=== Mmgh...

-B2, K
=== Hmmm....

-B3, SFX
=== *WARM* *WARM*

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Page 17
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Mm... Ah...

-B2, K
=== Alle..n...
=== Slow it... down...
=== Just a little...
=== Ah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPANK* *SPANK* *SPANK*


2nd frame, middle right
-HWs, SFX
=== *SOAKED*


3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== Ooh... Aah...
=== Stop it... for now
===... Please...

-B2, K
=== Drainage... Warning is...
=== Ahg...


4th frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== Kyaaa!!

-HW, SFX
=== *SPLASH*

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Page 18
1st frame, top right
-B1, SFX
=== *GRIN*


3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== ...Look♡

-B2, Mion
=== ZZZ


4th frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== She will wake up if you keep pants that loud...
=== Do you want to show yourself tangled with me to your loving chief engineer(*)?
*** (Japanese word is just '主任' = Chief. Please tell me if you know her position)

-B2, K
=== Ah... No...

-B3, K
=== I... can't...

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Page 19
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Hhm...!

-B2, K
=== Mm...Mhg...

-B3, K
=== ...Hhmmm...
=== ...Hm... Kyah...

-B4, K
=== Kya...aahn!?

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPLASH* *SLOPPY* *SLOPPY*

2nd frame, top top right
-B1, SFX
=== *PRESS*


3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== No...

-B2, K
=== Mion is...
=== Mio...n... will...

-B3, SFX
=== *SHIVER*

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Page 20
1st frame, top right
-B1, K
=== Mion gonna...
=== Ahg...


2nd frame, top
-B1, K
=== Wake up and...
=== See it...

-B2, K
=== Kyaaaah♡

-B3, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

-B4, SFX
=== *SPOUT*


3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Hmh... Ah...

-B2, K
=== Ha...(*Sound for gasping, not laughing)


4th frame, bottom left
-B1~2, two bubble on the top of frame, SFX
=== *TREMBLE* *TREMBLE*

-B3, K
=== Ha...

-B4, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

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Page 21
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== ...To tell the truth♪

-B2, SFX
=== *THUD*


2nd frame, top
-B1, A
=== Don't worry.
=== I put sleeping pills in dinner so she never wake up♪

-B2, K
=== Ah...
=== Ahhh...

-B3, A
=== Uh oh.
=== Did that feel good that much?

-B4, SFX
=== *DRIP*

-B5, SFX
=== *SQUIRT*

-HWs, SFX
=== *TREMBLE*


3rd frame, bottom
-B1, A
=== You're becoming prisoner of mine(*)♪
*** (*Original word is' 俺様(O-re-sa-ma)'(俺(Ore = I or me) + 様(Sama = Most honorific term in japanese)) but I can't translate this in English...)

-B2, A
=== Kosmos♪

-B3, K
=== Ha...(Panting)

-B4, K
=== Ha...

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Page 23
-White letters above the white section, barely read.
=== Pages for some scribbles all of sudden.

-In white section, from top to bottom
1. Actually it's pages for Summer Wars.

2. It was shown in the theater until just now so, I can't imagine how long will it take until the DVD is released.

3. ↑Decisive weapon(or vehicle) for the Greater East Asia
(Remember pearl harbor... (written by translator))

4. It's my most favorite one among the recent Animations lol

5. To be more specific, I was fascinated by Ah-Chyan's dashing figure.

6. And, um, that made my heart beat flutter too.

7. Because of Kazuma-Tan... (Emabarassed)

8. And she's deceiving her self, like It's O.K because I am a girl actually.

9. ←Can't fight the Bunny girl.

(I translated it but so hard to understand this because I don't know anything about that 'Summer Wars' except it's title of some Animation (or Novel or... Comic or something))

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Page 24
-From top to bottom
1. Picture of Natsuki-Chyan's deer-eared avatar... or something lol
It's cute!! It's Mrs.Hudson! Damn!

2. But, I like her wearing Hakama(*One of Japanese traditional cloth), before she trasform.

3. I find out more serious compromise.→
Drawing hutanari after a while~
If it's Kazuma-Tan! (What?)

4. It's the one that awarded grand prize at avatar contest holded in my brain.
(I can't figure out what's 'ぺストアバター'... Fast Avatar? Pest Avatar? Fest(ival) Avatar? Paste Avatar?)

5. See you again~

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Page 25

Postscript

Good Morning, It's Nakajima-.
I'm still doing some cruel things to Kosmos-San as before so
I ask to myself, 'Do I really like Kosmos!?' and, well, I LOVE KOSMOS.
It's like old couple seeking for some fresh stimulation(*). (Hm?)
(*I shortened this part)

Anyway, How much do I like doggy style?
(*Or 'Anyway, guess I really like the doggy style'.)
I'm seeking for something new and I'll keep myself devoted on the Way of Kosmos(*).
(*Or Kosmos studying?)

This time I worked on two books and I'm afraid it's flimsy.
Excuse me with it for this time!
I'll work more hard on my job~!
Wish you have a nice new year~!
(Like it's echoing)

Nakajima Rei.





I've been a good kid for this year so Santa Clause will bring me Kosmos for sur

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Proofread version

Changed Mion to Shion

Chief is OK without Engineer

Various minor English fixes

I recommend watching Summer Wars, one of the best anime movies of the past few years - worth your time (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

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Page 5
2nd frame, left
-B1, KOS-MOS
=== Ah... Allen(*)... Please sto(p)...
*** (*Not sure about English name)

-B2, K
=== We can't do that in here, now!

-B3, SFX
=== *SLIDE*
3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, Allen
=== Hehe♪ They'll notice you if your voice is too loud♪

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Page 6
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Heh... it's no use trying to deactivate the vocalization circuit

-B2, SFX
=== JIGGLE

2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== It would be waste of your nice panting voice if you were to stop.
=== I already banned you from changing mode.

-B2, SFX
=== PUSH (Or Press)

-B3, K
=== Agh...
3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Huh?

-B2, K
=== Mmg...
4th frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== You are wet though I didn't do anything yet.
=== Are you expecting something?

-B2, K
=== No...

-2 Large Hand Writings, Bottom right & bottom left of frame, SFX
=== *SHIVER*

-B3~4, SFX
=== *WET...*
=== *SLOPPY...*

-B5, K
=== N...
=== No I'm not...

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Page 7
1st frame, top
-B1, A
=== Then is it because you like this situation?

-B2, K
=== Mm...gh..

-B3, K
=== H...mm...

-B4, A
=== Though you're being teased right next to everyone♪
2nd frame, bottom
-B1, A
=== What's this?
=== What an unbelievably naughty robot girl

-B2, SFX
=== *STRINGY* (or *STICKY*)

-B3, K
=== No...o...
=== It can't...

-4 thick handwritings, From top left to the middle right of frame, SFX
=== *BLUSH*

-B4, A
=== Take your clothes off

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Page 8
2nd frame, Big one on the top
-B1, K
=== M...mm...

-B2, K
=== H... Mm...
3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Mg... Hmf...
-B2, K
=== Mm... Hm...
4th frame, bottom left
-Handwriting, SFX
=== *DRIBBLE*

-B1, K
=== H...m... Mm...m...

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Page 9
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Hya...
=== Mm... Hm...M...

-B2, SFX
=== *BRUSH*

-B3, A
=== Hmm,
=== You're getting better in this KOS-MOS-San♪
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Mmg...

-B2, K
=== Mm...

-B3, A
=== I should reward you for that. Naughty KOS-MOS...
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== Hyaa...

-B2, A
=== (Following the previous line(2nd frame B3)...loves this place being licked like this, right?♪

-B3, SFX
=== *GAPE*

-B4, SFX
=== *TICKLE* *TICKLE*
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Page 10
1st frame, right
-B1, K
=== Ah...H... Aah...

-B2, K
=== Allen...
=== That's... No...

-HW, SFX
=== *JIGGLE*

-B3~4, SFX
=== *SLOSH* X3
2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== St..op...

-HWs, top left and bottom right of frame, SFX
=== *LICK* (Or *Roll*?)
*** (*Original word is 'れろ', the SFX from JoJo's bizzare adventure part3.(In the scene wich Kakyoin rolls cherry on his tongue)
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== Mm... H...

-B2, SFX
=== *FLINCH*

-B3, K
=== ...Ahh...?

-B4, SFX
=== *AWAY...*
*** (*SFX for detaching his tongue(and head) from Kosmos)
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Page 11
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== What? Do you want some more?

-B2, SFX
=== *HEARTTHUMP*

-B3, A
=== Hmm. I'm all fine with that but...(=I will lick you more if you want)
2nd frame, top left
-HW, SFX
=== *BLUSH*

-B1, K
=== ...Uh...

-B2. K
=== Um...

-B3, A
=== This position makes my neck strained.
=== So I won't do it anymore-♪
3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== Mm...

-B2, K
=== Ah...

-B3, SFX
=== *DITHER* (or *FIDGET*)

-B4, SFX
=== *OPEN*

-B5, A
=== Hehe♪
=== ...Well, Miss KOS-MOS, What do you want me to do in where?
=== I need a clear explanation spoken from your own mouth♪
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Page 12
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== ...Ah... Mm...

-B2, K
=== I... I...want
=== My artificial genital's... cli...toris...
=== to be irritated by... Allen's tongue... please...

-B3, SFX
=== *DRIP*
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Look♪
=== You can say what you want clearly.

-B2, SFX
=== *SPLASH*

-B3, K
=== Hyaa!!
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Raise your leg!

-B2, K
=== Kya...

-HW, SFX
=== *PUSH*
*** (* SFX for grabbing Kosmos' leg and opening it but I can't think out better word)

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Page 13
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Allen... No...

-B2, K
=== Don't put... your tongue in...
=== Kyah!!

-HW, SFX
=== *TREMBLE*X2

-B3, SFX
=== *CHUPA* *CHUPA*

-HW, bottom right of frame, SFX

-B4, SFX
=== *LICK*
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Ah... HM... Mm...

-B2~3, SFX
=== *CHUPA* *CHUP...*

-HW, SFX
=== *TREMBLE* *TREMBLE...*

-B4, K (Continues to the next frame)
=== Mgh... Ah... Ah...
=== Ahmm...!!(*)
*** (*Covered in her mouth while groaning)

3rd frame, bottom left

-B5, SFX
=== *SLOSH*

-B6, K
=== Hm... Mmm...

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Page 14
1st frame, top right
-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOSH*
2nd frame, top
-B1, K
=== Hya...

-B2, SFX
=== *TEARS* or *DRIP* or *MOISTY*

-B3, A
=== ...Well then...♪

-B4, K
=== Ha...(*sound for gasping)

-B5, K
=== ...Hah...'

-B6, A
=== What do you want for the next?
=== Miss naughty robot girl♪
3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== A...llen...
=== Into me...

-B2, K
=== Insert Allen's genital...
=== Into... me... plea..se...

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Page 15
1st frame, top right
-B1, SFX
=== *SLOPPY*

-B2, A
=== Here it is horny robot girl♡
2nd frame, top
-B1, K
=== Mmg... Ha...

-B2, K
=== Kya-mm...
=== Ah... Aah...
-B3, K
=== Agh... Hm...Mmg...
3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Ahg...

-B2, A
=== You beg for dick with your own mouth.
=== It was well worth teaching you.

-B3, K
=== Mmg... Mmh♡
=== Ah...h...

-B3~4, SFX
=== *WET* X2
4th frame, bottom left
-B1, SFX
=== * SLOPPY*
5th frame, bottom left
-B1, SFX
=== *SLOPPY*

-B2, A
=== He-y♪
=== You like rubbing this softly, right?

-B3, K
=== Hyah...

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Page 16
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Kya...

-B2, A
=== But♪
=== I can't be satisfied with it so I won't do it softly♪

-B3, K
=== Allen...
=== No...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPLASH* X3
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== ...Argh...!!
=== It's too fast...(Small words)

-B2, K
=== Haaah...

-B3, K
=== Ah... Mhg...

-HW, SFX
=== *SQUIRT*
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== ...Ah...
=== Mmgh...

-B2, K
=== Hmmm....

-B3, SFX
=== *WARM* *WARM*

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1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Mm... Ah...

-B2, K
=== Alle..n...
=== Slow it... down...
=== Just a little...
=== Ah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPANK* *SPANK* *SPANK*
2nd frame, middle right
-HWs, SFX
=== *SOAKED*
3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== Ooh... Aah...
=== Stop it... for now
===... Please...

-B2, K
=== Drainage... Warning is...
=== Ahg...
4th frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== Kyaaa!!

-HW, SFX
=== *SPLASH*

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1st frame, top right
-B1, SFX
=== *GRIN*
3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== ...Look♡

-B2, Shion
=== ZZZ
4th frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== She will wake up if you keep panting that loud...
=== Do you want to show yourself, all tangled with me, to our precious Chief?

-B2, K
=== Ah... No...

-B3, K
=== I... can't...

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1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Hhm...!

-B2, K
=== Mm...Mhg...

-B3, K
=== ...Hhmmm...
=== ...Hm... Kyah...

-B4, K
=== Kya...aahn!?

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPLASH* *SLOPPY* *SLOPPY*

2nd frame, top top right
-B1, SFX
=== *PRESS*
3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== No...

-B2, K
=== Shion is...
=== Shio...n... will...

-B3, SFX
=== *SHIVER*

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Page 20
1st frame, top right
-B1, K
=== Shion gonna...
=== Ahg...
2nd frame, top
-B1, K
=== Wake up and...
=== See it...

-B2, K
=== Kyaaaah♡

-B3, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

-B4, SFX
=== *SPOUT*
3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Hmh... Ah...

-B2, K
=== Ha...(*Sound for gasping, not laughing)
4th frame, bottom left
-B1~2, two bubble on the top of frame, SFX
=== *TREMBLE* *TREMBLE*

-B3, K
=== Ha...

-B4, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

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Page 21
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== ...To tell the truth♪

-B2, SFX
=== *THUD*
2nd frame, top
-B1, A
=== Don't worry.
=== I put sleeping pills in her dinner so she shouldn't wake up♪

-B2, K
=== Ah...
=== Ahhh...

-B3, A
=== Uh oh.
=== Did that feel that good?

-B4, SFX
=== *DRIP*

-B5, SFX
=== *SQUIRT*

-HWs, SFX
=== *TREMBLE*
3rd frame, bottom
-B1, A
=== You're becoming a slave of mine(*)♪
*** (*Original word is' 俺様(O-re-sa-ma)'(俺(Ore = I or me) + 様(Sama = Most honorific term in japanese)) but I can't translate this in English...)

-B2, A
=== KOS-MOS♪

-B3, K
=== Ha...(Panting)

-B4, K
=== Ha...

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-White letters above the white section, barely read.
=== Pages for some scribbles all of sudden.

-In white section, from top to bottom
1. Actually it's pages for Summer Wars.

2. It was shown in the theater until just now so, I can't imagine how long will it take until the DVD is released.

3. ↑Decisive weapon(or vehicle) for the Greater East Asia
(Remember pearl harbor... (written by translator))

4. It's my most favorite one among the recent Animations lol

5. To be more specific, I was fascinated by Ah-Chyan's dashing figure.

6. And, um, that made my heart beat flutter too.

7. Because of Kazuma-Tan... (Emabarassed)

8. And she's deceiving her self, like It's O.K because I am a girl actually.

9. ←Can't fight the Bunny girl.

(I translated it but so hard to understand this because I don't know anything about that 'Summer Wars' except it's title of some Animation (or Novel or... Comic or something))

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-From top to bottom
1. Picture of Natsuki-Chyan's deer-eared avatar... or something lol
It's cute!! It's Mrs. Hudson! Damn!

2. But, I like her wearing Hakama(*One of Japanese traditional cloth), before she transforms.

3. I find out more serious compromise.→
Drawing futanari after a while~
If it's Kazuma-Tan! (What?)

4. It's the one that awarded grand prize at avatar contest held in my brain.
(I can't figure out what's 'ぺストアバター'... Fast Avatar? Pest Avatar? Fest(ival) Avatar? Paste Avatar?)

5. See you again~

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Postscript

Good Morning, It's Nakajima-.
I'm still doing some cruel things to KOS-MOS-San as before so
I ask to myself, 'Do I really like KOS-MOS!?' and, well, I LOVE KOSMOS.
It's like old couple seeking for some fresh stimulation. (Hm?)

Anyway, How much do I like doggy style?
I'm seeking something new and I'll keep myself devoted on the Way of KOS-MOS

This time I worked on two books and I'm afraid it's flimsy.
Excuse me this time!
I'll work more hard on my job~!
Wish you have a nice new year~!
(Like it's echoing)

Nakajima Rei.
I've been a good kid for this year so Santa Clause will bring me Kosmos for sure

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This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jun 18 2014, 10:01

editing bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10513

and translation bounty for the next part is here https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10514

Uh...? Gee It still looks like Mion to me reading it once again... Handwriting tricked me.

May be it would be good to restart walking on the way of Otaku with Summer Wars. It has been really long time since I watched Japanimation for last. (It was Darker than a Black... I think.)

Oh and I claimed this bounty because someone accepted it after me. He thought I stopped working on it, may be.

That's cool. Would you be interested in working on the next one in the series, linked above?

I'm not interested in that bounty linked above anymore because I already finished it.

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Page 4
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Hey Miss KOS-MOS(*)...
*** (*It's '君'(Kun) but I translate it 'Miss KOS-MOS' as I did before.)

-B2, A
=== I really enjoyed what we did yesterday...♪


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Just like yesterday...

-B2, A
=== It will be another nice and slow training, to teach you how to serve me.
=== Understood?

-B3, SFX (It's on the 2nd frame but actually it's for next frame)
=== *SLIDE* (Taking down cloth)


3rd frame, right
-HWs SFX
=== *SHIVER*...

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Page 5
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Hmmm?
=== I can't hear your answer♪

-B2, SFX
=== *PRESS* or *PINCH*

-B3, SFX
=== Kiya...Ooh...


2nd frame, top left
-B1, K
=== Ye...s...

-B2, K
=== Mmm... gh...


3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Right, Right♪

-B2, K
=== Mmm...

-B3, A
=== You lick it pretty good♪

-B4, K
=== Mg... Hmm... Hm...


4th frame, bottom left
-B1, SFX
=== *KISS...*
=== (It seems more like *SLOPY* considering the next bubble, but *KISS* looks more cuter.)

-B2, SFX
=== *SLOPPY*

-B3, K
=== Mmm... Ah...
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Page 6
1st frame, top right
-B1, K
=== Mm... H...

-B2, K
=== Mgh... Mmf

-HWs, SFX
=== *CHUPA* *CHUPA*


-2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== Good...

-B2, SFX
=== *DRIP*

-B3, A
=== I'm cumming...
=== Don't spit it!!


3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== H'yes(*)... Ahf...
*** (*Murmuring voice because something's in mouth)

-B2, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

-HWs, SFX
=== *SQUIRT*
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Page 7
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== What~is~this...
=== You ignore my order...

-B2, K
=== B...But

-B3, K
=== Ooh...


2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== You're bad girl, KOS-MOS...♪

-B2, K
=== Oooh...


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Wash your face and sit over there.

-B2, K
=== ...
=== Ye...s...
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Page 8
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== ...Open your legs.

-B2, SFX
=== *SLI..DE..*


2nd frame
-B1, K
=== ...Hiyaaa!?

-B2, SFX
=== *TAP*

-B3, A
=== ...What, Is, this~~?♪


3rd frame,
-B1, A
=== Strange.
=== You just licked my dick but

-B2, K
=== No...

-B3, K
=== It.. It can't be...
=== Kiyaaa!!

-B4, SFX
=== *POKE POKE♡*

-B5, A
=== You wet your pussy this much...
=== How come is it wet♪
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Page 9
2nd frame, big one on the top
-B1, K
=== ...Kiyaaa...
=== No... A..Allen...!

-B2, K
=== Stop...

-B3, K
=== With your mouth... again...
=== Tongue is... no...!

-B4, SFX (for the small frame on the very top(1st frame))
=== *YUM*

-B5~6, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

=== *TWITCH*

-B7~*, SFX
=== *CHUPA*

=== *CHUP*


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== N...o...

-B2, SFX
=== *LICK*

-B3, SFX
=== *TREMBLE*

-B4, K
=== Stop... Plea...se...

-B5, SFX
=== *STICKY*

-B6, K
=== KIyaa...ah!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *TWITCH*
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Page 10
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Kiyaah!!

-B2, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

-B3, K
=== N...o...!
=== Don't... put your tongue...

-B4, K
=== In... Stop..!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOPPY*
=== *WET*


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Ah... No...

-B2, K
=== Sto...p...
=== ...Mmg... Ah...!

-HWs, SFX
=== *TREMBLE TREMBLE* *TREMBLE*

-B3, K
=== ...Ha... (Panting)

-B3, SFX
=== *STRINGY*
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1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Hmmm?
=== Look like tongue makes you moan harder than finger♪


2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== Your voice sound like you want some more...♪

-B2, SFX
=== *SLOSH*

-B3, SFX
=== *BLUSH...*

-B4, K
=== N... No I never...
=== Hmmmf...!


2nd frame, middle
-B1, A
=== ...How's the taste of your own juice...
=== Huhehehehehehe(*)...
*** (*Original : U-Hi-He-Ke-Ke-Ke-Ke-Ke)

-B2, A
=== He?

-Box1, Description(?)
=== She realized that she can shot back to him saying 'You tasted your own dick, too' but
she thinks that he will do more harsh thing to her if she say that
so she decided to keep quiet and leave him enjoy his false triumphant.


3rd frame, bottom
-B1, A
=== ...＃
=== What's that face!!
=== What are you thinking!
=== You must be badmouthing me!!

-B2, K
=== Kiyaa!

-B3, K
=== Allen! It hurts...

-HWs, SFX
=== *GRASP*
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Page 12
1st frame, right
-B1, K
=== Ah... Mmg...

-B2, SFX
=== *TWITCH* *TWITCH*


2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== ...You don't answer to your master's question...

-B2, K
=== Kiya...!

-B3, K
=== Something must be done to this baaad robot girl who don't respect her master from the heart...

-B4, SFX
=== *SOAKED* or *WET*


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, SFX
=== *SLIDE!!*

-B2, SFX
=== *SLOSH...*

-B3, K
=== Hiyaa...gh...

-B4, K
=== Mmg. ah...
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Page 13
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Oooh~♡ It's nice and tight as always†

-B2, K
=== Mgh... Hm.. Aah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *WET*


2nd frame, top left
-B1, K
=== Kiya...!!

-HW, SFX
=== *SLOSH*


2nd frame, middle
-B1, SFX
=== *TREMBLE...*

-B2, K
=== Ah... Allen...
=== I don't like it...
=== Pull it... out...

-B3, A
=== Huh? What? I can't hear you♪

-HWs, SFX
=== *WET*


3rd frame, bottom
-B1, A
=== What?♡
=== Move it harder?
=== KOS-MOS is hopelessly naughty girl♡

-B2, K
=== Kiyah!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOSH*
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Page 14
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Agh... Mm.. Aah...

-B2, K
=== No... Sto...p

-B3, K
=== Ah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPANK* *SPANK* *SPANK*


2nd frame, middle right
-B1, K
=== Ah...g...
=== I beg... you...
=== Kihya...!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOPPY* *SLOSH*


3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== KIya...Ah!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SQUIRT*


4th frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Mmg... Ah...

-B2, K
=== Mmg...
=== Ha...(Panting) Ha...

-HWs, SFX
=== *STICKY*

-B3~4, SFX
=== *DRIP* *DRIP DRIP*
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Page 15
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== No... I... don't... like this... Ah...

-B2, K
=== This... pose...

-B3, K
=== *SLIPPER* *SLIPPER*


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Now you can see my dick going in well, right?♪

-B2, K
=== N... No... Ah...

-B3, SFX
=== *BLUSH*

=HWs, SFX
=== *TREMBLE* *TREMBLE*


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Here It goes♡

-B2, SFX
--- *PUSH*

-B3, K
=== Hiyaaaah...!

-HWs, SFX
=== *TWITCH*
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Page 16
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Hiya...Ah...
=== Ah...

-B2, K
=== I don't like this... All...en...
=== N...o... I'm...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOSH* *SLOPPY*


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Cu...Mgh...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SQUEEZE*

-B2, K
=== Aaaaaah!!


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== ...Ha...(Panting)
=== Ah... Mgh...Aah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *TWITCH* *TWITCH*
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Page 17
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== ...Mm..g..

-B2, K
=== Ha...
=== Ha... Haah...

-B3, SFX
=== *FLARE...*

-HWs, SFX
=== *MUSHY*


2nd frame, small one in the middle right.
-B1, K
=== I... can't...

-B2, K
=== anymore... stop...
=== Hiyaaah!

-B3, K
=== No... Ah...!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPANK* X3
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Page 18
1st frame, top
-B1, A
=== What are you talking about?
=== Training still goes on♪

-B2, K
=== Ah...Hm...

-B3, K
=== You just... keep... doing...
=== Kiyaah...!

-B4, A
=== It's a special traning to save the chief by learning how to serve me well, isn't it?

-B5, SFX
=== *PUSH...*


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Ah... Hmm...
=== Mmg... Aah... Mm...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOWLY...*


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Ah damn it
=== Stop being sluggish!!
=== Move like this!!
=== Feel the strength of my back muscle!

-B2, K
=== Kyaah!!
=== N...o...!

-B3, SFX
=== *SHIVER* *SHIVER*

-B4, K
=== Mmg... Aah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *STAB* *STAB* *STAB*
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Page 19
1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Mmg... Ah...
=== Aah... Ah...

-B2, K
=== Aaaaaahh!!

-B3, SFX
=== *SQUEEZE*

-HWs, SFX
=== *TWITCH*


2nd frame, K
-B1, K
=== ...Ah...

-B2~3, SFX
=== *TWITCH* *TWITCH*


3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== ...Ah...

-B2, K
=== Body frame temperature rising...
=== Going to...temporal...shutdown...

-B3, A
=== ...Uh...

-Box1
=== Days of passion of KOS-MOS continues.


4th frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Aaaargh!
=== KOS-MOS... Heavy!! Get off!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *BUMP*
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1. About the matter that I want to move to Kamakura because I like Manjyoume Fumi-San and Okudaira Akira-San so much
but I can't live in such a upper-class city.


2. Aaaaaaah!!(*Original word : Bu-Mo-Wa-ah!!)
Fumi-Chyan and Ah-Chyan are so cute!
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Page 21
1st frame, top right
-HW, on the top of frame.
=== Book of Miku-Chyan gonna confess her love!

-B1, M
=== ...Ah...

-B2, M
=== Ah... Um...

-Box
=== Voca■■id(*) falls in love, too.
*** (*It's for avoiding copyright trouble)


2nd frame, top left
-B1, M
=== It's... I, I...

-B2, M
=== I... love... you...!


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, M
=== S... So...

-B2, M
=== Ah...♡
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1st frame, top
-B1, M
=== Ah... N...o..

-B2, SFX
=== *SLIDE* (SFX for taking cloth off)

-B3, M
=== No...o...

-Box
=== To beloving you... I give myself...


2nd frame, middle left
-B1, SFX
=== *GAPE*


3rd frame, bottom
-B1, M
=== Mm...m...
=== Mmg... Ah!

-B2, M
=== Teasing... my... I'm...

-B3, m
=== Kiyaa...♡

-B4, SFX
=== *DRIP...*
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Page 23
1st frame, top
-B1, M
=== N...o... Aah...

-B2~3, SFX
=== *CREAK* *CREAK*

-Box
=== With my voice...

-B4, M
=== I'm... O.K... so... move... it..

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLURP*


2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, M
=== Mmm... Aah!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLURP* *SLURP*


3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, M
=== No... Ah♡

-B2, M
=== It's... hot...♡

-B3, M
=== Ah... Ha...♡

-Box
=== I want to sing about ...my love to you...♡
*** (*It's continued from previous box and It's little awkward because of different word order between Jap and Eng.)
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Postscript

Good morning, this is Nakajima.
I forgot to set the recorder to record Penelope and I did feel that there's limitation in near-future technology.
Well, actually my HDD recorder had a been a prankster from before, like recording the fore 5 minutes of user's guide video instead of CSI.or recording episode 2 of Tokyo Magnitude 8.0 ONLY(*1). YOU LITTLE(*2)♪....
I like [Aoi Hana] most among the animations in this season. Looks great from back(*3), wear glasses, and sometimes glares with fiercing face(*4).
I can't take it anymore! And Ah-Chyan is so cute lol

Anyway, let's talk about Hatsune Miku came out all of sudden.
I never been crazy about music but this software plays music in my brain without my permission.
Medeling of character is so cute and make me want to buy PSP version.
Even though [ISUZU's Truck(*5)] is only song that I have heard.

I teased KOS-MOS-Tan in this book as alwasy so I have no excuse for that but I hope she understand that it's only because
I lover her... Fat chance... She's gonna butcher me at once... She will look hard at me with frigid eyes... Kiya♪ (Opposite effect)

And, in fact, I had a hectic schedule recently and It would be catastrophe if I can't manage to send off copy soon but anyway,
2nd volume will be published in this year(It's completed with 2 volumes) so I'll be really happy if you take a look at my book.

Then, bye!

Nakajima Rei, bowing to you.


-HWs next to KOS-MOS
=== Shion scolds me when I don't act polite.

-Bottom of page
=== T53(*6) and PT 76(*7) of Evil Nakajima force are advancing following the Hochiminh Route in my brain, to overthrow the puppet government of Good Nakajima.(Or not)
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-HW next to the Miku
=== The sunken~ Repulse(*8)

(*1 It means he reserved to record every episode but it only recorded, probably)

(*2 What Homer Simpson says when he chokes someone)

(*3 Japanese word is '背がでかい'. It's for the characters who say 'Leave it to me and GO!'(Like Archer in the Fate/Stay Night, before fight against Berserker in the forest),
because they show their back to their fellows (and that's his last word, in almost every case)

(*4 It's about whole sentence. I understand that he's talking about a character from that [Aoi Hana(Blue Flower)] but I don't know who he/she is because I never heard of it)

(*5 It's CM song of ISUZU Motors Ltd. (http://www.isuzu.co.jp))

(*6 It's name of tank. Both America and Soviet Union had tank named T54)

(*7 It's name of tank, too. Amphibious light tank that made by Soviet Union)

(*8 HMS Repulse. It's Battlecruiser of the Royal Navy and sunk during the Naval Battle of Malaya(As well as Prince of Wales). And the whole sentence is part of Imperial Japanse Navy's war song, '英国東洋艦隊潰滅(British Eastern Fleet Annihilated)'
He keep put little thing about Pacific War in his book and it makes me pretty annoyed... It would be better if Japan was withered by Operation Downfall, rather than be nuk... Just kidding. I love Japan(ese porns))
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Same need-to-be-proofread. (ㅇ.<)b

This post has been edited by asdkg: Jun 17 2014, 12:00

I took a quick look on this series and it's a bad end, contrary to my expectation. (Or happy end, to Shion and KOS-MOS)]

Poor prospermia Allen...

I think it's better to change the word 'prisoner' (in KLX-3, p.21, bubble 1) to 'slave', following the translation in previous works.

Wow, thanks for tackling T2 so quickly.

Would you be interested in continuing with the series? You can pick your favorite from here, and I and others will surely bountify it. For now, I am going to bountify the oldest release, https://e-hentai.org/g/163411/298c46cd48/ - I wonder if it starts the story?

TL Bounty for https://e-hentai.org/g/163411/298c46cd48/ is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10540

editing bounty for T2 is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10540

I took a quick look on this series and it's a bad end, contrary to my expectation. (Or happy end, to Shion and KOS-MOS)]

Poor prospermia Allen...

T5? Hehe, I consider it to be a happy end, but then I'd prefer more yuri here (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Still, is https://e-hentai.org/g/555940/aa610e3812/ a continuation? I am not sure it outside the T series there's a chronological story here?

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jun 18 2014, 10:05

Proofread for minor English fixes

I am actually thinking that KOS-MOS-kun may be better than Miss KOS-MOS. Thoughts?

I'm not interested in that bounty linked above anymore because I already finished it.

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Page 4
1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Hey Miss KOS-MOS(*)...
*** (*It's '君'(Kun) but I translate it 'Miss KOS-MOS' as I did before.)

-B2, A
=== I really enjoyed what we did yesterday...♪
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Just like yesterday...

-B2, A
=== It will be another nice and slow training session, to teach you how to serve me.
=== Understood?

-B3, SFX (It's on the 2nd frame but actually it's for next frame)
=== *SLIDE* (Taking clothes off)
3rd frame, right
-HWs SFX
=== *SHIVER*...

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1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Hmmm?
=== I can't hear your answer♪

-B2, SFX
=== *PRESS* or *PINCH*

-B3, SFX
=== Kiya...Ooh...
2nd frame, top left
-B1, K
=== Ye...s...

-B2, K
=== Mmm... gh...
3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Right, Right♪

-B2, K
=== Mmm...

-B3, A
=== You lick it pretty good♪

-B4, K
=== Mg... Hmm... Hm...
4th frame, bottom left
-B1, SFX
=== *KISS...*
=== (It seems more like *SLOPY* considering the next bubble, but *KISS* looks more cuter.)

-B2, SFX
=== *SLOPPY*

-B3, K
=== Mmm... Ah...
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1st frame, top right
-B1, K
=== Mm... H...

-B2, K
=== Mgh... Mmf

-HWs, SFX
=== *CHUPA* *CHUPA*
-2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== Good...

-B2, SFX
=== *DRIP*

-B3, A
=== I'm cumming...
=== Don't spit it!!
3rd frame, bottom
-B1, K
=== H'yes(*)... Ahf...
*** (*Murmuring voice because something's in mouth)

-B2, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

-HWs, SFX
=== *SQUIRT*
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1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== What~is~this...
=== You ignore my order...

-B2, K
=== B...But

-B3, K
=== Ooh...
2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== You're a bad girl, KOS-MOS...♪

-B2, K
=== Oooh...
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Wash your face and sit over there.

-B2, K
=== ...
=== Ye...s...
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1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== ...Open your legs.

-B2, SFX
=== *SLI..DE..*
2nd frame
-B1, K
=== ...Hiyaaa!?

-B2, SFX
=== *TAP*

-B3, A
=== ...What, is, this~~?♪
3rd frame,
-B1, A
=== Strange.
=== You just licked my dick but

-B2, K
=== No...

-B3, K
=== It.. It can't be...
=== Kiyaaa!!

-B4, SFX
=== *POKE POKE♡*

-B5, A
=== Your pussy is so wet...
=== How come?♪
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2nd frame, big one on the top
-B1, K
=== ...Kiyaaa...
=== No... A..Allen...!

-B2, K
=== Stop...

-B3, K
=== With your mouth... again...
=== Tongue is... no...!

-B4, SFX (for the small frame on the very top(1st frame))
=== *YUM*

-B5~6, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

=== *TWITCH*

-B7~*, SFX
=== *CHUPA*

=== *CHUP*
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== N...o...

-B2, SFX
=== *LICK*

-B3, SFX
=== *TREMBLE*

-B4, K
=== Stop... Plea...se...

-B5, SFX
=== *STICKY*

-B6, K
=== KIyaa...ah!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *TWITCH*
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1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Kiyaah!!

-B2, SFX
=== *TWITCH*

-B3, K
=== N...o...!
=== Don't... put your tongue...

-B4, K
=== In... Stop..!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOPPY*
=== *WET*
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Ah... No...

-B2, K
=== Sto...p...
=== ...Mmg... Ah...!

-HWs, SFX
=== *TREMBLE TREMBLE* *TREMBLE*

-B3, K
=== ...Ha... (Panting)

-B3, SFX
=== *STRINGY*
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1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Hmmm?
=== Look like tongue action makes you moan harder than finger♪
2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== Your voice makes it sound like you want some more...♪

-B2, SFX
=== *SLOSH*

-B3, SFX
=== *BLUSH...*

-B4, K
=== N... No I never...
=== Hmmmf...!
2nd frame, middle
-B1, A
=== ...How's the taste of your own juice...
=== Huhehehehehehe(*)...
*** (*Original : U-Hi-He-Ke-Ke-Ke-Ke-Ke)

-B2, A
=== He?

-Box1, Description(?)
=== She realized that she can shot back to him saying 'You tasted your own dick, too' but
she thinks that he will do more harsh thing to her if she say that
so she decided to keep quiet and leave him enjoy his petty triumph.
3rd frame, bottom
-B1, A
=== ...＃
=== What's that face!!
=== What are you thinking!
=== You must be badmouthing me!!

-B2, K
=== Kiyaa!

-B3, K
=== Allen! It hurts...

-HWs, SFX
=== *GRASP*
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1st frame, right
-B1, K
=== Ah... Mmg...

-B2, SFX
=== *TWITCH* *TWITCH*
2nd frame, top left
-B1, A
=== ...You didn't answer your master's question...

-B2, K
=== Kiya...!

-B3, K
=== Something must be done to this baaad robot girl who doesn't truly respect her master...

-B4, SFX
=== *SOAKED* or *WET*
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, SFX
=== *SLIDE!!*

-B2, SFX
=== *SLOSH...*

-B3, K
=== Hiyaa...gh...

-B4, K
=== Mmg. ah...
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1st frame, top right
-B1, A
=== Oooh~♡ It's nice and tight as always†

-B2, K
=== Mgh... Hm.. Aah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *WET*
2nd frame, top left
-B1, K
=== Kiya...!!

-HW, SFX
=== *SLOSH*
2nd frame, middle
-B1, SFX
=== *TREMBLE...*

-B2, K
=== Ah... Allen...
=== I don't like it...
=== Pull it... out...

-B3, A
=== Huh? What? I can't hear you♪

-HWs, SFX
=== *WET*
3rd frame, bottom
-B1, A
=== What?♡
=== Move it harder?
=== KOS-MOS is a hopelessly naughty girl♡

-B2, K
=== Kiyah!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOSH*
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1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Agh... Mm.. Aah...

-B2, K
=== No... Sto...p

-B3, K
=== Ah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPANK* *SPANK* *SPANK*
2nd frame, middle right
-B1, K
=== Ah...g...
=== I beg... you...
=== Kihya...!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOPPY* *SLOSH*
3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== KIya...Ah!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SQUIRT*
4th frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Mmg... Ah...

-B2, K
=== Mmg...
=== Ha...(Panting) Ha...

-HWs, SFX
=== *STICKY*

-B3~4, SFX
=== *DRIP* *DRIP DRIP*
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1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== No... I... don't... like this... Ah...

-B2, K
=== This... pose...

-B3, K
=== *SLIPPER* *SLIPPER*
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, A
=== Now you can see my dick going in, right?♪

-B2, K
=== N... No... Ah...

-B3, SFX
=== *BLUSH*

=HWs, SFX
=== *TREMBLE* *TREMBLE*
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Here It goes♡

-B2, SFX
--- *PUSH*

-B3, K
=== Hiyaaaah...!

-HWs, SFX
=== *TWITCH*
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1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Hiya...Ah...
=== Ah...

-B2, K
=== I don't like this... All...en...
=== N...o... I'm...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOSH* *SLOPPY*
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Cu...Mgh...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SQUEEZE*

-B2, K
=== Aaaaaah!!
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, K
=== ...Ha...(Panting)
=== Ah... Mgh...Aah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *TWITCH* *TWITCH*
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1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== ...Mm..g..

-B2, K
=== Ha...
=== Ha... Haah...

-B3, SFX
=== *FLARE...*

-HWs, SFX
=== *MUSHY*
2nd frame, small one in the middle right.
-B1, K
=== I... can't...

-B2, K
=== anymore... stop...
=== Hiyaaah!

-B3, K
=== No... Ah...!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SPANK* X3
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1st frame, top
-B1, A
=== What are you talking about?
=== Training still goes on♪

-B2, K
=== Ah...Hm...

-B3, K
=== You just... keep... doing...
=== Kiyaah...!

-B4, A
=== It's a special training to save the Chief by learning how to serve me well, isn't it?

-B5, SFX
=== *PUSH...*
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== Ah... Hmm...
=== Mmg... Aah... Mm...

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLOWLY...*
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Ah damn it
=== Stop being sluggish!!
=== Move like this!!
=== Feel the strength of my back muscle!

-B2, K
=== Kyaah!!
=== N...o...!

-B3, SFX
=== *SHIVER* *SHIVER*

-B4, K
=== Mmg... Aah...

-HWs, SFX
=== *STAB* *STAB* *STAB*
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1st frame, top
-B1, K
=== Mmg... Ah...
=== Aah... Ah...

-B2, K
=== Aaaaaahh!!

-B3, SFX
=== *SQUEEZE*

-HWs, SFX
=== *TWITCH*
2nd frame, K
-B1, K
=== ...Ah...

-B2~3, SFX
=== *TWITCH* *TWITCH*
3rd frame, bottom right
-B1, K
=== ...Ah...

-B2, K
=== Body frame temperature rising...
=== Going into...temporal...shutdown...

-B3, A
=== ...Uh...

-Box1
=== KOS-MOS days of passion continue.
4th frame, bottom left
-B1, A
=== Aaaargh!
=== KOS-MOS... Heavy!! Get off!!

-HWs, SFX
=== *BUMP*
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1. About the matter that I want to move to Kamakura because I like Manjyoume Fumi-San and Okudaira Akira-San so much
but I can't live in such a upper-class city.


2. Aaaaaaah!!(*Original word : Bu-Mo-Wa-ah!!)
Fumi-Chyan and Ah-Chyan are so cute!
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1st frame, top right
-HW, on the top of frame.
=== Miku-Chyan book - gonna confess her love!

-B1, M
=== ...Ah...

-B2, M
=== Ah... Um...

-Box
=== Voca■■id(*) falls in love, too.
*** (*It's for avoiding copyright trouble)
2nd frame, top left
-B1, M
=== It's... I, I...

-B2, M
=== I... love... you...!
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, M
=== S... So...

-B2, M
=== Ah...♡
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1st frame, top
-B1, M
=== Ah... N...o..

-B2, SFX
=== *SLIDE* (SFX for taking cloth off)

-B3, M
=== No...o...

-Box
=== To be loving you... I give myself...
2nd frame, middle left
-B1, SFX
=== *GAPE*
3rd frame, bottom
-B1, M
=== Mm...m...
=== Mmg... Ah!

-B2, M
=== Teasing... my... I'm...

-B3, m
=== Kiyaa...♡

-B4, SFX
=== *DRIP...*
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1st frame, top
-B1, M
=== N...o... Aah...

-B2~3, SFX
=== *CREAK* *CREAK*

-Box
=== With my voice...

-B4, M
=== I'm... O.K... so... move... it..

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLURP*
2nd frame, bottom right
-B1, M
=== Mmm... Aah!

-HWs, SFX
=== *SLURP* *SLURP*
3rd frame, bottom left
-B1, M
=== No... Ah♡

-B2, M
=== It's... hot...♡

-B3, M
=== Ah... Ha...♡

-Box
=== I want to sing about ...my love to you...♡
*** (*It's continued from previous box and It's little awkward because of different word order between Jap and Eng.)
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Postscript

Good morning, this is Nakajima.
I forgot to set the recorder to record Penelope and I did feel that there's limitation in near-future technology.
Well, actually my HDD recorder had a been a prankster from before, like recording the first 5 minutes of user's guide video instead of CSI instead recording episode 2 of Tokyo Magnitude 8.0 ONLY(*1). YOU LITTLE(*2)♪....
I like [Aoi Hana] best among the animations in this season. Looks great from back(*3), wear glasses, and sometimes glares with a fierce face(*4).
I can't take it anymore! And Ah-Chyan is so cute lol

Anyway, let's talk about Hatsune Miku all of the sudden.
I've never been crazy about music but this software plays music in my brain without my permission.
Modeling of character is so cute and make me want to buy PSP version.
Even though [ISUZU's Truck(*5)] is only song that I have heard.

I teased KOS-MOS-Tan in this book as always so I have no excuse for that but I hope she understand that it's only because
I lover her... Fat chance... She's gonna butcher me at once... She will look hard at me with frigid eyes... Kiya♪ (Opposite effect)

And, in fact, I had a hectic schedule recently and It would be catastrophe if I can't manage to send off copy soon but anyway,
2nd volume will be published this year (t's completed with 2 volumes) so I'll be really happy if you take a look at my book.

Then, bye!

Nakajima Rei, bowing to you.
-HWs next to KOS-MOS
=== Shion scolds me when I don't act polite.

-Bottom of page
=== T53(*6) and PT 76(*7) of Evil Nakajima force are advancing following the Hochiminh Route in my brain, to overthrow the puppet government of Good Nakajima.(Or not)
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-HW next to the Miku
=== The sunken~ Repulse(*8)

(*1 It means he reserved to record every episode but it only recorded, probably)

(*2 What Homer Simpson says when he chokes someone)

(*3 Japanese word is '背がでかい'. It's for the characters who say 'Leave it to me and GO!'(Like Archer in the Fate/Stay Night, before fight against Berserker in the forest),
because they show their back to their fellows (and that's his last word, in almost every case)

(*4 It's about whole sentence. I understand that he's talking about a character from that [Aoi Hana(Blue Flower)] but I don't know who he/she is because I never heard of it)

(*5 It's CM song of ISUZU Motors Ltd. (http://www.isuzu.co.jp))

(*6 It's name of tank. Both America and Soviet Union had tank named T54)

(*7 It's name of tank, too. Amphibious light tank that made by Soviet Union)

(*8 HMS Repulse. It's Battlecruiser of the Royal Navy and sunk during the Naval Battle of Malaya(As well as Prince of Wales). And the whole sentence is part of Imperial Japanse Navy's war song, '英国東洋艦隊潰滅(British Eastern Fleet Annihilated)'
He keep put little thing about Pacific War in his book and it makes me pretty annoyed... It would be better if Japan was withered by Operation Downfall, rather than be nuk... Just kidding. I love Japan(ese porns))
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Same need-to-be-proofread. (ㅇ.<)b

Proofread for minor English fixes

I am actually thinking that KOS-MOS-kun may be better than Miss KOS-MOS. Thoughts?

If you think so, of course. I don't really have sense about what word would be better or awkward

Hey Red. I think i can edit this one. Not feeling too confident on the big SFX, but if you are good leaving them raw i can go for a smaller bounty. I finally have free time, and i like these manitou doujins. hue.

Hey Red. I think i can edit this one. Not feeling too confident on the big SFX, but if you are good leaving them raw i can go for a smaller bounty. I finally have free time, and i like these manitou doujins. hue.

I just got a ninja script for this from afire1. If you don't mind, how about you work on T2 then?

This one?

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10541

Sure thing.

I am officially converting this thread into "let's get all MANITOU's Xenosaga dojins TLed".

As a reminder, the next project is the TL of MANITOU] Golden Slumbers (Xenosaga) https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10540

Accepting [EHCOVE] [MANITOU] Golden Slumbers (Xenosaga) > [English] 26p
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10540

Translation will take a week or two. I will post it here and PM you.

Hey there again, I'd like to work on this bounty:

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10540

As the same with the previous bounty, I want to be credited as anonymous.

Here's my transcript, ready for QC and proofreading. Most of my notes are for QC and will be removed in the final script.

https://e-hentai.org/g/409267/eb9df2f3eb/

edit: updated the script according to proofreading comments.


----- Page 1
ぼくのコスモス
My KOSMOS

OKAERINASAI MASTER GOHAN NI SHIMASUKA? OFURO NI SHIMASUKA? SORETOMO...
Welcome Home Master. Would you like dinner? Or a bath? Or maybe...

----- Page 2
はじめまして。先日はベクタ社「KOS-MOSとどきどき新婚気分」キャンペーンに御応募有り難うございます。
Nice to meet you. Thank you for subscribing to the Vector Industries' "Heart-pounding Newlywed Experience with KOSMOS" Campaign

おめでとうございます。貴方は御希望された新妻育成モニターに当選されました。
Congratulations. Your wish has been fulfilled. You have been selected as a "New Wife" Training Monitor

KOS-MOSがやってきたヤァ！ヤァ！ヤァ！
KOS-MOS has finally come! Yeah Yeah yeah!
Note: Reference to the Beatle's album "ビートルズがやって来るヤァ!ヤァ!ヤァ!"

フツツカモノですがどうぞ機関終了までよろしくお願いします。
I may be ignorant of such things, but please take care of me for now

SFX: ぺこり
Bow

ポロ
*Tear*

うー嘘？　あ…当たったんだろっ！
N-No way? I won?

やったあああ！！
Hooray!!!

----- Page 3
早速ですが
This is sudden, but

SFX: ちょこん
Small and Quiet

現在貴方を「マスター」とお呼びする様に設定されていますが　変更なさいますか？
right now, I've been configured to call you "Master". Would you like to be called something else?

SFX: お茶は…呑まないよね
...wait you don't drink coffee, right?

いえ！良いです！そのままが！！
No, it's perfectly fine just like that!

はいマスター！
Yes master!

はふああ♥
Hiyaaaa~♥

SFX: ズキューン
Badump

ところで、何でセーラ服なの？かわいいけど♥
By the way, why the sailor uniform? even though it's cute♥

モニター応募のアンケートで上位でしたので
In the monitor application survey, this was the highest-ranked choice.

申し訳ありません。お気に召しませんでしたか？
I apologize. Is this not to your liking?

SFX: がば
Sudden!

それでは別の衣装に換装します。
If that's so, I'll change into something else.

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どうされたのですか？
Are you okay?

い…いや…そ、そうですよね
No...no, I see, I see.

SFX: ドキドキ
Ba-dump

SFX: ハジライを教えるべきか教えないべきか
Should I tell her about my blushing or not?

新婚なんだよね僕達。何しても良いんだよね？
We're newlyweds,right? Doing something like that is perfectly okay, right?

?はい。
? Yes.

がっ！頑張りますッ！
I'll...I'll do my best!

SFX: ぐわ
Clench

きっと幸せにします！！
I'll definitely make you happy!

アンケート上位１０位から9位に換装しました。
I've changed from the rank 10 to the rank 9 clothes.

如何ですか？
Well? How is it?

SFX: ぶぷっ
Spew

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は…はだか…アプ…アプッ…
Na..Naked..Apr..Apro....

SFX: ズキューンズキューン
BADUMP BADUMP

マスター！出血しています！
Master-! You're bleeding!

早急に負傷部位の特定と治療を行きます！！
We should immediately treat the injury!!

すっ…
Ra..

？
?

そんな事より
Rather than that

ドキン…ぷちゅっ…ドキン…
Kiss, Smack, Kiss

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は…
Ha...

…あ…
Ah...

…あれ？気持ち良く無かった？
Huh? Did that not feel good?

…あの…
...Um...

良く解りません…
I don't really know...

ですが。マスターのなさりたい様になさって下さい。
However, please do as you wish.

ラジャー了解っ！！
Understood!

じゃ…こっち来て。コスモス…
Well then, come here, KOS-MOS

マスター…何をするのですか？
Master, what are you doing?

SFX: ぶるっ
Slide

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気持ちよくしてあげるからね。
I'll make you feel good

？
?

よく解りませんがマスターのなさりたいようにどうぞ
I don't get it, but please do as you wish.

SFX: じ～ん
Silence

あ…
Ah...

SFX: ぴくっ…
Twitch

SFX: さわさわ
Grope

SFX: さわ
Touch

ま…マスター…。くすぐったいです…。
Ma..Master, it tickles...

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SFX: つつ…
Sliding

…ん…
...Mn...

く…
Ku...

ひゃうっ？！
Hya?!

SFX: きゅっ''
Stiffen

SFX: び しん
Flick

あっ…な…何ですか…？
Ah...wha..what was that?

声が…きゃっ…
My voice...Kyaa!

SFX: びくっ''
Twitch

SFX: びくっ''
Twitch-

…あ…く…？
...Ah....kuh...?

んうっ　は…
Ngh! Ha...

声がっ…出てしまいます
I can't... control my voice

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我慢しないで声出して良いんだよ。
Don't hold back. It's alright to let it out.

は…はい…
Al...Alright...

！？マスター？
!? Master?!

SFX: くぱっ。。
Spread

SFX: じわ。。
Leak

そ…そこは排水をするところで
Th...that's my drainage...

きゃあんっ？！
Kyan-?!

SFX: ぷしゃっ
Spray

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あっ…ふ…くっ…　マスター…あ…何故…声が…
Ah...Pant...Gasp...Master...Why...is my voice...

それで良いんだよ。
Yes, just like that.

SFX: はっ…
Ha...

SFX: きゃん！？
kyan!?

SFX: にちゅにちゅ
Slick Slick

もっと大きな声を出しても良いからね
It's okay to let go even more

SFX: にちゅにちゅ
Slick Slick

きゃひ！！
Kyahi!!

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ま…マスタ…あ…人間の女性は…皆この様な事を…するのですか？
Ma..Master...Do all...human females....do these kinds...of things?

SFX: ぬち
Schlip

SFX: ふるふる
Quiver

そうだよ。だからね
Yeah, they do. So...

SFX: …んくっ？！
Nn...Kuh?!

SFX: ぶ
Impact

痛い…？やめようか？
Does it hurt? Should we quit?

あ…くあ…
Ah...Kuh...

ふ…うく…
Phew...Gasp...

マ…スタあ。。。
Ma..ster...

SFX: すごくキツい
Harsh

----- Page 12
ん…く…け…継続して下さ…い
Nn...kuh...Please continue...

は。。。マスターの意向が…私には最優先です…
Ha...My...greatest priority...is you

SFX: ズキューン
Badump

SFX: 何て健気！！
How wonderful!!

いっ…あくっ…
Nn...Ahn..

SFX: ぬぶ　ぷちゅ
Thrust Smack

んふっ…う…
Gasp

SFX: ぬちゅ
Slip

んん？…
Ahnnn

あ…有り難う…ございま…す…
Th..Thank you...

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く…は…あんっ♥
Ku..Ha...An♥

きゃひあ！！
Kyaaaah!!

SFX: ぷびくん
Thrust

ひゃう。。。体の感覚がジンジンして…
Hyau....My body is...tingling

SFX: ぱんっ！ぱんっ！
Slap Smack

ま…スタあ…これ…は…きゃふあっ！！
Ma..ster...this is..Kyaaaah!!

SFX: きゅうっ
Squeeze

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コっ…コスモスっ！！
KO-...KOS-MOS-!!

きゃん…は…い。。。
Kyan....ye...s...

マス…タあ。。。。ふああっっ…
Ma...ster...Fuaaaahhh

SFX: ぱんぱんぱん
Thrust Slick

あ…ふあ…
Ah....Gasp

SFX: ぷちゅ
Smack

ん…ふっ…はぷあ…
Mm..Hah...Hafua...

あ…あん♥！！
Ah...Ahhhhhh♥!!

SFX: びしん
Pound

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く…は…
Gasp

は…
Pant

は…
Gasp

はー
Haaa

え…えーと。コスモス…？おーい…
Uh...Uhm. KOS-MOS...? Hey....

ちょっとやり過ぎたかな…？
Did I go too far?

コスモスっ！
KOS-MOS!

あっ！
Ah!

はい。マスター
Yes. Master-

SFX: つん
Poke

今のは何のおつもりですか？マスター
Hey...what were you planning to do just now, Master?

いっ…いやっ！つい手が出て…それよりも…
Ah..nothing! My hand just...well, apart from that....

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君が来てくれて嬉しいよ
I'm so happy you came here.

あ…
Ah....

…大切にします！
I'll be sure to treasure you!

はい…
Yes...

もっと色々教えて。。。下さいね。
Please..teach me much more.

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ぼくのコスモス
My KOS-MOS

発行 MANITOU
Publisher: MANITOU

発行日 2011年8月14日
Date of publication: 2011/8/14

責任者　豊村健二
Supervisor Kenji Toyomura

印刷　緑陽社様
Printing Ryokuyousha-Sama

This post has been edited by Firew: May 16 2019, 17:06

Hey, first time doing doujin editing, I know my way around photoshop but have no experience in this.

Im want to work on Boku no Kos-Mos (Xenosaga)
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=19618

Here is a page I did to see if I could before accepting

[imgur.com] https://imgur.com/a/8RWmDXA