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Because: a nice UN-GO dojin, and the first UN-GO dojin in our galleries. Let's hope for more (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

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Translate the linked gallery into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.<br /><br />This translation includes credit pages. Broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted.<br /><br />Gallery link: https://e-hentai.org/g/499514/cdfa571101/<br /><br />If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post in the relevant forum thread (which has more details on the bounty): n/a<br /><br />Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.<br /><br />In addition to the carriers listed, you should post the translation in the forums.

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Translate the linked gallery into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.

This translation includes credit pages. Broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted.

This is my 40th individual (no project) translation bounty. This release will be under an [EHCOVE] group tag. You (the translator) will be credited for your work on a credit page unless you want to be anonymous.

Gallery link: https://e-hentai.org/g/499514/cdfa571101/

If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2-3 weeks and you are unresponsive, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.

Also:
* Due to potential misunderstandings about how to split the bounty between translators and editors that resulted in my recent bounties costing me 50%-100% more than listed price, I am now splitting the bounty between translating and editing. The first bounty that goes up in the system is for translating only. Once I have the translation, I'll post the editing bounty;
* broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted;
* yes, please translate (or at least summarize) any existing author's rants, credits, titles of content, and so on, if present;
* yes, please translate into English non-moan SFXes (examples: bounce, giggle, jinngle, creak);
* if you do the translating, you should accept the bounty, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it;
* if you do the editing: please note I would like to upload the gallery to e-h system myself; I am not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What I pay out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year. If you end up posting the translated doujin to the e-h galleries, I'll probably halve the bounty (if you did the translation and editing), or refuse to pay (if you did the editing only; note that the translator will still get fully paid by me);
* crappy editing will not be accepted;
* please include credits with the translator name (unless they requested here to be anonymous), yourself as an editor (if you want), and my nickname (and those of others who contributed to this bounty significantly) as the sponsor, as well as the name of any other major sponsors for the translation and editing (check bounties). Also, note this is an [EHCOVE] release, add a link to the name of our site (E-hentai) as the host, and invite readers to use our bounty system or join us as editors/translators. Sample credit pages: link;link, link and (now that's cool!) link;
* those bounties are for the hard work (translation and editing). If you just found the gallery somewhere and just uploaded it here, you are not eligible for my bounties, but I will still give you a reward - 5+5 (apply for it here);
* if you find a hq version of the J raw, whether it has or hasn't been translated, I'll reward you for it with a 2+2 reward (apply for it here (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) );
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This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Dec 28 2012, 20:47

This is my awesome first post to enable me to do links LOL (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Gallery link: https://e-hentai.org/g/499514/cdfa571101/
I threw some of my credits your way. Sorry I don't have any hath to give atm (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)
Thanks for helping out with my bounty (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Cool. Mugi has now a category for un-go dojins, so you can pick a new one to bountify for scanlation from [doujinshi.mugimugi.org] http://doujinshi.mugimugi.org/browse/parody/3599/UN-GO/

and I'll be sure to chip in to your next bounty, too (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Didn't take too long. The script is here. Hope you enjoy it.
[docs.google.com] https://docs.google.com/document/d/1L2ZGZK7...gyfmSDo7AE/edit

I'll claim the bounty as complete now. Just ask that I get credit for completing it.

Great.

Editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=6802

Note for editor: in the credits, please attribute ackeejag's affiliation with the Pineapples r' Us group

Hi can I have a shot at the editing? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
I'll give my best shot . (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Anyone can try, but certain quality levels are expected. Have you ever edited before?

Hi, if this isn't being worked on by someone already, I'd like to edit it. And by "like to" I mean dat 300k bounty.

A previous edit example: https://e-hentai.org/g/305263/e8ff068a82/

This post has been edited by Calyx0: Dec 15 2012, 17:04

sure, accept the bounty - nobody else has accepted it yet, so you're the first (the sheep_ guy never bothered to follow up after posting here...)

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Dec 15 2012, 21:03

Hi here's the doujin. It's unfinished yet and could use some feedback.
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?4busw7wbu7k8wwp

Here's a list of things I changed or have suggestions about.
Key:
add X: [X]
remove X: <X>

Multiple pages - Suggest adding hyphens to the name suffixes: "Shinjyuro sama" ---> "Shinjyuro-sama"
Multiple pages - I added some puncuation here and there, mostly full stops at the end of sentences. Didn't bother to list them individually though, so hopefully that's fine.

p1 + p9-10 + p25 - I haven't finished the redraws or cleaning on these pages yet, and I'm not sure if I'll be able to completely do the 9-10 one.
p3 - "...so I thought I['d] get to know you..."
p4 - missing TLs for panel 5
p4 - "I don't know whether or [not] RAI..."
p4 - I chose to bold the "RAI" thing, since the font is all capitalized.
p5 - Suggest: "I'm cleaning but, <something is?>[is something...?]"
p7 - Suggest: "<Ah>[Aw] how cute."
p13 - "...should be <an>[a] RAI..."
p13 - "Seeing [a] little girl cry..."
p13 - I don't know anything about the series this is based on, but it seems odd that the guy says "shota" and "little girl", unless he's refering to 2 different people? But it seems like both things are referring to the cute little hoodie character.

Thanks, I hope that the translator or another helpful soul will pipe in with those issues so we can finish this release.

Hi here's the doujin. It's unfinished yet and could use some feedback.
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?4busw7wbu7k8wwp

Here's a list of things I changed or have suggestions about.
Key:
add X: [X]
remove X: <X>

Multiple pages - Suggest adding hyphens to the name suffixes: "Shinjyuro sama" ---> "Shinjyuro-sama"
Multiple pages - I added some puncuation here and there, mostly full stops at the end of sentences. Didn't bother to list them individually though, so hopefully that's fine.

p1 + p9-10 + p25 - I haven't finished the redraws or cleaning on these pages yet, and I'm not sure if I'll be able to completely do the 9-10 one.
p3 - "...so I thought I['d] get to know you..."
p4 - missing TLs for panel 5
p4 - "I don't know whether or [not] RAI..."
p4 - I chose to bold the "RAI" thing, since the font is all capitalized.
p5 - Suggest: "I'm cleaning but, <something is?>[is something...?]"
p7 - Suggest: "<Ah>[Aw] how cute."
p13 - "...should be <an>[a] RAI..."
p13 - "Seeing [a] little girl cry..."
p13 - I don't know anything about the series this is based on, but it seems odd that the guy says "shota" and "little girl", unless he's refering to 2 different people? But it seems like both things are referring to the cute little hoodie character.

I like all of the changes. But one thing to note. From looking up the series wiki, RAI is an acronym for a type of AI. If they say it like Rye then I suppose 'a' would be more proper than 'an' which would go for R.A.I.

The 'shota' character apparently transforms into a grown woman at certain points in the series. But I think it might just be them going on about perverted exploits. So maybe "I even popped a boner from making a little girl cry."

Oh! and p4 missing bubble is "Alright, I'll stop." & "Why are you crying Shinjyuurou?"

This post has been edited by ackeejag: Dec 19 2012, 20:33

The hooded character seems like shota, but he (?) does transform into an adult women on numerous occasions. I don't think he is a little girl, though, unless that's a little girl who looks like a shota. [myanimelist.net] http://myanimelist.net/character/44211/Inga lists Inga as male

I made those changes and finished cleaning the cover + back. Wasn't able to do the 9-10 redraw though.

I downloaded the subtitles for the series and found they use "a RAI". And I checked an episode at one of those times and it's pronounced as "rye" also.

I PM'ed the link for the updated version to you both, let me know if there's more changes or if it's ready to be claimed.

looks good, released: https://e-hentai.org/g/550795/4f332ebc36/