[X] My Assistant

Hey guys, could you look into the discussion over the quality of translation we have at https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=38574 and chip in? I'd like to hear from an established translator(s) there. It has been suggested to me that the quality of the translation is so poor I should not accept the bounty, but since it would be the first in my history here, I'd like to make sure I am not screwing the translator over some minor issues. (The bounty is also on the large side)

I haven't looked at the raw, but glancing at the script, the English quality is quite horrible and the dialogue has that trademark overly literal CGRascal feel, which is also often a good indicator of the translator getting things completely wrong.

Highlights:

You too girl, don't just mating only with him....

She accidentally mating - is this dangerous?

shall i dry up your balls ?

A+ for this formulation!

She's nicely scretched in front of us today.

...what?

She will cum directly after you shoved her insides.

IM IN UR GENITALS, SHOVING UR INSIDES

Wow, is the switch already entered ?

Oh FFS...

There are so many of those skipping-lecture bastards...hnnhh

Skipping-lecture bastards?
(IMG:[saori.weeaboo.se] http://saori.weeaboo.se:8080/img/skipping_lecture.jpg)

DGze is right, page 7 has a whole lot of wrong, including some lines he didn't comment in his post.

Some more...

Don't ruin the mood please.
You have to keep stroking til it's slippery if you want an excuse.

Here he's like, "Don't take this the wrong way, / but to tell the truth I like it (when you're) messy."

If belldandy from automotive club becomes so famous,
someday, she'll get admirer who will go crazy for her.
They'll have the urge to disgrace & make her dirty.

And this, he's talking about himself, he wants to mess her up and stuff.

Can we have sex together sooner ...?

How about we/are you ready to do it now?

Since you want to try it once... it'll be good to discuss the price first.

If you want, we can...

Hey wait a minute you idiot...
it seems you don't understand yet , huh.

Sorry, she's a bit of an airhead...she doesn't get it.

Oh well, I will carefully take a look at it !

Whether i will buy or i won't buy, i'll have to see the item first.

...^That's supposed to be about the teacher the whole time, not himself.


I skipped some parts because I don't get this story that well, and I haven't gone past that page 14... But in short, it looks like there's a lot of mistakes.