[X] My Assistant

Himiko... slutty, undeveloped, twin-tailed... her hobby is to provoke older men in crowded trains to gangbang her... what I really hate about the character design are her hair, particularly how her bangs transition to the stretched strands for her tawin-tails. also her thighs seem a little bit too fat. In this drawing, I think the dick is not long enough to be intimidating, though the thickness seems just right (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)

[i3.lulzimg.com] (IMG:[i3.lulzimg.com] http://i3.lulzimg.com/f68b8f2035.jpg)

Yukari... aspiring actress, in love with a porn director who deflowered her in middle school (sketches from the story should be more telling)... My question is if the haircut looks good?

[i3.lulzimg.com] (IMG:[i3.lulzimg.com] http://i3.lulzimg.com/ea338571ad.jpg) [i3.lulzimg.com] (IMG:[i3.lulzimg.com] http://i3.lulzimg.com/68e6398ec2.jpg)

All these are incomplete, but any technical comments will be very much appreciated (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

how about this?
just a quick sketches, I'm actually focusing on her face and the bodies parts just flowing without making any attention to the details
(IMG:https://e-hentai.org/r/bdf37cb96898e7008fa3c59d42b501a620e79147-62360-679-510-jpg/485930-703f9fc58dfc37ed1104407be3b68dc4672387d0/519900-5/Athela_Machinizer_Artillerytk.jpg)

so in this thread do we..or I post pics i edited or made in hear and get friendly Criticism

If you are going to post edit pics be sure to include the original, too, so critics can compare.

Yes, that shall do it
and because you are indeed like to do some editing, why not take a look into the Co-Op drawings?

This post has been edited by lusterjoker: Sep 8 2012, 09:53

how about this?
just a quick sketches, I'm actually focusing on her face and the bodies parts just flowing without making any attention to the details
(IMG:https://e-hentai.org/r/bdf37cb96898e7008fa3c59d42b501a620e79147-62360-679-510-jpg/485930-703f9fc58dfc37ed1104407be3b68dc4672387d0/519900-5/Athela_Machinizer_Artillerytk.jpg)

eh, real armor is simple so your good on that. maybe make it a few sizes bigger, casue right now it's painted on

bigger..hmm..an Idea just struck me in the head...
Warhammer

hahah, oh warhammer, the money nerds can waste.... wanna see my $3000 puter chaos army, whoooooooo....
hahaha, not what i had in mind at all with your girl, i just mean it looks like the armor is a size to small, i like that sleek bubblegum crisis look but the girls gotta be like 80 lbs to fit it.....

speaking of shit that looks like it's ripped from warhammer...

did this wallpaper/poster for a team project im on, unvanquised, long story short i wanna call it finished mianly cause i really dont like the project and blah blah balh..... anway, a couple people brought up the lighting issues, and i admit there there, but do you really think its worth fucking with? It's more a question of, should i fix it cause i coupld of dumbass highschool kids on an open source project think they know lighting, or just walk awaaaaaaaay?

i just draw the pics, i think the design is cleary ripped from something like crysis....

anway, a couple people brought up the lighting issues, and i admit there there, but do you really think its worth fucking with? It's more a question of, should i fix it cause i coupld of dumbass highschool kids on an open source project think they know lighting, or just walk awaaaaaaaay?

i just draw the pics, i think the design is cleary ripped from something like crysis....

I'd say no or that your busy with other things (if there is no pay involved). Or quickly see what you can do with some filters and layering. But that pic does look familiar. Was thinking maybe a modded image of Iron Man, but then you said Crysis and that was a bit closer. Anyway, looks good.

Luster: Looks good. Is it custom armor, or standard issue armor? If your doing a story then usually armor would be standard issued and not be so form fitting (Unless the armor was specially made). But you can mix an match, if your story has a long war time period. Say armors are swapped out with an enemies and repainted or rigged to fit. Also looks like it transforms into a faster mobile unit (looking at the treads on the backside).

This post has been edited by Animan3d: Sep 8 2012, 23:19

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hmm..maybe a lighting issues, the left side should be more darker, and maybe adding some thing like metal scratch or battle scars to both environment and characters would add the effect...and I think it does need a little bit adjustment to the main character it's really looks like Ironman from this angle

@E&A3d
well..actually I have no idea what the Armor should be..I just making a face sketch then when it comes to the neck parts suddenly Licky comes along with Heavy Arms t-shirt...then spontaneously I just draws it randomly

here's a pic i made of gwen tennyson some time ago :3

[fc02.deviantart.net] http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/123...me_by_erohd.jpg

yeah, might just do a quick edit and say here you go fuckers... i really have no say in the design, but if it were up to me i'd throw a bladse on the front and say it's a throwback to guyver ;p

I don't have any critique, but I'll say this: I've always despised Gwen Tennyson & today I fantasized her
for the first time. Curse you Speakaboo >.<

ok i am posting my edit and the original im ready for many laughs it was my biggest failure out of my good ones....

This is the original i want people to edit it where she is lifting her dress up for a great full pantyshot
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This is my version but as you can tell not so great im ready for laugh who know maybe i will make someones day a laugh to turn a crappy day into a good one lol i knida did worse every 5 minutes lol i think i lost inspiration half way in so let me have your thoughts :3


This post has been edited by konata5: Sep 10 2012, 06:49