[X] My Assistant

More progress, this will be cleaned more and have panels added. Going to shoot for 4 pages completed first then hopefully add more. Damn I don't see how professional dudes crank pages out so fast, shit is time consuming.

Don't push yourself, even the sketch version is good enough fot the D-Project.

After all this is an advertising comic, so after the project you may continue your
ink/coloring & publish it again as your own gallery ^^

I'm thinking of something for next D-Project. It would consist of a TV station which has very low audience, hence is in awful economic situation. TV director decides to make use of female TV news announcers to increase his channel popularity.

Sex channel?

Spoiler text - Highlight to read...

Suddenly I remember that crazy japanese clip with dudes going bukkake on that female announcer, while she was reading an article.

currently making sketch and continuing to the story
I was planning to make it a 20 pages......but need some language editor and some art critiques before finalizing it...
and do remember the word "finalizing" means that I'm too lazy to inking it and do some colors
(IMG:[i1239.photobucket.com] http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff501/Gil-Pesmerga/LULZ2.gif)

here
I need some advice for the dialogues, sfx and maybe some input for the sketches
and how to make a nice speech balloons.
 Union_Lustropia.zip ( 1.83mb ) Number of downloads: 12

 Union_Lustropia.zip ( 1.83mb ) Number of downloads: 12

Thanks for sharing L.J, sketches are fairly clean (IMG:https://forums.e-hentai.org/style_images/ambience/folder_post_icons/icon14.gif)

need input about the dialogues and SFX...and I suck at making speech ballons
darn...

Trying some stuff out.
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mhhh this thing is pretty good.. need to check every post and news to make sure i can help... gimme time

Posting to show that I'm still working on this, fixed some stuff and trying some more stuff out, got to fix gradient problem on the bottom.
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Wow, you're into the project thoroughly (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/blink.gif)

Keep it up (IMG:https://forums.e-hentai.org/style_images/ambience/folder_post_icons/icon14.gif)

Trying out digital inking... december 15... fuuuuuuuuuuuuck.
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Trying out digital inking... december 15... fuuuuuuuuuuuuck.
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Fixed your link ^^

Also don't push yourself with inking, clean sketch is enough.

Fixed your link ^^

Also don't push yourself with inking, clean sketch is enough.

Hey thanks for that, much appreciated. Someone tagged the thing as mature content at minus so maybe that did something? Not sure.

I have never inked or even tried to finish a sequential story like this so the comic is being used as a sort of learning tool, my apologies if it feels like I'm overdoing it with the excessive inking.

By the way I was wondering if anyone thought the character in the attached image looks too young or small, its supposed to be a futa girl of age and not a loli or shota but perhaps the body is too small. Wanted to get someones opinion before i start cleaning and inking it.[attachembed=20665]

This post has been edited by ale33: Dec 17 2012, 05:08

One of the pages I am working on trying to hurry as fast as possible, sketched a couple of pages more but they're too rough to scan. Still have to fix some stuff on this like the spit, add a panel bottom left, add some lines, burn it with fire and draw it again... I tried a coloring method on a pencil sketch as a test to color without inking, might try it on the comic. Hopefully the image links work this time.
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Tried out pencil and color on this page without inking. Still need to complete the page...
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Thanks to ale33 the 2nd d-project will be published I guess ^^

If anyone has some works to share plz post them here or PM me before the end of December,
because of christmas celebration you may continue from January until Sunday, after that the
2nd d-project will be officially closed and start preparations for the gallery publish.

Should be 4 pngs 1010x1425, hopefully nothing is wrong.[attachmentid=21388]

This post has been edited by ale33: Jan 5 2013, 16:27

Should be 4 pngs 1010x1425, hopefully nothing is wrong.[attachmentid=21388]

Thank you kindly, now I have enough pieces to close the 2nd d-project & prepare for the publishing (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

dis place....so dead quiet...seriously...
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At least look on the bright side; some comrades around here are working their projects individually
which was the main purpose of this thread, to give this motivation. As for the teamwork, well...
it didn't work out exactly, it's something that we've tried & as I said from the very beginning: it could
be successful or epic failure.

But rest assured that I won't let this thread die without trying something different.

This post has been edited by BrainSucks: Jul 1 2013, 13:50