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post May 3 2012, 20:39
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QUOTE(Muramasa777 @ May 3 2012, 20:32) *

Never imagined that drawing a bathtub in perspective could be so hard.


welcome to the desperate backgrounds club
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post May 3 2012, 20:45
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I left a note for the newcomers ^^

QUOTE(Muramasa777 @ May 3 2012, 21:32) *

Never imagined that drawing a bathtub in perspective could be so hard.

I haet drawing backgrounds :x
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post May 3 2012, 23:56
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First "chapter" is 12 pages long and finished.
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post May 4 2012, 04:56
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I'd just like to point out that the original length was supposed to be 4-6.
You people are beasts! BEASTS!

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post May 4 2012, 05:39
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QUOTE(Muramasa777 @ May 3 2012, 11:56) *

First "chapter" is 12 pages long and finished.

whoa... damn you're blazing.
Im not even done with drafting a story.. Plus im probably gonna be altering some page placements. Thank you Photoshop!!

Btw should i even bother with screentone or would you rather i take forever and color the damn thing LOL.
(Reminder im working with 5000x6800 page sizes 600dpi)
OMFG my recent works have gone above 500MB on my hdd... damn files are huge.
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post May 4 2012, 05:43
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QUOTE(terumi56 @ May 4 2012, 11:39) *

whoa... damn you're blazing.
Im not even done with drafting a story.. Plus im probably gonna be altering some page placements. Thank you Photoshop!!

Btw should i even bother with screentone or would you rather i take forever and color the damn thing LOL.
(Reminder im working with 5000x6800 page sizes 600dpi)
OMFG my recent works have gone above 500MB on my hdd... damn files are huge.


My computer can't work with such huge size of picture. Jealous.
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post May 4 2012, 06:01
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QUOTE(Muramasa777 @ May 4 2012, 02:32) *

Never imagined that drawing a bathtub in perspective could be so hard.


It's better to copy directly from photos. In my view, draw a person in the tub is even more difficult that need multiply times of layout to come up with a good pose.
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post May 4 2012, 06:12
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QUOTE(terumi56 @ May 4 2012, 06:39) *

(Reminder im working with 5000x6800 page sizes 600dpi)

FFFFFFUUUUUUUUUCK!!! I'll come to you & steal your PC :]
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post May 4 2012, 08:22
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QUOTE(Muramasa777 @ May 4 2012, 05:56) *

First "chapter" is 12 pages long and finished.


how many chapters do you have? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)
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post May 4 2012, 09:34
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QUOTE(Ever Dark @ May 4 2012, 08:22) *

how many chapters do you have? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)


I don't know. But at the moment I've thought of three or four more scenes, and keep thinking of more.

Also, I'm drawing kind of sketchy and ignoring backgrounds in most of the panels. Brain can confirm this. And that's why there are so much pages.
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post May 4 2012, 13:16
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page 4-5
....but I think page 4 should be on 3 and vice versa...
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after this.. it should be Ogami get busted>Maria and Sakura screams EEEKK!!>Sakura got pissed off>Ogami get stunned because both of them are naked..and wet>Maria under the influence of the sake got her pussy dripping without her realized it>Ogami with pervert face quickly grabs Maria and start licking her..you know>Maria excited and whisper..moar!..uh..I mean more>Sakura get turned on suddenly grab Ogami back and start rubbing her breast to him>...I lost track
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post May 4 2012, 14:35
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omg my hand is dead LOL... too much drawing.

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and all my motivation for the next few years is spent.
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post May 4 2012, 14:51
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I think that the "sketch mode" is better than the "line mode". More visually attractive, and because sometimes there's no need for HD. Just sayin'.

Also, working on page 15, which would be page 3 for #2 issue.
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post May 4 2012, 17:06
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@Terumi: EXCELLENT... please more (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Last panel of Yura/rook of Seitokai (student council) DxD

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Needs some line-art fixes, maybe a third dick unloading on the top of her head from a front-on perspective, and definitely more cum on her body... and grey-scale color is only temporary.

Anyway, is japanese and right-to-left panels OK?!?!?
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post May 4 2012, 17:32
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QUOTE(Malkuth @ May 4 2012, 17:06) *

Anyway, is japanese and right-to-left panels OK?!?!?


As long as readers are able to guess the correct order I don't think it's your main worry. I have used western order, and arrows in some pages.
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post May 4 2012, 17:44
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anyway guys...
how to apply the screen tones for each panels in photoshop?
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post May 4 2012, 18:35
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QUOTE(Muramasa777 @ May 4 2012, 15:34) *

I don't know. But at the moment I've thought of three or four more scenes, and keep thinking of more.

Also, I'm drawing kind of sketchy and ignoring backgrounds in most of the panels. Brain can confirm this. And that's why there are so much pages.


Cool, friend (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Time is running short. Me just simplify my story, though it needs more pages than I expect, skills get rusty:


Page 1: The OA playing WoW, pretend working with the girl. The girl despises his low rank in company. Weird perfume smell flows in the office.

Page 2: When they buying food in convenience store. They fap in their own partitions. They become flirty and grope each other because of the perfume.

Page 3: When they try to calm down in pantry, they lose control. They kiss and fondle by the strong influence of perfume. He licks her pussy and orders the girl to suck his cock.

Page 4:69 on sofa. They hump on the sofa (missionary) till they cum.

Page 5: They fuck again. They can’t stop and just hump in their partition(doggie).

Page 6: The girl is not enough but the boy is not. They humps facing the windows of the conference room.

Page 7: They lie on the table naked after countless times of sexy time.

Page 8: Several days later, the girl works overtime again. The boy goes for food with her. She buy him some condoms ignoring the faces of keepers in the convenience store.
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post May 4 2012, 18:37
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QUOTE(Ever Dark @ May 4 2012, 18:35) *

Page 7: They lie on the table naked after countless times of sexy time.


They "lay" on the table, I guess. Laying is not the same as lying.
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QUOTE(lusterjoker @ May 4 2012, 14:16) *

page 4-5
....but I think page 4 should be on 3 and vice versa...
(IMG:[i2.lulzimg.com] http://i2.lulzimg.com/f7ea702029.jpg)
(IMG:[i2.lulzimg.com] http://i2.lulzimg.com/79bdca58d8.jpg)
after this.. it should be Ogami get busted>Maria and Sakura screams EEEKK!!>Sakura got pissed off>Ogami get stunned because both of them are naked..and wet>Maria under the influence of the sake got her pussy dripping without her realized it>Ogami with pervert face quickly grabs Maria and start licking her..you know>Maria excited and whisper..moar!..uh..I mean more>Sakura get turned on suddenly grab Ogami back and start rubbing her breast to him>...I lost track

Yes, YEEESSS. Proceed with the "story" >:3

QUOTE(terumi56 @ May 4 2012, 15:35) *

omg my hand is dead LOL... too much drawing.

[attachembed=13879]
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and all my motivation for the next few years is spent.

Ah c'mon, don't be like that. We LOVE your works (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

And Masamunemara is right y'know. The sketch is more beautiful than ink.
But yet again, you're the artist, so do whatever you feel is right ^^

QUOTE(Malkuth @ May 4 2012, 18:06) *

Last panel of Yura/rook of Seitokai (student council) DxD

(IMG:[i2.lulzimg.com] http://i2.lulzimg.com/dfc6d7d01a.jpg)

Needs some line-art fixes, maybe a third dick unloading on the top of her head from a front-on perspective, and definitely more cum on her body... and grey-scale color is only temporary.

Can't wait to see your comic (if you're planning to make) (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

QUOTE(Malkuth @ May 4 2012, 18:06) *

Anyway, is japanese and right-to-left panels OK?!?!?

That's an excellent question my friend & I should add it as note.

To answer your question: Yes, is OK (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)

QUOTE(lusterjoker @ May 4 2012, 18:44) *

anyway guys...
how to apply the screen tones for each panels in photoshop?

You mean speech balloons? It's very easy, but a little tricky.

Just give me a moment to check my PhotoShop for "correct names" & I'll PM you ^^

QUOTE(Ever Dark @ May 4 2012, 19:35) *

Cool, friend (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Time is running short. Me just simplify my story, though it needs more pages than I expect, skills get rusty:

You have a whole month, so don't rush. Relax & enjoy the drawing with a nice music (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

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Time is running short. Me just simplify my story, though it needs more pages than I expect, skills get rusty:

Rush! RUSH DAMN YOU! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)
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