QUOTE(lusterjoker @ May 4 2012, 14:16)

page 4-5
....but I think page 4 should be on 3 and vice versa...
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after this.. it should be Ogami get busted>Maria and Sakura screams EEEKK!!>Sakura got pissed off>Ogami get stunned because both of them are naked..and wet>Maria under the influence of the sake got her pussy dripping without her realized it>Ogami with pervert face quickly grabs Maria and start licking her..you know>Maria excited and whisper..moar!..uh..I mean more>Sakura get turned on suddenly grab Ogami back and start rubbing her breast to him>...I lost track
Yes, YEEESSS. Proceed with the "story" >:3
QUOTE(terumi56 @ May 4 2012, 15:35)

omg my hand is dead LOL... too much drawing.
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and all my motivation for the next few years is spent.
Ah c'mon, don't be like that. We LOVE your works (IMG:[
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And Masamunemara is right y'know. The sketch is more beautiful than ink.
But yet again, you're the artist, so do whatever you feel is right ^^
QUOTE(Malkuth @ May 4 2012, 18:06)

Last panel of Yura/rook of Seitokai (student council) DxD
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Needs some line-art fixes, maybe a third dick unloading on the top of her head from a front-on perspective, and definitely more cum on her body... and grey-scale color is only temporary.
Can't wait to see your comic (if you're planning to make) (IMG:[
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QUOTE(Malkuth @ May 4 2012, 18:06)

Anyway, is japanese and right-to-left panels OK?!?!?
That's an excellent question my friend & I should add it as note.
To answer your question:
Yes, is OK (IMG:[
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QUOTE(lusterjoker @ May 4 2012, 18:44)

anyway guys...
how to apply the screen tones for each panels in photoshop?
You mean
speech balloons? It's very easy, but a little tricky.
Just give me a moment to check my PhotoShop for "correct names" & I'll PM you ^^
QUOTE(Ever Dark @ May 4 2012, 19:35)

Cool, friend (IMG:[
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Time is running short. Me just simplify my story, though it needs more pages than I expect, skills get rusty:
You have a whole month, so don't rush. Relax & enjoy the drawing with a nice music (IMG:[
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This post has been edited by BrainSucks: May 4 2012, 20:47