[X] My Assistant

In regards to https://e-hentai.org/g/1359116/b1b0de1c67/ I'm almost certain that it's a rewrite, just like others have mentioned.

There are several inconsistencies in the text, given that the whole thing is a typical Japanese Adult Video casting, with Urd being the actress. Unfortunately, I can't translate the whole thing on my own, since I can only use google translate to check some of the text, but that's not enough to offer an accurate translation for the whole thing.

For instance, at the very beginning, the producer asks Urd about her cup size, and she replies that it's a K-cup (Japanese). Also, during the gangbang, she doesn't explicitly mentions that she's afraid of getting pregnant, just that it's not good for them to do her raw. I'm somewhat on the fence as to why that's the case, but despite she repeats that it's not good to do it inside of her, she never explain what's the issue. It could very well be that she finds it humiliating, but then again, it could be that she fears that they might impregnate her. Whatever the case may be, it's left like that, and gradually they keep doing her until she enthusiastically partakes in the act.

At any rate, I feel that the translator did actually check some parts, but then went ahead and changed others, even adding lines to places where we only get Urd's "sound effects" like the moment she blows them, and that's her making some noises, rather than the guys asking her to do it.

And speaking of Urd, her name in the original text is actually Ururin, which I initially thought it was a mistake, since Urudo is the proper version of her name, but in the very last page, Keiichi calls her by her original name. It's kind of implied that she's using an alias throughout the whole filming, since she probably doesn't want to use her real name. In this case, I'm not even sure what's the best approach, since a faithful translation could lead some readers into thinking that it's the translator's fault, rather than something intentionally done.

As it is, this is a decent attempt to translate this doujinshi, and the decensoring is definitely appreciated, but it's more of a rewrite than an accurate translation.

Thanks. If anyone cares, would be nice to review his other works and see which need to be tagged as rewrites too.

If you think a gallery is a rewrite, posting a comment with an example helps immensely, if someone just tags a gallery as rewrite with no comment how are the rest of us supposed to know if it is a valid criticism or random trolling? Just saying

you can tag all of his galleries as rewrites, it is just straight up impossible that has managed to produce even one single accurate translation.

on several pages he fills SFX bubbles with made up dialogue. this isn't even a case of a shitty machine translation, no machine translation service will ever create entire sentences out of a single slurping SFX.

here, on these pages the condom becomes sentient and manages to break the laws of physics by talking because he didn't realize the bubbles were just a pulling SFX.
https://e-hentai.org/s/a8e048ed6a/404134-44
https://e-hentai.org/s/07bb304be9/1359116-44

obviously it's bad not to provide examples to prove the tag is correct, but the fucker has 27 galleries. no translator is going to spend time going through his garbage instead of working on their own projects.

It's not like he'll stop after being called out either, because pretending he's "translating" anything obviously makes him mentally ill.
In some of his earlier galleries he mentions OCR and just guessing the rest. he clearly must have thrown OCR out the window very quickly.

This post has been edited by pepedid119: Feb 5 2019, 22:29

Well, in that case we need to

1) tag all of his works as rewrite

2) file rename petitions to correct the names of the galleries

here, on these pages the condom becomes sentient and manages to break the laws of physics by talking because he didn't realize the bubbles were just a pulling SFX.
https://e-hentai.org/s/a8e048ed6a/404134-44
https://e-hentai.org/s/07bb304be9/1359116-44

Heh, that's freaking great......you can't even buy entertainment like that (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

This post has been edited by svines85: Feb 7 2019, 08:49

Heh, that's freaking great......you can't even buy entertainment like that (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Made me laugh too (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

There's now a vigi thread for discussing TL vs rewrites as well https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showt...p;#entry5366707