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post Dec 31 2014, 17:02
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QUOTE(yuripe @ Dec 31 2014, 11:02) *
Excuse me, I need a help to translate these sentences :

眼前に並ぶ華奢な体躯を気のすむまで堪能するがよい

余計なことは忘れ己が欲望に従え
I guess it's about (female) (naked) bodies lined up in front of the speaker and how by seeing it, the character stop thinking and abandon itself to lust (or is it the opposite?).
But without the context it's hard to get the middle ground between the idea and the way to write it, to remain as faithful as possible to the original version.

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post Dec 31 2014, 18:55
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QUOTE(uareader @ Dec 31 2014, 22:02) *

I guess it's about (female) (naked) bodies lined up in front of the speaker and how by seeing it, the character stop thinking and abandon itself to lust (or is it the opposite?).
But without the context it's hard to get the middle ground between the idea and the way to write it, to remain as faithful as possible to the original version.


Those lines from Himo-loli 3

https://e-hentai.org/s/b08fb9d649/771302-5
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post Dec 31 2014, 20:22
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Just help with this, please.
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post Dec 31 2014, 20:57
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QUOTE(yuripe @ Dec 31 2014, 10:02) *
眼前に並ぶ華奢な体躯を気のすむまで堪能するがよい

余計なことは忘れ己が欲望に従え
"Taste delicate bodies which are in your sight, until you're satisfied."
"Follow nothing but your fleshly lusts."
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post Jan 1 2015, 07:21
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QUOTE(Super Shanko @ Jan 1 2015, 01:22) *

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Just help with this, please.

オナ目撃はさすがにきまずいっっ = staring to girl's body is still too awkward ...

^
Maybe it can be improved more.

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"Taste delicate bodies which are in your sight, until you're satisfied."
"Follow nothing but your fleshly lusts."


Oh, thx :3

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post Jan 1 2015, 07:57
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QUOTE(yuripe @ Jan 1 2015, 18:21) *

オナ目撃はさすがにきまずいっっ = staring to girl's body is still too awkward ...

^
Maybe it can be improved more.

That would be incorrect.

オナ目撃はさすがにきまずいっっ
Witnessing masturbation is really awkward
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post Jan 2 2015, 06:06
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I could use some advice on something. Unusually, it's not about reading difficultly-drawn kanji!

A man is having sex with a woman. At first he doesn't really understand how he feels about her, but then has a realization. The following lines are then spoken over two panels:

天邪鬼で
泣き虫で

だけど後ろに
ついてきてくれる

I have two questions.

1. I'm thinking of 天邪鬼 as contrary, or maybe contrarian. Does that seem about right?
2. I'm not sure how I would state the 2nd half. Any thoughts?

Thanks for any help!

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post Jan 5 2015, 06:48
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Alright, then it seems that this is the missing line I need. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/heh.gif)
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post Jan 5 2015, 08:03
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QUOTE(ultimaflaral @ Jan 2 2015, 17:06) *

I could use some advice on something. Unusually, it's not about reading difficultly-drawn kanji!

A man is having sex with a woman. At first he doesn't really understand how he feels about her, but then has a realization. The following lines are then spoken over two panels:

天邪鬼で
泣き虫で

だけど後ろに
ついてきてくれる

I have two questions.

1. I'm thinking of 天邪鬼 as contrary, or maybe contrarian. Does that seem about right?
2. I'm not sure how I would state the 2nd half. Any thoughts?

Thanks for any help!

UF

Source?

QUOTE(Super Shanko @ Jan 5 2015, 17:48) *

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Alright, then it seems that this is the missing line I need. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/heh.gif)

さ、洗濯しなきゃ!!
みゆき、急にお邪魔して 
ごめー
Right, I need do the laundry!!
Miyuki, sorry I bothered you sudden-


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post Jan 5 2015, 08:20
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QUOTE(N04h @ Jan 5 2015, 01:03) *

Source?


https://e-hentai.org/s/dad9f1414f/747450-92

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post Jan 5 2015, 09:37
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QUOTE(ultimaflaral @ Jan 2 2015, 17:06) *

I could use some advice on something. Unusually, it's not about reading difficultly-drawn kanji!

A man is having sex with a woman. At first he doesn't really understand how he feels about her, but then has a realization. The following lines are then spoken over two panels:

天邪鬼で
泣き虫で

だけど後ろに
ついてきてくれる

I have two questions.

1. I'm thinking of 天邪鬼 as contrary, or maybe contrarian. Does that seem about right?
2. I'm not sure how I would state the 2nd half. Any thoughts?

Thanks for any help!

UF

1. seems correct [contrarian, perverse, cross-grained, awkward cuss]

She's a contrarian
And a crybaby
But she helps by following me

Thira might have a better answer.
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post Jan 5 2015, 16:57
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QUOTE(N04h @ Jan 5 2015, 07:37) *
Thira might have a better answer.
Seems no big correction is needed. Hehe.
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post Jan 6 2015, 01:17
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Thanks, both of you.

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post Jan 6 2015, 06:49
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Hi, someone could help me to translate into english this 4koma???

These are the images

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post Jan 6 2015, 12:51
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QUOTE(benjiotaku @ Jan 6 2015, 17:49) *

Hi, someone could help me to translate into english this 4koma???

These are the images

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It would be easier if you labeled each panel.
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post Jan 6 2015, 17:25
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Hello, I need some helps again on these sentences.

余計にヌルヌルしてきたッ

なかなかではないか
じゃがこの零華を満足させるには …

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post Jan 6 2015, 20:25
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As always for my translations, it won't be perfect, adapt using the context and/or alternative dictionaries, using it as is may not work:

余計にヌルヌルしてきたッ : it turned out unnecessarily slimy

なかなかではないか : it's not bad at all
じゃがこの零華を満足させるには … With that getting this Reika satisfied should be...

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post Jan 6 2015, 20:30
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QUOTE(uareader @ Jan 7 2015, 03:25) *

なかなかではないか : it's not bad at all
じゃがこの零華を満足させるには … With that getting this Reika satisfied should be...
It sounds more like: "You're not half bad. However, it will take more than that to satisfy me..."
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post Jan 6 2015, 23:54
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余計にヌルヌルしてきたッ : it turned out unnecessarily slimy


It's getting even slimier
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post Jan 7 2015, 01:29
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~Nevermind this post, I will ask about this elsewhere again as it seems this post being the last on the page caused the questions I was asking about to be missed by people who instead just read the next page's questions (at least I hope that's the reason no one responded to it)~

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