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ok thanks

what about 大陰唇 (other than labia majora)

With this one, the term is as it is (Labia Majora).
However since it's a hentai manga, there is no need to be that specific.

Pussy or crotch should suffice. However if you really want to stick to the closest without being too specific, use the word "Vulva".

I'm not a native English speaker so I don't know if this word is too weird, but some days ago someone told me about the slang "mons". [www.urbandictionary.com] http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=mons

Can anyone think of english version of 細胞侵食?

I think it's "Cell Invasion".
By the context, it seems used for override control of someone's mind and memories, means "invade and control from inside".

Also word "侵食細胞注入" is in page 8.
This means "Injecting Invader Cell".

what about 大陰唇 (other than labia majora)

This is not exact, but I think "flaps" or "meaty lips" will be fit to the situation?

thanks but I went with cell corruption

Translators, here my plea and decide whether this is decent (you know what I mean)

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/6487/c4216b0124/

Trans:

Pg.11

Tomoe: Untie me right now!!

Elina: Boooo~~don't say that, Onee-chan.

ELina: I don't't want you saying that!!

Elina: I could kill you~~~

Elina: So stay quiet while I make you feel good.


Pg.12

Tomoe: No...I don't like this...

Tomoe: Uhh..

Tomoe: Uhhhn..

Elina: Hehehe, you want more?

Elina: [Curse] Harden one's desires.

Tomoe: This is...indecence!

Tomoe: Sto...stop this at once!!

Elina: XXXXXXXXXXXXXX


Pg.13

Tomoe: This curse is three times better than usual, it feels too good, I'll die.

Elina: Just as I thought, you're enjoying every bit of this.

Tomoe: Ahh, kuh...huh

Elina: You feel it to, right.

Elena: Hey, hey, are you listening, my god, you're like this everyday, Is this really the milk of a virgin

squeezing out?

Tomoe: No...I'm not like that...


Pg.14

Elina: I can't believe I get to see it~~~You're happy I'm squeezing out your milk?

Tomoe: It-ts not like that.

Elina: Uhn, Its a shrine maiden's secret.

Elina: [Shrine Maiden's Secret] is rather...

Elena: ...unpleasent.

Tomoe: Ahh...

Tomoe: Stop, please stop this!! Yes, this isn't right.!


Pg.15

Tomoe: Ahhhhhhhhh. Cumming. I'm cumming!!

Elina: Uhn, amazing.

Elina: You're a dirty little shrine maiden, aren't you.

Tomoe: Oh lord, your war clothes are stained with your love juices.

Tomoe: My breast came...

Tomoe: No...thats not possible,


Pg.16

Elina: Onee-chan.

Elina: Come out so we can see you.

Tomoe: Reina-san

Elina: Onee-chan, Tomoe is making so much noise.

Elina: Say, Reina-san? What's this...

Elina: This is Onee-chan's penis.

Tomoe: !?


Pg.17

Elena: Now I know why you ran away from home.

Elena: This is the first you've spoke of this.

Reina: About that...well..

Reina: E...Elena.....

Reina: This is the reason I've kept it a secret in the first place.

Elena: I'll help comfort.

Elena: Talking...about this...

Elina: is just like old times, right Onee-chan?

Elina: You seem perfectly fine to me.

Reina: Uhh, kuhh!!

Elina: Onee-chan's cum, it's been a while.


Pg:18

Elena: However, I'll return the desire, like this.

Tomoe: Wha..whatis this.

Elena: Onee-chan, give it to Tomoe-chan.

Tomoe: What are you up to!!

Elena: Just petting you is too much, right.

Tomoe: Ahh...Reina-san's...

Tomoe: Its feels too good. Its hot...and feels slimy.


Pg.19

Elena: Although, this is getting boring...

Elena: We've already come this far!

Elena: Let's finish this, Onee-chan

Tomoe: Nooooo!!!

Tomoe: Its in!! I don't like this!!


Pg.20

Elena: Onee-chan, you still there?

Elena: It's in my ass...Onee-chan's penis, that's what I expect from you puttin it there.

Reina: Khuhhh...

Elena: Ahh, Ahh, Ahhhh...Amazing!!!


Pg.21

Reina: Huhn, Huuuhhhn!!

Tomoe: Cumming, I'm cumminggg!!!

It is Decent as I would give an 80% overall with some inaccuracies here and there.

Example :

Pg.13

Tomoe: This curse is three times better than usual, it feels too good, I'll die.

Elina: Just as I thought, you're enjoying every bit of this.

Tomoe: Ahh, kuh...huh

Elina: You feel it to, right.

Elena: Hey, hey, are you listening, my god, you're like this everyday, Is this really the milk of a virgin

squeezing out?

Tomoe: No...I'm not like that...

Elina : I cast on you a spell which makes your body three times more sensitive.

Elina: So, even if I pinch it hard like this.

Tomoe: Ahh, kuh...huh

Elina: You should only feel pleasure.

Elina: Hey, hey, I heard they say that the war maidens of Hinomoto offer the milk of a virgin (Their milk maybe?) everyday to god, is that true?

Tomoe: No... T-that 's not...

Thanks (for the extra accurate lines).

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Jun 28 2012, 08:29

Pg.11
ELina: I don't't want you saying that!!

This is not Elina's line but Tomoe's.
Tomoe: This is not logical you torture me!!

Pg.12
Elina: [Curse] Harden one's desires.

Elina: "Spell" will be more effective if you're more stubborn.

Pg.13
Tomoe: This curse is three times better than usual, it feels too good, I'll die.

This is not Tomoe's line but Elina's.
Elina: The curse triples your sexual pleasure.

Elena: Hey, hey, are you listening, my god, you're like this everyday, Is this really the milk of a virgin
squeezing out?

Elena: Hey, I heard the rumor...
Elena: Warrior Shrine Maidens of Hinomoto squeeze their milk of virgin and offer to the god everyday...
Elena: Is it true?

Pg.14
Elina: I can't believe I get to see it~~~You're happy I'm squeezing out your milk?

Elina: I want to see that if it is true.
Elena: You feel good while squeezing milk by yourself?

Elina: Uhn, Its a shrine maiden's secret.

This is not Elina's line but Tomoe's.

Elina: [Shrine Maiden's Secret] is rather...
Elena: ...unpleasent.

Elena: "Shrine Maiden's Secret" sounds...
Elena: sexual obsession.

Pg.15
Tomoe: Oh lord, your war clothes are stained with your love juices.
Tomoe: My breast came...

These are not Tomoe's lines but Elena's.

Pg.16
Elina: Onee-chan, Tomoe is making so much noise.

Elina: Onee-chan, you feel horny 'cause Tomoe makes much?

Elina: Say, Reina-san? What's this...

This is not Elina's line but Tomoe's.
Tomoe: Ms. Reina... What's that?

Pg.17
Elena: Now I know why you ran away from home.
Elena: This is the first you've spoke of this.

Elena: Now you know...
Elena: why she ran away from home.

Reina: This is the reason I've kept it a secret in the first place.

This is not Reina's line but Elina's.

Elena: Old time, onee-chan couldn't stop becoming horny.
Elena: Because of this was a secret, in old days...
Elena: I helped her like this.

Pg:18
Elena: Just petting you is too much, right.

Elena: We used to pet each other much.

Pg.19
Tomoe: Its in!! I don't like this!!

These are not Tomoe's lines but Elena's.

Elena: I got drilled deeply...
Elena: By onee-chan's penis...
Elena: Like this!!

Pg.20
Elena: It's in my ass...Onee-chan's penis, that's what I expect from you puttin it there.

Elena: Come drill my ass... Onee-chan's penis is only for my asshole.

This post has been edited by Thira: Jun 28 2012, 09:54

Apparently my Drill Jill chapter title is called "Kamadouma". Since I have to re-edit the title, what would that translate to?

You have to write in japanese

Heres the title: カマドウマ

Kamadouma
[en.wikipedia.org] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhaphidophoridae

But Kamadouma is also known as "便所コオロギ(loo cricket)" or "オカマコオロギ(fag cricket)" in Japan.

And, the name of the boy is "興梠(コオロギ/コーロギ)"
Means the title mentioned the boy, but seems hard to translate well.

Almost means "the boy loves meaty potty" or something but...

Almost means "the boy loves meaty potty" or something but...

I don't know how it almost means that...

With the "loo"/bathroom cricket part, it could be referring somehow to the latter half of the chapter, when they take her into the bathroom. Whether it's referring to her, or the boy (already named like "cricket"), or the other boys fucking her...I don't know. As a high-concept, devil-may-care translation, I could do [en.wiktionary.org] "Johns"; it's at least got the same sort of (apparent) hidden meanings as the Japanese title. Again, though, that's devil-may-care; it's not easy to figure out the real meaning or translate it well.

I'm gonna go with Bathroom Cricket if no one objects.

With the "loo"/bathroom cricket part, it could be referring somehow to the latter half of the chapter, when they take her into the bathroom.

Not that.

"loo" = "meaty potty" = Mochiduki-Sensei.
Also "loo cricket" never fucks potty (but just jumping around).

I'm gonna go with Bathroom Cricket if no one objects.

I like this version.

Hello, I'm having troubles figuring out this text bubble and wondered if someone could help me here:
[www.imagebam.com] (IMG:[thumbnails70.imagebam.com] http://thumbnails70.imagebam.com/20156/f05e78201556259.jpg)

I get most of it, but I have no idea what kanji the second last kanji is (between また童と and い張るか).
Also, about the first word, 'bokkyun', I guess it must be some onomatopoeia-like word, but still it would be helpful if someone could tell me what it really means.

Btw, the context is that a female (half-naked) ghost and the main character live together. She appears out of blue before him and he's annoyed about how sexy she looks (something like that^^).

Thanks in advance!

まだ童と言い張るかっ
Means "you insist yourself as child even you have ..." or something.

"Bokkyun" almost means "boomb-bust-ic (bombastic)" or "coke bottle (bon-kyu-bon)".
But also double meaning of "makes horny (勃起:bokki)".

This post has been edited by Thira: Jul 15 2012, 16:15

So it was just the 'iu'-kanji?
Man, and me here got all worked up because I thought it was some different difficult kanji^^

Well, thanks a lot for the help :-)
Gotta remember that the 'iu'-kanji can also look like that...