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> [Red's 29th Individual Bounty] (C71) [GOLD RUSH (Suzuki Address)] A Diva of Healing (Gundam SEED DESTINY), Job: 30 pages. Reward: 30,000 C + 30 Hath

 
post Mar 27 2013, 01:24
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Sorry it took so long, but I managed to make a WIP of the first 6 pages.

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I'd appreciate any feedback on it, or even tips, especially regarding the font use.

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post Mar 28 2013, 02:31
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Looks good to me. Any comments from our editors?
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post Mar 28 2013, 02:49
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On some parts the lettering is too high [Protip: With the selection tool picked, you can use the arrow keys to nudge the lines around instead of relying on the mouse]. Also where she's like "whaaaa?", you should've opted to make it fill the bubble more with something more even like wild words or similar.
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post Mar 30 2013, 11:26
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Understood, and thanks! Also, I think you meant "he", since it was Kira's face in that bubble.
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post Apr 15 2013, 17:26
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Can anyone make this doujin complete english translate ?
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post Apr 18 2013, 23:22
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Sorry for the delay; cleaning out all the sfx and redrawing what was under it is a huge time-consumer, especially when you have to deal with life ^^; Any editors here mind giving advice on speeding up the process? Also, attached is a page I finished.

e: for some reason the page won't attach o.o

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post May 8 2013, 10:40
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I've asked Tae2 for a progress report.
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post May 8 2013, 21:58
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Sadly, not much progress has been made; mostly life has been getting in the way. Perhaps I should resign until I got it all sorted out. Sorry (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)

Though, if any other editors want to work on this instead, I can post what I've got, which is: each page with all of the main text having been been cleaned off, leaving only the sheer amounts of sfx left to remove and replace. Also, the pages which already do have text in them which were posted earlier. Should make the job a little easier than having to clean it all off from scratch.
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post May 8 2013, 23:16
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Does the bounty requires editing all the SFX? Really?
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post May 9 2013, 20:12
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IF the SFX are making this a problem, we can talk about why. Perhaps some are not necessary?
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post May 9 2013, 21:46
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This is a single 30 page doujin and it's taken 1.5 years and it's still not finished?
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post May 10 2013, 17:25
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Welcome to the world of anonymous volunteers motivated by pretend money (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

And hey, we are partially through editing, that's not as bad as it could be (as in, no progress at all).

If another editor would like to help Tae2 out, I wouldn't mind splitting the bounty.

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post May 12 2013, 21:01
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@shadow_moon: Well, all the sfx are in the script, so apparently it is.

@Red_Piotrius: As I explained before, it's just very time-consuming to erase them and redraw what was under them so the pages aren't left with a bunch of out-of-place white blobs. Perhaps we could save the sfx for last, while I work on inserting the dialogue? Though speaking of help, I'm all for it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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post May 12 2013, 22:54
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It's no surprise that it'd take a long time to edit then. Editing out all the SFX is a pain. Is it something common to do? The redrawing work can be pretty massive.

Anyway, I don't know how you're working, but you could always try to enlarge a little bit the sfx to cover as much of the parts that would need a redraw as possible. In other words, typeset first, redraw later.
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post May 13 2013, 12:52
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Doing the SFX is the mark of high quality, but it is indeed time consuming. How about we aim to release v1 without the SFXes, and then I'll post an extra bounty for v2 with the remaining ones?
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post May 27 2013, 13:40
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If there's no progress report within few more days, I'll officially declare this bounty is looking for a new editor (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)
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post Jun 3 2013, 11:44
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Still working on it! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Currently on page 19 atm.
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post Jun 4 2013, 16:10
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That's good to know.
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post Jun 7 2013, 01:30
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Looking at the script, what exactly is the "global sfx" mentioned in there? Right at the end of the text of page 20, which is actually page 21.
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post Jun 8 2013, 20:19
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QUOTE(Tae2 @ Jun 7 2013, 01:30) *

Looking at the script, what exactly is the "global sfx" mentioned in there? Right at the end of the text of page 20, which is actually page 21.

Check the end of: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=2463532
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