QUOTE(Bloodmare @ Apr 25 2013, 02:46)
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I thought it was nice, but not amazing.
The story felt a bit forced in the beginning. But that's not a big problem.
I was annoyed by the portrayal of spa owners, they were too stereotyped. Using the cliches is not bad per se, but making the characters single minded, having a single point of view, just to fit the stereotype, to the point of making them dumb, that i don't like. Also Rarity making stereotype based assumptions about them, without addressing it further, doesn't make me happy.
On the other hand, Rarity was pretty cool it in.
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Here's a [
rambopvp.deviantart.com]
comic in progress i found. It's to early to tell if the story will be any good, but the art is nice. Here's my favorite panel so far: