lusterjoker: ok, i was think some stripes for cause have curved in armor. anyway, thx for the answer (IMG:[
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New question for any1
First i post the fixed version of sketch, what Eirhjien was done.
only sketch

w/o sketch

I mark some area where i think need to fix it.
1. the eye end seems its higher then hair, and some stripe look weird in between skin and hair, i cant recognize which is hair stripe or not, i'm not a pro, so probable will make mistakes, that why i'm here, tell me how to fix the problem, or where have the problem.
2. so far, i don't know if have problem or not, i think it have, the shoulder armor seems its lower then other armor in right, where i mark the stripe.
3. that armor look a little bit weird, maybe it need to add the first stripe what have in left and right? or just remove the top of that armor piece and add extra stripes what have in armor end?
Other question
I was read lots of websites, and some was recommend 6 color for skin.
Example: lightest probable white + lighter then neutral color + neutral color + red "this is between shadow and neutral", + little bit darker then neutral color and darkest probable black, then great, but what about armor? light colored ok, i can put 6 color, but in darker color like in rerebrace or in gaiters, enough 5 color?.
Last question.
It have 1 area i wasn't put neutral color, because i cant choice to remove or not, i talking to clothes in wrist and in elbow and in neck "already removed cause its better in look", the problem, if i don't remove those clothes in elbow and in wrist it will looks weird, cause in neck and breast and belly not have, or i'm wrong?