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Micro machines or nano machines?

Nano machines would make more sense, if we want to get geeky and technical about it.

Is he laughing at her? I found it kinda tough to tell, based on the character used in the text bubble. "Eh eh eh"
also seems like an odd way to laugh, but whatever. If you say he's laughing, then he's laughing; you're the translator.

Yeah I think we can find a better translation than mine for that, but I'm positive [ryouko.imsb.nrc.ca] that is a laugther (see [thejadednetwork.com] here too).

Its more of an intonation thing. There's a pause between the two simple sentences "They were able to change this much" and "that stubborn attorney", with "even" as the word that joins/transitions/whatever them into the compound sentence. Herp, I don't remember all the proper terms for grammar stuff, its been too long.

Oh I see, so that's for intonation purpose. :>

The vibes thing is no big deal, its an easy mistake if you're not familiar with certain Japanese vernacular. Although that thing looked more like an ordinary dildo than a motorized model to me.

Well, I was actually referring to me using "mans", that is just atrocious lol....

In Strike Witches, girls don't wear pants, just underwear to which they refer to as pants. 'Pantsu' being usable for 'pants' and 'underwear' and all.

Lol!

Yes, but no. Your first part is completely right. The second part...yes, 'pantsu' could be either "pants" or "underwear" (though the vast majority of the time it's "underwear"); but no, that's not how they call their garments in Strike Witches, they call them 'zubon', which is pretty unambiguously "trousers"/"slacks"/"pants".

...Unless you were trying to say something else?

What the, is there a reason for them to use zubon? I mean, like their panties are ultra long or something lol.

Micro machines or nano machines?

Nano machines would make more sense, if we want to get geeky and technical about it.

Well the text says micro, but I think nano is way better.

It's also to note that the volume dates back to 2002 iirc, maybe the term "nanomachines" came into use later?

This post has been edited by wr4st3r: Nov 18 2011, 13:28

Yeah I think we can find a better translation than mine for that, but I'm positive [ryouko.imsb.nrc.ca] that is a laugther (see [thejadednetwork.com] here too).

I definitely interpreted that as laughter - it's more like "e he he" rather than "eh eh eh". In that case, it feels more like softer laughter to me.

Micro machines or nano machines?

Nano machines would make more sense, if we want to get geeky and technical about it.

What? Not [en.wikipedia.org] Micro Machines brand? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Silliness aside, I'd go with nanomachines myself.

This post has been edited by lightshader: Nov 19 2011, 19:48

I definitely interpreted that as laughter - it's more like "e he he" rather than "eh eh eh". In that case, it feels more like softer laughter to me.
What? Not [en.wikipedia.org] Micro Machines brand? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Silliness aside, I'd go with nanomachines myself.

Thanks for the insight light, I'll edit the script with your suggestion :> And yeah, I too thought about those lol!

Anyway guys, is there anything else in the script that has to be addressed? Or is it final?

I see the editing bounty has been accepted, but there's no updates, hope the editor hasn't started working with my crappy old script... :E

This post has been edited by wr4st3r: Nov 19 2011, 21:38

I addressed everything I had an issue with and since lightshader vetted the "eh eh eh" -> "e he he", I'm content.

As for editing, I posted in the thread asking the editor to wait for the proofed script before inserting it (there's plenty of other work to be done before that, after all).

I'm currently using the latest script posted in this thread. Once it's done, I'll be sending a copy to Red so that he can tell me if there's anything further he wants done.

I addressed everything I had an issue with and since lightshader vetted the "eh eh eh" -> "e he he", I'm content.

As for editing, I posted in the thread asking the editor to wait for the proofed script before inserting it (there's plenty of other work to be done before that, after all).

I am a bit confused: is there something still being proofread or not?

I am a bit confused: is there something still being proofread or not?

Not really, actually it was me asking that lol. Seems we're all set! :>

I'm currently using the latest script posted in this thread. Once it's done, I'll be sending a copy to Red so that he can tell me if there's anything further he wants done.

Great, I'll be here if you need anything.

Quick update: Galdric managed to share with me an early update of the work, so I was able to fix some mistakes on my part.

I updated the script on post #2, basically fixed the order of some sfx, added a couple of onomatopoeias I missed, also changed *knead* with *squeeze* on page 14, sounded better given the pic.

That's all for now I guess! :]

This post has been edited by wr4st3r: Nov 25 2011, 00:31

Quick update: Galdric managed to share with me an early update of the work, so I was able to fix some mistakes on my part.

I updated the script on post #2, basically fixed the order of some sfx, added a couple of onomatopoeias I missed, also changed *knead* with *squeeze* on page 14, sounded better given the pic.

That's all for now I guess! :]

Excellent!

Updated again (this afternoon actually) the script thanks to Galdric, missed a sfx and a couple of moaning sounds!

Update again with a couple of sfx improvements!

Edit: double post :V

This post has been edited by wr4st3r: Nov 27 2011, 20:43

Perfectionists (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Not that I mind (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

And posted: https://e-hentai.org/g/437250/863c3b1902/

Please don't hesitate to claim the translating and editing bounty, you did an excellent job, guys!

I hope that we will be able to continue with part 2 in the foreseeable future. Bounty is here; https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=4845

Already published, yay for Piotrus! :>

Awesome job Galdric, you're a beast! :]

I quickly scanned the work, there's only some cut text on page 11, the very first bubble.

Oh, there's also a typo (Detetive Conan) in the title, don't know if it's possible to fix that too...

This post has been edited by wr4st3r: Nov 28 2011, 02:12

*blink*

How the heck did I miss that?

Blah, I'll send the fixed page to Red now >_<

Fortunately, fixing titles and descriptions is easy and takes a few seconds (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Done.