Hey, vasili01, looking on it, would you be able to make two slight alterations to challenges 1 and 3? For #1, toss some plain undies on Riza and to keep the consistency of the doujin, and change Olivier's expression to her constant
furrowed brow. Same for challenge 3. In that story it's meant as a femdom theme with an irritated Olivier, and her expression is too happy there.
Also, a rehash of my
previous challenge!! Only this time I'll lay out an idea of the individual scenes/panels. Untouched challenge ends 1/25.
Main story 1 of 2.
[Front or slightly angled shot of Olivier leaned back onto her desk, right hand on sword by her side] [Small panel with close up shot of Olivier's face, maybe half of her face with a slight devious grin] [Shot of Ed (sitting) looking down with eyes closed in fear and concern w/ small to medium thought bubble] [Small frame up of close up to Ed's eyes popping open looking to....] [Side shot of Olivier (off screen) with the end of her sword sheath next to Ed's Belt buckle with....] [Angled/side shot of her sheath lowered, pressing into his crotch with a simple little doodle of an arrow indicating the change of position] [Final shot of close up to Ed's face with blushing cheeks knowing what's up.]
Continuation of Main Story, now 2 of 2.
[Distance/wider shot of Ed and Olivier, with her kneeling down before him; her jacket open, slid back to the sides of her pushed out chest] [Front shot (Ed's perspective) looking at Oliver; with her hands on Ed's legs spreading them apart (use arrows or something to indicate her doing this dramatically] [Close up of Ed's lower half: Olivier's tugging at Ed's belt to undo it (one hand on belt/buckle, maybe other hand on side of pants] [Close up to Ed's face, eye's closed looking discouraged] [Small window within larger panel of Eye's opening to Olivier pulling his zipper down (pants button already undone)] [Final shot of her pulling his pants open, exposing his boxers with a slight impression of him having a semi-erection].
Slight note on character designs: Ed has his usual red coat/ black outfit. Olivier is a considerably busty woman, so have her clothes emphasize that with a noticeable tautness with her top half. She has her military uniform with a dark undershirt, white gloves are optional.
Basic challenge: 25H + 100,000C. Follow my challenge to the tee and get extra rewards. If you're a stellar artist, "
maaaaaaybe" we could talk (a small amount of) cash?
This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Jan 16 2016, 12:35