[X] My Assistant

Just so I have something up while I mull more stuff over...

Title: Belle's Tan Lines
Pose: [i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/9kmYqrS.png
Description: Belle the Barbarian ( [i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/xJZ6702.jpg ), from the waist up, out of her armor with tan lines on her body. Also with an angry + embarrassed expression on her face (like in [i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/xaeLclA.png?1) looking at the viewer.
Due Date: August 20th
Reward: 70k credits, +30k for colors, +10 hath for a draft by the 13th.

For cowpies. The post is not good enough (for me), but i don't have time to redraw it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif) .
I will try "lineless" coloring technique on this picture
(IMG:[dl.dropboxusercontent.com] https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/145788671/POI/Page32.jpg)

Extra stuff. Belle the barbarian on raptor, Jurassic world spinoff (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif) .
(IMG:[dl.dropboxusercontent.com] https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/145788671/POI/Page33.jpg)

The long story challenge!!.
Release your imagination to the real picture. Write me your story and i will draw it for you.
Reward: Drawing of your story in high resolution Photoshop file that you can use it for
any thing just give me little cradit on intro page(I will not publish this work in my country).
What you need to do:
1. Short story include plot and describe of charactor in the story (With charactor design if possible).
2. Story board of "one shot" story in the range of 14-32 pages(can be shorter).
This is the template file for story board.
[dl.dropboxusercontent.com] https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1457886...-storyboard.pdf
and this is example of story board.
(IMG:[dl.dropboxusercontent.com] https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/145788671/POI/Page34.jpg)
Story board is the guide for real manga pages. It must contain the containt as following.
1- Structure of the page and composition of charactor.
2- Dialogue
My story board use upper box as the drawing board to draw composition of the page.
The lower section use to write the dialogue that will link to the balloon in upper section.
your story board can be simple as the first box(just stick figure and some background referent)
but it will be a lot easier for me if you can draw draft version like in the last two boxes.
I open up for any kind of story both H and non-H stuff as long as it not involve Y stuff, scat and guro.

Time limit is 1 month from now on so. I will design the story that i will draw on 16 september.
I will draw from story board that have the most detail. You can do your story board conventional way
(print it out>draw>scan back) or on PC completely as long as it is in my pattern.
You can send story board to me by PM or post download link here.

I looking forward to working with you guy and get evolve together. This will be a good practice for me
as an artish and for you guy as the story teller.
more stuff about manga storyboard is here.
[forums.mangaraiders.com] http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php?topic=8024.0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EfSx2-g424E

Trying to figure out pacing and the size for panels is tricky @_@;;

Also, mulling over how to word another challenge. - w- Expressions be important...

For Cowpies.
(IMG:[dl.dropboxusercontent.com] https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/145788671/POI/Page36.jpg)

Sorry man. This is the best that i can pull out off my tight schedule. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)
Crazy document work are starting to kill me now.
I promise that next work will be better. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/mellow.gif)

Title: Shira Anticipating
Pose: [i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/z8ACSHb.jpg with this expression: [i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/nABPdbk.jpg?1
Description: Shira [[i.imgur.com] illustrated by Loire] [[i.imgur.com] Illustrated and colored by Vasili] sitting comfortably like in the first pose pic with the nipple clamps connecting to her collar, casting a glance over her shoulder, and biting her lip in anticipation, like with the expression given in the second pic.
Due Date: September 12th
Reward: 70k credits, +40k for adding on a lingerie outfit [[i.imgur.com] like this] to her +30k for colors, +10 hath for a draft by the 6th.

This post has been edited by cowpies: Aug 31 2015, 02:48

First draft for cowpies.
(IMG:[dl.dropboxusercontent.com] https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/145788671/POI/Page37.jpg)

I change the theme a little bit, still not sure about her expression though.
I will try to color it on holiday.

I change the theme a little bit, still not sure about her expression though.
I will try to color it on holiday.

(IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/heh.gif) You forgot her more elaborate collar thing... If you were gonna go for a dungeon theme, I could've gone in for a less odd pose for the body/arms

Also, the Beaver (The player for Shira) said jokingly "You fools! Shira wanted you to put her in such a compromising position!" and also commented "It's an incredibly well-drawn picture. I especially like the nipple chain connected to the collar, but I think the expression doesn't fit the scene so well."

The beaver was immensely unhelpful with trying to get a better expression for your scene, but I think this might be a better "look" for it if you're gonna go for a dungeon theme.
[i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/3fgXszY.jpg?1

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Well, I will draw her in new expression and add some color. I get a little bit free time now, sine my overtime period is over.

dunno if i can compete with that one guy but i did do a rough sketch! let me know if ya want me to finish it (clean it up, finalize better lines, more detail, color and such)[attachmentid=69676]

For Cowpies.
(IMG:[dl.dropboxusercontent.com] https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/145788671/POI/Page38.jpg)

Coloring make me frustrate. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif) . My sense for color theory is next to zero.
In next work i will start with grayscale images instead of direct coloring.

dunno if i can compete with that one guy but i did do a rough sketch! let me know if ya want me to finish it (clean it up, finalize better lines, more detail, color and such)

Errybody here's just trying to get better, so don't feel discouraged if you dont think yours is as good as someone else's. The way you get better's by trying <3

It's pretty hard to provide any helpful criticisms because it's a pretty rough drawing. I think the detail on the clothing is good, but I might axe the panties, or at least make then slimmer on the vertical scale. Her hair also looks kinda weirdly poof-y to me as it goes lower down but not sure if there's much you can do 'bout that. I definitely think you should practice more with the faces. I can put up a couple face-intensive challenges in the future if you were interested.

Quote the beaver:
"not sure how I feel about it yet in its blue sketch line state."
So I think he'd like you to refine it a little bit before he can comment on it.
Also, what's with the Blue and red?

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Coloring make me frustrate. sad.gif . My sense for color theory is next to zero.
In next work i will start with grayscale images instead of direct coloring.

Quote the beaver:
"Looks pretty good with color, though the nipple rings should probably be a different color. The dark brassy color looks like it just melds in with her nipples too well."

As for me, I think you kinda skipped over the things I had a problem with last time (The collar and the expression), so I'm still mildly irked on that. The pose looks a little better now that I can actually see the environment though, so that's good.

i use light blue on red cus if i look at white for too long it makes my eyes hurt (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) .
here is a cleaner line art i did (still gotta add in the rest of bg Cave and stuff. i did the lineart based on tips i learned here. this is more of a fun test of a specific thing for me.

yeah the hair is a little poofy i was kinda going on the first ref image where it looks kinda curly *shrug* but yeah this is also not finished i gotta go in and fix line sizing and stuff and add in the bg.

[attachmentid=69718]

face challenges accepted lol. i need to work on lips a lot. everything else needs work to. but that a lot.

*edit* tried a little de-poofage, also a few more details. [attachmentid=69726] also im going to screen tone it up later. cus the lines are all black. screen tone may be more effective. or i could color it. up to you. still doing bg work now

This post has been edited by tkgmalice: Sep 2 2015, 12:38

dunno if this counts as double posting but i have completed more of the ting i was doing (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) i have jpg here but i can get png and higher resolutions if needed

*edit* more finalized. let me know what you think , or if changes are needed (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)* [attachmentid=69764]

This post has been edited by tkgmalice: Sep 3 2015, 11:22

the hair is a little poofy i was kinda going on the first ref image where it looks kinda curly

Her hair isn't so much curly as much as it was described as kinda perpetually messy.

*edit* more finalized. let me know what you think , or if changes are needed

I'm asking the beaver for comments. But really quick, I can tell that The colors are a bit wrong. She's supposed to have a warm tanned skin tone and a dark, forest green colored hair. And as for the hair, I wouldn't recommend drawing in the hair like that. From what I've seen, less lines tends to be better, as opposed to drawing individual locks and strands.

It might help to look up how to draw anime/manga hairstyles, like in [www.wikihow.com] this

face challenges accepted lol. i need to work on lips a lot. everything else needs work to. but that a lot.

Well, as you draw more, you'll get better at it. Practice makes perfect. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif) Everyone's gotta start somewhere.

Been a while cow! I tried to follow the request but I end up with this, I wont color this just gonna leave it like that. I had fun doing this. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

I believe I sent out all my rewards. Sorry to took so long, I had a wedding to go to and then things piled up at home @_@

I'll think of another challenge soonish, for anyone interested.

Title: Belle skirt lift
Pose: [i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/hwoT0D4.jpg
Description: Belle ([i.imgur.com] Illustrated by Loire) lifting her skirt, imitating the expression and pose (although, you'd probably need to mirror it...) in the given one.
Due Date: October 10th
Reward: 70k +30k creds for colors, 40k creds and 5 hath for a draft done by October 3rd.

God. Sleepy.

For cowpies.
(IMG:[dl.dropboxusercontent.com] https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/145788671/POI/Page41.JPG)

Sorry for the late. Color version will come soon. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sad.gif)

nice

This post has been edited by S.A.V.: Oct 11 2015, 17:06