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post Feb 10 2011, 05:37
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Translate the listed dojin into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.

In addition to the carriers listed, you can also just post the translation in the forums.

This is my 33rd translation bounty.

Dojin:
https://e-hentai.org/g/186518/fb875368a8/

Despite many pages, only 16 have text, most of them in the short stories (Ah! My Goddess story, Esaflowne, and whatever series is the third one - I am not sure :> ) I care about the first two stories, but hey, if translating, let's translate everything, I am sure somebody will appreciate the other stuff.

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* Due to persistent, hmmm, misunderstandings about how to split the bounty between translators and editors that resulted in my recent bounties costing me 50%-100% more than listed price, I am now splitting the bounty between translating and editing. The first bounty that goes up in the system is for translating only. Once I have the translation, I'll post the editing bounty. If you want to do both bounties at the same time, you'll have to claim the two bounties.
* If you do the editing: please note I would like to upload the gallery to e-h system myself; I am not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What I pay out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year. If you end up posting the translated doujin to the e-h galleries, I'll probably halve the bounty (if you did the translation and editing), or refuse to pay (if you did the editing only; note that the translator will still get fully paid by me).
* if you do the translating, you can either PM or post it here and just PM the notification, I don't care
* if a translator&editing credits are included, please also include my nickname as the sponsor, and the name of our site (E-hentai) as the host
* yes, please translate (or at least summarize) any existing author's rants, credits, titles of content, and so on, if present
* those bounties are for the hard work (translation and editing). If you just found the gallery somewhere and just uploaded it here, you are not eligible for my bounties, but I will still give you a reward - 5+5+5 (apply for it here).
* if you find a hq version of the J raw, whether it has or hasn't been translated, I'll reward you for it with a 2+2+2 reward (apply for it here )

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post Jun 2 2011, 16:45
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I am surprised it took so long, for so few pages... but thanks to c7n88, we have the translations.

Now, for some editing...

c7n88 PM:

Hi again please find script below for "[St. Wallaby (Nishitsuki Tsutomu)] Nishitsuki Recycle (A!MG)".

There are a few things:

- feel free to edit the script around if u reckon some sentences are stiff
- I translated 99% of it though I didn't do page 59 with the disclaimers and contact details of the publisher, but it's certainly doable if you would need it
- anything in script unclear, just PM

here it goes:

Pg14
=Right hand side vertical text: Nishitsuki Tsutomu
Panel 1
=La~Lala~~~Lu~Lulu~~♪
Panel 5
=Even Keiichi-san wants to look at these things alright?

Pg15
Panel 1
=Belldandy
Panel 2
=Keiichi-san…
Panel 3
=Bottom right: Hmmm ah
=Centre right: Mmm
=Centre top: Hmmmph
=Centre top left: Hey, can you do it for me with your mouth?
=Centre top further left: Yeah…

Pg16
Top half, from left:
=Ahhhhh…It’s so good…
=Mmm
=Mmmmm
=Hmmmph
Lower half, from left:
=Heh…You are already getting wet and slimy…
=…So embarrassing…
=Quick…Put it in…

Pg17
Panel 1
=Ah
=Ahah
Panel 2
=Ah Ahhh Ahhhmmm
=Ah Ahhh Ke-Keiichi-sannn
Panel 3
=I’m home~~~
=Panel 4
=Y-Yes, welcome back

Pg18
Panel 1
=Van-samaaa!
=Bottom Horizontal text in box: Nishitsuki Tsutomu

Pg19
Panel 1
=Hah
=Hah
=Hah
=It’s time for lunch, Van-sama <3
Panel 2
=…Aaah thanks Merle
Panel 3
=It’s alright to be focused on your practition, but overstraining your body is really dangerous
=You need to eat properly
Panel 4
=I know, I row (second “I know” becomes “I row” due to talking with mouth full)
Panel 5
=Mmmgg
Panel 6
=Ohh Oohh Ohhh

Pg20
Panel 1
=Grrrrrrg~~~!
=Kya~~~<3
=Ahhmm<3
=These traditional cat-girl hand-crafted extra-potent Aphrodisiac
[note: i.e. love potion] that I blended into the Obento seems to be taking some effects
Panel 2
=Hah
=Hmmm
=That hindrance Hitomi has already returned to the Mystic Moon [note: i.e. Earth]...and while she’s away
Panel 3
=Mmmph
=Mmm
=Hmm
=Hmmmu
=Van-sama will be mine…

Pg21
=Top third from left:
=Ah
=Ah
=Grrrrr
=Kyaahhn
=Ooowaaaaa~~
Middle third from left:
=Ah
=Fuuah…
=Ah Aaahhh Van-samaaaa
Bottom third from left:
=HI-Hitomiii
=Wha-ttt

Pg22
=Top horizontal text: NEKOME-WAKU
Panel 1
=Eh?
=How do you cheer up Taba-san other than to cook him a meal?
=Middle horizontal text: Nishitsuki Tsutomu
Panel 2
=…You can look quite lovely…
=Hmmm…look this way. I wonder what if you could try something like that? You know how to use the tape recorder right?
Panel 4
[note: sound of video cassette rewinding]
Panel 5
=Ah
=Ahhhmu

Pg23
Panel 2
=Even small tits get you excited?
=Yeah…
Panel 3
=Ah
=Ah
Panel 5
=Alright. rub them with your own hands
=Ooh
=Eh~
=Fuu~ x 3
=Hey, you are getting really really wet down there
=No

Pg24
Top half:
=Oi, oi, you are making dirty noises
=Nooo
=Ah x 2
=Hah x 4
=Fuu x 2
Bottom half:
=Ah x 5
=Hah
=Ahee
=Hyaa
=I’m gonna give you a hand for this, don’t cum yet
=Ahhnnn
=I’m home…

Pg25
Top Half:
=Home…
=Aaahhhh I’m cuuuuuming
Bottom half:
=Ma-maya?
=O-oi!
=But…how did you get their video tape?
=…it’s somehow leaked out from them

Pg31
=Sensei. I feel embarrassed…
=…so do I…
=Text in box: Nishi

Pg38
=Ala Yosho-chan
=Mo-mother!?
=Text in box: Nishi

Pg39
=Ah
=That, is not the power sockeeet

Pg40
=Master, does it feel good?
=Ooomm

Pg50
Hi, this is Nishitsuki Tsutomu. hello.
The good thing about Potpourri-chan is that you get to see her navel a lot.

I have hardly any material with me this time (I didn’t tape down the TV anime) Maybe my drawing doesn’t look like the character at all.

Shoujo body-type is hard to draw.

Pg55
=Horizontal text in box: Nishitsuki Tsutomu
Panel 1
=The content of today’s training is fellatio! Kanzaki!!
=Right!
Panel 2
=How long do I still need to go for~~
=Siirrr~~
=It’s already been 30 minutes~~
=Getting a bit worked down~~

Pg57
This is the cover page.
I tried using the computer with the AIC add-on.
But it didn’t stand out much.
I am sorry.

(Picked it up from the Azumanga Recycle)

There isn’t enough free time for me to muck around.

Hmmmmmmmm.

There just isn’t.

Pg58
Colophon (note: author notes)
Hello, or how do you do. This is Nishitsuki Tsutomu.

Last time round, there was a project to do a doujin collection of Ruri which has been abandoned.
This time, I added my uncollected doujin along with a few drawings by other artists and tried putting these together in one book.
…..
Looking at this collection, it seems I haven’t improved at all and I feel greatly saddened.
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post Jun 2 2011, 21:38
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I'll gave this done by tomorrow(unless someone else speaks up)
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post Jun 3 2011, 04:55
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glad to contribute =]

as for pg60 horizontal text at bottom:
Nishitsuki Tsutomu Personal Doujin
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post Jun 3 2011, 08:57
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I finished the edit, but theres a few pages that were overlooked, which were.... Pages 33, 34, 35, 42, and 56, As for the other singles, i'm assuming say Nishi since their olcon looks the same(feel free to correct me though)

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post Jun 3 2011, 16:46
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I'll ask c7n88 about them, they shouldn't be too much to do. Good job catching them (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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post Jun 5 2011, 06:41
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We have the updated translation, just waiting for the editing... not too long from now, I am sure.
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post Jun 6 2011, 21:10
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And posted: https://e-hentai.org/g/375009/11a11b2846/ (updated)

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post Jun 6 2011, 22:41
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Just me being picky, but Shanko would do well learning how to level.
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post Jun 7 2011, 04:42
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QUOTE(Schroedinger @ Jun 6 2011, 13:41) *

Just me being picky, but Shanko would do well learning how to level.


Thanks for tip, but I do know how to level. Without my Netbook though, im left to use my stupid monitor that throws it off. So I had no choice but to wing it and try to get the whole page "white".

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QUOTE(Super Shanko @ Jun 7 2011, 12:42) *

Thanks for tip, but I do know how to level. Without my Netbook though, im left to use my stupid monitor that throws it off. So I had no choice but to wing it and try to get the whole page "white".


Simply out of curiosity, how much Japanese do you know? when I read my script it occured to me you could have a tough time tryna figure out which line goes where in the picture, but looking at the edited pictures they're just right where their supposed to be
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QUOTE(c7n88 @ Jun 6 2011, 21:48) *

Simply out of curiosity, how much Japanese do you know? when I read my script it occured to me you could have a tough time tryna figure out which line goes where in the picture, but looking at the edited pictures they're just right where their supposed to be


For the most part, I know nothing more than moans and a few basic things. But I've done so many edits I can just sorta tell.
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post Jun 7 2011, 20:01
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QUOTE(Schroedinger @ Jun 6 2011, 16:41) *

Just me being picky, but Shanko would do well learning how to level.


And the first thing that comes to my mind is the hverse game (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
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