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Jan 30 2011, 13:36
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Jan 31 2011, 10:55
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QUOTE(Super Shanko @ Jan 30 2011, 07:04)  As for a credit page, how about something like this:
Full title(like it would be in the gallery or just SS5) Sponsors Translator Editor Advertisement mentioning E-hentai(site/forum)+Bounty system Random special thanks
By the way, you can just credit me as anonymous (IMG:[ invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) I mostly did this just because I could and because of the bounty, to be honest, not for recognition... and mostly I try to stay away from scat...
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Jan 31 2011, 11:02
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QUOTE(0xCCBA696 @ Jan 31 2011, 02:55)  By the way, you can just credit me as anonymous (IMG:[ invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) I mostly did this just because I could and because of the bounty, to be honest, not for recognition... and mostly I try to stay away from scat... Whooo, finally done! With the extra C/H maybe I can finally get something of mine translated!(wink! wink!) This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Jan 31 2011, 14:11
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Jan 31 2011, 20:10
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Feb 1 2011, 07:06
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QUOTE(Super Shanko @ Jan 31 2011, 17:02)  Whooo, finally done! With the extra C/H maybe I can finally get something of mine translated!(wink! wink!)
You misordered the lines in the poem on page 41 and got some mojibake at the bottom of page 76... and overlapping text on page 77... oh well. If I have another bored evening to while away I might take a stab at another bounty in the future. See you guys around (IMG:[ invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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Feb 3 2011, 09:52
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I got this as a PM, unless there are any objections i will accept it in a day or so. (That was quick...)
Translator: Blain007
Stuff in bubbles is written as is. SFX outside is written inside captions.
P4:
Front cover Sawara Kazumitsu Back cover Maki Hideto
Manga Maki Hideto, Sawara Kazumitsu Illust. Yonige-ya No Kyou -san Manga Pee-chan -san Manga Ume –san Illust. Happiness WeRou –san Illust. Hanano Miyako –san Illust. Sawara Kazumitsu -san Illust Fred Kelly –san
Once again, sincere thanks go to all that contributed -Maki
P5.
Hotaru and Chibiusa series 10 The story so far.
Sensing the ever growing presence of Mistress 9 within her, Hotaru ran away from the unearthly Tomoe residence.
And it was Chibiusa who took Hotaru into hiding…
From then, Hotaru and Chibiusa’s time was spent with just the two of them.
However, their time alone would finally come to an end…
P6. Viluy and Cyprine from the Witches 5 were the first to act, sending out Daimons to find Hotaru. Instead they came across Jupiter, and combat ensued.
However, Jupiter was defeated by the three strengthened Daimons! Not only was she abused, but she was turned into a thrall of the Death Busters.
And having become a pawn of their enemies Makato turned on Ami, who had come to rescue her.
Having raped Ami, Makoto then fell upon Hotaru and Chibiusa who had arrived at the scene.
It was then that Sailor Uranus, ie Haruka Tenoh, arrived!
P7. Hotaru and Chibiusa series ACT.9
Precious…
Story: Maki Hideto Manga: Maki Hideto, Sawara Kazumitsu
P8. Ugh
Jupiter, you look …?
..Haruka-san don’t let your guard down…
Mako-chan’s under the complete control of our enemy…
‘smash’
P9. Damnit!!
‘ha’ ‘ha’
Waaaa I just caught up, wait for me~~~
‘Thud’
…Ev…Everyone… Usagi..-chan…
What’s going on Ami-chan
Be careful, we’re being targeted by our enemies.
Watch out for Mako-chan… and me as well…
‘Wha…what do you mean?’
Ami -chan
Ami-chan!!?
P10.
You’ve done well Jupiter.
This practically guarantees me promotion to the high command. (love heart) ‘hahahahaha’
mmh?
‘VROOOM’
We’ve been followed.
I’ll have to deal with it---
Daimon Con-Corde-!!!
P11.
‘Crash’
‘Stomp’
So you must be another Sailor Senshi!?
And you must be Shimura Ken?
Shut up, I’m really sensitive about that!!
Alright then
I’ll show you
Uranus Planet Power Make-up !!
Sailor Uranus beautiful and ready to go!!
P12.
One won’t be enough
Uhmmm Phone booth, where’s a phone booth…
Space Sword
Blaster
P13: B-Boom
It’s going off nearby
Why is she so strong!?
Beep beep beep
Tomoe residence underground
Daimon case standby
Daimon case standby
P14. Now- it’s time to hand the girl over.
‘steps’ ‘steps’
Kyaa~~ Nooo~~
‘Pop’
Ha hahaha As if anyone would listen to the likes of you
Whoa that was real close.
Go Daimon Army!!
‘Boom’ ‘Bop’
‘Thudddd’
P15. Con-Crete
Con-Bo
Urghh
Gyee
‘keee’ ‘gueee’
‘Steps’
Kon-jac Mh!?
P16.
Yaa!!!
‘Squish’
‘Thrust’
Come on, scull~ scull~
Kon-pa
Gulp Gulp
‘Smash’
I hope no one was watching that
Especially Michiru
P17. You’re not paying attention~
‘Squish’
Con-dom
Urghhh Stop it!!!
I hate these kinds of low brow lewdness~!!!
Wow~~~ You’re so very handsome~
Con-‘s God (Con’s God, probably no one remembers~?) Trans: seems like a samurai pizza cat reference but I’m not too familiar with it
Gah
Urghhh If you’re gonna rape me, then rape me!! If you’re gonna kill me, then kill me!!
But I can’t handle all this mucking about
Mmmhmmm. You’re getting so worked up, gee~z Shut up you gay fox!!
Oh dear~~ You’re calling me gay~~
D-Damn you~~~
‘B-Boom’
P18. Ha ha ha
A fitting end for one that oppose me.
Ok then, time to withdraw.
Understood.
Oh geez~
Looks like Viluy sama’s group beat us to it~
Feels like a real slap in the face to Mimete sama~
What should we do, try to steal it off them?
From that horde? With just the two of us?
We’ll avoid acting on our own and await the judgement of Mimete-sama.
‘scurries away’
Okay then
P19.
Phew
…I’m still alive…
Uranus~
Are you okay~!?
Uhhh…
Waaa. No fair. I won’t accept this irresponsible ending~ Huh? H-Haruka..?
No way… I wanna go home uhhh…!!!
Haruka, snap out of it, Naruka~~
WAAAAA
Haruka~~
P20. ‘Grind/Grip’ x4
Ahh…
Welcome back Hotaru-san
~But, for a girl your age to leave the house for days on end without word
is not acceptable~
P21. It hurts… So painful… …But why? Chibiusa does stuff like this to me all the time…
It hurts… Please Kaori-san let me go…
Now now, it seems we have a problem~~
‘scruffles’ (sfx of reaching to grab something)
~for the real pain is yet to come.
Ah
‘tweak’ x2
Getting harder and harder (heart) maybe its time.
P22. …No… Stop..
…Please Kaori-san, stop…
‘clip’
Kyaa
‘It Hurts~~!!’
mh aahh…
‘grips’
We’ll need to clip this side as well, can’t have just one sagging. Giggle
Nooo
Kyaaa
‘Snap’
P23.
It hurts
Take it off. Take it off right now!!
Phu phu. Looks like I have no choice then~
‘Snaps’
No. Don’t.
It’s too late!!
P24. Kyaa
Stop it..
Please… No.. more…
First you tell me to take them off, and now you want me to stop
Maying you’re being a little too precious?
‘Smack’
Noooo
Just because your father is so very kind, doesn’t mean you’re allowed to behave so stubbornly!!
Noooo
‘Smack’
P25.
That’s right, with the professor it was always, always about you~
Mhaa
‘Whip’
‘Slap’
‘Smack’
Just you!!
P26.
‘Grabs’
Professor!?
Mh
…Leave it for now~
Professor… I knew it
Kuh
After all, this girl’s body is a precious container.
Phu ha ha ha
Continued in Page 63.
P32.
Rips
From tomorrow it’s August.
Right in the middle of summer…
Summer means
it’s time for the beach!!
Midsummer noon’s dream.
Pee-chan
P33.
Hotaru-chan
You wore it~ the Rope Bikini I got for you as a present!
D-does it suite me?
Chibiusa-chan!!
We came to the beach, just the two of us
Come on Hotaru-chan
Wait up!!
And we’re gonna party.
P34. And summer means it’s time for a…
(‘Ice’ , symbol for snow cone vendors, can probably just leave it)
So good~
When it’s hot a snow cone is just the thing
Chibiusa-chan…
I… Could I…
Oh, Sorry, sorry. Here, eat right up.
Pours
Okay.
‘pours’
Slurry slurry
You need some more syrup right? Which do you want?
Umm… I’ll have melon then…
Coming right up
Squeeze
‘drip drop…’
‘puha’
Ah… that’s good…
P35. Squeel~~ Grumble grumble (stomach growling sfx)
S-stomach… starting to…
feel sore…
You got carried away and ate too much ice.
Ah… I won’t make it to the toilets…
Hotaru-chan, Hotaru-chan
I thought something like this might happened so I prepared a sand toilet.
Do it here!
Mhh…
‘twitch’
‘squirt’
…Ahhh
P36. ‘Squeesh’
‘Urghh ghh’
‘splash’
Haaaa…
Today was so much fun~
…hey chibiusa-chan
We should do this again…
Having fun like this together…
Yep!
Sure thing!
P37.
…I reckon this kind of situation sounds great~~
Kyaha
Hmm, now when should I make it~
‘suck’
‘sun beaming down’
hello~ chibiusa –chan
‘where should I put the flowers’
I heard it was food poisoning and being very very worried I came over to visit. I guess this means we won’t be able to go to the beach, such a pity~
D…deceived… Probably sensed the danger she was in and struck first…
From Hotaru (the sticky next to the drink in the final frame)
P38. Gwaa
Hotaru~~!!
Hotaru, I’ll bring you back to life with a body that’ll never die… phu phu phu
Phu ha ha ha ha
Beyond the stars…
Flies through the sky using jet propulsion, and switches to rockets when in space.
Fluent in 60 different languages, and senses peoples motives be they good or bad.
Vision that can zoom in by a factor of 1000, and eyes that turn into search lights.
Machineguns from her behind, and the strength of 100,000horse power!
This is how the young girl Hotaru was reborn.
Her name, Mighty… Puh
P39. ‘Jerk’
Whoa, what a scary dream…
Ha~~
I mean, not even dad would do something…
like that.
‘click’
Dad~~!!
I always thought it was a bit strange. Why is there a transforming shounen cyborg, but not a shoujo cyborg…?
Phu phu phu
Clunk clunk.
The End.
P44. Ahh Y…aa
Gopo!
P45. Phu-x3
Hax2
MGHhh!
Ah
‘squeeze’ ‘squish’ ‘Vrrrrr’ ‘click’
P49.
Note: Snake type fireworks.
P54.
He he he, He he he he he
P…’hick’ please keep your promise…
‘shrink’
That you won’t do anything… to chibiusa-chan…
Absolutely, Though it depends on your attitude.
No you can’t! Hotaru-chan!
The price of her smile
That’s if you can satisfy all of us!!
P55.
‘Grabs’
Here
N…n…No..oo…
Nooo!?
You don’t know when to give up!!
‘spreads’
Heee
P56.
‘Rip’
Higyaaa aaahhh
Aahhh
Ahh… I’m losing consciousness.
No, keep fighting Hotaru…
Chibiusa-chan’s watching.
I can’t let her feel sad.
‘Rolls’
‘Splat’
Smile Hotaru…
D…Don’t worry Chibiusa-chan
‘grin’
Don’t worry chibiusa-chan I’ll manage.
‘Ighhii’
So, laugh Chibiusa-chan…
‘thrust’ x2
P57.
Heeeee
Keep smiling for my sake!!
Chibiusa-chan’s a flower….
A small pretty flower.
If she got stepped on, or dirtied… she’d never get back to normal.
Lovely Chibiusa-chan’s smile…
For which I would do anything…
P58.
Did we go too far…?
We broke her.
‘Gasp’
Chibiusa-chan….
‘weeps’
You really took care of all of them. Amazing Hotaru-chan.
‘He he he’
We can’t get it up anymore.
Not good enough~ It’s my turn to be satisfied~
Urghhh~ Give us a break~
It’s okay, here
‘mounts’
‘squish’ x3
‘shakes’ ‘shivers’
P59.
Hotaru-chan, you did well. I’m impressed.
Ah… Ah… Ah…
‘gasp’x2
See, I’ve never been this turned on before.
All thanks to Hotaru-chan.
‘slick’
Chibiusa-chan… My lovely smiling chibiusa-chan was there looking so slutty…
Come, lick it…
What should I do now…?
P61.
Act 10. Cracks
Kaolinite –sama
This time let us have some of the fun.
P62.
What impudence~~
This girl is~!!?
Chi-Chibiusa-chan!!
One of the sailor senshi… and the possessor of the pure heart crystal needed to reawakening energy.
How…!? Did you know that
The professors orders.
Grr.
P63. Phu phu phu Shuu
Well now, let’s set you up as planned.
But before that shall we play around with you a bit?
Oh, about that~
The plan was to use the “witches 4’s revenge’ story that ended up in Vol.3.
Ohh, that. At the time we needed to fill some pages up so we had to use it there. ‘why we did that is explained in the ToC in volume 3.’
Meh, doesn’t matter.
‘tightens’
‘Grinds’ x2
Let’s enjoy it with a different position.
P64. This is still a nice view.
Mghhh~
~and with this.
We’ll start with you
Mghhhhh
P65.
‘stabs’
‘grind’x2
Mghhh
Mghh~ Ghhh~~ (Hotaru-chan!!)
Now, you too.
Mghuuu
Mghyuu
‘squeeze’x2 ‘grinds’ x2
P66.
Looking pretty good~
This is something extra
Mhh~
‘squip’
‘ding’ (sfx of string becoming taut)
Mghhuuu
And here too.
Mghuu
‘fiddles’x2
‘kyu’
P67.
Mghhuu
Mhh
‘ping’ (sfx of string becoming taught)
‘tug tug’ x2
Yay
Haha, so funny.
Now lets get started.
‘Splish splash’
‘Squeeze’
Mghhh~!! (No~! Something’s coming into my bottom~!!)
P68. This’ll start working straight away~
Mghhh
‘Splish splash splosh’
‘Mghh’
‘grumbles’ ‘growls’
MGHH~~
Mghuuu
‘ping’
Mghuu
‘ping’
P69.
Look, you’re thrashing about so much the other girl is getting hurt.
Mhku…
Oh wow, you’re trying so hard now. What a good girl~
As a reward I’ll pull the plug out.
No if you take it out now~
‘gush’x2 ‘whoosh’
Mhhh
Mghghuu
Sfx for shitting stuff out.
P70.
Professor…What exactly do you have planned...
It’s nearly time.
Nearly time to awaken our silent messiah.
Thanks to the hard work you all put into it. You’ve all done well.
You speak too highly of us.
The professor… and… Cyprine?
The messiah’s vessel has returned. And we have in our grasps the girl with the pure heart, to provide the energy for the reawakening.
The sun needs to set but once more, and it shall never rise again!!
Professor, Kaolinite sama is…
You’re right… She has served us so well, and for so long…
…but her usefulness is coming to an end.
P71.
Phuphu
Kaolinite –sama is, unlike the rest of us, under the impression that she is serving Professor Souichi Tomoe.
‘sbunny’
Of course, then it will be even harder for her~
Professor!!!
What is the meaning of this!?
Kaolinite-kun…
Do you like me?
? … Yes…
P72. Do you love Souichi Tomoe?
…Yes
Well that’s a pity.
Souichi Tomoe ceases to exist Consumed inside of me, phu….
Ha ha ha ha
What!?
‘dash’
‘slash’
P73.
Taaa
‘Boom’ ‘Smash’
Damn she’s elusive. I’ll give chase!!
Wait. I’ll get Mimet-kun to go after her.
P74. Geez, what’s going on?
My room’s a mess, Ami-chan and Mako-chan have disappeared, And chibiusa won’t come home.
What’s happening?
‘hmm? Looks a bit like Mikoto…’ (trans: I have no idea what this means)
Whoaaa
‘Thud’
P75.
Ha x2
You must be …Kaori –san…!?
You’re the usual girl~? Kya
Ha~hahaha
You won’t get away now. Just give up Kaolinite-sama.
P76. Kaolinite!!?
The end, for now. To be continued.
P77.
The next victim (Guest H) is on this list~!!!… hey…
Does this mean it’s over for Haruak-san and Michiru-san….?….
Whether to feel envious or sad for them…?
‘The professor and co have disappeared…’
Alright I got onto the front cover so I guess my work here is done.
Hey~~ Minako-chan, that’s not fair.
P78. Is defeating Barban all you care about!? (Red)
From Gingaman
Yes!!
They destroyed my world, and killed by brother. That’s what it’s all about.
Can’t we fight together? (Red)
I don’t need allies, you guys are too soft!!
Some casualties are inevitable!!
I think I’ve heard someone else say stuff like this~
So then Neptune is Bulltarius?
I reckon the next episode is when the galaxy’s light makes an appearance. The twist could be that it’s sealed within Bull himself~
Hey
That means within the next few episodes there’ll be a girl wearing dark clothes and a bob-cut joining the regular cast~!!! (of course played by Keiko Takeda-chan)
‘No way’
By the time this book comes out it’ll all become clear… but indeed!? (mitsu)
Next Episode, this will be the key to victory!!
Garnet Rod
According to the plan there are 4 episodes left (really!?)
P79.
The back cover after word. “Slip, fall and faint (crossed out is ‘wet yourself’)”
By now it probably doesn’t need to be said but anyhow, the last three times the back cover’s inspiration came from the opening to Patalliro.
Not that it really means anything but without some kind of motif to base it on I can’t think of anything to write…
So what shall I do for next time…
P80.
Publication Info (This page is pretty much the same as translated in the last book so I won’t repeat it here. Just copy the template of the last one with the following changes)
Publication Date: Heisei 10, 12th August
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Feb 3 2011, 10:01
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This is for SS6?! Crap that was quick.... alright then, expect it by saturday if not sooner....
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Feb 3 2011, 13:24
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Feb 4 2011, 06:56
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Usually I type up both jap text and english translation so there wont be mistakes while editing but this doujin seems simple enough. Cuts down on the translation time quite a bit. If in doubt send me a draft to look over.
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Feb 10 2011, 06:25
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I'd just like to let everyone know that I am thinking about getting SS 7 commissioned by a translation group because of the bounty size. I would like to kindly ask that nobody submit any translations of this until I confirm if this is going to happen or not. I will let you know when I get word from the group I am looking into. It should only take a day or two longer at the most before I know if I am going to get it commissioned or not.
Thanks!
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Feb 10 2011, 06:31
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I'll be keeping my eye on this thread. If getting a real translator doesn't work out, there's always a couple of patchy-scrap hobo translators that would take a stab or two (I'm surprised randomguy1 and/or randomguy2 from SS5 and 6 haven't stepped in yet)
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Feb 11 2011, 01:32
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Ok, SaHa didn't pan out, so I'm reaching out to Biribiri now. Hopefully they'll respond to my inquiries. Please hold for 36 more hours. If this doesn't pan out, I'll leave this open for everyone else.
Thanks!
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Feb 11 2011, 05:01
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@kage: that's because SS is a big job(just editing alone) so I can only imagine how the translator feels.
@RF: If they don't work out either, you should try Chocolate-scans. I got something done by them recently and got it completed real quick.
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Feb 11 2011, 06:37
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QUOTE(Super Shanko @ Feb 10 2011, 21:01)  @kage: that's because SS is a big job(just editing alone) so I can only imagine how the translator feels.
@RF: If they don't work out either, you should try Chocolate-scans. I got something done by them recently and got it completed real quick.
Yeah, but hopefully Biribiri will reply. If they don't, I'll just let someone else take the job.
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Feb 11 2011, 09:23
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QUOTE(KageSennin @ Feb 10 2011, 15:31)  I'll be keeping my eye on this thread. If getting a real translator doesn't work out, there's always a couple of patchy-scrap hobo translators that would take a stab or two (I'm surprised randomguy1 and/or randomguy2 from SS5 and 6 haven't stepped in yet)
Yeah, I would have done 7 straight after 6 but I've been a bit sick lately. I guess the bounty size reflects the extent of demand and the lack of translators around. I don't think it's particularly difficult translation wise.
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Feb 11 2011, 11:20
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QUOTE(Blain007 @ Feb 11 2011, 01:23)  Yeah, I would have done 7 straight after 6 but I've been a bit sick lately. I guess the bounty size reflects the extent of demand and the lack of translators around. I don't think it's particularly difficult translation wise.
Please give me another 24 hours to get it commissioned before translating it please. Thanks, Razorflame
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