[X] My Assistant

Ok... To begin with, I haven't died at the computer or anything. I've just been having some issues with my internet thanks to that recent storm on the east coast so it's still alittle shaky atm.

I'll work on SS and have it done ASAP.

Good to hear our diligent editor is alright. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

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Ok... To begin with, I haven't died at the computer or anything. I've just been having some issues with my internet thanks to that recent storm on the east coast so it's still alittle shaky atm.

I'll work on SS and have it done ASAP.

Late to the party, but it's good to know you're alive still! People (myself included) were actually getting worried.

Sorry. Please ignore.

This post has been edited by sandmaning: Sep 25 2011, 04:33

Hi,Red_Piotrus

I would like to take this bounty: [TSS 2D Shooting] Silent Saturn SS vol. 4 (Sailor Moon), if this job is still vacant.

The translated script will be completed within two weeks.

Sure, no other translator has accepted it, so it is yours. Please accept the bounty in the bounty system too, with a note linking to your post here.

SS 5 translation bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=4508

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Sep 26 2011, 18:06

SS SS 2 released: https://e-hentai.org/g/416378/4e7a593ad9/

Sand, could you translate the table of contents?

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Sep 28 2011, 19:00

The table of contents? Sorry but I have no clue of it, where is it?

The table of contents? Sorry but I have no clue of it, where is it?

here (that's for SS2)

I see, you mean catalogue right?
Here we go.


Cover•Title Page Painter: Maki hideto(牧秀人)
Coloring: Sawara kazumitsu(佐原一光)

manga Maki hideto(牧秀人) Sawara kazumitsu(佐原一光) 7～ 57
illust Escaped Kyou san 28~
manga Pee chan san 38
illust Fred kerii san 42
illust USSO san 43
manga Ume san 44~
illust Sawara kazumitsu(佐原一光) hanano miyako san Maki hideto(牧秀人) 50～

One more thing, since you'll be doing the translation for the next one, I thought i'd comment some things regarding the script. Mainly, it was difficult to read, and follow without double/triple checking to make sure everything was in proper order.

With that said, here's the things that kept holding me up.

-The way the pages were numbered.

-Most of the lines were bunched up together into continous sentences making it hard to know when one bubble ends and the next begins.

-The way the trans notes were mixed in with the lines kept throwing me off.

Theres a bunch of older scripts in the previous pages that can give you an idea on how to construct the next script for any future translations after this.

silent saturn 4 Translation is here. This could be better than the previous one as Super Shanko suggested.

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Order From Top to Bottom, and From left (For example: Upper 1) to right (Upper 4).
Page Script
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Cover • Title Page
Painter Maki hideto(牧秀人)
Coloring Sawara kazumitsu(佐原一光)
manga Maki hideto Sawara kazumitsu7～ 61~
illust Escaped Kyou san 32~
manga ume san 48~
illust haribara makiko san 54~
illust happiness we rou san 56~
illust fred.kerii san 58~
illust Maki hideto 59~
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Square Hotaru and Chibiusa series: " Dead Moon Chapter"
Previous on Hotaru and Chibiusa
Soon after the fight against the death busters, another force called 'DEAD MOON CIRCUS' raised from the dark.
Therefore, the sailor Senshi end their normal life and start to fight against them, again.
Besides the 'DEAD MOON', Hotaru also found a mysterious Senshi, who appeared and helped them from danger, is watching over the ‘DEAD MOON', and surely she is not the Hotaru's sailor Saturn.
With the addition of the unknown alien force…
Which were serious conflicts between them.
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Despite all this, why all lemures appeared around the solar sailor senshi only...
Ought to be a plain day in Sailor Neptune's home...
One day, Chibiusa chan brought a machine back from the future, which could let the Hotaru's HARD PLAY imagination come true. Just before the Hotaru was noticed, she accidently actived this machine. Soon she realized that she was thrown into an overhead world: by daylight, being bound and in the centre of the street with a pack of thirsty beast surrounded. By pursuing in hustle, the Tsukino and Chibiusa also faced the same trouble.
Seventh Episode: chased in illusion street
Story: Maki hideto
Painter Maki hideto, Sawara kazumitsu
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Upper 1 Hotaru: Err AhAhAh, let me go…
Upper 2 Hotaru: Please let me go…
Lower 1 Hotaru: AhAhAhEr
Lower 2 Hotaru: Don't, Don't look at me~~~
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Upper 1 Chibiusa: EhAhAhAh, that hurts…
Upper 2 Chibiusa: Ass, my ass~~~
Upper 3 Man: one more to go
Upper 4 Chibiusa: No, don't
Lower 1 Chibiusa: AhAhAhAh
Lower 2 Chibiusa: It's inside of me! In and out!
Lower 3 Chibiusa: No AhAhErr
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Upper 1 Man: Your breasts are so large.
Upper 2 Tsukino: No, stop sucking, it's not working!
Upper 3 Man: Hum Hum, is there any milk coming out?
Lower 1 Man: Come~ on~. I am a little baby~ (sound: sucking)
Lower 2 Man: Tites Tites
Lower 3 Tsukino: I said stop it. BA GA----
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Upper 1 Tsukino: Stop, AhAh, don't bite it.
Upper 2 Tsukino: Stop it, it's gonna be bitten off.
Upper 3 Man: It does will be cut off by doing this.
Upper 4 Tsukino: It hurts!!
Mid 1 Tsukino: Ah~ Stop it~
Mid 2 Tsukino: By doing this, tites will…my tites…AhAh….
Mid 3 Tsukino: It hurts!!
Mid 4 (Sound:straining)
Lower 1 Yah Yah AhAhAh
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Upper 1 Man: Fine, come over here.
Upper 2 Tsukino: Stop pulling it…
off… it would be off…
Upper 3 Man: So as you.
Upper 4 Chibiusa: Hurts…it hurts!!
Mid 1 Man: Hey, have a closer view where we fucked in.
Mid 2 Hotaru: No~Stop~ (sound: Ha Ha)
Lower Tsukino: Yah Ah, don't look at it~
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Upper (Sound: Yoro Yoro)
Upper 1 Chibiusa: Hotaru chan…
Upper 2 Hotaru: Tsukino!?
Upper 3 Hotaru: Chibiusa chan
Upper 4 Hotaru: why do you come here?
Lower 1 Man: Hey, come and lick it.
Lower 2 Hotaru: Ah
Lower 3 Man: Let's bind you three together by strings.
Lower 4 Yah, please don't
Lower 5 AhAh…
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1 Man: come on, everyone connected together~~
2 Hotaru: Stop it~~
3 Hurts! So hurts!!
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1 Man: Moving slower, or your friends' tites will be pulled off~~~
2 Tsukino: Higiii
3 Chibiusa: YahAh, don't, don't~!!
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1 Hotaru: Gyaaaa Iyaaaa
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Upper Chibiusa: AhYah, it's gonna be pulling off~~~!!!
Lower 1 (sound:Paa Paa)
Lower 2 Tsukino: Off! It's gonna be off!
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Upper 1 Chibiusa: It hurts
Upper 2 Chibiusa: Huh!?
Mid Hotaru: Guh Wu
Lower 1 Chibiusa: Ah—…
Lower 2 Chibiusa: AhAhAh...
Lower 3 Hotaru: YahAh, don't look
Lower 4 Hotaru: don't look at me, Chibiusa chan
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Upper 1 Chibiusa: Spamming is so hard…
Upper 2 Chibiusa: Hotaru chan really hate this…
Upper 3 Chibiusa: Stop…Please…let Hotaru chan go
Lower 1 Man: This guy's belly is full of sperm now, looks like about to crake
Lower 2 Man: What's gonna be if I pull it off~~~
Lower 3 Chibiusa: Stop it~~~
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Upper 1 Man: come, open your mouth!!
Upper 2 Chibiusa: Ah Gar Ah
Upper 3 Hotaru: No way!
Lower 1 Chibiusa: ErrAhAhAh
Lower 1 Hotaru: Chibiusa chan!
Lower 3 Hotaru: I cannot stop, it's coming~~
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Upper 1 Man: Hey, I know it's not over yet——
Upper 2 Hotaru: Stop it
Upper 1 under ErrAhAh——
Upper 3 Man: By the way, this guy's belly also stored a lot
Upper 4 Tsukino: YahAhAh
Upper 5 Tsukino: Don't…Don't pull it out——
Lower Tsukino: YahAhAhAh
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Upper Chibiusa: Wu
Mid 1 Man: Hay, watch out~ watch carefully your friend's face being fucked!!
Mid 2 Chibiusa: Wu
Mid 3 Hotaru: Chibi…Chibiusa chan…
Lower 1 (sound: Pa Pa Pa)
Lower 2 Chibiusa: Guuu
Lower 2 Chibiusa: Ngu Nguuu
Lower 3 Hotaru: Yah
Lower 4 Man: HaHaHa, nose, her nose shoots!
Lower 5 Looks so sucks~~
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Upper 1 Man: Hay, watch your friends' face!
Upper 2 Man: The face that is silly fucked~
Mid 2 (sound: ZuLiu ZuLiu)
Mid 3 (sound: Pa Pa )
Mid 4 (sound: Bi Bi)
Lower 1 Chibiusa: Err Err Err
Lower 2 Tsukino: Ha Ha
Lower 3 Hotaru: Err…AhAh…
Lower 4
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Upper 1 Doctor: Very well, you are calm down now.
Upper 2 Girl: …Thank you…
Mid Girl: AhYah?
Lower 1 Girl: This kid is…?
Lower 2 Doctor: Turns out you recognize Chibiusa and her friends ?
Lower 3 Girl: Hah? Err Err…
Lower 4 Doctor: what a coincidence.
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Upper 1 Doctor: Oh Yoh
Upper 2 Doctor: It's time to go!
Upper 3 Doctor: There is something I need to do.
Upper 4 Doctor: I have to leave now, be your home please.
Upper 5 Doctor: Bye
Upper 6 Girl: (leave a stranger at home alone, so careless…it's really far to kind)
Mid 1 Girl: ( I feel something strange in this place)
Mid 2 Girl: (Let's check it out——❤)
Lower Diana: Haii~?
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Upper 1 (Sound: Unnn Unnn Unnn)
Upper 2 Diana: what's going on here, everyone?
Mid 1 Diana (Pa)
Mid 2 Tsukino: (Sitting up) Wah
Lower 1 Thank you for waking us up, Diana
Lower 2 Tsukino: What a bad luck…
Lower 3 Chibiusa: I'm sorry…
Lower 4 The feeling still exists…
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Upper 1 Tsukino: At least we should erase Hotaru's memory of this part——Hey, what are you doing?
Upper 2 Chibiusa: (putting the equipment on) Atonement.
Upper 3 Tsukino: I can imagine that she is suffering a lot——
Mid 1 Tsukino: (Considering Chibiusa is willing to punish herself, so we forgive her this time)
Mid 2 Ah
Lower 1 Tsukino: Why do you come here?
Lower 2 Girl: No, well…
Lower 3 Girl: There was a very kind uncle…
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Upper 1 Tsukino: Anyway, Get back to the living room and wait
Upper 2 (smaller font: get this kid to sleep first)
Upper 3 Girl: Yes——
Mid 1 Wu——Err——
Mid 2 Haruka: Wu——
Mid 3 Haruka: Difficult…it's so difficult
Mid 4 Pegasus:…
Mid 5 (background: Michiru: Come on! Come on! Don't lose to a horse~~!)
Mid 6 Pegasus！！？
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Upper Boss of alien: What!?
Boss of alien: Who are over there!? Where are they from!!?
Mid Girl: That…That is….
Lower P61 continue
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From 'Tokyo Miu Miu'
Both manga and anime become a little abnormal at this time (middle of May)….
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From 'riOki-sefutei(TV)'
Do we need some boundaries for maniac?
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From 'Z-Gundam' - Haman
Boss, we don't expect that the all characters are not repetitive!?
39
From 'Z-Gundam' A.E.U.G Uniform
AhYah, we draw the gloves before, but it looks too ugly (so the gloves are hide)
44
Looks like it is the first time to draw the Ami Chan's picture. (how many year we past.)
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sailor-iron-mouse… Everyone knows it even I don't write this on. The posture in very minor…
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Mid 1 Mother of Illusion
Mid 2 Ume (Stamp)
Lower 1 Girl: SikuSiku (Crying)
Lower 2 Girl: SikuSiku
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Upper 1 Hotaru: Aunt, what's going on? Why are you crying?
Upper 2 Girl: Why call me aunt…why do you call me aunt…
Mid Girl: You even forget your Mum?...
Lower 1 Hotaru:!?
Lower 2 Hotaru: Mum…! Are you my Mum?!
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Upper 1 Hotaru: ! (waking)
Upper 2 Hotaru: A dream about my Mum…first time I made...
Mid 1 Hotaru: What does my Mum looks like?
Mid 2 Hotaru: I don't know it at all…
Lower 1 Doctor: Hey! Want to know something about your mother?
Lower 2 Hotaru: Please, Papa.
Lower 3 Doctor: Wuh Wuh
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Upper 1 Hotaru: She should be a nice person...
Upper 2 Hotaru: Right?
Upper 3 Doctor: Ah, you see…
Lower 1 Doctor: (I…I can't tell…that Hotaru is a Made Woman which created by myself...
Lower 2 Doctor: HaHaHaHaHaHa
Lower 3 Hotaru: Nei~ Nei~ PaPa~
Bottom My dog, Harino Makiko (sold at its 24 years old), made a great help of line-drawing and blacking. Thank you~ (stamp: ume)
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Upper 1 Jeffy: The pressure is stressful, but please keep trying.
Upper 2 Jeffy: I…will wait for you…
Upper 3 Hotaru: And allow me to encourage you…
Bottom Long time no see, Jeffy & Hotaru
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Hotaru: Please don't give up, keep trying…trust you…
Men: WuWuWu…
Left tag: Sawara Shifu
Right tag: Maki Sensei
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Lower right We haven't try any scat neta this time, so I made this one.
But there was not any scat play for Chibiusa in this main story.
Auh? So I failed?
Mid Chibiusa: ErWuWuWuWuh (YahAh, so dirt~ don't look ~~!!!)
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Eighth Episode: Tunning
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Upper 1 On the other side, Chibiusa returned to the overhead world and suffered…
Upper 2 Chibiusa: ErEr!
Mid Chibiusa: …but…
Lower 1 Chibiusa: (Tsukino and Hotaru chan were still here)
Lower 2 Chibiusa: (but we do rescued the Hotaru chan already…)
Lower 3 Chibiusa: (Perhaps some data was still here, as a character only…)
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Upper 1 Hotaru: No, I can't…
Upper 2 Hotaru: Please let me go…HaHah
Lower 1 Chibiusa: (Hotaru is so cute, her smile is so beautiful when she get this)
Lower 2 Man: Well, let's have fun with this——He is not listening
Lower 3 Chibiusa: ( Since then I don't dare to try this because Hotaru chan will really piss off, but now, Hotaru chan is just a illusion…
Lower 4 Man: Hey, pull it out.
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Upper 1 Man: HeyHey, here we go…get prepared for this
Upper 2 Chibiusa: (In that case, let me see how cute the Hotaru chan would be)
Upper 3 Hotaru: No…don't…
Lower Chibiusa: (Hotaru looks so cute…for this view, I even don't care about myself…)
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Upper 1 Chibiusa: Hotaru chan more more——
Upper 2 Hotaru: Ah, Chibiusa chan
Lower Both: Ah AhAh
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Upper 1 Man: Jade of magic!!
Upper 2 Girl: let the mirror of dream
Upper 3 Both: Recovered!!
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1 Pegasus!!
2 MOON GORGEOUS
3 Meditation
4 stage out
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Upper 1 Pegasus: Let me guide your souls
Upper 2 They will be surely saved, though only a few of you are here.
Upper 3 Sailor senshi: why do you show up so late…
Lower 1 Pegasus: Please don't give up/
Lower 2 Chibiusa: (Pretending as calm)
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Upper Dead moon: Damn it~~
Dead moon: A sailor senshi like this? Not looks like as they told.
Lower Saturn?: dismissed
Saturn?: ——or all of you will die here
Dead moon: thought we could take advantage of it, what a pity——
Saturn?: Without Pegasus's protection, they…
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Upper 1 Doctor: Huh~~~
Mid 1 Doctor: Thought I got a chance to have an interview
Mid 2 Doctor: Seems like still not working…
Lower 1 Doctor: As a ex-president of a council, it's hard to find a casual job in a short time, I know it.
Lower 2 Doctor: But it seems pretty difficult to live alone, if I could get a job that fits for my knowledge…
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Upper 1 Doctor: I just can't take too much advantage from the Michiru's kindness…
Upper 2 Doctor: Anyway, if that could make the Mugen Universe to be rebuilt more quickly…
Upper 3 Doctor: though as I thought…
Mid 1 Nagase: Err
Mid 2 Nagase: Souich? Is that you, Tomoe Souichi?
Mid 3 Doctor: Huh?
Lower 1 Doctor: Nagase
Lower 2 Doctor: You are Nagase?
Lower 3 Nagase: Turns out you are Souichi.
Lower 4 Nagase: What's going on, why do you come here?
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Upper 1 Doctor: Oh, I see, you come here for a job.
Upper 2 Nagase: Huh, a technical chief.
Mid 1 Nagase: I heard something about you, but I couldn't reach you and worried
Mid 2 Nagase: So glad to meet you, safe and sound.
Mid 3 Doctor: thanks for your concern.
Lower 1 Multi: Tea, please
Lower 2 Doctor: Huh, thank you
Mid left Multi: You're welcome
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Upper 1 Doctor: She looks too young for an employee…
Upper 2 Doctor: an experimenter perhaps
Upper 3 Nagase: I'm sorry, Tomoe, I don't have so much power to influence the HR dept.
Upper 4 Nagase: I could make little help for your job hunting.
Mid 1 Doctor: Never mind,
Mid 2 Doctor: I didn't expect you could.
Mid 3 Doctor: It's good to be here to meet my old friend.
Mid 4 Nagase: I'm glad to hear you say so.
Mid 5 Nagase: Well, about the jobs… something like part-time jobs… actually we need some…
Lower 1 Nagase: ——Rather to say,
Lower 2 Nagase: we do need your help, please accept!!
Lower 3 Doctor: Huh?
Lower 4 To be continued
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Upper 1 Golden arrow
Upper 2 On next episode, is it the key for victory!?
Lower 1 Haven't seen this 'preview for the next episode' model for a long time
Well— finally the Multi(?) got on the stage… So the SS Series is getting better now
How many parts the Multi have in the future? Do you mean!?
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A picture made by me, as my style Etenal Moon
I think the boots need some improvement…
Comparing with the hard one, I do prefer the softer one…
(Stamp of kazumitsu)
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Postscript
Maki hideto ('M'): ——Finally, times for postscript
Sawara kazumitsu ('S'): It is not easy to finish this, the dead line is so stressful
M: We should already done this 'Collection 4' for the Comic Revolution in spring, but because our circle was not be chosen to attend. It is totally wrong to hold a 'should done doujin' from publishing.
S: So something shitty happened… you guys…
M: I can say the dead line of the 'Collection 4',' manga and the 'SS 4' are a JET STEAM ATTACK for me… Besides that there are some requests from other circles that I need to do, either.
S: I made the 'Collection', the Cushion and the 'SS4'… and some requests, it's also a JET STEAM ATTACK!
M: Cushion?
S: Yes, I made it. Ah, you said you made a manga. Congratulations! How many years past since the previous time?
M: … It would be the 91s, so it is 11 years ago…sensei and you?
S: …It was 94s (?), about 10 years ago…sounds like we are so alien from the manga. Especially for me, the Anthology of the super robot which I made these years is so hard to make a manga, you know… Anyway, congratulate for your new manga——
M: …You may right, but in this industry, we cannot believe anything until the manga is surely published.
S: Right! Indeed, as the time we made the manga 'Shell Buster'
78 S: Suffered a lot. And I also heard some examples that the published manage can only make a little profits… It should not be so frequently, but we do know what is going on.
M: …so the conclusion is we can't be satisfied until everything comes to an end…——what about the cushion?
S: …I made this for that circle which made cushion.
M: Like?
S: Saturn chan, for sure.
small font: Ah, I made it wrong, the character is not Saturn chan （——？）
M: Jealousy….
S: You said you want to make one for Chibi moon, you do you draw one for Chibi moon——You are very good at drawing this, don't you! And the Chibiusa is super cute and popular, right?
M: …You should very dislike her, I remember…
S: People changes all the time…heading to the way which cannot be done…
M: Don't say it cannot be done! Chibiusa is very cute, right!!
S: …Err…Well, she is cute indeed…I want the special gift: the video of 'Katyusha milk', so bought it…
S: ——about this cushion, I planned to make some advertisement for it, however, a few days ago, before the summer Comic Market opened, I was told the cushion has nearly sold out… So I don't even know how many we got for the summer CM…
M: Real thing is real thing, just not like the doujins, short of number all the time. The stocking number will easily become deficit if we don't plan it well…
S: But, Hotaru chan is so awesome! Popularity is very high all the time. The sensei who coupled with Mars would be popular too.
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M: ——so, what is the left one (P79)?
S: Err, completed version and initial version.
M: The initial?
S: Drawing it on the drawing board (especially for the skirt), there are many versions on hand, well, the best one should be the one of the other side…
M: The initial version has a clearer view of clitoris.
S: Because the initial version is a draft by pencil, more details is added in the later version.
M: You still have the ambitious to draw up 10 sailor Senshi, no matter the cost?
S: More or less. Well, putting the Saturn and Mars together on my first doujin, does it have a sense of curveball?
M: Something like that, It would be very expectable for sailor moon fans.
S: From the second half of 'S' to the 'SS', we haven't seen much doujins out yet…
M: As the principle of luck equality, we will roll out a lot Sailor Mye in this Expo.
S: We can not buy so many…most likely…
S: Ah, the 'Amada' will sell the Sailor Mye' trading cards in this Expo, I am a little expect of that. Perhaps they will sell some previous cast card? I really want to buy the Takabatake kasumi Chan's card. If it is, that would be a great relief!!
82 M: ——so, what is this draft (P80) used for?
S: This was made when I accept the request, and imaginize my initial idea of it. The details of the request is: face up and lying, so I draw this as initial.
M: Of course, there is no any cushion as the character is lay back.
S: But I really want a cushion with lay back style…
M: Once upon, a circle called 'akkaLB:-' made a lot of drafts, one of drafts is lay back posture, that would be the Yuri Yuri's.
S: I nearly forgot this character, but as I see this draft, I may say:'This one, this is it! Please give me this one!' …maybe in someday I will make one for myself…ao as I think…
M: So what? If we made some cushions this way, do you think who would like to buy?
S: Er~What will it be? Well, think about it later.
M: Ah, before we ended.
S: This is our new member, Haribara Makiko san.
M: Thank you very much. But, I don't know anything about him
S: So do I.
M: Huh?
S: (only know) he is from Ume san's team, nothing else…Anyway, thanks a lot.
M & S: So, see you later.

Double post

This post has been edited by sandmaning: Oct 5 2011, 08:58

Looks good to me, don't hesitate to claim the translation bounty.

Blood, do you feel like proofreading? This will again need that treatment before we can edit it in.

I'm alright with waiting, it'll give me some time to deal with a couple edits since I was given a mother's scolding by Rookie, or I can PR while I edit.... But I think i'll leave it to Blood to decide.

I am in no hurry, totally agree with doing it well rather than hastily.

Editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=4569

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 6 2011, 19:07

Well, if no one comes along to PR this by the time i'm done with my other tasks i'm working on, i'll handle the PR, post it here and begin the edit.

...since I was given a mother's scolding by Rookie...

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Well, if no one comes along to PR this by the time i'm done with my other tasks i'm working on, i'll handle the PR, post it here and begin the edit.

I'll wait a few days, if you are running out of things to do, note I have outstanding editing bounties (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)