[TSS 2D Shooting] Silent Saturn SS vol. 2 (Sailor Moon) -> [English] (translate)
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Dialogue Box" The order of Dialogue Box: From Right to left and from up to the bottom.'Up','Mid' and 'bottom' demonstrate the position of the dialogue box, as the dialogue boxes are more than one in a page.
3rd Multi(From the 'To Heart'): I am so embarrassed to make this prevue here. Heard that my cameo appearance will be moved to the next scene.
Haaaiii~~~ Is she Multi chan!?
5th Hotaru Tomoe(Sailor Saturn): Haaaiii~~~ Is she Multi Chan!?
Chibi Usa (Sailor Chibi Moon): Thought she was a new Sailor Senshi …
"(Upper) How could this happened, it is so obvious to figure it out,Oei~
(Upper left) Multi: And precisely, I am not the real Multi.
(Lower left) Please read the next scene for more details."
4th Combined by 3rd and 5th pages.
7th Mercury:kya
Mars:Aa
Jupiter:waa
Venus:kyuu
Lemures:kyeeee
8th
up bili
bottom Moon:Rainbow Moon Heart Ache
9th
up STAGE OUT
bottom Mars: Finally we beat them.
Moon: I have a feeling that they have enhanced these enemies' power, they are too strong.
Jupiter: Do you mean that we still have any vulnerability?
10th
Subheading Chapter 3: In spring, on the bathing beach
Mercury: In the Sailor Moon world, we will have the four seasons cycle twice in a single year. Moon:What the--
up At the same time, in the luxury house of Neptune. (Annotation:I don't like such introductions at all.)
See? After a little make-up, you two really have perfect resemblances to Bancoran and Maraich.
Hotaru Tomoe: Let's just leave it alone. Uranus and Neptune: Agreed.
bottom Hotaru Tomoe: Wow, Chibi Usa you are so cute! Chibi Usa (IMG:[
invalid]
style_emoticons/default/ohmy.gif)h, really?
Other people. From right to left.
Haruka:Michiru, do you know where the car key is?
The professor: Aye. Thank you.
The woman:(Tying the tie)It's done, Professor.
Michiru:It still remain intact in its original position.
Setsuna:The lunch is ready!
11th
up The Professor: Do I have to leave anyway?
The woman: Yes, professor.
Hotaru Tomoe:Of course, father.
The professor: But I was working hard on the reconstruction of the academy of infinity day and night…
The woman:Professor, you need to rest sometimes.
mid The professor: But, What about the house security if we are all away from home?
bottom Chibi Usa:Please, Pegasus, guard the house for us. I'm begging you. (booo, the engine running)
12th Haruka: Oh no… How can you make me drive a car like this one?
up Michinu:We have no choice. Only a sports car can carry so many people.
Haruka:Why not choose a better one at that time? Even if it's a rent car
Michinu:Enough. We are not going to the beach just for any pickup.
Haruka: ...
mid Chibi Usa:Ah, the sea!This is the sea!
Michiru: Well, they are still kids. I have to say.
Haruka:Don't be fooled by her appearance, Michiru. Chibi Usa is older than all of us. (Annotation: Not acknowledgable in the TV series.)
Chibi Usa:Leaving aside the appearance. My mentle age hasn't changed much, too. It's not strange that those humans as seed will be worried. Also for the mentle age, the Princess of Terra in the future has the same problem. Too.
Haruka: Oh no… Don't tell me that our future is guarded by peoples like her…
bottom Haruka: So much sacrifice has been paid, but...
Hotaru Tomoe:By the way, there are so many people here. It will be a problem for us to get into the water.
Michiru: Oh, turn left at this place.
Voice unidentified: The VIP CARD!
13th
up "You are so awesome! A noblewoman from the upper class...
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Michiru:Hah, this is a private beach of membership.
mid Others: Praise our queen!
Every time I see Michiru's wealth, I am more sure of my inability.
Michiru:I don't think so.
Michiru:You are my bodyguard.
Haruka:I am going further from a character of resolution…
bottom Chibi Usa and Hotaru:wow
14th
up The woman:Aye, this must be the first time I ever saw Hotaru in a swim suit.
The professor: Sorry, Hotaru, I have never bought any for you… Please forgive me! Hotaru: Father!
Haruka: Chibi Usa is cute, too.
Setsua: Yeah, so cute that I would abandon my rationality for her.
Chibi Usa:What?!
Michiru:Se…Setsuna…
15th
up Michiru:Ahh!
Haruka:What's the matter with you, Michiru?
mid Why are you two wearing the same kind of clothes!
Haruka & The professor: What?
The professor:Oh, really...
Haruka: This is an accident! Unlike other women's dress, swimsuits don't have much difference in the appearence.
Michiru:You liar! Surely you two already have a relationship!
bottom Haruka:Just calm down and think about it, you idiot!
Michiru:I'm not an idiot! This is the truth!
16th
up The slund of the waves:zaa
Annotation: Deep Submerge!
mid Ahhhhh!
Dyuwa! (Ultra barrier!)
bottom Haruka:If we cannot appease Poseidon's wrath quickly, the peace of the seas will be in danger!
Dyuwa!(Where is Seagoras?)Dyuwa!(Where is the monster!)
LOL
17th
up Minako:You are really enjoying yourselves! But it will be boring with the pleasure-seeking Master Minako in the summer vacation!
Mizuno Ami:Why do I have to…
Stomp!
Minako: M-Moon?
Moon: Lemures is coming out. Help me!
bottom
Minako:How can they do this! Last time I didn't even show up!
Mars: It's not time to talk about such thing! (Annotation: Runa-chan and Mamo-chan didn't show up too.)
Jupiter:Neither did I.
Moon: Sailor teleport!
Minako:How can you…
Haruka: Well the regular troops are really busy.
The professor: Where are Hotaru and the others?
18th
up Chibi Usa:How do you like it, Hotaru?
Hotaru:Indeed, there is no one around here.
mid Hotaru:Is swimming forbidden in this area?
Chibi Usa:This is a paradise screened out of all the sight spots.
bottom Hotaru: But it is quite empty there, too. There is no need for us two to stay here.
Chibi Usa: We may not have such fun with others present.
Hotaru:Ahh!
19th
up Hotaru:Chiba Usa, are we going to make it here?
Chibi Usa: Of course.
mid Hotaru-chan's special memory of summer, tied up on the beach in the daytime.
Hotaru:Ah!(But, I didn't have such feeling for a long time.)
bottom Hotaru:Some one else might see us!
Chibi Usa: Don't worry, I opened a force field that no mortal men may break through.
Chibi Usa:Wow, you are so horny.
Hotaru: No!
Some one(Setsuna)
is no mere mortal.
The aside: Starting from this page such annotations will be on the corner of the illustrations
38th
38th/Mid DARE QUEST Pee chan
38th/Up Hotaru Tomoe(Sailor Saturn): Wu… So hot even at night…
Chibi Usa (Sailor Chibi Moon): Just go for a walk may hardly feel any cooler.
Right! We should make a traditional 'enjoy the cool' show, dare you to have a dare quest?
38th/Bottom Hotaru Tomoe(Sailor Saturn):… It's OK to recollect some stuff from the deep woods, but why ask me dressing like this…
Rather than to be killed by demons, it would be more horrible to be encountered by someone else…
39th
39th/Up It could be this way…
So hard to find the way out when hands are tied...
39th/Mid Male: Silence!
"Male(Lower right): Just like that pink hair, double-ponytail kid told…
Male(Upper left): wait here and something goody will come to us, this girl would be the answer.
Hotaru(Saturn, Lower left): The stuff that Chibi Usa (Sailor Chibi Moon) ask me to recollect is... Can't be!? "
39th/Bottom "Hotaru Tomoe(Sailor Saturn): someone…someone help…
Male: Oh Yo…"
Male: Swallow this, see if you can still shout
Hotaru Tomoe(Sailor Saturn): Wu…
Male: See, no one will come no matter what you do.
40th
40th/up (Upper right) Woo, seems like the pussy is already occupied,
(Upper mid)Well, for god sake, so let me go the 'back door'.
(Upper left)En… Ah, it… inside my asshole…
40th/Mid (Mid right)Hey, do you know why this girl dressed so freaky?
(Mid mid)Who knows.
(Mid left)Nothing bad about it, and it get easier for us to do the job, anyway.
40th/Bottom (Lower right)…Why…
(Lower mid)…why would become like this…
(Lower left)I… I am about to cumshot…
41th
41th/Up (cut-in at Upper right)OK, shoot together!
"(Upper right) Hey, trying not to overflow the sperm on the ground!
(Upper Mid) Hel…help…
(Upper left) Help me from this horror…!!"
41th/Bottom Chibi Usa (Sailor Chibi Moon): …The sense of horror will be more strongly in that situation!! Undoubtable, Body will be cooled utterly!!
Block
…eh?
Hotaru Tomoe(Sailor Saturn):That was really…raping my two holes at same time…Ah…Ya…That was so…so strong…
Chibi Usa (Sailor Chibi Moon): Thought she will get mad at me…turns out she had a orgasm that time…
(Lower left) This plan will cause even hotter (titter), so has been terminated.
44th
44th/Up That morning
Since waked up, the unspeakable sense of discordance is…
Good Moring…Haruka Papa,Michiru Mama, Setsuna Mama
44th/Mid Scar…(titter)' (a neta from 'scar') (Note: 'scar' is GAL which presented by the 'LEAF')
44th/Bottom (Rightmost) The moment is decisive
(Right) Michru~, Hotaru is very lucky, did not suffer any disaster.
(Mid) I am Haruka, Setsuna is over there.
Ahhh~, how fantastic…
45th
45th/Up (Rightmost)Ahhh~, how cute…
(Right)Setsuna are always doing like this.
(Mid)Thought we know she loves loli…
(Left)Even she never let herself go, as she is one of the loli…
45th/Mid (Right)Because there is no hair!
(Left)Don't need to show us this!
45th/Bottom (Right)why would become like this…
(Mid)Is that all of us(be swapped body)? Where is Usa chan (Chibi Usa)?
(Left)Moon prism power make up! (Magical word)
46th
46th/Up (Right)Guooooooooo
(Mid)Guruuuuuuuu
(Left)Wa~~~~~~~~~
46th/Mid (Right)AhAh,it's Usa chan (Chibi Usa)
(Mid) Here we go.
(Left) Oh, I see.
46th/Bottom Left (Right)Heads are chopped off, looks so painful.
(Mid) Not pain at all, they should feel nothing by such quick move.
(Left) Oh, that's fine then.
47th
47th/Up (Right) Anyway, we cannot just leave this guy aside!
(Left) Leave it to me then.
47th/Mid (Rightmost) May I ask… what is this?
(Right) Oh, you made this with the good tealeaves.
(Mid) En, The taste is great
(Left) To turn a blind eye to it, having some Moring tea would be wiser.
47th/Bottom (Rightmost) That's just fine, it will be settled for sure.
(Right) Anyway, we should calm down first.
"(Mid) After that, the sailor Senshi of the Kashiwagi four sisters with the demonized Chibi Usa started a life-and-death struggle… Well, that is another story…
(Mid Below) GO! Come on!"
The End (Bottom) Wu… what am I going to say in this story… (Which means this story is meaningless.)
(Note: In this story, the four sailor Senshi swapped their body with the four sisters (the characters in 'scar', produced by 'LEAF').
48th (Top & 2nd Line) For Innami Mahjong in Revo(Comic Revolution, as similar as the Comic Market), thank you very much~
(3rd Line)Super2 Happy~ (Stamp: Ume)
"(4rd Line)(left) Pong!Ami (Sailor Mercury)
(Mid) In the name of the moon, I shall punish youuuuu~~~
(Right) Pong! Makoto (Sailor Jupiter)"
"(5th Line) (Left) Pong! Usagi (Sailor Moon)
(Right) Pong! Usa (Sailor Chibi moon)"
"(6th Line) (Left) Pong! Minako (Sailor Venus)
(Right) Pong! Rei (Sailor Mars)"
Maki(Maki Hideto):So, told you not to have a 'tsukkomi' space! Why do you still intend to do it! (Note: the 'tsukkomi' space could be the blank area where the picture is not occupied, so the drawer can make some comments on it.)
Kazumitsu(Sawara Kazumitsu): Rather, you should not draw the stuff which drives people to 'tsukkomi' it!
Maki(Maki Hideto):Well, the Loli, or the Hatsune,which is High School Girl, thought she looks so (loli)…
Kazumitsu(Sawara Kazumitsu): Is it possible that some evil power cursed on them?... Just like the Chibi Usa is cursed?
Maki(Maki Hideto): That curse made Chibi Usa become a demon? Who cursed her!?
Kazumitsu(Sawara Kazumitsu): En… probably from Mamo chan or someone like that…
(right below)The 'tsukkomi' space for Sawara Shifu and Maki Sensei.
(Smaller words) Hai Ya~ Space is not enough?
55th En,brief description for illustrations on P50, P51 and P55: doujin was called 'extremely giant',produced by the CIRCLE of 'knock out' , are full-colored pictures, drawing the Ami chan's(Sailor Mercury)pussy is inserted with a giant stuff. The face expression of Ami chan and the inserted giant stuff are modified between the different version of the illustrations.
Due to their doujin are full colored, and they said:'we expand this matter quiet widely, sounds like we made a very nice doujin.'. If you are interested for this doujin, you may have a check on them.
P52 and P53 are illustrations of Hanano Miyako which full colored by Sawara. Thought the illustrations turned to black-and-white style, I hope these may still demonstrate the full colored effects, more or less…
I also expect one day that I have my own full colored doujin. -sawara
57th (note: This follows the tsunami caused by Michiru.)
up Zapaaan(Slund of the waves)
mid Hotaru:Puha!
bottom Hotaru:Finally I'm saved! Chibi Usa!
58th
bottom Hotaru:AHHHHH!
Chapter 4: Tentacles
59th
up Hotaru:No…
bottom Hotaru:No!
60th
up Hotaru:It hurts! No!
mid Hotaru:No!
bottom Hotaru:You sucker stop!
61th
bottom Hotaru:Some one help me!
62th
Hotaru:Please stop! It really hurts! No!
63th
Hotaru:AHHHH!
Bisyaaa
64th
Zaappaaa(sound of spraying)
65th
up Chibi Usa: Hotaru-chan!
Hotaru:Chibi Usa…
bottom Chibi Usa:What?
66th
up Chibi Usa:Please stop, this really hurts!
bottom Stop! This is too large. It cannot get inside me!
It is spliting!
67th
up Hotaru:Stop! Chibi Usa is dying!
bottom Chibi Usa: wugiyaaaa…
68th
up (Tentacles pulling out.)
(Spouting)
mid Hotaru:Ah…Chibi Usa!
bottom Getting entangled
Hotaru:Ah!
69th
up Hotaru:Iyaaaa aa giriri(getting harder). Merimerimeri(Inserting)
bottom Hotaru:No! It's spliting! Yaaaaa!
70th
mid The professor: Oh, Hotaru, now you come to sense again. It's great!
Setuna: Don't let it go, little lady.
bottom Hotaru:Is this a dream?
But… the problem is…
71th
up Where did the dream begin…
72th
up HOHOHOHO(laughing)
Thus end our missions here.
mid ?:Wait!
bottom ?:You shall not act alone. Even none of us care about this planet's future.
For such things you did at this time will severely hinder the mission given by him,, which is to collect the star seed on this planet.
73th
up You are not a human. But I will kill you if you dare to impede me.
"If that's the way you want to do it, if you dare harm this planet, that's how we'll do it.
"
mid My opnion is the same.
bottom If you stop there will be nothing. But if you are planning any evil invasion, we will not back off.
74th
up Behold! The punishment of Saturn the desolator!
bottom To be continued
75th
Announce in advance:
The fight between the sailor team and the the dead moon continues.
"But, the mysterious sailor and xenos are still active in the shadow.
"
Another Saturn besides Hotaru, and the warriors attracted by her, can they stop this?
(Besides, who's that one from the deep space? Even it is said that he came from the deep space, it must be galaxia at any rate.)
Will Multi come out?
The next volume:silent saturn ss vol3 "Attack from the deep space"(tentative name)
76th/77th Postscript
sawara En, times for postscript.
maki As appearance on stage as Motoko Arai's…
sawara Just like this?
maki Put this thing aside, now for the second doujin(SS SS 2).
sawara Seems like the content doesn't have much to do with the main story, and what is the 'octopus'?
What did you saw? The 'king kong' verses the 'Godzilla' or the 'Franken' fights for the 'Underground Monster'?
maki As you say so, that should be the 'Tentacle' or the 'Octopus'. I just cannot use this idea by watching the 'King Kong'film and easily saying:'Perfect!,to draw a Hotaru Tomoe's(Sailor Saturn) H-Doujin in this way!' Actually, I thought this story up just incidentally. And after that part, an stranger shows up.
sawara The alien form the Fepss?
maki That is an alien from the first stage of the 'shellbuster'.Just using this monster's appearance to draw this doujin? (Note1: 'shell buster', a giant-heroine comic,produced by Sawara, pulished in 'popurin club' during in 90 - 94)
sawara Anyway, it is just an inspiration of the 'shellbuster' jump into my head, incidentally. As my conception, to draw this monster story as my skilled style, so I can figure out the self-contradiction part in the doujin and prevent the story becoming boring, then I did it that way. However, this time is similar with that story some how.
maki The Story of Sailor Saturn, sounds like the producer is tired of it.
sawara Percisely as I thought, play a very little role in it! Why that movie 'Sailor Moon Supers' is so called 'nine worriors'! And why the Sailor Saturn only left her head and ass!
maki The GK (Plastic villain?) of B-club even made a comment in the magzine when the Sailor Pluto was show up, 'so the entire sailor moon characters are here!' That won't be right at all!
sawara The self-explosion worrior(has ability to detory the whole universe) is hardly on the show, as the main story is concerned. That would be easier if she plays as a Protagonist in story, as the one of the ten worriors, she would get more chances to play, anyway.
maki The 'Sailor Moon Supers' movie also noted:'Hotaru (Sailor Saturn) was a baby at that moment.'. Even the vanished Sailor Pluto played a role in the movie (Of course she shouldn't),why the Sailor Saturn did not. That won't be harmed just appear on the screen!
sawara Talking about Tokyo Movie, we got some feelings like: How many the 'Dragon-Balls' movies they want? Don't they feel any sence of self-contradiction if plug the movie story into the TV story? Tokyo Movie, shall made the movie agrees with the comic's story, not against it. ( To follow the origin's story line?)
maki At last, the Sailor Saturn resured the W-moon(transformed by little Tsukino & Usagi Tsukino) at very crisis moment, when the little Tsukino said:'now…',although pretty old stuff, but it is so touching! It looks like a classic plot which I had experienced before.
sawara So Heat!- Therefore, Hotaru should play the protagonist role in 'Silent Saturn',well, it's Sailor Saturn's turn now, so just let me draw the doujin as the style of the 'eruka' style. (Note2: a character from previous doujin 'Thirty Saver' which made by Sawara,as an enemy as an friend, dress in black, with the Murasame, powerful, and death's reaper,released from 84' since then)
maki Worth to expect!
sawara Last words, though many already knew, Kiyoshi's 'Sailor Saturn-musician edition' are ready for sale now. (Note: considering the 'external' of Kiyoshi's edition, the size would be huge.)
maki WuWu… We have waited for 3 years.
sawara In order to punish the corrupted (?) GK world by the hammer (?) of the justice?
maki I am coming back!! <-don't know this meaning
sawara Anyway, the Kiyoshi's memoriable edition of the Sailor Saturn ends here.
maki ……Told you it is not (memoriable edition)……
78th Colophon
"(C60) [Thirty Saver Street 2D Shooting (Maki Hideto, Sawara Kazumitsu)] Silent Saturn SS vol. 2 (Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon)
(C60) [サーティセイバーストリート・2D-シューティング (牧秀人, 佐原一光)] サイレント・サターン SS vol.2 (美少女戦士セーラームーン)
牧秀人
maki hideto
佐原一光
sawara kazumitsu"