[X] My Assistant

No hurry.

Yes, hurry ;P

Yes, hurry ;P

I've got 3 things in line before then. One for Red and 2 requests. Probably a week & half to 2 weeks out. Then we're good to go though. Sorry but I just don't have any projects that call out to me so much so that I'm willing to put off non-H projects to do them.

This post has been edited by sornyninja: Oct 29 2010, 18:10

I want to say hurry but I know Silent Saturn is a bit of a mess to tackle. Still, I hope you consider it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

I want to say hurry but I know Silent Saturn is a bit of a mess to tackle. Still, I hope you consider it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Yeah it's going to be a time consuming project. I'm probably going to have it done before the end of the month. Just an estimate though.

140 Hath and still no one has taken this bounty? Any word on if sornyninja was going to take bounty still or not? It's really frustrating...

Patience (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

If no one has even touched MM2's 16pg 65hth bounty, I have little hope for this unless someone's heart/boredom grows 3x

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Nov 15 2010, 03:07

Grrrr....

Alright, I've made it 200 Hath now. If I didn't have such a hardon for Chibimoon I think I could be more patient (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sleep.gif)

Between this and MM2, I find it hard to believe no one would do this(if not for Chibimoon, then at least for the hath)

Grrrr....

Alright, I've made it 200 Hath now. If I didn't have such a hardon for Chibimoon I think I could be more patient (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/sleep.gif)

If I wasn't a dirty dirty Hotaru fan I wouldn't even look at this. Also since I haven't read through it yet I am hoping against hopes that Hotaru doesn't sprout a foot long cock in this one T_T.

If I wasn't a dirty dirty Hotaru fan I wouldn't even look at this. Also since I haven't read through it yet I am hoping against hopes that Hotaru doesn't sprout a foot long cock in this one T_T.

Afaik there's no futa in the whole series.

Afaik there's no futa in the whole series.

Good! I did a project for Bloodthirster that destroyed my image of Hotaru forever (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/anime_cry.gif) Anyway this is still on my radar and when I get around to doing it I will probably do things in chunks so people can start wacking it early.

I can get my team to do this but not sure if someone's already working on it?

I can get my team to do this but not sure if someone's already working on it?

It looks like no one is.

I spent some hours on this tonight, here is the result:

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/?3kiwx3q480qnh6j

I haven't done a translation for e-hentai before so I hope it's the correct format and everything?

This post has been edited by 0xCCBA696: Jan 29 2011, 16:47

Here's the text; looks good to me - I will accept the bounty in a day or so, unless anybody has any objections (i.e. identifies this a a rewrite or a MT work). [PM me in a day or two if I forget]

Thank you for the translation, 0xCCBA696, I hope you'll stick around and do other bounties. Double thank you for doing the credit pages, too.

A note to the editor: please make a credit page, mentioning e-hentai, our bounty system and throw in a translation advert. If sponsors are mentoned, those would be [index.php] Dlaglacz, [index.php] bloodthirster18 and me.

Translation is by pages. Each page is marked with a line of the form "-- page #" where # is the page number in the gallery at https://e-hentai.org/g/21277/2e9680da03/ .

Key:
"text bubbles / dialogue"
*sound effects*
other text



-- page 1
Silent Saturn 5

-- page 2
Silent Saturn V

-- page 3
Index
* Cover Art: Sahara Ikkou
* Back Cover Art: Maki Shuuto

* Manga Maki Shuuto, Sahara Ikkou (7)
* Manga Pee-chan (32)
* Illustration Yonige-ya no Kyou (38)
* Illustration Ume (43)
* Illustration Hanano Miyako (46)
* Illustration Happiness We-ro (50)
* Illustration Sahara Ikkou (54)
* Illustration Toukyou-to (56)
* Illustration Fred Kelly (58)
* Manga Maki Shuuto (59)

My deepest thanks again to everyone who participated this time. - Maki

-- page 4
Hotaru & Chibiusa series (8)
Plot synopsis so far

I escaped... because I was afraid...
I felt that... I was being swallowed up... by the other me within myself...

Before I knew it I had run away from home...

Dialogue Maki Shuuto
Manga Maki Shuuto
Sahara Ikkou

-- page 5
And Chibiusa was the one who gave me shelter at that time...
It was a place that Chibiusa had made into a secret base, inside an underground drainage canal...

"It's my secret base <3"
"In a place like this..."

... however, I couldn't be sure I wouldn't end up hurting Chibiusa...

"Th... this is kinda weird, isn't it..."
"... yeah, I guess so..."

I asked Chibiusa to restrain me.

And so our time alone together began...
It wasn't long at all before the two of us... um... got into a rather strange relationship... Even while being dominated by Chibiusa I felt something akin to peace for the first time in years.

I wished our time together could have continued forever... however...

-- page 6
Hotaru & Chibiusa series ACT.7 Jupiter is targeted

"Jupiter Star Power Make-Up!!"

-- page 7
"Sailor Jupiter!!"
"I'll make you regret your deeds so hard you'll go numb!!"

[Daimon Com-Spider]

"Whoa!!"

-- page 8
"Yaahh!!"

"Dyaah"

"Kya"
*rip*

*grab*

-- page 9
"Teih!!"
*thump*

*crash*

*slide*

"ah!" *constrict*

-- page 10
"Wa-waah!"
"Supreme Thunder!"

"Ugyaaaaahh"

-- page 11
"Hooo"
*sizzle* *sizzle*

"Hm, guess I should let this one down next..."

*slice*

"UAH!"

-- page 12
"Heheheh..."
"kh..."

"Daimon Sisters"
"Righty"
"and Lefter"

"... are you Cyprine's daimons?"

-- page 13
"Indeed"
"They call us 'Twin Series', the strongest daimons!!"
"Compared to us, the 'Com Series' isn't much to write home about"
"Yeah, yeah! They're practically no different from the 'U Series'"
"Heh, and being named Com-whatever because you've got an internal supercomputer? How fuckin' lame is that!?"

"Sh... SHUT UP!!"
"I don't need to hear this shit from a couple of runts who barely even make up one person in total!!"
"What the fuck did you say!?"

"Sparkling Wide..."

-- page 14
"Pressure!!"

*boom*

"eh!?"

"aahh"

"She's still got some fight left in her, eh?"
"Well then, let's be nice and play with her, why don't we"

-- page 15
"Fusion!!"

"I... It can't be... that...!?"
"Uwah"

"S...STOP IT!!"

-- page 16
*screaming*

-- page 17
"How is it? How do you like this custom-made chair? Hmm?"

*spit*

"Don't get cocky!!"

*slap*
"KYAA"

-- page 18
*squeak*
"Noo"

"Nooo, it hurts!!"
"What happened to your high-and-mighty attitude? Eh!!?"

"hah" "hah"

-- page 19
"sob... sob..."

*pull*
"Ow!"

"sob" x3

"... no..."
"... don't... aahhh..."

-- page 20
*aaaahhhh*

-- page 21
"What should we do with her?"
"Well, there's this idea of Viluy's"

"Oho, here it is - it's their communication device"

"Let's call her friends and return her to them"
"Huh?"

"Mako~~"

-- page 22
"Mako~~"

"Mako"
"Mako~~~"
"Heheheh..."

[Ami's apartment]

-- page 23
"It looks like the bleeding's completely stopped..."
"And the wound seems to have closed, for now..."

"So, she's all right, right!?"
"Yes... I think if we keep at it a few more times even the scars should disappear"

(ugh...)

"I hurried over here right in the middle of having sex with Hotaru..."
"... and I forgot to take off Luna P's dick..."
"and seeing Mako naked is making me feel fidgety... no, I shouldn't be thinking like that at a time like this..."

"... but really... she was all torn up... down 'there'... it's like she was put on a medieval torture device..."

"... anyway, this is for the best - I was trying to decide whether we should take her to a doctor... (I'm not sure how I would have explained this to Mako's benefit, anyway...)"

-- page 24
*haaaa*
"But man am I tired... We need to keep doing the treatment for a while, right?"
"Yes... if a powerful enemy appeared right now it could get pretty serious..."

"About that, I get the feeling that this time the enemy is different from the daimons we've seen so far"

"Yeah, it's brutal, unlike that idiot Mimete's daimons!!"
"If only we had a compatriot like Lily..."

"Lily?"
"A long time ago there was this anime called "Rainbow Sentai" about the exploits of a boy and six robots, see"
"One of them was a robot nurse named 'Lily'"

"A ray of light from her fingertips could heal any wound or fix any physical damage"

(ah)

-- page 25
"Well then, everyone be careful, all right?"
"OK, take care of Mako for us"

"I know!"
"At times like this, it's best to do a bit of studying to calm the nerves <3"

(continued on page 59)
*scribble* x6
*awaken*

*scribble* x2

-- page 26
(Kou)

-- page 27
(Maki) Ahem - It seems this series has somehow suddenly reached ACT.7, but there's something major that everyone must have noticed! Oh, yes! Hotaru isn't even showing up, is she... Not to mention that half of this is action scenes, and... I tried to slightly change hair colors, but ended up changing them quite a bit.

(Kou) So, this time I was in charge of Mako, but as a self-styled Ponytail Maniac I have to say I went all out. Of course, one does wonder why one must draw quite so many action scenes in a porn manga...

(Maki) Yeah, there's gonna be even more exciting stuff. "Silbuster" class, even. [note: Silbuster is a manga Sahara Ikkou drew]

(Kou) You're joking...

(Maki) Hey, it's just me old Cerebus Syndrome acting up again...

This is just a daimon I made up. She comes off comparatively seriously, though I bet she's going to encounter more and more puns like "U series" in the future... [note: I don't get the pun, maybe requires some Sailor Moon knowledge]

-- page 28
<- I just wanted to make them mirror-images, but the second one suddenly ended up with this face
[Scissor Thread]

(Kou) If that's where this is going, there porn is going to become a sidenote - isn't that sort of straying from the original purpose of this series?

(Maki) I personally had no complaints with the "S" anime, but since I've got the chance I'm going to take this story all the way to the end. (I wonder how long that will be...)

(Kou) What about "SS" and "Stars"?

(Maki) No, no, I wanna do those too! Hotaru's in 'em! I wanna do an SS which is based on that very fact! I've got the plot all laid out but I think I'd better finish "S" first.

(Kou) Hey, it's bad enough as it is right now - don't you think everyone's going to forget about Sailor Moon at this rate? The world sure does move on quickly.

(Maki) The Sailor Moon copyright holders cracked down on doujin stuff too hard, didn't they! Whereas say, Evangelion doujin stuff is such a free market that even if you want to grow up and move on from it, as long as there's high-quality goods to be had, it's impossible to wash your hands off it... But whatever, I'm going to keep doing Hotaru!!

(Kou) Right.

-- page 29
*rain falling*
"This rain is pretty persistent..."

"It seriously gets you down, doesn't it, Hotaru..."

"Er... well, that aside... Chibiusa..."

[Showers Followed By Clear Skies Pee-chan]

"Why exactly... am I in this state, again?"

-- page 30
"Why, it's because you're a teruterubouzu to make the rain go away!" [note: see wikipedia for a definition of teruterubouzu]
"Keep trying hard to make the rain stop, Hotaru! <3"
"That's terrible..."

"Though... on the other hand..."

"A rain-soaked Hotaru is fine too..."

"... hey"
"The drain pipe's broken! I thought it sounded a bit noisy..."

"It's not fixable until the rain stops, that's for sure..."
"Hmm..."

"Oh, I know just the thing!"
*heartbeat*

-- page 31
"Er... is the thing you were thinking of..."
"Yeah! I was thinking, why don't we let the drain pipe empty into Hotaru, that'll stop the awful racket"

"L...let's stop this, Chibiusa"
"The rain's not going to last that long anyway, and... um..."

"Stop grumbling!"

"Kya"

"How's the position? OK?"
"All right, let's go - heave,"

"ho!"

"ah!"

-- page 32
"Ah... khah...!!"

"Ah... No... Noo..."

"It... it can't go in any more..."
"No... it's going to come out..."

"khh"

"N... noo..."
"Hah"
"No more..."

-- page 33
"A... ahhhaaaaaaa...nn..."

"Uwah... did I overdo it a bit?"
"Hey, Hotaru, are you OK?"

"Oh no! Hotaru!"

-- page 34
"Man, summer's just started and it's already hot enough to make you dehydrated..."
(and the pool was closed, too)

"The time it was raining seems like it couldn't have happened"
"Hotaru, you were too good of a teruterubouzu!"

"... oh yes, it might be thanks to a certain someone's brilliant idea"
"that we're saddled with this suffocating heat..."

"Er... um... Hotaru...?"

"Come, let's offer a sacrifice to bring rain!!"
"Ahhn, I knew it, you're still angry~~"

Fin.

-- page 35

-- page 36

-- page 37

-- page 38

-- page 39
Kokuyoukan High School (Fukuoka)
Matsuoka Chie's [unreadable] is pretty bad

-- page 40
firefly... so faint your light [note: Hotaru's name means "firefly"]
kind light, soft light,
yet, lonely light

firefly... so faint your light...

Ume

-- page 41
Snow is falling
It falls to earth and grows
Silence is falling
It falls to earth and grows
Solitude is falling
It falls to earth and grows

My world, cold, silent, and empty

Snow is falling
It falls to earth and grows and grows...

Ume

-- page 42
"It's completely springtime now, isn't it, Chibiusa? This summer let's go swimming in the ocean together, and in the fall let's go leaf-viewing together, OK? <3"
"OK <3"
And the promise went unfulfilled...

Ume

-- page 43
*sounds of labored breathing*

-- page 44
*sound of a wire being pulled taut*

-- page 45

-- page 46
*juicy sounds*
"Nooo"

-- page 47

-- page 48

-- page 49

-- page 50

-- page 51

-- page 52
"nn..."

-- page 53
*blorp*

-- page 54
*defecating sounds*

-- page 55

-- page 56
*sounds of sleep-breathing* x2

Chapter 8
The pair's time together comes to an end

-- page 57
"mmh..."

"nn-"
*opening sound*

"there we go"

-- page 58
"Hotaru!"
*heartbeat*

"ah..."

"Ch...Chibiusa!!"

-- page 59
"Hotaru~ <3"
(like in Lupin...)
"Hey..."
"W...wait! I'm still not... er... done..."

*dzhf*
"Yaahh"

-- page 60
*squrch* *splrch*

"Ah" x2

"Hotaru, you're so wet, it feels so good..."
"Nooo... you're wrong, that's not what you think it is...."

"Aaaahn"
*defecating sounds*

-- page 61
"N...nooo!"

"Aaagh, I can't stop it..."

"Well, not much to do about it now, is there"

"I'm sorry... I'm trying but I just can't stop it..."

"All righty"

-- page 62
"If we do it like this, no matter how much you let out, your pussy won't get dirty, right?"

"haa" x2

(This is not a bed, it's a sheet laid on the floor. Just for the record.)

-- page 63
"Aaahhh, Chibiusa..."
"haa" x3
"I'm... almost..."

"Me too... almost..."
"Nn... aahn..."
"Hotaru"
"Chibiusa"
"Chibiusa"
"Hotaru"
"UUUUUNNNNHHH"

-- page 64
"AAAAAAAHH"

-- page 65
"Haa" x2

"By the way, Chibiusa"
"Didn't you have some reason you rushed down here?"

"AAAAHH!!"
"I totally forgot!"
*sob sob*

"Hotaru, come with me - Mako got hurt!"
"Eh? But... I can't go out in public like this..."
"Of course, I'd take the ropes off and put your clothes back on you"

"But... I..."
"Hotaru, you seem to have stopped having those fits - I'm sure you'll be fine even if I untie you..."
"... but..."

"Please, Hotaru, help Mako"

(Chibiusa...)

"All right..."

-- page 66
"I haven't been outside like this in so long"
"See? You're cured, I know it!"

"What's that?"

[Ami's apartment, again]

-- page 67
"Kyaa"

"Stop it, Mako..."
"What's wrong!?"

*grab*
*rise*
"NNNOOOOO!! What is that!!?"

-- page 68
"Aahh... ah...."

"Mako I'm sorry!!"
*clang*

"Ah"

"Kya"

-- page 69
*insert*

"nnnNNGGGAAAHH"

(it's hot... huh...? it's pulsating...)
(it hurts... so much... I can't think...)

-- page 70
"Nooo, stop it!!"
*tie* x2
"Come back to your senses!!"

"Nooo"

*twist*

-- page 71
"ah"

*squelch* x2

"aahh"

-- page 72
"No!"
"Nooo"

"Nooooo AAAAAAAAAHHH!"

"ah... aaaahh...."

-- page 73
"Ami~"

"Run away, both of you!!!"

"Hotaru!"
"KYAAA"

-- page 74
"ngaahh"
"Let go of Hotaru!!"

"Kya"

"Noooo"

*kchak*
*startled*
"huh!?"

-- page 75
*tumble*

"Haruka!!?"

That's all for this time.
To be continued next time.

-- page 76
(is this of all things, at least, totally impossible?)

"We~ll now, who~ could the next sex scene guest stars be?"
"Me, Mako, Ami have all done it, looks like we're coming down to the end of the list..."
"The next one is probably somewhere around... you, wouldn't you say...? <3"
"Knock on wood, god dammit!!"

-- page 77
Afterword

Whether under "Thirty Saber Street" or "2D Shooting", this seems to actually be our first new publication outside of Comiket.

Like, we figured that all the usual guest artists have their own circles and all, and if it was at Comiket everybody would be stepping on each other's toes, so we decided on this release date in the hope that we could get a lot of guest art... but as it turns out this period is "Golden Week catch-up" time, or something... so in the end it looks like SCHEME FAILED!

Even so, we've got two new members participating this time. The first is a familiar face from "Saber Land"'s Reader's Corner, Pee-chan! As always, he was at the head of the line. Says he, "I wonder if this mightn't be oriented in the direction your book is aiming?" Well, NO PROBLEM! Our synchronization ratio is 200%!

The other new member is Yonige-ya no Kyou, from the circle "Kuro-iro Nawa Kihei" [note: Black Rope Cavalry]. Many of you who picked up this book out of love for Hotaru are probably familiar with Kyou's name. As a matter of fact, I've been one of Kyou's fans for a while now, so I'm deeply honored that he accepted my request to contribute.

Whoa, looks like I'm running out of space, but I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to Fred Kelly (the only one other than me who's been in all volumes), Hanano Miyako (thanks as always), Ume (Hurricane Poemer again, is it? [note: reference to Hurricane Polymar]), and Master Sahara (please let me complete Amazon Gundam soon), all of whom have been of the greatest help to me. Here's to next time! <3

Maki Shuuto

-- page 78
This time, the back cover's all about "Fly High, Rocket Launch!" [note: seems to be a line from the Patalliro! OP]

*glint*
(hey, hey...)
Mikan [note: sign on the box]

Man, I feel like those readers with good intuition are going to be able to guess what next issue's back cover is going to be... especially because of what the previous issue's was like...

-- page 79
Publication Information

Publication date Heisei year 10, May 10 [note: 1998]
Publishers Maki Shuuto / Sahara Ikkou
Publication Thirty Saber Street
2D Shooting

Contact info 319-12
Ibaraki prefecture, Hitachi city, Kuji ward, 3-18-8
SAHARA IKKOU, c/o Satou Hiroyuki
* do not abbreviate
* seal all mail
(because out in the sticks misdelivery is common)

* Those younger than 18 years of age, please refrain from purchasing this book.
* We will replace books with missing or misordered pages, as stock allows.
* Unauthorized reprinting prohibited

-- page 80

-- END

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This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jan 29 2011, 23:24

First, Thanks to the translator(hope you stick around)

Second, I'll have this done in a couple days(est: tues)

As for a credit page, how about something like this:

Full title(like it would be in the gallery or just SS5)
Sponsors
Translator
Editor
Advertisement mentioning E-hentai(site/forum)+Bounty system
Random special thanks

If anyone would like to make something better, i'm open to ideas

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Jan 30 2011, 02:26

Glad my translation is considered good enough (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) By the way, the post above gets rid of some of the spacing I had in the original text file (like putting the publication info page in columns etc.).

Also, reading through it again I noticed a couple of minor mistakes...

line 216: wound seems -> wounds seem
line 282: there porn -> the porn
Missed the lower sidebar on page 28. Translation: A trio of characters who just might appear eventually - who could they be!?
line 653: Me, Mako, Ami -> Me, Mako, and Ami

Also, what is an "MT work"?

First, Thanks to the translator(hope you stick around)

Full title(like it would be in the gallery or just SS5)

If anyone would like to make something better, i'm open to ideas

Sounds good, I'd suggest using the title from the RAW, should be properly (re)named.

Posted the editing bounty for you at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=3158

Also, what is an "MT work"?

Thanks for taking another look, I've now accepted the bounty.

MT = machine translated

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jan 30 2011, 06:01

Thank the gods someone came along and did this. I was starting to lose hope.