[X] My Assistant

Where's that guy who draws Senpei Octopus? I need my fix.

Where's that guy who draws Senpei Octopus? I need my fix.

Would you like Senpei the octopus more or less if each of his tentacles ended with a phallus?

Zentron and the other artists should arrive soon (in a few days maybe weeks, maybe never)
,at least I've invited them to the party! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/rolleyes.gif)
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This post has been edited by HybridGuardian: Jul 31 2010, 19:28

hmmm im in o.o

^ What's up with the top of her eye?

^ What's up with the top of her eye?

Which one? Or are you reffering to the light effect?

This post has been edited by HybridGuardian: Jul 31 2010, 19:47

Which one?

her left eye

her left eye

Mmmhh, I could down her eyebrow, but it's not common in most manga styles. But maybe I'll kinda merge the upper eyeline with the other on her left eye...mmhhh.



This post has been edited by HybridGuardian: Jul 31 2010, 19:56

Mmmhh, I could down her eyebrow, but it's not common in most manga styles.

No, her left.

No, her left.

Specificly? Please explain what you find disturbing so I can correct it.

The highlight on the open eye is teal. Which looks silly. And is also a lot larger than the iris. Which looks silly.

The highlight on the open eye is teal. Which looks silly. And is also a lot larger than the iris. Which looks silly.

Ahhh, it's the highlight, well I "could" remove it or make it white, I'll have a look at that.

edit: yeah, this will only take about ten minutes, I'll change it.

This post has been edited by HybridGuardian: Jul 31 2010, 20:05

Ten minutes, my ASS! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/dry.gif)
It appears I've been once again a victim of the artist's blindspot syndrom...

Anto, Blade, Radi. Thank you guys sooo much for bringing this to my attention! After deleting those pathetic highlights I've relazied that the eye was completely messed up! I had to redraw it!

Please help me also with my future uploads for the contest. I'll all post them here before I add them to my original submission post!

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Just look at THE DIFFERENCE! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/ohmy.gif)

This post has been edited by HybridGuardian: Jul 31 2010, 22:12

The non-tits are weird and I'd probably nuke the cat paws unless they were turned into just gloves rather than the actual fore-arm. The hair seems far too straw-like and not flowing like hair should. The face is fine, now, but some other details need some work. Then again, this is just my opinion. The cat-like fore-arm is unique, but I just don't care for it.

The hair definitely needs to be fixed, though, and the chest doesn't look right in general. I'm not saying that she needs to have giant tits, but a small breasted woman doesn't really have that much curve when wearing a bikini.

ADDENDUM: Drop the shadow on the inner part of her upper arm and just make a small shadow at the inner elbow coming from the fore-arm so she doesn't look like she's consumed far too much Powerthirst.

This post has been edited by radixius: Jul 31 2010, 23:08

Anto, Blade, Radi. Thank you guys sooo much for bringing this to my attention! After deleting those pathetic highlights I've relazied that the eye was completely messed up! I had to redraw it!

OMG, nooo problem sweetheart!

The non-tits are weird and I'd probably nuke the cat paws unless they were turned into just gloves rather than the actual fore-arm. The hair seems far too straw-like and not flowing like hair should. The face is fine, now, but some other details need some work. Then again, this is just my opinion. The cat-like fore-arm is unique, but I just don't care for it.

Yeah, it's an attempt to chibisize, her body/head ratio is 4. I think I'll keep the overall design, though. And I'll give the hair more "live" in the next picture of her.

The hair definitely needs to be fixed, though, and the chest doesn't look right in general. I'm not saying that she needs to have giant tits, but a small breasted woman doesn't really have that much curve when wearing a bikini.
ADDENDUM: Drop the shadow on the inner part of her upper arm and just make a small shadow at the inner elbow coming from the fore-arm so she doesn't look like she's consumed far too much Powerthirst.

Mmhhh, I'll look into that chest part, before I draw the next pose.But I'll definetly work on the shadowpart for this picture, but then I'll move on.

However, as I am still learning the arts, there are limits on how much I can improve before the contest ends... but I'll definetly work on that! Thanks again! (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

edit: after looking at the original inkwork, I've realized that the problem with the chest is the shoulder/head ratio... basically her chest is too thin... damn, I should have spent more time for the basic design... WTF, as soon as Zentron or Kenshin appears I'll go back to my hentai drawings...maybe I'll just give up...

This post has been edited by HybridGuardian: Aug 1 2010, 01:22

Her left bicep scares me.

No need to be afraid anymore Bunz, I took care of the shading part and fixed the chest. Nothing I could do about the hair, though (this would have required redrawing the entire picture). I'll try to draw better hair next picture. (I've uploaded it to my original post in case you wanna have a look)

It's a marked improvement from the first instance.

I HAS SCANNER POWERS. Not much drawing ability, but scanner powers. :3
I have friends that can draw girls really well, though. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)