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Keep up the good work, looks pretty good.
I was hoping that Guile would yell sonic boom and she could say 'you must have been holding back' as a meta street fighter joke.

thanks for reading my comic. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
i did not know that meta joke... but i will remember that, and sneak it in next time, if Guile appears again...

and of course, M.bison will get his “It was tuesday!” line should he appears (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)

This post has been edited by orgy_cat: Aug 10 2023, 11:57

thanks for reading my comic. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
i did not know that meta joke... but i will remember that, and sneak it in next time, if Guile appears again...

and of course, M.bison will get his “It was tuesday!” line should he appears (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)

The sonic boom special is hold back 2 seconds then forward + punch.


Yeah the M Bison line is great.

The sonic boom special is hold back 2 seconds then forward + punch.
Yeah the M Bison line is great.

oh ok. thanks for the knowledge, Guile was never my character of choice, you seems like a street fighter player.
is there any characters or any stories in the street fighter universe that you wish to see in hentai?

I was actually really impressed with this comic. The pacing is good, we are into the action only after a few pages. The writing is excellent and engaging, probably the strongest skill in your arsenal. You really drew me in, the flow of the story and panel composition is really good. Very engaging once you actually are into reading the comic, which brings us to the weakness.

I think the biggest weakness here is style. Far too realistic for street fighter. I could see two directions here, one is leaning into the more realistic style (one of my favorite western artist your style kinda reminds me of, especially how you draw penetration both oral and vaginal is Ignacio Noe, check out Convent of Hell by him.) but I’m guessing by your choice of characters you are wanting something more like REIQ, Cherry Mouse Street, or some of the other artist that do street fighter hentai. In that case…

REIQ has a YouTube channel that is definitely worth checking out. He has tutorials and timed gesture draw a long sessions I really like.

If you want that perfect street fighter look you’re going to be a little bit more cartoony and that means simplifying the style. Breaking things down into basic shapes and trying to gauge the balance between realism and cartoony. I feel like if you did that a lot of the minor issues I’m finding hard to put into words would iron themselves out.

You want the reader to see the comic and want to read it, not skim past it. Because one you get into the story and the flow of it it’s really good.

Making a comic is an achievement that I’ve yet to accomplish and is commendable in its own right, it’s more than I’ve done thus far. I’m not saying these things because I have achieved the level I’m talking to you about nor have I even achieved your level where you are at now.

But I did want to give a critique that would help and I hope my opinion has given you an insight that will help you get to that next level. That’s what this is about for us artist.

If anything I said doesn’t resonate or offends you in any way please feel free to disregard it. Your comic is very good and I really enjoyed reading it.

I bumped up the average ratings a bit. Donno why people rated it so low tbh. Western style comic isn't exactly my cup of tea, but this is far from being a 1-star work imo.

I bumped up the average ratings a bit. Donno why people rated it so low tbh. Western style comic isn't exactly my cup of tea, but this is far from being a 1-star work imo.

I think it was uploaded as doujinshi instead of western originally so people gave overly negative reviews.

I was actually really impressed with this comic. The pacing is good, we are into the action only after a few pages. The writing is excellent and engaging, probably the strongest skill in your arsenal. You really drew me in, the flow of the story and panel composition is really good. Very engaging once you actually are into reading the comic, which brings us to the weakness.

I think the biggest weakness here is style. Far too realistic for street fighter. I could see two directions here, one is leaning into the more realistic style (one of my favorite western artist your style kinda reminds me of, especially how you draw penetration both oral and vaginal is Ignacio Noe, check out Convent of Hell by him.) but I’m guessing by your choice of characters you are wanting something more like REIQ, Cherry Mouse Street, or some of the other artist that do street fighter hentai. In that case…

REIQ has a YouTube channel that is definitely worth checking out. He has tutorials and timed gesture draw a long sessions I really like.

If you want that perfect street fighter look you’re going to be a little bit more cartoony and that means simplifying the style. Breaking things down into basic shapes and trying to gauge the balance between realism and cartoony. I feel like if you did that a lot of the minor issues I’m finding hard to put into words would iron themselves out.

You want the reader to see the comic and want to read it, not skim past it. Because one you get into the story and the flow of it it’s really good.

Making a comic is an achievement that I’ve yet to accomplish and is commendable in its own right, it’s more than I’ve done thus far. I’m not saying these things because I have achieved the level I’m talking to you about nor have I even achieved your level where you are at now.

But I did want to give a critique that would help and I hope my opinion has given you an insight that will help you get to that next level. That’s what this is about for us artist.

If anything I said doesn’t resonate or offends you in any way please feel free to disregard it. Your comic is very good and I really enjoyed reading it.

Thank you so much for reading my comic.
as for the style, i think is matter of preference and i respect yours too. (I chose this art-style because i was inspired by Shinkiro, so i chose somewhere in the middle), but thank you so much for the feedback, i am very happy that you enjoy my comic

I bumped up the average ratings a bit. Donno why people rated it so low tbh. Western style comic isn't exactly my cup of tea, but this is far from being a 1-star work imo.

Thank you so much for reading my comic and helping me to bump up the rating (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

I think it was uploaded as doujinshi instead of western originally so people gave overly negative reviews.

(IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif) i guess people were offended (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)

pardon my ignorance, but my definition of "Doujinshi"means self-published, which i am NOT working for any studio, so technically i am...
also, i don't know why my style was considered "western" apart from the language (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)
because even for japanese manga there are different artstyle than the typical chibi (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/cry.gif)

This post has been edited by orgy_cat: Aug 17 2023, 12:29

Ah, the western category is based on nationality, not art style

Ah, the western category is based on nationality, not art style

oh ok, thank you so much for the clarification

but wait, i'm from asia

but wait, i'm from asia

By Asia, do you mean any country that is between Bangladesh and the Pacific Ocean and is also between Russia and Australia (non-inclusive)? If so, your gallery belongs to the doujin category.

By Asia, do you mean any country that is between Bangladesh and the Pacific Ocean and is also between Russia and Australia (non-inclusive)? If so, your gallery belongs to the doujin category.

ya... but its ok... as long as i have my readers, i'm happy (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
thanks for the support

A new issue is coming (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
please support

here are the first 2 pages of the new issue...
the story... if you know... you know (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)

please support, thanks

This post has been edited by orgy_cat: Sep 27 2023, 15:00