While the substance of that prose fits perfectly fine with what I was trying to convey, and would not be out of place as it is what the speaker is basically feeling, sans the whimsy and grace, using that rhyme would have been the only tacky part.
While the substance of that prose fits perfectly fine with what I was trying to convey, and would not be out of place as it is what the speaker is basically feeling, sans the whimsy and grace, using that rhyme would have been the only tacky part.
Why doesn't that seem like a regular radixius post?