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> [Kumakumadou] Pochi Neezu Tanetsuke, Am I in need of some Healing? (Proof-reading)

 
post Oct 21 2018, 09:26
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Hello again fellas. I'm at it again...


Currently translating this, but would like to some help to make it more readable... unless I've managed to make it work (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/ohmy.gif)
If anything, I definitely know that I have mixed past and present tense. I believe the text within the white boxes (at least for the main character) are meant to be past tense.
https://e-hentai.org/g/516982/f3c6522760/
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Currently done:
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Part 001 to 005:
https://imgur.com/a/yMe31gl
(18 pages)
(Updated 2018-10-18)

Part 005 to 010:
https://imgur.com/a/dtWwYxS
(14 pages)
(Updated 2018-10-21)

Part 011 to 014
https://imgur.com/a/Y20ikON
(14 pages)
(Updated 2018-10-23)


If someone could help me before I upload it to E-H, I would be grateful (Donations will be given if requested)

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post Oct 23 2018, 07:30
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I've now completed the set. I will wait to upload it until I've tried to read it once or twice, and maybe get any inputs from others
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