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post Oct 28 2020, 15:38
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-- Chapter 7 --
121.
:<screech

>Waaah…

>How nice.

122.
^Several days after that time,
>So,
>Please go out with me with the goal of marriage in mind.

^I was invited on a date by Yōji-san…
@Yōji-san
@Yo
@Let's go on a drive next Sunday. Where do you wanna go?

*Hhmmm… I'd like to go on a temple trip, but I guess Yōji wouldn't like that…
*I want to see Ushiku Daibutsu. But also the Yakushi-ji (East Kantō) Branch Temple. And I'd like to go to Cape Inubō too.

^So in the end we went to the beach.
>We're already at the end of the season, so there are not many people around.
>Yeah, it'll be nice.

123.
>……
>……

~Ehm…
~You mean I should…
~I can't do that…

>Oh… I see.
\Well, if you don't want to, Mei…
>Too bad…

>You looked all excited for this, but I guess you're the type of person to cancel out at the last minute...
\This type of thing can affect how you're seen in the future you know.
<I get it, I get it already!!
<You're exaggerating anyway.
\I'll do it!

124.
>It's… so embarrassing~
>This was a great decision.
*Yes yes

>I'm gonna rent a swim ring.
>Ah… wait…
<Don't leave me alone…

125.
*Ohh
*What a sight…

:stare
:stare
<Arghhh
<Come back already!~~~
:stare
:stare

126.
>Hey sister, where'd you come from?
>You're cute.
<Eh
\eh
>Let's have fun together.
>Maybe I should wait for a moment.
#alt: maybe I should take a bit more time

>Meh… You were probably hiding somewhere and watching me.
#meant in a bad way, as in stalking, not protecting
*You took too much time.
>How… could I…

127.
*Phew

>But now that we're a bit further away from the shore I can finally relax.
#lit: …I'm finally calming down.

>By the way, how's it working out for Chief Yanagimoto and Yoshimura-san?
>Ah…
>Ahh…
\Shall I tell you the story?

<What!!
\Yoshimura-san got pregnant⁉
>Seems like it.
\Yoshimura is trying to convince her everyday to get an abortion…

>Divorce your wife and marry me.
*I've become pregnant, hehehehe
>But it seems she isn't giving in…

128.
*She didn't seem like such a bold girl…
~I wouldn't have guessed…
*My name is Ikuko Yoshimura. Thanks for yesterday…
*I wonder what she's thinking…

>Mh?

:<poke (x2)

~Hey, Yōji-san,
~you can't…
~Not at this place…

129.
>The people around us can't see it.
#…I tell you.
<B… But…

:<shove

<Hahhm♥

<……
>?

130.
~This is too much…
~My voice is leaking…

:whistling
>He's ignoring me…

:<smack (x3)

:<thud (x3)

~Mgh…
~Gh…
~Uh…

*Ah
*I'm cumming…

131.
<Hiiihm…

:<spurt (x3)

:<plop (x2)

132.
>This place is nice, nobody will see us here.

>I was so nervous all the time.
\I think it might have been easier to walk around completely naked.

>Oh… good call.
>Then get undressed.
~That's not how I meant it…

>Come on, strip, strip!
>Strip
>Strip
~Hmmgh~~~ I'm getting angry.
*Is this some kind of mid-life idiocy?
#things you do in midlife

133.
<Cut it out.
<You want me to strip,
\then what about this.

>She…
\she's getting bold when there are no people around…

>This is unfair, you have to strip too, Yōji!!
>Ah

>Oh, what do we have here~?
:>poke (x2)
>You only stripped and it became like this~?

0134.
:>lick (x2)
#a long lick I guess
##れろん??

:~spurt

~Mgh♥(x3)
:>squeeze (x2)

<Ahgh…

<Ahhmmm♥

135.
~Ah…mh♥
:gulp
~Haaaa…

>Yōji-san

>You're not…
\done yet, right?♥
#alt: you can still go/continue, right?
:~drool…

<O… Of course!

136.
<Ahm♥
<Ahhm♥
<Hih♥

:<smack (x2)

~Hia♥
~Yah
<Ahm
\Ahm
~Cumming… I'm cumming…

:<spurt (x2)
<I too…

137.
~Ah♥
~Hii♥
~Aaaaaaaahm

:<shake (x2)

>Mei…
\I guess we should head back.
>Yeah… right.

138.
:Wooosh
<Wah
<So windy.
#alt: what a wind, such a wind

:wooh
:flatter flatter
>swim suits

:pling

>Beach
>Sea
>Rocky area
>Parking spot
>Forest

:rustle rustle

-- Chapter 8 --
141.
~This is my end…

~I'll die if my relationship with Ikuko reaches my wife and the company…
>Hey hey
>Don't hang yourself, Yanagimoto.
#don't be troubled
#lit: don't say troubled/dangerous things

>You're trying to convince her everyday, right?
\She must give in before long.

<Hirooka, you bastard.
\You're giving answers as if you're completely unconcerned with other people's problems.
#alt: You have the nerve to speak as if it's of no concern to you.
#lit: Thinking it's other people's problems, you have the nerve to give proper answers

142.
>She's fucking scary!
>Did you already speak to your wife?
>You know, I want to announce it inside the company as soon as possible.
>When will the divorce take place?
\I want you to meet my parents soon.
>I've already decided on a name for the child.
\If it's a boy…

~That sounds scary indeed…
:gulp

<Right?
\She isn't listening to a word I say.
#lit: we're discussing without reaching an agreement

143.
>And divorce isn't really an option?
<Of course not!!
<You should know that.

>My wife is a distant relative of the boss…
\He was cherishing my wife since she was a child.

>I can't even imagine what would happen if this came out.
\The divorce would be the least of my troubles…
#lit: speaking about the divorce…
>That's why I told you
\to stop the adultery…

<I fucking know that!
<Enough of that preaching!
<Tell me a way how I get out of this!

~How am I supposed to know…

144.
<I guess it was a mistake to ask you for advice.
*God damn it
<You're a damn bachelor with a young big titted girl who you can fuck non-stop.
\Of course you can't understand the troubles I'm going through.
>Ah… well… maybe I can't…

~But… What I know is that in the end all things can be solved with…
>Money?

>I suppose…

145.
>What is this
>supposed to be?
#The text is juts "What is" + "this". But it doesn't split nicely in English.

>five million yen.
#T/L ~ 45K USD

>Please let this settle the terms between us two.
>Please abort the child.

>You want to solve this…
\with money?…

<I'm sorry…

146.
>I understand.

<R… Really?…

<!!

>Undress and lick them.
>Eh…

>Actually, this will still not be enough for me to calm my mood,

:<press
>but at least I'll have a small revenge.

147.
<O… Of course. I'll do anything.
:<lick

:<slop
:<slurp
:<lick
:\lick
<Ah
<Mhh

>Come…
>Chief Yanagimoto…

>Lick this too…

~Ah… Aahh…

148.
<Ahm…
<Ah…
\Ah…
:<suck (x2)
:<slurp
:<shlorp (x2)

<Ahkh…

:<splash (x3)
<Wah…

149.
>I'm so sorry. I gushed a lot.
*Ahahaha…
:<drip (x3)
~No problem…

>Huh?

>What happened to you?
\It got erect for some reason.
:<twitch twitch

:~Eh… that is…

:<squeeze

<Ah

150.
>Come on, answer me, Chief.
<Ah
<Khu
<Ah
<Ah

>It's getting more and more stiff…
\Are you all right⁉
:<knead (x4)

~I… want to stick it in.
:mumble…
>What⁉

<I want to…
\stick it inside you!

>Heee~? Didn't you even go so far to give me money to get away from me?
~That is… something different…

<I… beg you.
<A last time please!!

151.
>Hm…

>You really want it so desperately?
~Aa… Aaa…
\Ikuko…

152.
~Ah… Ehm…

~What is this supposed to mean…⁉
:<creak (x2)
#the sfx describes the creaking sound of wood or a bed

>You want to stick it inside me, right?
>I let you do it.

>But…

>I'll be the only one who moves…
:>slide

153.
>Ah…
>Ahaaa…
:>shlop (x3)

<Ghu…

>How does it feel? Usually you're the one who rapes me to his heart's content…
>What is it like to be helpless and getting raped…
#lit: have your freedom removed and getting raped
>Ugh…

~Please untie me.
>No way.

154.
>I can't let it be that you throw me away only to freely have sex with me again!
:<thrust (x3)

:<thud (x3)

<Ugghh… I'm… cumming…

:<pour (x3)

155.
>Chief…
*Haa
*Haa
>I was in your care until now,

>but…
*Eh…

>I don't need this… so I'll return it.
:<drool
<Wait…

<Waaaaahhh

156.
@Employee cafeteria
>And that is how it went…

~It's completely over now…

~W-Well… that's good, right?
>Aahh…

~But I can't get it out of my head…
~The sex I had with Ikuko that day…
~I felt like I was actually a total masochist...

~Well, I wish you two best luck…
*Bye…

<Women can be scary…

>……
>……

157.
>Ah
>Hii
>So good…

~Ah… cumming
\cumming
~Aahm
~Yam
~Ah
~Hi
~I'm cumminnn
\nnng
:<spurt (x3)

158.
>Thanks for getting the money, Ikuko.
>Of course
\It's to make you the number one, Kiyoto.

>Do you think everything's all right with that uncle from your company.
>What an idiot he is
*Hehehehe… #I guess
>I told him a fat lie that I'm pregnant and he didn't even want to see proof.

>Yeah
>You're just as stupid to supply a gigolo with your money.

>Well… I think I got him hooked up to a new play, so the next time I plan to have him pay me 100k for one time.
#T/L: 900 USD

>You're a scary woman.
>Right I am.
\Don't dare to cross me, Kiyoto.
>Hahaha…

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-- Chapter 9 --
159.
<Ah
<Ahm
<Hia

<Mh
<Ah

<Hiih♥
<Ahh♥
<Ahm♥
\Ha♥
<Haa♥
\Aaah♥
<Mha♥

:<shove (x3)

<Khu…
<Cumming…

160.
<Aaahh♥
<Hi♥
<Ahm♥
<Ah♥
<Mh♥
<I'm cumming too♥
:<spurt (x3)

:<drool (x2)

<Aaah… Your cum is so warm~.
>Haa
>Haa

161.
<Hey, why are you already dressing up?
>Sorry~

>My father has something he wants to talk about with me today, so he told me to come back early…

>You're listening to your father, that's unusual.
>He said he'd treat me to a steak.
>I see.

*Meh
>When will we meet the next time?

>Mmmh~… I'll contact you.

>You always say that.
\Think about how I’m always waiting.
#stand in my waiting shoes

~You know that we're not really going out.
>Well, then let's do it!
>Ah… that's actually a great idea.
<IT'S NOT!!

162.
>I'm home.

>Huh?
\I'm home!

>Dad?…

>What is this…
\Didn't he say to meet at five?

163.
>I should have gone for a round two…

>……

>I had a lot of expenses this month.

>Let's get some additional allowance…
:>slide…

164.
~Uhm… I looked through all of this and there's only 1000 Yen…?
T/L: ~10 USD

>I'm back.
<!!

<Sh… Shit
<Did he have to come back just now.

<Let's hide in the closet.

~Phew, am I safe here…?

:>stare

<Huh⁉

165.
<That girl…
>I want to see Kenta-kun again.
>He's probably still playing somewhere.
<Isn't that the girl I did before!!

<What the hell is happening here…

>I'm exhausted

<Maybe they were acquaintances in the beginning…?

166.
~Wha… Hey, what are they doing there.
#lit: starting

~Huh? I don't get it.
\Why are they doing it together?

~Let me sort this out…
~Certainly, that girl…

~was a virgin when I did her.
\So she must have started doing it with my dad in the last few months…
:<suck (x2)
>Ahm♥
>Mhh♥

167.
>No way… Was she really a virgin at that time…?
>Anyway, her tits a great as ever…

:>swell (x2)

>Shit… I got a boner.
:~swell swell

>Wow
\It got so lively.

>Dad…
>Did I… lose to him…

168.
:>suck
:>kiss
>Mgh…

:<slide
:>gulp
:\gulp
:<slurp

<Mh♥ (x3)

>She wasn't so skilled when we did it…
>I'll rub one out.

:<grab

~Her pussy is already totally wet…
*And it's in full view from here…
:<smack (x3) #"smacking kiss"

169.
~Ah~… I want to drill that pussy.
:<spurt (x2)

>I'm gonna stick it in, Mei.

:<smack (x3)
~Mh♥
<Aaaaaahhh♥
<Hia♥
<Ah♥
<Ah♥

:<drool (x2)

170.
<Ahi♥
<Hya♥
<Ah♥
\Ah♥
<Ahuu♥
<Ahm♥
:<plunge (x3)

:<rub (x3)

<Aahh, Mei, I'm cumming.

<Yes
\I want to drink it!
\All of your cum!

171.
:<splat (x2)
<Amu♥
<Hi♥
<Mha♥
<Mghu♥
<Haaam♥

>Aha… wow…
>Ah♥
>So tasty… #slurred
>Mhgh♥

>That bitch…
>When we did it she didn't even give cleaning head~…

172.
>This is so frustrating…

~It still didn't calm down…
:<poke
>For real.
\It's still young.

>Okay, stick out your ass!
<Eek

<I have to cherish this part too!
<Ahi…
<Ah
:<plop #no idea
:<slide #no idea
<Aaaahh…
~So… sudden…

173.
<No way, even anal…
\Even I don't even anal experience.
>How did he teach her this.

:<plunge (x3)

<Hiiih♥
<Hya♥
<Ahi♥
<Ah♥
<Ah♥

:<thrust (x3)

174.
:<glup (x3)
:<spurt (x3)
<Aaaaahhh…
<Mhhh…♥
<Ahi♥
<Au♥

:<twitch (x3)
:<drool…

>Haa (x3)

175.
:<gasp (x2)
:<twitch
>Ahu
>Ah…
>Uuh
:<twitch
<Enough…
:<twitch

<I'm cumming too.

<Phew…
:>rattle #?

<Waah

>Ah
<Eeeekk

176.
~K… Kenta-kun
>What the hell are you doing in the closet?

>No… I'm…
>Ehm…
*Awawa #sound being flustered

<And what about you, what are you doing to that girl!!

>Ah
>We're going to get married.
<Whaaat⁉

-- Last Chapter --
177.
<Ahm…
<Yah…
<Ah
<So good.
<Aahh…

<Hyaam
:<shove (x3)
<Ahm
<Ahm

<Ah shit, I'm cumming already.

<I'm cumming too…
<Ah
<Hih…
<Cumming!!

178.
<Ahkhuuu…
:<pour (x3)
<Ahi…
<Ahh…

:<thud
:<spurt

>Ahm

179.
>Huu~…

>Hey, Leona,
>Yeah?

>I was always took fucking lots girls for granted.
\But my way of thinking has changed.
>I love you.
\Please go out with me.

>Ke…Kenta…

>Let's be happy together.

180.
>I have to refuse.
>Yes, yes, I thought you would say so…
<Whaaat⁉

~No~ I must have had a hallucination, I just thought I heard you refuse me.
~But not me, right? I'm Kenta Hirooka, right?
\The boy so handsome, everybody at university knows me.
\You can't have said that being serious, right?
\What a mean joke that is, seriously…
*Hahaha…

>I'm refusing you!
<Ah ah, I can't hear you, can't hear you.
#lalala
*Aahh
*Waaahh
*Gyaa

>To be honest…
*Haa #sigh
>I can't deny that you are handsome, Kenta.

181.
>But that doesn't make me want to go out with you.
#lit: but going out is a different story

<Correct!!
<Wah… Hi-…Hinako…
*Why are you inside the closet…

<Did you really think we would say yes when you use girls like things that you can simply swap whenever you like?

~But… I didn't…

<I think so too.
~Saki is here too?

>At first I wanted to go out with you,
\but when I saw that you stick your dick into every woman…

182.
>You're only good as a sex friend.
#lit a continuation of last bubble: …I came to think that you're only good as a sex friend
>Yeah
>That's how it is.
<……

>Don't think bad of us, Kenta.
>You can still have sex with us…

~Meh…

183.
>In the end…
>All the playing around I did came back to hit me in the ass…

>They plotted against me together…
>Even Saki, who I thought was a save choice…

>Even if I find a new girl, what if it turns out like these three…?

^Yes… I, Kenta Hirooka…
^am currently desperately trying to find a single girl to fall in love with.
#single as in one, not as in not married
#lit: succumbed to an action to desperately love a single girl

>I'm home.

^And the reason is this.

184.
>Welcome home, Kenta.
\I have some afternoon refreshments, so wash your hands.
^It's this girl's fault.
\Mei Chigasaki, 26 years old, last year I took her virginity.

^But for whatever reason she got married and pregnant with my father who's about 30 years older than her.
#this sounds strange, right?
^These two look like they could explode with happiness.
#are ultra happy
\So naturally I got envious.

185.
<I'm home, Yuriko!!
<Hey… that's dangerous.

>We also don't know yet if it's a girl of boy.

<No! It's a girl!
<I know that!

>Yōji-san said the same thing…
>I can see how you're related.

*Hmmm…

<Eeek

186.
<YOU…

<Don't get carried away!!
<Ouch

>By the way, Kenta,
\try to call me “Mother”.
<What…

<Fuck you! #whatever swear
\No way I will.
>Hey, where are you going. What about the food?

<I'm going to the bookstore at the station.

>Meh
>He's not being honest.
#with his feelings

187.
>What happened?
>Ah… Yōji-san.
\I just tried to make Kenta call me Mother.
>But he got angry and left.

>That should be difficult.
>His mother died soon after she gave birth to him,
\so Kenta has never called anybody “Mother” in his life.
\I guess it's very embarrassing for him. #to call you Mother

<I'm burning with passion.
<I'll make him say it for sure.

>Huhu… Such spirit.
:>kiss

<Hey

>You're certainly father and son~
>Heh…? How come?

188.
>Hehe… this is embarrassing.
\I can't get used to the fact that my belly stands out so much…

>You must hate it too, Yōji-san.
\I guess you can't get it up when you see such an unsexy naked body…

<Ri- What!!
:<stiff #hard as rock

189.
~I guess I must have a thing…
\for pregnant women.

~I'm getting super turned on when I see your unbalanced belly that looks like it could explode at any time.
*Whaaa…

<You…
<extreme pervert!
>Ehehe…

>Mh…
>Mhm…
>Mhgh…

>Ahm…
>Mh…

:<slurp (x2)

190.
~Sorry that we can't do it raw.

>If we did it without a condom bacteria could enter the womb and that could be a disaster.
T/L: Nonsense! “During pregnancy, the fetus is protected from sexual thrusting and unwanted semen by the amniotic fluid in the womb and by the cervical mucus plug in the woman's cervix, which forms shortly after conception.”

>Also, if we want to do it raw, we still can have anal sex.
>Well, that's true…

>But this is the only position I can do…
*Because of this belly…

191.
:>slide
:>gape

~Ah…
~Haaa…Mhhh…

>Don't move too violently, Mei.
~Ah
:>jiggle (x3)
~Ahu
~Hi
~Ah
>Y… Yeah…

192.
~Ah♥
~Ahu♥
~Khum♥
~So good

~Ahmm~
~Getting poked a lot by Papa…

~The baby is happy too.
~Ah♥
~Aaah♥

~Aahh, I'm cumming!!

<I… too…

193.
~Hiaaaam…♥
~Ahu♥
~Mhh♥
:<spurt (x3)

~Wow, you filled it all up.

<Ah,
\let me have it please.
<Papa's semen.

194.
>Papa's semen, so tasty…
>Mh…
>Agh…

>I'm home.
<Oh, Kenta's already back.

>Ah~…
>I'm hungry…

<You morons! Are you having sex again!!
>Ah… ehm…
<Stop it or I'll rape you.
<Kenta, don't speak that way with your mother.
<You're not my mother!!

Feti Rarecco - The End

195.
Finish♥


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post Dec 30 2020, 22:10
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Script for: https://e-hentai.org/g/983875/e932e78e0c/
Proofread by Hprobot2

Shinobu Piss by Kemokomoya

003.
^I deeply apologize for the sudden start and lack of context, these are the moments of my first experience.
~Mh…
~Mmmh~

>Phua
\I did it, Araragi-kun, I made a perfectly fine throbbing dick.
>You…

>What? Even after we deduct the minus points for the owner being Araragi-kun, it's still astonishing what a perfectly manly male genitalia this is, absolutely praiseworthy.
>…I'm so happy #probably sarcastic
^I pretended to be calm, but at that time, I actually was very worried about what would happen next.

004.
^The reason therefore is,
\that at that time, I had started to hold my masturbation ceremonies in the bathroom,
>What?
>Shall I pee here?
>…Why does it look like your thingy is swelling?
^and by a strange coincidence, I had started to get excited by “pee”.

^As this continued,
:>twitch #PR note: For editor - "ひくん♥" Tiny BuBo below Shinobu's anus (2nd FrPa - Bottom right).

>You're a strange one, getting excited from seeing people doing their deed…
^I finally realized…

005.
>Hey! I'm really at a loss with you. You can't even come to a climax anymore without being peed on.
^That I couldn't ejaculate anymore without being peed on.
^So how was I supposed to get our first experience to a pleasant ending??

006.
>Araragi-kun?

>Aahh… My bad.

>You know… if you don't want to, I'm fine without it.

>Wait a moment, what are you talking about?
>Well, it was me who made you take battle stance by putting your dick into my mouth without any warning.
\And asking for something in return is weird on its own anyway.
>That is not how it is, this is something I want to do.
>What?
>………Performing oral…
>Ah, you mean cunnilingus?
>……

>Mh… Araragi-kun…
>Ah
>Yes, this feels good, Araragi-kun…
>Mh
>Aaah

007.
>Well, I'm putting it in…
>Yes,
\come to me, Araragi-kun.

>Mh…
<Aahh #PR note: For editor - "...っああツ" BuBo (2nd-3rd FrPa - Middle top).

>Senjougahara… Are you all right?
>It hurts. So much that I want to kick you away, Araragi-kun.
\But it's fine. I'm happy even though it hurts.
>Ha… #PR note: For editor - "はっ..." Small BuBo (3rd FrPa - Above Hitagi's breasts).
>Because this, the pain and the happiness…
\is what I'm receiving from you.
:>squee
:\squeeze
<Ah
>Ahh, Araragi-kun, you're doing good… for a virgin.
#alt: Even though it's a virgin's work.
<You just had to spoil the mood!

<…Well, then I have to say something that destroys the mood completely…

>What? I thought it was your virginity that finally got destroyed, Araragi-kun.
>Ehm,
\I want you to pee.

008.
>So this is how it is… Our shared experience, the first time we have sex and what does he request? Urination play! My god, this shows how perverted Araragi-kun is. Well, I didn't exclude this as a possible outcome, but if only Araragi-kun would have at least a faint feeling of common sense then, he would've waited with such a request until later. I was foolish for hoping so.
>And? May I ask why you request such a thing?
>To be honest… I can't cum unless I'm peed on.
>Haha, to think you can't cum without being peed on… Both your fetish and your dick, are really beyond my imagination.
#lit: you're owning a fetish and dick I couldn't imagine.
>…My dick isn't that special…
>Oha, you're being modest about your super size, that doesn't suit you, huge-cock-Aragi.
#word play, she substitutes the first kanji in his name for large penis

<Don't misspeak other people's names in a bad way! I hope my real cock doesn't crush your reality.
#suffer by the gap to reality
<Ah♥
>…I want to skip explaining a lengthy backstory, so just accept it as a personal fetish I ended up with.
\Nothing more, nothing less.
>You mean, you love pee, you get excited only by pee and if you don't get peed on by a girl then, even sex won't mean anything to you, did I get that right?

009.
>You misjudge me. Yes, I do love pee,
\but I don't get turned on by everybody's pee.

>Senjougahara, you're the first and only girl I want to stick my cock into.
>Damn… You're speaking like a complete pervert, but you still sound so cool.
\Maybe I should pee after all.

>Hehe
\Fine, Araragi-kun, I will do this for the pervert that you really are, I will pee on you.
~Mh
~Ah
>It will be my special privilege to be the only one who pees on you, Araragi-kun.
~Ah

010.
~Hhm, hrmph…
>What's up? Does it hurt?

>I'm just preparing to pee, because premature ejaculator Araragi-kun probably wants to cum any time soon.
<Hey, I'm not that quick!
~Ha (x3) #PR note: For editor - "はっ | はっ | は" Small BuBo (2nd FrPa).
~Ah… #PR note: For editor - "あ..." Small BuBo (2nd FrPa).
>When you think about it, it's easy to do it on the toilet, but it's difficult to get it out in this situation.
~Ah (x2)
~Mhh…
>Can't you be a good role model for me and let a bit of pee out yourself?

~Ah
~Mh
>Ah… I'm in the middle of something else, I can't pee right now…
~Ah
>Is that so? Then continue with that.
\…Maybe you could do a bit more?
~Ah ah
~Hua

011.
<Aaah♥♥
<Ha Aaah
<Ah aaah Araragi-kun! #PR note: For editor - Middle top BuBo (Right (our) of Hitagi's head & Above her left breast).
*Ha (x2)
<Ah
:>shake #PR note: For editor - "ひくん♥" Small BuBo near Hitagi's vagina & Araragi-kun's penis.
:\shake♥ #muscle contraction

<Ah… It's starting to leak, it's coming, Araragi-kun!
<Aaah… Senjougahara…!
<It's coming out, Araragi-kun. Cum with my pee. Cum on!
:>shake
:\shake♥ #muscle contraction
<Senjougahara, I'm cumming too!
<Yes, I'm cumming, Araragi-kun, I'm cumming!

012.
<Ah♥
<Aah♥
<Araragi-kun♥♥
<~~~~♥
<Ah
<Mh

013.
<Senjougahara… How do I say this? I know I shouldn't say this now that we've finished…
\I'm sorry that I requested you to fulfil my sexual fetish on our first experience.
>I told you before, didn't I? It's fine, as long as it's you.
\At least that is what I want to say, but actually…
<Mh?
>It's not like you changed my mind or anything, but if I end up getting used to this pee play,
\and turn out like you… that I always need to pee to come to a climax…
>I wonder… Araragi-kun. If that happens…

>Will you take responsibility?
<Aaah… Of course.
>Alright, then I'll continue to pee on you from now on.
>And you know… You're not allowed to cum with another girl's pee.

014.
^The evening of the same day
>Mmph, you…
\Mhm mhh mmmhhmph! #probably showing anger

>What's up with you, Shinobu, suddenly coming out?
>You said to me the other day that I'm the only one you can ask to pee on you.
\But do you remember what you said to that tsundere girl when you had sex with her?

>You told her she's the only one whose pee you get excited with.
#lit: You said: “But I don't get turned on by everybody's pee”.
\So I don't really count for you.
#\Certainly, I'm only such an everybody.
>Here I was so happy, that I opened a new door of sexual desire for you. I've been such a fool.
#the literal translations of the Japanese are too weak in English to convey her feelings, that's why I adjusted a bit.

<That's what you've been thinking?
>Well, I have a big heart, I could come to forgive you somehow.
#lit: forgive you your actions

^And here she was, extremely jealous a moment ago…
>I get it, I get it. I do whatever you want. How about treating you to some donuts, would you like that?
>You're dead wrong if you think you can buy me up with just some donuts.

015.
>“Just some donuts” is a bit harsh, after all, Mister Donut is a spirit greater than me who I have to yield to.
\He has such a strong presence and cannot be ignored.
>…So, what am I supposed to do?

>I'm longing for deep affection right now.
>To speak simply…
\I'm longing for a kiss.
#she uses an old term for kiss
>A kiss?
#that's why he's repeating it

>But it's up to me to decide where.

>And the place I desire…
>is here.
>⁉

>I don't mind if you want to be faithful to that tsundere girl when it comes to vaginal stimulation.
>But to whom will you be faithful when it comes to anal stimulation?
>Shinobu…

016.
>I get it…

<Mh

>Ah
\Aaahh

<Hia
:>stain

<Ya
\Ah
>Ahm
>Ah ah
>You…

017.
<Ah
:>plop♥
<Uaah

>Hey, you even put two fingers inside.
\Mh
:>sh shake #muscle contraction
>But your hole seems to be a bit loose.
#is untied so much
~Ha (x2)
>No comment… Absolutely no comment.
#alt: don't speak of it

>Well then… Shall we?
~Ha (x3)
>You…

018.
>I'm putting it in…

<Nhhh…

<Ahaaaaaan!
\You're going… inside me…
>Incredible… you're insides are wrapping me…
<Is that so…
>Shinobu… I'm going to move…
<Nhnhhh
\Yeah!
>It's good, it feels good…
~Ha…
~Ha
~Ah♥

019.
<Aaahh
:>slide
:\slide
<Ah…
<Ahm
>This is incredible, Shinobu. Nearly too much…

<Mh!
>You know… It's because we're happy♥
~Ha…
~Ha
>………Shinobu!!

>Yes, there~
\Aaah
~Ahm
~Ah #PR note: For editor - "あっ" Tiny BuBo below Shinobu's left nipple & above her left ear (3rd FrPa - Bottom middle).
>So… rough…
<Mh
\Mhaa

020.
<By the way… you're telling me when you want to cum?
>Mh?
*Hah… #PR note: For editor - "はっ..." Tiny SFX on Shinobu's left shoulder (1st FrPa - Top right).
<Is it getting painful for you? I can always pee on you.
*Hah♥ #PR note: For editor - "はっ♥" Tiny SFX left (our) of Shinobu's right hand (1st FrPa - Middle top).
<Not really…

<I want you to cum without restraint, and I want you to cum inside me.
>Shinobu…
~Ha…
~Ha…♥
<Don't worry about it. My pee exists to be poured on you.

>Shinobu…
\Shinobu!
<Ah ah
<You,
\You!

021.
>You…
>Yes…
\So good.

>More…
\More…
<Ah Aaah
\Hih aah
>Ahh… Shinobu…

<Shinobu
<Ah
\Ah ah♥
<Youuuu♥♥
<Cumming
\I'm cumming.

22.
<Hi… aahh
\Ah
\ah
<Ahh #PR note: For editor - "おあツ" BuBo above Shinobu's right breast (1st FrPa - Top left).

<Ahhhh♥♥

023.
>Aahh…♥
\Aahh♥♥
~Ha~~♥ (x3)
<Aahh…♥

024.
~Ha (x2)
>…We really did it.
\It's alright, because it felt good♪
<Shinobu……

^At the very same time
<Mmm
\I have a hunch that Araragi-kun ejaculated with another girl's pee!

025.
■Afterword

Hello, I'm Komori Kei. Thank you for choosing this book this time!

“I want to get showered [in pee]”

Could Araragi-kun say this phrase in a cool way?

I drew this doujin thinking about that.

I'm writing lots of messages on Twitter, so please follow me.

Well then~

Komori Kei (Kemokomoya)
2013-08-11

■Special Thanks
Harukichi (traveling with the speed of sound)

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001.
The Days of "F"
Vol.1
by GT Wanko

002.
Afterword...49

004.
>Fhuu…

>♪
:>ding dong
@Hasegawa

>Hi
>Yo

005.
>End of September and it's still so hot.

>Mh…

>Hey, didn't we plan to study for the test today?
>Yeah, we can do that later.

006.
>Mh…
>Ah…

^This is me, Mika.

^And this girl is Mako.
^You can say we're very intimate friends…

>Ah… no.

>See, it's gotten so stiff already.
*Cute
>No wonder…

007.
>See, your dick is throbbing, Mika.
:>throb throb

>Ah, Mako.

^As you can see,
>Ah
^I'm a girl, but I have a dick.
>Yeah…
>No…oh
>Amh

<Ah
<No, don't you rub it so hard,
^And when I consulted with my best friend Mako, she got totally absorbed with it…
<No
<Mha
<Kh
<or I will cum.
<Kha

<Mako, I'm cumming.
<Ah ah
<Ih
>Show me how you cum.

008.
<Ah

<Mako, no…
<My semen…

<are cumming out!!

>Hehe, as always. The first time it's a huge load.

>Haa (x4)

>You're so cute, Mika…

009.
>Sorry to interrupt, but weren't we supposed to study for the test…?
#alt: Excuse me for saying something unrelated, but what about learning for the test…?
>L a t e r.

>You see who wet my pussy got, don't you?
#justification for her answer, can't study because pussy is wet

>Ahm
>Ah
>Ah
>Look, Mika.

>It got like this when I caressed your dick.
>I can't wait anymore.

>Come
>Ah
>Ah
>…

>Come on
>It's still stiff like this.
>Ahm

010.
<Aahh finally,
<Mika's dick is inside me. #bottom
<Push it all the way in.

<Mi… Mika, h-how is my pussy?
>Ha
<Ah
<Nha
<Ah……

<Your pussy is so warm.
<Oh
<Ah
<It's like my dick's melting…
<No
<Ah

<More
<Aahh
<Thrust in me! As deep as you can!
<Ah
<Ah, I'm hitting the back… Wow… Ah!
<Mha
<Khuu #bottom right
<Your pussy is so hot.

011.
<Ah
<Mika, I'm cumming! I'm cumming!
<Ah
<Ah

<Mha

<Whoo
<Me too
<Ah! I'm cumming. I'm letting it all out!
<Cum inside! #bottom right
<Mha

<Cumming!!
<Cumming

012.
>Haa (x3)
>Ahm

>And now I want to drink your semen.
*Se-men♥
~Wait, I just came…

>What do you mean?
>Usually you're cumming even more.
>Ah…
>No…

>Ah
>Mako, you're so skilled.
>Ah

<I just came, but still…
<It feels amazing.

013.
>Hehe, you don't have to endure.
>Let it all out.

>Kh
<I think I'm cumming again!

<Cumming
<It's cumming out!!

>Ah
>Mh
>Suck out my urethra too…
>Haa

>You're sperm is delicious…
>R-Really?

014.
>Haa (x4)
>More, I want more.

~Uaaah
~My pussy feels so good.
#could also be "your pussy feels so good", unclear who's speaking

>Haa (x4)
>Mika
~Thrust more… stir up my pussy.

<Hi… Ah… Mi… Mika, you're hitting my womb.
#lit: at the back/depth
<Your dick is fully inside… ah
<Ah
>Haa (x4)
<Uah
<Feeling you so deep inside me… amazing.
<Ah
<No
>Ah, Mako.
<Oohh
<Thrust, thrust!

015.
<Cumming
<Cumming

>Haa (x3)
>Mako, you're so cute.

>Mika, come here now…
>Rape me without mercy from the back…
^Mako is always taking the lead, but…

>Ah
>Aahh
>Haa

016.
^She loves it harsh for the last play.
<Ah, Mako…
<Ah
<Ua
^This is such a cute side from her…
<Yes there
<Ah, fill up my pussy with your semen.
<I love it… being raped by you…
<Noo
<Thrust in, stir me up completely!
<Ah

~Ah! I'm cumming again!
<Cum inside me!

<Cumming

<Fill up my deepest spot.
<Ah
<Completely.
<Ah
<Ah, I'm cumming again, I'm cumming!

017.
<Cumming
<Aahh
<So much cumming out.

>Haa (x5)
>Ah

>Ah, don't pull out yet.
>Let's stay like this…

>This was great, Mika.
>For me too…

>How many times did we do it?
*Oh, we have to turn on the lights.
>I can't even remember…

018.
<AAAAAhhhhhh

*What is it now?
~The test tomorrow…

~Ah! Right.
>?

>It's too late anyway, so let's just have lots of sex.
~How can you come to such a conclusion?
^In the end we did it another five times…
^The test results? Don't ask…

019.
^Bad at sports #lit: incompetent
*Mika Hoshino
*I'm not going to become a pro anyway…
*Mako Hasegawa
^All-round athlete
But isn't affiliated with any club.
('cause I wouldn't have enough time to have sex with Mika if I joined a club)
*that's how it is apparently

020.
>Ah, finally over.
>Mh?

>It's from Mako.
@Big incident! Come quickly to the first music room♥
>What is this about?

>I wonder what happened?
>♪

021.
@Music Room #1
~Mako, here I am. What happened…

>Ah…

<What kind of incident is this supposed to be!
*She betrayed my expectations.
>Mika…

>Haa (x2)
~I want to have sex now and here…

022.
>Didn't we just do it yesterday?
>My sister came back early yesterday…

>so we could only do it twice.
>Ah…

>I couldn't calm down after that…
>I masturbated countless times tonight…

>You did so too, right, Mika?
>……
^Actually did it four times

>Ah
>Aahh, finally, this is what I wanted.

023.
>Hey, Mako, not here.
>Mika's dick♥

>Mh…
>Mh

~Ah, not there…

<Ah
<Ah
<Ahn
<Mhaa

<I'm cumming.
<My semen is coming.

024.
<Cumming

>Ah, what a waste.

>Haa (x5)

>Now it's my turn.
>Next turn is when we're back home.

<No way!
<I'm already this wet, I can't wait so long.

025.
>Mika, I want you to stick it inside.
>…

<Aahh

<Aah, good!
<Mika, thrust deep inside me! All the way in!
<My pussy feels so good!

<Ahm
<Nha
<In… credible…!

026.
<Mika, cum inside me!

<I want your semen, all of your semen!
<Mh
<Ah
<Ah
<I'm cumming!

<Cumming!!
<Cumming

027.
>Mako…
>Haa (x4)
>Why do you insist to do it here?

>Are you so afraid of Misato-san?
>Ah?
>My sister? Not really…

>But when her switch flips she can get in rage.
>What switch?

>For instance not long before…
>Ah

>When she came back home completely drunk…
*Yes, yes

>She said that recently skinship between us sisters would be lacking.

028.
>So she made me have sex with her until the morning.
*Non stop until 5 o'clock
~Whaaaat⁉
*You have such an intimate relationship…

>Well, it felt good, I don't complain about that… #left
>That's not the problem here.

>No wonder she's called the legendary “Gold Finger”.
>What is that?

>She said that she once made everybody in her class cum with her fingers during second year high school.
>…That's an extreme story.

029.
>Mika…
>Instead of speaking about my sister,
\can I have another round please?

<Yes, there
<Ah
<Ah

<Ahm
<Ah
<Yes, stick it inside up to the base.
<Good
<Ahh
<You're hitting… my… womb!
<Mha

030.
<Ah
<Mh
<Yes, there, ah
<Mhh
<N… No
<Ah
<Ah… Agh

>Haa (x3)
<Thrust into me, deeper!

~Ma… Mako, I think I'll cum, I'm cumming.
>Haa (x3)

>Haa (x6)
<Mhaa
<I'm cumming!
<Cum inside!
<Pour your semen into my pussy!
<Yes
<Ah
<C-Cumming
<Fill me up
<I want all your semen!

031.
<!!

<Mha
<Ah!
<Ahi
<Cummming, cumming!!

>Haa (x7)
~You came a lot.
~See, your sperm is flowing out of me.
~Lick me…

>Ah

032.
>Yes, there…
>Suck out the stuff in the back of my pussy too.

<Ah
>My pussy is stimulated too much, I'm getting dizzy.

<No
<Ah, no, Mako, I'm cumming again.
<Ah!
<Mha
<Ah
<I'm cumming, cumming!
<Ah

033.
>It's coming out!

>Ha (x3)
<Ahm

>Ha (x2)
*Tasty

034.
<Shit, the school gate's closing.

*Sorry!

<I caught a cold.
:<sneeze
>You reap what you sow.
*Why didn't I get sick?

036.
@Hasegawa
>Huh?

>Mako, I brought a CD… ?
>Long time no see, Mika-chan.
>Ah, Misato-san, hello.

037.
>Mako went out for a moment.
>I think she'll be back soon, so how about you wait inside.

>…okay.

>Sorry, Mika-chan.

>I think she head to the video store.
*She said something about WRC…

>……
>She's called Golden Finger because she made her whole class cum with her fingers.

038.
>Mika-chan?
>Ah, yes⁉

>As we're both free, let's have sex.

~Ehm, I think I must've misheard…
>You know, you'll get bored if you only do it with Mako.

>You knew about us?
>Of course♥

>Mh…

039.
>Ah…

>Fh…a
>Hehe, you're a cute girl.

>Feeling so much just from a kiss.
>Ah
>No…

>Mhh?

>Actually…
~My my
~Incredible!

040.
>I see, no wonder why Mako gets absorbed with you.
:>jerk
>Such a sensation, it's been a long time♥

>Thank you for the meal.

>Ah
~Ah… Misato-san.
~You're skilled, ah

<No, I'll cum.
<My cumming all out.
<Aah
<Ah

041.
<Cumming
<Cumming

>Hehe, you're still cumming…

>Haa (x4)
~Misato-san, you're skilled with blowjobs.
>Hehe, thanks.

>Well, let's go to my room?
<Big sis!!

>My my, Mako, welcome home.
<Welcome my ass!!

042.
>Mika is my girlfriend!
>Don't steal her!

>She didn't steal me, we just played a little.
>!

>Mako…
>Haa (x5)
>Mako, join us having sex…
>Look, my dick got so hard…

>Mika, something is different than usual with you.
*She got into the heat?
>See, Mika-chan's with me♥
#is agreeing with me

043.
>Ah…

>Ahm
>No…
~This… no… So much stimulation for my dick.

>…
>Ah…
>Mh…
>Ah…

>Mako
>Are you properly caressing Mika-chan's pussy?
>Huh?

>Mika-chan got a dick, but she's still a girl.
>Ah
>Mika-chan, I'll make you cum with your pussy.

044.
<!!
<Uah

<No… this… amazing
>So you're sensitive here, Mika-chan?

>Then how about… here.
<Ah
<Not… there.

<I'm cumming, I'm cumming

<Mhaaaaaa!!

045.
~Wow! She came without having her dick touched.
>Haa (x2)
>Ah (x2)
*That's my sister…

>Ah…
>Mh…
>Haa
>Hehe, did it feel good?

>Now this.
>Let me cum a lot.

<Your dick is amazing, Mika-chan.
<It's going up deep inside.

<Ah
<Ugh
>Mika, eat my pussy.
<Thrust!

046.
<Wow, I'm cumming, my pussy is cumming.
<Ahm
<Ah
<Mha
<Mikaa, yes, suck there, deeper, ah.
<Kha
<Ah

<Ah
<Hah
<There
<Ha
<Hi
<No

<Cumming, cumming
<It's cumming.

047.
<Mika-chan's semen are filling me up…
>Haa (x3)
>Ah

>Ahm

>Come, this time do us both.

>Stick your dick between us.

>We'll hold it with our pussies♥
>Mika, come.

048.
<Hia
<Ah
<Ah, incredible! You're pussies are so slimy.
<Ah
<There
<Yes there, rub there.
<You're hitting my clitty, ahh!

>Hua

<Ah, I'm cumming again!
<Ah
<Ah
<Ahm

<Okay, cum a lot.
<Let it all out.

049.
<I'm cumming♥
<Ahi, cumming♥

<Hua
<Haa (x3)
<Ah
<Cumming♥
<Hah

048.
>Mika-chan, let's do this again soon♥
<NO!

>Mika is mine!
>I don't see the problem.

>You're always acting like this and taking what's mine.
>But I won't let you take Mika.
:>badump (x2) #heartbeat
~I can't trust you!
>Huh? What is this feeling?
*Just now you did only what you wanted.
#lit: enjoyed yourself alone
*But you came too, Mako!

051.
Afterword

Nice to meet you, I'm GT Wanko.

Thank you for purchasing “Days of F Vol. 1”.

I wanted to draw an original “futa” story for a long time, so I drew this primarily for self satisfaction. I don't like abnormal plots so I intended to just draw something sexy and cute. (Don't consider futas as something abnormal, get rid of that thought.)

I already have plans how to finish the story in about twelve chapters, and I also want to draw some other short stories, so I don't have a problem with creativity but with available time… (sweat)

If I get good feedback for this, there will be a volume 2!

By the way, I'm not planning to add any male characters or bad guys, so if you have the same fetish as me, relax. (?)

Not enough sex!, Needs more juice! or whatever you think, send your thoughts to me via the addresses given below.

some day in 2004 GT Wanko

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000.
Kitchen H

002.
~I'm home!

>Ah, welcome back, Fujimura-sensei.
~Ha (x2)
~Sakura-chan, thanks for preparing dinner as usual~

>Uh? Where's Shirō?

>Sempai is in his room…
>I guess.

>Is that so?
~Ha (x2)

003.
<Sempai
<Fujimura-sensei is already here.
<What if she sees my boobs…

<She'll notice…
~Ha (x2)

+Enough…
~Ha (x3)

004.
<Ah♥

>Sakura-chan, are you alright?
>Eh… Yes…
>I just dropped an ingredient…

~Good luck. I thought you cut your fingers~
>Sorry for making you worry.

>~~

005.
<S-Sempai
<What if she notices?

<Mh
\Judging by her reaction she's pretty absorbed…
<I don't think so.

>When Fuji-nee starts watching TV she'll pay no attention to the kitchen at all, believe me.
*I'm sure A is correct!

<Whatever.

<I'll show you how much I was trying to endure.

<Mh⁉

<⁉

006.
<Hey
~Ha (x3)
<Sakura

<I get it.
<I get it, it was my fault…

>Mhhh…

007.
<gh
:<spurt spurt spurt

<S-Sorry……
:>gulp

>Thanks for the meal♥

>Huh, Sakura-chan?

~Ye-Yes?

>I was wondering where you were.
>Sorry, I was putting in the tableware.

>And tasted the dressing…
~Uhh
~You're always so swift, amazing~

008.
>It's about time for dinner~ I'm going to call Shirō, okay?
>Wait, he might be doing homework.

<Ah!

<I forgot about the test! #lit: now that you said homework I remember!
\I'm having a surprise test tomorrow!
\I have to prepare the questions!
\I can't create the test when I'm in class…… #lit: in front of the students
\This means, I have to go home now! Send Shirō my regards!
<If there are leftovers from dinner, keep them. I'll eat them tomorrow. Okay?
>Y-Yes, take care, Sensei.

>I'm sorry, Sakura-chan.

>…And she's gone.
>Fuji-nee is like the wind.

009.
<And you said Fujimura-sensei wouldn't notice!
<Eh, I guess today's TV program sucked…⁉
>Meh…

>Well, at least dinner only has to boil a little more.
>Well then,

>I'll have to eat a bit of Sakura in the meantime.
>Se-Sempai…⁉

>See for yourself how it's simmering here.
>Eek

010.
>Looking so tasty.
<Ah
\This
\is all your fault……
<Mh♥

>So you need no food?
*I don't want to force you
>~~~

>Come on,
\if you're hungry, tell where and how you want to eat.
<Ha
<Ah
<Ha
>I can't help you if you don't tell me.
<Ye… Yes…

<Please,
\let me eat…
<your dick with my pussy…

011.
<Eek♥

>Such a big bite so suddenly…
>Sorry
\I didn't intend to shove all the food in one go.

>It's not your fault, Sempai.
~Ha (x3)
>It's just that my pussy wants to eat you so much.
:>gulp

>So,
>let me munch some more.♥

012.
<Ha♥
<Ah♥
<Khu
<Fill me up!
<Aahh

<Sakura…
\Your pussy is so tight…
<No way…
<Did you maybe get excited by the idea that we get discovered?
~Hah (x3)
<Yah♥
<N-no, no way…
\Ha♥

<Are you sure? Because you're wet as hell.
<No♥
<Hya♥
<Mhu♥♥
<Ahh♥♥

013.
*Haa♥ (x4)
<It's your fault that I became like this.
<And because of that,
<you have to eat up my complete body♥

<You don't have to tell me that…
<Mh♥

>And the fact that your nipples are erect, even though I didn't touch them yet, is my fault too?
<Yeees

<You're such a tease, Sempai.
<Ah♥

014.
<Mh

<Mha♥
<Ah
<Hi♥

<Ah♥♥

>Your nipples and your clit are all stiff.
<Ah♥
<Don't touch them

<Nooo…♥

015.
<No, stop!
*Ha♥ (x3)
>We're dirtying the kitchen, aren't we…
>So what?

>Right now it's more important that you're charming.
>~~~

>I thought you had already noticed.

>No matter if the kitchen is getting dirty or not,
<Ah (x3)

>you have to feel good.
<Aaah

016.
~Ha♥ (x5)
<Ah♥ (x3)
<Your pussy got even tighter and hotter……

<That means that you're happy, right?
*Ha♥ (x3)
>Tha-… That's…
>because of you, Sempai.
<I'm happy because of you…♥

017.
<Ha♥
<Ah♥
<Ah♥
<Sakura, I think,
\I'll soon hit your womb.

<Because you say this stuff to me♥
<My womb is sucking you in♥

<Sakura
*Hah (x3)
<Stop…
\Time out…

018.
>We talked about me eating you, but as far as I can see I was eaten…
*Hah (x4)

>You've already prepared the dressing, did you?

>Let me have a tasting.

>Well, I can't get a plate right know, so make do with this…
\Please♥

019.
>But you always say not to play with food.
>It's no play, if you do a proper tasting♥

>Really?
>I think so♥

<Mh♥

<Haa♥
<Ah♥

<Ah♥
\So how♥
\is the taste?♥
<Ha♥
~Ha (x3)
<Hihn♥

020.
<Ah♥ (x3)
<No

<Sempai, you're hips are moving…♥
~Ha♥ (x3)

<How can I stay still in such a situation.
~Ha (x4)
<Ah♥
<Impossible, right?

<Sempai's hot dick♥
<Ah♥
<So cute♥
<Don't hesitate, knock me up♥
<So cute♥
~Ha (x2)
<Ah♥♥

021.
<Hi♥
<Uh♥

<Ah♥ (x3)

<Noo
<Ah
~Ha (x6)

<Nooo, I'm gonna cum!

022.
<Aaaaahhh

023.
>Thanks for the meal.
*It was delicious.
>Thank you♥

>Well, I think can't win against you anymore when it comes to western food.
*Ah, I'll do the dishes
*Thank you♥
>Hehe
\I still have a long way before me.

>Especially the new dressing today,
>tasting it on Sakura was great, tasting it on the salad was great too.
>!

>So will you do the tasting for me again when I make a new one?
>Aaahh

024.
Afterword

Hello, thanks for purchasing this book. It's Niwacho, strengthening my pen every year. The surface of my Favo (pen tablet) gets already scratched with the color of my stainless pen.

Once again I started splendidly, but ended being late without any energy.

The Fate UBW anime is already over. But that also means the next step is, you know what. Finally you know what. I'm so nervous. Who had the idea that in the last episode only Mitsuzuri was speaking and Sakura had nothing to say at all? But this stern face pressed by an apple was cute. Still! I'm happy that many events were held in the pretext of the anime adaption, but in my wild delusions I thought of "Escape of the insect warehouse(??)" but that's not extremely funny.

I drew a similar story in 2010, and now I let them have sex in the kitchen again. This time Fujimura-sensei is super lively too. I think it turned out better than the time before. At that time I wrote the speech bubbles all by hand. Well, I like that for the personal touch, but see that it's difficult to read….

I hope you find a liking in my next books too. Thank you so much!

niwacho

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000.
Penistic Hazard

001.
Penistic Hazard
Noujiru

002.
+The Tin virus that I have developed……
+is constantly increasing its infection radius………
\The paradise we, “Tiamat”, are longing for, is getting close…

+General Belbuck, your work is splendid……
>I'm honored by your words…!
>But… there is the trouble of the remedy and vaccine “Marduk” has developed.

+Indeed there is…
\but, as long as they don't capture any of you generals it shouldn't matter……
+General Belbuck… The risk of capture is especially high for execution units like you…
\Be on your guard…
>Yes!

+Ah, I'm so proud of you because you are so reliable, and proud of me because I made you so handsome…
#"proud of the reliable you" would be closer to the Japanese and shorter, but I don't know if it sounds good in English
#alt: I can't stop feeling pride for the reliable you and that I made you so handsome.
+I've prepared one animated shot for you… You may drink it…

T/N: Character names apparently taken from Babylonian mythology

003.
+Let General Belbuck have the prepared drink.
>Yes…♥
>Come Onee-san, make ah…

>Ha…
>Hurry up please♥
~Ha
~ha
>Hehe… you totally love it, Onee-san.
>The freshly struck milk filled with Tin virus from the commander-in-chief…♥

<Ah
<Hah♥

*So hot…

+Well, head out, General Belbuck.
+To fulfill our long desire…
#lit: to fulfill our assignment

+to have every woman…
+grow a penis…♥

004.
>Ehehe…
>Look, it's for real.

>Wow… So, this the real thing……
>Yepp♥ It feels totally great♥

>Come, let's have sex before people show up, all right?
<Whaat, right here⁉

>So, you grew this because you got infected by the virus, right?
*Ha
*Ha
>That means I would……

>You don't need to worry. Since you're a girl,
\you'll also grow such a wonderful thing.

005.
>Well, different story if you were a boy.
\You know, a while ago I raped my boyfriend.
>No way, how could you…

>I don't know why, but since I grew a dick,
>I became even stronger than the boys.

>But still nothing compared to the girl who raped me.
\She was so amazing, I couldn't resist for a second♥
>And what happened to your boyfriend?

>Well, the thing is, he can't get no erection anymore.
>So I dumped him.
<…
>For real??……

>This dick… it's really…
>something…
<Ah♥

>So? Do want it?
<So hot and stiff…

006.
>Eh, we don't have to have sex right now.
<Hah
>You can just stroke it…

>Okay
<Ah♥

>Ah~ it's coming, cumming out…
>Look…… Watch how I ejaculate……♥
>Yeah

~Show me how you spurt it out…!
~Let it all out!!

<Ah♥
<I'm cumming.
<My dick is cumming♥

007.
<Ah♥
<Wow♥
<It's cumming, all my semen♥
<Hghu

>I… want one too…
#not clear if she wants to drink sperm or wants to have a dick
#lit: this, I want

>Certainly, that's the work of the Tin virus.
<Who the fuck⁉
<Ugh⁉

008.
>I'm supervisor Jannu, of the anti Tin virus hygiene institution
>“Marduk”.

>I have to take you with me to undergo the cure treatment.
<C-Cure treatment⁉

<You mean you're going to take away my dick⁉
<No way, I want to rape lots of girls from now on!!
*Oh my god!
<You want to do what⁉
#lit: Ehhh??

>Such an abnormal sexual desire…
>And also the danger of her making more males impotent.
\I can't overlook this.

>I hoped I wouldn't have to resort to violence…
>But I won't hesitate to arrest you by force.
<Ugh……!!
<Damn! She looks strong. Maybe you should better give in peacefully?

009.
>I won?……
<The supervisor is totally weak!!

>So, let's hurry and get away from here…
>Eh, yes.
>……

>But first, I'm gonna rape her.
<WHY!!?

>From the moment I saw her, somehow… I… became totally horny…
>Stop it…

<In the first place, I'm standing right beside you. You can't be thinking of having sex with her……
>Don't worry, I'll only go for five rounds.
*Ha
*Ha
<That's a lot!!

010.
<And, no step further!!
:>swift
:>peak
<Whaat⁉

<He, what……
<What have you done⁉
*Ah

>Ah, she's just lost consciousness.
>You can go home now.
<Eh……… Ehm………
*Ah

>Come on, wake up, Jannu!
>Dr. Haruka came to rescue you.

011.
~Ugh… Doctor…………
~I'm supposed to be the heroine, so why did I appear on stage so late……
#she's angry that the first two pages are about Tiamat, and not about her
>What, she's so indulged with herself……

<Whaa……⁉
<Just a dream⁉
>Good morning.

>I just had a dream where I was on the verge of getting raped.
*My my
>That was reality.

>Geez, how can you jump into a fight forgetting how weak you are…
<I'm not weak!

~You told me, I'm becoming a strong warrior!!
~That's why I'm serious with the special training everyday……
#lit: that's why I'm not neglecting the toughening every day
*sigh…
>It's because of the special training that your body is weak.

>We remodeled you that you would lose against every opponent.
>To call it out…

012.
>Fill me all up♥
>You're a semen tank.
<Don't call me that!!

>But we are able to develop a vaccine and a remedy thanks to that…
<Yes, but still…

>We couldn't have captured the virus for the vaccine with an ordinary womb like this girl has.
#she says extremities/terminal, but I can't imagine anything beside her womb to fit
>Because her genes got changed the moment she got infected.

>“Tiamat” consists of a chief and four generals.
>These girls are the first carriers, they possess virus variants that are closest to the original.

013.
>…Then we should better capture the leaders,
>instead of modifying my body!

<Damn, you're right!!
*Why didn't I think of that.
*Geez
<Whaa, she's just a smart fool!!

>That was a joke.
>Oh?
>If we could capture them so easily we wouldn't be in this trouble.

>They appear and disappear like phantoms… And we have no clue where their headquarters are……
:>peep peep
>Yes…⁉

>The F team is fighting General Belbuck.
>We have to head out to Sector Omega immediately!!
<G-General Belbuck⁉

>……Do I go there as fighter……?
>Or as………

<Of course as tank, as semen tank!!
#lit: go and get fully exploited
#but I like the word play
<I'm resigning!!

014.
>………She's right.

\It would be great if we could capture even a single general with our spreat out net…
>But the outcome could very well be that we get allured by the strong pheromones the first carriers emit.

<Hau♥
<Mgh

>Come……
>Gulp it all down.
\You've already grown such a splendid specimen…
#… so you shouldn't need my attention anymore
<Hah
<Hah

<Haa
<Haa
:<twitch
:<twitch

:gulp

015.
<Hu…
>Well,
\I'll let you handle the rest.
>Yes, General Belbuck.
*Haa
*Haa

>So, how are you?
>What are your impressions on growing a dick?
~I……… don't need…………
\such a… thing!

>I see, I see
>Let me show you how to play with it♥
<Hyaa♥

>My my. I only grabbed it a little.
*How cute♥
<Ah…

>Your dick is very sensitive I see♥
<N-No… ahh… hi♥

016.
<Ahh, I came again♥
*Hah
*Hah
>I have to get as skilled in using it as the other two♥
<Dicks are great♥
*Hah
*Hah
<I'm cumming out virus semen non-stop♥

~You won't get away with this, I'm certain…
<Ahi
~Jannu-san will come for sure……
<Ah♥

<!
>Jannu-chan is coming⁉

>Eh, really………?
>We're still behind quota…

~Excuse me, General Belbuck…
>Mh? What is it?

017.
<Ah
>It looks like Jannu-chan is heading towards here.
<Mh
>We should move to another place.
>I see… So Jannu is coming…

>Hehe, just like I hoped.
>No, what you're hoping for brings us great trouble………

>It'll be fine this time.
>No, it's too dangerous.
>I can take care of this.
>You say that all the time.

<I'm cumming…♥

>Good job♥ You ejaculated splendidly.
\From now on you can do it on your own, right?
:pat pat
>………… Yes…♥

018.
>Well then…
\We have to get moving……
>It feels so good♥

>Ugh
<Mh♥
<Mh♥
<Ahmh…
<Fgh…

>You have some nerve to oppose against me.
>What?
#What did you say?
>Who do you think let you grow such a fine dick?
#apparently what looks like a strap-on is just dick clothing. She has it in her mouth now. Btw, her lines are slurred.

<It was Belbuck-sama!!
<Mh
<Bu
<I'm so sorry!!

>I let you recollect the time you got raped once more♥
<Ah
<Hyau♥

019.
>Hahi…
:<drool
:<splurt
~Ha…
~Ha…
<No more…

*Ehem…
>Belbuck-sama!
>What?

*You know…
>Jannu-chan will be here soon.
>Shouldn't we hurry?

>Mh♥ I get it.
>You too want to get raped, right?

>…………
\…Yes, please…
*Uh…

<Why me again?
#alt: Why did she do me again?
<Incredible…♥

020.
>This time for sure, I will capture Jannu and get behind the mystery of her body.
>You can relax and stay here, exhausted as you are.

~We tried the best to persuade her…
<Hah (x4)
~Yes…… There's nothing more to be done……

>I've waited for you, Jannu.
\This time for sure, I will take you with me.

~That's my speech.
~It'll be better for your wellbeing to surrender now, General Belbuck!

>Did you forget about my fighting strength?
>You can't capture a first carrier just by being invigorated.

<Hah
>The Tin virus increases the strength of its hosts rapidly.
<Mh♥
*Our dicks are good friends♥
*Yeah♥
<Mh♥
>In the end, your fate will be the same as those girls.
*I'll fill it all up♥

>Tell me, what is your goal, why are you doing all this?
>Pushing our society into chaos can't be all that you want!!

021.
>World
>Domination……!

<Wha……

>Sorry, I just wanted to try to say this.
<You…

^I don't have an ultimate goal.
^The same goes for the other generals.
^All we do is following our sexual desire.

>Following your sexual desire……
>Doesn't that make you mere animals!
*Ehh…
>Maybe, whatever!

>Belbuck-sama…

>There's no point in trying to persuade me…
>If you think you can stop me with your encouragement, come on and try it.

<Yes…… that's what I'm going to do……!!

022.
<Ahh, I really can't win!!
>Too easy!
<How quick!!

>Great pose, Jannu.
>When I see you right now,

\I recall the time I was raped myself.
<Huh⁉

>You know, I was once attacked by a boy when I was walking home from school.
>At that time I was filled with desperation, I wanted to die as fast as possible.

023.
>But then I met our leader and my fate changed.
>It was my greatest joy getting reborn as futanari……!
#lit: living as a futanari, that joy

>The rape demon yearned for more and he came back to rape me again. But the tables had turned.
*Look
*Look
>Of course, due to the effect of the Tin virus males become impotent.
*Argh

>I see… so your reason
>to spread the Tin virus is your resentment for males……
:gulp

>I've already told you that I'm doing it just for pleasure.
>Today I'm actually a bit grateful towards the rape demon.

>As a small kindness, I'm sending him hentai books from time to time.
>Well, for an impotent boy it might actually be more of an annoyance…… Muhahaha……

<You're such a grievous person……!!
<I have to stop you some way or another……!!

024.
~No, this didn't work either…
:<smack♥
:<smack♥
+Even though she's our enemy, I feel a bit of pity……
*Ugh…
*So weak…

<Despite our differences, we have good compatibility……
<Hah♥
<Hah♥
<Or rather, your pussy is just incredible……!

<Today is the day where I finally make you grow a dick…♥
<No
\way

<Ah♥
<Aha
<Good
<Great, Jannu♥

025.
<Mgh♥

<Aah aaahh
:<squirt

:~pour
:~pour

>That's it♥
\I love cumming inside you.
>It feels so good~♥

>I'm cumming so hard, I can't stop.
\You're draining all of my semen……♥
<Ge-… General Belbuck

:~spurt

~Eh……… No………
*More…

026.
~Ah, that was dangerous……
~I was close to run dry…
#why "持って"枯れる?

~How come you're still not satisfied.
<Actually I'm wondering that myself……

>Well, that's perfect……
>Looks like your friends want to do it with you too……♥
#lit: your friends are looking at us like they want to do it with you too

<Whaaat⁉
*Sempai…

>Jannu-sempai……♥
>Please make us feel good too♥
:>drool
<No, wait, please come back to your senses……!!

027.
<Noo

<Stop it……

>Jannu-sempai……♥
>!

>I always wanted to have sex with Jannu-sempai.
>We all dreamt of this♥

\I'm so happy that I grew a dick…♥
>Because now I can give to you what you love most: semen………♥

>Gifting your sempai who you longed for all the time with semen…
\How romantic is that!
#lit: isn't that a great story
+Romantic……?

<Pl…
<Please……

~I can't endure any longer…
~Please give me all these virus infused semen……!

028.
*You're so cute, Sempai♥
~Give me all of your semen please♥
~Fill me up completely♥
*Yes, this is good
:<slurp slurp
:<smack smack
#there should be a better sfx for "smack"
~Cover me in semen♥

>Well, shall we mix in too!
>Fuck it!
>I don't care about our quota anymore either…
#maybe she's only talking about Belbuck, not about herself
#lit: frankly it came to be that nobody cares about the quota
>Right! Let's dig in♥
#dick in (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

029.
<Sempai, your ass is great♥
<It's clamping so hard♥
:<lick
:<lick

:<drag
:<drag♥

<Yes, in my asshole♥
<Give me more♥
<Haa
<Haa

<Jannu-sempai♥
<I'm cumming♥
<It's cumming all out.
<♥
<Semen is pouring into my anal pussy♥

030.
<Please… General Belbuck……
<Give me semen…
*Haa
*Haa

<All I want is your semen, I can't endure it anymore.
*Haa
*Haa
~I love your semen more than anybody else's.

~Pour all your semen into my pussy.
\And make me pregnant!
>Hah
>Hah
<And let me grow a splendid dick.

<Jannu♥

<Haa
<Haa
<Ham♥

031.
~Hah
~Hah

<Aaah. I love you, Jannu!
<I will fill you up with all of my semen! Just for you.

~I'm so happy, I love you too♥
~I love you so much, Belbuck!!

>Ah ah… The general lost her mind to her…
<Haa
<Haa
<Ha
<Ha
>Eh, ehehe… I don't care anymore…♥

<Let's cum together, Jannu.
*Ha
*Ha
<Yes♥
\Let us feel good together♥

032.
<I'm cumming, cumming♥
<Something big is coming♥

<My dick,
<my dick is bursting♥

033.
<It went all inside me♥
<Semen
<My beloved semen, they're filling me up.

034.
>Good work, Sempai~♥
*You're amazing, Sempai♥
*Sempai♥
*Hiu♥
>Here, the rewarding semen shower♥

>The semen you held in your heart, so much of them…♥
*Wah♥
>I'm happy…♥

>Ah…
>Ehm, Belbuck-sama…?

035.
<I… I…
<I raped a girl again……

<Eh… well……
*Ehm…
<That's part of the job…
<What kind of a job is that!!

<I hate it!!
<Since I grew this male part I've become insane!
\Waaahh

>……Post-coital clarity…
>Must be it……

036.
<Jannu!

>Ehm…
<The next time for sure we'll make you grow a dick.
\You better remember!!
<That's not our objective!!

>We did it, we won, right?
>Eh? Did we?
>I guess so?

*Hooray Hooray
#banzai
*yay
*yay

<A strange switch flipped inside me, once again……
<Well, whatever……

037.
>I see… General Belbuck entered post-coital clarity.
>Okay, just bring her back to the base.

>Yes, understood.
*General…

+Post-coital clarity, I see…
\this means we can't use her for some time…
>Looks like she gifted Jannu with lots of semen.
*sigh
>That means they'll be able to produce much vaccine from it.

+We'll let the other generals cover up for this.
+You take “care” of her.

\But be moderate please…… Counselor.
#lit: Counselor Belbuck
#apparently they are real sisters, as they share the same last name. I guess I stick with just "Counselor" for less confusion.
>Yes……

>I'll caress you a lot when you return…
>Onee-san……♥
#imagining speaking to Belbuck

038.
>Oh, this was close.
>Good luck I didn't come too late……

>Jannu was finally able to obtain lots of first carrier semen in her womb.
>And it was just about to get mixed with the semen of these girls……

<Doctor…

>You can't do anything without me, right?
*Tsk
<Hey, Doctor!!

039.
<You were masturbating looking at us⁉
<How do you come to such a conclusion……
#lit: what's the basis for this
<Now I understand!!

<That's why you need the video camera⁉
*Ehehe…
>Ah, just to have some jerk-off material later.
<So honest!!
*shock!

*Ahaha♥
>Come on, after all we won♥
#lit: Okay, the result is all right
#alt: Come on, it worked all out in the end♥
<Ah… ah…

<And what about the wound in my heart⁉
\I quit!!
>Not again. Didn't you feel good?♥
<That's something else…
^You have to keep fighting for humankind, Jannu!
\And thus get raped! Jannu!

<What kind of support is that?
#like encouragement
#引き?
The end

040.
Thank you for purchasing this work.

I tried to draw something in the spirit of a not so serious Resident Evil. What do you think of it?

I think of continuing until all of the generals have appeared. Thank you for your continued support.

2014-06-15 Noujiru Teishokuya

T/N: The name Penistic Hazard is a play on the Japanese name of Resident Evil: Bio Hazard.

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00.
Penistic Hazard 2

02.
<Ah…
<Ah… Ah…

>Why are you so frightened?
>Onee-san♥
\You're making me remember a scene from the past…
#not 100% sure who's subject here

<Th- The past…?

03.
>To be precise, the day when a sturdy thing grew between your legs.
>And when you raped me a lot.

<I'm sorry. I'm so sorry.
<At that time, I……
>Was it the fault of the virus?
\No, I don't think so.

<You wanted to keep me for yourself.
<You wanted me, your little sister, as your only girl
\and ravish me to your heart's content. You couldn't hold yourself back for a second.

<Forgive me…

04.
<Mhg…⁉

<How was I to condemn you, Onee-san?
<Hah♥
<Hah♥
<On the contrary, I was so happy♥
<Ghh
<Mgh

<Mhg
<To be able to become yours♥
<Mhg
<And to be able to stay by your side forever♥
<Our relationship would become deeper than just sisters♥

<Hah♥
<I knew I'd be able to feel good with Onee-san everyday♥
<Hah♥

05.
<Yes!
<Mgh
<Mmmh
<I'm cumming♥

<Phua
<Aphu

>My my… that's not good, Onee-san.
\You have to drink up all semen.
>I guess you need a punishment.
#lit: This will be your punishment.

<Eh⁉

06.
<Eeeek!!

>I sentence you to the pee penalty♥
<Noo, it's dirty……!!

~Haa
~Haa

07.
>Hhm~?
>My my, Onee-san♥

\Your dick's become stiff, hasn't it?
>Could it be that you got turned on by your little sister's pee?
<No, that's not it.

<No, I didn't!
>Hehehe

08.
>I love you,
\Onee-san.

>In good times,
>in sad times,

>in tough times,

>even when we die…
>we'll always be together……

09.
>Mh……
>Mhh……♥

10.
<Onee-san……♥
<Kyou-chan!!

~Onee-san♥
~Onee-san♥

<I'm cumming!!
<I'm cumming!!

<Me too, Onee-san…!
<I'm cumming inside of you!!

11.
<Mhaaaaa♥
<Onee-chaaaa

12.
>Onee-san……
*Haa (x4)

^If I'm with Onee-san, I don't care how far I fall……
^Even in the depths of hell, it would be paradise, as long as I'm with Onee-san…

^Let us be together, forever,
^Onee-san……♥
#make forever bold

13.
Penistic Hazard 2
Chapter 2: Entrance of General Hivarich

Noujiru

14.
^The plot so far
>Ah, yesterday was exhausting.
>Carrying General Belbuck back to the hideout was huge trouble.
*Haha…
>Her post-coital clarity is extreme.

>And we told her not to overdo it.
>There was no helping it. Having sex with Jannu-chan just feels too good.

>But still, she's our, namely “Tiamat's”, enemy?
\She's interfering with our plan to grow a dick on every girl.

>Anti Tin virus hygiene institution “Marduk” was the name, right?
~Haa
~Haa
>They are developing vaccine and cure out of the semen of Tiamat's generals……
\It looks like they improved Jannu-chan to resist against the Tin virus.

>But on the other hand, now she can't win a single battle with her body.
~Haa
~Haa
>Thanks to that we can rape her as much as we want♥

15.
>But there's a catch. While she had sex with us,
>she squeezed out loads of semen from General Belbuck♥

>She's a born semen tank♥
>Ah, I want to cover semen tank Jannu with my sperm♥

<I want to rape all the boys in the world.
>Hah
>Haah
<As we have no use for them anymore thanks to the Tin virus, we can get rid of them once and for all.

<Let's spread the Tin virus everywhere♥
>Hah
>Haah
<Let's spurt out the virus♥

<Cumming
<I'm cumming

<My dick
<My dick is cumming♥

16.
<Kh…
<For details read chapter 1, okay♥

<Ah♥
<Ahm♥
>Explaining the plot and masturbating at the same time……
>Incredible, these two……
^First appearance of General Hivarich
^End of the summary

17.
~Jannu is impressive…… I have to admit.
~Making General Belbuck ejaculate until post-coital clarity…
\She must have some very special pheromones.

>Indeed…
\We too became incredibly horny without realizing…
>I bet this is some making of Marduk's research…

~Yes, most likely…
~Probably the doing of Doctor Haruka…

~As for General Belbuck, Counselor Belbuck is tending to her in the color pages…
\You two will temporarily go with General Hivarich.
>Eh…? You mean General Takayun…?

>Don't call me Takayun!
>Address me as General Hivarich!

18.
>That sadistic girl messed it all up.
>Serves her right♥
>Takayun♥
<Ugh!!

>Takayun, it's been a long time♥
>Did you do all right?
>Takayun, let's have a bath together♥
<Hey……
<You two…

19.
:stare
*Ugh
*Ugh

:depressed
~How mean… I'd love to make out with Takayun too…
~But as I have the position of the chief, I can't do that.

\It was better in the past. With not much personnel I had more freedom……
*E-ehm…
~I could do this and that with Takayun…
*See, you made her lose her nerve.
#made her cower? ← not sure if proper English
*Oh my

<Enough of this!!

20.
>You all have to respect the hierarchy inside the organization!
\Leaders have to be addressed as leaders!

>No matter how young and mascot-like she looks, a general is a general!
>Counselor Belbuck♥
*We see
>You two have to follow the commands of General Hivarich!!

~I'm sorry, Counselor.
~Has General Belbuck recovered?

21.
>No, not yet. There's still a long way to go♥
*He
*Hehehe
>I have to make Onee-san drink huge amounts of my semen♥
~………But don't overdo it……
#it just says "moderately"
#I connected this bubble with the next via "I mean", as it sounds funny that the she corrects herself. But actually I doubt it's actually meant like this. It's probably only "I see it takes time" and "Well as the counselor said". So my choice might not be correct, but it flows nicely, so whatever (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)

<Ehem
~I mean, I trust your judgement, Counselor.
~As the counselor said, we have to be systematic to fulfill our ambitions.
\I count on you, Hivarich!

>Yes!!
#Something short affirmative

>Let's grow every girl
>a penis!!

22.
<My stage appearance is too late!!
<After all I'm the main character!

>Don't you think so too, Doctor⁉
>………Well… if you ask me…
>The book's title isn't “Jannu”, is it?…

<What⁉ Do you mean I am not the heroine⁉
<No, of course you are. But the key people are different, don't you think?

>Besides, thanks to you I was able to produce lots of treatment and vaccine.
>We'll be able to cure dozens of patients with this♥

23.
<I had enough!!
\Why do I always have to endure such embarrassment⁉
<Noooo!
~Well, it's unfortunate indeed…

>But because of that we're making lots of this…
*Money!
<What?
<It's dirty money!!

<Give me back the body which I could fight with!
<We can settle this once and for all by capturing all of Tiamat's leaders, right⁉

<That's bullshit, what kind of eromanga would this be then!!
<Come on!!

<Why can't we just make it an action manga then!!
<And change the title to “Jannu”!!
*That girl…

24.
>I see, I see.
*sigh…
>I give you back your fighting body.
\It makes me nervous too that you aren't able to fight back.
<Really⁉

~I love you Doctor♥
>Then let's have lesbian sex♥
>I pass!

>Now then… I wonder how Tiamat will proceed.
>General Belbuck will be out of battle for quite some time, I guess…

>So probably, the next one to make a move…
>will be General Hivarich.
:Yeah
:Yeah
*I'm gonna be the hero
*I'm gonna be the hero

25.
*bing bong #school bells

>…So, we're penetrating this school today?
>Yes we do. It should be the second period right now.
>How are we going to get in?
#invade

>No problem, I have connections.
>This is my way of doing, look and learn.

>Ah, I've been waiting for you…
>!
>!

>It's been a while, Hivarich-sama.
>This way please…

26.
>So, you have been waiting? You lecherous teacher!
>Inviting me so quickly to your new workplace…
\Isn't that embarrassing as a teacher?
<Ehm… I…

>Well, fine.
>By the way, how is “he” doing recently?
>Ehm…?

>I'm talking about
>that rotten perverted teacher that raped me!!

~I heard that he's still impotent…
~He's going to a mental hospital currently…

>Ah, I see, that's good.
>I still remember how you just stood there and watched, doing nothing to save me, while he was raping me…
>You both got what you deserved for being unworthy human beings.

>So, how many did you prepare today?
<Ah yes!

27.
>Three students…

>Hehe… You collected students of your liking…
\You're beyond help, teacher.
~I'm sorry…

>Huh? Aren't two of them boys?
>Yeah…
>But that's no problem.

>Yes
\'Cause my virus is special…

28.
>My Tin virus makes boys futanaris too.
\They'll grow a pussy and tits♥

~Is this a pee-pee……?
~I-It's bigger than daddy's.
>It's especially effective with these late developed high school students♥
~What is she going to do to us?

>It's said that this delayed body development is related to the Tin virus.
>Yes, right! It can be a side effect when parts of the virus spread through aerosols.
<Hey, stop your sudden narrative explanations!!

29.
<Teacher, what is this⁉
<Why did you bring us to this place⁉
~I want to go home.
~Ah… ehm…

~I-I'm sorry for you all……
~This dick is making me do bad things…
~You can't imagine how much I want to save you…

<Teacher…?
<Why do you…
<Have a pee-pee…?

>You're such a mean teacher, making it the fault of your dick.
\So why exactly are you masturbating in front of the students you want to save so much?
~Ugh……

>You're looking forward to this, right?
\You're hoping you can get some of the leftovers.
>All right, Miss hentai teacher♥
\When I'm done with these three, you can have one♥

30.
>Ah……
:~smile
>I'm so grateful♥

>Well
>Please become friends with me♥

31.
>A bio hazard at a school?
>Yes, only General Hivarich would do such a thing.

>But schools are on strict guard and there are many people around…
>She has infiltrated several schools with betrayers.
>People who are victims to the sexual desires by the virus.

\There is a report that there are signs of a betrayer at this school.
@Danger! Don't return home alone!
>Huh…
@When greeted reply soundly with “Good day”!
#no idea what this is supposed to mean. Literally: Healthy greeting "Good day!"

>…Is this really a high school?
>Yes it is!!

\It's full of students who's bodies developed slowly due to the influence of the virus. Obviously, all of the students are 18 years and older, so we have no legal problem here…
#actually, she's saying only "most of", but for American readers it be be "all of"^^
~Okay, I think I understand……
*I don't get why she is so flustered…

32.
:<brrrrm brrrrm
>Hum⁉

<The Tin virus sensing device is reacting!
<Really!!
*But its form is nasty!

>The back entrance is open…
>Don't tell me Tiamat is already inside……

>So the report was correct.
>A betrayer must have opened the back gate…
>Yes, apparently there's a reaction coming from this store house.

>They must be about here…
<Ah!

33.
~Hah (x4)
:<eat #what sound does eating make in English?
:<nphu
:<lick
:<suck

>I'm so happy that I can have sex with my students♥
<Hah (x3)
>Teacher, stick it deeper~♥

>Hehe♥ Does it feel good inside your freshly made pussy?
:<smack
:<squish
>Yes♥ My pussy feels good♥

>C-Can I kiss you?
>Yes♥

<Mh…♥
:<kiss♥
:<smooch♥

34.
>You'll see, lots of tasty milk will come out~♥
<Mh
<Mgh

:<gulp
:<gulp

>So? Was my milk tasty?
<Phua
>Ehehe, so tasty~♥

>Well, enough with the snacks.
>Now show me that you can ejaculate like me, okay?
>Yeah♥

~Haha☆ It's coming♥
~Wow♥ Very good♥

35.
>Oh, incredible…
\If their parents could see this they would faint…
~Ghaaargh~

<I can't forgive you that you did this due to the virus…
:<mpfh
>Stop it, Jannu, will you be quiet for a moment?

>You're Marduk's goons? You got wind of this fast.
>As I thought! It's you, Hivarich… It was you all along…!

>Show these two what you got.
>…Yes……♥

36.
>See, look here.
>Between my legs…
\I grew a pussy……♥

>Don't tell me, that girl…
>Was a boy before…⁉
>Hm……

>This is my Beta Tin virus!
>Beside girls, it can make boys become futanaris too.
\This is the evolution of the Tin virus!!

37.
>An evolved… Tin virus……?
>Jannu…

>Stealing a healthy future from these kids…
>It's impudent to call this an evolution…!
>So… what are you going to do about it?

<I, member of the anti Tin virus hygiene institution Marduk,
\arm of justice, Jannu,
<will never forgive you, Tiamat, for what you have done!!

38.
<Takayun!!
>No problem, I will handle this.
\And don't call me Takayun.
>I see, so you are Jannu, right?

\I heard of your body that makes you lose in every fight.
>Hmpf…

>Do you think I would neglect my weak point forever?
\I won't be defeated by anyone anymore.
>No matter how BIG of an enemy you may be!!

:stare
>What an convenient statement.
>How cheap! That was cheep, Jannu-san!!

>Is that so, I don't care. Bring it on!
>You have some confidence…

39.
<Hah!!

<Jannu made the first move!!

40.
<Don't tell me this is really becoming a battle manga……
<What⁉

~Eh… Will you wait a moment please?
~Uh, uhm, yeah…

>Huh?

>Hey, you.
>Hh?

41.
>Please arm wrestle with me.

>Eh…?
\Okay…

>Ready…

<Go!!

42.
>Wha… She picked such a weak looking kid and still lost…
>Didn't she say that she overcame her weakness?
>……

>I heard that you were weak…
*Hhm
\But to this extend…

<HEEEY, Doctor!!
<What the hell did you……

:shut #sound of the door closing fast and loud
<Where did she…

43.
>Well, Jannu-sama.

>It's gang rape time♥

44.
>I'm sorry, Jannu.
>I made you stronger in a another way.
#lit?: What I made stronger I made stronger?

>Well, for now…
*Camera ready!

>Fight as semen tank Jannu♥
<Oh my
<Oh my oh my.
^To be continued

45.
Thanks for purchasing this work.

This is the second work of this series, if you haven't read Chapter 1, please read it!

This time I increased the color pages and let the second General take stage.
The next chapter will have more sex!

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00.
Penistic Hazard 3

01.
Can you
understand the previous plot in two pages?

We're right in the middle of a fight between the group “Tiamat”, who's goal is to use the Tin virus to grow a dick on every girl in the world making them futanaris,
*Making every girl grow a dick♥

and semen tank Jannu, who belongs to the hygiene institution “Marduk”, which is trying to prevent this.
<Don't call me semen tank!

This time her opponent is Hivarich-chan, one of the four leaders of Tiamat.
*I'm growing you a dick.
*Or do you need tits and a pussy?
Her virus can even turn boys into futanaris.

“Marduk” can create vaccine and cure from the first-carrier virus of the four leaders, so…
>I need Hivarich-chan's dick juice!
…is what she has in mind.

02.
>Fill up my semen tank pussy completely with virus sperm♥

Will Jannu-chan be able to squeeze out Hivarich's semen in the end?
>What the…
If you don't fully understand the current situation, please read chapter 2.

03.
Penistic Hazard 3
Noujiru

04.
>Your penis is…
>Haa
>Haa
>so big and majestic.

>Is that so?
\But doesn't it feel bad inside you if it's so big……?
>No, I love it♥
>Well, I love your big dick too……♥

>Ehehe, that makes me happy♥

>Hey, how about we peel each others skin♥
>Y-Yeah♥

>Ah…♥
>Mh…♥

05.
>It makes me so excited…
\to touch someone else's dick♥

>Woah♥ It became even bigger♥
\The tin virus is amazing♥

<But peeling the skin is scary, right?
<I'm not sure if I can do it well…
>So you're still scared, Takatsune-kun?
\Well…

>I'm shuckin you dick
\Eashy peeling when shlimy♥
:>smooch
:>pull #no idea whatsoever
:>pull
:>kiss

>Right, I'll do that too♥
>Licking and peeling♥

06.
<Phua

<Hee…

>We peeled it…♥
\It's all glossy and beautiful♥
>Yeah, really♥
>Polished just like a gem♥

>Hehehe, so you peeled your skins♥
>Good work you two.
>Ah……
>You already finished peeling, Koukoku-san.
>You're quick…

07.
>It's easy because my dick isn't so big…
>Ah♥

>You two have lots of dick cheese on it.
>Huh?… Dick cheese?

>No wonder it's such a huge load with such big dicks.
>I'm going to lick it clean for you♥
>But isn't it too dirty to put in your mouth?

>Ah…
>It's fine, the big sisters seemed to enjoy eating mine♥
:>Ah
:>lick lick
>Uha…

08.
>Uwa♥ Looks like this dirty cheese is tasting good~♥
~Hah (x4)
:>suck
:>gulp
>You're amazing, Koukoku-san♥

<Ah♥
<I'm cumming♥
~Hah (x4)
<I'm cumming,
\while you're cleaning my dick♥

<Ah♥
<Hyaa♥
>Geez♥

\Spurting out while I clean them,
>these are nasty dicks☆

09.
~Ahm♥
>Bad dicks have to do this♥
#not really sure why
<Hyau♥

<Mh
>Hehehe, the dicks are having sex with each other♥
<Mh
<Ah♥
<Ah
<Hah
<Hah

<Hah
>Aaah…♥ This is great, do more and more perverted stuff.
<Hah
>Show me how you indulge in sex♥

>I can fap to this♥
<I'm already cumming.
\Cumming♥

10.
<Ah♥
<It's cumming♥
<Cumming

<My dick's cumming♥

<I'm cumming by watching my students having sex♥

<We're coming in succession♥
<It's incredible♥
<It feels so good♥
<These dicks are the best♥

11.
>Hehe… If so many people ejaculate, the smell of semen gets intense♥
>What a pleasant smell…♥

>Don't you think so too, Jannu?
>I don't care about the smell of semen……

>Is that so…?
>How come you're pussy's drooling then…♥
<What……

12.
>Don't you want my dick right now?
\Your face looks like you can't wait to lick it♥
<Haa…
<Haa…

~I… want……♥

>No way! Don't think I'm as stupid as General Belbuck.
>I'm not going to fill you up with first-carrier virus sperm♥
>Auuu……

>Koukoku-chan♥

>What is it?
>I want you to give this girl lots of semen.

13.
>Please fill up this nasty asshole♥
>B-, but…

>Her asshole?
>Is it okay to stick my dick inside that?

>Yes, it's all right♥
\Come here♥
<Hiuu♥

>Once you become an adult, this hole isn't only for shitting♥
<Mh♥
<Hih♥
>It's also a hole to stick you dick inside♥

<Hahii♥
<Don't spread my asshole…

14.
>I see. Becoming an adult is great♥
>I'd rather say,
>becoming an adult means becoming a pervert.

<Au……

\Ahahaha
:<bulg # no idea
:<bulg

<Aaah♥

>Wow♥
\I wouldn't have thought that assholes could feel so good.
>You're doing great. Dig yourself deeper in♥
<Oho♥
<Ohoo♥

15.
<So good, I'm already cumming!
<My dick is already cumming.

>More, more♥
>Give me more of these loli semen♥

>I see♥

>Her switch has finally flipped♥
>Well… it's only just starting, Jannu.

<Cumming♥
<Ahah♥

16.
<I can't stop cumming.
<I think I'll run dry~

<Lots of warm semen♥
<are getting shot into my belly♥

~I'm at my limit…
~No more semen coming out…

>So this is Jannu's ability……
\She can forcibly make you cum and squeeze out the last bit of her partner's sex drive……
~Hah
~Hah
>But there has to be some limit…

\This isn't enough to scare me.

<Yuna! Mayano!
<Now it's your turn to rape her!
<!!

17.
<Did you hear it⁉ In the third chapter we finally got called by our names!!
^Mayano
>Yeah!
>We should buy a celebration cake on our way home!
^Yuna
<Is that so? Congrats I guess……

>Well then, even though it's a bit arrogant, me, YUNA,
>this very YUNA, will have the honor to rape Jannu's pussy!
>Okay…

\I'm going to fill her womb with my semen…
~No……

>Huh……?

18.
>So you want……
>to rape me……?

<Huh……⁉

<Mh⁉

>J-… Jan-nu……?
>Why… How… So quick……

19.
>Phua♥

>Ah…
>Aahh…♥

>You have such a tasty looking dick♥
\Do you want to stick it inside my pussy?
>Yeah……♥

>I'm sorry,
\but my pussy is exclusively for first-carrier sperm♥

>Hgh……⁉

20.
>But… you still can use my ass pussy or my mouth pussy…
>Which do you prefer?

>Your ass pussy♥
>I want to fill up you ass♥

>Well, then get on your back♥
>Yes♥
>Ugh……

>Don't be anxious, Mayano-chan.

>I'm going to squeeze you dry next.
>Just wait a moment♥

~Ah, did she just became strong?
>…It looks like that…
\Is that what she meant by overcoming her weakness…

21.
>It looks like due to the sex she had before, her pheromones got stronger,
>Hehe… I'm going in♥
>and at the same time her fighting power also increased…
\This way she can easier get hold of first-carrier virus…
>Aah… I'm so happy♥

~So, if this continues…
>She will certainly squeeze out your semen…

>Leave this to me,
>and escape from here!
<U-Understood!

22.
~Khu……
~It's not opening……

>Hah
>Hah
~Neither does this door……
>Just like this, Jannu♥

<Damn! I can't get out!!
>This door too.
>The key is stuck in from the other side…

~What shall we do⁉
~I don't know…
<Teacher♥
<Teacher♥
>You two are great♥
<Haa…♥ I love you, Teacher…♥
~Haa
~Haa

23.
>Aha♥ You're hitting my back♥
<Hah
<Hah
>How is my ass pussy? Does it feel good?
:~smack
:~smack
<Cumming♥
<Cumming♥

<Yeah
<It's great, your ass pussy is great♥
\My dick is cumming♥

>Aha♥ I can feel warm milk inside my belly♥
\Don't hold yourself back, spurt it all out♥
:<pour
:<pour
<Ah♥
<Aaah♥

24.
~Hahi……
~I, came too much…

>My belly is bulging♥
>It's getting filled out with everybody's semen.

>Here I come…
>Eh……?

25.
<Eak⁉

>Ahaha♥ How do you like this? This is reverse bukkake♥
>I always wanted to try this out♥

~My semen and the loli semen……
~Haah
~Haah
~And something else mixed in.

>Ah, is there shit mixed in?
>Well, it's a home-made mix, give it a taste♥

26.
>Ehehe~♥
>Sorry for keeping you waiting.

>Now is your turn,
>General Hivarich♥

>I'm looking forward♥
\To having you semen inside my womb.
>Because I'm a semen tank,

\I can't calm down until my belly is full with semen♥

27.
<Mayano!

<Hey…
<Ah♥
<Ah♥
<What are you doing, Mayano⁉
*Save me at once!

~I-I'm sorry, Takayun……
~To be honest…

<Shit,
<I have a fetish for scat play♥
<Jannu's shit♥
<What⁉ You're going for that in such a situation⁉

28.
>So sad~ Looks like you have no allies left.
*Ehe~♥
~U…gh…

>You're boobs are big and cute, Hivarich-chan~♥
>Ah

>Thanks for the meal♥

<Ah♥
<Ah♥
>Mh… Loli boobs are so tender♥ Mhph

29.
:<grind♥
:<grind♥

<Noo
<Don't grind with your teeth☆

>But your dick got big♥
#slurred

~Ah, it's of no use…
~Haa♥
~Haa♥
~I can't calm down from this erection anymore.

~My dick is begging to cum.
~I can see it as it can't stop drooling……

>Jannu……

30.
>Yes, please♥
#alt: At your service♥
>This pussy exists for your dick, Hivarich-chan♥

~Aaah… pussy…
~Jannu's pussy♥

31.
<Jannu♥
<Aahh♥

<How can this feel so good♥
<This is Jannu's inside……♥

<Even though it's a loli dick,
<it's big and fat and amazing♥

<Such a pussy is foul play…
<Hah
<Hahh
<I'm already cumming, I'm cumming!

32.
<Khi
<My dick
<is cumming.

<More♥ More♥
<Fill me up until the sperm overflows♥
<Let everything out!

*Ah…
<Don't stop, don't stop!
<Somebody
<Please…

33.
<Can somebody please stop this!!
<More♥
<I love sperm so much♥

<Huh⁉

34.
>Hi!
<G-General Belbuck⁉

>Phew… The SOS radio device worked…
#lit: was just in time
>But how come Belbuck-sama is here…

>Get moving, I'm here to pick you up.
<Y-Yes!!

<Hey, wait, wait a moment. I'm still not satisfied…

<Ah, what? My strength is……

35.
>Don't overuse your new body.
#lit: unaccustomed body
>Until next time, Jannu.

<You didn't have to come…
#lit: I didn't need to be saved
>Don't act strong.
>You were at the point of entering post-coital clarity.

\We can only fulfill our desires if we preserve our sex drive.
#lit: "preserve our ego" instead of "fulfill our desires"
>……

~You're not the person to say that…

36.
>S-She…
>came to rescue me even though she hasn't fully recovered yet…

>Ugh…

<Uwaah, I was so afraid!!
<Yeah, let's head back quickly to the hideout……

>Damn… General Belbuck rescued her while I had my masturbation aftertaste.
>I should have restrained myself some more…

<But more important, Jannu……⁉
<She was going on a rampage before……

37.
>My dick is incredible, right?
>Ha………
>Does it taste good, Onee-chan?
>Hahahee……
>Can I put it inside?
>Say, can I?

>Phew… lucky nothing happened……
<Nothing happened my ass!!

38.
>Can we cure these kids?
*Ah
*Ugh
*Eh
>Yeah, no problem.

>I'm also taking care of their memories.
>When they look into the flash of this pen, their memory will……
>I've seen this in a movie…

>Well, contact the headquarter and get them transported there……

>Damn it, looks like they are going return these kids to their former selves…
>What a waste. I wanted to have much more sex with them…
\There's no helping it…

>In this situation, I have to fight them with my virus-strengthened body……

39.
:>penetrating #fill in correct English sfx please
>Huh?

>My my, even though you had escaped,
\you came back in worry for your students?

>Definitely not.
\You just came to snatch these kids away with you new strength.
~That's not it.

~It's my fault that these kids became like this.
~That's why I thought it was up to me to save them……
~But… I'm too weak…

40.
>The moment Tiamat started to flee……
>you left the students behind and ran away by yourself, didn't you?
:whisper
~No, I wanted to call for help……
:whisper

>So? Who did you bring with you?
:murmur…
~But suddenly my legs started to hurt… You see…

>Well, whatever.
>We're going to cure you too…
~Ah, but…

~I think it's better if I stay like this…
~So that I won't forget my mistakes.
\I want to overcome the sexual desires I got due to the virus…

>If I were to be cured, I'd become weak again.
>That way I couldn't save my students.

>I want to save the young people,
>who carry the future on their shoulders, with my own hands……!

41.
<You liar!!
<You just want to stay a futanari!!
~Eh, no, I'm serious…

>You know, as you had sexual intercourse with your students, there's no way for you to continue as a teacher.
>But I can introduce you to another job where you can save your students.
\I could need some helping hands!

>In this spirit, I'm looking forward to working with you, semen tank number two♥
>Huh?
>Huh?
^To be continued

42.
<This dick is getting so lively even though I'm hurting it with a whip.
<Such a perverted dick. I have to make it spurt and cum as soon as possible!!
~Haah♥
~Haah♥

Thank you for purchasing “Penistic Hazard 3”.

As this is a continuation of the last chapter, this time I didn't need to introduce new characters and could draw more sex scenes.

The next time, I think I'm going to introduce the fourth leader of Tiamat, but I haven't sorted my ideas yet, so I can't tell when the next chapter will be released…
I'll try to buy some time with releasing some hentai picture books in the meantime.

I hope for you continued support in Noujiru Teishokuya.

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00.
Penistic Hazard 4

01.
Penistic Hazard 4

Noujiru

02.
>Hehe… Looks like you take quite a liking in the dick you hated so much before, don't you?
>But, you can see, that was only because before I didn't know what an amazing thing a penis is……♥

>If you think so, you should give your own dick some love too♥
>I'm going to watch you, so please show me some good masturbation.
#lit: I am going to watch you "for you"
>Ehehe… I wonder if I can do it well…

>Ehm, hello?
>Huh?

03.
>Eh… It's me, Kobori, from the hygiene institution Marduk…
>I came to collect the semen.
*Ehehe
>Wait a minute!

*Hmmm
>I guess you'll get your semen in the end like always,
\but how about you act a little like the situation demands?
>Eh… Ehem… I-I'm not good with violence……
#my guess is that Tiamat has giving up fighting when Marduk appears

>Then what about Jannu?
>Sempai's busy with another task, so today it's me alone again…

>…Damn it. I haven't seen Jannu for nearly a month…
>Is she avoiding me?

>Haa… It seems like I'm getting frustrated because I wasn't able to cum on Jannu for quite a while…
\I can help myself, I want to plunge my dick into her pussy so much…

04.
>Well, then let's head back to the hideout, Mayano………⁉
<You're already doing it⁉
*Hah
*Hah
<Haa
<Haa

<S-Sorry, General Belbuck……
<I became incredibly horny when I saw this girl……

>It's true. Her smell drives my sexual desire insane♥
>Come on, I'll let out lots of semen, suck on properly.

>Yeeesh♥ Pleash rape mee all!
#皆さん、私を犯してください。
>More, more, make me dirty♥
#もっともっと 汚してください ??

05.
>I guess it's since the time I entered post-coital clarity……
>That I can keep my self control, even in front of someone who's releasing such strong pheromones.
*Haah
*Haah
*Hah
*Ah
*Aaah♥

>Even though my penis is rock hard,
>I'm still fully aware of my responsibilities as a General…
#alt: role as a General, being a General

>Hehe…
>Then let's enjoy some masturbation
>until Mayano finishes.

~Haa♥
~Haa♥

06.
<What the hell is this supposed to be⁉
<There's no first-carrier semen inside!!

~But, I gave it my best…
:tremble
:tremble
<Don't give me your lies!!
<You were just engulfed in sex!!
~Ugh……

>You're lacking the awareness of what it means to be a professional semen tank.
#probably meant as: You're not taking this serious enough
>Don't you think so, Jannu⁉
>What do you mean by professional semen tank?

<You should learn by following first carrier hunter Jannu!
~Y-Yes Sir!
~I can feel no pride…
#lit: I'm not happy at all
#(as she doesn't want be a semen tank)

>Here Doctor, I filled it out.
>Ah, good.

07.
>…Okay, take this with you when you go to the physical examination tomorrow.
>Yes…

>But, is it really all right to have a physical examination with this remodelled body?
>And is it really necessary to go to a hospital…

>Of course it is. Your body is fundamentally the same a that of a normal person.
>Only a bit improved for sex.
~Instead of checking for illnesses, I'd rather have that cured…
#maybe "reverted" sounds better than "cured"? "Cured" is the literal translation though

>Which hospital is it?
>The “Women's Mind and Affection Hospital”.
#Name's kanjis: Woman + Mind/Heart + Rescue + Love/Affection
>Women's mind and affection…

~Ah, it's the one with the futanari depa……… Ah………
>Will you be quiet for a moment?
*Huh?
<What's that about a futanari department⁉

>It's just a women's clinic.
*It's so embarrassing.
*See, I'm a futanari too.
>They are focusing on girls who feel embarrassed after becoming futanaris.

>So you can rest easy there.
~Actually I'm more nervous now……
*Well, let's have a little palpation.
*Yes♥

08.
^The day of the physical examination
@Women's Mind and Affection Hospital

>Hey, do you see that girl?…
>Haa
>Haa
>Yeah…

>She's making me so horny…
>I want to have sex with her.

>Like I feared… Everyone's reacting to my pheromones…
>The Doctor must've known this……

09.
>I can understand that we have to change clothes here……
>But why can't I keep on my underwear?
>Why do I have to walk around without panties?

>……Aah, damn it…

>I'm getting looks from the futanaris……

>When they look at me so indecently…
>Of course I'm getting turned on too.

>It's because recently my sole partner is General Hivarich,
*Just let out as much as you can.
#like: it's okay if you do a bad job, just try your best
*Uh
*Uuh…
>that I built up a bit of frustration.

>Haa…
>I wonder what General Belbuck is doing……

10.
<What⁉
<Does that mean I am longing for General Belbuck……!!
>Dear customer, for the physical examination, this way please.

>Let's get it over with quickly……
>Phew, am I in time?…
#alt: did I made it (in time)?

<Haa⁉

<General Belbuck⁉
<Ja-, Jannu⁉

11.
<Why are you here⁉
<Eh, no, it's just…
>I'm here because our company has a policy that requires all staff to take physical examinations…
<Are you serious?

~In the first place, it's not a company but a terror organization.
~You people are like germs that are actively spreading a disease!
<You can't compare people to germs……
#"pathogenic bacteria"
<You're just the same!!
#alt: But you're doing just the same thing!!
#alt: But that's what you are!!

<If it comes to this, I'm going to have to kick you out by force!!
>You're weak as always…
>Eh, excuse me, you two…
>Please don't fight inside the hospital.

12.
>I'm Shiyama and in charge of both of you!
>I'm going to explain to you our physical examination procedure……
<Hey, wait a moment⁉
@Shiyama

<Why don't you change first? #your clothes / get dressed
>Ah, you want to exchange me?
#The author is trying to create a Manzai joke (double act comedy with taking at cross-purposes) stretching to the bottom of this page. Either I'm missing something, or the joke is not working well. Jannu is complaining about Shiyama being naked, but Shiyama overhears that. I tried my best to transport it to English.
#lit: "Why naked?" and "Ah, change?"
*Am I not good enough?…
#alt: I can't do that on my own
<That's not it!!

>Thank God. I have to say, nobody wanted to have me exchanged before…
>On the contrary, I actually have some repeat customers…
<No, that's not what I was talking about!!

>So you can select your doctor now on physical examinations?
*I didn't know…
<That's not the point!!
\This is too stupid for me, I'm getting tired!!
#突っ込ますな = 突っ込ますとだめだ

13.
>I'm leaving!
>I have to punch the Doctor or I can't calm down!
>Eh?
\Hey!
<No, please!!

<I knew it, I'm not good enough.
~Huh? No, that's not the point……
<I'm nothing compared to you two…
#I don't get why she uses the comparison. "Not good enough FOR you" would sound better imho, but it's "nothing compared to you".
~No, that's not the case!

>Jannu, have the examination.
>You're hurting Shiyama-san's feelings.
*Oh
*W-W-Why am I the bad guy now?…
*Oooh

>…Is this a real physical examination?
@Special Medical Examination Room
>Y-Yes of course! We're trying to detect potential illnesses as early as possible!

~Okay, I'll participate…
*sigh
*good
*good
~Great! I'm glad!
~Well then, this way please!

14.
>Phew, you saved me. I was afraid to go alone.
<So you made me the culprit for your own gain!
*What⁉

>Hehe… My bad. It's because I haven't met you for so long.
>I was so happy that I just had to tease you.

>Is that so?
#alt: What's that supposed to mean?
>I'm letting it slip this time.
\We're supposed to be mutual enemies, you know…

>Well, we're going to start with the body measurements.
\First we'll record your size and weight, so please remove all clothes~♥
*Whaaat⁉
<We have to get naked⁉

15.
<Yes, I won against Jannu!!
<This was obvious in the first place!
>Ahaha, you're making this a match?
\Well, next is your weight!

^Measuring…

>……
>It's because of your boobs!
>It's just because they're so big, nothing more!
*Come on
>Suzumoto-san's overwhelming victory!
*No evil intention

16.
>Why can't we at least wear underwear……
>Ah, wait a moment please.
>Don't dress yet.

>In this hospital we have some special measurements and further examinations
>that we want you to take♥

>Special…?

17.
@Shiyama
>Wow, this is astonishing…♥
>My own penis is phimotic, short, and small, so such a big and healthy penis in full erection has my full admiration♥

>Hey… look at me, Jannu.
>It's been a long time, right? Seeing my erect penis♥

>Being seen by Jannu after such a long time makes it excited.
\How about you, would you want to have my semen, Jannu?
~Eh… Yeah…

>Well, would one ejaculation be all right?
>Erect like this it would interfere with the following examinations, right?
>Ah, indeed, that's right.

18.
>I'm going to fill out the progress report in the office, you can ejaculate in the meantime!
>Have fun♥
>Sorry for the trouble.

<Fapping while being watched by Jannu♥
<See, it's twitching like it wants to cum immediately♥
\I'm looking forward to ejecting some thick sticky fluid♥
*Stare
>Wow……

19.
>Aahh, General Belbuck's dick really looks tasty…
>Other people's dicks can't compare to it.
\I'm really looking forward to the semen that come out this amazing dick…

>Come, you also waited for this, Jannu.
#lit: I kept you waiting
>Move here in front of my dick and receive a huge load of semen.

>I'm so lucky that I can cover Jannu with my semen today.
~Don't say that, it's embarrassing…

>It's been so long. Finally I'm getting semen from the General♥
~Haa
~Haa
>I'm so excited♥

20.
>Cumming♥
>Aaah♥

>Incredible… It's been so long…♥
>Since I got covered by so much semen♥

^That's it…
^This satisfying feeling……

21.
^The long missed taste of General Belbuck's semen……
^I'm getting totally horny…

^Jannu's eating my semen wholeheartedly…
\Why does she look so lovely…♥

^Did I really…
^long so much for General Belbuck…

^I can't contain my feelings anymore.
^I will…

>Belbuck…
>Jannu……

22.
>Mhh………♥
>Mhh………♥

<Ahm♥

~Haa… ah… Belbuck
>Huhu… What a shameful girl you are, to become so wet.
~But, I…

>How is it, Jannu?
>Isn't it nice to get fingered from time to time?

>Yes, so nice…
>Uhm… You're so cute when you're honest, Jannu♥
>I too sometimes put my dick aside and finger my pussy.

23.
>You're ignoring your dick while masturbating……?
>Yes… If I do this, my dick begs to get touched and becomes even more sensitive.
>But I don't give in to that temptation and continue tormenting only my pussy…

<Ah
<Aah♥
>Finally, my dick will cum, urged by the pleasant sensations of my pussy.

>This feeling is so strong…
>it can satisfy even me by just one ejaculation.

>And on the top of that, the intense smell of my semen…
~Ah… Ah…
~Ahye…♥
>I can feel ecstasy during the aftertaste of my ejaculation.

24.
>That sounds great. Those semen must be so tasty.
>Hehe, you bet.

>But to be honest, up to now, I had the experience only five times.
\Because usually my hand unconsciously reaches for my dick.

>But if you wished for it…
>I would make that feast for you anytime.

>Really?
\We could make a lot of vaccine from that.
>Aahh, right…

>…So this offer only stands……
>If you become my lover.

25.
>Your…
>Lover……?

>What are you talking about?
>You know we're both girls……

>It's like you say.
\It's frustrating that we're both girls…
>Because we can't actually make children with my dick…

>It produces semen, but no sperm.
>Its only use is to spread the virus and to feel good…

>But even that considered, you still love my dick, right?
>Well, I wouldn't call it love……

26.
>When you're drooling like this…
\then there's no other explanation than that you want my dick.
~Ah…m

~But, you know…
~This is because my body was modified……

>Be it as it may.
>But when I can enjoy your smell,
\and hear your cute voice, I'm just happy.

<Hyau, Belbuck, not there
<If you lick at that spot, I will cum……
<Aaah, Jannu. You're pussy juice is so delicious.

27.
<I'm cumming, cumming
<I'm cumming during our physical examination♥

<Cumming

28.
>What do you think, Director?
>Hmm, right…
\It's still too early. She can't shake off the influence of the pheromones yet.

>But she has “potential”……
>…I'd say.

>So shall I let them go home…?
#lit: Well, these two, like this…
>No, wait……

>Maybe better, you could extend the physical examination.
>Under the right circumstances we can proceed even further.

29.
>Your wish is my command……
>General Newgate……

30.
>Well, I'm going to fill you up here too.
>Yeah…

>But don't cum too much.
>I don't want you to enter post-coital clarity again…

>Haha…
>I can restrain myself enough now…

^We didn't realize it at that time.
^Neither did Tiamat and Marduk.
#lit: no relation had Tiamat and Marduk.
^An experiment was about to take place that was beyond allies and foes…

31.
>Uhuhu, I found it♥
>My sister's used penis cover♥

>No matter how much I see it, it's still huge.
>So unfair Onee-san, we are twins!

>Aahh…
:>sniff sniff
>The aromatic smell of my sisters pee and semen mix…♥

>I can climax only by smelling this.
>Uncountable times♥

>Let's just have a small tasting…
:blink
#sfx for noticing something, what is used in English?

32.
^…What? Why do I have this uneasy feeling suddenly?……
^I can sense that something bad is happening……
>C-Counselor Belbuck?

^Onee-san
^To be continued

33.
Counselor Belbuck's story

34.
^Counselor Belbuck is a first carrier of the virus, but she doesn't go outside to spread it.
>Looks like my dick is lively today again.
*Hua
^Her main tasks are planning operations and helping her big sister overcoming her post-coital clarity.
>Should I fap before starting work?♥
^Due to this, her daily routing starts with enjoying a relaxed morning masturbation.

35.
^First she starts with a semen intake that also serves as part of her breakfast♥
^She's stroking her penis, imagining getting showered in semen by her beloved sister.
^For her, masturbation is having imaginary sex with her twin sister.
^Onee-sa~n, please treat me well today again♥

36.
^“Aaaahh. Onee-san's semen♥ Spurt them on me. This feels so good♥ More, more please♥”
^The first ejaculation in the morning is the thickest and her favorite♥ It's like the thickness of her semen is related to the deepness of their love.
\“Haaaa……♥ Such thick semen, you must really love me a lot, Onee-san……♥”
<I can feel your love, Onee-san♥
<Onee-san, Nee-saaaan♥

37.
^Next follows showing each other with a mirror♥
>Good morning, Onee-san♥
^“Huhu You're so cute this morning, Onee-san♥ I love it when you use semen as make-up♥”
^Seeing herself stroking her penis and imagining her sister, her penis gets even more lively.
^“Come, Onee-san, use me as jack-off material as always and fully stroke your dick♥”

38.
^Her mirror masturbation play already moved up to addiction level.
*Ah
^“Ha… Huu… Onee-san's masturbation is too good, I can't stop my hands♥”
^Once she nearly got into post-coital clarity and got reprehended by the staff leader…
^“I'm sorry, Onee-san… I can't go further than this… Argh, I wanted to continue showing you how I spurt, Onee-san…”

39.
^How it all began.
^When her sister got infected by the virus and lost all of her self control, she started to use the person closest to her, her little sister, as an outlet for her sexual desires.
^Getting pressed down by an unbelievable strong force, she got her first time snatched away by her big sister.
^Initially she entered a state of despair, and continued to get raped by her sister every day.
<Ah, my little sister's pussy is the best♥
\Come on, you should enjoy this too!
>Onee-san, please stop…
>Nee-san…

40.
^But then she saw how much effort her sister put into her role as general and realized that she couldn't stop thinking about penises.
^Before she knew it, she had fallen in love with her sister, and reserved a special place inside her heart for her, made her the one and only being that she needed.
^“Onee-san…… We will be together until we die, right?………”
>Good work today, Onee-san♥
#lit: Aneki, but we have already enough Japanese terms
>I'm going to massage your dick with mine♥
>Yes, please♥

41.
^As she was always close to her sister, the leader decided to make her a first carrier too and gave her the counselor position.
^Nowadays she's spending her days masturbating to her sister and from time to time has real sex with her…
^But what if these happy days were to come to an end…

42.
<I'm back! Let's continue with the stool and urine analysis!!
@Shiyama
<Whaat⁉

Thank you for purchasing “Penistic Hazard 4”.

It took me more than a year from the last issue… uhm… Well anyway, I'll continue drawing. Thank you for your support!

June, 2016
Noujiru Teishokuya

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It's not a proper proofreading, but I read your Penistic Hazard translations and thought it was straightforward and understandable.

I noticed one typo: in chapter 4, page 17 "exited" should be "excited".
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QUOTE(iezxumdi @ Nov 17 2021, 00:59) *

It's not a proper proofreading, but I read your Penistic Hazard translations and thought it was straightforward and understandable.

I noticed one typo: in chapter 4, page 17 "exited" should be "excited".

Thanks, I'm happy to hear that (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
Hope I get them finished soon.
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Penistic Hazard 5
https://e-hentai.org/g/1868000/2dee14ce4a/
Not proofread yet


01.
Penistic Hazard 5

02.
Highlight 1

03.
Highlight 2

04.
Penistic Hazard 5

Noujiru

05.
The plot from last time
*Let's take the medical examination!

^Jannu went to the hospital to take a medical examination…

^But it turned out that her enemy, General Belbuck, was about to take the same examination.
*Wha
*Whoa

^Then she realized how much she was graving for the General's dick.
*Ah♥
*Ah♥
^And in the end they had sex like always.
*End of the flashback

>I'm back! Sorry for keeping you waiting!
>Let's continue with the medical examination!

06.
>Ah, okay.

<Don't “okay” me!

<What happened to your belly⁉
~Ehm, that is……

<I've just done my work as a professional.
*Sorry!
<How can you be proud about that⁉

>Dammit!
>Suzuki-san's probably empty after this load……

07.
>You worked hard~
>Good job~♥

>Y-You didn't enter post-coital clarity?
>How's that possible if you let out so much……
*The strongest!

>Well, whatever. I wonder what we shall do about this belly.
*Hmmm
~This is embarrassing…
*Ugh~
~Usually someone else takes care of this for me…
#as in: not you

08.
>Looks like you're in trouble?
<Heh⁉ Who are you⁉

<D-Doctor⁉
*My my
>I'm happy that you're dedicated to your work, but you have to know the right time and place, Jannu-chan♥

>Here, come with me. #there should be a better filler word than "here"
<Huh⁉

>Please wait a moment. We'll be done quickly.
>Eh, hey…
<Doctor, slow down…

<Yes
<Ah♥
<Aa
<Ah
*Uhh?
~What is she doing to her……?

09.
~Sorry for the wait……
+She returned to her usual body…

~Ah, ehm, are you all right…⁉
~You look pretty worn out…
~No, ehm, I'm fine…

~I just carried out my job as a semen tank…
*Ha, hahaha
<The willpower of a professional⁉

>I didn't expect less from Jannu.
#alt: That's Jannu for you…
*Yes…
>Well then, shall we continue with the medical examination?
>Yeah, right…
>There's no match to this…
#alt: Nobody will believe me this…
*And still her erection didn't calm down…

10.
>This was a big catch~♪
>To think that General Belbuck would be here, great luck~

>My my… To think ›you‹ would come here.
#alt: you would go out
>Hugh!

>You think you can do whatever you want in my hospital?
>It's been a while, Doctor Kamiho♥

>I see I see… What an honor to have the Director here in person.
>Glad to see you haven't changed, General Newgate.
>Likewise.
>I see you're still active in unorthodox activities.

11.
>You have some courage. To send Jannu to this hospital, knowing that it's mine.
>So I guess your goal must be my virus?

>Why would you think so? #just some denial
>I honestly trust in the medical care of this facility.

>I see… I'll keep this direct praise in mind.
>But you know…

>As a member of “Tiamat”, I can't overlook the contents of that bag.
>My my…

>Are you sure? Even if you were trying to stop me,
>you know that your ability has no effect on me.
\Do you really want to start a fight inside a hospital?

12.
<Hnyua⁉

>You're weak for surprise attacks as always.
>Let out your cute voice♥

\In the past, I licked you often like this.
>Remember it was me who awakened your lesbianism… Hehe…

13.
>Well… Doctor Kamiho,
>since you're already here, let me show you around.

>Let me present to you treatment that my hospital takes pride in…
>Experience the awesomeness of the T-virus…!

14.
~Eh, actually…
~Isn't this supposed to be the blood examination……?

#continues with panel below, editor: please add an arrow between the panels
>Yes it is~
>That's why I need to sterilize and anesthetize the spot.

>Well then…
>Let's take some blood~♥

>Hamu……
~Ah…………

~Ah… ah… Are you really sucking my blood…?
~Somehow… it feels… good…

<Hiuuh⁉

15.
>Yes, you have great tits!
>No signs of breast cancer.

>Let me lick Jannu's blood too…
>Here please, the wound will close soon, hurry up!
>Belbuck…

>Haaa… Your skin is so smooth Jannu, I can't help myself…
>Belbuck too…

>Well, I'm going to extract Suzuki-san's blood too♥
>Yeah…

>Despite the anaesthesia effects, I can still finger her pussy♥
<Hiuh♥

16.
>Is this really part of the medical examination?
>Usually you use some device for analyzing the blood, don't you?

>We health examiners doesn't need any devices.
>We can quantify your health through palpation and body fluid intake.

>Our accuracy is better than any machine!
>This is the special treatment that our director has invented!

>Of course it's not only medical examinations. We have cured many patients with issues that couldn't be treated by conventional methods.
>Our director doesn't appear in public a lot, but she's really an incredible person!

>Indeed, she is something special…
>It's hard to believe that she's essentially on the same level as me…
#本来 can mean essentially or originally, and the sentence contains no tense, so it could maybe also mean "was originally at the same level". I use level instead of rank, because it is less militaristic and thus more ambiguous, which will better justify the next dialog

>On the same level? You mean, you know the director of this hospital, Belbuck?
<Ah!
\Aaah! Through all the times we met here, we got on good terms!

17.
Highlight 2

18.
>So, how's the taste of my pee?

>There's semen protein inside, but no hidden blood or sugar!
#it's called "occult blood", which means non-visible blood, but I've never heard of that term and I guess a lot of people have neither.
\It's clean pee that got properly filtered by your kidneys♥
>I-I see…
*That's all?

>Come, next is Jannu's turn♥
<Ugh…!

~Guess I can't skip the urinalysis.
~S-So, what do I have to do exactly?

19.
>To be able to taste Jannu's pee……
>Today is really my lucky day…♥
>Oohh. You're in high spirits, Suzuki-san.
>I can't let myself be beaten!

>Why does Belbuck participate too~…
>I'm too nervous to pee.

20.
>What? Just imagine I'm your toilet♥
>Spurt it all over me♥
>Yes. A pee loving perverted toilet♥
>Please be quick and give us our reward♥
>Ehm, is this seriously a real urinalysis?

~Well, whatever…
~H-Here I come?

~Uh………mh…

~Hah
~Hah
~This is the first time I'm getting peed on by somebody other than my sister……♥

>I never felt so exited for a urinalysis.
~Hah
~Hah
>H-Hurry up♥

<Mhhh……

21.
~Aahh… So warm and nice…♥

>This is good pee♥ Like Suzuki-san's, really healthy pee♥
>It's best quality, it would satisfy anybody who tastes it.
<Mhh……

~This is great, Jannu. It's like you're purifying my dick……♥
~It tastes a little bit different than my sister's, but it's great too.

>If you get so excited by my pee……
>I'm also getting somewhat happy…♥

>This must be holy water, Jannu…♥
>With every gulp I take, my sexual desire rises
#漲る = みなぎる

22.
~In return, I'll cover you with the semen you love……♥
\Jannu…♥
~Belbuck…♥

~I can clearly feel the love between you two…
~As a medical examiner, I'm happy to be involved in your physical examination♥

23.
>Now let's do the final checkup!
>Let's make sure not to overlook any disease that could stand in the way of your love!

<Wha……⁉
<She has two… dicks…
And they are huge♥

>Hehe… Don't be surprised yet♥
\Would you be so kind to move to the medical bench.

24.
>Hehe… What a nice view♥
*Haa… #next to Belbuck's head
*Haa…
>Nothing matches the sight of two pussies aligned♥

>How do you like this? This isn't just a double headed dick.
>Look……

25.
>I can control it like tentacles!

<Ah♥

<Ahaaa
<Such a fat dick inside me.

26.
<Yes♥
<I love this dick♥

~Aah… This raises the bar♥
~Haa
~Haa
~I have a feeling I'll be full of sperm soon♥

<That's exactly what I'll do. I'm going to…
*Hah
*Hah
<fill up your baby chamber with energetic sperm milk♥

27.
<Ahah♥

<Mhhh♥

>Uhuhu… Is it to your liking?

>How does it feel to get your wombs filled up with my semen?

28.
>So… As last step, I'll wash down your asses with my semen.
>Please endure, I'm going to reach every corner, no matter how deep.

<Haam♥

>Belbuck…♥
>Jannu…♥

29.
<I give you every last semen I can offer♥

30.
>Ghuah…

>Bwhaa…♥

~Aaah… The taste of semen……
~You're such a pervert Belbuck, to let semen come out of your mouth……♥

~Mh……
:>kiss…
~Mhh…♥
:>kiss…

31.
>……I see. No wonder this hospital is so popular.
>Everybody would like to come for such a medical examination.
>Well… we can offer this service only to a few patients.
\But it's still very profitable…
#lit: but you can't say it has no good flavor/skill/charm/profit

>More important, what are you planning to do with Jannu?
>Depending on your answer I have to instruct the government to take action against this facility…

>Isn't it obvious what happens next…?

>She will get a document with the results of the examination.
>Huh?……

32.
>Do not belittle me.
\I'm determined to fulfill my responsibilities as a doctor even now…
>I'm always putting the health of my patients before my obligation towards Tiamat.

>You know that with my “commander” ability I can freely handle the second carrier virus, do you?
>In this facility I'm training doctors with abilities close to mine in creating treatments and cures.
#lit: in helping with treatments and cures

>I see… So this is why you filed them up with semen…
\You turn the T-virus into nano-machines to do the examination…
\But I can't imagine a normal person would be able to receive such a load?

>No… Of course not… It actually works with small loads too.
Ehem

>Incredible…♥
<Ehi
<Ehi
<I never did an examination so intense.
>I must've been affected by Jannu's pheromones……
~Ah, Ah~……

33.
>Anyway, would you be so kind to take her back home with you?
\That's the reason I had you wait.
>Okay… So you're readily letting us go?

>I don't have any need to capture Jannu right now.
>On the contrary, this time that could be actually in your favor.

>What's that supposed to mean…?

34.
>All perfect, no disorders…
>…But we detected small vitamin and mineral shortages and signs of chronic fatigue, so we recommend to watch your daily diet and to not overwork yourself…
#PR: "to not" or "not to"?
>…Looks like they did a proper examination……

>Great results! With me, your health care is in good hands!
>It's not like you did the checkup…
>But speaking of that…

>As expected from my Jannu…
>Uh……

>This means we can engulf in sex without restraints.
~Belbuck…

35.
>Come, let's start the work!
>I'm going to fill you up with lots and lots of semen♥
~Eh, eh, we just did it in the morning…
~Hey,… Doctor……
~Have fun~

*Noooo~~
>To think that Belbuck would betray them~……

>But still, something feels off…
>I wonder why Tiamat is taking no action…

>Newgate…
+No! We can't release the virus into the wild!
+Huh? I thought you would approve of this…

36.
<This is still not complete! It's making males impotent and it cannot even produce babies!!
>But that should be enough as result. It wasn't meant for males anyway and the futanarization works……
>There are infinite possibilities for application at the current point.

<Even more the reason why we should focus on safety!
<If it would spread uncontrolled, mankind could crumble!

>It would be fate if it came to that.
>But I believe in the future of this Tin virus.

>………
>I see, so you share their opinion…?

>As Tiamat head of gene research……!!
>………

37.
<Hah♥
<Hah♥
<Mh♥
<Haa♥

>Nee-san♥
>Nee-san♥
\I'm going to spurt on you now♥ You get your beloved semen from your little sister♥

<Ahah♥

>As we're twins our semen taste alike♥
>Nee-san's semen♥
\Nee-san's seeeemen♥

~…No……

38.
<This is my sperm, not Nee-san's!!
*A #lot's of as, like a scream. Maybe use "argh"?
<Nee-san, why are you not coming back⁉
\Even though I'm waiting for you. What's the meaning of this⁉

~Everybody is getting in the way of our love.
\I can't let that happen…
~I can't allow that…!
~Never will I let that happen!!

~Ahaha… Yes… Why am I obeying their orders?
\I have to get back my sister……
~I'm going to kill everyone who stands between me and my sister…
#lit: who's stealing my sister
~Kill…
~Kill…!!

39.
Thank you for purchasing “Penistic Hazard 5”.

In the next issue, the main story will come to its final.

After that I think of creating a small issue that reflects each character a bit.

I regret the slow progression, but I'm giving my best in the hope you continue reading.

October 2017
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First proofreading I've done for h-content. I tried to preserve your wording. Being 40 pages, I may have missed some things, but this should clear up most of the noticeable issues. If I had noticed part 4 wasn't uploaded, I would have done that one instead. With only context from part 3, it was a bit difficult to understand the flashback at the start.


Penistic Hazard 5

"*Let's take the medical examination!"

Based on the art, I assume this is not an exam to become a doctor. You do not "take" a doctor appointment or examination. You "get a medical examination" or "go to the medical examination". We usually shortened "examination" to "exam" irl.

"^Jannu went to the hospital to take a medical examination…"
"^But it turned out that her enemy, General Belbuck, was about to take the same examination."

Same as above.


"she was graving for the General's dick."

graving --> craving


"Sorry for keeping you waiting!"
Sorry I kept you waiting. or Sorry About The Wait sounds more natural


"I've just done my work as a professional."
It's unclear what this is trying to say. I assume the listener knows what Jannu job is?
I'm just doing my job. or I was just doing my job.
Otherwise You might add "as a [Job title]" to the end. Not clear.


"Suzuki-san's probably empty after this load……"
that load……
past tense

"How's that possible if you let out so much……"
after you let out so much……
past tense

"...we shall do about this belly."
...we should do about this belly. OR ...we should do about your belly.
Depends on if the doc it talking to Jannu or out loud about Jannu like she is an object/specimen

"...We'll be done quickly."
We'll be done shortly. More professional sounding
We'll be done in a sec. Friendly, playful
This will only take us a second. Alternative


"I didn't expect less from Jannu."
your alt is better
other options being:
As expected of Jannu
I wouldn't expect anything less from Jannu

"Well then, shall we continue with the medical examination?"
You should drop "medical" at this point. It's been stated earlier. They would shorten it to "examination".


"There's no match to this…"
Not sure what this means. Maybe something like:
Nobody will believe this…
I can't believe this…


"And still her erection didn't calm down…"
"And her erection still hasn't calmed down…"


"...Belbuck would be here, great luck~"
...Belbuck would be here, lucky~


"I see I see… What an honor to have the Director here in person."
I see I see… It's an honor to have the Director here in person.
Not sure what the "I see I see…" mean here. Maybe something like...
I see I see… If it isn't the Director herself. What an honor.


"I see you're still active in unorthodox activities."
I see you're still conducting unorthodox activities.


"You have some courage. To send Jannu to this hospital, knowing that it's mine."
You've got guts. Sending Jannu to this hospital, even knowing that it's mine.


"Why would you think so?"
Why would you think that?


"I see… I'll keep this direct praise in mind."
I see… I'll keep your praise in mind.


"Are you sure? Even if you were trying to stop me,"
Are you sure? Even if you did try to stop me,


"In the past, I licked you often like this"
In the past, I often licked you like this


"Remember it was me who awakened your lesbianism… Hehe…"
"your lesbianism" sounds really awkward. "your lesbian side" or something else.


"Let me present to you treatment that my hospital takes pride in…"
Let me show you the treatment that my hospital takes pride in…


"~Isn't this supposed to be the blood examination……?"
~Isn't this supposed to be a blood examination……?


"That's why I need to sterilize and anesthetize the spot."
That's why I need to sterilize and anesthetize the area.


"Usually you use some device for analyzing the blood, don't you?"
Don't you usually you use a device to analyze the blood.


"This is the special treatment that our director has invented!"
This is the special treatment that our director invented!


"Our director doesn't appear in public a lot, but she's really an incredible person!"
Our director doesn't appear in public a lot, but she's an incredible person!"


"~Guess I can't skip the urinalysis."
Not sure if this is a pun or made up science term from the story, but we usually call it a "urine test"


"Yes. A pee loving perverted toilet♥"
Yes. Perverted pee loving toilets♥
Plural makes more sense to me here, as she seems to be talking about herself and Suzuki.

"Ehm, is this seriously a real urinalysis?"
Ehm, is this really a urine test?


"~H-Here I come?"
~H-Here it comes? OR ~H-Here I go?
People don't usually announce something before peeing, so *shrug*


"I never felt so exited for a urinalysis."
I've never felt so excited for a urine test.


"It's best quality, it would satisfy anybody who tastes it."
It's the best quality, it would satisfy anybody who tastes it.
It's top quality, it would satisfy anybody who tastes it.


"~It tastes a little bit different than my sister's, but it's great too."
~It tastes a little bit different than my sister's, but it's just as good.
~It tastes a little bit different than my sister's, but they're both great.


"If you get so excited by my pee…… >I'm also getting somewhat happy…♥"
If you get so excited by my pee…… >It's going to make me a little happy…♥
If you get so excited by my pee…… >I'll get a little happy…♥
If you get so excited by my pee…… >It'll make me a little happy…♥
The "If" mean the second line needs to refer to the first.


"With every gulp I take, my sexual desire rises"
With every gulp I take, my lust feels like it's overflowing.
My lust is overflowing with every gulp I take.
If みなぎる is suppose to be a water reference (liquid --> pee --> bursting/overflowing)


"~As a medical examiner, I'm happy to be involved in your physical examination♥"
~As a medical examiner, I'm happy to participate in your physical examination♥


"Would you be so kind to move to the medical bench."
Would you be so kind as to move to the medical bench.
Would you kindly move to the medical bench.


"Nothing matches the sight of two pussies aligned♥"
Nothing matches the sight of two pussies lined up♥
Nothing matches the sight of two pussies side-by-side♥


"How do you like this? This isn't just a double headed dick."
How do you like this? This isn't just a two headed dick.
It's not really either, she has 2 dicks.


"I can control it like tentacles!"
I can control them like tentacles!


"So… As last step, I'll wash down your asses with my semen."
So… As the last step, I'll wash down your asses with my semen.


"Please endure, I'm going to reach every corner, no matter how deep."
Please endure it, I'm going to reach every corner, no matter how deep.


"I give you every last semen I can offer♥"
I give you every last drop of semen I can offer♥


"Everybody would like to come for such a medical examination."
Everybody would come for such a medical examination.


"Well… we can offer this service only to a few patients."
Well… we can only offer this service to a few patients.


"More important, what are you planning to do with Jannu?"
More importantly, what are you planning to do with Jannu?


"Depending on your answer I have to instruct the government to take action against this facility…"
Depending on your answer I might have to tell the government to take action against this facility…


"Isn't it obvious what happens next…?"
Isn't it obvious…?


"She will get a document with the results of the examination."
She will get the results of her examination.


"I'm always putting the health of my patients before my obligation towards Tiamat."
I always put the health of my patients before my obligation to Tiamat.


"You know that with my “commander” ability I can freely handle the second carrier virus, do you?"
You know that with my “commander” ability I can freely handle the second carrier virus, don't you?


"In this facility I'm training doctors with abilities close to mine in creating treatments and cures."
I'm training doctors in this facility with similar abilities to create treatments and cures.


"I see… So this is why you filed them up with semen…"
I see… So that's why you filed them up with semen…


"Anyway, would you be so kind to take her back home with you?"
Anyway, would you kindly take her back home with you?


"Okay… So you're readily letting us go?"
Okay… So you're just letting us go?


"…But we detected small vitamin and mineral shortages and signs of chronic fatigue, so we recommend to watch your daily diet and to not overwork yourself…"
…But we detected small vitamin and mineral shortages and signs of chronic fatigue, so we recommend to watch your daily diet and not overwork yourself…


"This means we can engulf in sex without restraints."
This means we can indulge in sex without restraint.


"Come, let's start the work!"
Come, let's get to work!


"~Eh, eh, we just did it in the morning…"
~Eh, eh, we just did it this morning…


"I wonder why Tiamat is taking no action…"
I wonder why Tiamat isn't taking action…


"This is still not complete! It's making males impotent and it cannot even produce babies!!"
This is still not complete! It's making males impotent and can't even produce babies!!


"But that should be enough as result. It wasn't meant for males anyway and the futanarization works……"
But that should be enough as results. It wasn't meant for males anyway and the futanarization works……


"Even more the reason why we should focus on safety!"
Even more reason why we should focus on safety!


"If it would spread uncontrolled, mankind could crumble!"
If it spread uncontrolled, mankind could crumble!


"As Tiamat head of gene research……!!"
As Tiamat's head of gene research……!!


'In the next issue, the main story will come to its final."
In the next issue, the main story will reach its finale.


"After that I think of creating a small issue that reflects each character a bit."
After that I'm thinking of creating a small issue that reflects each character a bit.


"I regret the slow progression, but I'm giving my best in the hope you continue reading."
I regret the slow progress, but I'm giving my best in the hope you continue reading.
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