[X] My Assistant

I though it would be better to make my own thread instead since I figure my posts will be long.

The work is this: https://e-hentai.org/g/169252/8405bb091e/

I'm translating and subsequently editing it but my knowledge of Japanese is minimal. I'm sure the result of my work will be readable, however I'm not sure if its wholly accurate.
So if you are kind enough, please help me by checking the script below. I've done until page 9 and will update this thread from time to time until everything's complete.

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PG 1
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つ...ついに完成したわ
Its...its finally finished

対象を最もお似合いのケモノにする禁断魔法...その名も「もふも符」
Forbidden magic to change the target into the most suitable furry...its name is "Mofumono"

*Mofumono is a portmanteau of mofumofu (onomatopoeia for fluffiness) and kemono (furry)

こ...これで魔理沙をネコに
With...with this Marisa can be a cat

私がタチにってか—!?
Will I take care of it !?

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PG 2
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パチュリ—様そろそろお夕食の時間ですが
Patchouli-sama, it is almost time for dinner

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PG 3
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あら咲夜どうしたの? 急に犬耳なんて生やして
Oh Sakuya what's wrong? Suddenly dog ears are growing

元に戻す方法を
The method of restoring them back

至急
It's urgent

す...すみません
Ex...Excuse me

といわけで
For this reason

お宅の椛さんをお借りしにきました
I have come to borrow Ms. Momiji of your residence

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PG 4
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かわいい!
Cute!

ど...どういうわけなのでしよう
Why...why is that so

? 椛たんのお力リをなんですって?
? What do you need Momiji's power for?

どんな耳してんだ
Which ear are you listening with

術者いわく...
According to the caster...

犬の妖怪としばらくー緒に居れば解除されるかも
Being with a dog youkai for a while might break the spell

とのことでしたので...
that's what I heard...

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PG 5
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上司としては許可できかねますね!!
As her boss I cannot approve this!!

紅魔館は無頼漢の巣窟と聞いています
I heard the Scarlet Devil Mansion is the den of scroundels

そんな場所にか弱い椛たんを赴かせるなど...
For the feedble Momiji to go to a place like that...

へヘヘ...こいつあ上玉だぜえ
Hehehe...this girl's a fine jewel

や...やめてください...
Pl...please stop...

運が悪かったな子犬ちやん
You had bad luck little puppy

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PG 6
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下の口を紅く染めてやるぜええ
I'll stain your lower lips red hehe

ふあああああつ
Fuaaaaa

けしからんです!
It's crazy!

じつにけしからんです!!!
It's truly crazy!!!

鼻血鼻血
Nosebleed nosebleed

そもそも!!
To begin with!!

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PG 7
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椛たんは白狼!!!
Momiji is a white wolf!!!

犬ではありません!!
Not a dog!!

そりゃあ私もベッドの上では才才カミになりますけど!!
Although that is to say I too am a wolf on the bed!!

聞いてません
Didn't heard that

聞いてません
Didn't heard that

でも文さま
But Bun-sama

やつてみる価値はあるのではないでしょうか
Is it not worth trying?

同じイヌ科ですし...なにより
Both are canidae...more than anything

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PG 8
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因つている人を見過ごすわけにはいきませんから!
Because I cannot ignore such a person!

椛たんがそう言うなら仕方ありませんね
It can't be helped if Momiji says so

犬メイド!!!
Dog maid!!!

椛たんの慈悲に感謝することです!
Be grateful for Momiji's benevolence!

あんたもか
You too

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PG 9
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椛たん!! 危険が迫ったら私を呼ぶのですよ
Momiji!! Call me if you encounter danger

すぐに駆けつけて
Immediately come running

参加しますから!!!
I will participate!!!

助けろよ
It's rescue

咲夜
Sakuya

あのメイドは誰かしら
I wonder who is that maid?

This post has been edited by LOL50015: Jul 8 2017, 09:25

Did another 6 pages more, 10 pages left now

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PG 10
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大事なゲストでごさいます
She is an important guest

大事なゲストは普通給仕しないわ
Important guests usually do not serve

はい
Yes

私もお止めしたのですが
I also tried to stop her

家事をしているときが一番リうツクスできるということで...
To be able to be no.1 when doing house chores

...嫁に欲しいわね
...is what is needed of a wife

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PG 11
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うう 大丈夫でしょうか...
Uu Will she be okay...

椛たんの事ですから今ごろ館主に見初められて...
Because of Momiji's work, around this time's her first time meeting with the lord of the mansion...

付近一帶の消戒終わりました
I have finished patrolling the vicinity

あなた筋がいいわね
You have strong muscles

役に立つほうの門番として雇ってあげてもいいわよ
Hiring you as a useful gatekeeper of the mansion would be excellent

ありがとうございます
Thank you very much

ずみません雜務を手伝わせてしまい...
Your assistance in taking care of miscellaneous tasks...

いえ こちらこそ差し出がましい真似を...
No I'm the one who should be sorry for the intrusive behavior...

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PG 12
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それはそうと...
By the way...

あと何時間ほど一緒にいれば術がとけるのでしょうか
How long do I have to be together with you for the spell to break?

その事なのですが
Is that the case?

実は少々ウソをついていました
Actually I was lying a little

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PG 13
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まず
First of all

これだけは伝えておくわ
I will tell you only this

あなたに個人的な恨みは
Your personal grudge

一切ないの
Its nonexistant

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PG 14
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ど...どういう意味でしょうか
Wh...what does that mean?

はい
Yes

説明させていただきます
I will explain

それは性の境界を曖昧にする呪符
That is to say, that is a charm that blurs the boundaries of sex

簡単に言いますと
To put it simply

ひや!?
Hiya!?

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PG 15
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男性器を生やす魔法です
Male genital growing magic

実は
Actually

魔法の解除に本当に必要なものは
What is really needed to break the spell

犬の精液を飲むことでして
is drinking dog semen

This post has been edited by LOL50015: Jul 8 2017, 09:27

Finally finished translating.
Now only the editing part is left

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PG 16
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うう 大丈夫でしょうか...
Uu Will she be okay...

椛たんの事ですから今ごろ悪い魔女にちん〇を生やされて...
Because of Momiji's work, around this time the evil witch causes a strange 〇 to grow...

なんだその第六感
What is this six sense

あつ うう
Atsu uu

申し訳ございません
I'm sorry

鴉天狗さんの手前本当のことを言い出せず
I cannot tell the truth of the matter in front of the crow tengu

やめ...
Stop...

ぴく
twitch

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PG 17
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そろそろ頃合いでしょうか
Soon it'll be a suitable time dont you think?

では僭越ながら
Then while impertinent

精を搾り取らせて いただきます
I will squeeze out your sperm, let us eat

あつ!?
Atsu!?

やつ
Yatsu...

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PG 18
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[Empty]

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PG 19
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ご協力感謝いたします
I appreciate your cooperation

お...おわったのでしょうか...?
Is...is it over...?

はいこれで元に戻れるはずです
Yes, with this I should be able to return

その前に
Before that

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PG 20
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実は久しぶりの精液の匂いで
To be honest its been a while since I smelled semen

少々興奮してきまして
I am a little excited

ちょつとだけここをお借りしたく
I want to borrow this for a moment

ひゃうっ
Hiyautsu

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PG 21
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んっ
N'tsu

あ
Ah

ふあ
Fa

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PG 22
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では
Well then

動かせていただきます
I will move, let us eat

あ
Ah

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PG 23
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[Empty]

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PG 24
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あ
Ah

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PG 25
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ごちそうさまでした
Thanks for the meal

...やりすぎてしまいましたね
...you've done so much

申し訳ございません
I'm sorry

気にしないでください! 魔法が解けてよかったです
Please don't worry! I'm glad that the spell was broken

それにすごく気持ち良かったです
Besides, it felt really good

※よくわかってる
*I know right

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そういえば
By the way

ここはうやって直すのでしょうか
I wonder if this here is going to be fixed

This post has been edited by LOL50015: Jul 8 2017, 12:46

So I finished editing 4 pages.
I also changed some mistakes in the script before editing the dialogue in.

The dot shading in the doujin is annoying though especially when zoomed out, I wonder if there's a way to fix it.