[X] My Assistant

Excellent. Editing bounty for this is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11938

My suggestions for next projects:
1) https://e-hentai.org/g/498380/ab66a43d26/ Mirai Nikki is a parody I care for
2) https://e-hentai.org/g/746158/310865d71b/ looks pretty easy
3) https://e-hentai.org/g/745696/205e977f53/ and https://e-hentai.org/g/703981/a1183c259c/ are less so, but KanColle is popular right now
4) https://e-hentai.org/g/616304/45dcaa3468/ not full color, but I care for the parody (Gargantia), there's also a Japanese version if it makes things easier
5) https://e-hentai.org/g/552595/54a404466d/ Fate is a popular series I care for
6) https://e-hentai.org/g/620257/7968ad97ed/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/783149/223a5f8e3a/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/624279/5adfb54e65/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/782791/941e575ffb/ nice full color art, through I don't really know the series

The above are ranked roughly in order I care for them. After 1), I don't care as much about the others, so if there's something you'd like to suggest, go for it - if it fits my preferences, I'd be happy to bounty it.

Then there's the https://e-hentai.org/g/397022/739dd2bef9/ series

And stuff in my sig, there's a list of Chinese translations of Japanese dojins I may want to sponsor, through I'd focus on the original Chinese edition above first.

Wow looks like this thread is going to be active for quite a long time

If you are willing to translate, I am willing to cover the bounties.

On that note, I am now offering an alternative bounty: instead of credits/hath, I can acquire galleries from English DLsite. PM me if you are ever interested in that form of a payment.

Ok work done for https://e-hentai.org/g/615250/09865a3bb0/
DL Link: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/w4ci473h49r2...romanshiki.docx

Script:
Translator: Herreis

Hi, still needing a editor for that manga? I'd appreciate if I could do it.
I already sent you a p.m. about it.

Let me know if I can start doing it!
xoxoxox

Well the bounty is not yet accepted by anyone so......

Ok work (kinda) done for Slave Diary ~Yuno is my bride~
I hope this is satisfactory :3
DL for docx: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/8ya6d748yiyi...lave_Diary.docx

Translator: Herreis
TL comment 1: The scan is not really great though I think you guys are capable of finding better scans (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
TL comment 2: I didn’t do some of the bubbleless SFXs so maybe you can skip some of them

PG 01:
Title: ご奉仕日記~由乃は俺の嫁~ (English translation: Slave Diary ~Yuno is my bride~)
PG 02:
PL 2:
AMANO: !!
A: Yu… Yuno, why does this taste differ… Uhh……!
PL 3:
GASAI: You really drank it down
PL 4:
G: Yu~ki <3
PL 5:
G: Tee hee <3
A: I’m… I’m feeling sluggish……
PL 6:
A: Wha… What did you put… inside……
Bubbles x2: Hah Ahh

PG 03:
SFX: *Snaps~<3*

PG 04:
PL 1:
G: Yu… Yuki… the truth is……
PL 2:
Mom: Eh-?
M: You want to officially become my daughter-in-law!?
PL 3:
M: That’s~~~ GREAT! Even better when the bride is such a cute girl!
SFX: <3 Kyeaahh~<3
G: Ah! Then……
PL 4:
Mom’s SFX: Best regards<3
M: That child is just too shy…….
M: Umm umm, you should use this! Yuno-chan!
G: Hee hee… Yuki’s mom is such a nice mother
A: WHAT!!
PL 5:
A: Mom takes things into her own hands way too much…
A: Hah Ahh
PL 6:
G: There… must be feeling distressful right… You can give me any orders! Yuki <3
(TL notes: I gave up on most of the unnecessary bubbleless SFXs at this point)
Bubbles x2: Hah Ahh
G: Yuno will do anything for Yuki
PL 7:
Box: This is… bad… what is going to happen next!?
Face: Is this the effect of the drug…?
Bubbles x2: Ahh Hah
Box: My brain is getting a fever… I can’t think straight now

PG 05:
PL 1:
A: Yu… no… lick… my…
Bubble: Ahh Hah
G: Yuki<3
PL 2:
G: Uhm Uhm, you don’t have to refrain yourself
PL 3:
G: Ahh
Penis SFX: ぶるん *Broom* (Like an elastic spring or ruler, you can change them if you have better SFX in mind) ビクシ *Bust* (It sounds like Biish)
White SFX x2: *Doki*
PL 4:
G: Hah Uhn… Yuki became so large… leave everything to me…
Umh Hah Ahh…
Bbl: Huh <3
Bbl: Uhm <3
A: Yuno is actually doing this to me…
Bbl: Ahh
PL 5:
A: Uhh Uhh
A: Yuno

PG 06:
PL 1:
Bbl: Uhm
Bbl: Ahh
PL 2:
Bbl: Nnh <3
Bbl: Hah Uhm
Bbl: Ahh Ahh
PL 3:
A: Yuno’s mouth… is moist and warm… feels too… good……
Bbl: uhm
Bbl: Ahh Hah
Bbl: Ahh
Bbl: Nnh
Left box: I’m like… a captured snake’s prey now…
PL 4:
A: Wa… Wait… don’t be so ferocious…!
Bbl: Ahh Ahh
Bbl: Umh
Bottom: I like… Yuki’s penis
I love… Yuki’s penis (They’re actually Yuki’s penis… suki. Yuki’s penis… daisuki [Feel free to do your own adjustments])
PL 5:
Bbl: Unh Unh
Left: Yuki is watching me! Yuki is finally watching me!
A: I can’t… escape!

PG 07:
PL 1:
A: I’m… already…….
PL 2:
G: Muu Guh
PL 3:
Bbl: Hah Ah
Bbl: Nnh
PL 4:
Bbl: Hah Ahh
Bbl: Hah Ahh <3
PL 5:
G: My face, clothes, are all coated with Yuki’s penis milk…
Bbl x2: Hah Ahh
G: This taste… has made me so excited…
PL 6:
Bbl x2: Hah Ah

PG 08:
PL 1:
Right: Rationale…… Crumbling/ Breaking/ Destroyed/ Collapsing (Just choose one)……!!
G: Yeeaahhh <3
G: Yuki suddenly became so enthusiastic…!
PL 2:
Bbl: Nh Ah Ah
PL 3:
G: Ahh Umh
G: Use my breasts… as much as you want… Uhn Ahh
PL 4:
A: Hah Ahh <3
A: Ahh Ahh <3
G: I love Yuki the most!

PG 09:
PL 1:
Arrow on Right: Completely lost his mind
Small bubbles x2: Ah Ah
G: If Yuki touches there now… it’s going to come!
PL 2:
Bbl: Hah ahh
Bbl: Hah Ah
Small Bbl: Ah
PL 3:
Bbl: Nnh
PL 4:
Bbl: Ahh… Ah Ah
PL 5:
Bbl: Hah
Bbl: Hah Ahh
G: I want to be one with Yuki as soon as possible!

PG 10:
Top:
Bbl: Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh… <3
G: Hah Ahn… you reached the deepest part… in just one thrust
G: Uhn Ahh
Mid:
G: Ahh Ahh
G: Yuki <3
Bbl: Ah
Bottom:
G: ahh
bbl: Ah
G: Yuki <3

PG 11:
PL 1:
Top PL 1:
G: Yuki’s… so hot <3
Top PL 2:
G: Your scorching penis is not going to let me stop cumming!
Bbl: Ahh
G: Ahh… Ah Yuki
Middle PL 3:
G: I’m going crazy from cumming non-stop
Bbl: Uhh Ahh
bbl: Ahh Ahh
bbl: Uhm Ahh
A: Yu… Yuno
Bbl: Ahh
Bottom PL 4:
G: Uahh Ahh
Bbl: Nnh Hnh

PG 12:
PL 1:
G: Yuu~~Kii<3
G: Yeeaaaahhh <3
G: If you play with my nipples like that…
PL 2:
G: Ahh… ahh ahh
G: Uhm Ahh Ahh Ah

PG 13:
PL 1:
G: Yuki you really… came a lot……
Bbl: Hah Ahh <3
PL 2:
G: My body still… still can’t stop shivering… This is so embarrassing… You came inside while I was on my climax too
Bbl x2: Hah ahh
Small bbl: Ah
PL 4:
A: This…
G: Uhm… I don’t mind… how many rounds you want… as long as Yuki loves it……
PL 5:
G: Please use my body to your fancy
G: Yuno’s pussy belongs only to Yuki
PL 6:
Bbl: Ahh that’s right

PG 14:
PL 1:
G: I want to… do it while wearing this……
G: Although… this… this is really embarrassing…….
Bottom Right:
Bbl: Rarw rarw
Still hasn’t completely recovered his mind
Top Left:
G: Yuki it’s fine even you don’t do anything
Bbl x2: Hah Ahh
Bottom Left:
Bbl: Nnh <3

PG 15:
PL 1:
A: Yuu…. NO!!
PL 2:
Bbl: Ah
G: Yu… Yuki’s penis … is making my insides frisky… Huh Uhh…
Bbl: Nh
Bbl: Huh Uhh
Top Bbl: Ahh Ah
PL 3:
G: So deep <3
PL 4:
Bbl: Nnh ahh <3
bbl: Ahh <3
G: Yeaahh Brea… Breasts… are very sensitive right now……

PG 16:
PL 1:
G: Yeahhh ahh ahh Ahh ahh ahh
Middle PL:
G: Yuki
Ahh ah
G: Ahhh Ahh Ahh Ahh
Ah… Yuki <3
Bottom PL:
G: Mor… More intense Yuki
G: Hah Ahh Ah <3
G: Hah Ah
Bbl: Uhm <3

PG 17:
PL 1:
G: Yeaa~~~~ Ahh (optional I like it better with the letters like that)
A: Cumming---- <3
G: Nnh Hnh Hmm Ahh Uhn (optional I like it better with the letters like that)
PL 2:
Bbl x2: Ah
A: Hah ahh
PL 4:
Bbl: Yeaahh
Bbl: Ahh
Bbl: Ahh ah
Bottom x2: Ah

PG 18:
PL 1:
G: Hee hee, what a cute sleeping face <3
Yuki <3
G: I really love you the most, Yuki <3
PL 2:
Bubbles x2: *Hum*
PL 3:
Yuno and Yuki will be together forever…
Yuno will protect Yuki forever…
Hee hee

PG 21:
Afterword:
Nice to meet you and hello to all of my readers, I’m the author Miiru.
Thanks for buying my Future Diary doujinshi n(_ _)n
Everything is so sudden = =|||
After looking through different kinds of scenarios from the circle…… Ultimately, I still chose the pure love type (Eh?
Because of the delays by the spring break,
I’m already spitting out blood when I sent this to the printings (X∀X ;
However……
I’m touched that Yuno’s fans are all cute girls!
(Fucking emoticons)
Uhh Uhh I want a yandere girl to protect me too!
The truth is… I don’t feel envy or jealous of Yuki, I only feel hatred towards him…
[Yuno will always be there and protect you, Y̶u̶u̶~̶K̶i̶i̶] (curses
(fucking emoticons)
(The author is malfunctioning… Please ignore.
So long story short,
thank you again for your support, thanks for purchasing this book (/TwT/)
I look forward to our next meeting! (emoticons)

IMPRINT:
Title: Slave Diary ~Yuno is my bride~
Author: Miiru
Guest: Sheery
Special Thanks: 13
Publisher: Cat Street
Publication Date: Spring 2012

Email: unclesaw@hotmail.co.jp

excellent

editing bounty is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12013

what would you like to work on next? any preferences?

[Flyking] Shuu to Inori no Rouman Shiki editing done:
[www.mediafire.com] Here

How should I proceed?

This post has been edited by Bia.Matsuo: Mar 1 2015, 18:23

A_A

[Flyking] Shuu to Inori no Rouman Shiki editing done:
[www.mediafire.com] Here

How should I proceed?

Looks pretty good, unless anyone else has any comments, mine would be just this:
* could you edit the English title of this work onto the cover? No need to redraw it, you can add it nearby, or do some other "cheap" trick
* you are welcome to use Shinko's credit page, I am sure he won't mind, but you are also welcome to design your own style (you can do it for some future project, though!)

After the dojin is uploaded (which I'll do as soon as we figure out the cover/credit changes, if any - by 2morrow, maybe?), you are welcome to claim the bounty! I hope you'll then chose another one of EHCOVE projects to work on!

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Mar 2 2015, 11:33

QUOTE(Bia.Matsuo @ Mar 1 2015, 11:22) *

[Flyking] Shuu to Inori no Rouman Shiki editing done:
[www.mediafire.com] Here

How should I proceed?


Looks pretty good, unless anyone else has any comments, mine would be just this:
* could you edit the English title of this work onto the cover? No need to redraw it, you can add it nearby, or do some other "cheap" trick
* you are welcome to use Shinko's credit page, I am sure he won't mind, but you are also welcome to design your own style (you can do it for some future project, though!)

After the dojin is uploaded (which I'll do as soon as we figure out the cover/credit changes, if any - by 2morrow, maybe?), you are welcome to claim the bounty! I hope you'll then chose another one of EHCOVE projects to work on!

I guess it looks nice enough, GJ

Looks pretty good, unless anyone else has any comments, mine would be just this:
* could you edit the English title of this work onto the cover? No need to redraw it, you can add it nearby, or do some other "cheap" trick
* you are welcome to use Shinko's credit page, I am sure he won't mind, but you are also welcome to design your own style (you can do it for some future project, though!)

After the dojin is uploaded (which I'll do as soon as we figure out the cover/credit changes, if any - by 2morrow, maybe?), you are welcome to claim the bounty! I hope you'll then chose another one of EHCOVE projects to work on!

[postimg.org] Like this?

I searched for some credit pages and most of them were like this so I thought it was the standard one for EHCOVE =P
No problem, the next one I'll make one of my one, you can upload this one.

I'll be waiting for your upload then ^^
Thanks for the invite to participate on the group, I'm not really used to participate in forums and things like that, but I'll try to stay informed!

This post has been edited by Bia.Matsuo: Mar 2 2015, 17:17

I'll start the next one asap, probably later today:

(CWT27) [Aokihoshi (Flyking)] Toaru Houkou no Kekkan Denki (Toaru Majutsu no Index) [Chinese]
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11115

I'll start the next one asap, probably later today:

(CWT27) [Aokihoshi (Flyking)] Toaru Houkou no Kekkan Denki (Toaru Majutsu no Index) [Chinese]
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11115

That one is finished, it's just that oneiwonder hasn' claimed the bounty yet. Note the description. And https://e-hentai.org/g/792079/bc7f842a84/

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12013 is open

It's always best to check with me before starting work, not all editors accept bounties, other work over 2 weeks which makes their acceptance expire in the system...

Newer version of script: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showt...69938&st=65

This post has been edited by chung2795: Nov 10 2015, 02:14

My proofreading for Slave Diary ~Yuno is my bride~

G: There… must be feeling distressful right… You can give me any orders! Yuki <3

distressful doesn't sound right... distressed? This entire sentence seems to be missing the subject?

G: Please use my body to your fancy

I'd rather write G: Please use my body to your liking / to your desire / as you desire / as you fancy

I’m already spitting out blood when I sent this to the printings (X∀X ;

printing / printer

While I am at it, my proofreading for ホントはしたいんでしょ Japanese Romanization: Honto Wa Shitaindesho // English translation: I Really Want to Do It

G: Do you become like this from wanting to penetrate into my body? Yuu~Kii <3 <3

Do -> Did

and editing bounty for it is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12069

Proofread for I Really Want to Do it

First thing that I'd like to point out is the way Yuno calls Yukiteru. She doesn't really extend the "Yu" but rather doubles up on the "k" and extends the "i" part of his name. Something like Yukkiii~ would be more like her.

Page 7:

G: Do you become like this from wanting to penetrate into my body?

Correction & suggestion: Did you become like this from wanting to penetrate me. (Not really sure on the "penetrate into" part but penetrate already means going into something so the "into" is kind of unnecessary. Also, changing the "my body" part to just "me" makes it fit in better and also because "penetrate my body" sounds a bit brutal.)

Page 9:

G: Yu… Yuki… <3 Put it into… me… I can’t stand this any longer

Suggestion: Yu… Yuki… <3 Put it in… me… I can’t stand this any longer.

Page 11:

G: Ahh Ah! Yuki’s penis <3 is entering into my womb

Suggestion: Ahh Ah! Yuki’s penis <3 is entering my womb. (Same as the penetrate part above, "enter" already means going into something so the "into" is unnecessary)

Page 15:

This time I’ve made a Mirai Nikki’s doujin about Yuno.

Correction: This time I've made a Mirai Nikki doujin about Yuno.

Proofread Slave Diary ~Yuno is my bride~

Page 1:

I'm… I’m feeling sluggish……

Suggestion: I... I'm feeling sluggish.

Page 4:

My brain is getting a fever

Suggestion: This sentence completely doesn't work so use something else. There's a lot to choose from. Examples I can give are "My head is getting a bit fuzzy", "I'm getting a bit lightheaded" or "I'm getting a bit feverish". You can choose from any of these or if anyone else can come up with a sentence that fits in more here.

Page 5:

Hah Uhn… Yuki became so large… leave everything to me…

Suggestion: Yuki became so big. (Or maybe "hard"?)

Page 6:

I’m like… a captured snake’s prey now…

Correction: I'm like...a snake's captured prey now. (The original sentence implies that the snake is the one that is captured so this is the correct order for the sentence)

Page 9:

If Yuki touches there now… it’s going to come!

Correction: If Yuki touches there now... I'm going to come!

Page 10:

Hah Ahn… you reached the deepest part… in just one thrust

Suggestion: You reached my deepest part.

Page 13:

My body still… still can’t stop shivering… This is so embarrassing… You came inside while I was on my climax too

Suggestion: "You came inside while I was cumming too" or "You came inside while I was climaxing too".

Page 21:

I don't feel envy or jelous of Yuki

Correction: I don't feel envious or jealous of Yuki.

Some things are already pointed out by Red_Piotrus here

My proofreading for Slave Diary ~Yuno is my bride~

G: There… must be feeling distressful right… You can give me any orders! Yuki <3

distressful doesn't sound right... distressed? This entire sentence seems to be missing the subject?

G: Please use my body to your fancy

I'd rather write G: Please use my body to your liking / to your desire / as you desire / as you fancy

I’m already spitting out blood when I sent this to the printings (X∀X ;

printing / printer

Agreed on the first part, I'd also suggest making it "There... You must be feeling distressed right?" but is the word "distress" really appropriate here? Although, I can't really think of any other substitute right now.

Second part I'd actually change it completely. I'd suggest "Please do as you wish with me" or "Please do anything you like with my body" but there are really a lot more options here.

Third part I think it should be "printing company".

Yeah the proofreading seems superb, sorry for not producing top notched translations (Q_Q)/~