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post Jan 24 2015, 01:33
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Took the liberty to accept Bellows Jiejie Jiaojiao Wo Ba!

Just give me around a week to finish everything, though I can cough out a 4 page sample later / tomorrow
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post Jan 28 2015, 00:35
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@chung2795:

which nick (or both) do you want on the releases? do you care?
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post Jan 28 2015, 05:00
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Here's the first-pass proofread version of "Prewar Replenishment".

There are a few things I'd like clarified (and a missing translation bubble), highlighted in red. Incidentally, I also changed all instances of "Commander" to "Admiral". I hope I did the right thing.

P.S. Those SFX drove me nuts!


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Prewar Replenishment
Translator: Herreis


P01
TITLE: Prewar Replenishment (Would "Pre-Battle Replenishment" be a better choice of title?)


P02
MAN1: Hey, look.
SFX: Hey hey
MAN2: Oh?
MAN2: Isn't that Shimakaze-chan?

MAN1: That child-like body of hers...
MAN2: Combined with those sexy thongs...

MAN1: Maybe she's starting to have "adult" thoughts?
MAN2: Even so, we can only worship her from afar...


P03:
SFX: Deep in thought...
SHI: I wonder if the Admiral noticed my performance the last time?

SHI: Ah!!
SHI: Just forget about it.

MAN1: Heh heh
MAN1: Hey, guys!!
MAN1: I've got an idea.
MAN1: First, we... then we...

MAN2: Sounds good. Let's do it...
MAN3: Ah. She's leaving.
SFX: Tap tap


P04
SHI: Haah~~
SFX: Pomf
SFX: Flop

SFX: Roll roll
SHI: What would the Admiral say?

SFX: Peek
SHI: Haah~

MAN1: Gentlemen~ Godspeed with you!! (Would "OK, boys~ Full speed ahead!!" be a better choice? It's also a naval term, and it fits Shimakaze's obsession with speed.)
<TL: The original term used was "武運昌隆" ("Buun Masataka" in Japanese), which is synonymous with "武運長久". Both idioms were used by the Japanese Army during WW2, but the latter is more commonly used. "武运" means a soldier's fate or destiny. Both idioms mean "May the soldiers have eternal luck".>

MAN1: She's fast asleep, so she probably won't wake up that easily.
SFX: Fast asleep
SFX: Zzz
SFX: Zzz
MAN2: She's a heavy sleeper, so she's asking for it!!


P05
MAN1: Oh yeah, Shimakaze-chan.
SFX: Haah
MAN2: Haah

SFX: Zzz
SFX: Squeeze
MAN1: She still has a lot to go with here... (Is he saying that Shimakaze's boobs are big enough, or that she still has a lot of growing to do?)

MAN1: I've never seen Shimakaze-chan this up close before.
MAN2: I can't take this any more!!
SFX: Slap
SFX: Sproing

MAN1: Here, taste our dicks as much as you want in your sweet dreams!!
SHI: Mmm
SHI: Mmm
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub


P06
MAN1: Ugh... I'm cumming!

SFX: Rub rub
MAN1: I never knew that Shimakaze's sleeping face would be so practical... (Does he mean "I never knew I could make use of Shimakaze's sleeping face like this"?)

SFX: Splurt
SFX: Splurt
SFX: Squirt
SFX: Splat
SFX (black characters): Throb throb


P07
SFX: Haah...
SFX: Waking up

MAN1: Ah~ You're awake. Good morning, Shimakaze-chan.
SFX: Shock
SHI: Huh?
SFX: Atten~tion!

SHI: MISSING (My guess is that she's saying "What are those weird things?")

SFX: Poke
SFX: Poke
SFX: Ugh
MAN1: These are fuel rods used for supplementary fueling.

MAN1: We're here on the Admiral's orders to relieve your tension, Shimakaze-chan.
SHI: This fuel rod looks really weird.
SFX: Poke
SFX: Poke
SHI: So peculiar.
MAN2: We'll do our best to help refuel you, Shimakaze-chan!!


P08
SHI: Ahh!!
SFX: Spreads open
MAN1: So these are the thongs that seduce everyone. We'll have to give them a lot of love after this!!
SHI: What are you doing? Stop!!

MAN1: Little kids shouldn't be wearing thongs as sexy as these!!
SFX: Fully exposed

MAN1: You're obviously trying to seduce everyone...
SHI: No, I'm not...
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: No, stop!! That place is used for peeing!!
SFX: Lick
SFX: Lick
SFX: Lick


P09
SFX: Lick
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Slurp
SHI: I feel... so strange...
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah

SFX: Shloop
SFX: Slurp
SHI: Ahh... Don't lick inside!

MAN1: Let's get down to business, shall we? Now prepare yourself for refueling.
SHI: This itchiness feels so weird...

MAN1: Don't worry!! You'll love it very soon, because refueling feels really good.
SFX: Throb


P10
MAN1: It's so unfair that the Admiral gets to keep all the shipgirls!!
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub

MAN1: So tight! So this is Shimakaze-chan's pussy.
SHI: Ah
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah
SFX: Shlick
SFX: Shlick
SFX: Shluck

SHI: Ahhhhh!!
SFX: Shloop
SFX: Slide
SFX: Stretch

MAN1: A virgin's pussy feels so good.
SFX: Haah
SFX: Haah
SHI: Ahh! It's going in too deep! My insides feel so weird!
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap


P11
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh! // Too forceful! You're breaking me!!

MAN1: Don't just open your mouth like that~
SHI: Haah
SFX: Lick

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: My mind... is going blank.

SFX: Haah
SFX: Haah
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Twitch


P12
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh! // I'm feeling... really weird. I can't think straight any more...
SFX: Whap
SFX: Slap

SFX: Poke
SFX: Twitch

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SFX: Twitch
SFX: Twitch
SFX: Shloop

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Huh? Why'd you stop...

SHI: Ahh!!
SHI: Haah
SFX: Shloop
SFX: Smack


P13
MAN1: It feels real good once you get used to it, doesn't it?!
SHI: Haah
SFX: Whap

SFX: Shloop
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SFX: Whap

SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SHI: So good~~ Something's coming out!!
SHI: Ahhh!
SHI: Ahh!


P14
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh~~ It's feeling better and better~~
SFX: Shluck
SFX: Shluck

SHI: Ahh~! I'm breaking apart!! So much hot fuel is pouring in!
SHI: Ahhhhhh!!
MAN1: Use your womb to suck it all up!!
SFX: Spurt
SFX: Splurt
SFX: Splurt

SFX: Splurt
SFX: Sploot


P15
TXT: 30 hours later...
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Slurp

SHI: Ahh
SFX: Satisfied

SHI: Ah...
SHI: It felt so good that I lost track of the time.

KON: Shimakaze~ The Admiral...
SFX: Creak
KON: Whoaaa! What the hell happened here?!
SFX: Carnage
SHI: Refueling complete~! I'll make sure the Admiral takes notice of me this time!


P16
Best wishes to the author for successful sales. Please support him, everyone!
By: Taitong Electrical Stove


P17
Afterword

I managed to finish a new doujin by the deadline this time!!
But at the cost of my liver (Collapses)

I made a sudden decision to create a Shimakaze-chan work this time. I was going to make this one for the new releases of PS02.
But because I didn't have enough material and wasn't able to refine it enough... I had to postpone it to PF or FF23 instead (Kneels)

One last thing~~ Shimakaze-chan is really cute~~ (Gets punched flying away)

I hope everyone attends and buys this new release~~
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post Jan 28 2015, 14:20
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Note about credit pages: chung told me "Just put Herreis as my nickname and it'll be alright I have been using that name for my other releases too"

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post Jan 28 2015, 14:27
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alright I'll be sure to fix the script and edits according and make sure he gets on the credits with the nick he wants. Sorry about how long this is taking i'm both switching jobs now and getting jerked around by some of the color redraws this is throwing at me.
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post Jan 28 2015, 14:30
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Just put my nickname as Herreis as that is also the name I use for my other releases, ok now the post-editing for Prewar

PG 01:
Title: I don't mind either one cause they carry the same meaning

PG 04: I can't find the translation for "武運昌隆" so use any phrases as long as it's suitable, and hei you're the one with more background knowledge for Kantai Collection (I have little idea what this series is about)

PG 05: Referring to still has a lot of growing to do

PG 06: He literally said, " I never knew that Shimakaze's sleeping face would be so practical..." but you can change it even I felt that dialogue was verrrryyy weird

Pg 07: Oh sorry for that missing dialogue. Yeah she said "What is this?"


Ok thanks for proof reading and editing (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
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post Jan 29 2015, 15:52
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Thanks again, chung2795. Here's the final proofread version of "Pre-Battle Replenishment".


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Title: Pre-Battle Replenishment
Translator: Herreis


LEGEND:

EMPTY LINES - Separation between panels
XXX: xxx // xxx - Text spread across two bubbles (separated by "//")


=====



P01
TITLE: Pre-Battle Replenishment


P02
MAN1: Hey, look.
SFX: Hey hey
MAN2: Oh?
MAN2: Isn't that Shimakaze-chan?

MAN1: That child-like body of hers...
MAN2: Combined with those sexy thongs...

MAN1: Maybe she's starting to have "adult" thoughts?
MAN2: Even so, we can only worship her from afar...


P03:
SFX: Deep in thought...
SHI: I wonder if the Admiral noticed my performance the last time?

SHI: Ah!!
SHI: Just forget about it.

MAN1: Heh heh
MAN1: Hey, guys!!
MAN1: I've got an idea.
MAN1: First, we... then we...

MAN2: Sounds good. Let's do it...
MAN3: Ah. She's leaving.
SFX: Tap tap


P04
SHI: Haah~~
SFX: Pomf
SFX: Flop

SFX: Roll roll
SHI: What would the Admiral say?

SFX: Peek
SHI: Haah~

MAN1: OK, boys~ Full speed ahead!!
<TL: The original term used was "武運昌隆" ("Buun Masataka" in Japanese), which is synonymous with "武運長久". Both idioms were used by the Japanese Army during WW2, but the latter is more commonly used. "武运" means a soldier's fate or destiny. Both idioms mean "May the soldiers have eternal luck".>

MAN1: She's fast asleep, so she probably won't wake up that easily.
SFX: Fast asleep
SFX: Zzz
SFX: Zzz
MAN2: She's a heavy sleeper, so she's asking for it!!


P05
MAN1: Oh yeah, Shimakaze-chan.
SFX: Haah
MAN2: Haah

SFX: Zzz
SFX: Squeeze
MAN1: She still has a lot of growing to do here...

MAN1: I've never seen Shimakaze-chan this up close before.
MAN2: I can't take this any more!!
SFX: Slap
SFX: Sproing

MAN1: Here, taste our dicks as much as you want in your sweet dreams!!
SHI: Mmm
SHI: Mmm
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub


P06
MAN1: Ugh... I'm cumming!

SFX: Rub rub
MAN1: I never knew I could make use of Shimakaze-chan's sleeping face this way...

SFX: Splurt
SFX: Splurt
SFX: Squirt
SFX: Splat
SFX (black characters): Throb throb


P07
SFX: Haah...
SFX: Waking up

MAN1: Ah~ You're awake. Good morning, Shimakaze-chan.
SFX: Shock
SHI: Huh?
SFX: Atten~tion!

SHI: What are those things?

SFX: Poke
SFX: Poke
SFX: Ugh
MAN1: These are fuel rods used for supplementary fueling.

MAN1: We're here on the Admiral's orders to relieve your tension, Shimakaze-chan.
SHI: This fuel rod looks really weird.
SFX: Poke
SFX: Poke
SHI: So peculiar.
MAN2: We'll do our best to help refuel you, Shimakaze-chan!!


P08
SHI: Ahh!!
SFX: Spreads open
MAN1: So these are the thongs that seduce everyone. We'll have to give them a lot of love after this!!
SHI: What are you doing? Stop!!

MAN1: Little kids shouldn't be wearing thongs as sexy as these!!
SFX: Fully exposed

MAN1: You're obviously trying to seduce everyone...
SHI: No, I'm not...
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: No, stop!! That place is used for peeing!!
SFX: Lick
SFX: Lick
SFX: Lick


P09
SFX: Lick
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Slurp
SHI: I feel... so strange...
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah

SFX: Shloop
SFX: Slurp
SHI: Ahh... Don't lick inside!

MAN1: Let's get down to business, shall we? Now prepare yourself for refueling.
SHI: This itchiness feels so weird...

MAN1: Don't worry!! You'll love it very soon, because refueling feels really good.
SFX: Throb


P10
MAN1: It's so unfair that the Admiral gets to keep all the shipgirls!!
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub

MAN1: So tight! So this is Shimakaze-chan's pussy.
SHI: Ah
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah
SFX: Shlick
SFX: Shlick
SFX: Shluck

SHI: Ahhhhh!!
SFX: Shloop
SFX: Slide
SFX: Stretch

MAN1: A virgin's pussy feels so good.
SFX: Haah
SFX: Haah
SHI: Ahh! It's going in too deep! My insides feel so weird!
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap


P11
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh! // Too forceful! You're breaking me!!

MAN1: Don't just open your mouth like that~
SHI: Haah
SFX: Lick

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: My mind... is going blank.

SFX: Haah
SFX: Haah
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Twitch


P12
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh! // I'm feeling... really weird. I can't think straight any more...
SFX: Whap
SFX: Slap

SFX: Poke
SFX: Twitch

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SFX: Twitch
SFX: Twitch
SFX: Shloop

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Huh? Why'd you stop...

SHI: Ahh!!
SHI: Haah
SFX: Shloop
SFX: Smack


P13
MAN1: It feels real good once you get used to it, doesn't it?!
SHI: Haah
SFX: Whap

SFX: Shloop
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SFX: Whap

SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SHI: So good~~ Something's coming out!!
SHI: Ahhh!
SHI: Ahh!


P14
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh~~ It's feeling better and better~~
SFX: Shluck
SFX: Shluck

SHI: Ahh~! I'm breaking apart!! So much hot fuel is pouring in!
SHI: Ahhhhhh!!
MAN1: Use your womb to suck it all up!!
SFX: Spurt
SFX: Splurt
SFX: Splurt

SFX: Splurt
SFX: Sploot


P15
TXT: 30 hours later...
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Slurp

SHI: Ahh
SFX: Satisfied

SHI: Ah...
SHI: It felt so good that I lost track of the time.

KON: Shimakaze~ The Admiral...
SFX: Creak
KON: Whoaaa! What the hell happened here?!
SFX: Carnage
SHI: Refueling complete~! I'll make sure the Admiral takes notice of me this time!


P16
Best wishes to the author for successful sales. Please support him, everyone!
By: Taitong Electrical Stove


P17
Afterword

I managed to finish a new doujin by the deadline this time!!
But at the cost of my liver (Collapses)

I made a sudden decision to create a Shimakaze-chan work this time. I was going to make this one for the new releases of PS02.
But because I didn't have enough material and wasn't able to refine it enough... I had to postpone it to PF or FF23 instead (Kneels)

One last thing~~ Shimakaze-chan is really cute~~ (Gets punched flying away)

I hope everyone attends and buys this new release~~
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post Jan 29 2015, 17:31
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Yeah the script seems ok
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post Jan 30 2015, 22:30
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I'll take care of Pre-war Replenishment Done

Next up I'll deal with Hakudaku Seitokai

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post Feb 9 2015, 08:39
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Good job. I'm working on Shuu to Inori no Romanshiki so you guys can look forward to that too (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
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post Feb 9 2015, 23:24
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Yep, certainly looking forward to all of that (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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post Feb 19 2015, 08:55
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Ok work done for https://e-hentai.org/g/615250/09865a3bb0/
DL Link: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/w4ci473h49r2...romanshiki.docx

Script:
Translator: Herreis
PG 01~02:
Title: 集與祈的浪漫式 (Original Chinese title)  Shuu to Inori no Rouman Shiki (Japanese Romanization)// Ji yu Qi de LangManShi (Chinese Romanization)// Romance of Shuu and Inori (English translation)

PG 03:
Preface:
I was planning a trip to Japan to settle some affairs during the end of 2011, however some minor accident happened and the whole ordeal ended with a wasted plane ticket and the cancelation of my trip. Later during a reunion with my former classmates we talked about not having a trip together although we’ve known each other for a long time, thus I proposed my plan for a trip to Japan and we arranged our schedule accordingly for our trip.
For this trip we overlooked Mt. Fuji from Lake Kawaguchi, we played the whole day at Fuji-Q Highland, then after we’re done with Komike we went to experience Oedo’s customs at the hot springs of Oedo. We even felt an earthquake on an escalator at Shinjuku (I only knew there was an earthquake after that from the news). It was really a fulfilling trip.
That was a really precious experience from a rare trip, after all it’s quite a feat to pull off this trip since we are all busy with our own jobs. It’s my fortune to have you all as my friends. Thanks you to all of my good friends. I look forward to our next trip together.
Flyking
Big Panel:
INR (red): … Do I really need to use this to sing? I have a feeling something more than sound is coming out from here….
SHU (black): I will try my best to avoid that from happening…
Small Panel:
INR: Microphone testing.
SHU: OH OH OH OH OH OH OH……

PG 04:
PNL 2:
SHU (BLK): The metro is more crowded today…
SHU: And something feels off too…
PNL 3:
INR: Shuu….
SHU: Ahh, it just kind of spurred of my mouth there, don’t mind it too much.
PNL 4:
INR: After we got into here…
INR: I’m feeling quite sultry over here…
SHU: Ehh? Re, really?

PG 05:
PNL 1:
SHU: Ahh ha ha… maybe it is overcrowded after all…
Bubbleless: She’s even taking off her shirt……? This is going to be bad if I don’t stop her now…
PNL 2:
SHU: Inori, this is really inappropriate…
SHU: Ah! The train…
SFX: Shakes~

PG 06:
PNL 1:
This soft and warm sensation is…
Eh? Ok and bouncy……?!
PNL 2:
Does Inori have the habit to wear a bra…?
PNL 4:
INR: Criminal Metro Pervert
PNL 5:
SHU: Inori! Let me explain! That, I , really…
INR: How do they feel?
SHU: ……. Ehh?

PG 07:
PNL 1:
INR: Is it… comfortable?
SHU: Uhm…
S: Very soft…
S: Very warm…
PNL 2:
I: Is that so…
Right PNL:
I: If Shuu likes this kind of sensation…
I: You can continue…
Left PNL 1:
S: Then I…
S: Won’t hold back…
L PNL 2:
Her nipple is getting hard…
SFX: “Squeeze”
L PNL 3:
I really want to see what’s underneath…
SFX: “Tears”

PG 08:
PNL 1:
SFX: “Tears”
PNL 4:
I: Ahh~~!
PNL 5:
S: …… I never knew…
S: That… Inori can moan like that…
S: You sound really cute just now! For real!
PNL 6:
SFX: “Grabs”
I: Ahh~~!!!
PNL 7:
I: Shuu… Shuu’s voice… is… much cuter…
Is she bickering right now… it’s really cute though…

PG 09:
PNL 1:
This is bad! Inori’s hands…
This feels too wonderful
PNL 2:
Red: Ahh~~
PNL 3:
I: Shuu’s voice…
I: Is flustering…
I: Jabbering…
SFX: “Stroking”
I: Interesting…
PNL 4:
S: I wish to listen more of Inori’s voices…

PG 10:
PNL 1:
S: Inori…
S: You’re shaking…
PNL 2:
I: You are too over here…
PNL 4:
I: Ahhh~~~~~
PNL 5:
S: This is it!
S: Let me hear more of Inori’s sweet moans…
PNL 6 & 7:
All I: Uhn

PG 11:
PNL 1:
S: Looks like in order to hear more from Inori, I’ll need to use my friend that Inori took out just now….
PNL 2:
S: How will Inori react now…
I: Wait…
PNL 3:
I SFX: Uhm…
I SFX: Uhh…
PNL 4:
S SFX: Woah--
I SFX: Uhm
S: So, so much resistance…
I SFX: Uhn
PNL 5:
S: Finally… it’s fully inside now…
S: The feeling of being fully enveloped inside Inori…
S: Just feels too damn good…
I: Shuu…

PG 12:
Top Right PNL:
I: Shuu… face… closer…
Top Left PNL:
All SFXs: Uhn or Uhm
Middle Right:
Inori is still trying to resist…
Middle Left:
All SFXs: Uhn or Uhm
Bottom PNL:
S: The less willing she is to give in, the more I want to hear her sweet moans… even at the cost of being discovered…
I: Ahh~!!
S: Even I use a little more force…

PG 13:
PNL 1:
All SFXs: Uhm or Uhn
PNL 3:
S: Inori, loosen a little bit, or I can’t penetrate into your deepest parts…
I: Shuu, Shuu’s thing is just getting too large, it’s only going to get tighter… How can I loosen up……
PNL 4:
S: I can’t hold it back anymore! I’m cumming!
PNL 5:
I: Ahh~~!!
I: And just when you had said it…

PG 14:
Panel 1:
I: Usually I don’t see you this proactive, but today…
S: Sorry…
PNL 2:
S: Before I feel only fear when faced with problems or pressure, so I tried to minimize my contact with the outside world.
S: But now that Inori is with me… I… want to change…
PNL 3:
S: I will change myself to be stronger…
S: For Inori…
PNL 4:
I: To be stronger over here?
I: It’s getting hard again…
S: No, I will try to be stronger at various aspects…
S: That, please don’t tease me there anymore…
PNL 5:
I: I’m looking forward to…
I: seeing Shuu’s fearless and courageous figure…

PG 15:
PNL 1:
S: First objective…
S: Let’s start with Inori’s sweet moans…
I: Ehh?
PNL 2:
I: Ahh!!
I: Now that I think about… it… I think it’s better to give up after all…
S: How can you think about giving up when you haven’t tried your best yet?
PNL 3:
I: Shuu…
I: So it does seem that only your lower parts are becoming stronger…
S: I DO NOT!
I SFXs: Uhm or Uhn
I: Pervert…
S: Not a pervert!

PG 16:
Top PNL:
I: Pervert…
S: I’m not!
3 Bubbles SFXs: Ahh
I: Per… vert…
S: That’s why I said…
I: Ahh… Pervert…
S: … … …
I: Per… vert… Ahh Ahh…
S: Sorry for being a pervert…
I: Shuu…
Bottom PNL:
All the small bubbles SFXs: Ahh or Ah
I: Shuu…
I: Kiss me…
I: Or else I… can’t… hold on any longer…

PG 17:
Right PNL:
I: Semen… is overflowing…
All small SFXs: Hah Ahh
Top Left PNL:
All SFXs: Uhm~ or Uhn~
Middle Left PNL:
I: You overexerted…
I: Mr. Pervert…
I: Ah! It’s coming out again…
Bottom Right PNL: (I think the author mixed up the colours on the fonts)
I: After pulling out such a daring act in the metro, it’s hard to believe we weren't discovered,
I: it’s quite unbelievable.
Bottom Left PNL:
S: Ahh… It's mainly because of Inori’s superb ability to suppress your voice.
S: Although I feel like it’s quite a pity…
I: OBSCENE

PG 18:
PNL 1:
S: This voice… Ayase?!
S: Don’t tell me… that everyone in the metro is from the Undertaker?!
PNL 2:
Shibungi: We’re betting whether Shuu will become a chicken or a wolf under Inori’s temptation. Congratulations, you’ve proudly claimed the title of the wolf.
S: I am not happy with it at all!
PNL 3:
Ayase: Then you should just rename yourself to pervert.
S: I am not a pervert at all!
PNL 4:
But that’s the truth!
Didn’t Inori call you that a lot of times already?
And you’ve even admitted it just now.
S: You all…
PNL 5:
S: Listen closely now! Besides Inori, no one else is allowed to call me a pervert in this world!
S: No one!

PG 19:
PNL 1:
Bubbleless: For real… How can you let anyone be happy with that kind of announcement…
Ayase: What! Don’t make a chuuni announcement with such a straight face!
PNL 2:
S: Shut, shut up!
I: Shuu…
S: What is it?
PNL 3:
I: Lend me your ear…
I: When we’re both alone, if Shuu gives in all his best,
I: I’ll let Shuu listen to that voice again, without any reservations.
PNL 4:
I: The voice…
I: That only Shuu can listen to in the entire world…
PNL 5:
Shibungi: Wow, the enemy’s firepower is too overpowered, I suggest everyone to retreat now.
Argo: Reality can go to hell!
S: I think tonight…
S: I’ll be the happiest man alive in the whole world…
Ayase: We should call the cops now…
Tsugumi: Can I stay for the night? I won’t be a bother.

PG 20:
Afterword:
I spent my New Year’s Eve at Tokyo Main Station this year, I even took a memorial photo. Due to some delays in my journey, I didn't get onto the last train and end up using the cab to reach my destination- Sensō-ji.
Although it is not as crowded as the Meiji Shrine, I still have to line up for quite some time to enter the temple. Across the crowd I gave some donation into the offering’s block, then I followed my friends to the night market. After that I accidentally got separated with them and was lost for a moment, and finally I was able to meet up with them at the entrance. I was quite anxious being lost in a foreign country, but luckily nothing bad happened and this is quite a special memory that I managed to make.

Hare: Ahh~~~!! You, you said you wouldn't cum inside…
All SFXs: Hah Ahh
Hare: Really! What should I do if it leaked on the road after this……
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Excellent. Editing bounty for this is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11938

My suggestions for next projects:
1) https://e-hentai.org/g/498380/ab66a43d26/ Mirai Nikki is a parody I care for
2) https://e-hentai.org/g/746158/310865d71b/ looks pretty easy
3) https://e-hentai.org/g/745696/205e977f53/ and https://e-hentai.org/g/703981/a1183c259c/ are less so, but KanColle is popular right now
4) https://e-hentai.org/g/616304/45dcaa3468/ not full color, but I care for the parody (Gargantia), there's also a Japanese version if it makes things easier
5) https://e-hentai.org/g/552595/54a404466d/ Fate is a popular series I care for
6) https://e-hentai.org/g/620257/7968ad97ed/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/783149/223a5f8e3a/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/624279/5adfb54e65/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/782791/941e575ffb/ nice full color art, through I don't really know the series

The above are ranked roughly in order I care for them. After 1), I don't care as much about the others, so if there's something you'd like to suggest, go for it - if it fits my preferences, I'd be happy to bounty it.

Then there's the https://e-hentai.org/g/397022/739dd2bef9/ series

And stuff in my sig, there's a list of Chinese translations of Japanese dojins I may want to sponsor, through I'd focus on the original Chinese edition above first.
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Wow looks like this thread is going to be active for quite a long time
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If you are willing to translate, I am willing to cover the bounties.

On that note, I am now offering an alternative bounty: instead of credits/hath, I can acquire galleries from English DLsite. PM me if you are ever interested in that form of a payment.
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post Feb 28 2015, 02:27
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QUOTE(chung2795 @ Feb 19 2015, 08:55) *

Ok work done for https://e-hentai.org/g/615250/09865a3bb0/
DL Link: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/w4ci473h49r2...romanshiki.docx

Script:
Translator: Herreis


Hi, still needing a editor for that manga? I'd appreciate if I could do it.
I already sent you a p.m. about it.

Let me know if I can start doing it!
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Well the bounty is not yet accepted by anyone so......
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Ok work (kinda) done for Slave Diary ~Yuno is my bride~
I hope this is satisfactory :3
DL for docx: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/8ya6d748yiyi...lave_Diary.docx

Translator: Herreis
TL comment 1: The scan is not really great though I think you guys are capable of finding better scans (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
TL comment 2: I didn’t do some of the bubbleless SFXs so maybe you can skip some of them

PG 01:
Title: ご奉仕日記~由乃は俺の嫁~ (English translation: Slave Diary ~Yuno is my bride~)
PG 02:
PL 2:
AMANO: !!
A: Yu… Yuno, why does this taste differ… Uhh……!
PL 3:
GASAI: You really drank it down
PL 4:
G: Yu~ki <3
PL 5:
G: Tee hee <3
A: I’m… I’m feeling sluggish……
PL 6:
A: Wha… What did you put… inside……
Bubbles x2: Hah Ahh

PG 03:
SFX: *Snaps~<3*

PG 04:
PL 1:
G: Yu… Yuki… the truth is……
PL 2:
Mom: Eh-?
M: You want to officially become my daughter-in-law!?
PL 3:
M: That’s~~~ GREAT! Even better when the bride is such a cute girl!
SFX: <3 Kyeaahh~<3
G: Ah! Then……
PL 4:
Mom’s SFX: Best regards<3
M: That child is just too shy…….
M: Umm umm, you should use this! Yuno-chan!
G: Hee hee… Yuki’s mom is such a nice mother
A: WHAT!!
PL 5:
A: Mom takes things into her own hands way too much…
A: Hah Ahh
PL 6:
G: There… must be feeling distressful right… You can give me any orders! Yuki <3
(TL notes: I gave up on most of the unnecessary bubbleless SFXs at this point)
Bubbles x2: Hah Ahh
G: Yuno will do anything for Yuki
PL 7:
Box: This is… bad… what is going to happen next!?
Face: Is this the effect of the drug…?
Bubbles x2: Ahh Hah
Box: My brain is getting a fever… I can’t think straight now

PG 05:
PL 1:
A: Yu… no… lick… my…
Bubble: Ahh Hah
G: Yuki<3
PL 2:
G: Uhm Uhm, you don’t have to refrain yourself
PL 3:
G: Ahh
Penis SFX: ぶるん *Broom* (Like an elastic spring or ruler, you can change them if you have better SFX in mind) ビクシ *Bust* (It sounds like Biish)
White SFX x2: *Doki*
PL 4:
G: Hah Uhn… Yuki became so large… leave everything to me…
Umh Hah Ahh…
Bbl: Huh <3
Bbl: Uhm <3
A: Yuno is actually doing this to me…
Bbl: Ahh
PL 5:
A: Uhh Uhh
A: Yuno

PG 06:
PL 1:
Bbl: Uhm
Bbl: Ahh
PL 2:
Bbl: Nnh <3
Bbl: Hah Uhm
Bbl: Ahh Ahh
PL 3:
A: Yuno’s mouth… is moist and warm… feels too… good……
Bbl: uhm
Bbl: Ahh Hah
Bbl: Ahh
Bbl: Nnh
Left box: I’m like… a captured snake’s prey now…
PL 4:
A: Wa… Wait… don’t be so ferocious…!
Bbl: Ahh Ahh
Bbl: Umh
Bottom: I like… Yuki’s penis
I love… Yuki’s penis (They’re actually Yuki’s penis… suki. Yuki’s penis… daisuki [Feel free to do your own adjustments])
PL 5:
Bbl: Unh Unh
Left: Yuki is watching me! Yuki is finally watching me!
A: I can’t… escape!

PG 07:
PL 1:
A: I’m… already…….
PL 2:
G: Muu Guh
PL 3:
Bbl: Hah Ah
Bbl: Nnh
PL 4:
Bbl: Hah Ahh
Bbl: Hah Ahh <3
PL 5:
G: My face, clothes, are all coated with Yuki’s penis milk…
Bbl x2: Hah Ahh
G: This taste… has made me so excited…
PL 6:
Bbl x2: Hah Ah

PG 08:
PL 1:
Right: Rationale…… Crumbling/ Breaking/ Destroyed/ Collapsing (Just choose one)……!!
G: Yeeaahhh <3
G: Yuki suddenly became so enthusiastic…!
PL 2:
Bbl: Nh Ah Ah
PL 3:
G: Ahh Umh
G: Use my breasts… as much as you want… Uhn Ahh
PL 4:
A: Hah Ahh <3
A: Ahh Ahh <3
G: I love Yuki the most!

PG 09:
PL 1:
Arrow on Right: Completely lost his mind
Small bubbles x2: Ah Ah
G: If Yuki touches there now… it’s going to come!
PL 2:
Bbl: Hah ahh
Bbl: Hah Ah
Small Bbl: Ah
PL 3:
Bbl: Nnh
PL 4:
Bbl: Ahh… Ah Ah
PL 5:
Bbl: Hah
Bbl: Hah Ahh
G: I want to be one with Yuki as soon as possible!

PG 10:
Top:
Bbl: Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh… <3
G: Hah Ahn… you reached the deepest part… in just one thrust
G: Uhn Ahh
Mid:
G: Ahh Ahh
G: Yuki <3
Bbl: Ah
Bottom:
G: ahh
bbl: Ah
G: Yuki <3

PG 11:
PL 1:
Top PL 1:
G: Yuki’s… so hot <3
Top PL 2:
G: Your scorching penis is not going to let me stop cumming!
Bbl: Ahh
G: Ahh… Ah Yuki
Middle PL 3:
G: I’m going crazy from cumming non-stop
Bbl: Uhh Ahh
bbl: Ahh Ahh
bbl: Uhm Ahh
A: Yu… Yuno
Bbl: Ahh
Bottom PL 4:
G: Uahh Ahh
Bbl: Nnh Hnh

PG 12:
PL 1:
G: Yuu~~Kii<3
G: Yeeaaaahhh <3
G: If you play with my nipples like that…
PL 2:
G: Ahh… ahh ahh
G: Uhm Ahh Ahh Ah

PG 13:
PL 1:
G: Yuki you really… came a lot……
Bbl: Hah Ahh <3
PL 2:
G: My body still… still can’t stop shivering… This is so embarrassing… You came inside while I was on my climax too
Bbl x2: Hah ahh
Small bbl: Ah
PL 4:
A: This…
G: Uhm… I don’t mind… how many rounds you want… as long as Yuki loves it……
PL 5:
G: Please use my body to your fancy
G: Yuno’s pussy belongs only to Yuki
PL 6:
Bbl: Ahh that’s right

PG 14:
PL 1:
G: I want to… do it while wearing this……
G: Although… this… this is really embarrassing…….
Bottom Right:
Bbl: Rarw rarw
Still hasn’t completely recovered his mind
Top Left:
G: Yuki it’s fine even you don’t do anything
Bbl x2: Hah Ahh
Bottom Left:
Bbl: Nnh <3

PG 15:
PL 1:
A: Yuu…. NO!!
PL 2:
Bbl: Ah
G: Yu… Yuki’s penis … is making my insides frisky… Huh Uhh…
Bbl: Nh
Bbl: Huh Uhh
Top Bbl: Ahh Ah
PL 3:
G: So deep <3
PL 4:
Bbl: Nnh ahh <3
bbl: Ahh <3
G: Yeaahh Brea… Breasts… are very sensitive right now……

PG 16:
PL 1:
G: Yeahhh ahh ahh Ahh ahh ahh
Middle PL:
G: Yuki
Ahh ah
G: Ahhh Ahh Ahh Ahh
Ah… Yuki <3
Bottom PL:
G: Mor… More intense Yuki
G: Hah Ahh Ah <3
G: Hah Ah
Bbl: Uhm <3

PG 17:
PL 1:
G: Yeaa~~~~ Ahh (optional I like it better with the letters like that)
A: Cumming---- <3
G: Nnh Hnh Hmm Ahh Uhn (optional I like it better with the letters like that)
PL 2:
Bbl x2: Ah
A: Hah ahh
PL 4:
Bbl: Yeaahh
Bbl: Ahh
Bbl: Ahh ah
Bottom x2: Ah

PG 18:
PL 1:
G: Hee hee, what a cute sleeping face <3
Yuki <3
G: I really love you the most, Yuki <3
PL 2:
Bubbles x2: *Hum*
PL 3:
Yuno and Yuki will be together forever…
Yuno will protect Yuki forever…
Hee hee

PG 21:
Afterword:
Nice to meet you and hello to all of my readers, I’m the author Miiru.
Thanks for buying my Future Diary doujinshi n(_ _)n
Everything is so sudden = =|||
After looking through different kinds of scenarios from the circle…… Ultimately, I still chose the pure love type (Eh?
Because of the delays by the spring break,
I’m already spitting out blood when I sent this to the printings (X∀X ;
However……
I’m touched that Yuno’s fans are all cute girls!
(Fucking emoticons)
Uhh Uhh I want a yandere girl to protect me too!
The truth is… I don’t feel envy or jealous of Yuki, I only feel hatred towards him…
[Yuno will always be there and protect you, Y̶u̶u̶~̶K̶i̶i̶] (curses
(fucking emoticons)
(The author is malfunctioning… Please ignore.
So long story short,
thank you again for your support, thanks for purchasing this book (/TwT/)
I look forward to our next meeting! (emoticons)

IMPRINT:
Title: Slave Diary ~Yuno is my bride~
Author: Miiru
Guest: Sheery
Special Thanks: 13
Publisher: Cat Street
Publication Date: Spring 2012

Email: unclesaw@hotmail.co.jp
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excellent

editing bounty is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12013

what would you like to work on next? any preferences?
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post Mar 1 2015, 18:22
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[Flyking] Shuu to Inori no Rouman Shiki editing done:
[www.mediafire.com] Here

How should I proceed?

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