[X] My Assistant

Script for Prewar Replenishment, also can be downloaded at [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/vf87cqvxsb2f6ck/Prewar.docx

Translator: Herreis
Page 01: Title: Prewar Replenishment

Page 02:
Panel 1:
1st Bubble: Looks like it is
Pinkish SFXs: Hei Hei
2nd Bubble: Hey hey
3rd Bubble: Isn’t that Shimakaze-chan?
Panel 2:
1st Bubble: That prepubescent body of hers
2nd Bubble: Complemented with that sexy thongs
Panel 3:
1st Bubble: Maybe she’s just starting to have adolescent thought?
2nd Bubble: But we can only give her our admirations from far far away……

Page 03:
Panel 1:
SFX: *Deep In Thoughts…*
1st Bubble: I wonder if the commander noticed my performance last time
Panel 2:
1st Bubble: Ah!
2nd Bubble: Let’s not think about it anymore
Panel 3:
SFX: *Whispers*
1st Bubble: Hehe
2nd Bubble: Guys!!
3rd Bubble: I have a plan…
4th Bubble: That is…… then we……
Panel 4:
1st Bubble: Sounds good let’s do this…
2nd Bubble: Ah She left
SFX: *leaving*

Page 04:
Panel 1:
1st Bubble: Huu Ah~~
SFX 1: *crashes*
SFX 2: *Falls over*
Panel 2:
SFX: *Turns around incessantly*
Bubble: What will the commander say~
Panel 3:
SFX: *Peeps*
Bubble 1: Yaah~
Panel 4:
Bubble: Gentlemen~ Godspeed with you!!
+TL: The word used was “武運昌隆” (Jap pron: Buun Masataka) which is synonymous with “武運長久”. Both idioms were used by the Japanese army during WW 2 but the latter is more commonly used. “武运” means a soldier’s fate or destiny. The idioms’ meaning is “May the soldiers have eternal luck”. So I decided to just put “Godspeed with you”.
Panel 5:
1st Bubble: It seems that she won’t wake up that easily with her sleeping so soundly
Big SFX: *Sleeping soundly*
Small SFXs: Shh Shh
2nd Bubble: She’s asking for it by being a heavy sleeper!!

Page 05:
Panel 1:
1st Bubble: Yee Haw Shimakaze-chan
SFX: Hu
Small Bubble: Hu
Panel 2:
Small SFX: Hu
Big SFX: *Squeezes*
Bubble: She still has a lot to go with here…
Panel 3:
1st Bubble: I have never seen Shimakaze-chan this up close before
2nd Bubble: I can’t take this anymore!!
SFX: *pats*
SFX: *Pulls out*
Panel 4:
Bubble: Taste our penises as much as you want in your sweet dreams!!
SFXs within the bubbles: Uhn Uhn
SFXs outside: *rubs* *rubs* *rubs*

Page 06:
Panel 1:
Bubble: Uhh… I’m cumming
Panel 2:
SFX: *rubs*
Bubble: I never knew Shimakaze-chan’s sleeping face would be so practical…
Panel 3:
Red SFXs: various sound effects use your imagination
Black SFX: *ejaculation*

Page 07:
Panel 1:
SFX: Hah….
SFX: *Eyes opening*
Panel 2:
Bubble: Ah~~ You’ve woken up. Good morning Shimakaze-chan.
SFX 1: *startled*
Bubble SFX: Eh
SFX 2: *Hard erection*
Panel 3:
SFXs: *bunt* *bunt*
SFX: Urgh
Bubble: This is the fuel rods used for supplementary fuel
Panel 4:
1st Bubble: We are to relieve Shimakaze-chan’s tension under the commander’s order
2nd Bubble: This fuel rod looks odd
SFXs: *pokes* *pokes*
3rd Bubble: So peculiar
4th Bubble: We’ll help Shimakaze-chan with the refueling with all our efforts!!

Page 08:
1st Bubble: Yeaa Ah Ah!!
SFX: *Pulls open*
2nd bubble: So this is the thongs that keeps seducing everybody, we’ll have to give it much love after this!!
3rd Bubble: What are you doing stop!!
Panel 2:
bubble: Little child shouldn’t be wearing these sexy thongs!!
SFX: *Fully exposed*
Panel 3:
1st bubble: You’re clearly just seducing everyone…
2nd Bubble: That’s not the case…
SFXs Bubbles: *Unhh* *Uhnn*
3rd Bubble: No!! Please stop, that place is used for peeing!!
SFXs: *licks* *rubs* *rubs*

Page 09:
Panel 1:
SFXs: *various licking sound effects*
1st Bubble: This feeling… Feels so strange
2nd Bubble: Uhh
3rd bubble: Yaa Ahh
Panel 2:
SFX 1: *Enters*
SFX 2: *licks*
Bubble: Yee Ahh… Don’t lick inside
Panel 3:
1st Bubble: Let’s move on to business shall we? Now please be ready for refueling
2nd Bubble: This itchiness feels so weird
Panel 4:
Bubble: Don’t worry!! You’ll love it soon because refueling feels really good

Page 10:
Panel 1:
Bubble: It’s really unfair that the admiral gets to keep all the shipgirls!!
SFXs: *rubs* *rubs*
Panel 2:
Bubble: So tight! So this is Shimakaze-chan’s pussy
SFXs Bubbles: *various moaning SFXs*
SFXs: *various rubbing SFXs*
Panel 3:
Bubble: Ahhh ahhh ahhh ahh!!
SFXs: *various penetration SFXs*
Panel 4:
1st Bubble: A first time’s pussy feels really comfortable
SFXs: “Ha” “Ha”
SFXs: *rubs* *rubs* *rubs*
2nd Bubble: Yaah!! Too deep, my insides are becoming weird

Page 11:
Panel 1:
SFXs: *various penetration and rubbing SFXs*
Small bubbles 1 & 2: Ah
Bubble: Uh Ah! Too forceful you’re breaking me!!
Panel 2:
Bubble: Don’t just open your mouth like that~
SFX: *kiss sfx*
Bubble SFX: Hah Ahh
Panel 3:
Small Bubbles: Hah Ahh
Bubble: My mind… is going blank
Panel 4:
*Various SFXs*

Page 12:
Panel 1:
Small Bubbles: Unhh
Bubble: Yee Ahh!! Feeling… is getting weirder. I can’t think straight anymore……
Panel 2:
SFX: *Hitting* *Stirring*
Panel 3:
Bubbles: Uhh
SFXs: *rubbing*
SFX: *Pulls out*
Panel 4:
SFX Bubbles: Ahh
Bubble: Huh? Why did you stop…
Panel 5:
1st Bubble: Eiiyy!!
2nd bubble: Ah
SFX: *penetration*
SFX: *forceful penetration*

Page 13:
Panel 1:
1st Bubble: Now that you’re used to it~ It’s very pleasurable right!!
Small Bubble: Hah Uhh
SFX: *spurts*
Panel 2 & 3:
*Various moaning, penetration and rubbing SFXs*
Panel 4:
SFXs: *rubbings and penetration*
1st Bubble: So pleasing~~ Something’s coming up!!
2nd Bubble: Yaa Hah Hahh
3rd bubble: Hah ahh

Page 14:
Panel 1:
Small Bubble 1: En Ahh
Small Bubble 2:Hah Enhh~~ It’s feeling better and better~~
SFXs: *rubs*
Panel 2:
1st Bubble: Wuahaha~~ I’m breaking apart!! There’s so much hot fuel coming in
2nd Bubble: Yeahh Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh ahh ahh ahh!!
3rd Bubble: Use your womb to catch them all!!
SFXs: *spurts* *rubs* *penetration*
Panel 3:
SFX: *filling in*
SFX: *ejaculation*

Page 15:
30 Hours later…
Panel 1:
SFX: *slurps*
Panel 2:
Bubble: Emm
SFX: *Satisfied*
Panel 3:
1st bubble: Ah
2nd Bubble: I forgot how much time has passed since it felt so good
Last panel:
1st bubble: Shimakaze! The commander….
SFX: *creaks*
2nd Bubble: Wuuooah ahh ahh ahh ahh! What happened over here?
SFX: *CARNAGE*
3rd Bubble: Refueling complete~~ I’ll make sure the commander takes notice of me this time

Page 16:
Nothing to be translated, but if you are insisted
We wish the author for a successful sales, everybody please support!
-Taitong Electrical Stove

Page 17:
Afterword:
I managed to finish the new doujin by the deadline this time!! But at the cost of my liver (Collapses
It was quite a sudden that a Shimakaze-chan’s book is made this time, I was going to make this one for the new releases of PS02. But because I didn’t have enough material, plus with insufficient refinements, thus postponing it to PF or FF23 (Kneels
Lastly~~ shimakaze-chan is really cute~~~ (was punched flying away
I hope everyone comes and purchases this new release~~

Sorry I must have missed that one:
KUR: Onee-same~~ What are you doing?
MIK: Sorry I cannot find myself liking clothes which barely covers anything at all.

MIK: ...In any case, Kuroko has Kuroko's ways of doing things...
(Yes she does refer to herself in third person, I guess because she is in a monologue right here)

Thanks, chung2795. Here's the final version of "Delusional Electrical Maiden".

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Title: Delusional Electrical Maiden
Translator: Herreis


LEGEND:

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P00
TITLE: Delusional Electrical Maiden


P01
I was going to do a debut work featuring Mikoto and Kuroko at first, but I didn't expect to find it surprisingly hard to develop this pair. On one hand, it didn't feel right to have Mikoto take the lead, but on the other hand, I had no idea of how to let Kuroko be the dominant one. This gave me quite a headache for some time.
Since neither path could be taken, I decided to try starting a new path by letting the main protagonist lead the way. Since the plot took a different direction midway, the transition may feel abrupt, but the story managed to come together successfully in the end.
I regret that I wasn't able to pair up Mikoto and Kuroko successfully. I'm a fan of the yuri genre, but I just don't have what it takes to develop a good plot for a yuri story. I need more practice on this. I hope that I can create a yuri work someday that will not only satisfy myself, but everyone else reading it as well ^^.
Flyking


P02
MIK: ... // What the heck is this?

KUR: It's the Year of the Tiger, isn't it? Tiger stripes go well with the image of the thunder god, so I think this is the best New Year gift for Onee-sama♥

MIK: I see... In that case, no thanks, but I'd like to have this gift returned~~
KUR: Ahh~!!

KUR: Onee-sama~! Why'd you do that?!
MIK: Sorry, but I just don't like clothes that barely cover anything at all.

KUR: ...In that case, Kuroko will have to do Kuroko's way of doing things...

MIK: Huh?


P03
MIK: Ahh~!! Kuroko! You...

KUR: Purchased goods are non-refundable! // I'll take Onee-sama's pajamas for safekeeping for now.

MIK: Hey! Give me back my clothes!
KUR: I don't wanna~~ Try and catch me~~♥

SFX: Stomp stomp stomp...
MIK: Oh no! It's the dorm supervisor!

SUP: What's all this racket about?!


P04
MIK: Hahaha...
MIK: There was... a cockroach flying around... just now...

KUR: This really is...
SUP: A cockroach?
MIK: ...Yeah.
KUR: the happiest moment in my life.

KUR: I can get as close to Onee-sama as I want without her putting up a fight...
SUP: Do you need the robo-janitor to check out the room?
MIK: No need... // I think it already flew away...
MIK: Kuroko, when did you... Hey~! Stop that!

KUR: This is a once-in-a-lifetime chance. Instead of letting this opportunity go, why not take advantage of it? That way, I'll have no regrets whatsoever.
KUR: Onee-sama! Here I come!


P05
SUP: Hey... Where's Shirai?
MIK: K-Kuroko? Um... She went to the washroom just now...
SUP: Are you feeling okay? Your face is so red!
MIK: I-It's nothing. It's no big deal. I'll probably feel better once I take a nap...

SUP: Overexerting yourself is bad for your health.
MIK: It's really nothing to worry about! I'm just feeling tired, that's all...

SUP: Hmm... Then make sure you get some rest.
MIK: Yes, Ma'am...
SUP: That was just a reminder.


P06
MIK: Ah~~ Kuroko... Don't... Don't suck on it so hard! Ah! Ah!

MIK: If you keep doing that, I'm really going to start moaning...
SFX (small bubbles, from right to left): Haah // Haah // Uh~~ // Uhhh~~

SUP: In any case, please refrain from causing further disturbances.
SUP: All the noise you're making is causing trouble for the other students and teachers living in this dormitory.
SUP: If there's an actual emergency, you can contact me any time and I'll assist you as soon as possible.

SUP: Now, if there are no other problems,

SUP: then I'll be taking my leave.
SUP: Take care.

MIK: Good night...
MIK: Ma'am...


P07
MIK: Finally...
MIK: She's gone...

MIK: That bitch Kuroko. Forcing my body to keep still through all of that was such a pain...
KUR: Onee-sama? // Onee-sama?
SFX (small bubbles x3): Haah
MIK: I'm so exhausted... I'm losing consciousness... I can't see straight anymore...

MIK: ...But why's this idiot's face showing up so clearly?
TOU: Bug zapper.
TOU: Hey~~
TOU: Bug zapper.
MIK: And when did this idiot show up, anyway...?

TOU: If you can't keep up, just surrender and give up on this round's Upper Level Experiment already!

MIK: You... Why should I surrender to an idiot like you? // Besides, a Level Zero like you has no use for experiments, anyway!


P08
TOU: Well, this is a problem.
TOU: Because this is exactly the result predicted by the "Tree Diagram" supercomputer...

MIK: R-Result? Why... Why did it end up with me doing this with you?!

TOU: You agreed to this experiment when you said, "I'm okay with Touma as my partner," so why are you still asking that question?

MIK: No way! This can't be happening! This... This...
TOU: Now that you've recovered your energy, let's continue with the experiment! // This is the program designed by the Tree Diagram.


P09
TOU: During our Upper Level experimentation, we found that we couldn't meet the condition of "defeating you a hundred times" because there's only one Railgun-chan. That's why we extended the plan to include Misaka-chan.
MIK: Wait, what does that mean?
SFX (small bubbles, right to left): Ah // Ah~Ah
TOU: In other words, perhaps the conditions of that objective would be met if we changed the method to "pushing you down"? Touma-Touma is in a pinch.
MIK: T-Those are two completely different issues! // And what's with that weird way of talking?

TOU: Yes, there may be a difference between those two issues, but the basic principle is still the same. Touma-Touma is resolute and decisive.
MIK: Geez! I knew there was a problem with the logic of that old trash heap of a computer from the very beginning!
MIK: I'm telling you to stop...!
MIK: Stop!
MIK: Ahh~!
TOU: After recalculating, the results show that quantity must be increased to make up for the insufficient quality. Touma-Touma is getting serious.
MIK: Stop talking that way! It's disgusting!


P10
TOU: Anyway, this experiment needs to be repeated over twenty thousand times.
MIK: T-Twenty thousand? // Are you kidding me?
SFX (small bubbles x2): Haah

SFX (small bubbles x3): Hah
TOU: By ejaculating this thick fluid into Railgun-chan's body like this... contact between these two entities will result in a miraculous chemical reaction, producing a huge amount of energy...

MIK: What?
MIK: N-No way...

TOU: And with this, we've completed the first Upper Level experiment.
MIK: Stop... Ah~~!!


P11
MIK: I'm still not sure what's going on. Why am I doing all of this without any hesitation...? Could it be that this idiot...
MIK: No! That's impossible! Who'd fall for an idiot like this in the first place...

MIK: But what's this strange feeling I have in my chest...?

MIK: Is there anyone around... this part of town?
TOU: The Tree Diagram predicts a less than ten percent probability of anyone passing by. Touma-Touma is relaying.
MIK: I told you to stop that!

TOU: Are you worried about being seen by someone you know? Isn't it more exciting with other people watching?


P12
MIK: Huh~? Who'd get excited from this?!
TOU: Yeow~!!

MIK: I-I'm just going along with the experiment because I don't have a choice. Don't get so full of yourself!

TOU: I'm sorry...! Please forgive my little friend down there, too...

TOU: Railgun-chan's private spot is releasing faint electrical charges. My penis is getting all excited from the stimulus...
TOU: Allow me to return the favor...
MIK: Ah... Uhh...


P13
MIK: Uhh...
MIK: Uhhh~~!

SFX (small bubbles, right to left): Haah // Ahh // Haah
TOU: Whoa! I can feel a shocking sensation from within this small hole of yours! It looks like Railgun-chan's body is really aroused!
MIK: I'm... I'm not... aroused... or anything...

TOU: You're really turning me on!
MIK: Ahh~~! You... You came again! And so much, too...


P14
TOU: Don't worry! I'll get hard again in no time!
MIK: I'm... I'm... not asking you to!
SFX (small bubbles x2): Ah...

TOU: I know you're looking forward to this a lot, so I won't let you down!
MIK: Huh?
TOU: I'll be going all out!

MIK: Ah!
MIK: Ah! Ah!

MIK: Ah, geez! What... What kind... What kind of experiment... What kind of Upper Level experiment is this?!
TOU: This? This is our...
MIK: Our what?!


P15
TOU: This is...
TOU: our Upper Experiment of Love♥


P16
MIK: How could I have had a dream as lewd as that? Does that mean I actually want to do it with him...? No, it can't be! I won't accept that! There's a limit to how low one's standards can go!
MIK: And what's with that "Upper Level of Love" nonsense? It sounded so stupid that I wanted to smack myself in the head! ... But, still... this feeling in my heart won't go away...

TOU: Hey, what weird stuff did you stay up late reading? You were talking about some really strange things in your sleep.
TOU: A brat like you should go to bed early, or else your body won't grow up properly.

TOU: And when that happens, your personality will get all twisted, and then you'll... huh?
MIK: You...

MIK: This is all your fault!
TOU: What...? Why?
MIK: Ow, ow! // You're just a Level Zero esper, but you played... you played... // with my feelings...!
TOU: ...Huh? What are you talking about?
MIK: N-N-Never mind that! I'm going to teach you a lesson today! Don't you dare run away!
TOU: I hate my luck~~!


P17
Thank you for reading this. I, Flyking, would like to express my sincere gratitude to you.
My previous work's setting took place in a library, so let's talk a bit about libraries.
Last October, Xindian District reopened its main library at a new location, and the mayor proudly called it a "five-star" library. Because of that, I decided to visit it together with my little sister on a day that I was free.
The library was located on the third floor, so it was quite easy to find. However, we couldn't find the entrance from the front stairway. After asking around at the information counter, we were told that the entrance was actually located at the back of the building.
After taking the elevator to the third floor, we saw that the corridor leading to the library was full of artwork. We passed an art exhibition center and a computer center along the way before reaching the library entrance.
Once we entered the library, we were surprised to find a cafe there. It was the first time I saw a library that sells coffee, and it really left an impression on me.
We walked around the place, but there's not much to say about it aside from the French windows. The library felt weird to me because it seemed to be too luxurious a place for people to read books.
The next time I get writer's block, I'll consider going back to there for a change of scenery. Perhaps I might even find an unexpected spark of inspiration there ^^.

There's nothing wrong with this post-proffread script I think

Cool. For an editing update, https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11314 is being worked on by GaryMcNabb

Here's the proofread version of "Please Teach Me! Bellows Onee-chan"

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Title: Please Teach Me! Bellows Onee-chan
Translator: Herreis


LEGEND:

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P01
TITLE: Please Teach Me! Bellows Onee-chan


P02
BOX: There's a lot of adjusting that needs to be done, now that Chamber is gone...
BOX: On this aquatic world, learning how to swim is a must...

BEL: That was great!
LED: Haah!
LED: Haah!

BEL: The current was pretty strong today...
BEL: It nearly pulled off my swimsuit!


P03
BEL: Your swimming skills are improving quite quickly,
BEL: Ledo.

LED: Oh crap!
LED: No wonder my butt feels cold...

LED: My swimming trunks...
LED: have been swept away!!

BEL: Aren't you coming out yet?

BEL: Or is it that...
BEL: you want to swim some more?
BEL (outside): That's the spirit, young man!
LED: That's not it, Bellows...


P04
LED: Whoa!

BEL: Where'd this huge wave come from...

BEL: Cough cough
BEL: Uhh... Ouch!!

BEL: Huh?

BEL: Whoa!!
BEL: How'd we end up like this?

LED: ?! // Bellows!! I didn't do this on purpose...!
BEL: Well, no wonder you weren't coming out. You lost your swimming trunks, didn't you?


P05
BEL: But still... this is pretty impressive!!
LED: I-I have no idea why that happens!

LED: Ever since I saw Amy's dance performance...
LED: it always gets hard and hot, even when I wake up...

LED: Bel... Bellows!? What are you doing!?

BEL: There's no need to be embarrassed. This is a sign of adulthood.
BEL: You like Amy, don't you?
LED: E-Eh!?

BEL: Well, this is the proof of your love!
BEL: But it really needs to be dealt with properly...!

BEL: Let me give you a good lesson on what to do with it.


P06
LED: Wait! There's...

LED: You shouldn't do that! That thing's dirty!!

LED: Uhh!!
LED: You've swallowed it all!

LED: Ahh... Don't... That's really dirty.
LED: Haah
LED: But it feels so good...

LED: Haah haah~ I... I think...
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Gulp
LED: I think my pee is coming out...!


P07
BEL: Gulp... Shoo ee ouu!
SFX: Slurp
BEL: Et ee aist Redosh fayvo...

LED: Dammit...
LED: I can't hold back any longer!

LED: Uwaaah!
LED: It's coming... My pee is coming out!!

SFX: Gulp
SFX: Slurp

LED: Pee... So much white pee... That felt so great...
BEL: Heh heh... That's what's called ejaculation! So thick and dense... A young boy's flavor.
BEL: This really is your first time.


P08
BEL: Ahh...
BEL: The taste of a young virgin really is the best.

LED: B-Bellows...
LED: Something's wrong...
LED: It's even larger now...

BEL: Since it's Ledo's meat stick, I guess I don't have a choice...
SFX: Slip

BEL: Let Onee-chan give you...
BEL: an even better lesson!

BEL: First, put your meat stick in here...
LED: Ooh...
LED: So tight!

LED: Uh... Ahh...
LED: I-It's going in!!


P09
LED: Whoa!!
LED: Bellows' body feels so good!!
BEL: Haah
BEL: Haah
BEL: Heh heh! My pussy's simply the best!

BEL: Your meat stick pumping in and out of my pussy feels so good~~
LED: Ahh... It feels like you're sucking me into it!

LED: Haah
LED: Haah
BEL: Haah... Ledo, you're not letting up at all...
BEL: Haah
BEL: Sex feels really good, doesn't it?

BEL: Ledo...?

BEL: Waaaaah!!
SFX: Speeding up


P10
BEL: Ahh! Ledo... Why'd you suddenly...
BEL: This is so embarrassing!!

BEL: If you do it that forcefully, you'll hit...
SFX (small bubbles x4): Whap whap
BEL: the deepest parts of my womb!!
BEL: Ahhhh!


P11
LED: Haah... Ah...
LED: Your pussy feels so tight...

LED: It feels so good...
BEL: Ahh...

BEL: Uhh... Ahh... Your hard and hot penis is penetrating my pussy...
BEL: Haah
SFX (small bubbles x3): Whap whap
BEL: My pussy's so full... So great...

BEL: Haah
BEL: Your penis... It's incredible...

LED: Your breasts are so big and soft... I can't get enough of them!
BEL: Haah
BEL: Haah
BEL: No! Don't rub them like that, it's too much...


P12
BEL: Ahh... My body's on fire...!
BEL: Haah
BEL: Your hot penis just won't stop!
BEL: My pussy's melting...

BEL: Ahh... Ahh...!
BEL: If this keeps up...

LED: Bellows... I-I'm cumming!!
SFX: Splurt
BEL: Nooo!! Don't come inside...

BEL: Haah...

BEL: You'll get me pregnant!!
BEL: Uhh... Aaaaaah...!


P13
BEL: Ahhhhhh!!
BEL: Uwaaaah!!

BEL: Haah... Haah...
SFX: Drip

BEL: Your semen's so hot...
BEL: and overflowing...

BEL: You went too far...
BEL: I only intended to help you relieve your stress...

BEL: How dare you go overboard and come inside me!
LED: I'm sorry... It just felt so good, so...

BEL: Well, you'll have to take full responsibility for what happens next!
BEL: Le-Do-Sen-Sei.
LED: Whoa!!


P14
BEL: Put your OOO away!
BEL: And go to sleep already!
TITLE: Please Teach Me! Bellows Onee-chan

Thank you for the proofreading! I am glad to see a lot of activity in this thread (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

The proofread script is A-okay and seems to be okay for further editing

Took the liberty to accept Bellows Jiejie Jiaojiao Wo Ba!

Just give me around a week to finish everything, though I can cough out a 4 page sample later / tomorrow

@chung2795:

which nick (or both) do you want on the releases? do you care?

Here's the first-pass proofread version of "Prewar Replenishment".

There are a few things I'd like clarified (and a missing translation bubble), highlighted in red. Incidentally, I also changed all instances of "Commander" to "Admiral". I hope I did the right thing.

P.S. Those SFX drove me nuts!


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Prewar Replenishment
Translator: Herreis


P01
TITLE: Prewar Replenishment (Would "Pre-Battle Replenishment" be a better choice of title?)


P02
MAN1: Hey, look.
SFX: Hey hey
MAN2: Oh?
MAN2: Isn't that Shimakaze-chan?

MAN1: That child-like body of hers...
MAN2: Combined with those sexy thongs...

MAN1: Maybe she's starting to have "adult" thoughts?
MAN2: Even so, we can only worship her from afar...


P03:
SFX: Deep in thought...
SHI: I wonder if the Admiral noticed my performance the last time?

SHI: Ah!!
SHI: Just forget about it.

MAN1: Heh heh
MAN1: Hey, guys!!
MAN1: I've got an idea.
MAN1: First, we... then we...

MAN2: Sounds good. Let's do it...
MAN3: Ah. She's leaving.
SFX: Tap tap


P04
SHI: Haah~~
SFX: Pomf
SFX: Flop

SFX: Roll roll
SHI: What would the Admiral say?

SFX: Peek
SHI: Haah~

MAN1: Gentlemen~ Godspeed with you!! (Would "OK, boys~ Full speed ahead!!" be a better choice? It's also a naval term, and it fits Shimakaze's obsession with speed.)
<TL: The original term used was "武運昌隆" ("Buun Masataka" in Japanese), which is synonymous with "武運長久". Both idioms were used by the Japanese Army during WW2, but the latter is more commonly used. "武运" means a soldier's fate or destiny. Both idioms mean "May the soldiers have eternal luck".>

MAN1: She's fast asleep, so she probably won't wake up that easily.
SFX: Fast asleep
SFX: Zzz
SFX: Zzz
MAN2: She's a heavy sleeper, so she's asking for it!!


P05
MAN1: Oh yeah, Shimakaze-chan.
SFX: Haah
MAN2: Haah

SFX: Zzz
SFX: Squeeze
MAN1: She still has a lot to go with here... (Is he saying that Shimakaze's boobs are big enough, or that she still has a lot of growing to do?)

MAN1: I've never seen Shimakaze-chan this up close before.
MAN2: I can't take this any more!!
SFX: Slap
SFX: Sproing

MAN1: Here, taste our dicks as much as you want in your sweet dreams!!
SHI: Mmm
SHI: Mmm
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub


P06
MAN1: Ugh... I'm cumming!

SFX: Rub rub
MAN1: I never knew that Shimakaze's sleeping face would be so practical... (Does he mean "I never knew I could make use of Shimakaze's sleeping face like this"?)

SFX: Splurt
SFX: Splurt
SFX: Squirt
SFX: Splat
SFX (black characters): Throb throb


P07
SFX: Haah...
SFX: Waking up

MAN1: Ah~ You're awake. Good morning, Shimakaze-chan.
SFX: Shock
SHI: Huh?
SFX: Atten~tion!

SHI: MISSING (My guess is that she's saying "What are those weird things?")

SFX: Poke
SFX: Poke
SFX: Ugh
MAN1: These are fuel rods used for supplementary fueling.

MAN1: We're here on the Admiral's orders to relieve your tension, Shimakaze-chan.
SHI: This fuel rod looks really weird.
SFX: Poke
SFX: Poke
SHI: So peculiar.
MAN2: We'll do our best to help refuel you, Shimakaze-chan!!


P08
SHI: Ahh!!
SFX: Spreads open
MAN1: So these are the thongs that seduce everyone. We'll have to give them a lot of love after this!!
SHI: What are you doing? Stop!!

MAN1: Little kids shouldn't be wearing thongs as sexy as these!!
SFX: Fully exposed

MAN1: You're obviously trying to seduce everyone...
SHI: No, I'm not...
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: No, stop!! That place is used for peeing!!
SFX: Lick
SFX: Lick
SFX: Lick


P09
SFX: Lick
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Slurp
SHI: I feel... so strange...
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah

SFX: Shloop
SFX: Slurp
SHI: Ahh... Don't lick inside!

MAN1: Let's get down to business, shall we? Now prepare yourself for refueling.
SHI: This itchiness feels so weird...

MAN1: Don't worry!! You'll love it very soon, because refueling feels really good.
SFX: Throb


P10
MAN1: It's so unfair that the Admiral gets to keep all the shipgirls!!
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub

MAN1: So tight! So this is Shimakaze-chan's pussy.
SHI: Ah
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah
SFX: Shlick
SFX: Shlick
SFX: Shluck

SHI: Ahhhhh!!
SFX: Shloop
SFX: Slide
SFX: Stretch

MAN1: A virgin's pussy feels so good.
SFX: Haah
SFX: Haah
SHI: Ahh! It's going in too deep! My insides feel so weird!
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap


P11
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh! // Too forceful! You're breaking me!!

MAN1: Don't just open your mouth like that~
SHI: Haah
SFX: Lick

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: My mind... is going blank.

SFX: Haah
SFX: Haah
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Twitch


P12
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh! // I'm feeling... really weird. I can't think straight any more...
SFX: Whap
SFX: Slap

SFX: Poke
SFX: Twitch

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SFX: Twitch
SFX: Twitch
SFX: Shloop

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Huh? Why'd you stop...

SHI: Ahh!!
SHI: Haah
SFX: Shloop
SFX: Smack


P13
MAN1: It feels real good once you get used to it, doesn't it?!
SHI: Haah
SFX: Whap

SFX: Shloop
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SFX: Whap

SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SHI: So good~~ Something's coming out!!
SHI: Ahhh!
SHI: Ahh!


P14
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh~~ It's feeling better and better~~
SFX: Shluck
SFX: Shluck

SHI: Ahh~! I'm breaking apart!! So much hot fuel is pouring in!
SHI: Ahhhhhh!!
MAN1: Use your womb to suck it all up!!
SFX: Spurt
SFX: Splurt
SFX: Splurt

SFX: Splurt
SFX: Sploot


P15
TXT: 30 hours later...
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Slurp

SHI: Ahh
SFX: Satisfied

SHI: Ah...
SHI: It felt so good that I lost track of the time.

KON: Shimakaze~ The Admiral...
SFX: Creak
KON: Whoaaa! What the hell happened here?!
SFX: Carnage
SHI: Refueling complete~! I'll make sure the Admiral takes notice of me this time!


P16
Best wishes to the author for successful sales. Please support him, everyone!
By: Taitong Electrical Stove


P17
Afterword

I managed to finish a new doujin by the deadline this time!!
But at the cost of my liver (Collapses)

I made a sudden decision to create a Shimakaze-chan work this time. I was going to make this one for the new releases of PS02.
But because I didn't have enough material and wasn't able to refine it enough... I had to postpone it to PF or FF23 instead (Kneels)

One last thing~~ Shimakaze-chan is really cute~~ (Gets punched flying away)

I hope everyone attends and buys this new release~~

Note about credit pages: chung told me "Just put Herreis as my nickname and it'll be alright I have been using that name for my other releases too"

alright I'll be sure to fix the script and edits according and make sure he gets on the credits with the nick he wants. Sorry about how long this is taking i'm both switching jobs now and getting jerked around by some of the color redraws this is throwing at me.

Just put my nickname as Herreis as that is also the name I use for my other releases, ok now the post-editing for Prewar

PG 01:
Title: I don't mind either one cause they carry the same meaning

PG 04: I can't find the translation for "武運昌隆" so use any phrases as long as it's suitable, and hei you're the one with more background knowledge for Kantai Collection (I have little idea what this series is about)

PG 05: Referring to still has a lot of growing to do

PG 06: He literally said, " I never knew that Shimakaze's sleeping face would be so practical..." but you can change it even I felt that dialogue was verrrryyy weird

Pg 07: Oh sorry for that missing dialogue. Yeah she said "What is this?"


Ok thanks for proof reading and editing (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Thanks again, chung2795. Here's the final proofread version of "Pre-Battle Replenishment".


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Title: Pre-Battle Replenishment
Translator: Herreis


LEGEND:

EMPTY LINES - Separation between panels
XXX: xxx // xxx - Text spread across two bubbles (separated by "//")


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P01
TITLE: Pre-Battle Replenishment


P02
MAN1: Hey, look.
SFX: Hey hey
MAN2: Oh?
MAN2: Isn't that Shimakaze-chan?

MAN1: That child-like body of hers...
MAN2: Combined with those sexy thongs...

MAN1: Maybe she's starting to have "adult" thoughts?
MAN2: Even so, we can only worship her from afar...


P03:
SFX: Deep in thought...
SHI: I wonder if the Admiral noticed my performance the last time?

SHI: Ah!!
SHI: Just forget about it.

MAN1: Heh heh
MAN1: Hey, guys!!
MAN1: I've got an idea.
MAN1: First, we... then we...

MAN2: Sounds good. Let's do it...
MAN3: Ah. She's leaving.
SFX: Tap tap


P04
SHI: Haah~~
SFX: Pomf
SFX: Flop

SFX: Roll roll
SHI: What would the Admiral say?

SFX: Peek
SHI: Haah~

MAN1: OK, boys~ Full speed ahead!!
<TL: The original term used was "武運昌隆" ("Buun Masataka" in Japanese), which is synonymous with "武運長久". Both idioms were used by the Japanese Army during WW2, but the latter is more commonly used. "武运" means a soldier's fate or destiny. Both idioms mean "May the soldiers have eternal luck".>

MAN1: She's fast asleep, so she probably won't wake up that easily.
SFX: Fast asleep
SFX: Zzz
SFX: Zzz
MAN2: She's a heavy sleeper, so she's asking for it!!


P05
MAN1: Oh yeah, Shimakaze-chan.
SFX: Haah
MAN2: Haah

SFX: Zzz
SFX: Squeeze
MAN1: She still has a lot of growing to do here...

MAN1: I've never seen Shimakaze-chan this up close before.
MAN2: I can't take this any more!!
SFX: Slap
SFX: Sproing

MAN1: Here, taste our dicks as much as you want in your sweet dreams!!
SHI: Mmm
SHI: Mmm
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub


P06
MAN1: Ugh... I'm cumming!

SFX: Rub rub
MAN1: I never knew I could make use of Shimakaze-chan's sleeping face this way...

SFX: Splurt
SFX: Splurt
SFX: Squirt
SFX: Splat
SFX (black characters): Throb throb


P07
SFX: Haah...
SFX: Waking up

MAN1: Ah~ You're awake. Good morning, Shimakaze-chan.
SFX: Shock
SHI: Huh?
SFX: Atten~tion!

SHI: What are those things?

SFX: Poke
SFX: Poke
SFX: Ugh
MAN1: These are fuel rods used for supplementary fueling.

MAN1: We're here on the Admiral's orders to relieve your tension, Shimakaze-chan.
SHI: This fuel rod looks really weird.
SFX: Poke
SFX: Poke
SHI: So peculiar.
MAN2: We'll do our best to help refuel you, Shimakaze-chan!!


P08
SHI: Ahh!!
SFX: Spreads open
MAN1: So these are the thongs that seduce everyone. We'll have to give them a lot of love after this!!
SHI: What are you doing? Stop!!

MAN1: Little kids shouldn't be wearing thongs as sexy as these!!
SFX: Fully exposed

MAN1: You're obviously trying to seduce everyone...
SHI: No, I'm not...
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: No, stop!! That place is used for peeing!!
SFX: Lick
SFX: Lick
SFX: Lick


P09
SFX: Lick
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Slurp
SHI: I feel... so strange...
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah

SFX: Shloop
SFX: Slurp
SHI: Ahh... Don't lick inside!

MAN1: Let's get down to business, shall we? Now prepare yourself for refueling.
SHI: This itchiness feels so weird...

MAN1: Don't worry!! You'll love it very soon, because refueling feels really good.
SFX: Throb


P10
MAN1: It's so unfair that the Admiral gets to keep all the shipgirls!!
SFX: Rub
SFX: Rub

MAN1: So tight! So this is Shimakaze-chan's pussy.
SHI: Ah
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah
SFX: Shlick
SFX: Shlick
SFX: Shluck

SHI: Ahhhhh!!
SFX: Shloop
SFX: Slide
SFX: Stretch

MAN1: A virgin's pussy feels so good.
SFX: Haah
SFX: Haah
SHI: Ahh! It's going in too deep! My insides feel so weird!
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap


P11
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh! // Too forceful! You're breaking me!!

MAN1: Don't just open your mouth like that~
SHI: Haah
SFX: Lick

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: My mind... is going blank.

SFX: Haah
SFX: Haah
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Twitch


P12
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh! // I'm feeling... really weird. I can't think straight any more...
SFX: Whap
SFX: Slap

SFX: Poke
SFX: Twitch

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SFX: Twitch
SFX: Twitch
SFX: Shloop

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SHI: Huh? Why'd you stop...

SHI: Ahh!!
SHI: Haah
SFX: Shloop
SFX: Smack


P13
MAN1: It feels real good once you get used to it, doesn't it?!
SHI: Haah
SFX: Whap

SFX: Shloop
SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah

SHI: Haah
SHI: Haah
SFX: Whap

SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SFX: Whap
SHI: So good~~ Something's coming out!!
SHI: Ahhh!
SHI: Ahh!


P14
SHI: Ahh
SHI: Haah
SHI: Ahh~~ It's feeling better and better~~
SFX: Shluck
SFX: Shluck

SHI: Ahh~! I'm breaking apart!! So much hot fuel is pouring in!
SHI: Ahhhhhh!!
MAN1: Use your womb to suck it all up!!
SFX: Spurt
SFX: Splurt
SFX: Splurt

SFX: Splurt
SFX: Sploot


P15
TXT: 30 hours later...
SFX: Slurp
SFX: Slurp

SHI: Ahh
SFX: Satisfied

SHI: Ah...
SHI: It felt so good that I lost track of the time.

KON: Shimakaze~ The Admiral...
SFX: Creak
KON: Whoaaa! What the hell happened here?!
SFX: Carnage
SHI: Refueling complete~! I'll make sure the Admiral takes notice of me this time!


P16
Best wishes to the author for successful sales. Please support him, everyone!
By: Taitong Electrical Stove


P17
Afterword

I managed to finish a new doujin by the deadline this time!!
But at the cost of my liver (Collapses)

I made a sudden decision to create a Shimakaze-chan work this time. I was going to make this one for the new releases of PS02.
But because I didn't have enough material and wasn't able to refine it enough... I had to postpone it to PF or FF23 instead (Kneels)

One last thing~~ Shimakaze-chan is really cute~~ (Gets punched flying away)

I hope everyone attends and buys this new release~~

Yeah the script seems ok

I'll take care of Pre-war Replenishment Done

Next up I'll deal with Hakudaku Seitokai

This post has been edited by GaryMcNabb: Feb 9 2015, 03:48

Good job. I'm working on Shuu to Inori no Romanshiki so you guys can look forward to that too (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Yep, certainly looking forward to all of that (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Ok work done for https://e-hentai.org/g/615250/09865a3bb0/
DL Link: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/w4ci473h49r2...romanshiki.docx

Script:
Translator: Herreis
PG 01~02:
Title: 集與祈的浪漫式 (Original Chinese title)  Shuu to Inori no Rouman Shiki (Japanese Romanization)// Ji yu Qi de LangManShi (Chinese Romanization)// Romance of Shuu and Inori (English translation)

PG 03:
Preface:
I was planning a trip to Japan to settle some affairs during the end of 2011, however some minor accident happened and the whole ordeal ended with a wasted plane ticket and the cancelation of my trip. Later during a reunion with my former classmates we talked about not having a trip together although we’ve known each other for a long time, thus I proposed my plan for a trip to Japan and we arranged our schedule accordingly for our trip.
For this trip we overlooked Mt. Fuji from Lake Kawaguchi, we played the whole day at Fuji-Q Highland, then after we’re done with Komike we went to experience Oedo’s customs at the hot springs of Oedo. We even felt an earthquake on an escalator at Shinjuku (I only knew there was an earthquake after that from the news). It was really a fulfilling trip.
That was a really precious experience from a rare trip, after all it’s quite a feat to pull off this trip since we are all busy with our own jobs. It’s my fortune to have you all as my friends. Thanks you to all of my good friends. I look forward to our next trip together.
Flyking
Big Panel:
INR (red): … Do I really need to use this to sing? I have a feeling something more than sound is coming out from here….
SHU (black): I will try my best to avoid that from happening…
Small Panel:
INR: Microphone testing.
SHU: OH OH OH OH OH OH OH……

PG 04:
PNL 2:
SHU (BLK): The metro is more crowded today…
SHU: And something feels off too…
PNL 3:
INR: Shuu….
SHU: Ahh, it just kind of spurred of my mouth there, don’t mind it too much.
PNL 4:
INR: After we got into here…
INR: I’m feeling quite sultry over here…
SHU: Ehh? Re, really?

PG 05:
PNL 1:
SHU: Ahh ha ha… maybe it is overcrowded after all…
Bubbleless: She’s even taking off her shirt……? This is going to be bad if I don’t stop her now…
PNL 2:
SHU: Inori, this is really inappropriate…
SHU: Ah! The train…
SFX: Shakes~

PG 06:
PNL 1:
This soft and warm sensation is…
Eh? Ok and bouncy……?!
PNL 2:
Does Inori have the habit to wear a bra…?
PNL 4:
INR: Criminal Metro Pervert
PNL 5:
SHU: Inori! Let me explain! That, I , really…
INR: How do they feel?
SHU: ……. Ehh?

PG 07:
PNL 1:
INR: Is it… comfortable?
SHU: Uhm…
S: Very soft…
S: Very warm…
PNL 2:
I: Is that so…
Right PNL:
I: If Shuu likes this kind of sensation…
I: You can continue…
Left PNL 1:
S: Then I…
S: Won’t hold back…
L PNL 2:
Her nipple is getting hard…
SFX: “Squeeze”
L PNL 3:
I really want to see what’s underneath…
SFX: “Tears”

PG 08:
PNL 1:
SFX: “Tears”
PNL 4:
I: Ahh~~!
PNL 5:
S: …… I never knew…
S: That… Inori can moan like that…
S: You sound really cute just now! For real!
PNL 6:
SFX: “Grabs”
I: Ahh~~!!!
PNL 7:
I: Shuu… Shuu’s voice… is… much cuter…
Is she bickering right now… it’s really cute though…

PG 09:
PNL 1:
This is bad! Inori’s hands…
This feels too wonderful
PNL 2:
Red: Ahh~~
PNL 3:
I: Shuu’s voice…
I: Is flustering…
I: Jabbering…
SFX: “Stroking”
I: Interesting…
PNL 4:
S: I wish to listen more of Inori’s voices…

PG 10:
PNL 1:
S: Inori…
S: You’re shaking…
PNL 2:
I: You are too over here…
PNL 4:
I: Ahhh~~~~~
PNL 5:
S: This is it!
S: Let me hear more of Inori’s sweet moans…
PNL 6 & 7:
All I: Uhn

PG 11:
PNL 1:
S: Looks like in order to hear more from Inori, I’ll need to use my friend that Inori took out just now….
PNL 2:
S: How will Inori react now…
I: Wait…
PNL 3:
I SFX: Uhm…
I SFX: Uhh…
PNL 4:
S SFX: Woah--
I SFX: Uhm
S: So, so much resistance…
I SFX: Uhn
PNL 5:
S: Finally… it’s fully inside now…
S: The feeling of being fully enveloped inside Inori…
S: Just feels too damn good…
I: Shuu…

PG 12:
Top Right PNL:
I: Shuu… face… closer…
Top Left PNL:
All SFXs: Uhn or Uhm
Middle Right:
Inori is still trying to resist…
Middle Left:
All SFXs: Uhn or Uhm
Bottom PNL:
S: The less willing she is to give in, the more I want to hear her sweet moans… even at the cost of being discovered…
I: Ahh~!!
S: Even I use a little more force…

PG 13:
PNL 1:
All SFXs: Uhm or Uhn
PNL 3:
S: Inori, loosen a little bit, or I can’t penetrate into your deepest parts…
I: Shuu, Shuu’s thing is just getting too large, it’s only going to get tighter… How can I loosen up……
PNL 4:
S: I can’t hold it back anymore! I’m cumming!
PNL 5:
I: Ahh~~!!
I: And just when you had said it…

PG 14:
Panel 1:
I: Usually I don’t see you this proactive, but today…
S: Sorry…
PNL 2:
S: Before I feel only fear when faced with problems or pressure, so I tried to minimize my contact with the outside world.
S: But now that Inori is with me… I… want to change…
PNL 3:
S: I will change myself to be stronger…
S: For Inori…
PNL 4:
I: To be stronger over here?
I: It’s getting hard again…
S: No, I will try to be stronger at various aspects…
S: That, please don’t tease me there anymore…
PNL 5:
I: I’m looking forward to…
I: seeing Shuu’s fearless and courageous figure…

PG 15:
PNL 1:
S: First objective…
S: Let’s start with Inori’s sweet moans…
I: Ehh?
PNL 2:
I: Ahh!!
I: Now that I think about… it… I think it’s better to give up after all…
S: How can you think about giving up when you haven’t tried your best yet?
PNL 3:
I: Shuu…
I: So it does seem that only your lower parts are becoming stronger…
S: I DO NOT!
I SFXs: Uhm or Uhn
I: Pervert…
S: Not a pervert!

PG 16:
Top PNL:
I: Pervert…
S: I’m not!
3 Bubbles SFXs: Ahh
I: Per… vert…
S: That’s why I said…
I: Ahh… Pervert…
S: … … …
I: Per… vert… Ahh Ahh…
S: Sorry for being a pervert…
I: Shuu…
Bottom PNL:
All the small bubbles SFXs: Ahh or Ah
I: Shuu…
I: Kiss me…
I: Or else I… can’t… hold on any longer…

PG 17:
Right PNL:
I: Semen… is overflowing…
All small SFXs: Hah Ahh
Top Left PNL:
All SFXs: Uhm~ or Uhn~
Middle Left PNL:
I: You overexerted…
I: Mr. Pervert…
I: Ah! It’s coming out again…
Bottom Right PNL: (I think the author mixed up the colours on the fonts)
I: After pulling out such a daring act in the metro, it’s hard to believe we weren't discovered,
I: it’s quite unbelievable.
Bottom Left PNL:
S: Ahh… It's mainly because of Inori’s superb ability to suppress your voice.
S: Although I feel like it’s quite a pity…
I: OBSCENE

PG 18:
PNL 1:
S: This voice… Ayase?!
S: Don’t tell me… that everyone in the metro is from the Undertaker?!
PNL 2:
Shibungi: We’re betting whether Shuu will become a chicken or a wolf under Inori’s temptation. Congratulations, you’ve proudly claimed the title of the wolf.
S: I am not happy with it at all!
PNL 3:
Ayase: Then you should just rename yourself to pervert.
S: I am not a pervert at all!
PNL 4:
But that’s the truth!
Didn’t Inori call you that a lot of times already?
And you’ve even admitted it just now.
S: You all…
PNL 5:
S: Listen closely now! Besides Inori, no one else is allowed to call me a pervert in this world!
S: No one!

PG 19:
PNL 1:
Bubbleless: For real… How can you let anyone be happy with that kind of announcement…
Ayase: What! Don’t make a chuuni announcement with such a straight face!
PNL 2:
S: Shut, shut up!
I: Shuu…
S: What is it?
PNL 3:
I: Lend me your ear…
I: When we’re both alone, if Shuu gives in all his best,
I: I’ll let Shuu listen to that voice again, without any reservations.
PNL 4:
I: The voice…
I: That only Shuu can listen to in the entire world…
PNL 5:
Shibungi: Wow, the enemy’s firepower is too overpowered, I suggest everyone to retreat now.
Argo: Reality can go to hell!
S: I think tonight…
S: I’ll be the happiest man alive in the whole world…
Ayase: We should call the cops now…
Tsugumi: Can I stay for the night? I won’t be a bother.

PG 20:
Afterword:
I spent my New Year’s Eve at Tokyo Main Station this year, I even took a memorial photo. Due to some delays in my journey, I didn't get onto the last train and end up using the cab to reach my destination- Sensō-ji.
Although it is not as crowded as the Meiji Shrine, I still have to line up for quite some time to enter the temple. Across the crowd I gave some donation into the offering’s block, then I followed my friends to the night market. After that I accidentally got separated with them and was lost for a moment, and finally I was able to meet up with them at the entrance. I was quite anxious being lost in a foreign country, but luckily nothing bad happened and this is quite a special memory that I managed to make.

Hare: Ahh~~~!! You, you said you wouldn't cum inside…
All SFXs: Hah Ahh
Hare: Really! What should I do if it leaked on the road after this……