EDITORS PLS BE NOTED ON THE PROOFREAD VERSION BELOWBtw Red, can you change the subtitle of the thread from "read b4 you flame" to "Because we actually have Chinese raws"? Thanks XD
New すくりっぴ script, I'm so tired zzz
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https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13861Page 01:
Title: A Beast Tamer’s Special Event
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Page 02:
PL 1:
Silica: Uhm!
Ahh!
S: Pina!
Uahh-
PL 2:
Back: What am I doing……
S: Ahh!
PL 3:
S: Uhm!
Uhh!
Back: I wanted to keep my first time for the one I love
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Page 03:
PL 1:
S: We’re back to the inn
S: Pina worked really hard today too
PL 2:
S: Ehh? A message from Kirito nii-chan?
PL 3:
Silica-
(Omitted)
Apparently this is an enchantment for tamed monster, hopefully it will be helpful to you and Pina.
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Page 04:
PL 1:
S Item description… Your tamed monster will have a growth reaction after usage…
S: Please use it in a private place? I guess the inn is ok?
Please activate Moral Code Removal? What is this?
PL 2:
S: Alright! Let’s test this out!
PL 3:
S: Ahh~~
PL 4:
SFX: Badump
PL 5:
S: Pina!
S What’s wrong?
Pina!
SFX x2: Flap
P: Gyaa~
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Page 05:
PL 1:
S: How could this happen?
S: What should I do?
What should I do?
SFX x2: Ugaa
PL 2:
Uhh!
SFX: Scratch!
PL 3:
Ouch!
SFX: Tear!
PL 4:
S: I’m sorry
S: I should have checked properly before feeding it to you
PL 6:
S: Wha, What!
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Page 06:
PL 1:
S: At least Pina is not in pain anymore
S: I don’t mind kissing you more if it will lessen your suffering
PL 2:
S: Ha ha
S: It tickles!
PL 3:
Uhm-
SFX: Lick
P: It tastes sweet
PL 4:
S: Uhm…… My tongue……
S: Ehh, there’s a notification…
System Notification:
> Tamed Monster’s intimacy has increased
> New skill “Confusing Breath” Obtained
S: Uhh…
SFX: Chuu
PL 5:
S: I’m getting dizzy I can’t read what’s on it…
S: Umh
System Notification:
> New skill “Confusing Breath” Obtained
> Status “Confusion”
SFX: Lick Lick
S: Ehh? When are my clothes?
S: What’s happening…?
S: Unh Ahh…
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Page 07:
PL 1:
S: Umh!
Ahh!
SFX: Lick Lick
S: My body, it’s becoming weird……
PL 2:
Ahh!
Uhh!
PL 3:
S: Pina!
Don’t
S: Not there
PL 4:
S: Uhm!
S: Pina!
Nnh!
S: Uhm!
SFX Bubble: Lick (I actually don’t know what is written there)
S: My hand… can’t hold on…
PL 5:
Uahh
PL 6:
S: Pina!
S: Are you alright?
PL 7:
S: Pfft!
SFX: Wiggle
SFX: Twitch
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Page 08:
PL 1:
S: So Pina has it too…
PL 2:
SFX: Grab
PL 3:
Asuna did this to Kirito nii-chan too, right?
P: Guuh
S: I’ll not lose to her!
SFX around dragon dick: Guh Chuu
P: Gah!
PL 4:
P: Guh!
SFX: Drip
SFX: Lick
PL 5:
S: It’s becoming larger…
SFX: Guh Chuu
SFX: Slurp
P: Guu!
PL 6:
P: Gah!
S: It’s, it’s reaching my throat
P Uhh Gah!
SFX x2: Chuu
SFX: Slurp
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Page 09:
PL 1:
S: Uahh!
SFX: Splash
SFX x2: Twitch
SFX around the dick and head: Huah
PL 2:
SFX: Guuuh
S: It’s bitter….
PL 3:
S: Did I do something wrong?
P: Gaa
Arrow: Happy but slightly sadden by the fact that it was forced upon
PL 4:
S: Pina can lick me here too
S: Then I guess we will be even? (?)
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Page 10:
PL 1:
S: Uhm!
PL 2:
S: Uhh!
Ahh
PL 3:
S: What is this sensation…?
S: Unh Ahh!
SFX: Hah Ahh
SFX: Huu
S: Ahh!
S: Something is… coming in…
PL 4:
P: No, no… This is…
S: Uhm <3
S: Ahh!
SFX: Lick
SFX: Drip
S: This is too…
S: Uhm Ahh!
SFX: Hah Ahh
SFX: Huh Haa
S: Kyi!
S: This is too…….
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Page 11:
PL 1:
S: Uhm!
SFX: Tease
S: Ahh!
S: I can’t!
PL 2:
SFX: Drip
S: There is…
PL 3:
SFX: Haa Ahh
S: Nnh!
S: Ahh!
PL 4:
S: Umh Ahh
S: Uhh
S: Ahh
SFX x2: Squirt
SFX around the mouth: Huah
S: Ahh Uhm Uhh--- Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh~~~
PL 5:
SFX: Shake
PL 6:
S: Th, That…
PL 7:
S: I don’t even know what’s going on anymore…
S: So… Pina…
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Page 12:
PL 1:
S: Then…
PL 2:
S: Although I don’t know how it’s done---
S: but I want Pina to do it with me!
PL 3:
S: Does… Pina know?
SFX top: Nervous
SFX Bottom: Unease
PL 4:
S: Unh!
SFX: Press/Push
PL 5:
S: Uahh!
S: Uhh!
SFX: Hah Ahh
PL 6:
S: Kyi!
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Page 13:
PL 1:
S: Uhh!
SFX: Chuuu
S: Uhm Ahh Ahh
PL 2:
SFX: Haah
PL 3:
S: there
SFX: Squeeze
S: Ahh!
PL 4:
S: Ahh!
S: Ahh
SFX: Hah Ahh
SFX: Hah
S: Unh
S: Huah
S: It’s a bit scary
SFX: Gush + Push
PL 5:
S: But
S: Ahh
Nnh
SFX: Haah
P: Gyaa!
SFX: Chuuu
SFX: Pft chu chu
P: Uhh
PL 6:
S: I don’t want to stop at all…
S: Ahh, Ahh-
S: Ahh
S: What is this…
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Page 14:
PL 1:
SFX around dick: spurt
Ahh!
Uhm!
SFX around face: Haah
S: So hot!
S: Something, is about to come---
S: Uaaahhh Ahhhh~~~~
PL 2:
SFX: Pull out
S: Uhm Ahh
PL 3:
S: Ehh?
SFX: Hah
S: What is it doin---
PL 4:
S: Uhh-
Uhm!
SFX: Drenched
S: That, that is…
PL 5:
S: Uahh!
PL 6:
S: Pi, Pina
SFX: Twitch twitch
S: Ahh!
S: Nnh ahh!
S: It’s scary---
S: But it feels so good
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Page 15:
PL 1:
S: Ahh x3
S: Haa ahh!
SFX: Gush
SFX: Twitch
S: It feels different from just now
PL 2:
S: It feels a lot more…
SFX: Uahh
S: Huahh!
PL 3:
Various SFX
PL 4:
S: Pi, Pina
Ahh
Uhh
Uahh
S: This sensation is, too much---
SFX: Twitch
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Page 16:
PL 1:
S: Uhm
Kyi
Uhh Nnh
Ahhhhhhhhhh---
SFX: Squirt
S: Uhh Uhh
S: Huah
SFX: Dripping
PL 2:
Mission complete?
What is this?
PL 3:
S: Whatever, as long as I get to be with Pina
S: That’s enough for me
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Page 17:
PL 1:
Kirito: Silica, it’s been a while
PL 2:
S: Kirito nii-chan! It really has been a while!
K: I got busy after I was dragged into the guild
K: By the way, did the item I send you worked?
PL 3:
S: Yes! An event appeared!
S But it was a piece of cake for us, and Pina got a new skill too!
K: That’s great! Can you share the content of the event with everyone?
PL 4:
S: No way!
No, uhh, it’s too embarrassing, ah, that’s not right, I mean……
~Afterword~
Greetings everyone,
This is Ramen-Penguin who spent 3 months on 16 pages (cries).
I was planning to draw an Asuna book initially,
But things went wrong, and so I escaped to Silica’s embrace (Ouch).
However! Although I switched from Asuna to Silica!
I still stumbled upon a big problem almost immediately~~~~
The differences of body size between Asuna, Silica and Pina are too huge!
Therefore I couldn’t readjust the paizure or nipple plays.
And other poses such as picking up, pushing down,
Or changing position with Silica, was impossible with Pina!
But Penguin doesn’t like Silica being raped,
So in order to reduce the feeling of bestiality,
I tried making Pina cuter,
And so this is the final result of that,
Hopefully I’ll improve more in the future.
Besides that, I personally liked page 13 & 14,
Pina looks so cute pushing with its small hands XDDDDD,
A small creature trying its best looks really cute (Self-praising) XD.
Blog:
Pixiv:
Who wrote the script? Ramen-Penguin? Who is this?
Oh well, let’s just delete this.
This post has been edited by chung2795: Jan 25 2016, 15:55