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Spent way too much time on this (>6 hours). (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/huh.gif) I still need a bounty for this.

Feedback would be appreciated. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

It usually depends on the type of SFX, like I translate moans but not sound effects produced by body movements.

1. 噗滋 sounds like the sound of cum ejaculating, so maybe *spurt* or Pfftch. (I really recommend leaving it alone if it's not moaning)

2. 唔哈 I usually use Uahh

3. 咕啾 you can use Guh Chuu

4. 要溶化了 I'm melting....
大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。 My brain.... is going to melt... (Because it felt so good his/her brain feels like melting away)

Thanks! Added those.

gallery (2nd one is newer):
https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/875097/8f987f9d82/

Translation by Simpleton8:
Page number on the newer version is 2+(page number I have here)

Terms I’m not sure about (ctrl/cmd-F to find where they are):
白頭偕老
人蔘贏家
寄攤
棒棒

Page 1:
妹妹的妄想紀錄
Record of my sister’s delusion

Page 2:
妹妹的妄想紀錄
Record of my sister’s delusion

此書為限制級，未滿十八歲之未成年人請勿購買，閱讀
This book is R-rated, please don’t buy or read it if you are under 18 or the age of majority in the jurisdiction in which you reside.

內容皆與現實人物、事物、團體無關
The following story is entirely fictional and does not depict any actual person or event.
(modified from L&O, original translation: "content has no relation with any real person, thing, and organization")

Page 3：
1）
桐人君。。。其實。。。 
Kirito . . . actually I  . . .

我喜歡你
I like you

2）
到最後
At the end,

藏了許多久的那句話，還是沒能講出來。。。
those words (that were concealed for a long time) were still left unsaid . . .

哥哥。。。我喜歡你
Brother . . . I like you

Page 4:
1)
結城 明白。
Yuki Asu(na)
(from sign)

真的很謝謝
I am really thankful for

大家今天的捧場
everyone’s support today

1)
請各位嘉賓拍手， 恭喜這對新人！
Honored guests, please clap your hands and congratulate this new couple (bride and groom)

祝他們永浴愛河！白頭偕老!
(Wish/may) their love lasts forever, till old and grey!
(till and grey is common translation? never heard it in English)

今天是那立亞絲娜，明白奈的結婚日
Today is Asuna Yuki’s wedding day

對象是明白奈父親為乾兒子的須鄉
The groom is Asuna’s father’s adopted son Sugo (Nobuyuki) . . .
[swordartonline.wikia.com] http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Sugou_Nobuyuki

2）
啪啪啪
*claps*
(actual sound: papapa)

恭喜兩位！
Congratulation, you two!

啪啪啪
*claps*
(actual sound: papapa)

3）
哥哥因為這件事的打擊，整天一個人待在房間足不出戶。。。
Brother was devastated by this marriage, so he hasn’t left his room all day.

哥哥。。。那個人就是你的一切嗎？
Brother . . . Do you really love that person that much?
(original: brother, is that person your everything)

Page 5：
1）
直葉…抱歉 
Suguha . . . Sorry 

讓我一個人靜一下
Let me be by myself for awhile

2）
真拿哥哥沒辦法。。。。
Don’t know what to do with him . . .

3）
真是的。。。又連晚餐都不吃了
Jeez . . . even skipping dinner

4）
今天還是拿上給哥哥吧。。。。
Let’s bring this up to brother again

5）
哥哥 晚餐煮好很久囉
Brother, dinner has been ready for a long time

Page 6:
1)
哥哥。。。有聽到嗎？
Brother, can you hear me?

3）
就算再難過
No matter how sad you’re,

飯還是要吃喔
you still need to eat

4）
你的晚餐幫你放在門口囉
I’ll leave your dinner at the door

我不打擾你了。。。
I'll stop bothering you

5）
喀鏘
*clink*
(actual sound: kaqiang)

6）
哥哥。。
Brother

7）
哥哥。。恢復笑容看著我好不好？
Brother . . . I want to see your smile again
(original: brother . . . Can you recover your smile and look at me)

在你的心中。。。我真的就這麼不重要嗎？
In your heart, . . . am I really not that important / or that unimportant/insignificant?

Page 7:
1）
喀咑
*clink*
(actual sound: kaqiang)

欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

2）
直葉。。
Suguha . .

3）
抱歉讓你擔心了。。。
Sorry I let you worry . . .

4）
謝謝你這麼關心我
Thank you for caring about me so much.

5）
直葉。。。
Suguha . . 

對不起
Sorry

Page 8:
1)
都怪我沒用  亞絲娜才會。。。
It’s all because I was useless, that Asuna would . . .

哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

這也不是你願意的啊
This is not what you wished

2）
她一定很痛苦。。。
She must be very painful

全部都是因為我的無能
All because of my incompetence

3）
哥哥。。。別難過了。。。
Brother . . . don’t be sad anymore. . .

對不起。。 又讓妳看到我這樣子。。
Sorry . . . to let you see me like this again . .

4）
哥哥
Brother

5）
打起精神吧
Cheer up

我會一直陪你身邊的
I will always be with you

6）
直葉。。謝謝你
Suguha . . Thank you

7）
欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

哥哥。。。！
Brother . . .!

8）
直葉。。。我。。
Suguha . . . I . .

我也喜歡你。。。。
I also like you . . .

Page 9:
1)
哥哥。。。這樣下去。。。不可以的。。。。
Brother . . . You can't. . .continue like this . . .

唔。。。
Uahhh . . 

2)
哈啊。。直葉。。。
Hah . . Suguha . .

3）
但是我的。。。身體。。。好奇怪
But my . . . body . . . is feeling weird

4）
哥哥等一下。。。。
Brother, wait .  . .

那個。。。
This . . .

5）
直葉的胸部過了兩年
after two years, Suguha’s chest

果然。。。
as expected . . .

發育的很好呢
has developed  nicely

6）
啊。。。！
Ahh . . . !

7）
直葉的胸部好軟。。。
Suguha’s chest is so soft

啊。。。好棒
Ah . . .  So good/awesome . . .

Page 10:
1)
啊《3好舒服《3
Ahh <3 So good <3

哈啊
Hahah

2）
呼啊啊啊
Huahhh

嗯啊《3
Enn ahh <3

嗯。。。《3直葉的巨乳好棒《3
Ennn . . .<3 Suguha’s large breasts are so lovely (good/sexy/beautiful)

呼哈。。。《3《3
Huha . . . <3 <3

不  不行。。。。《3
N-No . . . <3

嗯啊《3哥哥。。。這樣我《3
En Ahh <3 Brother . . . This way I <3

3）
哈啊。。。。
Haahh . . .

輕。。。輕一點《3
Gen . . . a little more gentle <3

4）
啊！！！那。。那裡
Ah ! ! ! That - that place

不  不可以啊
N-no you can't

5）
啊、啊————！
Ahh Ahh - - - -!

那裡啊。。。。
That place . . .

嗯啊啊－－－－－《3
Enahh - - - - - <3

呀啊－《3
Yaahh - <3

啊啊啊－－－－！
Ahhhhh ——— !

6）
哈啊。。。人家的那裡
Hah . . . That place is . . .

好、好好舒服
It feels s-s-so good

唔啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
Uahahhhhhhhhhh

嗯啊。。
En ahh . .

哥哥《3
Brother <3

Page 11：
1）
咕啾
Guh Chuu

啊！好痛。。。！
Ahh! That hurts . . .!

2）
啊 進。。進去了《3
Ahh It . . .It’s inside <3

嗯啊啊《3
Enn Ahhh <3

不、不要啊《3
Don-don’t <3

3）
兩隻指頭全部都進去囉   直葉的小穴吸得好緊啊《3《3
Two fingers are completely inside, Suguha’s pussy is sucking them tight <3 <3

嗯啊啊啊
En Ahhhh

這 這樣我。。。！
This This way I . . .!

哈啊－－－－！
Hahh  — — !

插入
*put in*

4）
嗯啊。。。！
Enn Ahhh . . .!

抽出
*pull out*

5）
嗯啊－－－－－！
Enn Ahhh - - - -!

嗚。。。嗚啊啊。。！
Uhh Uhm Ahhh . .!

6）
直葉。。還可以嗎？
Suguha . . . is it okay?

要繼續下去嗎？
to continue?

7）
哈啊。。哈啊。。
Hah . . Hah . .

哥哥。。。。我。。沒問題的喔
Brother . . . I . . am alright/ok
(original: I have no problem)

Page 12:
1)
嗯。。。《3
Enn . . .<3

哈—啊————
Hah - ah - - -

囌－－－－－－
Suu - - - - -

咕啾－－－《3
Guh Chuu

2）
嗯－－－《3
Ennn - - -<3

哈啊
Hah 

囌嚕－－－－
Suupuu - - -

3）
嗯－－－哈啊《3
Enn - - -Hah <3

哈啊－－－－－－－－
Hah - - - - - -

4）
咕喔－－－喔。。。
Guohh - - ohhh . . .

嗯～～《3
En ~~~ <3

嗯～嗯～～咕嗯～
En ~Enn ~ Guennh ~

5）
直葉來用胸部夾夾看
Suguha, try squeezing it with your chest

欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

6）
這麼柔軟的的胸部用起來 果然不一樣
As expected, it feels a lot differently with chest this soft

嗯啊－《3
Enn Ahh <3

既柔軟又充滿彈性啊《3
Not only soft but also elastic <3

Page 13:
1）
啊。。。！出來了！
Ahh . . . ! It’s coming out!

咕啾《3咕啾《3
Guh Chuu<3 Guh Chuu<3

啊《3嗯啊《3
Ahh <3 Ennahh <3

好多。。。好厲害。。。《3
So much . . .  so fierce/awesome <3

2）
哈啊。。。哈啊。。。 
Hah . . . Hah . . .

這就是哥哥的。。。
This is brother’s

好  好喜歡
R-Really like it

抖
*shudder*/*tremble*/*shake*

哈啊。。。《3
Hah . . . <3

3）
直葉的胸部實在《3《3
Suguha’s chest is really <3 <3

。。。太舒服了
so good/comfortable

我。。。我好幸福啊《3 還想要更多。。。更多
I’m . . .I’m so happy <3 I want more  . . . more

4）
顫抖
*shudder*/*tremble*/*shake*

5）
哥。。唔！
Bro - -wuu!

嗯  嗯啊。。。
Enn Ennahh . . .

嗯。。。嗯。。。！
En . .. En . . .!

Page 14:
1)
呼哈。。。《3
Huha . . .<3

2）
咕啾
Guh Chuu

啾
Chuu

嗯、嗯啊。。。！
En , Ennahh . . .!

哈啊
Hah 

啊。。。！
Ahh . . .!

呼哈。。。
Huahh . . .

直葉的小穴已經濕透了喔～
Suguha’s pussy is dripping wet ~

嗯。。《3
En . . . <3

3）
直葉。。。棒棒要插進去喔《3
Suguha . . . my stick is going in <3
(stick can also be dick/cock/etc.)

4）
嗯啊啊啊啊－－－－－！！！
En Ahhhh ! ! !

進來了！好《3好大。。。《3
It’s going in! So <3 So big <3

5）
呀啊啊－！
Yahhh - !

哥哥的棒棒。。。
Brother’s stick . . .

哈啊。。。！直葉。。的體內好緊好舒服啊！
Hahh . . .! Suguha’s inside is so tight, so good!

唔哈好緊。。。！
Uahhh, so tight . . .!

好舒服《3
So good <3

要。。要溶化了
It’s . . . it’s melting
Page 15:
1）
全部進來了《3
It’s all coming in <3

啊—————
Ahhh - - - -

噗滋！
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

噗滋！
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

等。。。等一下
W-Wait

嗯啊！好、好深！
En Ahh. S-So deep!

啊－－－－－《3
Ahh - - - - <3

不行－－－－《3
No - - - - -<3

呼啊－！
Huahh -!

哈啊啊啊－－－－《3
Hahhhhh - - - - <3

快不行了－－－－－《3
I can’t anymore - - - - - <3

2）
噗滋！噗滋！
*spurt* *spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

啊
Ahhhh

3）
哈啊。。。哥哥。。。
Hahah . . . Brother . . .

我。。。不行了。。。《3
I . . . I can’t . . . <3

嗯！
Ennn!

大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。
My brain.... is going to melt...

4）
咿－－－－－－
Yii - - - - -

咿啊啊啊！
Yiahhhh

這樣、這樣。。。 會壞掉的啊啊啊啊《3《3
My pussy is going to break like this Ahhh <3 <3
(original: this way, this way . . . will break ahhh)

Page 16:
1）
哈啊。。哈啊。。。。！
Hah . . Hah . . .!

嗯嗚。。。
Ennugh

哈呼。。。。
Huah

嗯。。哥哥的那裡好溫暖
En . . brother’s thing feels so warm
(original: brother’s that place feels so warm)

2）
嗯－啊－－－－－！！！
Ennn - Ahhh - - - -! ! !

又要。。。《3《3
Again . . . <3 <3

3）
咿－－－－
Yii - - - - -

咿啊啊啊啊啊啊！
Yiahhhhhh !

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊《3
Hahhhhhhhh <3

這樣好。。。好舒服啊
It feels so . . . so good

4）
嗯嗯。。。啊啊啊啊啊
Ennn . . . Ahhhhhhh

要要要要要要要要去了《3
It’s going in A-a-a-a-again <3

呼啊啊啊
Huahhhh

不。。。《3
No . . .<3

不行了。。。。《3
I can’t . . . <3

5）
直葉我也。。。唔喔！
Suguha, I’m also . . .Wuohh!

咕啾《3
Guh Chuu<3

又要一次了。。。！
Another time . . . ?

Page 17:
1)
咕啾
Guh Chuu<3

哈啊。。。。。！
Hahhhh . . . . !

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊！！
Hahhhhhhh ! !

好多。。。。！
So much

唔嗯
Uahhuennnn

嗯啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
En Ahhhhhhhh

握緊
*clench*

哈啊《3
Hahhhh <3

2）
呼。。。哈。。好溫暖
Hu . . . Ha . . .So warm <3

哥哥的精液。。喜歡《3
Brother’s semen . . Like <3

3）
哈啊。。
Hah . .

直葉。。。我。。。也好舒服。。。
Suguha . . . I . . . also feel so good . . .

4）
哥哥。。《3
Brother . . . <3

我。。。《3
I . . .<3

5）
請。。請讓我。。
Please . . . please make me

更加的舒服吧。。。《3
feel even better . . . <3

6）
直葉－－－－－－
Suguha - - -

Page 18:
1）
直葉我會讓你更舒服的！
Suguha, I will make you feel better

2）
嗯啊啊啊啊！
En Ahhhh !

小穴好。。好舒服啊。。！
Pussy feels so . . . so good!

咿嗯－－－－！
Yiii Ennnn - - - - -!

唔嗯《3《3
Uahh en <3 <3

啊。。。裡面被填得好滿《3
Ahhhh . . . my inside is filled completely <3

3）
哈啊。。。。！
Huahh . . .!

抽插
*put in and pull out*

噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

4）
哥。。。哥哥－－－－－！
Broth . . . Brother - - - - -!

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊！！
Hahhhhhh ! !

嗯呀啊啊啊啊啊《3
Enn Yahhhhh <3

好舒服《3
So good <3

5）
我。。。已經－－－－！
I’m . . . already - - - -!

哈啊。。。。！小穴不斷的收缩
Haah . . .! Pussy keeps on contracting.

喘氣
*pant*

Page 19:
1）
哥。。哥哥。。我。。
Broth . . Brother, I . .

抖
*shake*

2）
我真的。。好幸福啊。。。《3
I’m really . . . really happy <3

喜。。。歡。。。哥哥。。。《3
Li . . . ke . . . Brother . . .<3

3)
唔。。。唔啊！？哈啊啊啊啊！
Uahh . . . Uaahhh ! ? Hahhhhhh!

哈啊啊－－－－！
Hahhhhhhh - - - !

噗滋
*spurt* *spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

這 這樣下去我
If If we continue like this, I,

好好好舒服
sooo sooo good

4)
直葉。。。！《3《3
Suguha, . . .! <3 <3

我。。。我也喜歡你《3
I . . . I also like you <3

啊《3
Ahhh <3

哥。。哥哥！
Broth . . Brother

我也是《3
me too <3

5）
又。。。又要射了！
I’m . . . I’m going to cum again!

咕啾
Guh Chuu

6）
哈啊！
Hahhh

全部。。。全部。。。都。。。
Shoot . . . Shoot . . .all
(original: all . . . all . . . all, switched with below translation)

都射在裡面吧《3《3
all of it inside <3 <3
(original: all shoot it inside, switched with above translation)

Page 20:
1）
噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

膨脹
＊expand＊

2)
啊啊啊－－－《3
ahhhhhhh - - - <3

嗯啊啊啊《3
Enn Ahhhh <3

啊啊《3
Ahhhhh <3

咕啾
Guh Chuu

咕啾
Guh Chuu

抽動
＊twitch＊

3)
哥哥的。。。全部都。。。《3
Brother’s . . . all of . . .<3

呼哈
Huha

哈啊。。。哈啊。。。《3
Hahh .. . Hahh . . .<3

4）
哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

呼哈。。。
Huha . . .

咿嗯。。。
Yi Enn . . .

5）
呼啊 。。。。呼啊
Huahhh . . . Huahh

哈啊。。。哈啊。。。。
Hahh . . . Hahh . . ..

我。。。好。。。好幸福《3
I’m . . .so . . . so happy <3

Page 21:
1)
哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

我愛你
I love you

我也是。。。直葉
Me too . . . Suguha

2）
嗯。。哥哥。。。
Enn . . .Brother . . .

嗯。。。
Enn . . .

3）
滴答
＊drip＊

滴答
＊drip＊

滴答
＊drip＊

4)
哥。。。。
Brother

Page 22:
1)
哥
Brother

對不起。。。我
Sorry . . .I

2）
我。。。
I . . .

哥。。。哥。。。
Brother . . . Brother . . .

3)
哥哥。。。我
Brother . . .I

真的。。。真的。。。好。。。喜歡你
Truly . . . really . . . love you so much

Page 23 (this is a little incoherent):
最後獻上封面的泳裝版！！！
Lastly, I offer you a page of Suguha in swimsuit ! ! !

( 沒人會沒事在房間穿泳衣啦＃）
(No one would put on swimsuit in the room for no reason #)

大家好 這裏是炒肉師。。。（？）的廢話後記了
Hi everyone, this is Chaoroushi’s nonsense afterward

這一本書從規劃及作畫都花了很長時間，
This book took a long time to plan and draw,
從期未忙到期未、寒假
from the mid-semester till the end of semester and winter vacation.
因為是第一次出R18本，
Because this is my first R18 book,
花了很多時間做功課、找資料（？）
I spent a lot of time doing research, finding information.
有很多地方很不熟悉，還請大家多多指教批評／／／
There’s a lot of parts I’m not familiar with, so everyone, please give constructive criticisms.
還是希望大家會喜歡這本滿滿的肉的肉本
I hope everyone likes this satisfying book that is full of juicy material.

其實SAO當初新番一出並沒有馬上追
Actually, I was not hooked when SAO first came out.
直到後面直葉出現。。。！－一秒就打中我了XDD
The moment Suguha appeared, I was hooked.
(original: until Suguha appears ! —
接著不知不覺就掉了妹妹坑W
Then unwittingly I became a sis-con. W

直葉妹妹真的好可愛啊／／／／
Suguha-chan is so adorable/cute / / /
後面劇情真的一集比一集還痛
Toward the end, each episode of the story line felt more painful than the previous.
真的是看一次哭一次QAQ
I cried every time I watched QAQ
桐人這個人蔘贏家！！！！太可惡了！（喂
Kirito, this lewd bastard ! ! ! It’s too much!
雖然妹妹到最後不是官配XD
Although the sister was not the main female character,
但是在我心中妹妹No1
in my heart, the sister is No1
再來西莉卡!!^O^/
Then came Silica !! ^O^
贫乳妹妹也好可愛WWW
flat-chested sister was also cute WWW
亞絲娜也看到後面越看越喜歡W
I also liked Asuna more and more at the end.

但是還是直葉妹妹最可愛啊QDQ！！！
But Suguha is the cutest QDQ!!
(完全私心)
(completely my selfish view)

最後最後、
Lastly, lastly
謝謝身邊的朋友們支持我畫這本糟糕本
I want to thank the friends around me for supporting this terrible book
(note: Chinese/Asian tradition to exaggerate one’s fault,).
給我很多意見、指導和幫忙、給我寄攤
giving me a lot of suggestions, guidances as well giving me a vendor’s stand
(寄攤=vendor for selling comics)

最後謝謝拿著本書的你
Finally, thank you, the person who is holding this book.

炒肉師 2013.02.01
Chaoroushi 2013.02.01

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 21 2015, 07:44

Wait I'm currently binge watching OnePunch Man, will help you with the script once I'm done.

Wait I'm currently binge watching OnePunch Man, will help you with the script once I'm done.

Alright. Thanks. No hurry. I'm probably going to sleep soon. I will check here tomorrow.

Spent way too much time on this (>6 hours). (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/huh.gif) I still need a bounty for this.

*cough cough* Red~~~~

1. 祝他們永浴愛河！白頭偕老!
(Wish/may) their love lasts forever, till old and grey!

I think I would use "May their love lasts forever, till death do they part!"

2. 桐人這個人蔘贏家！！！！太可惡了！（喂
Kirito, this lewd bastard ! ! ! It’s too much!

This 人生贏家 is basically winner in life, a person who gets everything he desires in life. You can use this as a reference for alternate translation.

3. 給我很多意見、指導和幫忙、給我寄攤
giving me a lot of suggestions, guidances as well giving me a vendor’s stand
(寄攤=vendor for selling comics)

Yeah this is accurate

4. 棒棒 haha you made all the rookie CN>ENG mistake. 棒棒 is not stick it's Chinese slang for penis//dick. So use like "Onii-chan's penis//dick is coming in", seriously don't use the term "stick".

This post has been edited by chung2795: Nov 21 2015, 15:41

1. 祝他們永浴愛河！白頭偕老!
(Wish/may) their love lasts forever, till old and grey!

I think I would use "May their love lasts forever, till death do they part!"

2. 桐人這個人蔘贏家！！！！太可惡了！（喂
Kirito, this lewd bastard ! ! ! It’s too much!

This 人生贏家 is basically winner in life, a person who gets everything he desires in life. You can use this as a reference for alternate translation.

3. 給我很多意見、指導和幫忙、給我寄攤
giving me a lot of suggestions, guidances as well giving me a vendor’s stand
(寄攤=vendor for selling comics)

Yeah this is accurate

4. 棒棒 haha you made all the rookie CN>ENG mistake. 棒棒 is not stick it's Chinese slang for penis//dick. So use like "Onii-chan's penis//dick is coming in", seriously don't use the term "stick".

Thanks. Corrected. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
1) k
2) Lol, I googled the author's typo. Thought it has to do with 人蔘=ginseng. I also found 人蔘淫家, which made no sense
3) k
4) I'm often not sure about the level of vulgarity. 雞雞, 老二，生殖器, 陰莖, etc. and the corresponding ones in English (cock-most vulgar, dick, penis-least vulgar, and peepee if it's a shotacon, etc.).
5) I translated 哥哥 to brother since the original was in Chinese. If it was in Japanese, I would change it to onee-chan and add all the honorifics.

gallery (2nd one is newer):
https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/875097/8f987f9d82/

Translation by Simpleton8:
Page number on the newer version is 2+(page number I have here)

Terms I’m not sure about (ctrl/cmd-F to find where they are):
白頭偕老
人蔘贏家
寄攤
棒棒

Page 1:
妹妹的妄想紀錄
Record of my sister’s delusion

Page 2:
妹妹的妄想紀錄
Record of my sister’s delusion

此書為限制級，未滿十八歲之未成年人請勿購買，閱讀
This book is R-rated, please don’t buy or read it if you are under 18 or the age of majority in the jurisdiction in which you reside.

內容皆與現實人物、事物、團體無關
The following story is entirely fictional and does not depict any actual person or event.
(modified from L&O, original translation: "content has no relation with any real person, thing, and organization")

Page 3：
1）
桐人君。。。其實。。。
Kirito . . . actually I . . .

我喜歡你
I like you

2）
到最後
At the end,

藏了許多久的那句話，還是沒能講出來。。。
those words (that were concealed for a long time) were still left unsaid . . .

哥哥。。。我喜歡你
Brother . . . I like you

Page 4:
1)
結城 明白。
Yuki Asu(na)
(from sign)

真的很謝謝
I am really thankful for

大家今天的捧場
everyone’s support today

1)
請各位嘉賓拍手， 恭喜這對新人！
Honored guests, please clap your hands and congratulate this new couple (bride and groom)

祝他們永浴愛河！白頭偕老!
May their love lasts forever, till death do they part!

今天是那立亞絲娜，明白奈的結婚日
Today is Asuna Yuki’s wedding day

對象是明白奈父親為乾兒子的須鄉
The groom is Asuna’s father’s adopted son Sugo (Nobuyuki) . . .
[swordartonline.wikia.com] [swordartonline.wikia.com] http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Sugou_Nobuyuki

2）
啪啪啪
*claps*
(actual sound: papapa)

恭喜兩位！
Congratulation, you two!

啪啪啪
*claps*
(actual sound: papapa)

3）
哥哥因為這件事的打擊，整天一個人待在房間足不出戶。。。
Brother was devastated by this marriage, so he hasn’t left his room all day.

哥哥。。。那個人就是你的一切嗎？
Brother . . . Do you really love that person that much?
(original: brother, is that person your everything)

Page 5：
1）
直葉…抱歉
Suguha . . . Sorry

讓我一個人靜一下
Let me be by myself for awhile

2）
真拿哥哥沒辦法。。。。
Don’t know what to do with him . . .

3）
真是的。。。又連晚餐都不吃了
Jeez . . . even skipping dinner

4）
今天還是拿上給哥哥吧。。。。
Let’s bring this up to brother again

5）
哥哥 晚餐煮好很久囉
Brother, dinner has been ready for a long time

Page 6:
1)
哥哥。。。有聽到嗎？
Brother, can you hear me?

3）
就算再難過
No matter how sad you’re,

飯還是要吃喔
you still need to eat

4）
你的晚餐幫你放在門口囉
I’ll leave your dinner at the door

我不打擾你了。。。
I'll stop bothering you

5）
喀鏘
*clink*
(actual sound: kaqiang)

6）
哥哥。。
Brother

7）
哥哥。。恢復笑容看著我好不好？
Brother . . . I want to see your smile again
(original: brother . . . Can you recover your smile and look at me)

在你的心中。。。我真的就這麼不重要嗎？
In your heart, . . . am I really not that important / or that unimportant/insignificant?

Page 7:
1）
喀咑
*clink*
(actual sound: kaqiang)

欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

2）
直葉。。
Suguha . .

3）
抱歉讓你擔心了。。。
Sorry I let you worry . . .

4）
謝謝你這麼關心我
Thank you for caring about me so much.

5）
直葉。。。
Suguha . .

對不起
Sorry

Page 8:
1)
都怪我沒用 亞絲娜才會。。。
It’s all because I was useless, that Asuna would . . .

哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

這也不是你願意的啊
This is not what you wished

2）
她一定很痛苦。。。
She must be very painful

全部都是因為我的無能
All because of my incompetence

3）
哥哥。。。別難過了。。。
Brother . . . don’t be sad anymore. . .

對不起。。 又讓妳看到我這樣子。。
Sorry . . . to let you see me like this again . .

4）
哥哥
Brother

5）
打起精神吧
Cheer up

我會一直陪你身邊的
I will always be with you

6）
直葉。。謝謝你
Suguha . . Thank you

7）
欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

哥哥。。。！
Brother . . .!

8）
直葉。。。我。。
Suguha . . . I . .

我也喜歡你。。。。
I also like you . . .

Page 9:
1)
哥哥。。。這樣下去。。。不可以的。。。。
Brother . . . You can't. . .continue like this . . .

唔。。。
Uahhh . .

2)
哈啊。。直葉。。。
Hah . . Suguha . .

3）
但是我的。。。身體。。。好奇怪
But my . . . body . . . is feeling weird

4）
哥哥等一下。。。。
Brother, wait . . .

那個。。。
This . . .

5）
直葉的胸部過了兩年
after two years, Suguha’s chest

果然。。。
as expected . . .

發育的很好呢
has developed nicely

6）
啊。。。！
Ahh . . . !

7）
直葉的胸部好軟。。。
Suguha’s chest is so soft

啊。。。好棒
Ah . . . So good/awesome . . .

Page 10:
1)
啊《3好舒服《3
Ahh <3 So good <3

哈啊
Hahah

2）
呼啊啊啊
Huahhh

嗯啊《3
Enn ahh <3

嗯。。。《3直葉的巨乳好棒《3
Ennn . . .<3 Suguha’s large breasts are so lovely (good/sexy/beautiful)

呼哈。。。《3《3
Huha . . . <3 <3

不 不行。。。。《3
N-No . . . <3

嗯啊《3哥哥。。。這樣我《3
En Ahh <3 Brother . . . This way I <3

3）
哈啊。。。。
Haahh . . .

輕。。。輕一點《3
Gen . . . a little more gentle <3

4）
啊！！！那。。那裡
Ah ! ! ! That - that place

不 不可以啊
N-no you can't

5）
啊、啊————！
Ahh Ahh - - - -!

那裡啊。。。。
That place . . .

嗯啊啊－－－－－《3
Enahh - - - - - <3

呀啊－《3
Yaahh - <3

啊啊啊－－－－！
Ahhhhh ——— !

6）
哈啊。。。人家的那裡
Hah . . . That place is . . .

好、好好舒服
It feels s-s-so good

唔啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
Uahahhhhhhhhhh

嗯啊。。
En ahh . .

哥哥《3
Brother <3

Page 11：
1）
咕啾
Guh Chuu

啊！好痛。。。！
Ahh! That hurts . . .!

2）
啊 進。。進去了《3
Ahh It . . .It’s inside <3

嗯啊啊《3
Enn Ahhh <3

不、不要啊《3
Don-don’t <3

3）
兩隻指頭全部都進去囉 直葉的小穴吸得好緊啊《3《3
Two fingers are completely inside, Suguha’s pussy is sucking them tight <3 <3

嗯啊啊啊
En Ahhhh

這 這樣我。。。！
This This way I . . .!

哈啊－－－－！
Hahh — — !

插入
*put in*

4）
嗯啊。。。！
Enn Ahhh . . .!

抽出
*pull out*

5）
嗯啊－－－－－！
Enn Ahhh - - - -!

嗚。。。嗚啊啊。。！
Uhh Uhm Ahhh . .!

6）
直葉。。還可以嗎？
Suguha . . . is it okay?

要繼續下去嗎？
to continue?

7）
哈啊。。哈啊。。
Hah . . Hah . .

哥哥。。。。我。。沒問題的喔
Brother . . . I . . am alright/ok
(original: I have no problem)

Page 12:
1)
嗯。。。《3
Enn . . .<3

哈—啊————
Hah - ah - - -

囌－－－－－－
Suu - - - - -

咕啾－－－《3
Guh Chuu

2）
嗯－－－《3
Ennn - - -<3

哈啊
Hah

囌嚕－－－－
Suupuu - - -

3）
嗯－－－哈啊《3
Enn - - -Hah <3

哈啊－－－－－－－－
Hah - - - - - -

4）
咕喔－－－喔。。。
Guohh - - ohhh . . .

嗯～～《3
En ~~~ <3

嗯～嗯～～咕嗯～
En ~Enn ~ Guennh ~

5）
直葉來用胸部夾夾看
Suguha, try squeezing it with your chest

欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

6）
這麼柔軟的的胸部用起來 果然不一樣
As expected, it feels a lot differently with chest this soft

嗯啊－《3
Enn Ahh <3

既柔軟又充滿彈性啊《3
Not only soft but also elastic <3

Page 13:
1）
啊。。。！出來了！
Ahh . . . ! It’s coming out!

咕啾《3咕啾《3
Guh Chuu<3 Guh Chuu<3

啊《3嗯啊《3
Ahh <3 Ennahh <3

好多。。。好厲害。。。《3
So much . . . so fierce/awesome <3

2）
哈啊。。。哈啊。。。
Hah . . . Hah . . .

這就是哥哥的。。。
This is brother’s

好 好喜歡
R-Really like it

抖
*shudder*/*tremble*/*shake*

哈啊。。。《3
Hah . . . <3

3）
直葉的胸部實在《3《3
Suguha’s chest is really <3 <3

。。。太舒服了
so good/comfortable

我。。。我好幸福啊《3 還想要更多。。。更多
I’m . . .I’m so happy <3 I want more . . . more

4）
顫抖
*shudder*/*tremble*/*shake*

5）
哥。。唔！
Bro - -wuu!

嗯 嗯啊。。。
Enn Ennahh . . .

嗯。。。嗯。。。！
En . .. En . . .!

Page 14:
1)
呼哈。。。《3
Huha . . .<3

2）
咕啾
Guh Chuu

啾
Chuu

嗯、嗯啊。。。！
En , Ennahh . . .!

哈啊
Hah

啊。。。！
Ahh . . .!

呼哈。。。
Huahh . . .

直葉的小穴已經濕透了喔～
Suguha’s pussy is dripping wet ~

嗯。。《3
En . . . <3

3）
直葉。。。棒棒要插進去喔《3
Suguha . . . my dick is going in <3
(stick can also be dick/cock/etc.)

4）
嗯啊啊啊啊－－－－－！！！
En Ahhhh ! ! !

進來了！好《3好大。。。《3
It’s going in! So <3 So big <3

5）
呀啊啊－！
Yahhh - !

哥哥的棒棒。。。
Brother’s dick . . .

哈啊。。。！直葉。。的體內好緊好舒服啊！
Hahh . . .! Suguha’s inside is so tight, so good!

唔哈好緊。。。！
Uahhh, so tight . . .!

好舒服《3
So good <3

要。。要溶化了
It’s . . . it’s melting
Page 15:
1）
全部進來了《3
It’s all coming in <3

啊—————
Ahhh - - - -

噗滋！
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

噗滋！
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

等。。。等一下
W-Wait

嗯啊！好、好深！
En Ahh. S-So deep!

啊－－－－－《3
Ahh - - - - <3

不行－－－－《3
No - - - - -<3

呼啊－！
Huahh -!

哈啊啊啊－－－－《3
Hahhhhh - - - - <3

快不行了－－－－－《3
I can’t anymore - - - - - <3

2）
噗滋！噗滋！
*spurt* *spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

啊
Ahhhh

3）
哈啊。。。哥哥。。。
Hahah . . . Brother . . .

我。。。不行了。。。《3
I . . . I can’t . . . <3

嗯！
Ennn!

大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。
My brain.... is going to melt...

4）
咿－－－－－－
Yii - - - - -

咿啊啊啊！
Yiahhhh

這樣、這樣。。。 會壞掉的啊啊啊啊《3《3
My pussy is going to break like this Ahhh <3 <3
(original: this way, this way . . . will break ahhh)

Page 16:
1）
哈啊。。哈啊。。。。！
Hah . . Hah . . .!

嗯嗚。。。
Ennugh

哈呼。。。。
Huah

嗯。。哥哥的那裡好溫暖
En . . brother’s thing feels so warm
(original: brother’s that place feels so warm)

2）
嗯－啊－－－－－！！！
Ennn - Ahhh - - - -! ! !

又要。。。《3《3
Again . . . <3 <3

3）
咿－－－－
Yii - - - - -

咿啊啊啊啊啊啊！
Yiahhhhhh !

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊《3
Hahhhhhhhh <3

這樣好。。。好舒服啊
It feels so . . . so good

4）
嗯嗯。。。啊啊啊啊啊
Ennn . . . Ahhhhhhh

要要要要要要要要去了《3
It’s going in A-a-a-a-again <3

呼啊啊啊
Huahhhh

不。。。《3
No . . .<3

不行了。。。。《3
I can’t . . . <3

5）
直葉我也。。。唔喔！
Suguha, I’m also . . .Wuohh!

咕啾《3
Guh Chuu<3

又要一次了。。。！
Another time . . . ?

Page 17:
1)
咕啾
Guh Chuu<3

哈啊。。。。。！
Hahhhh . . . . !

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊！！
Hahhhhhhh ! !

好多。。。。！
So much

唔嗯
Uahhuennnn

嗯啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
En Ahhhhhhhh

握緊
*clench*

哈啊《3
Hahhhh <3

2）
呼。。。哈。。好溫暖
Hu . . . Ha . . .So warm <3

哥哥的精液。。喜歡《3
Brother’s semen . . Like <3

3）
哈啊。。
Hah . .

直葉。。。我。。。也好舒服。。。
Suguha . . . I . . . also feel so good . . .

4）
哥哥。。《3
Brother . . . <3

我。。。《3
I . . .<3

5）
請。。請讓我。。
Please . . . please make me

更加的舒服吧。。。《3
feel even better . . . <3

6）
直葉－－－－－－
Suguha - - -

Page 18:
1）
直葉我會讓你更舒服的！
Suguha, I will make you feel better

2）
嗯啊啊啊啊！
En Ahhhh !

小穴好。。好舒服啊。。！
Pussy feels so . . . so good!

咿嗯－－－－！
Yiii Ennnn - - - - -!

唔嗯《3《3
Uahh en <3 <3

啊。。。裡面被填得好滿《3
Ahhhh . . . my inside is filled completely <3

3）
哈啊。。。。！
Huahh . . .!

抽插
*put in and pull out*

噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

4）
哥。。。哥哥－－－－－！
Broth . . . Brother - - - - -!

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊！！
Hahhhhhh ! !

嗯呀啊啊啊啊啊《3
Enn Yahhhhh <3

好舒服《3
So good <3

5）
我。。。已經－－－－！
I’m . . . already - - - -!

哈啊。。。。！小穴不斷的收缩
Haah . . .! Pussy keeps on contracting.

喘氣
*pant*

Page 19:
1）
哥。。哥哥。。我。。
Broth . . Brother, I . .

抖
*shake*

2）
我真的。。好幸福啊。。。《3
I’m really . . . really happy <3

喜。。。歡。。。哥哥。。。《3
Li . . . ke . . . Brother . . .<3

3)
唔。。。唔啊！？哈啊啊啊啊！
Uahh . . . Uaahhh ! ? Hahhhhhh!

哈啊啊－－－－！
Hahhhhhhh - - - !

噗滋
*spurt* *spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

這 這樣下去我
If If we continue like this, I,

好好好舒服
sooo sooo good

4)
直葉。。。！《3《3
Suguha, . . .! <3 <3

我。。。我也喜歡你《3
I . . . I also like you <3

啊《3
Ahhh <3

哥。。哥哥！
Broth . . Brother

我也是《3
me too <3

5）
又。。。又要射了！
I’m . . . I’m going to cum again!

咕啾
Guh Chuu

6）
哈啊！
Hahhh

全部。。。全部。。。都。。。
Shoot . . . Shoot . . .all
(original: all . . . all . . . all, switched with below translation)

都射在裡面吧《3《3
all of it inside <3 <3
(original: all shoot it inside, switched with above translation)

Page 20:
1）
噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

膨脹
＊expand＊

2)
啊啊啊－－－《3
ahhhhhhh - - - <3

嗯啊啊啊《3
Enn Ahhhh <3

啊啊《3
Ahhhhh <3

咕啾
Guh Chuu

咕啾
Guh Chuu

抽動
＊twitch＊

3)
哥哥的。。。全部都。。。《3
Brother’s . . . all of . . .<3

呼哈
Huha

哈啊。。。哈啊。。。《3
Hahh .. . Hahh . . .<3

4）
哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

呼哈。。。
Huha . . .

咿嗯。。。
Yi Enn . . .

5）
呼啊 。。。。呼啊
Huahhh . . . Huahh

哈啊。。。哈啊。。。。
Hahh . . . Hahh . . ..

我。。。好。。。好幸福《3
I’m . . .so . . . so happy <3

Page 21:
1)
哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

我愛你
I love you

我也是。。。直葉
Me too . . . Suguha

2）
嗯。。哥哥。。。
Enn . . .Brother . . .

嗯。。。
Enn . . .

3）
滴答
＊drip＊

滴答
＊drip＊

滴答
＊drip＊

4)
哥。。。。
Brother

Page 22:
1)
哥
Brother

對不起。。。我
Sorry . . .I

2）
我。。。
I . . .

哥。。。哥。。。
Brother . . . Brother . . .

3)
哥哥。。。我
Brother . . .I

真的。。。真的。。。好。。。喜歡你
Truly . . . really . . . love you so much

Page 23 (this is a little incoherent):
最後獻上封面的泳裝版！！！
Lastly, I offer you a page of Suguha in swimsuit ! ! !

( 沒人會沒事在房間穿泳衣啦＃）
(No one would put on swimsuit in the room for no reason #)

大家好 這裏是炒肉師。。。（？）的廢話後記了
Hi everyone, this is Chaoroushi’s nonsense afterward

這一本書從規劃及作畫都花了很長時間，
This book took a long time to plan and draw,
從期未忙到期未、寒假
from the mid-semester till the end of semester and winter vacation.
因為是第一次出R18本，
Because this is my first R18 book,
花了很多時間做功課、找資料（？）
I spent a lot of time doing research, finding information.
有很多地方很不熟悉，還請大家多多指教批評／／／
There’s a lot of parts I’m not familiar with, so everyone, please give constructive criticisms.
還是希望大家會喜歡這本滿滿的肉的肉本
I hope everyone likes this satisfying book that is full of juicy material.

其實SAO當初新番一出並沒有馬上追
Actually, I was not hooked when SAO first came out.
直到後面直葉出現。。。！－一秒就打中我了XDD
The moment Suguha appeared, I was hooked.
(original: until Suguha appears ! —
接著不知不覺就掉了妹妹坑W
Then unwittingly I became a sis-con. W

直葉妹妹真的好可愛啊／／／／
Suguha-chan is so adorable/cute / / /
後面劇情真的一集比一集還痛
Toward the end, each episode of the story line felt more painful than the previous.
真的是看一次哭一次QAQ
I cried every time I watched QAQ
桐人這個人蔘贏家！！！！太可惡了！（喂
Kirito, this winner in life ! ! ! It’s too much!
(typo: 人蔘贏家=人生贏家 means winner in life, a person who gets everything he desires in life).
雖然妹妹到最後不是官配XD
Although the sister was not the main female character,
但是在我心中妹妹No1
in my heart, the sister is No1
再來西莉卡!!^O^/
Then came Silica !! ^O^
贫乳妹妹也好可愛WWW
flat-chested sister was also cute WWW
亞絲娜也看到後面越看越喜歡W
I also liked Asuna more and more at the end.

但是還是直葉妹妹最可愛啊QDQ！！！
But Suguha is the cutest QDQ!!
(完全私心)
(completely my selfish view)

最後最後、
Lastly, lastly
謝謝身邊的朋友們支持我畫這本糟糕本
I want to thank the friends around me for supporting this terrible book
(note: Chinese/Asian tradition to exaggerate one’s fault,).
給我很多意見、指導和幫忙、給我寄攤
giving me a lot of suggestions, guidances as well giving me a vendor’s stand
(寄攤=vendor for selling comics)

最後謝謝拿著本書的你
Finally, thank you, the person who is holding this book.

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 21 2015, 15:57

https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/ has already been translated https://e-hentai.org/g/858200/3beb4cdf79/

Ah, I missed that one.

Sounds good. I'll start after my class ends.
Can you also make a translation bounty for me? It has to be unranked as I'm still waiting to claim my 5th bounty

I can try (try because I'm not sure if I'll run into some insurmountable obstacles) the editing bounty, but it'll probably take a long time as I'm still pretty new to photoshop.

I'll put up a bounty for you, sure thing (done: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13430). Regarding TL vs editing, I used to say TL are more rare, but we do have an editing backlog, so focus on whatever seems more fun at the time (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Either way, nice job - I hope we can work together some more!

Editing bounty for the Suguha SAO https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13431

Raws available for translation:
Fate hollow: https://e-hentai.org/g/871527/b2d16c4dc9/
Suisei no Gargantia: https://e-hentai.org/g/875095/837f24d824/
Heart warming Kantai Collection: https://e-hentai.org/g/875497/c6277975c0/

Ah, I missed that one.
I'll put up a bounty for you, sure thing (done: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13430). Regarding TL vs editing, I used to say TL are more rare, but we do have an editing backlog, so focus on whatever seems more fun at the time (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Either way, nice job - I hope we can work together some more!

Editing bounty for the Suguha SAO https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13431

Thanks (see below).

Raws available for translation:
Fate hollow: https://e-hentai.org/g/871527/b2d16c4dc9/
Suisei no Gargantia: https://e-hentai.org/g/875095/837f24d824/
Heart warming Kantai Collection: https://e-hentai.org/g/875497/c6277975c0/

Hmm. Thanks for the offers, but I am not as interested in those (& Cutie Police Woman) works. I prefer Vanilla with a male protagonist (there are special cases, but not here). Gang-rape, bondage, loli, and yuri are not my kinks. I'll probably only do them if the rewards are huge. Feel free to let me know when you have more Vanilla CH>EN translation works (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif).

In the meantime, I'm practicing redrawing manga using Photoshop (when the texts are not in bubbles).

I'll be around for awhile to help any editor with my translation.

New SAO raw by me: https://e-hentai.org/g/875790/278b811365/

Currently raws available for translation:
SAO: https://e-hentai.org/g/875790/278b811365/
Fate hollow: https://e-hentai.org/g/871527/b2d16c4dc9/
Suisei no Gargantia: https://e-hentai.org/g/875095/837f24d824/
Kantai Collection: https://e-hentai.org/g/875497/c6277975c0/

This post has been edited by chung2795: Nov 22 2015, 13:19

Thanks (see below).
Hmm. Thanks for the offers, but I am not as interested in those (& Cutie Police Woman) works. I prefer Vanilla with a male protagonist (there are special cases, but not here). Gang-rape, bondage, loli, and yuri are not my kinks. I'll probably only do them if the rewards are huge. Feel free to let me know when you have more Vanilla CH>EN translation works (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif).

I'll be around for awhile to help any editor with my translation.

Well, I hope we will have some vanilla stuff hitting the galleries soon with the new scans.

If you see any vanilla work you'd like to ask me if I'd like to sponsor its TL, do PM me or post here; keep in mind I tend to support projects for anime parodies, less likely game parodies or originals (for those I can make an incest due to plot or fetishes, particularly incest or yuri, through you said you don't care for the latter (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)).

A new script for EHCOVE before the year ends~
Maybe one day I'll understand Kancolle, btw we really need more translators over here QwQ

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/887132/a2e7806300/
Editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13676

Pg 1:
Title: I have a goddess with me
Pg 2:
Pnl 1:
Box: Sasebo Dormitory
Pnl 2:
Kaga: So why did you want to see me…
Pnl 3:
K: CarDiv 5?
Pnl 4:
Zuikaku: … About that
Pnl 5:
… NTR right off the bat!?
Pg 3:
Pnl 1:
No way… Calm down.
Zuikaku really dislikes Kaga’s attitude towards us after all.
2, 3, 5, 7, 11…
Pnl 2:
She’s just trying to borrow Ryuusei Kai for our next sortie
I must believe in Zuikaku…
Pnl 3:
Bubbleless: Good grief
K: Only this time
Z: Kaga-senpai…
Z: … Uhm
Pg 4:
Pnl 1:
Shoukaku: … Isn’t this great?
Pnl 2:
Z: Ehh!? Shoukaku-nee!?
S: Zuikaku…
Pnl 3:
S: Don’t mind me…
S: As long as Zuikaku gets to live the way she wants… that’s all that matters to me
Pnl 4:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
Pnl 5:
Z: What… What has gotten into you?
Pg 5:
Pnl 1:
S: … It’s nothing
S: It’s just that I feel like we haven’t go to a sortie together for quite some time now
Pnl 2:
Z: Shoukaku-nee!?
Bubble: Ouch
Bang
Pnl 3:
S: …I’m alright
SFX: Ouch
Pnl 4:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
Pg 6:
Pnl 1:
S: Isn’t this great?
S: The splendid Kaga-senpai surely can protect Zuikaku better than me
Pnl 2:
Eh, am I mad?
Pnl 3:
This is embarrassing…
Pnl 4:
S: I always thought that Zuikaku needs to depend on me
Pnl 5:
S: When the one depending on Zuikaku… is me
S: … I don’t want to be alone again
Pg 7:
Pnl 1:
S: Just…
Pnl 2:
S: A bit…
Pnl 3:
S: Unh…
Pnl 4:
Uhm
Uhh…
Nnh…!?
… Hah Ahh
Pnl 6:
Gentle
Pnl 7:
Uhh Umh <3
Leg SFX: Retracts
SFX: Twitch
Pg 8:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shoukaku-nee… I can hear you from the outside
Pnl 2:
S: Is… Is that so? What… did you hear?
Pnl 3:
Z: Everything
Pnl 4:
S: … Aaahhh… Enough!! This world is so cruel to me
… Leave me alone… Just let me become a load of barnacles!
Pnl 5:
Z: How could I leave you alone…
Pg 9:
Pnl 1:
Z: Are you going to abandon me again!?
Z: Shoukaku-nee!!
Pnl 2:
S: Zuikaku
Pnl 3:
Z: Shoukaku-nee, you’re too kind
Pnl 4:
Z: Always putting me first above everything
Z: … Even if you end up hurt because of that
Pnl 5:
Z: I… really hate
Pg 10:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shoukaku-nee like this
Pnl 2:
Ehh
Pnl 3:
Z: Shoukaku-nee, you really ought to take care more of yourself…
Pnl 4:
Z: I don’t want it to be like last time again
Pg 11:
Pnl 2:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
Pnl 3:
S: Zuikaku…
I’m going to continue
Outside bubble: This breastplate is in the way
Z: Ehhhhh! Wait…!
Pg 12:
Pnl 1:
Z:Shoukaku-nee
Stop staring at them
Pnl 2:
Box: Shoukaku now truly understands that there is still a difference in class even within CarDiv5
Pnl 3:
S: Zuikaku’s coating is really well-preserved
Pnl 4:
Uhh…
Pnl 5:
SFX: Pinch
S: It’s really cute
Pnl 6:
Yah <3
Pnl 7:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
Z: You’re… tickling me…
Pg 13:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shou… Yah <3
SFX: Suck
S: Uhm
Pnl 2:
Lightly bites
Pnl 3:
Bubbleless SFX: Hah Ahh Hah
S: Your expression looks cute too
Pnl 4:
S: You’re so cute that I’m can’t help to be curious…
Pnl 6:
S: About…
S: Down there <3
Pg 14:
Pnl 1:
Uhm
Uhh…
Unh
Hah… Nnh
Pnl 2:
Z: Uhh!
Pnl 4:
… Fuh Uhh Uhh
Uhm…
… Uhh Uhm
Nnh…
Pnl 5:
Bubble: Uhh…!
SFX x2: Rub
SFX: Spreads
Pnl 6:
Z: Uhm… Uhhm!!
Pnl 7:
SFX: Rub
Pnl 8:
SFX: Pinch
Pg 15:
Pnl 1:
Z: Uhh Uhm~~~~~ Unh… <3
Pnl 2:
Hah
Hah ahh… Hah ahh…
Pnl 3:
Z: I… I couldn’t stop it
Wobble
Pnl 4:
S: Ahh… My bed sheets
Pnl 5:
Drenched/Soaked
Pnl 6:
Z: Ahh… Ahh… This…
Pg 16:
Pnl 1:
Z: Aaahhh… That’s not it!!
Box: Shoukaku Class Standard Carrier has a maximum output of 5000 hoursepower
Pnl 2:
Z: Shou… Shoukaku-nee
Z: Are you alright!?
Pnl 3:
SFX: Slides off—
S: Geez
S: You’re too rough…
Pnl 4:
Snaps
Pnl 6:
Z: Shoukaku-nee’s body…
Z: … Is so beautiful
Pg 17:
Pnl 1:
S: Zuikaku wait… there is…!
SFX: Touch
Pnl 2:
Ahh <3
Pnl 4:
Z: Shoukaku-nee is sensitive… right here <3
SFX: Sticky
Pnl 5:
Z: It felt like you’re going to cum just from touching there…
SFX: Press
Pnl 6:
Z: Right here?
SFX: Rub
S: Zuikaku, not there…!
Pnl 7:
S: Ahh Ahh
Pnl 9:
S: I can’t hold it…if…
if… you’re… that rough!
Pg 18:
Pnl 1:
Kyaaaaaa… Haaaah… Haaaaa… Haaaaa
Pnl 2:
Z: I’m not done yet, Shoukaku-nee <3
S: Unh Uhh!!
Pnl 3:
SFX: Spreading
Z: Is it…
Z: … Right here <3
Pnl 4:
S: Kyaa
Pg 19:
Pnl 1:
Uhh Uhm Umh Unh Nnh!!
Pnl 2:
SFX: Drips
Pnl 3:
SFX x2: Hah Ahh
Pg 20:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
S: I know… Carry on
Outside Bubble: You’re not satisfied yet, right?
Pnl 2:
Z: Uhm!
Panelless:
Bubble: Let’s cum together this time <3
Pg 21:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shoukaku-nee do you know
Z: the reason why I haven’t undergo the upgrade?
Pnl 2:
S: Hmm?
Pnl 3:
Z: An upgrade… will change my ship’s coating.
Pnl 4:
Z: I’ll feel like… I don’t belong in CarDiv 5 anymore
Pnl 5:
Z: But now…
Z: I’ve changed my mind
Pnl 6:
Z: Because
Z: I now…
Pg 22:
Have a goddess with me.
Pg 23:
おまけ: Bonus
Also this is the
Afterword
hmm, where do I start?

Taihou is really wonderful

Voiced by Mamiko
and designed by Humikane
That’s basically cheating!!!

Speaking of which,
My first carrier in Kancolle
was Shoukaku from CarDiv 5
This is probably the reason
that I’m feeling sentimental to CarDiv 5…

Because compared to Akagi that could be obtained from clearing missions,
Shoukaku was in my team
for so much longer.
As I am more biased with aircraft carriers,
I treat all of my regulars with great care
All of them are equipped with at least
Ryuuhei Kai Reppuu ^q^
Pg 24:
Pnl 1:
A: By the way, it seems that the child from CarDiv 5 has been filling in as the secretary lately.
K: No big deal, I wanted to take a break anyway.
Pnl 2:
A: Huh… you would usually say “I will never step back!” while kicking them away
Bubbleless: That’s unusual
K: Well… She did ask me nicely… I can’t say no to that.
Pnl 3:
A: Is that so? You’re incredible!
Bubbleless: Try and get along with them, alright?
A: How about half of my rice as your reward?
K: There’s… no need for that
Pg 25:
Pnl 1:
A: you don’t have to hold back…
Text: Absolutely empty
Pnl 2:
SFX: Guuu~
K: Do you want to share with me?
Pnl 3:
A: Thank you!! Kaga!!
A: I love you!
Box: We ate after the mess
Thank you… CarDiv 5

This post has been edited by chung2795: Jan 1 2016, 06:35

Proofreader here. All changes will be marked in red, text that needs to be removed will also be marked with a strikethrough.

A new script for EHCOVE before the year ends~
Maybe one day I'll understand Kancolle, btw we really need more translators over here QwQ

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/887132/a2e7806300/
Editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13676

Pg 1:
Title: I have a goddess with me
Pg 2:
Pnl 1:
Box: Sasebo Dormitory
Pnl 2:
Kaga: So, why did you want to see me…
Pnl 3:
K: CarDiv 5?
(PR Note: CarDiv is short for Aircraft Carrier Division.)
Pnl 4:
Zuikaku: … About that
Pnl 5:
… NTR right off the bat!?
Pg 3:
Pnl 1:
No way… Calm down.
After all, Zuikaku really dislikes Kaga’s attitude towards us after all.
2, 3, 5, 7, 11…
Pnl 2:
She’s just trying to borrow Ryuusei Kai for our next sortie
I must believe in Zuikaku…
Pnl 3:
Bubbleless: Good grief
K: Only this time
Z: Kaga-senpai…
Z: … Uhm
Pg 4:
Pnl 1:
Shoukaku: … Isn’t this great?
Pnl 2:
Z: Ehh!? Shoukaku-nee!?
S: Zuikaku…
Pnl 3:
S: Don’t mind me…
S: As long as Zuikaku gets to live the way she wants… that’s all that matters to me
Pnl 4:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
Pnl 5:
Z: What… What has gotten into you?
Pg 5:
Pnl 1:
S: … It’s nothing
S: It’s just that I feel like we haven’t sortied together for quite some time now
Pnl 2:
Z: Shoukaku-nee!?
Bubble: Ouch
Bang
Pnl 3:
S: …I’m alright
SFX: Ouch
Pnl 4:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
Pg 6:
Pnl 1:
S: Isn’t this great?
S: The splendid Kaga-senpai can surely protect Zuikaku better than me
Pnl 2:
Eh, am I mad?
Pnl 3:
This is embarrassing…
Pnl 4:
S: I always thought that Zuikaku needs to depend on me
Pnl 5:
S: When the one depending on Zuikaku… is me
S: … I don’t want to be alone again
Pg 7:
Pnl 1:
S: Just…
Pnl 2:
S: A bit…
Pnl 3:
S: Unh…
Pnl 4:
Uhm
Uhh…
Nnh…!?
… Hah Ahh
Pnl 6:
Gentle
Pnl 7:
Uhh Umh <3
Leg SFX: Retracts
SFX: Twitch
Pg 8:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shoukaku-nee… I can hear you from the outside
Pnl 2:
S: Is… Is that so? What… did you hear?
Pnl 3:
Z: Everything
Pnl 4:
S: … Aaahhh… Enough!! This world is so cruel to me
… Leave me alone… Just let me become a fixture of barnacles!
(PR Note: A collection of barnacles is called a fixture.)
Pnl 5:
Z: How could I leave you alone…
Pg 9:
Pnl 1:
Z: Are you going to abandon me again!?
Z: Shoukaku-nee!!
Pnl 2:
S: Zuikaku
Pnl 3:
Z: Shoukaku-nee, you’re too kind
Pnl 4:
Z: Always putting me first above everything
Z: … Even if you end up hurt because of that
Pnl 5:
Z: I… really hate
Pg 10:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shoukaku-nee like this
Pnl 2:
Ehh
Pnl 3:
Z: Shoukaku-nee, you really ought to take more care of yourself…
Pnl 4:
Z: I don’t want it to be like last time again
Pg 11:
Pnl 2:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
Pnl 3:
S: Zuikaku…
I’m going to continue
Outside bubble: This breastplate is in the way
Z: Ehhhhh! Wait…!
Pg 12:
Pnl 1:
Z:Shoukaku-nee
Stop staring at them
Pnl 2:
Box: Shoukaku now truly understands that there is still a difference in class even within CarDiv5
Pnl 3:
S: Zuikaku’s coating is really well-preserved
Pnl 4:
Uhh…
Pnl 5:
SFX: Pinch
S: It’s really cute
Pnl 6:
Yah <3
Pnl 7:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
Z: You’re… tickling me…
Pg 13:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shou… Yah <3
SFX: Suck
S: Uhm
Pnl 2:
Lightly bites
Pnl 3:
Bubbleless SFX: Hah Ahh Hah
S: Your expression looks cute too
Pnl 4:
S: You’re so cute that I can’t help but be curious…
Pnl 6:
S: About…
S: Down there <3
Pg 14:
Pnl 1:
Uhm
Uhh…
Unh
Hah… Nnh
Pnl 2:
Z: Uhh!
Pnl 4:
… Fuh Uhh Uhh
Uhm…
… Uhh Uhm
Nnh…
Pnl 5:
Bubble: Uhh…!
SFX x2: Rub
SFX: Spreads
Pnl 6:
Z: Uhm… Uhhm!!
Pnl 7:
SFX: Rub
Pnl 8:
SFX: Pinch
Pg 15:
Pnl 1:
Z: Uhh Uhm~~~~~ Unh… <3
Pnl 2:
Hah
Hah ahh… Hah ahh…
Pnl 3:
Z: I… I couldn’t stop it
Wobble
Pnl 4:
S: Ahh… My bed sheets
Pnl 5:
Drenched/Soaked
Pnl 6:
Z: Ahh… Ahh… This…
Pg 16:
Pnl 1:
Z: Aaahhh… That’s not it!!
Box: Shoukaku Class Standard Carrier has a maximum output of 5000 horsepower
Pnl 2:
Z: Shou… Shoukaku-nee
Z: Are you alright!?
Pnl 3:
SFX: Slides off—
S: Geez
S: You’re too rough…
Pnl 4:
Snaps
Pnl 6:
Z: Shoukaku-nee’s body…
Z: … Is so beautiful
Pg 17:
Pnl 1:
S: Zuikaku wait… there is…!
SFX: Touch
Pnl 2:
Ahh <3
Pnl 4:
Z: Shoukaku-nee is sensitive… right here <3
SFX: Sticky
Pnl 5:
Z: It felt like you were going to cum just from me touching there…
SFX: Press
Pnl 6:
Z: Right here?
SFX: Rub
S: Zuikaku, not there…!
Pnl 7:
S: Ahh Ahh
Pnl 9:
S: I can’t hold it…if…
if… you’re… that rough!
Pg 18:
Pnl 1:
Kyaaaaaa… Haaaah… Haaaaa… Haaaaa
Pnl 2:
Z: I’m not done yet, Shoukaku-nee <3
S: Unh Uhh!!
Pnl 3:
SFX: Spreading
Z: Is it…
Z: … Right here <3
Pnl 4:
S: Kyaa
Pg 19:
Pnl 1:
Uhh Uhm Umh Unh Nnh!!
Pnl 2:
SFX: Drips
Pnl 3:
SFX x2: Hah Ahh
Pg 20:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shoukaku-nee…
S: I know… Carry on
Outside Bubble: You’re not satisfied yet, right?
Pnl 2:
Z: Uhm!
Panelless:
Bubble: Let’s cum together this time <3
Pg 21:
Pnl 1:
Z: Shoukaku-nee do you know
Z: the reason why I haven’t undergone the upgrade?
Pnl 2:
S: Hmm?
Pnl 3:
Z: An upgrade… will change my ship’s coating.
Pnl 4:
Z: I’d feel like… I don’t belong in CarDiv 5 anymore
Pnl 5:
Z: But now…
Z: I’ve changed my mind
Pnl 6:
Z: Because
Z: I now…
Pg 22:
Have a goddess with me.
Pg 23:
おまけ: Bonus
Also, this is the
Afterword
hmm, where do I start?

Taihou is really wonderful

Voiced by Mamiko
and designed by Humikane
That’s basically cheating!!!

Speaking of which,
My first carrier in Kancolle
was Shoukaku from CarDiv 5
This is probably the reason
that I’m feeling sentimental to CarDiv 5…

Because compared to Akagi that could be obtained from clearing missions,
Shoukaku was in my team
for so much longer.
As I am more biased with aircraft carriers,
I treat all of my regulars with great care
All of them are equipped with at least
Ryuuhei Kai Reppuu ^q^
Pg 24:
Pnl 1:
A: By the way, it seems that the child from CarDiv 5 has been filling in as the secretary lately.
K: No big deal, I wanted to take a break anyway.
Pnl 2:
A: Huh… you would usually say “I will never step back!” while kicking them away
Bubbleless: That’s unusual
K: Well… She did ask me nicely… I can’t say no to that.
Pnl 3:
A: Is that so? You’re incredible!
Bubbleless: Try and get along with them, alright?
A: How about half of my rice as your reward?
K: There’s… no need for that
Pg 25:
Pnl 1:
A: you don’t have to hold back…
Text: Absolutely empty
Pnl 2:
SFX: Guuu~
K: Do you want to share with me?
Pnl 3:
A: Thank you!! Kaga!!
A: I love you!
Box: We ate after the mess
Thank you… CarDiv 5

A new script for EHCOVE before the year ends~
Maybe one day I'll understand Kancolle, btw we really need more translators over here QwQ

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/887132/a2e7806300/
Editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13676

Working on it now.

EDITORS PLS BE NOTED ON THE PROOFREAD VERSION BELOW

Btw Red, can you change the subtitle of the thread from "read b4 you flame" to "Because we actually have Chinese raws"? Thanks XD

New すくりっぴ script, I'm so tired zzz
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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/886575/dea824ff9f/
Editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13861
Page 01:
Title: A Beast Tamer’s Special Event
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 02:
PL 1:
Silica: Uhm!
Ahh!
S: Pina!
Uahh-

PL 2:
Back: What am I doing……
S: Ahh!

PL 3:
S: Uhm!
Uhh!
Back: I wanted to keep my first time for the one I love
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 03:
PL 1:
S: We’re back to the inn
S: Pina worked really hard today too

PL 2:
S: Ehh? A message from Kirito nii-chan?

PL 3:
Silica-
(Omitted)
Apparently this is an enchantment for tamed monster, hopefully it will be helpful to you and Pina.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 04:
PL 1:
S Item description… Your tamed monster will have a growth reaction after usage…
S: Please use it in a private place? I guess the inn is ok?
Please activate Moral Code Removal? What is this?

PL 2:
S: Alright! Let’s test this out!

PL 3:
S: Ahh~~

PL 4:
SFX: Badump

PL 5:
S: Pina!
S What’s wrong?
Pina!
SFX x2: Flap
P: Gyaa~
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 05:
PL 1:
S: How could this happen?
S: What should I do?
What should I do?
SFX x2: Ugaa

PL 2:
Uhh!
SFX: Scratch!

PL 3:
Ouch!
SFX: Tear!

PL 4:
S: I’m sorry
S: I should have checked properly before feeding it to you

PL 6:
S: Wha, What!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 06:
PL 1:
S: At least Pina is not in pain anymore
S: I don’t mind kissing you more if it will lessen your suffering

PL 2:
S: Ha ha
S: It tickles!

PL 3:
Uhm-
SFX: Lick
P: It tastes sweet

PL 4:
S: Uhm…… My tongue……
S: Ehh, there’s a notification…
System Notification:
> Tamed Monster’s intimacy has increased
> New skill “Confusing Breath” Obtained
S: Uhh…
SFX: Chuu

PL 5:
S: I’m getting dizzy I can’t read what’s on it…
S: Umh
System Notification:
> New skill “Confusing Breath” Obtained
> Status “Confusion”
SFX: Lick Lick
S: Ehh? When are my clothes?
S: What’s happening…?
S: Unh Ahh…
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 07:
PL 1:
S: Umh!
Ahh!
SFX: Lick Lick
S: My body, it’s becoming weird……

PL 2:
Ahh!
Uhh!

PL 3:
S: Pina!
Don’t
S: Not there

PL 4:
S: Uhm!
S: Pina!
Nnh!
S: Uhm!
SFX Bubble: Lick (I actually don’t know what is written there)
S: My hand… can’t hold on…

PL 5:
Uahh

PL 6:
S: Pina!
S: Are you alright?

PL 7:
S: Pfft!
SFX: Wiggle
SFX: Twitch
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 08:
PL 1:
S: So Pina has it too…

PL 2:
SFX: Grab

PL 3:
Asuna did this to Kirito nii-chan too, right?
P: Guuh
S: I’ll not lose to her!
SFX around dragon dick: Guh Chuu
P: Gah!

PL 4:
P: Guh!
SFX: Drip
SFX: Lick

PL 5:
S: It’s becoming larger…
SFX: Guh Chuu
SFX: Slurp
P: Guu!

PL 6:
P: Gah!
S: It’s, it’s reaching my throat
P Uhh Gah!
SFX x2: Chuu
SFX: Slurp
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 09:
PL 1:
S: Uahh!
SFX: Splash
SFX x2: Twitch
SFX around the dick and head: Huah

PL 2:
SFX: Guuuh
S: It’s bitter….

PL 3:
S: Did I do something wrong?
P: Gaa
Arrow: Happy but slightly sadden by the fact that it was forced upon

PL 4:
S: Pina can lick me here too
S: Then I guess we will be even? (?)
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 10:
PL 1:
S: Uhm!

PL 2:
S: Uhh!
Ahh

PL 3:
S: What is this sensation…?
S: Unh Ahh!
SFX: Hah Ahh
SFX: Huu
S: Ahh!
S: Something is… coming in…

PL 4:
P: No, no… This is…
S: Uhm <3
S: Ahh!
SFX: Lick
SFX: Drip
S: This is too…
S: Uhm Ahh!
SFX: Hah Ahh
SFX: Huh Haa
S: Kyi!
S: This is too…….
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 11:
PL 1:
S: Uhm!
SFX: Tease
S: Ahh!
S: I can’t!

PL 2:
SFX: Drip
S: There is…

PL 3:
SFX: Haa Ahh
S: Nnh!
S: Ahh!

PL 4:
S: Umh Ahh
S: Uhh
S: Ahh
SFX x2: Squirt
SFX around the mouth: Huah
S: Ahh Uhm Uhh--- Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh~~~

PL 5:
SFX: Shake

PL 6:
S: Th, That…

PL 7:
S: I don’t even know what’s going on anymore…
S: So… Pina…
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 12:
PL 1:
S: Then…

PL 2:
S: Although I don’t know how it’s done---
S: but I want Pina to do it with me!

PL 3:
S: Does… Pina know?
SFX top: Nervous
SFX Bottom: Unease

PL 4:
S: Unh!
SFX: Press/Push

PL 5:
S: Uahh!
S: Uhh!
SFX: Hah Ahh

PL 6:
S: Kyi!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 13:
PL 1:
S: Uhh!
SFX: Chuuu
S: Uhm Ahh Ahh

PL 2:
SFX: Haah

PL 3:
S: there
SFX: Squeeze
S: Ahh!

PL 4:
S: Ahh!
S: Ahh
SFX: Hah Ahh
SFX: Hah
S: Unh
S: Huah
S: It’s a bit scary
SFX: Gush + Push

PL 5:
S: But
S: Ahh
Nnh
SFX: Haah
P: Gyaa!
SFX: Chuuu
SFX: Pft chu chu
P: Uhh

PL 6:
S: I don’t want to stop at all…
S: Ahh, Ahh-
S: Ahh
S: What is this…
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 14:
PL 1:
SFX around dick: spurt
Ahh!
Uhm!
SFX around face: Haah
S: So hot!
S: Something, is about to come---
S: Uaaahhh Ahhhh~~~~

PL 2:
SFX: Pull out
S: Uhm Ahh

PL 3:
S: Ehh?
SFX: Hah
S: What is it doin---

PL 4:
S: Uhh-
Uhm!
SFX: Drenched
S: That, that is…

PL 5:
S: Uahh!

PL 6:
S: Pi, Pina
SFX: Twitch twitch
S: Ahh!
S: Nnh ahh!
S: It’s scary---
S: But it feels so good
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 15:
PL 1:
S: Ahh x3
S: Haa ahh!
SFX: Gush
SFX: Twitch
S: It feels different from just now

PL 2:
S: It feels a lot more…
SFX: Uahh
S: Huahh!

PL 3:
Various SFX

PL 4:
S: Pi, Pina
Ahh
Uhh
Uahh
S: This sensation is, too much---
SFX: Twitch
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 16:
PL 1:
S: Uhm
Kyi
Uhh Nnh
Ahhhhhhhhhh---
SFX: Squirt
S: Uhh Uhh
S: Huah
SFX: Dripping

PL 2:
Mission complete?
What is this?

PL 3:
S: Whatever, as long as I get to be with Pina
S: That’s enough for me
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 17:
PL 1:
Kirito: Silica, it’s been a while

PL 2:
S: Kirito nii-chan! It really has been a while!
K: I got busy after I was dragged into the guild
K: By the way, did the item I send you worked?

PL 3:
S: Yes! An event appeared!
S But it was a piece of cake for us, and Pina got a new skill too!
K: That’s great! Can you share the content of the event with everyone?

PL 4:
S: No way!
No, uhh, it’s too embarrassing, ah, that’s not right, I mean……

~Afterword~
Greetings everyone,
This is Ramen-Penguin who spent 3 months on 16 pages (cries).

I was planning to draw an Asuna book initially,
But things went wrong, and so I escaped to Silica’s embrace (Ouch).

However! Although I switched from Asuna to Silica!
I still stumbled upon a big problem almost immediately~~~~
The differences of body size between Asuna, Silica and Pina are too huge!
Therefore I couldn’t readjust the paizure or nipple plays.

And other poses such as picking up, pushing down,
Or changing position with Silica, was impossible with Pina!
But Penguin doesn’t like Silica being raped,
So in order to reduce the feeling of bestiality,
I tried making Pina cuter,
And so this is the final result of that,
Hopefully I’ll improve more in the future.

Besides that, I personally liked page 13 & 14,
Pina looks so cute pushing with its small hands XDDDDD,
A small creature trying its best looks really cute (Self-praising) XD.

Blog:
Pixiv:

Who wrote the script? Ramen-Penguin? Who is this?
Oh well, let’s just delete this.

This post has been edited by chung2795: Jan 25 2016, 15:55

Changed

editing bounty at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13861

*All changes will be marked in red.
Text that needs to be removed will also be marked with a strikethrough.*

Btw Red, can you change the subtitle of the thread from "read b4 you flame" to "Because we actually have Chinese raws"? Thanks XD

New すくりっぴ script, I'm so tired zzz
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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/886575/dea824ff9f/
Editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13861
Page 01:
Title: A Beast Tamer’s Special Event
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 02:
PL 1:
Silica: Uhm!
Ahh!
S: Pina!
Uahh-

PL 2:
Back: What am I doing……
S: Ahh!

PL 3:
S: Uhm!
Uhh!
Back: I wanted to keep my first time for the one I love
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 03:
PL 1:
S: We’re back at the inn
S: Pina worked really hard today too

PL 2:
S: Ehh? A message from Kirito nii-chan?

PL 3:
Silica-
(Omitted)
Apparently this is an enchantment for tamed monsters, hopefully it will be helpful to you and Pina.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 04:
PL 1:
S: Item description… Your tamed monster will have a growth reaction after usage…
S: Please use it in a private place? I guess the inn is ok?
Please activate Moral Code Removal? What is this?

PL 2:
S: Alright! Let’s test this out!

PL 3:
S: Ahh~~

PL 4:
SFX: Badump

PL 5:
S: Pina!
S What’s wrong?
Pina!
SFX x2: Flap
P: Gyaa~
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 05:
PL 1:
S: How could this happen?
S: What should I do?
What should I do?
SFX x2: Ugaa

PL 2:
Uhh!
SFX: Scratch!

PL 3:
Ouch!
SFX: Tear!

PL 4:
S: I’m sorry
S: I should have checked properly before feeding it to you

PL 6:
S: Wha, What!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 06:
PL 1:
S: At least Pina is not in pain anymore
S: I don’t mind kissing you more if it will lessen your suffering

PL 2:
S: Ha ha
S: It tickles!

PL 3:
Uhm-
SFX: Lick
P: It tastes sweet

PL 4:
S: Uhm…… My tongue……
S: Ehh, there’s a notification…
System Notification:
> Tamed Monster’s intimacy has increased
> New skill “Confusing Breath” Obtained
S: Uhh…
SFX: Chuu

PL 5:
S: I’m getting dizzy I can’t read what’s on it…
S: Umh
System Notification:
> New skill “Confusing Breath” Obtained
> Status “Confusion”
SFX: Lick Lick
S: Ehh? Where are my clothes?
(PR Note: The translation was "When are my clothes?" and I changed it to "Where are my clothes?". If she actually was saying "Where", as in looking for her clothes, the line should be "When did my clothes (disappear)?"
S: What’s happening…?
S: Unh Ahh…
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 07:
PL 1:
S: Umh!
Ahh!
SFX: Lick Lick
S: My body, it’s becoming weird……

PL 2:
Ahh!
Uhh!

PL 3:
S: Pina!
Don’t
S: Not there

PL 4:
S: Uhm!
S: Pina!
Nnh!
S: Uhm!
SFX Bubble: Lick (I actually don’t know what is written there)
S: My hand… can’t hold on…

PL 5:
Uahh

PL 6:
S: Pina!
S: Are you alright?

PL 7:
S: Pfft!
SFX: Wiggle
SFX: Twitch
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 08:
PL 1:
S: So Pina has it too…

PL 2:
SFX: Grab

PL 3:
Asuna did this to Kirito nii-chan too, right?
P: Guuh
S: I won't lose to her!
SFX around dragon dick: Guh Chuu
P: Gah!

PL 4:
P: Guh!
SFX: Drip
SFX: Lick

PL 5:
S: It’s becoming bigger…
SFX: Guh Chuu
SFX: Slurp
P: Guu!

PL 6:
P: Gah!
S: It’s, it’s reaching my throat
P Uhh Gah!
SFX x2: Chuu
SFX: Slurp
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 09:
PL 1:
S: Uahh!
SFX: Splash
SFX x2: Twitch
SFX around the dick and head: Huah

PL 2:
SFX: Guuuh
S: It’s bitter….

PL 3:
S: Did I do something wrong?
P: Gaa
Arrow: Happy but slightly saddened by the fact that it was forced upon

PL 4:
S: Pina can lick me here too
S: Then I guess we will be even? (?)
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 10:
PL 1:
S: Uhm!

PL 2:
S: Uhh!
Ahh

PL 3:
S: What is this sensation…?
S: Unh Ahh!
SFX: Hah Ahh
SFX: Huu
S: Ahh!
S: Something is… coming in…

PL 4:
P: No, no… This is…
S: Uhm <3
S: Ahh!
SFX: Lick
SFX: Drip
S: This is too…
S: Uhm Ahh!
SFX: Hah Ahh
SFX: Huh Haa
S: Kyi!
S: This is too…….
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 11:
PL 1:
S: Uhm!
SFX: Tease
S: Ahh!
S: I can’t!

PL 2:
SFX: Drip
S: There is…

PL 3:
SFX: Haa Ahh
S: Nnh!
S: Ahh!

PL 4:
S: Umh Ahh
S: Uhh
S: Ahh
SFX x2: Squirt
SFX around the mouth: Huah
S: Ahh Uhm Uhh--- Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh~~~

PL 5:
SFX: Shake

PL 6:
S: Th, That…

PL 7:
S: I don’t even know what’s going on anymore…
S: So… Pina…
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 12:
PL 1:
S: Then…

PL 2:
S: Although I don’t know how it’s done---
S: but I want Pina to do it with me!

PL 3:
S: Does… Pina know?
SFX top: Nervous
SFX Bottom: Unease

PL 4:
S: Unh!
SFX: Press/Push

PL 5:
S: Uahh!
S: Uhh!
SFX: Hah Ahh

PL 6:
S: Kyi!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 13:
PL 1:
S: Uhh!
SFX: Chuuu
S: Uhm Ahh Ahh

PL 2:
SFX: Haah

PL 3:
S: there
SFX: Squeeze
S: Ahh!

PL 4:
S: Ahh!
S: Ahh
SFX: Hah Ahh
SFX: Hah
S: Unh
S: Huah
S: It’s a bit scary
SFX: Gush + Push

PL 5:
S: But
S: Ahh
Nnh
SFX: Haah
P: Gyaa!
SFX: Chuuu
SFX: Pft chu chu
P: Uhh

PL 6:
S: I don’t want to stop at all…
S: Ahh, Ahh-
S: Ahh
S: What is this…
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 14:
PL 1:
SFX around dick: spurt
Ahh!
Uhm!
SFX around face: Haah
S: So hot!
S: Something, is about to come---
S: Uaaahhh Ahhhh~~~~

PL 2:
SFX: Pull out
S: Uhm Ahh

PL 3:
S: Ehh?
SFX: Hah
S: What is it doin---

PL 4:
S: Uhh-
Uhm!
SFX: Drenched
S: That, that is…

PL 5:
S: Uahh!

PL 6:
S: Pi, Pina
SFX: Twitch twitch
S: Ahh!
S: Nnh ahh!
S: It’s scary---
S: But it feels so good
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 15:
PL 1:
S: Ahh x3
S: Haa ahh!
SFX: Gush
SFX: Twitch
S: It feels different from just now

PL 2:
S: It feels a lot more…
SFX: Uahh
S: Huahh!

PL 3:
Various SFX

PL 4:
S: Pi, Pina
Ahh
Uhh
Uahh
S: This sensation is too much---
SFX: Twitch
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 16:
PL 1:
S: Uhm
Kyi
Uhh Nnh
Ahhhhhhhhhh---
SFX: Squirt
S: Uhh Uhh
S: Huah
SFX: Dripping

PL 2:
Mission complete?
What is this?

PL 3:
S: Whatever, as long as I get to be with Pina
S: That’s enough for me
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 17:
PL 1:
Kirito: Silica, it’s been a while

PL 2:
S: Kirito nii-chan! It really has been a while!
K: I got busy after I was dragged into the guild
K: By the way, did the item I send you work?

PL 3:
S: Yes! An event appeared!
S: But it was a piece of cake for us, and Pina got a new skill too!
K: That’s great! Can you share the contents of the event with everyone?

PL 4:
S: No way!
No, uhh, it’s too embarrassing, ah, that’s not right, I mean……

~Afterword~
Greetings everyone,
This is Ramen-Penguin who spent 3 months on 16 pages (cries).

I was planning to draw an Asuna book initially,
But things went wrong, and so I escaped to Silica’s embrace (Ouch).

However! Although I switched from Asuna to Silica!
I still stumbled upon a big problem almost immediately~~~~
The differences of body size between Asuna, Silica, and Pina are too huge!
Therefore I couldn’t readjust the paizuri or nipple plays.

And other poses such as picking up, pushing down,
Or changing position with Silica, was impossible with Pina!
But Penguin doesn’t like Silica being raped,
So in order to reduce the feeling of bestiality,
I tried making Pina cuter,
And so this is the final result of that,
Hopefully I’ll improve more in the future.

Besides that, I personally liked page 13 & 14,
Pina looks so cute pushing with its small hands XDDDDD,
A small creature trying its best looks really cute (Self-praising) XD.

Blog:
Pixiv:

Who wrote the script? Ramen-Penguin? Who is this?
Oh well, let’s just delete this.

Why am I still the only CN>ENG translator?? Come out there’s no need to be shy (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/cry.gif) I am all alone~
New script for EHCOVE, because this thread is almost dead.
(IMG:[hennojin.com] http://hennojin.com/scanslation/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/image.jpg)

RAW by me: https://e-hentai.org/g/912789/9b3502cde3/
EDIT: Proofreading changes applied
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Page 01 :
Nagato’s Special Repairs
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Page 02:
Nagato: Admiral, mission complete. Although there is some minor damage, but the enemy has been successfully neutralized…
Inazuma: Nagato, you don’t look so good. You should head back to the docks now!
Admiral: Destroyers, you girls head back first. Nagato will follow suit once you girls are done.
Inazuma: Roger that! We’ll be quick, see you later!
Shimakaze: Osu~ (Or Ohh~)
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Page 03:
A: Alright
“That” is still in place, right?
N: Ye- Yes. I have been wearing it from the very beginning… and no one seems to have noticed it.
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Page 04:
A: Then…
N: Yah!
A: Oh my, did it fall off because you didn’t place it in well enough?
N: That’s because admiral suddenly…
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Page 05:
A: Looks like Nagato isn’t properly trained yet, looks like I’ll have to repair you personally.
N: Wait! Didn’t you say we'd do that after we’re back in the room!?
A: Even if you’re the flagship, obeying your orders is still your duty as a ship girl.
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Page 06:
N: If that’s your order…
A: That’s my flag ship.
A: You’re surprisingly wet here, I bet you came a few times during battle just now!
N: Ahh… Mph… Please… be gentler…
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Page 07:
A: As a ship girl
A: You actually dared to cum during battle!
N: No…
N: Ahh!
A: That’s a major offence! Accept my punishment!
N: I’m, I’m cumming again…!
N: Ahh Umh <3
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Page 08:
N: You came inside again…
A: How should we do it for our next sortie?......
A: Umh Uhh!?
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Page 09:
A: Nagato! You’re…!
N: Admiral, you dropped your guard just now <3
A: Uhh!
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Page 10:
A: If that’s the case……
A: You leave me with no choice but to attack your other weak spot!
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Page 11:
N: Attacking there is cheating.
A: You’re just being dishonest now. You don’t really hate being attacked there, am I right?
N: That’s, that’s nonsense.
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Page 12:
A: You can drop the act now! Your butthole has clearly betrayed you here!
N: Ahh Ahh <3
N: Uhh
A: Nagato! I’m going to fire my second round now!
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Page 14:
N: Phew… Admiral……
N: You have my thanks for your hospitality.
N: Resupplying is really essential.
A: Ye… Yeah
Small Box within the Box: Admiral
Box: I gave Nagato a little too much supply to get her fully recovered, and I’m the one fatigued now. How did I lose to her even though I was the one with the advantage before?
Small Box within the bubble: Inazuma
Inazuma: Nagato? When did you finish your repairs?
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Page 15:
Free Talk:
Hello, Miyuki Rei here, I’m just finishing my afterword just before the deadline.
Thank you for buying the book!

I decided to draw a Nagato book after finishing my previous Atago one, but I stumbled upon some issues and started my work pretty late. I never really liked Nagato but she’s really starting to grow on me. I guess that because of the mature and cool vibes that she gives off, most of her books are humiliation play. That’s why I wanted to draw a “Teasing vanilla” book for her.

Drawing Nagato’s long black hair and anal is really exciting for me HAH HAH HAH HAH HAH HAH HAH

Ugh Hmm! Lost some control over there.
This time it’s a fully colored book too, since I’m better at it. Maybe I’ll maintain this style, but I’ll consider changing too.

Before I go, thank you again for buying my book!
Miyuki Rei
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Page 16:
She’s one of my favorite destroyers.

She has a good figure, and her one-eye covering hairstyle is a big plus on her sexiness too.
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END

This post has been edited by chung2795: Mar 12 2016, 04:23

*All changes from the original translation are marked in red. Text that needs to be deleted is also marked with a strikethrough.*

Why am I still the only CN>ENG translator?? Come out there’s no need to be shy (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/cry.gif) I am all alone~
New script for EHCOVE, because this thread is almost dead.
(IMG:[hennojin.com] http://hennojin.com/scanslation/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/image.jpg)

RAW by me: https://e-hentai.org/g/912789/9b3502cde3/
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 01 :
Nagato’s Special Repairs
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 02:
Nagato: Admiral, mission complete. Although there is some minor damage, the enemy has been successfully neutralized…
Inazuma: Nagato, you don’t look so good. You should head back to the docks now!
Admiral: Destroyers, you girls head back first. Nagato will follow suit once you girls are done.
Inazuma: Roger that! We’ll be quick, see you later!
Shimakaze: Osu~ (Or Ohh~)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 03:
A: Alright
“That” is still in place, right?
N: Ye- Yes. I have been wearing it from the very beginning… and no one seems to have noticed it.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 04:
A: Then…
N: Yah!
A: Oh my, did it fall off because you didn’t place it in well enough?
N: That’s because Admiral suddenly…
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 05:
A: Looks like Nagato isn’t properly trained yet, looks like I’ll have to repair you personally.
N: Wait! Didn’t you say we'd do that after we’re back to the base!?
A: Even if you’re the flagship, obeying your orders is still your duty as a ship girl.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 06:
N: If that’s your order…
A: That’s my flag ship.
A: You’re surprisingly wet here, I bet you came a few times during battle just now!
N: Ahh… Mph… Please… be gentler…
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 07:
A: As a ship girl
A: You actually dared to cum during battle!
N: No…
N: Ahh!
A: That’s a major offence! Accept my punishment!
N: I’m, I’m cumming again…!
N: Ahh Umh <3
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 08:
N: You came inside again…
A: How should we do it for our next sortie?......
A: Umh Uhh!?
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 09:
A: Nagato! You’re…!
N: Admiral, you dropped your guard just now <3
A: Uhh!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 10:
A: If that’s the case……
A: You leave me with no choice but to attack your other weak spot!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 11:
N: Attacking there is cheating.
A: You’re just being dishonest now. You don’t really hate being attacked there, am I right?
N: That’s, that’s nonsense.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 12:
A: You can drop the act now! Your butthole has clearly betrayed you here!
N: Ahh Ahh <3
N: Uhh
A: Nagato! I’m going to fire my second round now!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 14:
N: Phew… Admiral……
N: You have my thanks for your hospitality.
N: Resupplying is really essential.
A: Ye… Yeah
Small Box within the Box: Admiral
Box: I gave Nagato a little too much supply to get her fully recovered, and I’m the one fatigued now. How did I lose to her even though I was the one with the advantage before?
Small Box within the bubble: Inazuma
Inazuma: Nagato? When did you finish your repairs?
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 15:
Free Talk:
Hello, Miyuki Rei here, I’m just finishing my afterword just before the deadline.
Thank you for buying the book!

I decided to draw a Nagato book after finishing my previous Atago one, but I stumbled upon some issues and started my work pretty late. I never really liked Nagato but she’s really starting to grow on me. I guess that because of the mature and cool vibes that she gives off, most of her books are mostly humiliation play. That’s why I wanted to draw a “Teasing vanilla” book for her.

Drawing Nagato’s long black hair and anal is really exciting for me HAH HAH HAH HAH HAH HAH HAH

Ugh Hmm! Lost some control over there.
This time it’s a fully colored book too, since I’m better at it. Maybe I’ll maintain this style, but I’ll consider changing too.

Before I go, thank you again for buying my book!
Miyuki Rei
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 16:
She’s one of my favorite destroyers.

She has a good figure, and her one-eye covering hairstyle is a big plus on her sexiness too.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
END

This post has been edited by Vilis: Mar 12 2016, 10:34

editing bounty for kancolle

https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=14184

Yo Red now that I'm done with your scans, is there anything you want me to translate for EHCOVE?