[X] My Assistant

Welcome to the thread (finally someone's here), here's my Taiwanese raws you can choose whichever you want to translate and Red Piotrus should provide the bounty for the behalf of EHCOVE.

Yeah the word jeez is really good for "真是的" since "really" or "for real" sounds very repetitive when used more than once, plus they sound unnatural too.

My raws:
https://e-hentai.org/g/823202/ddad3cf139/
https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/871527/b2d16c4dc9/

Of course, more raws to be scanned soon, I still have like 10 books from Red's commission unscanned yet (Red's menacingly stares from behind)

As a reminder, I am happy to offer a 50k credits + 50 hath bounty the following works, which I am assuming are Chinese RAWs, not TLs, in a rough order of interest from top to bottom:

https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/ (SOA)
https://e-hentai.org/g/869198/e826890a03/ (Dungeon...)
https://e-hentai.org/g/842307/548ed4b6ef/ (original, sister yuri incest)
https://e-hentai.org/g/841391/02b2fbd908/ (Kancolle)
https://e-hentai.org/g/823202/ddad3cf139/ (Suisei no Gargantia)
https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/ (...Madoka)
https://e-hentai.org/g/552595/54a404466d/ (Fate)
https://e-hentai.org/g/871527/b2d16c4dc9/ (Fate)
https://e-hentai.org/g/855105/b64d73d2e4/ (Fate)
https://e-hentai.org/g/644569/d3a7972704/ (Maoyuu Maou Yuusha)

and more or less anything else from chung's new scans (*keeps staring*)

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Nov 20 2015, 07:36

Red please remember to send the SAO Bride Practice's script for proofreading and the editing bounty for it too.

Thanks. 50k credits + 50 hath would be good.

The ones I'm interested in translating:

https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/


This one maybe later (after I watch the anime)
[g-hentai.org] http://g-hentai.org/g/869198/e826890a03/




g.e-hentai.org/g/644569/d3a7972704/ - this one has a bounty, but I'm not interested.

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 20 2015, 09:10

Thanks. 50k credits + 50 hath would be good.

The ones I'm interested in translating:

https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/
This one maybe later (after I watch the anime)
[g-hentai.org] http://g-hentai.org/g/869198/e826890a03/
g.e-hentai.org/g/644569/d3a7972704/ - this one has a bounty, but I'm not interested.

https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/ has already been translated https://e-hentai.org/g/858200/3beb4cdf79/

Changes from the original are marked in red, strikethrough indicates text that needs to be deleted.

It's been awhile since I made a script for EHCOVE, so....
Hopefully we can get more CN>ENG translators here, I'm so lonely here lol

Script for Bride’s Practice
My raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/868239/dbc027c25d/
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 04:
A: Ah!
A: Kiri… Kirito
K: This really suits you, Asuna!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 05:
PL Right:
A: Don’t…
A: Don’t look here…
PL 2:
A: Kiri…
A: Unh Nnh
PL 3:
A: Jeez…
A: Kirito, you sly fox!
PL 4:
A: From now on…
A: I’m Kirito’s woman
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 06:
PL 1:
A: Kirito…
PL 2:
K: Asuna, you’re getting better at this
PL 3:
A: I have been practicing everyday for Kirito
K: Being able to marry Asuna is the happiest moment in my life
PL 4:
A: Hey
A: Don’t forget about me when you return to the real world.
K: Uhm
K: I promise
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 07:
PL 1:
The Real World
A: It’s freezing…
A: Kirito is late
A: Ahh Ahh Ahh
Big Text: Kyaaaaaaa
PL 2:
K: Sorry for the wait, Asuna
A: You… You scared me there! Jeez…
PL 3:
K: Don’t tell me you’re feeling it…
PL 4:
K: Even with such thick clothings?
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 08:
PL 1:
A: Dum… dummy
A: I’m only feeling it because it’s Kirito
PL 2:
K: I love you
PL 3:
A: Don’t do it here
K: It’s been a while since we've done it…
K: It’s fine, no one passes by here anyway…
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 09:
PL 1:
K: I can’t hold back anymore
PL 2:
Ahh~
PL 3:
A: Kirito’s…
A: Hot penis is twitching inside…
A Moans: Hah Ahh x2
PL 4:
Moan: Uhm Uhm
Hyaa Ahh Ahh

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 10:
PL 1:
Hah Ah
Ha---
Hah Ahh
PL 2:
Hah Ahh
PL 3:
A: Uhh Uhm Nnh
PL 4:
K: Does it feel good like this?
A: Hah Ahh…
A: Ahh Ahh Ahh
A: Ye… Yes, it does (the original text is like Gw…. Fwels Gwood)
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 11:
PL 2:
A: Hah Ahh
PL 4:
A: Cumming!!! Ahh Ahh Ahh!!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 12:
A: Ahh Ahhn
A: Kirito’s… semen is coming in!!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 13:
PL 1:
A: The real world feels better than the virtual one, right?
A: Jeez…
A: I love you, Kirito….
PL 2:
Bubble: But it’s really cold out here…
PL 3:
K: Achoo!
A: Good grief…
PL 4:
-The next day-
A: You got a cold!?
K(phone): Doing it at the park during the winter is really a bad idea after all…
-END-
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 14:
Hello~ Sousouman here.
This is my sixth SAO book, and the second season was announced when this book was being made.
I wanted to draw more pages, but due to time constraint only this much could be drawn.
Although it’s a short book, it’s filled with my love for SAO,
I hope everyone likes this.

Then, til the next book we meet.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 16:
Hello~ I’m Hanahanamaki.
I’m responsible for paneling, most of the coloring,
dialogue, editing, printing etc.
basically an assistant,
although it was a very busy work,
but since everyone seems to be liking this work,
that made everything worth it.

Truth to be told, now that this is our sixth SAO book,
and we’ve also gained a variety of readers within the course of time,
When I think about the fact that we have so many readers reading this book,
it made me feel so proud.
I hope one day,
If I could personally give our SAO doujins to the original author, Reki Kawahara sensei, that would be great.

Speaking of which, due to work last year,
I was fortunate enough to attend Dengeki Bunko’s year-end party, it felt like Weiya*.
There were a lot of famous authors there, including Reki Kawahara sensei.
The editor even managed to introduce us to him,
but I got too overjoyed that I forgot to give him the books,
even if I did I would be seen as a strange foreigner…

Then, til next time.
TL note*: [en.wikipedia.org] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Weiya
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/ has already been translated https://e-hentai.org/g/858200/3beb4cdf79/

Didn't look up each one. Is the other one https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/ still available?

Changes from the original are marked in red, strikethrough indicates text that needs to be deleted.

Good catch. Did you look at the raw or just edit from the translation?

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 20 2015, 15:02

Didn't look up each one. Is the other one https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/ still available?

Yeah that is still available, feel free to translate it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

editing bounty for the new chung's SAO dojin posted at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13412

Yeah that is still available, feel free to translate it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Sounds good. I'll start after my class ends.

editing bounty for the new chung's SAO dojin posted at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13412

Can you also make a translation bounty for me? It has to be unranked as I'm still waiting to claim my 5th bounty (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/mellow.gif)

I can try (try because I'm not sure if I'll run into some insurmountable obstacles) the editing bounty, but it'll probably take a long time as I'm still pretty new to photoshop.

Sounds good. I'll start after my class ends.
Can you also make a translation bounty for me? It has to be unranked as I'm still waiting to claim my 5th bounty (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/mellow.gif)

I can try (try because I'm not sure if I'll run into some insurmountable obstacles) the editing bounty, but it'll probably take a long time as I'm still pretty new to photoshop.

You really don't have to bother with the editing to be honest (a.k.a leave the editing to the editors, although I'm in no position to lecture you), but if you're really insistent, then go for it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

This post has been edited by chung2795: Nov 20 2015, 17:25

I'm about half way though. How would you translate the following:

噗滋
puzi

唔哈
wuha

咕啾
gujiu

要溶化了
Melting/dissolving?
e.g.,
大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 21 2015, 04:21

I'm about half way though. How would you translate the following:

噗滋
puzi

唔哈
wuha

咕啾
gujiu

要溶化了
Melting/dissolving?
e.g.,
大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。

It usually depends on the type of SFX, like I translate moans but not sound effects produced by body movements.

1. 噗滋 sounds like the sound of cum ejaculating, so maybe *spurt* or Pfftch. (I really recommend leaving it alone if it's not moaning)

2. 唔哈 I usually use Uahh

3. 咕啾 you can use Guh Chuu

4. 要溶化了 I'm melting....
大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。 My brain.... is going to melt... (Because it felt so good his/her brain feels like melting away)

Spent way too much time on this (>6 hours). (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/huh.gif) I still need a bounty for this.

Feedback would be appreciated. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

It usually depends on the type of SFX, like I translate moans but not sound effects produced by body movements.

1. 噗滋 sounds like the sound of cum ejaculating, so maybe *spurt* or Pfftch. (I really recommend leaving it alone if it's not moaning)

2. 唔哈 I usually use Uahh

3. 咕啾 you can use Guh Chuu

4. 要溶化了 I'm melting....
大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。 My brain.... is going to melt... (Because it felt so good his/her brain feels like melting away)

Thanks! Added those.

gallery (2nd one is newer):
https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/875097/8f987f9d82/

Translation by Simpleton8:
Page number on the newer version is 2+(page number I have here)

Terms I’m not sure about (ctrl/cmd-F to find where they are):
白頭偕老
人蔘贏家
寄攤
棒棒

Page 1:
妹妹的妄想紀錄
Record of my sister’s delusion

Page 2:
妹妹的妄想紀錄
Record of my sister’s delusion

此書為限制級，未滿十八歲之未成年人請勿購買，閱讀
This book is R-rated, please don’t buy or read it if you are under 18 or the age of majority in the jurisdiction in which you reside.

內容皆與現實人物、事物、團體無關
The following story is entirely fictional and does not depict any actual person or event.
(modified from L&O, original translation: "content has no relation with any real person, thing, and organization")

Page 3：
1）
桐人君。。。其實。。。 
Kirito . . . actually I  . . .

我喜歡你
I like you

2）
到最後
At the end,

藏了許多久的那句話，還是沒能講出來。。。
those words (that were concealed for a long time) were still left unsaid . . .

哥哥。。。我喜歡你
Brother . . . I like you

Page 4:
1)
結城 明白。
Yuki Asu(na)
(from sign)

真的很謝謝
I am really thankful for

大家今天的捧場
everyone’s support today

1)
請各位嘉賓拍手， 恭喜這對新人！
Honored guests, please clap your hands and congratulate this new couple (bride and groom)

祝他們永浴愛河！白頭偕老!
(Wish/may) their love lasts forever, till old and grey!
(till and grey is common translation? never heard it in English)

今天是那立亞絲娜，明白奈的結婚日
Today is Asuna Yuki’s wedding day

對象是明白奈父親為乾兒子的須鄉
The groom is Asuna’s father’s adopted son Sugo (Nobuyuki) . . .
[swordartonline.wikia.com] http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Sugou_Nobuyuki

2）
啪啪啪
*claps*
(actual sound: papapa)

恭喜兩位！
Congratulation, you two!

啪啪啪
*claps*
(actual sound: papapa)

3）
哥哥因為這件事的打擊，整天一個人待在房間足不出戶。。。
Brother was devastated by this marriage, so he hasn’t left his room all day.

哥哥。。。那個人就是你的一切嗎？
Brother . . . Do you really love that person that much?
(original: brother, is that person your everything)

Page 5：
1）
直葉…抱歉 
Suguha . . . Sorry 

讓我一個人靜一下
Let me be by myself for awhile

2）
真拿哥哥沒辦法。。。。
Don’t know what to do with him . . .

3）
真是的。。。又連晚餐都不吃了
Jeez . . . even skipping dinner

4）
今天還是拿上給哥哥吧。。。。
Let’s bring this up to brother again

5）
哥哥 晚餐煮好很久囉
Brother, dinner has been ready for a long time

Page 6:
1)
哥哥。。。有聽到嗎？
Brother, can you hear me?

3）
就算再難過
No matter how sad you’re,

飯還是要吃喔
you still need to eat

4）
你的晚餐幫你放在門口囉
I’ll leave your dinner at the door

我不打擾你了。。。
I'll stop bothering you

5）
喀鏘
*clink*
(actual sound: kaqiang)

6）
哥哥。。
Brother

7）
哥哥。。恢復笑容看著我好不好？
Brother . . . I want to see your smile again
(original: brother . . . Can you recover your smile and look at me)

在你的心中。。。我真的就這麼不重要嗎？
In your heart, . . . am I really not that important / or that unimportant/insignificant?

Page 7:
1）
喀咑
*clink*
(actual sound: kaqiang)

欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

2）
直葉。。
Suguha . .

3）
抱歉讓你擔心了。。。
Sorry I let you worry . . .

4）
謝謝你這麼關心我
Thank you for caring about me so much.

5）
直葉。。。
Suguha . . 

對不起
Sorry

Page 8:
1)
都怪我沒用  亞絲娜才會。。。
It’s all because I was useless, that Asuna would . . .

哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

這也不是你願意的啊
This is not what you wished

2）
她一定很痛苦。。。
She must be very painful

全部都是因為我的無能
All because of my incompetence

3）
哥哥。。。別難過了。。。
Brother . . . don’t be sad anymore. . .

對不起。。 又讓妳看到我這樣子。。
Sorry . . . to let you see me like this again . .

4）
哥哥
Brother

5）
打起精神吧
Cheer up

我會一直陪你身邊的
I will always be with you

6）
直葉。。謝謝你
Suguha . . Thank you

7）
欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

哥哥。。。！
Brother . . .!

8）
直葉。。。我。。
Suguha . . . I . .

我也喜歡你。。。。
I also like you . . .

Page 9:
1)
哥哥。。。這樣下去。。。不可以的。。。。
Brother . . . You can't. . .continue like this . . .

唔。。。
Uahhh . . 

2)
哈啊。。直葉。。。
Hah . . Suguha . .

3）
但是我的。。。身體。。。好奇怪
But my . . . body . . . is feeling weird

4）
哥哥等一下。。。。
Brother, wait .  . .

那個。。。
This . . .

5）
直葉的胸部過了兩年
after two years, Suguha’s chest

果然。。。
as expected . . .

發育的很好呢
has developed  nicely

6）
啊。。。！
Ahh . . . !

7）
直葉的胸部好軟。。。
Suguha’s chest is so soft

啊。。。好棒
Ah . . .  So good/awesome . . .

Page 10:
1)
啊《3好舒服《3
Ahh <3 So good <3

哈啊
Hahah

2）
呼啊啊啊
Huahhh

嗯啊《3
Enn ahh <3

嗯。。。《3直葉的巨乳好棒《3
Ennn . . .<3 Suguha’s large breasts are so lovely (good/sexy/beautiful)

呼哈。。。《3《3
Huha . . . <3 <3

不  不行。。。。《3
N-No . . . <3

嗯啊《3哥哥。。。這樣我《3
En Ahh <3 Brother . . . This way I <3

3）
哈啊。。。。
Haahh . . .

輕。。。輕一點《3
Gen . . . a little more gentle <3

4）
啊！！！那。。那裡
Ah ! ! ! That - that place

不  不可以啊
N-no you can't

5）
啊、啊————！
Ahh Ahh - - - -!

那裡啊。。。。
That place . . .

嗯啊啊－－－－－《3
Enahh - - - - - <3

呀啊－《3
Yaahh - <3

啊啊啊－－－－！
Ahhhhh ——— !

6）
哈啊。。。人家的那裡
Hah . . . That place is . . .

好、好好舒服
It feels s-s-so good

唔啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
Uahahhhhhhhhhh

嗯啊。。
En ahh . .

哥哥《3
Brother <3

Page 11：
1）
咕啾
Guh Chuu

啊！好痛。。。！
Ahh! That hurts . . .!

2）
啊 進。。進去了《3
Ahh It . . .It’s inside <3

嗯啊啊《3
Enn Ahhh <3

不、不要啊《3
Don-don’t <3

3）
兩隻指頭全部都進去囉   直葉的小穴吸得好緊啊《3《3
Two fingers are completely inside, Suguha’s pussy is sucking them tight <3 <3

嗯啊啊啊
En Ahhhh

這 這樣我。。。！
This This way I . . .!

哈啊－－－－！
Hahh  — — !

插入
*put in*

4）
嗯啊。。。！
Enn Ahhh . . .!

抽出
*pull out*

5）
嗯啊－－－－－！
Enn Ahhh - - - -!

嗚。。。嗚啊啊。。！
Uhh Uhm Ahhh . .!

6）
直葉。。還可以嗎？
Suguha . . . is it okay?

要繼續下去嗎？
to continue?

7）
哈啊。。哈啊。。
Hah . . Hah . .

哥哥。。。。我。。沒問題的喔
Brother . . . I . . am alright/ok
(original: I have no problem)

Page 12:
1)
嗯。。。《3
Enn . . .<3

哈—啊————
Hah - ah - - -

囌－－－－－－
Suu - - - - -

咕啾－－－《3
Guh Chuu

2）
嗯－－－《3
Ennn - - -<3

哈啊
Hah 

囌嚕－－－－
Suupuu - - -

3）
嗯－－－哈啊《3
Enn - - -Hah <3

哈啊－－－－－－－－
Hah - - - - - -

4）
咕喔－－－喔。。。
Guohh - - ohhh . . .

嗯～～《3
En ~~~ <3

嗯～嗯～～咕嗯～
En ~Enn ~ Guennh ~

5）
直葉來用胸部夾夾看
Suguha, try squeezing it with your chest

欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

6）
這麼柔軟的的胸部用起來 果然不一樣
As expected, it feels a lot differently with chest this soft

嗯啊－《3
Enn Ahh <3

既柔軟又充滿彈性啊《3
Not only soft but also elastic <3

Page 13:
1）
啊。。。！出來了！
Ahh . . . ! It’s coming out!

咕啾《3咕啾《3
Guh Chuu<3 Guh Chuu<3

啊《3嗯啊《3
Ahh <3 Ennahh <3

好多。。。好厲害。。。《3
So much . . .  so fierce/awesome <3

2）
哈啊。。。哈啊。。。 
Hah . . . Hah . . .

這就是哥哥的。。。
This is brother’s

好  好喜歡
R-Really like it

抖
*shudder*/*tremble*/*shake*

哈啊。。。《3
Hah . . . <3

3）
直葉的胸部實在《3《3
Suguha’s chest is really <3 <3

。。。太舒服了
so good/comfortable

我。。。我好幸福啊《3 還想要更多。。。更多
I’m . . .I’m so happy <3 I want more  . . . more

4）
顫抖
*shudder*/*tremble*/*shake*

5）
哥。。唔！
Bro - -wuu!

嗯  嗯啊。。。
Enn Ennahh . . .

嗯。。。嗯。。。！
En . .. En . . .!

Page 14:
1)
呼哈。。。《3
Huha . . .<3

2）
咕啾
Guh Chuu

啾
Chuu

嗯、嗯啊。。。！
En , Ennahh . . .!

哈啊
Hah 

啊。。。！
Ahh . . .!

呼哈。。。
Huahh . . .

直葉的小穴已經濕透了喔～
Suguha’s pussy is dripping wet ~

嗯。。《3
En . . . <3

3）
直葉。。。棒棒要插進去喔《3
Suguha . . . my stick is going in <3
(stick can also be dick/cock/etc.)

4）
嗯啊啊啊啊－－－－－！！！
En Ahhhh ! ! !

進來了！好《3好大。。。《3
It’s going in! So <3 So big <3

5）
呀啊啊－！
Yahhh - !

哥哥的棒棒。。。
Brother’s stick . . .

哈啊。。。！直葉。。的體內好緊好舒服啊！
Hahh . . .! Suguha’s inside is so tight, so good!

唔哈好緊。。。！
Uahhh, so tight . . .!

好舒服《3
So good <3

要。。要溶化了
It’s . . . it’s melting
Page 15:
1）
全部進來了《3
It’s all coming in <3

啊—————
Ahhh - - - -

噗滋！
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

噗滋！
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

等。。。等一下
W-Wait

嗯啊！好、好深！
En Ahh. S-So deep!

啊－－－－－《3
Ahh - - - - <3

不行－－－－《3
No - - - - -<3

呼啊－！
Huahh -!

哈啊啊啊－－－－《3
Hahhhhh - - - - <3

快不行了－－－－－《3
I can’t anymore - - - - - <3

2）
噗滋！噗滋！
*spurt* *spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

啊
Ahhhh

3）
哈啊。。。哥哥。。。
Hahah . . . Brother . . .

我。。。不行了。。。《3
I . . . I can’t . . . <3

嗯！
Ennn!

大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。
My brain.... is going to melt...

4）
咿－－－－－－
Yii - - - - -

咿啊啊啊！
Yiahhhh

這樣、這樣。。。 會壞掉的啊啊啊啊《3《3
My pussy is going to break like this Ahhh <3 <3
(original: this way, this way . . . will break ahhh)

Page 16:
1）
哈啊。。哈啊。。。。！
Hah . . Hah . . .!

嗯嗚。。。
Ennugh

哈呼。。。。
Huah

嗯。。哥哥的那裡好溫暖
En . . brother’s thing feels so warm
(original: brother’s that place feels so warm)

2）
嗯－啊－－－－－！！！
Ennn - Ahhh - - - -! ! !

又要。。。《3《3
Again . . . <3 <3

3）
咿－－－－
Yii - - - - -

咿啊啊啊啊啊啊！
Yiahhhhhh !

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊《3
Hahhhhhhhh <3

這樣好。。。好舒服啊
It feels so . . . so good

4）
嗯嗯。。。啊啊啊啊啊
Ennn . . . Ahhhhhhh

要要要要要要要要去了《3
It’s going in A-a-a-a-again <3

呼啊啊啊
Huahhhh

不。。。《3
No . . .<3

不行了。。。。《3
I can’t . . . <3

5）
直葉我也。。。唔喔！
Suguha, I’m also . . .Wuohh!

咕啾《3
Guh Chuu<3

又要一次了。。。！
Another time . . . ?

Page 17:
1)
咕啾
Guh Chuu<3

哈啊。。。。。！
Hahhhh . . . . !

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊！！
Hahhhhhhh ! !

好多。。。。！
So much

唔嗯
Uahhuennnn

嗯啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
En Ahhhhhhhh

握緊
*clench*

哈啊《3
Hahhhh <3

2）
呼。。。哈。。好溫暖
Hu . . . Ha . . .So warm <3

哥哥的精液。。喜歡《3
Brother’s semen . . Like <3

3）
哈啊。。
Hah . .

直葉。。。我。。。也好舒服。。。
Suguha . . . I . . . also feel so good . . .

4）
哥哥。。《3
Brother . . . <3

我。。。《3
I . . .<3

5）
請。。請讓我。。
Please . . . please make me

更加的舒服吧。。。《3
feel even better . . . <3

6）
直葉－－－－－－
Suguha - - -

Page 18:
1）
直葉我會讓你更舒服的！
Suguha, I will make you feel better

2）
嗯啊啊啊啊！
En Ahhhh !

小穴好。。好舒服啊。。！
Pussy feels so . . . so good!

咿嗯－－－－！
Yiii Ennnn - - - - -!

唔嗯《3《3
Uahh en <3 <3

啊。。。裡面被填得好滿《3
Ahhhh . . . my inside is filled completely <3

3）
哈啊。。。。！
Huahh . . .!

抽插
*put in and pull out*

噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

4）
哥。。。哥哥－－－－－！
Broth . . . Brother - - - - -!

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊！！
Hahhhhhh ! !

嗯呀啊啊啊啊啊《3
Enn Yahhhhh <3

好舒服《3
So good <3

5）
我。。。已經－－－－！
I’m . . . already - - - -!

哈啊。。。。！小穴不斷的收缩
Haah . . .! Pussy keeps on contracting.

喘氣
*pant*

Page 19:
1）
哥。。哥哥。。我。。
Broth . . Brother, I . .

抖
*shake*

2）
我真的。。好幸福啊。。。《3
I’m really . . . really happy <3

喜。。。歡。。。哥哥。。。《3
Li . . . ke . . . Brother . . .<3

3)
唔。。。唔啊！？哈啊啊啊啊！
Uahh . . . Uaahhh ! ? Hahhhhhh!

哈啊啊－－－－！
Hahhhhhhh - - - !

噗滋
*spurt* *spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

這 這樣下去我
If If we continue like this, I,

好好好舒服
sooo sooo good

4)
直葉。。。！《3《3
Suguha, . . .! <3 <3

我。。。我也喜歡你《3
I . . . I also like you <3

啊《3
Ahhh <3

哥。。哥哥！
Broth . . Brother

我也是《3
me too <3

5）
又。。。又要射了！
I’m . . . I’m going to cum again!

咕啾
Guh Chuu

6）
哈啊！
Hahhh

全部。。。全部。。。都。。。
Shoot . . . Shoot . . .all
(original: all . . . all . . . all, switched with below translation)

都射在裡面吧《3《3
all of it inside <3 <3
(original: all shoot it inside, switched with above translation)

Page 20:
1）
噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

膨脹
＊expand＊

2)
啊啊啊－－－《3
ahhhhhhh - - - <3

嗯啊啊啊《3
Enn Ahhhh <3

啊啊《3
Ahhhhh <3

咕啾
Guh Chuu

咕啾
Guh Chuu

抽動
＊twitch＊

3)
哥哥的。。。全部都。。。《3
Brother’s . . . all of . . .<3

呼哈
Huha

哈啊。。。哈啊。。。《3
Hahh .. . Hahh . . .<3

4）
哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

呼哈。。。
Huha . . .

咿嗯。。。
Yi Enn . . .

5）
呼啊 。。。。呼啊
Huahhh . . . Huahh

哈啊。。。哈啊。。。。
Hahh . . . Hahh . . ..

我。。。好。。。好幸福《3
I’m . . .so . . . so happy <3

Page 21:
1)
哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

我愛你
I love you

我也是。。。直葉
Me too . . . Suguha

2）
嗯。。哥哥。。。
Enn . . .Brother . . .

嗯。。。
Enn . . .

3）
滴答
＊drip＊

滴答
＊drip＊

滴答
＊drip＊

4)
哥。。。。
Brother

Page 22:
1)
哥
Brother

對不起。。。我
Sorry . . .I

2）
我。。。
I . . .

哥。。。哥。。。
Brother . . . Brother . . .

3)
哥哥。。。我
Brother . . .I

真的。。。真的。。。好。。。喜歡你
Truly . . . really . . . love you so much

Page 23 (this is a little incoherent):
最後獻上封面的泳裝版！！！
Lastly, I offer you a page of Suguha in swimsuit ! ! !

( 沒人會沒事在房間穿泳衣啦＃）
(No one would put on swimsuit in the room for no reason #)

大家好 這裏是炒肉師。。。（？）的廢話後記了
Hi everyone, this is Chaoroushi’s nonsense afterward

這一本書從規劃及作畫都花了很長時間，
This book took a long time to plan and draw,
從期未忙到期未、寒假
from the mid-semester till the end of semester and winter vacation.
因為是第一次出R18本，
Because this is my first R18 book,
花了很多時間做功課、找資料（？）
I spent a lot of time doing research, finding information.
有很多地方很不熟悉，還請大家多多指教批評／／／
There’s a lot of parts I’m not familiar with, so everyone, please give constructive criticisms.
還是希望大家會喜歡這本滿滿的肉的肉本
I hope everyone likes this satisfying book that is full of juicy material.

其實SAO當初新番一出並沒有馬上追
Actually, I was not hooked when SAO first came out.
直到後面直葉出現。。。！－一秒就打中我了XDD
The moment Suguha appeared, I was hooked.
(original: until Suguha appears ! —
接著不知不覺就掉了妹妹坑W
Then unwittingly I became a sis-con. W

直葉妹妹真的好可愛啊／／／／
Suguha-chan is so adorable/cute / / /
後面劇情真的一集比一集還痛
Toward the end, each episode of the story line felt more painful than the previous.
真的是看一次哭一次QAQ
I cried every time I watched QAQ
桐人這個人蔘贏家！！！！太可惡了！（喂
Kirito, this lewd bastard ! ! ! It’s too much!
雖然妹妹到最後不是官配XD
Although the sister was not the main female character,
但是在我心中妹妹No1
in my heart, the sister is No1
再來西莉卡!!^O^/
Then came Silica !! ^O^
贫乳妹妹也好可愛WWW
flat-chested sister was also cute WWW
亞絲娜也看到後面越看越喜歡W
I also liked Asuna more and more at the end.

但是還是直葉妹妹最可愛啊QDQ！！！
But Suguha is the cutest QDQ!!
(完全私心)
(completely my selfish view)

最後最後、
Lastly, lastly
謝謝身邊的朋友們支持我畫這本糟糕本
I want to thank the friends around me for supporting this terrible book
(note: Chinese/Asian tradition to exaggerate one’s fault,).
給我很多意見、指導和幫忙、給我寄攤
giving me a lot of suggestions, guidances as well giving me a vendor’s stand
(寄攤=vendor for selling comics)

最後謝謝拿著本書的你
Finally, thank you, the person who is holding this book.

炒肉師 2013.02.01
Chaoroushi 2013.02.01

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 21 2015, 07:44

Wait I'm currently binge watching OnePunch Man, will help you with the script once I'm done.

Wait I'm currently binge watching OnePunch Man, will help you with the script once I'm done.

Alright. Thanks. No hurry. I'm probably going to sleep soon. I will check here tomorrow.

Spent way too much time on this (>6 hours). (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/huh.gif) I still need a bounty for this.

*cough cough* Red~~~~

1. 祝他們永浴愛河！白頭偕老!
(Wish/may) their love lasts forever, till old and grey!

I think I would use "May their love lasts forever, till death do they part!"

2. 桐人這個人蔘贏家！！！！太可惡了！（喂
Kirito, this lewd bastard ! ! ! It’s too much!

This 人生贏家 is basically winner in life, a person who gets everything he desires in life. You can use this as a reference for alternate translation.

3. 給我很多意見、指導和幫忙、給我寄攤
giving me a lot of suggestions, guidances as well giving me a vendor’s stand
(寄攤=vendor for selling comics)

Yeah this is accurate

4. 棒棒 haha you made all the rookie CN>ENG mistake. 棒棒 is not stick it's Chinese slang for penis//dick. So use like "Onii-chan's penis//dick is coming in", seriously don't use the term "stick".

This post has been edited by chung2795: Nov 21 2015, 15:41

1. 祝他們永浴愛河！白頭偕老!
(Wish/may) their love lasts forever, till old and grey!

I think I would use "May their love lasts forever, till death do they part!"

2. 桐人這個人蔘贏家！！！！太可惡了！（喂
Kirito, this lewd bastard ! ! ! It’s too much!

This 人生贏家 is basically winner in life, a person who gets everything he desires in life. You can use this as a reference for alternate translation.

3. 給我很多意見、指導和幫忙、給我寄攤
giving me a lot of suggestions, guidances as well giving me a vendor’s stand
(寄攤=vendor for selling comics)

Yeah this is accurate

4. 棒棒 haha you made all the rookie CN>ENG mistake. 棒棒 is not stick it's Chinese slang for penis//dick. So use like "Onii-chan's penis//dick is coming in", seriously don't use the term "stick".

Thanks. Corrected. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
1) k
2) Lol, I googled the author's typo. Thought it has to do with 人蔘=ginseng. I also found 人蔘淫家, which made no sense
3) k
4) I'm often not sure about the level of vulgarity. 雞雞, 老二，生殖器, 陰莖, etc. and the corresponding ones in English (cock-most vulgar, dick, penis-least vulgar, and peepee if it's a shotacon, etc.).
5) I translated 哥哥 to brother since the original was in Chinese. If it was in Japanese, I would change it to onee-chan and add all the honorifics.

gallery (2nd one is newer):
https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/875097/8f987f9d82/

Translation by Simpleton8:
Page number on the newer version is 2+(page number I have here)

Terms I’m not sure about (ctrl/cmd-F to find where they are):
白頭偕老
人蔘贏家
寄攤
棒棒

Page 1:
妹妹的妄想紀錄
Record of my sister’s delusion

Page 2:
妹妹的妄想紀錄
Record of my sister’s delusion

此書為限制級，未滿十八歲之未成年人請勿購買，閱讀
This book is R-rated, please don’t buy or read it if you are under 18 or the age of majority in the jurisdiction in which you reside.

內容皆與現實人物、事物、團體無關
The following story is entirely fictional and does not depict any actual person or event.
(modified from L&O, original translation: "content has no relation with any real person, thing, and organization")

Page 3：
1）
桐人君。。。其實。。。
Kirito . . . actually I . . .

我喜歡你
I like you

2）
到最後
At the end,

藏了許多久的那句話，還是沒能講出來。。。
those words (that were concealed for a long time) were still left unsaid . . .

哥哥。。。我喜歡你
Brother . . . I like you

Page 4:
1)
結城 明白。
Yuki Asu(na)
(from sign)

真的很謝謝
I am really thankful for

大家今天的捧場
everyone’s support today

1)
請各位嘉賓拍手， 恭喜這對新人！
Honored guests, please clap your hands and congratulate this new couple (bride and groom)

祝他們永浴愛河！白頭偕老!
May their love lasts forever, till death do they part!

今天是那立亞絲娜，明白奈的結婚日
Today is Asuna Yuki’s wedding day

對象是明白奈父親為乾兒子的須鄉
The groom is Asuna’s father’s adopted son Sugo (Nobuyuki) . . .
[swordartonline.wikia.com] [swordartonline.wikia.com] http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Sugou_Nobuyuki

2）
啪啪啪
*claps*
(actual sound: papapa)

恭喜兩位！
Congratulation, you two!

啪啪啪
*claps*
(actual sound: papapa)

3）
哥哥因為這件事的打擊，整天一個人待在房間足不出戶。。。
Brother was devastated by this marriage, so he hasn’t left his room all day.

哥哥。。。那個人就是你的一切嗎？
Brother . . . Do you really love that person that much?
(original: brother, is that person your everything)

Page 5：
1）
直葉…抱歉
Suguha . . . Sorry

讓我一個人靜一下
Let me be by myself for awhile

2）
真拿哥哥沒辦法。。。。
Don’t know what to do with him . . .

3）
真是的。。。又連晚餐都不吃了
Jeez . . . even skipping dinner

4）
今天還是拿上給哥哥吧。。。。
Let’s bring this up to brother again

5）
哥哥 晚餐煮好很久囉
Brother, dinner has been ready for a long time

Page 6:
1)
哥哥。。。有聽到嗎？
Brother, can you hear me?

3）
就算再難過
No matter how sad you’re,

飯還是要吃喔
you still need to eat

4）
你的晚餐幫你放在門口囉
I’ll leave your dinner at the door

我不打擾你了。。。
I'll stop bothering you

5）
喀鏘
*clink*
(actual sound: kaqiang)

6）
哥哥。。
Brother

7）
哥哥。。恢復笑容看著我好不好？
Brother . . . I want to see your smile again
(original: brother . . . Can you recover your smile and look at me)

在你的心中。。。我真的就這麼不重要嗎？
In your heart, . . . am I really not that important / or that unimportant/insignificant?

Page 7:
1）
喀咑
*clink*
(actual sound: kaqiang)

欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

2）
直葉。。
Suguha . .

3）
抱歉讓你擔心了。。。
Sorry I let you worry . . .

4）
謝謝你這麼關心我
Thank you for caring about me so much.

5）
直葉。。。
Suguha . .

對不起
Sorry

Page 8:
1)
都怪我沒用 亞絲娜才會。。。
It’s all because I was useless, that Asuna would . . .

哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

這也不是你願意的啊
This is not what you wished

2）
她一定很痛苦。。。
She must be very painful

全部都是因為我的無能
All because of my incompetence

3）
哥哥。。。別難過了。。。
Brother . . . don’t be sad anymore. . .

對不起。。 又讓妳看到我這樣子。。
Sorry . . . to let you see me like this again . .

4）
哥哥
Brother

5）
打起精神吧
Cheer up

我會一直陪你身邊的
I will always be with you

6）
直葉。。謝謝你
Suguha . . Thank you

7）
欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

哥哥。。。！
Brother . . .!

8）
直葉。。。我。。
Suguha . . . I . .

我也喜歡你。。。。
I also like you . . .

Page 9:
1)
哥哥。。。這樣下去。。。不可以的。。。。
Brother . . . You can't. . .continue like this . . .

唔。。。
Uahhh . .

2)
哈啊。。直葉。。。
Hah . . Suguha . .

3）
但是我的。。。身體。。。好奇怪
But my . . . body . . . is feeling weird

4）
哥哥等一下。。。。
Brother, wait . . .

那個。。。
This . . .

5）
直葉的胸部過了兩年
after two years, Suguha’s chest

果然。。。
as expected . . .

發育的很好呢
has developed nicely

6）
啊。。。！
Ahh . . . !

7）
直葉的胸部好軟。。。
Suguha’s chest is so soft

啊。。。好棒
Ah . . . So good/awesome . . .

Page 10:
1)
啊《3好舒服《3
Ahh <3 So good <3

哈啊
Hahah

2）
呼啊啊啊
Huahhh

嗯啊《3
Enn ahh <3

嗯。。。《3直葉的巨乳好棒《3
Ennn . . .<3 Suguha’s large breasts are so lovely (good/sexy/beautiful)

呼哈。。。《3《3
Huha . . . <3 <3

不 不行。。。。《3
N-No . . . <3

嗯啊《3哥哥。。。這樣我《3
En Ahh <3 Brother . . . This way I <3

3）
哈啊。。。。
Haahh . . .

輕。。。輕一點《3
Gen . . . a little more gentle <3

4）
啊！！！那。。那裡
Ah ! ! ! That - that place

不 不可以啊
N-no you can't

5）
啊、啊————！
Ahh Ahh - - - -!

那裡啊。。。。
That place . . .

嗯啊啊－－－－－《3
Enahh - - - - - <3

呀啊－《3
Yaahh - <3

啊啊啊－－－－！
Ahhhhh ——— !

6）
哈啊。。。人家的那裡
Hah . . . That place is . . .

好、好好舒服
It feels s-s-so good

唔啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
Uahahhhhhhhhhh

嗯啊。。
En ahh . .

哥哥《3
Brother <3

Page 11：
1）
咕啾
Guh Chuu

啊！好痛。。。！
Ahh! That hurts . . .!

2）
啊 進。。進去了《3
Ahh It . . .It’s inside <3

嗯啊啊《3
Enn Ahhh <3

不、不要啊《3
Don-don’t <3

3）
兩隻指頭全部都進去囉 直葉的小穴吸得好緊啊《3《3
Two fingers are completely inside, Suguha’s pussy is sucking them tight <3 <3

嗯啊啊啊
En Ahhhh

這 這樣我。。。！
This This way I . . .!

哈啊－－－－！
Hahh — — !

插入
*put in*

4）
嗯啊。。。！
Enn Ahhh . . .!

抽出
*pull out*

5）
嗯啊－－－－－！
Enn Ahhh - - - -!

嗚。。。嗚啊啊。。！
Uhh Uhm Ahhh . .!

6）
直葉。。還可以嗎？
Suguha . . . is it okay?

要繼續下去嗎？
to continue?

7）
哈啊。。哈啊。。
Hah . . Hah . .

哥哥。。。。我。。沒問題的喔
Brother . . . I . . am alright/ok
(original: I have no problem)

Page 12:
1)
嗯。。。《3
Enn . . .<3

哈—啊————
Hah - ah - - -

囌－－－－－－
Suu - - - - -

咕啾－－－《3
Guh Chuu

2）
嗯－－－《3
Ennn - - -<3

哈啊
Hah

囌嚕－－－－
Suupuu - - -

3）
嗯－－－哈啊《3
Enn - - -Hah <3

哈啊－－－－－－－－
Hah - - - - - -

4）
咕喔－－－喔。。。
Guohh - - ohhh . . .

嗯～～《3
En ~~~ <3

嗯～嗯～～咕嗯～
En ~Enn ~ Guennh ~

5）
直葉來用胸部夾夾看
Suguha, try squeezing it with your chest

欸。。。
*sign*
(actual sound: ai)

6）
這麼柔軟的的胸部用起來 果然不一樣
As expected, it feels a lot differently with chest this soft

嗯啊－《3
Enn Ahh <3

既柔軟又充滿彈性啊《3
Not only soft but also elastic <3

Page 13:
1）
啊。。。！出來了！
Ahh . . . ! It’s coming out!

咕啾《3咕啾《3
Guh Chuu<3 Guh Chuu<3

啊《3嗯啊《3
Ahh <3 Ennahh <3

好多。。。好厲害。。。《3
So much . . . so fierce/awesome <3

2）
哈啊。。。哈啊。。。
Hah . . . Hah . . .

這就是哥哥的。。。
This is brother’s

好 好喜歡
R-Really like it

抖
*shudder*/*tremble*/*shake*

哈啊。。。《3
Hah . . . <3

3）
直葉的胸部實在《3《3
Suguha’s chest is really <3 <3

。。。太舒服了
so good/comfortable

我。。。我好幸福啊《3 還想要更多。。。更多
I’m . . .I’m so happy <3 I want more . . . more

4）
顫抖
*shudder*/*tremble*/*shake*

5）
哥。。唔！
Bro - -wuu!

嗯 嗯啊。。。
Enn Ennahh . . .

嗯。。。嗯。。。！
En . .. En . . .!

Page 14:
1)
呼哈。。。《3
Huha . . .<3

2）
咕啾
Guh Chuu

啾
Chuu

嗯、嗯啊。。。！
En , Ennahh . . .!

哈啊
Hah

啊。。。！
Ahh . . .!

呼哈。。。
Huahh . . .

直葉的小穴已經濕透了喔～
Suguha’s pussy is dripping wet ~

嗯。。《3
En . . . <3

3）
直葉。。。棒棒要插進去喔《3
Suguha . . . my dick is going in <3
(stick can also be dick/cock/etc.)

4）
嗯啊啊啊啊－－－－－！！！
En Ahhhh ! ! !

進來了！好《3好大。。。《3
It’s going in! So <3 So big <3

5）
呀啊啊－！
Yahhh - !

哥哥的棒棒。。。
Brother’s dick . . .

哈啊。。。！直葉。。的體內好緊好舒服啊！
Hahh . . .! Suguha’s inside is so tight, so good!

唔哈好緊。。。！
Uahhh, so tight . . .!

好舒服《3
So good <3

要。。要溶化了
It’s . . . it’s melting
Page 15:
1）
全部進來了《3
It’s all coming in <3

啊—————
Ahhh - - - -

噗滋！
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

噗滋！
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

等。。。等一下
W-Wait

嗯啊！好、好深！
En Ahh. S-So deep!

啊－－－－－《3
Ahh - - - - <3

不行－－－－《3
No - - - - -<3

呼啊－！
Huahh -!

哈啊啊啊－－－－《3
Hahhhhh - - - - <3

快不行了－－－－－《3
I can’t anymore - - - - - <3

2）
噗滋！噗滋！
*spurt* *spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

啊
Ahhhh

3）
哈啊。。。哥哥。。。
Hahah . . . Brother . . .

我。。。不行了。。。《3
I . . . I can’t . . . <3

嗯！
Ennn!

大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。
My brain.... is going to melt...

4）
咿－－－－－－
Yii - - - - -

咿啊啊啊！
Yiahhhh

這樣、這樣。。。 會壞掉的啊啊啊啊《3《3
My pussy is going to break like this Ahhh <3 <3
(original: this way, this way . . . will break ahhh)

Page 16:
1）
哈啊。。哈啊。。。。！
Hah . . Hah . . .!

嗯嗚。。。
Ennugh

哈呼。。。。
Huah

嗯。。哥哥的那裡好溫暖
En . . brother’s thing feels so warm
(original: brother’s that place feels so warm)

2）
嗯－啊－－－－－！！！
Ennn - Ahhh - - - -! ! !

又要。。。《3《3
Again . . . <3 <3

3）
咿－－－－
Yii - - - - -

咿啊啊啊啊啊啊！
Yiahhhhhh !

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊《3
Hahhhhhhhh <3

這樣好。。。好舒服啊
It feels so . . . so good

4）
嗯嗯。。。啊啊啊啊啊
Ennn . . . Ahhhhhhh

要要要要要要要要去了《3
It’s going in A-a-a-a-again <3

呼啊啊啊
Huahhhh

不。。。《3
No . . .<3

不行了。。。。《3
I can’t . . . <3

5）
直葉我也。。。唔喔！
Suguha, I’m also . . .Wuohh!

咕啾《3
Guh Chuu<3

又要一次了。。。！
Another time . . . ?

Page 17:
1)
咕啾
Guh Chuu<3

哈啊。。。。。！
Hahhhh . . . . !

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊！！
Hahhhhhhh ! !

好多。。。。！
So much

唔嗯
Uahhuennnn

嗯啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
En Ahhhhhhhh

握緊
*clench*

哈啊《3
Hahhhh <3

2）
呼。。。哈。。好溫暖
Hu . . . Ha . . .So warm <3

哥哥的精液。。喜歡《3
Brother’s semen . . Like <3

3）
哈啊。。
Hah . .

直葉。。。我。。。也好舒服。。。
Suguha . . . I . . . also feel so good . . .

4）
哥哥。。《3
Brother . . . <3

我。。。《3
I . . .<3

5）
請。。請讓我。。
Please . . . please make me

更加的舒服吧。。。《3
feel even better . . . <3

6）
直葉－－－－－－
Suguha - - -

Page 18:
1）
直葉我會讓你更舒服的！
Suguha, I will make you feel better

2）
嗯啊啊啊啊！
En Ahhhh !

小穴好。。好舒服啊。。！
Pussy feels so . . . so good!

咿嗯－－－－！
Yiii Ennnn - - - - -!

唔嗯《3《3
Uahh en <3 <3

啊。。。裡面被填得好滿《3
Ahhhh . . . my inside is filled completely <3

3）
哈啊。。。。！
Huahh . . .!

抽插
*put in and pull out*

噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

4）
哥。。。哥哥－－－－－！
Broth . . . Brother - - - - -!

哈啊啊啊啊啊啊！！
Hahhhhhh ! !

嗯呀啊啊啊啊啊《3
Enn Yahhhhh <3

好舒服《3
So good <3

5）
我。。。已經－－－－！
I’m . . . already - - - -!

哈啊。。。。！小穴不斷的收缩
Haah . . .! Pussy keeps on contracting.

喘氣
*pant*

Page 19:
1）
哥。。哥哥。。我。。
Broth . . Brother, I . .

抖
*shake*

2）
我真的。。好幸福啊。。。《3
I’m really . . . really happy <3

喜。。。歡。。。哥哥。。。《3
Li . . . ke . . . Brother . . .<3

3)
唔。。。唔啊！？哈啊啊啊啊！
Uahh . . . Uaahhh ! ? Hahhhhhh!

哈啊啊－－－－！
Hahhhhhhh - - - !

噗滋
*spurt* *spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

這 這樣下去我
If If we continue like this, I,

好好好舒服
sooo sooo good

4)
直葉。。。！《3《3
Suguha, . . .! <3 <3

我。。。我也喜歡你《3
I . . . I also like you <3

啊《3
Ahhh <3

哥。。哥哥！
Broth . . Brother

我也是《3
me too <3

5）
又。。。又要射了！
I’m . . . I’m going to cum again!

咕啾
Guh Chuu

6）
哈啊！
Hahhh

全部。。。全部。。。都。。。
Shoot . . . Shoot . . .all
(original: all . . . all . . . all, switched with below translation)

都射在裡面吧《3《3
all of it inside <3 <3
(original: all shoot it inside, switched with above translation)

Page 20:
1）
噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

噗滋
*spurt*
(actual sound: pfftch)

膨脹
＊expand＊

2)
啊啊啊－－－《3
ahhhhhhh - - - <3

嗯啊啊啊《3
Enn Ahhhh <3

啊啊《3
Ahhhhh <3

咕啾
Guh Chuu

咕啾
Guh Chuu

抽動
＊twitch＊

3)
哥哥的。。。全部都。。。《3
Brother’s . . . all of . . .<3

呼哈
Huha

哈啊。。。哈啊。。。《3
Hahh .. . Hahh . . .<3

4）
哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

呼哈。。。
Huha . . .

咿嗯。。。
Yi Enn . . .

5）
呼啊 。。。。呼啊
Huahhh . . . Huahh

哈啊。。。哈啊。。。。
Hahh . . . Hahh . . ..

我。。。好。。。好幸福《3
I’m . . .so . . . so happy <3

Page 21:
1)
哥哥。。。
Brother . . .

我愛你
I love you

我也是。。。直葉
Me too . . . Suguha

2）
嗯。。哥哥。。。
Enn . . .Brother . . .

嗯。。。
Enn . . .

3）
滴答
＊drip＊

滴答
＊drip＊

滴答
＊drip＊

4)
哥。。。。
Brother

Page 22:
1)
哥
Brother

對不起。。。我
Sorry . . .I

2）
我。。。
I . . .

哥。。。哥。。。
Brother . . . Brother . . .

3)
哥哥。。。我
Brother . . .I

真的。。。真的。。。好。。。喜歡你
Truly . . . really . . . love you so much

Page 23 (this is a little incoherent):
最後獻上封面的泳裝版！！！
Lastly, I offer you a page of Suguha in swimsuit ! ! !

( 沒人會沒事在房間穿泳衣啦＃）
(No one would put on swimsuit in the room for no reason #)

大家好 這裏是炒肉師。。。（？）的廢話後記了
Hi everyone, this is Chaoroushi’s nonsense afterward

這一本書從規劃及作畫都花了很長時間，
This book took a long time to plan and draw,
從期未忙到期未、寒假
from the mid-semester till the end of semester and winter vacation.
因為是第一次出R18本，
Because this is my first R18 book,
花了很多時間做功課、找資料（？）
I spent a lot of time doing research, finding information.
有很多地方很不熟悉，還請大家多多指教批評／／／
There’s a lot of parts I’m not familiar with, so everyone, please give constructive criticisms.
還是希望大家會喜歡這本滿滿的肉的肉本
I hope everyone likes this satisfying book that is full of juicy material.

其實SAO當初新番一出並沒有馬上追
Actually, I was not hooked when SAO first came out.
直到後面直葉出現。。。！－一秒就打中我了XDD
The moment Suguha appeared, I was hooked.
(original: until Suguha appears ! —
接著不知不覺就掉了妹妹坑W
Then unwittingly I became a sis-con. W

直葉妹妹真的好可愛啊／／／／
Suguha-chan is so adorable/cute / / /
後面劇情真的一集比一集還痛
Toward the end, each episode of the story line felt more painful than the previous.
真的是看一次哭一次QAQ
I cried every time I watched QAQ
桐人這個人蔘贏家！！！！太可惡了！（喂
Kirito, this winner in life ! ! ! It’s too much!
(typo: 人蔘贏家=人生贏家 means winner in life, a person who gets everything he desires in life).
雖然妹妹到最後不是官配XD
Although the sister was not the main female character,
但是在我心中妹妹No1
in my heart, the sister is No1
再來西莉卡!!^O^/
Then came Silica !! ^O^
贫乳妹妹也好可愛WWW
flat-chested sister was also cute WWW
亞絲娜也看到後面越看越喜歡W
I also liked Asuna more and more at the end.

但是還是直葉妹妹最可愛啊QDQ！！！
But Suguha is the cutest QDQ!!
(完全私心)
(completely my selfish view)

最後最後、
Lastly, lastly
謝謝身邊的朋友們支持我畫這本糟糕本
I want to thank the friends around me for supporting this terrible book
(note: Chinese/Asian tradition to exaggerate one’s fault,).
給我很多意見、指導和幫忙、給我寄攤
giving me a lot of suggestions, guidances as well giving me a vendor’s stand
(寄攤=vendor for selling comics)

最後謝謝拿著本書的你
Finally, thank you, the person who is holding this book.

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 21 2015, 15:57

https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/ has already been translated https://e-hentai.org/g/858200/3beb4cdf79/

Ah, I missed that one.

Sounds good. I'll start after my class ends.
Can you also make a translation bounty for me? It has to be unranked as I'm still waiting to claim my 5th bounty

I can try (try because I'm not sure if I'll run into some insurmountable obstacles) the editing bounty, but it'll probably take a long time as I'm still pretty new to photoshop.

I'll put up a bounty for you, sure thing (done: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13430). Regarding TL vs editing, I used to say TL are more rare, but we do have an editing backlog, so focus on whatever seems more fun at the time (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Either way, nice job - I hope we can work together some more!

Editing bounty for the Suguha SAO https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13431

Raws available for translation:
Fate hollow: https://e-hentai.org/g/871527/b2d16c4dc9/
Suisei no Gargantia: https://e-hentai.org/g/875095/837f24d824/
Heart warming Kantai Collection: https://e-hentai.org/g/875497/c6277975c0/