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Yoo the editing bounty link is wrong bro
Correct editing bounty link: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12987

This post has been edited by chung2795: Aug 25 2015, 11:49

Proofread for Slave's Carnival:

Page 06

Although Melty’s breasts are small, but they’re very sensitive!

C: Although Melty's breasts are small, they're very sensitive!
or Melty's breasts are small but they're very sensitive!

Page 07

I’m going to urinate…

S: I'm going to pee

Audience, please watch closely!

S: Everyone, please watch closely!
or Gentlemen, please watch closely!

Page 15

the idols of Gargantia are licking off us!

C: the idols of Gargantia are licking us off!

Page 18

These tender holes won’t get loose no matter how many times you came in them

C: These tender holes won't get loose no matter how many times you cum/come in them

Something to note, I noticed that you're still using "Hei" in your translations. I've mentioned it before so I'll remind you again, it's better to use "Hey" instead, it's more commonly used and is considered the correct way of spelling it. "Hei" can be mistaken for a name.

Something to note, I noticed that you're still using "Hei" in your translations. I've mentioned it before so I'll remind you again, it's better to use "Hey" instead, it's more commonly used and is considered the correct way of spelling it. "Hei" can be mistaken for a name.

Oh yeah my bad, kinda in a trance when translating this just now

After being inactive for more than 3 mounts, I guess it's time to contribute a new script (lol) This is quite a weird one cause there's a Japanese and Chinese raw, and there are some slight differences in translation, this script is leaning more onto the Japanese side.

Chinese raw (uncensored): https://e-hentai.org/g/616304/45dcaa3468/
Japanese raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/638761/3aaa2d7da2/
Reminder: Use Chinese raws because they're uncensored

Script proofread by CC

Page 01:
Title: Slave’s Carnival

Page 03:
Pnl 1:
Box: “Carnival” is one of Gargantia’s traditional festivals, women dress themselves up with splendid attires and express their own charm, in hopes of getting a suitable partner.
Pnl 2:
Man: That was a superb performance! Let’s have a toast if you don’t mind?
Amy: But, what about Ledo…
Melty: Let’s go let’s go, it looks like we’ve gotten ourselves some good men.
Pnl 3:
Man: Your friend? No problem! My friend will invite him later.
Pnl 4:
A: Huh? This is…

Page 04:
Pnl 1:
A: Nh
A: …Mi…!
Pnl 2:
A: Uhm…?
Pnl 3:
Saaya: Amy! Wake up!
M: We were tricked! And… our clothes!
Pnl 4:
A: I can’t move…
A: Noo, even here…
Pnl 5:
A: Ehh!
A: This, This is?
Pnl 6:
Man: Sorry for the wait! Welcome to this time’s Secret Carnival! Today’s slaves are all cream of the crop!
Pnl 7:
Man: Allow me to introduce the three flowers of Gargantia---
Page 05:
Pnl 1: Next let us showcase the quality of our merchandises, first of all is Amy!
Pnl 2:
A: No…
A: Stop…
Pnl 3:
Man: Everyone look clearly at her pink pussy!
A: Hah Nnh
A: Noo
A: Hah Ahh
Pnl 4: Hah Ahh
Pnl 5:
Man: I’ve always wanted to squeeze Saaya’s big and soft tits, quite a pair of lewd breasts you have here!
S: Nooooo
Man: Hmm? You’re getting hard…
Pnl 6:
S: Hah Hah
S: Hah
Man: You’re feeling it already? Saaya is naughty after all.
Pnl 7:
S: No…
S: That’s not true… <3

Page 06:
Pnl 1:
Man: Amy looks like she’s enjoying it too! It’s quite wet over here…
Pnl 3: Next is… “Tasting time”
Pnl 4:
Man: Let everyone have a good taste
Man: It’s Saaya’s boobs!
S: Kyaa!/Yiiks! (Under that is Ahh, dunno why the author drew it this way)
S: Hah Ahh Uhn
Man: So good! What a lewd scent
Pnl 5:
M: Ahhh
M: Ahhh
Man: Although Melty's breasts are small, they're very sensitive!
M: No, stop
Pnl 6: Your pussy is hot and drenched, and your love juice keeps flowing out!
Pnl 7:
M: Umnh
M: Unh Nnh

Page 07:
Pnl 1: Ahh… don’t, don’t use your tongue…
Pnl 2:
Man: Amy’s pussy looks delighted
Man: She’s shaking incessantly
Pnl 3: Her clit is twitching!
Pnl 4: My fingers feel like they’re being sucked in…
Pnl 5:
Man: It’s my turn now! I want to touch them too!
S: Ahhhh
S: Ahh Ahh
Pnl 6:
Man: Ohh Ohh Ohh This feels great! Her pussy is so wet and slippery!
A: I, I’m going to pee…
A: Hah Ahh
A: Noooooo
Pnl 7: Uhm? Then I’ll let you pee as much as you want! Gentlemen, please watch closely!

Page 08:
Pnl 1:
A: Stoppp / Nooooo
A: Hahh Ahhh Ahh Ahh Ahh
Pnl 2:
A: Hah x2
Man: Amy spurted a lot, did she endure from the very beginning until now?
Pnl 3:
Man: Being tied up feels uncomfortable right? Let’s take that off now! Your wet clothes too…
A: Uhm? What?
Pnl 4:
Man: Next is our turn to spurt out a lot of different things!
Black: “Opening display” begins

Page 09:
Pnl 1: Ohh Ohh… It’s very tight!
Pnl 2:
A: Ahhh
A: Hah Ahh
Pnl 3:
Man: It’s in! I’m inside the idol of Gargantia
Man: I’m inside Amy’s pussy!
Pnl 4:
A: Ahh Ahh
A: Stop
A: Please stoppp
A: No, don’t! Please take it out.
Pnl 5: Look at Saaya, she looks so happy that she can’t even talk now.
Pnl 6:
Man: How is it Melty?
Man: Looking at how your pussy is swallowing up cocks
M: Uhm
M: Uhn Nnh

Page 10:
Pnl 1:
Man: Hey! Put your waist to good use. What happened to the dancing steps that you’ve trained for the performance?
A: Le, Ledo…
Pnl 2: How dare you call out another man’s name! I’ll have to punish you for this.
Pnl 3:
A: Hah Ahhh
A: Ahh
A: Hah Ahh
Pnl 4:
A: Will… come and save us
A: Ahh
A: Hahh Ahhh
Pnl 5: You’re not being honest with yourself, you’re already so wet here! Even your nipples are hard now.
Pnl 6: Hah Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh

Page 11:
Pnl 1:
Man: Uohh Ohhh! Saaya is dancing hard now!
S: Ahh x2
Pnl 2: If that’s the case, then let’s reward your clit for that!
Pnl 4:
Man: No one is going to save you now
A: Hah Ahh
A: Ahh
Pnl 5:
Man: We’ll just have to inform the old geezer that this is for the freedom of copulating, and they should accept it as well! (This is a very questionable translation since I don’t know much of the series, please do correct me if I’m wrong)
Background: Ohh Ohh… they look like they’re enjoying themselves
A: How, how can this…

Page 12:
Pnl 1:
Man: That’s why… you all shouldn’t hold back from disgracing yourselves and climax to your hearts’ content!
Man: There’s still a lot of people waiting in line
Pnl 2:
Moan: hah ahh
M: Too, too fast! There’s something hot coming inside my pussy…
Pnl 3: No more, stop, please take it out
Pnl 4:
Man: Gentlemen, witness!
S: Hah ahh
S: Nooooo
Man: We’re live streaming the climaxes of the three flowers of Gargantia!

Page 13:
Pnl 1:
A: Hnngh
A: Hhnngghh
A: Hah ahh ahh Hah Ahh Ahh
A: Noooo Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh Ahh!
Pnl 2: Uhh Ohh this feels too great, I can’t stop cumming!
Pnl 3: She took it all in, she’s really a perverted sow.

Page 14:
Pnl 1 : Next is time for freestyle. You may pick your favorite partner.
Pnl 2:
A: Wha, What?
Man: If you all give proper services to all these cocks.
Man: We’ll let you go!
Pnl 3:
Man: Then I’ll leave my cock to your care!
Background: Uhh Uhh… What a heavy smell
Man: Uhh Ohh! Ami’s small mouth is super warm
Pnl 4:
Man: Really!?
A: Wait, Wait…
Pnl 5: Me, me too!

Page 15:
Pnl 1: Ohh Ohh Ohh the idols of Gargantia are licking us off!
Pnl 2:
A: Umh Umh Nnh Unh
Man: They’re sucking it vigorously!
Pnl 3:
S: Nnh
Man: I, I can’t bear this any longer!
Pnl 5:
Man: Use your mouth properly!
A: Nnh Hah Ohh
A (mono): Uhh… Uguu
Man: Here too, lick all of them until they’re all clean.
Man: Don’t waste them! Swallow them all!

Page 16:
Pnl 1: Heh heh, these sows. Licking so eagerly…
Pnl 2:
A: Wait, what? Didn’t you say that you’ll let us go!
Man: What are you saying? No one is having their fill yet.
Pnl 3: and… we haven’t used these holes behind yet.
Pnl 5:
A: Nooooooooo!
A: Stop
Man: This time we’ll do both sides at the same time!
A: Hahh Ahh Ahh Ahh
A: Not, not at the same time… You’re… you’re breaking me apart!!

Page 17:
Pnl 1: Your ass and boobs are so big and soft, they’re very nice to squeeze!
Pnl 2:
Man: Saaya’s back is very tight too
S: Stoooooop
Man: Yes yes~
Man: Then I’ll handle opening up the front end!
Pnl 3: You’re so happy that you’re unable to speak now right? Amy?
Pnl 4: Her pussy keeps flowing out love juice that I just want to keep thrusting.
Pnl 5: The small mouth here is soft too!

Page 18:
Pnl 1:
Man: Melty’s tongue techniques are very well-trained.
Man: Did you train it to fish other guys? Ahh?
M: Hah
M: Hah Ahh
M: Uhm Uhn
Man: Ahh Ahh I can’t take this anymore, I’m cumming again!
Pnl 3:
Man: These tender holes won't get loose no matter how many times you cum in them
Man: My turn my turn! I wanna cum too!
Pnl 4: Ohh Ohh Ohh Amy’s uterus
It’s being filled by us!
Pnl 5:
A: Stooopppp
A: Hah ahhh
A: Ahh <3 Unh <3
Man: uhm? You’re climaxing again

Page 18:
Pnl 1:
Man: How dare you come before we do, you’ll need more punishment!
A: cum <3 cum <3
Man: Let’s defile your small mouth
A: Nnh
A: Uhm Hah ahh
Pnl 2:
Man: Hey! Don’t spill it out! Swallow them all!
M: Uhm x2
M Uhm x3
Pnl 3: Ohh Ohh Ohh!! The fifth person to come inside!
Pnl 4:
S: Cum… ming
S: Hah Ahhh
S: I’m… I’m already…

Page 19:
M: Hah ahh ahh ahh ahh ahh ahh
M: Ahh
M: Ahhhhh
S: Ahh Ahh
S: Hah Ahh
S: Nooooooo

Page 20:
Pnl 1:
A: Nnh
A: Uhm Ahh Hah
A: Ahhh Ahhh Uhmm Unhh Ahh Ahh
Pnl 2:
Man: Uohh Ohh! It’s spurting out it’s spurting out~
Man: How much did we come inside
Pnl 3:
A: Le… Ledo
A: Uhmm

Page 21:
Pnl 1:
Man: What a catch! We should be able to get high prices from selling these!
Man: You’re right… Ahh!
Pnl 2: Groups rally performing non-humane activities detected, extermination complete
Pnl 3:
S: Ahh~ It’s Ledo!
A: Ledo is going to come and play with us as well?
A: We can give lots of services to you now
A: Ahh
M: I’ll let you come inside me too!

Page 22:
Free talk:
Hello, I’m Chiyami.
This time I’ve taken on the challenge of publishing two books, Gargantia and Hataraku Maō-sama.
Now that I think about it, why did I do that (?)
(I’m still currently in the battlefield as I wrote this OTZ…)

This time I tried to debut three of the female protagonists,
although Amy still takes the lead in the end, but…
mastering the charms of three different characters in a short time… is really hard (lol)

That’s right
I drew a Mech this time! (Although there’s only one panel)

As usual, I hope I’ll have improvements with every book I draw.

Thank you for reading and buying this book,
and also to my friends that have helped me in the process of making this book m(_ _)m

Well then, see you next time!

Chiyami
2013/7

This post has been edited by chung2795: Aug 25 2015, 13:48

Btw Red do you have anymore Chinese doujins you want me to translate for EHCOVE?? Or do I start translating the ones that I scanned??

It's been awhile since I made a script for EHCOVE, so....
Hopefully we can get more CN>ENG translators here, I'm so lonely here lol

-Editor, please refer to the proofread version script over here (https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&showtopic=169938&view=findpost&p=4256904) Thank you-


Script for Bride’s Practice
My raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/868239/dbc027c25d/
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Page 04:
A: Ah!
A: Kiri… Kirito
K: This really suits you, Asuna!
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Page 05:
PL Right:
A: Don’t…
A: Don’t look here…
PL 2:
A: Kiri…
A: Unh Nnh
PL 3:
A: Jeez…
A: Kirito you sly fox!
PL 4:
A: From now on…
A: I’m Kirito’s woman
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Page 06:
PL 1:
A: Kirito…
PL 2:
K: Asuna you’re getting better at this
PL 3:
A: I have been practicing everyday for Kirito
K: Being able to marry Asuna is the happiest thing in my life
PL 4:
A: Hey
A: Don’t forget about me when you've returned to the real world.
K: Uhm
K: I promise
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Page 07:
PL 1:
The Real World
A: It’s freezing…
A: Kirito is late
A: Ahh Ahh Ahh
Big Text: Kyaaaaaaa
PL 2:
K: Sorry for the wait, Asuna
A: You… You scared me there! Jeez…
PL 3:
K: Don’t tell me you’re feeling it…
PL 4:
K: Even with such thick clothings?
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Page 08:
PL 1:
A: Dum… dummy
A: I’m only feeling it because it’s Kirito
PL 2:
K: I love you
PL 3:
A: Don’t do it here
K: It’s been a while since we've done it…
K: It’s fine, no one passes here anyway…
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Page 09:
PL 1:
K: I can’t hold back anymore
PL 2:
Ahh~
PL 3:
A: Kirito’s…
A: Hot penis is twitching inside…
A Moans: Hah Ahh x2
PL 4:
Moan: Uhm Uhm
Hyaa Ahh Ahh

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Page 10:
PL 1:
Hah Ah
Ha---
Hah Ahh
PL 2:
Hah Ahh
PL 3:
A: Uhh Uhm Nnh
PL 4:
K: Does it feel good like this?
A: Hah Ahh…
A: Ahh Ahh Ahh
A: Ye… Yes it does (the original text is like Gw…. Fwels Gwood)
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Page 11:
PL 2:
A: Hah Ahh
PL 4:
A: Cumming!!! Ahh Ahh Ahh!!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 12:
A: Ahh Ahhn
A: Kirito’s… semen is coming in!!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 13:
PL 1:
A: The real world feels better than the virtual one, right?
A: Jeez…
A: I love you, Kirito….
PL 2:
Bubble: But it’s really cold out here…
PL 3:
K: Achoo!
A: Good grief…
PL 4:
-The next day-
A: You got a cold!?
K(phone): Doing it at the park during the winter is really a bad idea after all…
-END-
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Page 14:
Hello~ Sousouman here.
This is my sixth SAO book, and the second season was announced when this book was being made.
I wanted to draw more pages, but due to time constraint only this much could be drawn.
Although it’s a short book, it’s filled with my love for SAO,
I hope everyone would like this.

Then, til the next book we meet.
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Page 16:
Hello~ I’m Hanahanamaki.
I’m responsible for paneling, most of the coloring,
dialogue, editing, printing etc
basically an assistant,
although it was a very busy work,
but since everyone seems to be liking this work,
that made everything worth it.

Truth to be told, now that this is our sixth SAO book,
and we’ve also gained a variety of readers within the course of time,
When I think about the fact that we have so much readers reading this book,
it made me feel so proud.
I hope one day,
If I could personally give our SAO doujins to the original author, Reki Kawahara sensei, that would be great.

Speaking of which, due to work last year,
I was fortunate enough to attend Dengeki Bunko’s year-end party, it felt like Weiya*.
There was a lot of famous authors there, including Reki Kawahara sensei.
The editor even managed to introduce us to him,
but I got too overjoyed that I forgot to give him the books,
even if I did I would be seen as a strange foreigner…

Then, til next time.
TL note*: [en.wikipedia.org] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Weiya
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This post has been edited by chung2795: Nov 21 2015, 05:04

Nice translation. I don't see any major mistakes and some of the minor ones are debatable. I also learned how to use the world 'jeez' lol.

Welcome to the thread (finally someone's here), here's my Taiwanese raws you can choose whichever you want to translate and Red Piotrus should provide the bounty for the behalf of EHCOVE.

Yeah the word jeez is really good for "真是的" since "really" or "for real" sounds very repetitive when used more than once, plus they sound unnatural too.

My raws:
https://e-hentai.org/g/823202/ddad3cf139/
https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/871527/b2d16c4dc9/

Of course, more raws to be scanned soon, I still have like 10 books from Red's commission unscanned yet (Red's menacingly stares from behind)

As a reminder, I am happy to offer a 50k credits + 50 hath bounty the following works, which I am assuming are Chinese RAWs, not TLs, in a rough order of interest from top to bottom:

https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/ (SOA)
https://e-hentai.org/g/869198/e826890a03/ (Dungeon...)
https://e-hentai.org/g/842307/548ed4b6ef/ (original, sister yuri incest)
https://e-hentai.org/g/841391/02b2fbd908/ (Kancolle)
https://e-hentai.org/g/823202/ddad3cf139/ (Suisei no Gargantia)
https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/ (...Madoka)
https://e-hentai.org/g/552595/54a404466d/ (Fate)
https://e-hentai.org/g/871527/b2d16c4dc9/ (Fate)
https://e-hentai.org/g/855105/b64d73d2e4/ (Fate)
https://e-hentai.org/g/644569/d3a7972704/ (Maoyuu Maou Yuusha)

and more or less anything else from chung's new scans (*keeps staring*)

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Nov 20 2015, 07:36

Red please remember to send the SAO Bride Practice's script for proofreading and the editing bounty for it too.

Thanks. 50k credits + 50 hath would be good.

The ones I'm interested in translating:

https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/


This one maybe later (after I watch the anime)
[g-hentai.org] http://g-hentai.org/g/869198/e826890a03/




g.e-hentai.org/g/644569/d3a7972704/ - this one has a bounty, but I'm not interested.

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 20 2015, 09:10

Thanks. 50k credits + 50 hath would be good.

The ones I'm interested in translating:

https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/
https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/
This one maybe later (after I watch the anime)
[g-hentai.org] http://g-hentai.org/g/869198/e826890a03/
g.e-hentai.org/g/644569/d3a7972704/ - this one has a bounty, but I'm not interested.

https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/ has already been translated https://e-hentai.org/g/858200/3beb4cdf79/

Changes from the original are marked in red, strikethrough indicates text that needs to be deleted.

It's been awhile since I made a script for EHCOVE, so....
Hopefully we can get more CN>ENG translators here, I'm so lonely here lol

Script for Bride’s Practice
My raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/868239/dbc027c25d/
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 04:
A: Ah!
A: Kiri… Kirito
K: This really suits you, Asuna!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 05:
PL Right:
A: Don’t…
A: Don’t look here…
PL 2:
A: Kiri…
A: Unh Nnh
PL 3:
A: Jeez…
A: Kirito, you sly fox!
PL 4:
A: From now on…
A: I’m Kirito’s woman
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Page 06:
PL 1:
A: Kirito…
PL 2:
K: Asuna, you’re getting better at this
PL 3:
A: I have been practicing everyday for Kirito
K: Being able to marry Asuna is the happiest moment in my life
PL 4:
A: Hey
A: Don’t forget about me when you return to the real world.
K: Uhm
K: I promise
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 07:
PL 1:
The Real World
A: It’s freezing…
A: Kirito is late
A: Ahh Ahh Ahh
Big Text: Kyaaaaaaa
PL 2:
K: Sorry for the wait, Asuna
A: You… You scared me there! Jeez…
PL 3:
K: Don’t tell me you’re feeling it…
PL 4:
K: Even with such thick clothings?
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 08:
PL 1:
A: Dum… dummy
A: I’m only feeling it because it’s Kirito
PL 2:
K: I love you
PL 3:
A: Don’t do it here
K: It’s been a while since we've done it…
K: It’s fine, no one passes by here anyway…
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Page 09:
PL 1:
K: I can’t hold back anymore
PL 2:
Ahh~
PL 3:
A: Kirito’s…
A: Hot penis is twitching inside…
A Moans: Hah Ahh x2
PL 4:
Moan: Uhm Uhm
Hyaa Ahh Ahh

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Page 10:
PL 1:
Hah Ah
Ha---
Hah Ahh
PL 2:
Hah Ahh
PL 3:
A: Uhh Uhm Nnh
PL 4:
K: Does it feel good like this?
A: Hah Ahh…
A: Ahh Ahh Ahh
A: Ye… Yes, it does (the original text is like Gw…. Fwels Gwood)
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Page 11:
PL 2:
A: Hah Ahh
PL 4:
A: Cumming!!! Ahh Ahh Ahh!!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 12:
A: Ahh Ahhn
A: Kirito’s… semen is coming in!!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 13:
PL 1:
A: The real world feels better than the virtual one, right?
A: Jeez…
A: I love you, Kirito….
PL 2:
Bubble: But it’s really cold out here…
PL 3:
K: Achoo!
A: Good grief…
PL 4:
-The next day-
A: You got a cold!?
K(phone): Doing it at the park during the winter is really a bad idea after all…
-END-
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 14:
Hello~ Sousouman here.
This is my sixth SAO book, and the second season was announced when this book was being made.
I wanted to draw more pages, but due to time constraint only this much could be drawn.
Although it’s a short book, it’s filled with my love for SAO,
I hope everyone likes this.

Then, til the next book we meet.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 16:
Hello~ I’m Hanahanamaki.
I’m responsible for paneling, most of the coloring,
dialogue, editing, printing etc.
basically an assistant,
although it was a very busy work,
but since everyone seems to be liking this work,
that made everything worth it.

Truth to be told, now that this is our sixth SAO book,
and we’ve also gained a variety of readers within the course of time,
When I think about the fact that we have so many readers reading this book,
it made me feel so proud.
I hope one day,
If I could personally give our SAO doujins to the original author, Reki Kawahara sensei, that would be great.

Speaking of which, due to work last year,
I was fortunate enough to attend Dengeki Bunko’s year-end party, it felt like Weiya*.
There were a lot of famous authors there, including Reki Kawahara sensei.
The editor even managed to introduce us to him,
but I got too overjoyed that I forgot to give him the books,
even if I did I would be seen as a strange foreigner…

Then, til next time.
TL note*: [en.wikipedia.org] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Weiya
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

https://e-hentai.org/g/858180/7b18c8e159/ has already been translated https://e-hentai.org/g/858200/3beb4cdf79/

Didn't look up each one. Is the other one https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/ still available?

Changes from the original are marked in red, strikethrough indicates text that needs to be deleted.

Good catch. Did you look at the raw or just edit from the translation?

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 20 2015, 15:02

Didn't look up each one. Is the other one https://e-hentai.org/g/824377/46067187a3/ still available?

Yeah that is still available, feel free to translate it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

editing bounty for the new chung's SAO dojin posted at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13412

Yeah that is still available, feel free to translate it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

Sounds good. I'll start after my class ends.

editing bounty for the new chung's SAO dojin posted at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13412

Can you also make a translation bounty for me? It has to be unranked as I'm still waiting to claim my 5th bounty (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/mellow.gif)

I can try (try because I'm not sure if I'll run into some insurmountable obstacles) the editing bounty, but it'll probably take a long time as I'm still pretty new to photoshop.

Sounds good. I'll start after my class ends.
Can you also make a translation bounty for me? It has to be unranked as I'm still waiting to claim my 5th bounty (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/mellow.gif)

I can try (try because I'm not sure if I'll run into some insurmountable obstacles) the editing bounty, but it'll probably take a long time as I'm still pretty new to photoshop.

You really don't have to bother with the editing to be honest (a.k.a leave the editing to the editors, although I'm in no position to lecture you), but if you're really insistent, then go for it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

This post has been edited by chung2795: Nov 20 2015, 17:25

I'm about half way though. How would you translate the following:

噗滋
puzi

唔哈
wuha

咕啾
gujiu

要溶化了
Melting/dissolving?
e.g.,
大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。

This post has been edited by Simpleton8: Nov 21 2015, 04:21

I'm about half way though. How would you translate the following:

噗滋
puzi

唔哈
wuha

咕啾
gujiu

要溶化了
Melting/dissolving?
e.g.,
大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。

It usually depends on the type of SFX, like I translate moans but not sound effects produced by body movements.

1. 噗滋 sounds like the sound of cum ejaculating, so maybe *spurt* or Pfftch. (I really recommend leaving it alone if it's not moaning)

2. 唔哈 I usually use Uahh

3. 咕啾 you can use Guh Chuu

4. 要溶化了 I'm melting....
大腦快要。。。快要溶化了。。。 My brain.... is going to melt... (Because it felt so good his/her brain feels like melting away)