[X] My Assistant

Hey guys so i have a done [Aru kami kado (shoka)] teitoku no LOVE hokyuu (Kancolle) here for you guys to look over.

[www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/?dcaf3mu2mwk5kff

long story short I have all of the memory of a child who forgets to give shit back when he's done. Anyways this was a big redraw project for me so if you guys could take a good look at it and tell me if anything looks out of place or if I missed something. And to the TL I think I found a solution to the category part that I think you'll like and looks good but your call.

Looks good to me. I think all we need is a credit's page. Oh, and can you resize 000.png and 001.png; the galleries don't allow uploads of files over 10mb or so, I usually try to keep any file I generate from scans at no more than 9.5mb to be safe.

Dang its always the credits page with me! okay here is the credits with the re-sized cover pages [www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/?iyw48s6zi34k71k

anything else?

I'm back motherfuckers
Although I probably won't be as active as I used to though, since shits are hitting the fan and my academic life is going down the drain, but I would probably become active again after summer break starts.

Script for VeryShy03
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/703981/a1183c259c/


EDIT: Script has been edited

This post has been edited by chung2795: May 18 2015, 02:19

Proofread for VeryShy03

Page 05:

I’ve never heard of Abyssal Torpedo Bomber this powerful!!

C: I've never heard of an Abyssal Torpedo Bomber this powerful.

Kirishima: Admiral!! The reinforcement fleet is ready.

A little check here, is it single "fleet" or plural "fleets" here because soon after this it's "reinforcement fleets moving out".

You can dispatch them to the field any time now!!

C: You can dispatch them to the field at any time now.

Page 06:

Everything will be alright if you all are still there…

C: Everything will be alright if all of you are still there.

Page 07:

I’ve already place the death flag dramatically

C: I've already placed the death flag dramatically.

What are the readers that are worried about me last page supposed to feel now?

C: What are the readers that worried about me last page supposed to feel now.

Do you really thank that

C: Do you really think that.

Page 12:

Wo-class told me something before she’s fainted

C: Wo-class told me something before she fainted.

Page 14:

Even if your breast are small

C: Even if your breasts are small.

Page 15:

Tonight I’ll take back everything plus with interest rate!!

S: Tonight, I'll take back everything with interest rate.

Page 16:

you all can appreciate your shipgirls more

C: All of you can appreciate your shipgirls more.

Proofread Script for VeryShy03
Translator: Herreis
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/703981/a1183c259c/

The script has been edited (again (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)) https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showt...p;#entry4099673

This post has been edited by chung2795: Jul 22 2015, 16:18

CrimsonClown can you help me proofread this one? Thanks (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/c6zbdq89...oofread_pls.rar

@chung: I do appreciate you postign a revised script, as I am sure do the editor(s)

I like to do my part as best as possible, even if I'm not the best for the part (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

No editing bounty for the Kancolle??

Hi there. Red_Piotrus asked me to help proofread if I had the time.

Let me know if there's any script in particular you want me to review. I can see here and on the other EHCOVE threads that a couple of other proofreaders are working on several scripts, and I don't want to step on any toes by taking on something that they're already reviewing.

Thanks!

For proofreading no one is actually in charge of any particular work unless if you're hired personally. Even if a script is already proofread, you can still do a little more proofreading for it and maybe pick up on things that others missed or add a few other suggestions. At least that's how it is for me, I'd be happier with a better script.

This post has been edited by CrimsonClown: May 20 2015, 03:36

Basically what CrimsonClown said

CrimsonClown can you help me proofread this one? Thanks (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/c6zbdq89...oofread_pls.rar

Bump.

Basically what CrimsonClown said

Yep.

VeryShy Kancolle script editing bounty posted: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12432 (always good to remind me, I may occasionally miss a script...)

Bump.

I received it through PM so that one is already proofread and even released.

I find it funny that there is about 1.3 billion Chinese in the world but Red couldn't find more Chinese to English translator lol

CrimsonClown can you help me proofread this one? Thanks (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/c6zbdq89...oofread_pls.rar

I'd help you review this one, but the file's password-protected.

I'd help you review this one, but the file's password-protected.

Thanks but it's already published though (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) , you can read them here https://e-hentai.org/g/816338/069a9668d0/

I find it funny that there is about 1.3 billion Chinese in the world but Red couldn't find more Chinese to English translator lol

I do find it somewhat surprising, yes. I'd have think there would be quite a few Chinese-Americans here, for example. Now, I haven't advertised my need for a Chinese translator in the galleries; maybe I should try it.

For anyone curious, my English EHCOVE generic TL/editors/proofreaders ad gets someone to PM me every 2-3 months, and I have yet to get a single person to respond to my Japanese scanners needed ad.

Yo Red can you recommend sites that could import doujins? Thanks

This post has been edited by chung2795: May 23 2015, 19:22