[X] My Assistant

There seems to be a clear shortage of translators.

I have thought about learning to read Japanese. I just don't know where to even start and haven't really found the time to do it yet. What really made me want to do it was playing H-Games which started with Kuroinu when people said the game was actually better than the anime and they were right with the game having a lot more scenes and the anime felt rushed. Actually my H-Game experience started with Type-Moon games but those were translated except for hollow ataraxia which was just finished last November. The slow progress on that one made me wish I could read Japanese or it had audio like the prequel. Recent game releases have made me interested again, it's either I learn to read or wait a long time for some games to get translated.

The newest script is finally done, I feel like I have been spamming this thread with non-script contents for quite some time now, so here's a script.

Link: https://e-hentai.org/g/745696/205e977f53/

Translator: Herreis
EDIT: This script has been edited

This post has been edited by chung2795: Apr 16 2015, 05:23

I'll be entering a long state of hibernation now... I mean hiatus. You should try and find other Chinese translators too while I wait for the day someone yells, "Awaken My Master!" and I wake up with the most fabulous pose ever.

Take your time, you earned some rest!

For any prospective TL, we are working with a to-do list from here.

Proofread for The voice that woke the Sleeping Beauty is as sweet as chocolate:

Page 09

Kongou: I will be the one wins over the Admiral's heart~

Correction: I will be the one who wins over the Admiral's heart~

Page 12

Box: Why did he lick there all of the sudden… This is so embarrassing~~

It's debatable whether "all of a sudden" or "all of the sudden" is the correct one but for me, I use "a". Using "suddenly" instead to avoid this is also possible.

Page 15

AM: I’m… I’m at my limits~ Ahh~

Correction: I'm at my limit~

Page 22

Although there are no summertime bikinis, I made this with using the summer’s atmosphere~

Correction: Although there are no summertime bikinis, I made this with summer's atmosphere~

This chapter themes also focus on Amatsukaze’s pure maiden heart…

Correction: This chapter's theme also focuses on Amatsukaze's pure maiden heart...

This chapter is also finished in a very limited short time! Just with a mere 14 days…

Correction: This chapter is also finished in a very limited time! With just a mere 14 days...

Edited version of "The voice that woke the Sleeping Beauty is as sweet as chocolate"

Link: https://e-hentai.org/g/745696/205e977f53/

EDIT: Script edited again

This post has been edited by chung2795: Apr 18 2015, 07:38

By the way how much credit payment is appropriate for proof readers?

By the way how much credit payment is appropriate for proof readers?

See here. I take care of this for now but you can of course be extra nice and set up your own rewards.

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Apr 17 2015, 03:28

See here. I take care of this for now but you can of course be extra nice and set up your own rewards.

Hmm okay thanks for the reference I'm currently looking for proofreaders for my future personal translations.

Proofread for The voice that woke the Sleeping Beauty is as sweet as chocolate:

Page 08

AM: Get some watermelons!

Correction: Getting some watermelons!

Adm: Besides Amatsukaze’s curry tastes differently everytime, I’m sure that I won’t get tired of it!

Correction: Besides Amatsukaze’s curry tastes different every time, I’m sure that I won’t get tired of it!

Page 09

SH: This taste like…

Correction: This tastes like...

Page 12

Box: Why did he lick there suddenly… This is so embarrassing~~

Correction: "Why did he suddenly lick there" or "Why did he lick there so suddenly"

Page 22

When I saw Amatsukaze for the first time, I’ve decided that “I must draw her as the main character at least once”!!

Correction: When I saw Amatsukaze for the first time, I decided that “I must draw her as the main character at least once”!!

This chapter theme also focuses on Amatsukaze’s pure maiden heart…

Correction: This chapter's theme also focuses on Amatsukaze's pure maiden heart...

This chapter is also finished in a very limited short time! With just a mere 14 days…

Correction: This chapter was also finished in a very limited time! With just a mere 14 days...

This post has been edited by CrimsonClown: Apr 18 2015, 00:30

Edited version of "The voice that woke the Sleeping Beauty is as sweet as chocolate"

Link: https://e-hentai.org/g/745696/205e977f53/

Translator: Herreis
Page 01:
Title: 眠り姫を目覚める声がチョコのような甘く(The voice that woke the Sleeping Beauty is as sweet as chocolate)

Page 03: The words here are just the Chinese scanslator’s credits so I think you should clean those up.

Page 04:
Pnl 1: I said it before right?
Pnl 2: I’ll certainly… return to the Admiral’s side!
Pnl 4:
AM: What a pleasant breeze…

Page 05:
Pnl 1:
Black bubble: Ugh
AM: Uh?
Pnl 2:
AM: Uwa Ahh Ahh!
AM: Admiral!
SFX: Hish
SFX x2: *Whoosh*
Adr: Uh
Pnl 3:
AM: My bad
Pnl 4:
AM: I shouldn’t have opened the window that widely, the sea breeze blew away all of the documents…
Adm: It’s fine (Ah Ha Ha-)
Adm: Now that summer’s here, isn’t it nice to cool ourselves with the pleasant sea breeze?
Pnl 5:
Box: It has been 3 months since I returned to the Admiral’s side…
AM: You’re right.
Adm: Oh right! The watermelon should be chilled by now, shall we have some?
Box: I remember that time…

Page 06:
Pnl 1:
Box 1: The sky is as blue as ever…
Box 2: I lost my precious gears during the fierce battle
Box 3: Not to mention the pirates I met on my way back gave me an exhausting battle too.
Pnl 2 and beyond:
Box 1: Having the thoughts of
Box 2: “Will I return to the admiral’s side?”
Box 3: Who knows how many dark nights have passed since then…

Page 07:
Pnl 1:
Box: And when I opened my eyes again…
Pnl 2:
SH: I found Amatsukaze ~
AM: Uwah!
SFX: Dash
SH: Let’s race
Pnl 3:
SH x2: Let’s race~
Box: That’s right…
AM: Hold,
AM: Hold On!
Pnl 4:
SH: You promised yesterday!
SH: Don’t go back on your word~
SH x2: Race~
Box 1: During this period this brat showed up…
Box 2: …Shimakaze
Box 3: A weirdo that keeps pursuing speed all of her time…

Page 08:
Pnl 1:
AM: Who would race with you when it’s so hot today~~!
SH: Where are you going?
AM: Getting some watermelons!
SH: Oh! Then let’s race to see who gets to the watermelons first!
Box: For real~~ Shimakaze is really annoying!
Pnl 2:
AM: Having only curry everyday
AM: Don’t you get tired of it?
Pnl 3:
Adm: Curry is not only convenient but also time-saving
Adm: Besides Amatsukaze’s curry tastes different every time, I’m sure that I won’t get tired of it!
Left Side:
SFX: *Blush*
Bubbleless: Well, I added some chocolate today so it should taste great…
AM: Is, is that so?
AM: Hum Uhm~~
Pnl 4:
SFX: *Dok* / *Crash*/ *Bang*
AM: Admiral?!

Page 09:
Pnl 1:
AM: Ad…
AM: Admiral...? Died…?
SFX x2: Tremble…
SH: This tastes like…
SFX x2: *munch*
SH: the flavor of “Seduction Chocolate”.
Pnl 2:
AM: “Seduction Chocolate”?!
Bubbleless: Then why are you still eating it?
SH: This chocolate was prepared by Kongou
SH: To capture her admiral (?)
Bubbleless: Though I don’t really get it…
Kongou: I will be the one who wins over the Admiral's heart~
Kongou: I have arrived
Pnl 3:
AM: Capture?
AM: Is this rat poison?
Adm: Amatsukaze…

Page 10:
Pnl 1:
AM: Yeeahh!
AM: Where are you touching!
SFX x2: *Shudders*
Pnl 2:
AM: Uhh Uhm~
AM: Uhh!
AM: Uhm Uhm~~!
AM: Uh <3
Box: What is happening? Why did the Admiral suddenly…?
Most of the SFXs are just generic shudder and twitch
Pnl 3:
Box: Such a sacred stuff… How could we do it so lightly?
SFX: *Twitch*
AM: I can taste the chocolate from the inside of his mouth just now…
SFX: Hah Ahh-----
Box: Is it because of the chocolate?

Page 11:
Pnl 1:
AM: My body feels so hot… this is weird~~!! This is so embarrassing~~
Ok basically all of the SFXs in this page are shudder and twitch, besides the one beside Admiral’s mouth, which is “suck”
AM: Ahh Ahh
AM: Hold,
AM: hold on…
Box: Although I don’t dislike being touched by the Admiral…
Bottom Pnl:
Box 1: But this is my first time…
AM: Hah Ahh
AM: Ahh Ahh
AM: Unh~
Box: He should be more careful, and gentler…

Page 12:
Again, almost all SFXs are shudder and twitch
Pnl 1:
AM: Uhh Ahh
AM: Ahh Ahh
Pnl 2:
Box: Why did he suddenly lick there… This is so embarrassing~~
Box: I would have cleaned that part if I knew this was going to happen…
AM: Ahh <3
AM: Don’t…
AM: Don’t lick there~~
AM: Hah Ahh!
AM: Uhm ahh
AM: Stop, stop please~
Box: Something is about to come out… Not good! Please stop Ahh Ahh~~
Pnl 3:
AM: Kyeahh ahh ahh
AM: Hah Ahh
AM: No~~
AM: Ahh
AM: Umh Ahh
AM: Coming yeeahh ahh~
AM: No~~ this is so humiliating!

Page 13:
Pnl 1:
Box: What was that sensation…
AM: Hah Ahh
AM: Hah
AM: Uhm
Box: This is bad, I can’t even think properly now…
SFX: *pissing* // *leaking* // *spurting*
Box: It feels like being shocked... stimulating and pleasant...
Pnl 2:
SH: My body is getting hot too… let me take part too!
Pnl 3:
SH: Admiral, it seems that Amatsukaze can’t wait any longer…
SFX: *Waa* (like showing something in amusement)
SH: Quickly put it in <3
Box: Only if there’s something going in there… I’ll feel even better!

Page 14:
Pnl 1:
AM: Ya Ah!
AM: Ahh… I’m still a bit scared after all…
Pnl 2:
AM: Ahh
Box: Uhm Uhn~ Ouch…
AM: Yeeahh Ahh~
Pnl 3:
AM: Not Good Ahh
Box: It’s really in…!!
AM: Hah Ahh
AM: Uhm Ahh~
Pnl 4:
Box: It hurts so much down there… but it feels so good…
Moan: Uhm~~
Moan: Uhn
Moan: Hum Uhm
Box: These kinds of things actually feel so good…

Page 15:
Pnl 1:
AM: Ahh Ahh
AM: Hah
Pnl 2:
AM: No~
AM: I’m… I’m at my limit~ Ahh~
AM: Ahh
AM: Hah Ahh
AM: Uhm~
Box: That stimulating sensation is coming back again…
AM: Shima, Shimakaze?
Pnl 3:
AM: Ahh <3
SFX x2: *lick*
AM: Don’t lick~~ This is so embarrassing!
AM: Hah <3

Page 16:
Pnl 1:
AM: Don’t, Shimakaze please stop immediately!
AM: I, I…
AM: can’t hold back anymore~~
Pnl 2:
AM: Ahh
AM: Hah
AM: Noo~~
AM: I’m at my limit~~ Ahh Ahh Ahh
AM: Yaa
AM: Cumming Yaa Ahh ahh
SFX x2: (Sounds of ejaculation, I can’t remember what to write, please kindly remind me after this lol)
Pnl 3:
SH: So nice~~ Amatsukaze looks like she enjoying… Looks so pleasant…
SH: I want to feel good with Amatsukaze too…

Page 17:
Pnl 1:
AM: Ehh?
SH: However…
Pnl 2:
AM: Yaa ahh!
SH: See~~
SH: Now we can share the Admiral together!
AM: Hold, hold on…
Pnl 3:
SH: Next we’ll have to trouble the Admiral~
SFX x2: Hah---
AM: Uhh~~
Box: How did it turn out like this~~?

Page 18:
Pnl 1:
Moan: Uhh Uhm uhm
Moan: Hah Ahh Ahh
AM: Hah ahh
AM: Unh
AM: Uhm Ahh
AM: Hah
SH: Feels so great~
SH: Amatsukaze…!
Pnl 2:
Moan: Hah Ahh~ Ahh
Moan: Ahh Ahh
SH: Adimral…
SH: Faster, faster…!

Page 19: Bad editor lol
Right side:
Moan: Ahh Ahh~~
SH: I’m cumming Ahh Ahh Ahh ahh~~
SH: Ahh Ahh
SH: Ahh
SH: Hah ahh
Left Side:
Moan: ahh
Moan: Hah Ahh
Moan: Uhm
AM: Ahh, Noo~~ YeeAhh Ahh Ahh~
AM: No~
AM: Hah ahh ahh
AM: Hah
AM: Uhm~

Page 20:
Pnl 2:
Adm: Amatsukaze…
Adm: Amatsukaze…!
Box: I still remember… The voice I heard on those endless nights…
Pnl 3:
Adm: Are you alright?
Box: Ahh Ahh… It’s the Admiral…
Pnl 4:
Adm: Sorry… It must have hurt right… What happened to me…? I did something so horrible…
Adm: It hurts right? I don’t know how to redeem myself now…
AM: It’s alright.
Pnl 5:
Adm: Ehh?

Page 21:
Pnl 1:
AM: You saved me when…
AM: The superiors ordered to have me executed because I lost a battle horribly…
AM: And didn’t I say this before?
AM: I’ll certainly return to the Admiral’s side…
Pnl 2:
AM: And also…
AM: I love you…
Pnl 3:
I will take responsibility! Marry me! Amatsukaze
Ehh~~?
Yes, yes I do… If you don’t mind…
And… can you be gentler next time?
Just the two of us…
Box: Just like the sleeping beauty, I was awakened from this endless night by you…
Box: My Prince Charming…

Page 22:
Afterword:
This is Sakurano Ru, thanks for reading til the end~
The theme this time is “Summertime! Amatsukaze & Shimakaze”
Although there are no summertime bikinis, I made this with summer’s atmosphere~ (Scoff scoff XD
When I saw Amatsukaze for the first time, I decided that “I must draw her as the main character at least once”!!
Thus this chapter was born~
This chapter's theme also focuses on Amatsukaze’s pure maiden heart…
Sweet and pure sex, is my favorite hentai plotline///
The synergy between Shimakaze and Amatsukaze really stroke my heart <3
Added with my friend’s godly title “The voice that woke the Sleeping Beauty is as sweet as chocolate”
Full score on the sweetness!! My heart just keeps beating///

This chapter was also finished in a very limited time! With just a mere 14 days...
I tried to complete 2 pages per day, every day is counted with pages, and the days flew by quickly~

Does this chapter satisfy you?
I’ll work harder from now on, so please take care of me~
Sakurano Ru 2014 SUMMER

editing bounty posted at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12311

good luck with stuff during your break, looking fwd to restarting the activity here when you (and maybe others?) resume activity here

Here is the list of our projects (galleries) that seem worth TLing (anyone is welcome to suggest new ones here, too)

https://e-hentai.org/g/703981/a1183c259c/ (full color KanColle)
https://e-hentai.org/g/616304/45dcaa3468/ (Gargantia; this one also has a Japanese raw available - see comments)
https://e-hentai.org/g/552595/54a404466d/ (FSN)
https://e-hentai.org/g/620257/7968ad97ed/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/783149/223a5f8e3a/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/624279/5adfb54e65/ , https://e-hentai.org/g/782791/941e575ffb/ nice full color art, through I don't really know the series

Then there is a bunch of Chinese translations of Japanese galleries, but I prefer to focus on org scripts first, if we ever run out of those we can consider the quality of Chinese translations

Hey guys so i have a done [Aru kami kado (shoka)] teitoku no LOVE hokyuu (Kancolle) here for you guys to look over.

[www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/?dcaf3mu2mwk5kff

long story short I have all of the memory of a child who forgets to give shit back when he's done. Anyways this was a big redraw project for me so if you guys could take a good look at it and tell me if anything looks out of place or if I missed something. And to the TL I think I found a solution to the category part that I think you'll like and looks good but your call.

Hey guys so i have a done [Aru kami kado (shoka)] teitoku no LOVE hokyuu (Kancolle) here for you guys to look over.

[www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/?dcaf3mu2mwk5kff

long story short I have all of the memory of a child who forgets to give shit back when he's done. Anyways this was a big redraw project for me so if you guys could take a good look at it and tell me if anything looks out of place or if I missed something. And to the TL I think I found a solution to the category part that I think you'll like and looks good but your call.

Looks good to me. I think all we need is a credit's page. Oh, and can you resize 000.png and 001.png; the galleries don't allow uploads of files over 10mb or so, I usually try to keep any file I generate from scans at no more than 9.5mb to be safe.

Dang its always the credits page with me! okay here is the credits with the re-sized cover pages [www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/?iyw48s6zi34k71k

anything else?

I'm back motherfuckers
Although I probably won't be as active as I used to though, since shits are hitting the fan and my academic life is going down the drain, but I would probably become active again after summer break starts.

Script for VeryShy03
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/703981/a1183c259c/


EDIT: Script has been edited

This post has been edited by chung2795: May 18 2015, 02:19

Proofread for VeryShy03

Page 05:

I’ve never heard of Abyssal Torpedo Bomber this powerful!!

C: I've never heard of an Abyssal Torpedo Bomber this powerful.

Kirishima: Admiral!! The reinforcement fleet is ready.

A little check here, is it single "fleet" or plural "fleets" here because soon after this it's "reinforcement fleets moving out".

You can dispatch them to the field any time now!!

C: You can dispatch them to the field at any time now.

Page 06:

Everything will be alright if you all are still there…

C: Everything will be alright if all of you are still there.

Page 07:

I’ve already place the death flag dramatically

C: I've already placed the death flag dramatically.

What are the readers that are worried about me last page supposed to feel now?

C: What are the readers that worried about me last page supposed to feel now.

Do you really thank that

C: Do you really think that.

Page 12:

Wo-class told me something before she’s fainted

C: Wo-class told me something before she fainted.

Page 14:

Even if your breast are small

C: Even if your breasts are small.

Page 15:

Tonight I’ll take back everything plus with interest rate!!

S: Tonight, I'll take back everything with interest rate.

Page 16:

you all can appreciate your shipgirls more

C: All of you can appreciate your shipgirls more.

Proofread Script for VeryShy03
Translator: Herreis
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/703981/a1183c259c/

The script has been edited (again (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)) https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showt...p;#entry4099673

This post has been edited by chung2795: Jul 22 2015, 16:18

CrimsonClown can you help me proofread this one? Thanks (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/c6zbdq89...oofread_pls.rar