Proofread for The voice that woke the Sleeping Beauty is as sweet as chocolate:
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Kongou: I will be the one wins over the Admiral's heart~
Correction: I will be the one who wins over the Admiral's heart~
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Box: Why did he lick there all of the sudden… This is so embarrassing~~
It's debatable whether "all of a sudden" or "all of the sudden" is the correct one but for me, I use "a". Using "suddenly" instead to avoid this is also possible.
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AM: I’m… I’m at my limits~ Ahh~
Correction: I'm at my limit~
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Although there are no summertime bikinis, I made this with using the summer’s atmosphere~
Correction: Although there are no summertime bikinis, I made this with summer's atmosphere~
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This chapter themes also focus on Amatsukaze’s pure maiden heart…
Correction: This chapter's theme also focuses on Amatsukaze's pure maiden heart...
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This chapter is also finished in a very limited short time! Just with a mere 14 days…
Correction: This chapter is also finished in a very limited time! With just a mere 14 days...