[X] My Assistant

Pai! 2 bounty accepted, should be ready before March ends.

New Script ready! Wooooooooo!


PROJECT COMPLETE!

[Muryou (Momochi Kouichi)] Britin 1 (Bleach)



Original Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/33496/9d694867f7/
Script:  Britin.txt ( 8.32k ) Number of downloads: 45


This is another Red_Piotrus project. Get used to hearing that, as we've got quite a few in the pipeline yet! This doujin is a Bleach twofer, Ichigo x Yoruichi and Orihime x Chizuru. The second story isn't really my thing, but the Yoruichi story was quite nice! I sort of stopped paying attention to Yoruichi after every Bleach doujin author seemed to switch to Matsumoto, but she's pretty great in this. Lovely character art as well, though backgrounds are minimal.

Editors, this project is 28 pages of very light text! A few of the pages have some fairly intense sfx effects, but on the whole, this is a pretty easy project.

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Mar 21 2015, 16:12

New Script ready! Wooooooooo!

[Muryou (Momochi Kouichi)] Britin 1 (Bleach)



Original Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/33496/9d694867f7/
Script:  Britin.txt ( 8.32k ) Number of downloads: 45


This is another Red_Piotrus project. Get used to hearing that, as we've got quite a few in the pipeline yet! This doujin is a Bleach twofer, Ichigo x Yoruichi and Orihime x Chizuru. The second story isn't really my thing, but the Yoruichi story was quite nice! I sort of stopped paying attention to Yoruichi after every Bleach doujin author seemed to switch to Matsumoto, but she's pretty great in this. Lovely character art as well, though backgrounds are minimal.

Editors, this project is 28 pages of very light text! A few of the pages have some fairly intense sfx effects, but on the whole, this is a pretty easy project.

UF

As for me, I chose this for the rare appearance of Chizuru, so I am glad we both got what we wanted (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Not that I have anything against Yoruichi, but really, I don't get why there aren't more yuri Chizuru dojins out there. Weird.

Editing bounty for this is at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11939

I'll be editing bleach

Time for another blast from the past!

Project: In Progress (Mathew1122)

[St. Rio (Kitty)] Love Dashi 4 (Love Hina)



Original Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/128507/a3876f3cec/
Bounty Link: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11995
Current Bounty: 30,000 credits + 30 hath

Script:  Love_Dashi_4.txt ( 12.96k ) Number of downloads: 55


More St. Rio Love Hina action. Kouenji Rei brings the whole cast in this time, while Kitty keeps it simple with Shinobu and Motoko. With this volume, we've now have just over 20% of the Love Dashi stories translated! In even better news, next volume heavily features Kitsune! She's the only reason I translate these stories, so the future's looking up!

Editors, the job is 44 pages long at standard St. Rio difficulty (i.e. lots of text and sfx). Unfortunately, this volume suffers the same cropping problem that a lot of our older St. Rio works have in the galleries: the left and right edges are cropped to the point that we've lost some of the text. Most of this is more a problem for me (translator) than you, but it's something to be aware of.

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Mar 21 2015, 15:48

Guess the book wasn't debinded while scanning?

Editing bounty at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11995

I think that the editig bountis in your sig may need to be updated. Isn't Persona and Bleach being edited by matthew, and BB by qberg? That should leave only One Piece and the new Love Hina, right?

I believe at this point that Love Dashi 4 is the only one still needing an editor. I'll try to keep up better with my signature.

UF

What projects are avalible for editing?
Also, editors who work on bountys, ACCEPT them so its easier to see.

Love Dashi 4 should be the only one still available. A great number of my projects end up being done as Translation-for-Editing deals instead of through bounties, so it does get kind of confusing. I've got some ideas on how to make it more obvious from here on, but you can generally rely on my signature (see below) to know what still needs editing.

So yes, Love Dashi 4. I have another project which will be posted either tonight or tomorrow, however.

UF

Another Red_Piotrus special project, ready to go!

PROJECT COMPLETE!

(C61) [Megami Kyouten, Ohkura Bekkan (Demon Umekichi, Ohkura Kazuya, Ooshima Yasuhiro)] shaft lady (Geneshaft)



Original Gallery: https://e-hentai.org//g/287616/edbe5b50ef/
Bounty Link: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12064
Current Bounty: 30,000 credits + 30 hath
Script:  Geneshaft.txt ( 10.17k ) Number of downloads: 53


So, Geneshaft... I'm not familiar with this series myself, but I can't deny that it's a pretty doujin. Full color is a lovely thing! This one is another of Red_Piotrus's babies, so credit for good taste goes to him. I admit that I was rather hoping the back cover image would be more a part of the story, but we can't have everything...!

Editors, despite the page count this project is only 30 pages, several of which are stand alone pics with a single line or phrase of text. That said, many of the early pages use extensive freetext outside of bubbles, meaning some cloning work will be needed. Most of it doesn't look too hard, though. Aside from that, editing this one ought to be fairly simple. This is a Red_Piotrus project, so you will need to speak with him about what should be done about sfx.

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Mar 21 2015, 16:14

editing is https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12064

I am willing to add to it (double?) if anyone feels like redrawing (hmm, maybe I should make this a default for any editing project?)

Proofread for Shaft Lady:

Page 04:

Back then he was big into Beatrice-tan, so when he said "It's been a while but let's to a doujin," I took him up on it (Though I'm all but bankrupt...) Well...saying all that, they guy didn't even do a manuscript. That's pretty messed up. What the hell am I doing helping you with your own manuscript!?

Correction: Back then he was big into Beatrice-tan, so when he said "It's been a while but let's do a doujin," I took him up on it (Though I'm all but bankrupt...). Well...saying all that, the guy didn't even do a manuscript. That's pretty messed up. What the hell am I doing helping you out with your own manuscript!?

Page 13:

A Register's work is normally to support the men

Suggestion: A Register's work is usually to support the men. (I think it fits in better than using "normally")

This sort of thing is quite the problem...

Suggestion: These sorts of things are quite the problem. (Since in the following page she mentions more than 1 problem, this would fit in more)

Page 14:

When I have to stay nearby when men take care of business...

Suggestion: I have to stay nearby when men take care of their business. (Multiple use of "when" disrupts the flow of reading and makes it awkward. Adding "their" helps in this sentence because without it, the phrase "take care of business" is kind of vague and can be interpreted in multiple ways. Unless the original point was being vague)

Page 16:

Still, I actually have it pretty good. Other registers I know are often kicked and beaten...

Suggestion: Still, I actually have it pretty good. Other registers I know are often kicked and beaten up.

Page 18:

Each time I see her in the shower room, her beautiful body...

Suggestion: Every time I see her in the shower room, her beautiful body. (I think this fits in more than using "each")

Page 23:

Ufufu... Welcome to my chambers...

Correction: Ufufu... Welcome to my chamber...

Page 38:

Just how many times did I get pissed with him over the phone...

Suggestion: Just how many times did I get pissed off with him over the phone. (Just a simple addition of the word "off" here)

Concur with the proofreading, except in one place. On page 14, the "take care of business" is supposed to be a little tongue-in-cheek. If you look at the picture, she's in the Men's Room with him as he's taking a piss. Why don't we make it...

I have to stay nearby when men "take care of business..."

I think the quotes make the sarcasm a little more obvious?

UF


ps. It's nice to meet you, CrimsonClown. I'm always, always, ALWAYS thrilled to meet new proofreaders!

I'll be editing Geneshaft.

Yeah the quotes does make it more obvious and it works better, I'd go with that.

It's nice to meet you too.

It's nice to meet you too.

Always glad to have more people interested in improving our releases. Welcome aboad!

I'll be editing Geneshaft.

Excellent.

Incidentally, I see you have not yet officially joined EHCOVE (member list); if you want to correct this just post here

Release time!

Project: COMPLETE!

[NAVY (Kishuu Chokkou)] Shibo Seieki Machine Soushuuen VOL.1 (Various)



Original Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/344030/81f01c986f/
Bounty Link: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=12151
Current Bounty: 20,000 credits + 20 hath
Script:  Shibo_Seiieki.txt ( 9.42k ) Number of downloads: 104


The script here is for the 4th and 5th stories ONLY; In other words, the Fairy Tail stories. The 4th is Erza vs Natsu in a fairly standard femdom set up. Not really my thing, but other people like it. The 5th is futa-Juvia vs Erza and Lucy, which is VERY much my thing. I really like the character art here, which is good because the characters are so large in the panels that there's practically no background at all!

Editors, at the moment Red_Piotrus is negotiating to get the other 3 stories done. I imagine he wants to wait on editing until all of it is ready to edit at once. Still, if you're interested be sure to get on contact with one of us. There are VERY few sfx, which is a bonus, but the bubbles are translucent, which makes things difficult.

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Mar 19 2016, 20:05

It's come to our attention that there is considerable confusion for EDITORS over what is expected to be done with sfx in EHCOVE releases. Red_Piotrus and I may not always have been consistent and clear over this, so we thought we'd set the record straight for future releases. Yesterday Red updated the EHCOVE FAQ section for editors: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&am...t&p=3883132

The important bit is quoted here:

2. translated SFXes should be edited in unless they require substantial redrawing, about which we can negotiate. We distinguish the following type of SFXes edit:

Best: Full Replacement. Examples: This whole gallery
2nd best: Nearby + similar formatting: Top sfx (Jiggle)
Worst sfx: simple notes outside the panels. Examples: this page (ugh! + flip)
No sfx included. Go figure.

What we expect (at minimum) is "2nd best". Many organizers, myself included, are happy to negotiate a higher bounty if you can offer the "best" level of editing (ditto for decensoring).

I've edited his quote a little for emphasis and further description. I'd also like to reiterate one of the points above. If you are an editor who is capable of redrawing sfx but don't think the bounty is set high enough, get in contact with us! I'm generally willing to pitch in hath/credits for quality work on my releases, and Red's already said the same thing.

UF

Something I'd like to mention about Shibo Seieki Machine Soushuuen VOL.1.

Page 42

I guess I better clean you up first so you don't try to pass old cum off as new.

Suggestion: Use "won't" here is instead of "don't". The main reason is because if I break the sentence into 2 parts which would be "I guess I better clean you up first" and "so you don't try to pass old cum off as new", the first part is talking about the present and the second part is talking about the future hence the use of "won't". I also think that the word "first" here makes it more appropriate to use "won't" after that because if I removed the word from the sentence then it sounds right using "don't" here. I don't know about the translation here but could it be that she's ordering him? If so it could be "so don't you try to pass old cum off as new".