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I accepted the bounty ^^
I think I'll need one week or so to edit everything, the cleaning part is already done !

Excellent. I'll try to prioritize the One Piece bounty in my near future TL requests (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

I accepted the bounty ^^
I think I'll need one week or so to edit everything, the cleaning part is already done !

thank you in advance
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Almost done, but there is a missing bubble (p 58 Third Panel, First Bubble), can you fix it ?

ultimaflaral PMed

On page 58, the script accidentally combined the first two bubbles. The following should be the entire page.


Uuu...!

Talho-san...! I...I'm already...

Not yet! Hang on for a bit longer.

B-But, I'm already...!

Ah! Aaah! I'm cumming!

[white sfx = Dokun! [Splurt or similar]]

Ah! [unclear who this is. Talho?]


UF

Thanks, I finished it :
[www.mediafire.com] https://www.mediafire.com/?vlypesaa8nnuv6a

if you're ok with it, I'll do an EH cove credit page and add a special page for the TL notes.

I may not have time to look at it till Monday, hopefully ultimaflaral and 205780 will?

looked at it and loved it although the font you used when screaming is a little ... I don't know but I personally don't like the way it reads.
I know i'm not being helpfull but, when moaning or things like that I'm ok with it but words like on page 24 are hard to read for me.
Especialy true for page 42 and 47 where i suspect that you selected the wrong font or size.
if not ... the quick change is ... well at a lack of a better word ... unpleasant. I sometime wonder what letter I'm looking at.

the "screaming" font used in the 3rd part is O.K. with me.

also sometimes to fit the text in the bubble you tilted the already cursive text which made me tilt my head a couple times like on page 28, 34, 36.

is it perhaps wise/advisable to place the text like this?

text here
text here
more text

on page 42 it's all tilted the same way and there I don't mind it. ... strange. can you try something?

on page 33 there is a little line low in a bubble: I just get wet easily.
is it possible to place it a bit higher, it almost falls off the page.

is a bubble on page 46 missing an outline or was that also in the raw?

on page 47 the first line: holland taught me this (etc.) might better be divided into
holland
taught
me this:
if you're
a man,
then it fits better in the bubble and the text does not touch the outline

minor thing, in the anime the name of the ship is alway been pronaunced as gekko-go.
could you change that on page 28, 52 and 53?
also on page 52 ... (I must have read over it during proofreading the trans.(sorry))
shouldn't it be: aren't you finished with the laundry yet OR haven't you finished the laundry yet? I'm not profound in english but it just sounds weird.

on page 6, the cool biz has a * by it. is there suposed to be an explanation what cool biz is on the page?

on page 15 perhaps put the under from under-staaaaand on a new line so it fits better? the bubble looks big enough.


... O.O wow, I did not know that I'm such a whiner ... If I'm being to much OCD-ish sorry, you judge what the line is in what you can/must/want to do. perhaps ultimaflaral can look to? until now I had 0% exp in this.

I also don't mind If you do a credits page or tl notes just please include all the people who have helped these bounties come to life.

btw ... Red ... you really need to update you signature man.

is a bubble on page 46 missing an outline or was that also in the raw?

No, it was already like that in the raw.

on page 6, the cool biz has a * by it. is there suposed to be an explanation what cool biz is on the page?

The explanation is on the TL note page

I corrected it, is it better ?

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/6brt5i54...ol.2%282%29.zip

I corrected it, is it better ?

yep just the tl notes ... the first note is from page 5 not 1. other then that --> no problems detected.

thank you

yep just the tl notes ... the first note is from page 5 not 1.

Oopsy ! ^^"

Fixed it :
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/a5e37jx6s2l55t9/TL%20notes.jpg

thank you

You're welcome !

This post has been edited by Shinko.Aelith: Jul 7 2014, 00:46

I had time to look at the revised version. I think it is ready for the release - I'll upload this to the galleries momentarily.

205780, is there another project you'd like me to co sponsor and organize (also, see my sig)? How about we finish part 1, which wasn't fully TLed? If you like the idea, can you ping our TL and ask him for the cost estimate?

And yes, my sig is obsolete... it's just too much painful to update that SOB BBC code Ten allows for sigs around here.

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jul 8 2014, 01:01

I had time to look at the revised version. I think it is ready for the release - I'll upload this to the galleries momentarily.

saw it. faved it. 5stared it. and got a succesfull fab. 10/10

205780, is there another project you'd like me to co sponsor and organize (also, see my sig)? How about we finish part 1, which wasn't fully TLed? If you like the idea, can you ping our TL and ask him for the cost estimate?

truth be told. I don't really cared much for part 1 but the art from st.rio has always been my favorite (especially kitty). the only dj's i want translated are the negima ones from st.rio. (esp 1 and 2)
the other truth is, that I am lazy as fuck. so if I just need to boost bounty's ... I would be happy with that.
now I do understand that the world is not such a forgiving place but I would stil want to ask you if you would waant to put in the effort?
I currently have 101,555 creds and 7 hath and I stil can't grasp the value of these numbers.
I you believe that it would be possible to get one scanlated with that amount, please. if not ... I'll best start saving then.

And yes, my sig is obsolete... it's just too much painful to update that SOB BBC code Ten allows for sigs around here.

how about you just remove the dj covers and but in a banner. you don't have to update that.
just thinking with you. that's all.

For now I'll ask ulti how much he would like for the missing parts of part 1.

I'm not unwilling to do it once I have the time, which will certainly not be before the start of August. The remaining section is 20 pages, fairly light text amount for St. Rio with a few pages of moderate to moderate-heavy. Assuming you aren't asking for author rant or anything else, I'd say 50kcred/55H (or similar based on 10kcred = 1H).

UF

I'm not unwilling to do it once I have the time, which will certainly not be before the start of August. The remaining section is 20 pages, fairly light text amount for St. Rio with a few pages of moderate to moderate-heavy. Assuming you aren't asking for author rant or anything else, I'd say 50kcred/55H (or similar based on 10kcred = 1H).

UF

Excellent. I'll post a bounty for that shortly. EDIT: Done https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10709

This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Jul 23 2014, 12:48

The translation script is done. I can post it as soon as the bounty hits 55 hath (currently at 39h).

UF

The translation script is done. I can post it as soon as the bounty hits 55 hath (currently at 39h).

UF

Okay, it's 55h now, you can post it.