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post Jul 31 2014, 06:41
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I just checked at t15 has not been active on the forums at all for a month - since June 27: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showuser=822761

I send him another PM, but if he does not reply by next week, I am sorry, but even with his warnings it may take a while, disappearing for a month is too much - I will open this to new editors by Monday if he does not post here.

HerpaDerpMan, since you and Ito contacted me virtually within hours, please let me know if you want to work on this together. Otherwise, HerpaDerpMan wins by about 6 hours (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

I also asked from an update for S2 edited by Shimaryu. He is active, but we can definitely use an update here, it's been now three weeks for this project.

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post Jul 31 2014, 06:54
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Red, as the first person here that gave me the traction I needed to keep pushing as an Editor, I must tell you with strong grievance that there's a typo in your thread title.
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post Jul 31 2014, 07:59
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I will watch this thread and thanks for the update!
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post Jul 31 2014, 18:54
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QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Jul 31 2014, 00:41) *

I just checked at t15 has not been active on the forums at all for a month - since June 27: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showuser=822761

I send him another PM, but if he does not reply by next week, I am sorry, but even with his warnings it may take a while, disappearing for a month is too much - I will open this to new editors by Monday if he does not post here.

HerpaDerpMan, since you and Ito contacted me virtually within hours, please let me know if you want to work on this together. Otherwise, HerpaDerpMan wins by about 6 hours (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

I also asked from an update for S2 edited by Shimaryu. He is active, but we can definitely use an update here, it's been now three weeks for this project.

Aye, we'll work together if/when the time comes. I don't care about the reward so much as the finished product as R+V is one of my favorite manga series.
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post Aug 1 2014, 06:47
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Here is a script for Silica no Usuusu na Ehon 3 (https://e-hentai.org/g/721998/a6b11687d6/)

Most of the moans and sound effects aren't included right now, I will add a separate legend for those a little later.

Feel free to ask here or PM me directly if you have any questions. Also feel free to play with the wordings if you feel like you can make the speech sound more natural without changing the meaning to much. I have include a few notes for the such alternate translations (alt) and the more literal translation (lit) of a few places were I changed things to make it sound better. Those are just there for proofing purposes.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Vague Recollections of Silica 3

By Anchuu Mosaku



Page 03:

July, 2024; A certain forest on the 50th floor

Fuu

This place has been cleared out

Want to take a little break?

That sounds good

This wind sure is nice

It is


Page 04:

I'm sorry for asking you to help me level up like this Kirito-san

Don't worry about it, there was some materials I wanted on this floor anyways

but still, I want to do something to thank you

In that case, let me use your lap as a pillow for my reward

Okay

Kirito-san looks so cute...


Page 05:

Ahem

Where do you think you're touching?

Ah...

It's just that it's been so long since I've touched Silica's body

Oww

Silica, remove your chest armor (Lit: delete/turn off your chest armor, could be a game reference but sounds a bit weird)

What do you mean it's been so long, we had sex two days ago

Yeah, like I said, It's been so long

is... is that so?

Ahhh~
Silica's thighs and stomach are so soft, they feel really nice


Page 06:

and your ass

and your breasts

I wonder how girl’s bodies can really be this soft~

My dick's hard... (lit: My dick has risen...)

What should I do about it Silica?

I...I don't know

Say, just for a little bit…

Can you use your mouth down there?

but I... I promised to help Liz-san by watching her store after this

Come on, it won’t take long!

but this place, a lot of people come through here don't they?

We’ll be done by the time anyone comes!

...


Page 07:

Pina

Can you look out and warn us when people are heading this way?

Pii!

Understood

hee~ She's really well trained

Please cum quickly, okay?

Okay Okay

Wow!

It's already so hard (lit: big)

Is this just from thinking about it before? Does it hurt?

Yes, it does


Page 08:

Oha!

Silica's blowjobs are just as amazing as ever

If you keep doing it like that I'll cum really fast


Page 09:

Ahhhh,
It looks like you really are going straight for the killing blow Silica

Although it’s a little regrettable, it feels wonderful

Yes~ Today should I cum on her face or in her mouth?

It doesn’t matter now...

Uuuu~ this is the best… I shouldn’t worry about that when I’m so close to cumming

As it is now, I’m going to cum in her mouth anyways...

Silica, is it ok to cum in your mouth?

Mmm

Ah~ I'm going to cum! I'm cumming!)


Page 10:

Ah, it seems someone is heading this way

Eh!?

but... but I was so close to cumming!)

It no good! We have to move!

Well then, let's just find a new place and continue there

I'm sorry, I really have to get to Liz-san's place really soon

Eh~~~

48th Floor - Lindas Town


Page 11:

Ki...

Kirito-san! Hmm

Ki...Kirito-san, ah!


Page12:

Don’t Kirito-san...

I... if I don't go soon...

You may say that but you're already dripping wet

Can you really endure going all day like this?

Please don't say such mean things like that


Page 13

(Just... Just do it fast...)

You’ll make me cum too right?

of course <3

Silica's pussy is just as tender as ever (alt: could be as soft as ever, but the word more directly means tender, like a steak or piece of meat)

Ki...Kirito-san...!

Don’t tease me...!

Hu...Hurry...

Please hurry and put it in me

Yes yes

Silica's switch has been completely flipped <3

It always drives Silica crazy when I rub it here like this

Okay then, I’ll put it in now <3


Page 14

Piii!

...

It.... It seems like people are coming...

Silica, let's go to an inn real fast! (alt: hotel)

Ye... Yes, let's do that!

I'm very sorry

The inn is currently full, we have no free rooms (alt: no vacancies)

Beep (SFX: Piron, beeping sound)

I got an email from Liz-san


Page 15

She... She seems really angry

...

Subject: Hurry up and get here!!!

Where are you!!??
I've been waiting for you this whole time!!!
At least contact me if you’re going to be late!!!!

Ah, Silica-chaaaan!

Want to go to a party with... me...

What do you want?

No... It was nothing, maybe next time...


Page 16

Liz-sa~n

We're here~

-Lisbeth's Armor Shop-

Heeey, Liz~

Where is she? She's not in the workshop either

Ah, I got another email

I didn't have any more time to wait so I left before you got here

I'll try to return as soon as possible, so please look after my shop until I get back

It's really dangerous of her not to lock up the place before she left~


Page 17

(SFX: Various Moaning)


Page 18

We can finally do it

yes

Well then...

Kirito-san... hurry...

Please put it in quickly

well then, you really want me to put it in?)

Yes <3

It went in~

Finally/at last)

Kirito-san's...

Kirito-san's peniiissss

(Note: She doesn’t actually say penis here, she just says “Kirito-san’sssss” and it’s implied she is talking about his penis. This sounds really weird in English so I added penis, you can take it out if you want a more direct translation)


Page 19:

Ki...!

Kiroto-sa...!

Kirito-san!

Not so fast! (lit: lively)

It's too much! (lit: too violent/intense/fierce/relentless/etc...!)


Page 20:

Amaz...!

Amazing! (alt: incredible/wonderful)

Silica, I'm...!

I’m going to cum soon!

Ye...

Yesss!

Please give it to me!

Do it inside me (lit: “inside!”; Could also change it to “cum inside me” too)

Me too... I’m cumming too! (lit: “Me... Me too!)

Together... let’s cum together! (lit: “together...!”)


Page 21

Byuruu (びゅるる) (Note: this one is a bit weird, Byuru is the sound for a man cumming violently. Obviously doesn’t have a direct translation, I might translate it as “*Splooge*” or something like that, but even that sounds weird)

I was finally able to cum

Yes <3

You guys...


Page 22

What are you doing in someone else’s house!!!

Silica! You promised to look after my shop for me!

I'm... I'm really sorry!

Honestly, to do that in a place like this...

Something like this...


Page 23

Eh!?

Wait a minute, what are you doing?

You want to join us, don't you Liz-san?

Wha!?

Who would...!

Kirito-san! Let’s do it!

Let me go!

Do... do it...? wait a minute!!

Ah~ Sorry Liz

Wai... wait a minute...!

It seems like there is only one way to solve this situation

Hii!


Page 24

wai...

wait!

Wait a minute...!

so suddenly...!

You’re going too fast...!!! (Alt: “You’re being too rough...!!!; Lit: “It's too violent/intense/furious...!!!”)


Page 25

What’s this~?

Liz-sa~n

Even though you say you don't like it, it looks to me like you’re feeling really good~
(small text: Nihihi; a type of laugh)

!!

Si...Silica... I won't forget about this!

Uuu~ I'm cumming!

Liz, I'm going to cum soon

I'm going to cum inside Liz’s pussy


Page 26

(Various moans and sounds)


Page 27

Now Liz-san should be completely satisfied too <3
(small text: now we are even)

Hey Silica, do you want to do it again?)

Sure <3

Though it's a little sudden...

you guys...

First you skip out on watching my store to fool around

And then you top it off by attacking me and selfishly cumming inside me...

huh... you're still mad?

of course I’m still mad...

Even if I wanted Silica to hold me down while Kirito wildly thrusts into me from behind, you honestly think that’s enough to make it up to me?

At this point if you don’t make this up to me I’ll kill you!

Y...yes!!


Page 28

Uah! Amazing

Silica's pussy is so tiny~

This is the first time I've seen Kirito's cock go inside like this, it really is amazing

Ah~
I’m getting close

Kirito, you’re going to cum soon?)

yeah

Then do it, cum lots and lot's inside of her <3

Hyaa!


Page 29

Liz, hold her feet

Okay~ <3

Li...Liz-san! Wa...wait...!

I'm... not while I'm still cumming...ah!

Ahaha
This is pay back from before


Page 30

Kirito!

Which pussy do you want to put it in this time?

Both!
(Small text: I'll alternate!)

I’m going to cum again!

Kirito-san!

Do it again!

Cum inside me!

Well then...! I'll shoot it into Silica again!

Yesss <3


Page 31

Kirito! I want it too~

Okay

It’s coming out <3

Kirito's semen is coming out inside me <3


Page 32

Silica, here

What’s this?

I had intended to give this to you as thanks for watching my shop

Just take it

This is...!

It's nice right?
It's a Lisbeth special make

I don't need something like this! This is...

This is...

Eh?

This shape seems kind of familiar

The size and feel are also familiar

Fufufu,
it seems you already realized it didn't you?)

th... thanks for the gift...

You’re welcome

Just next time when I ask you to watch my shop, do it properly, okay?

Yes <3

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post Aug 1 2014, 10:55
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Proofread script for Silica no Usuusu na Ehon 3 follows.

The only sentence I am a bit unsure is "Kirito's semen is coming out inside me <3" I wonder if we can rephrase it into something better?

Here's the editing bounty: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10769

QUOTE(dudemandude123 @ Jul 31 2014, 23:47) *

Here is a script for Silica no Usuusu na Ehon 3 (https://e-hentai.org/g/721998/a6b11687d6/)

Most of the moans and sound effects aren't included right now, I will add a separate legend for those a little later.

Feel free to ask here or PM me directly if you have any questions. Also feel free to play with the wordings if you feel like you can make the speech sound more natural without changing the meaning to much. I have include a few notes for the such alternate translations (alt) and the more literal translation (lit) of a few places were I changed things to make it sound better. Those are just there for proofing purposes.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Vague Recollections of Silica 3

By Anchuu Mosaku
Page 03:

July, 2024; A certain forest on the 50th floor

Fuu

This place has been cleared out

Want to take a little break?

That sounds good

This wind sure is nice

It is
Page 04:

I'm sorry for asking you to help me level up like this Kirito-san

Don't worry about it, there was some materials I wanted on this floor anyways

but still, I want to do something to thank you

In that case, let me use your lap as a pillow for my reward

Okay

Kirito-san looks so cute...
Page 05:

Ahem

Where do you think you're touching?

Ah...

It's just that it's been so long since I've touched Silica's body

Oww

Silica, remove your chest armor

What do you mean it's been so long, we had sex two days ago

Yeah, like I said, It's been so long

is... is that so?

Ahhh~
Silica's thighs and stomach are so soft, they feel really nice
Page 06:

and your ass

and your breasts

I wonder how girl’s bodies can really be this soft~

My dick's hard...

What should I do about it Silica?

I...I don't know

Say, just for a little bit…

Can you use your mouth down there?

but I... I promised to help Liz-san by watching her store after this

Come on, it won’t take long!

but this place, a lot of people come through here don't they?

We’ll be done by the time anyone comes!

...
Page 07:

Pina

Can you look out and warn us when people are heading this way?

Pii!

Understood

hee~ She's really well trained

Please cum quickly, okay?

Okay Okay

Wow!

It's already so hard (lit: big)

Is this just from thinking about it before? Does it hurt?

Yes, it does
Page 08:

Oha!

Silica's blowjobs are just as amazing as ever

If you keep doing it like that I'll cum really fast
Page 09:

Ahhhh,
It looks like you really are going straight for the killing blow Silica

Although it’s a little regrettable, it feels wonderful

Yes~ Today should I cum on her face or in her mouth?

It doesn’t matter now...

Uuuu~ this is the best… I shouldn’t worry about that when I’m so close to cumming

As it is now, I’m going to cum in her mouth anyways...

Silica, is it ok to cum in your mouth?

Mmm

Ah~ I'm going to cum! I'm cumming!
Page 10:

Ah, it seems someone is heading this way

Eh!?

but... but I was so close to cumming!)

It no good! We have to move!

Well then, let's just find a new place and continue there

I'm sorry, I really have to get to Liz-san's place really soon

Eh~~~

48th Floor - Lindas Town
Page 11:

Ki...

Kirito-san! Hmm

Ki...Kirito-san, ah!
Page12:

Don’t Kirito-san...

I... if I don't go soon...

You may say that but you're already dripping wet

Can you really endure going all day like this?

Please don't say such mean things like that
Page 13

(Just... Just do it fast...)

You’ll make me cum too right?

of course <3

Silica's pussy is just as soft as ever

Ki...Kirito-san...!

Don’t tease me...!

Hu...Hurry...

Please hurry and put it in me

Yes yes

Silica's switch has been completely flipped <3

It always drives Silica crazy when I rub it here like this

Okay then, I’ll put it in now <3
Page 14

Piii!

...

It.... It seems like people are coming...

Silica, let's go to an inn real fast!

Ye... Yes, let's do that!

I'm very sorry

The inn is currently full, we have no vacancies

Beep (SFX: Piron, beeping sound)

I got an email from Liz-san
Page 15

She... She seems really angry

...

Subject: Hurry up and get here!!!

Where are you!!??
I've been waiting for you this whole time!!!
At least contact me if you’re going to be late!!!!

Ah, Silica-chaaaan!

Want to go to a party with... me...

What do you want?

No... It was nothing, maybe next time...
Page 16

Liz-sa~n

We're here~

-Lisbeth's Armor Shop-

Heeey, Liz~

Where is she? She's not in the workshop either

Ah, I got another email

I run out of time so I left before you got here

I'll try to return as soon as possible, so please look after my shop until I get back

It's really dangerous of her not to lock up the place before she left~
Page 17

(SFX: Various Moaning)
Page 18

We can finally do it

yes

Well then...

Kirito-san... hurry...

Please put it in quickly

well then, you really want me to put it in?)

Yes <3

It went in~

Finally

Kirito-san's...

Kirito-san's peniiissss

Page 19:

Ki...!

Kiroto-sa...!

Kirito-san!

Not so fast!

It's too much!
Page 20:

Amaz...!

Amazing!

Silica, I'm...!

I’m going to cum soon!

Ye...

Yesss!

Please give it to me!

Do it inside me

Me too... I’m cumming too!

Together... let’s cum together!
Page 21

Byuruu (びゅるる) (Note: this one is a bit weird, Byuru is the sound for a man cumming violently. Obviously doesn’t have a direct translation, I might translate it as “*Splooge*” or something like that, but even that sounds weird)

[Red' note: I'd make this into a TL note on this page if possible, it's an amusing dojin TL trivia. Like Byuruu* with an asterix, then a note somewhere where there is space. Of around the final credits, perhaps?]

I was finally able to cum

Yes <3

You guys...
Page 22

What are you doing in someone else’s house!!!

Silica! You promised to look after my shop for me!

I'm... I'm really sorry!

Honestly, to do that in a place like this...

Something like this...
Page 23

Eh!?

Wait a minute, what are you doing?

You want to join us, don't you Liz-san?

Wha!?

Who would...!

Kirito-san! Let’s do it!

Let me go!

Do... do it...? wait a minute!!

Ah~ Sorry Liz

Wai... wait a minute...!

It seems like there is only one way to solve this situation

Hii!
Page 24

wai...

wait!

Wait a minute...!

so suddenly...!

You’re too rough...!!!

Page 25

What’s this~?

Liz-sa~n

Even though you say you don't like it, it looks to me like you’re feeling really good~
(small text: Nihihi; a type of laugh)

!!

Si...Silica... I won't forget about this!

Uuu~ I'm cumming!

Liz, I'm going to cum soon

I'm going to cum inside Liz’s pussy
Page 26

(Various moans and sounds)
Page 27

Now Liz-san should be completely satisfied too <3
(small text: now we are even)

Hey Silica, do you want to do it again?)

Sure <3

Though it's a little sudden...

you guys...

First you skip out on watching my store to fool around

And then you top it off by attacking me and selfishly cumming inside me...

huh... you're still mad?

of course I’m still mad...

Even if I wanted Silica to hold me down while Kirito wildly thrusts into me from behind, you honestly think that’s enough to make it up to me?

At this point if you don’t make this up to me I’ll kill you!

Y...yes!!
Page 28

Uah! Amazing

Silica's pussy is so tiny~

This is the first time I've seen Kirito's cock go inside like this, it really is amazing

Ah~
I’m getting close

Kirito, you’re going to cum soon?)

yeah

Then do it, cum lots and lot's inside of her <3

Hyaa!
Page 29

Liz, hold her feet

Okay~ <3

Li...Liz-san! Wa...wait...!

I'm... not while I'm still cumming...ah!

Ahaha
This is pay back from before
Page 30

Kirito!

Which pussy do you want to put it in this time?

Both!
(Small text: I'll alternate!)

I’m going to cum again!

Kirito-san!

Do it again!

Cum inside me!

Well then...! I'll shoot it into Silica again!

Yesss <3
Page 31

Kirito! I want it too~

Okay

It’s coming out <3

Kirito's semen is coming out inside me <3
Page 32

Silica, here

What’s this?

I had intended to give this to you as a thank you for watching my shop

Just take it

This is...!

It's nice right?
It's a Lisbeth special make

I don't need something like this! This is...

This is...

Eh?

This shape seems kind of familiar

The size and feel are also familiar

Fufufu,
it seems you already realized it didn't you?)

th... thanks for the gift...

You’re welcome

Just next time when I ask you to watch my shop, do it properly, okay?

Yes <3

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post Aug 1 2014, 13:34
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Really nice doujin (Silica no Usuusu na Ehon). Would love to work on this, Red.

Edit:
@dudemandude123 - That is of course, if you're not going to edit it yourself.

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QUOTE(Ser Maggot @ Aug 1 2014, 04:34) *

Really nice doujin (Silica no Usuusu na Ehon). Would love to work on this, Red.

Edit:
@dudemandude123 - That is of course, if you're not going to edit it yourself.


Nope, I'm leaving the editing of this one to the EHCOVE army (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif) This one was Red's project, I just volunteered to translate it because I really liked it.
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Gotcha. I'll begin editing as soon I got an approval. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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QUOTE(Ser Maggot @ Aug 1 2014, 18:32) *

Gotcha. I'll begin editing as soon I got an approval. (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)


You have it (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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Here are the sound effects and moans for Silica no Usuusu na Ehon 3 (https://e-hentai.org/g/721998/a6b11687d6/).

Some quick notes. I did all the sound effects in bubbles, background stuff I left alone. I can do those if you really want, but there are a lot and most don't really add much.

I don't recommend actually translating most quite a few of these since they don't really translate. Japanese has a ton of words for sounds that English dosn't have and just ends up sounding weird. I wrote down the romanji form of all of them and tried to offer some translation of explaination of what the sounds mean for most of them, but ultimately I usually end up ignoring most of the SFXs that arn't moaning sounds like Ah, Fuu, Haa, Hya, ect... However it's up to you how you want to do it.

Feel free to post or message me if you have any questions.

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Page 08

うっ... (Uu...)

ふおっ (Fuoh)

page 09

ちゅぽ (Chupo) (sucking/slurping sound)

ちゅぱ (Chupa) (another sucking/slurping sound)

じゅる (Juru) (yet another sucking/slurping sound)

ハア (Haa) (heavey breathing sound)

Page 10

ピーッ (Pii) (the sound her bird makes, like a high pitched bird noise)

んっ (Mm)

あっ (Ah)

Page 11

んっ.. (Mm...)

ふっ (fuu)

あっ (Ah)

んっ (Mm)

Page 12

ほか (hoka) (warmth, dosn't really have a translation)

んっ! (Mmm!)

はあ (Haa) (heavey breathing)

ふう (fuu) (also heavey breathing)

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は~ (Haa)

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ピー (Pii)

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んっ (Mm)

ふっ (fuu)

はあ (Haa)

んんっ (Mmm)

くちゅ (Kucha)
ぐちゃ (Gucha) (both are wetness/rubbinging noises, seen it translated as *slick*)

んむっ (Mmu/Hmmu)

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はあ (Haa)

ほか (hoka) (warmth, dosn't really have a translation)

あっ (Ah)

あああ (Ahhhh)

んんんっ (Mmmm/Hnnn)

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あっ (Ah)

あぐっ (Agu) (alt:Ugh!) (grunting noise)

ひうっ (Hiu)

ハア (Haa)

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ひぎ (Higi) (Alt: Hng)

はあ (Haa)

あっ (Ah)

ぐちゃ (Gucha) (alt: *Slick*)

ぶしゅ (bushu) (alt: Shaa or *Slap*) (a splash/splattering wetness like sound)

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はうっ (Hau!)

びゅ (Byuu)
びゅる (Byuru) (a sound of a guy cumming violent)

あふっ (Afu!) (alt: Haa!)

ん... (Mm...)

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ひいっ (Hiii)

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んっ (Mnn/Hnn)

ぐちゃ (Gucha) (alt: *Slick*)

ぶしゅ (bushu) (alt: Shaa or *Slap*) (a splash/splattering wetness like sound)

ぐしゅ (gushu) (alt: *squish*) (antother wet slapping sound)

ふう (Fuu) (alt: Haa) (heavy breathing)

ひっ (Hii)

ひぐ (Higu) (alt: Hng)

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あっ (Ah)

はあ (Haa)
は~ (Haa)

ひぎ (Higi) (Alt: Hng)

ひいっ (Hiii)

いっ (ii) (alt: Hii)

ひぐ (Higu) (alt: Hng)

ハア (Haa)

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うびゅ (Ubyu) (another cumming sound I believe)
びゅ (Byuu)
びゅる (Byuru)

ひいっ (Hiii)

あっ (Ah)

はあ (Haa)
は~ (Haa)

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はあ (Haa)

うろ (Uro~)

はあ (Haa)

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あっ (Ah)

はあ (Haa)

ひゃう (Hyaa)

びゃば (Byaah)

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ハア (Haa)

あふっ (Afu!) (alt: Haa!)

あっ (Ah)

ぶぴ (Bupi)
ぶしゅ (Bushu)
ぴゃる (Piyaru) (all various slapping/spirting/wet sounds)

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はあ (Haa)
は~ (Haa)

う~ (Uuu)

あっ (Ah)

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ふあああ (Fuaaah)

あっ (Ah)

びゅびゅ (Byubyu)
びゅる (Byuru)
びゅぷ (Byupu)
びゅ (Byuu)
ぷぴ (Pupi) (All various cummming noises, again, these don't really translate, just varoius spirting/splashing sounds really)

あっ (Ah)

あん (Ahn)

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Thanks, I can actually identify moan sounds but I agree, didn't add in all of them.
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QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Jul 30 2014, 23:41) *

I just checked at t15 has not been active on the forums at all for a month - since June 27: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showuser=822761

I send him another PM, but if he does not reply by next week, I am sorry, but even with his warnings it may take a while, disappearing for a month is too much - I will open this to new editors by Monday if he does not post here.

HerpaDerpMan, since you and Ito contacted me virtually within hours, please let me know if you want to work on this together. Otherwise, HerpaDerpMan wins by about 6 hours (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

I also asked from an update for S2 edited by Shimaryu. He is active, but we can definitely use an update here, it's been now three weeks for this project.


Neither t15 nor Shimaryu are giving any signs of life. Tough. Those editing bounties are now open to others:
Sekirei 2: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10404
RtV 4: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10181
If you want to work on a bounty, please ACCEPT it and post a note saying this here. The standard duration for an editing job is two weeks, as noted in the description. I am often nice and understanding and willing to extend deadlines, but I call a month without any response "way too much" for me.
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Sekirei 2: https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=10404
Looks like a short work. I'll handle this before taking a rest then.
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I'm gonna take a really really short break. Something came up unexpectedly that I have to deal with. It'll probably just take a day or two. Sorry about that.

Regardless, here's what I've worked with so far: [www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/5jg1f2

Editing subject to change as I reach the final version. Also, resized it for viewing purposes since it's reaching 50MB, and my internet is slow... like always.
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QUOTE(Ser Maggot @ Aug 5 2014, 10:50) *

I'm gonna take a really really short break. Something came up unexpectedly that I have to deal with. It'll probably just take a day or two. Sorry about that.

Regardless, here's what I've worked with so far: [www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/5jg1f2

Editing subject to change as I reach the final version. Also, resized it for viewing purposes since it's reaching 50MB, and my internet is slow... like always.


Hopefully you'll be back soon to pick it up. In any case, I have no problem waiting few more days, and there are still totally untouchd editing jobs in the queue (fyi, I am tagging all my editing jobs EHCOVE so they should be easy to search for).
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[St.Rio] Sekirei Hobaku Keikaku 2 is done.

[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/download/kj9nqjl1vcfb4fd/[EHCOVE]_[St.Rio]_Sekirei_Hobaku_Keikaku_2.rar
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And posted. Another series (St. Rio's 1, 2 and 3) completed by EHCOVE (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Nice job, everyone.
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Sent the files to both Red and dudemandude123. Also took note of the credit page as a TL note. But as always, I suck at humor, so...

@zam005 - I like your edit for Sekirei. Looks nice.

All St. Rio's Sekirei in just a year, huh? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

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After read through all 3 volumes, I kinda wonder whether all these stories related to each other or not.
Sometime it feels like it did but sometime it's not.

@Ser Maggot Thanks (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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