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Translation script for C85) [Studio Tar (Kyouichirou)] Gouhou! Chimikko Assassin!! (Log Horizon) for the bounty in https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11673------------------------ Page 1 ------------------------ 合法！ちみっこアサシン！！ Legal! Petite Assassin!! ------------------------ Page 2 ------------------------ 1) 「大災害」以降の悩みの一つ 食物の味の問題はひとまず解決したー。。。 One of the major problems we faced after the Catastrophe – the food having no taste – was resolved... あっ！シロエ様いらっしゃいませー♪ Oh! Welcome, Shiroe-sama~♪ 2) しかし However クレセントバーガー一つですね お待たせしました♪ Here's your Crescent Burger♪ 6) これが This is 僕達の現実（リアル）！！ our reality!! ------------------------ Page 3 ------------------------ 1) キャーッ♥ アカツキちゃん可愛いーッ♪ Squeee♥ Akatsuki-chan, you're so cuuuute! ♪ 2) さあ さあ 次はこれ！！これ着て♥ This one's next!! Come on♥ まだやるのか！？ Haven't you had enough!? SFX: ふはーっ – Yahoo! 3) 私はこんな事より少しは主君の役に立ちたいのに。。。！ I'd rather do something to aid my lord, instead of wasting my time like this...! 4) それなら In that case いいお仕事がありますわ♥ I could recommend a job that might interest you♥ ------------------------ Page 4 ------------------------ 1) アカツキさんこんいちは♪ Hi, Akatsuki-san♪ SFX: ちょこん - sitting 2) クレセントムーンの裏？ The back room of Crescent Moon? あの。。。私は何をすれば？ Um...what am I supposed to...? ん？ Hm? 3) いいの いいの アカツキちゃんはそこに座ってるだけで♥ Oh, nothing, dear. Just sit there and watch♥ 4) あ。。。あの えっと すいませーん Uh...um, hello there~ 客！？私は販売員なんて事ー Customers!? You didn't tell me I'd be a saleswoman- ------------------------ Page 5 ------------------------ 1) 見抜きいいッスか？ You mind watching us fap? 2) 見抜き？何打それは F.A.P. ...Field Action Plan? **TL note: Literally “Seeing through? What are they going to see through?”** **TL note 2: He says “minuki”, which can either mean “to fap while someone's watching” or “to see through” (a technique or strategy used by an opponent). Naturally, Akatsuki interprets it as the latter. The following lines in this panel can be altered if a more amusing alternative to “Field Action Plan” is found, since I changed them in an attempt to preserve the joke.** 技の一つ。。。？ Are they going to work on their group combat strategies...? **TL note: Literally “A technique...?”** いったい何を見抜く効果が？ What could that plan entail? **TL note: Literally “What does it see through?”** 3) もう♥ Oh, you♥ しょうがないにゃ～ いいよ Go ahead, you hornballs~ 4) で。。。では！ O...okay, then! SFX: ハア - pant 5) え！？ Wha!? 何？何をしてー Wait! What are you- SFX: ザッ - rustle ------------------------ Page 6 ------------------------ 1) うわっ！？ Good heavens!! **TL note: She actually says “whoa!”, but I suggest an old-fashioned exclamation such as this, for the sake of humor.** SFX: ヌッ – pull out 2) はあっはあっ Hah...hah... SFX: スコ - fap 3) 何を。。。っ What the...! 止めないか。。。！ Stop this at once...! 4) うおおっ見て！！ Ohhh! Look at me!! よ。。。よく見ててね Lo...look close, okay? SFX: スコ - fap 5) SFX: スコ - fap 6) もう射精。。。る！！ I'm...cumming!! SFX: びくっ - twitch 7) はいどうぞ♥ I'm all yours♥ なっ！？ Wha!? 8) はうっ！ Hau! ------------------------ Page 7 ------------------------ 1) キャッ♥ Eek!♥ **TL note: She squeals, but since it's obviously a happy squeal, it could be rendered as “whee♥” or “hey♥”, or something similar.** やっ No-! SFX: ブビュ、ビュル、ビュ - spurt 2) SFX: プル - tremble 3) き。。。っ貴様らッ You...you scoundrels! SFX: バッ – sudden movement 4) はっ！？ What!? アカツキちゃん町の中で刃物沙汰は駄目ですわ The use of weaponry is prohibited within the town, dear. ------------------------ Page 8 ------------------------ 1) クレセントムーンで食欲を満足させて次は性欲発散ー良い商売です♪ First we sate their culinary appetite, and then the sexual – it's a truly lucrative business♪ なっ！？主君はこの事を！？ What!? Does my lord know about this!? (Outside the bubbles:) ふうっ Ahh! スッキリしたぞ That was great. またバーガー食べてから来ようぜ！ Let's go eat a burger, and then we can have another go! 2) シロエ様ならー。。。 Shiroe-sama is... 3) そこで順番待ちしてますわ ...waiting for his turn, over there. 主君ーッ！？ My lord, what the hell!?4) あ。。。いや僕はただー Uh...well, I just heard- 5) ここに臭いオッパイが居ると聞いて -that there's a pair of smelly boobs here. おぱんつの臭い立つおっぱい熟女が居ると聞いて！ -that there's a mature woman with smelly panties here! 洗ってない猫の臭いのする関西女性が居ると聞いてにゃ♥ -that there's an unwashed, Kansai-ben-speaking woman who smells like a cat, meow♥ (outside) 放蕩者茶会（デボーシェリ・ティーパーティー）のメンバーは Is everyone in the Debauchery Tea Party 変態ばかりなのか！？ a complete deviant!? 6) マリエなら蠅集ってたので風呂に放り込んできましたが？ If you mean Marie, she was attracting flies, so I threw her into the bath. 余計な事しやがって！！！ Thanks a lot, dammit!!! ------------------------ Page 9 ------------------------ 1) あっ にゃん太さんにになさんもいらっしゃいませ！ Oh! Hello everyone~ Nyanta-san! 2) コスコス *fap fap* どうぞ ススキので助けて頂いたお礼に I'll give you a lot of extra service, 大サービスしちゃいます♥ as thanks for saving me at Susukino♥ 3) こーんな事も♥ Like this♥ SFX: レロ - lick 4) それは良いにゃ That sounds wonderful, meow. セララさんの舌技はハイレベルですにゃ！ Your tongue has been through some heavy powerleveling, meow! 5) それはにゃん太さんの毎晩の特訓のおかげです～♥ Thanks to your nightly training schedule~♥ いやいや セララさんに素質があったのにゃ 我輩は少しお手伝いしただけにゃ♥ No, no. You had plenty of talent to begin with, I just gave you a little push, meow♥ ------------------------ Page 10 ------------------------ 1) えーと つまり。。。 So what you're saying is... 2) 班長は拾った少女に毎日ペロペロと？ You've been enjoying her tongue every day since you picked her up? そうにゃ Yes, meow. ご奉仕させていたと？ She's been “servicing” you? そうだにゃ Yes, meow. レベルが上がるほど？ Enough for her level to rise? そうにゃ♥ Yes, meow♥ (outside) いい子だにゃ！ She's such a good girl, meow! 3) ニャーニャー言えば何でも許されると思うなよ！！この糞猫！！！ You think I'll forgive you if you add -meow to everything, you damn stray!!? 糞ネ。。。っ！？急にどうしたにゃ！？シロエち怖いにゃ！！！ Stray..!? What's wrong, Shiroe-chi!? You're scaring me, meow!!! 次にニャー言ったら退場な If I hear that meow ONE more time. 。。。ッ！？ ...!? SFX: びくっ - twitch 4) まあ待てよ シロ お前はムッツリでいけないな！ Hold on, Shiro. You shouldn't be such a closet pervert! その点俺はオープンだぜ Look at how open I am. 直継 Naotsugu- 5) おぱんつおくれーっ！！！ Gimme panties!!! ------------------------ Page 11 ------------------------ 1) SFX: にこっ！ - smile 2) ふふ Hehe! そんな事でいいんですか？ That's all? SFX: スル。。。 - rustle 3) はい♥ Here you go♥ SFX: ほか - warm 4) うおおおおッ！！！ Whoooooah!!! 5) 今日はおぱんつ祭りだぜェッ！！！ Today's a pantyfest, baby!!! ちょっ直継ー！？ Wait, what!? SFX: ばんじゃーい♪ - Banjai♪ ダッ - dash ------------------------ Page 12 ------------------------ 1) じゃあシロエさんお礼にイイコトちちゃいますね♥ Okay then, Shiroe-san, shall I "thank" you too?♥ 2) SFX: キュッ - grab 3) アカツキ！？ Akatsuki!? 。。。待て ...Wait. 4) 主君の世話は付き従うわ。。。私の仕事だ！ Caring for my lord's needs is my...my job as his follower! 私は大災害当初男の身体だった 扱い方は心得ているぞ！ I spent some time as a man after the Catastrophe, so I know how to handle a male body! 5) にゃん？アカツキさんは男の身体の時に色々お試しになられたと言う事かにゃ？ Purr? Are you saying you... “experimented” with your male body? あ。。。！いやっ Ah...! No! (outside the panel) 男の姿ではアレなので。。。 It would ruin the mood to draw her as a man, so... SFX: ビュッ、ビュル - spurt ------------------------ Page 13 ------------------------ 1) じゃあ我輩はー In that case, セララさんをいただきますにゃ♥ I'll have some fun with Serara-san♥ きゃっ Oh! 2) あんっ Ahn! SFX: ぴくっ - twitch ポロン - bounce 3) やっぱりにゃん太さんの猫舌気持ち良い♥ Your cat tongue feels wonderful♥ SFX: レロ - lick 4) セララさんのムネはプニッとしてて美味しいですにゃ♥ And your breasts are bouncy and delicious, my dear♥ んんっ Mm! 私 プヨプヨちゃんで恥ずかしいです～♥ I'm a bit pudgy, aren't I? I'm so embarrassed~♥ SFX: ちゅ♥、ちゅぷっ♥ - suck オオ - cheering 5) ムッ Hmph! 6) 痛てっ！何するの！？アカツー。。。 Ow! What-!? Akatsuk... SFX: どんっ - shove ------------------------ Page 14 ------------------------ 1) ッ！？ !? SFX: ムグッ！- Mmf! 2) 無礼を許せ主君 Pardon my rudeness, my lord. 恩義を返す為だ！ I must repay my debt to you! 3) 主君のは私が世話するとい。。。言ったろう I said I would c...care for your needs, did I not? すべて任せてほしい！！ Please, leave it all to me!! SFX: ドキ - thump 4) SFX: ズリッ - pull 6) これが主君の！！！ Is this my lord's...!!! シロエのちんぽＬｖ．１ Shiroe's dick – Lv.1 研磨 Ｌｖ．９０ Grinding Lv.90 床磨き Ｌｖ．９０ Tatami Polishing Lv.90 **TL note: This most likely means he humps the bed/tatami when masturbating. Which is often, apparently.** 装備 Equipment 特殊 Skills SFX: ボロン - bounce ------------------------ Page 15 ------------------------ 1) レベル１だって！？ Level 1!? 本体はレベル９０なのに。。。？ But the guy himself is Level 90... 主君を馬鹿にするなァッ！ Quit running your mouths about my lord!! 研磨レベル９０ってどんだけ？ How much did he grind to reach Level 90? 腹黒メガネは床派か。。。！！ So the Devil in Glasses is a tatami guy...!? SFX: ザワ - chatter 2) で。。。ではいいか主君 W...with your permission, my lord. こんな。。。感じか？ Am I...doing it right? SFX: スッ - rub 3) むぐっ Mgh! SFX: ぴくっ - twitch 4) んっ Mm! 5) はあ Haah はあ Haah 大災害の時にした自分のと何か。。。感じが違う It feels somehow...different from the one I had during the Catastrophe. SFX: シュコ - stroke 6) 先からすごい汁が。。。これで気持ち良いのか。。。主君？ Juice is leaking from the tip...are you enjoying it...my lord? SFX: ヌル。。。 - wet ------------------------ Page 16 ------------------------ 1) アカツキのおま。。。おま。。。ッおまん。。。！！！ Akatsuki's pu...pu...pus...!!! SFX: ふーっ - huff 2) 主君の息であそこが。。。 My lord is breathing onto my... じゅく♥ (SFX: wet♥) 熱。。。い！！ It's...hot!! 3) はあっ Haah! はっ Hah! あっ Ah! んふーっ (twice) Mmph! SFX: シュコ - stroke ビクッ - twitch 4) あ。。。っ何か主君の Ah...my lord's member... SFX: くちゅっ - schlick 5) はあっ (twice) Haah! 6) お。。。美味しそう it looks...so delicious! あ。。。ふぁっ Ah...mph! SFX: レロオ - liiick ------------------------ Page 17 ------------------------ 1) あっ Ah! SFX: びくっ - twitch ブビュルルッ - spuuurt 2) 。。。すごい ...That is 主君こんなに。。。 quite an impressive amount... SFX: ドロ。。。 - drip 3) SFX: ふはーっ – Phew~ 4) SFX: スン - sniff 5) ーこれが主君の臭い ...So this is my lord's smell... SFX: ドキ - thump 6) 主。。。君の味ー。。。 My...my lord's taste... あっ。。。味があるのか。。。 Ah...it actually has a taste... 素材扱い。。。いうあコマンドではなく私がこの手で絞り出した。。。から？ Is it being treated as an ingredient...because I squeezed it out by hand, instead of using a command...? SFX: くちゅっ、ちゅる、ちゅぐっ – sucking sounds ------------------------ Page 18 ------------------------ 1) ーそれならば Then- 主君。。。 My lord... 与えられた任務は。。。必ず果たすのが忍だー。。。 A shinobi carries out her mission...to the very end... 2) ここならもっと美味しく？ could it be that it'll taste even better this way? さ。。。最後まで！ T...the very end! SFX: くちゅっ - schlick 3) フンドシ娘きたぁああああっ！ Fundoshi, fuck yeah! SFX: オオオオ - cheering 4) だから直継のぱんつ発言に嫌悪していたのか。。。 So this is why you hate it when Naotsugu talks about panties... 違うと思う You might be wrong about that. **TL note: Since this line doesn't sound as amusing in English, I believe we can take a few liberties with it. Something like "Dude, NO." or "No, genius" may sound more natural.** ------------------------ Page 19 ------------------------ 1) んっ♥ Mm♥ SFX: ゴクン - gulp 2) えー？ Huh? 本番も有りですかー♥ We can go all the way, too~?♥ これはこれは その様ですにゃ♥ Well, well. It seems we can, meow♥ 3) じゃあ私も久々に。。。 I guess I can... 4) みーなさーん♪ Gentlemen~♪ 5) ご一緒に♪ Will you join us?♪ 食べ散らかしちゃいますね♥ gorge myself once in a while♥ SFX: ピラッ - flip ------------------------ Page 20 ------------------------ 1) やさしくだぞ。。。主君 Be gentle...my lord... 痛く。。。したら衛兵が来てしまうかも知れないから。。。な？ If you hurt me...the Royal Guard might appear... 2) ハハッそうだね Haha, you're right. 確かに She has a point... 3) はあ (twice) Haah 現実（リアル）じゃまるで犯罪だこれ！？ This would be a crime IRL!! 4) こんな小さいのに挿入る。。。のか？ Can it even fit in such a tiny...hole? SFX: グッ - push 5) はっ Hah! ぁああっ！！ ...aAAH!! 6) SFX: ズヌヌヌ - slide ------------------------ Page 21 ------------------------ 1) ふぁっ！？ Fwah!? SFX: びくっ - twitch ブビュ、ビュルル - spurt 2) 。。。これがリア。。。ル！？ Is this...reality...!? お。。。おおっ Oh...ooh! んっ Mm! SFX: ビクッ、ビクン - twitch 3) ごめんアカツキ！いきなり射精てー。。。 I'm sorry! I came right away... SFX: キュッ - tighten 4) こ。。。これで私は主君の鞘だ I...I am now your scabbard, my lord. いつでも刃を収めていいんだぞ？ You may enter me whenever you desire. 5) 何度でも♥ As many times as you wish♥ SFX: ビキ - harden ------------------------ Page 22 ------------------------ 1) あっ Ah! ぁあっ Aah! 主君 これはすご。。。い♥ My lord...you're amazing♥ SFX: ズヌッ - slide びくっ - twitch 2) おおっ激しいねぇ Ohh, dude's going all out. 大好きホールドだとォ？ Is this the “I love you” hold? 3) もう！ Hey! よそ見は駄目ですよ♥ Don't look away now♥ SFX: キュッ♥ - grip ------------------------ Page 23 ------------------------ 1) ちゃーんと私に集中して下さい♥ Focus on me, okay?♥ SFX: ブビュッ、ビュル、ビュブ - spurt 2) ふぁああっ しゅ。。。主君！！ Fwaaaah! My...lord!! ま。。。またッ♥ I...I'm...!♥ SFX: びくっ - twitch ビュプッ - squirt ビュー - spurt ------------------------ Page 24 ------------------------ 1) SFX: はっ - pant 2) はあ (thrice) Haah 。。。こんなに ...Look at this mess you made しょうがないにゃ♥ You hornballs♥ SFX: ブビュッ、ビュルッ、ビュッ、ビュルル - spurt 3) 翌日 The next day 4) 気がついたら大神殿に居たよ So yeah, I woke up at the Cathedral. 直継！！それって死ぬまで！？ Naotsugu!! He kept going until he died!? どんだけパンツ好きなんだにゃ！？ How obsessed is he with panties, meow!? レベル９０を倒すパンツ。。。 Panties that can defeat a Level 90... (outside the bubbles) 売れる！ It will sell! ------------------------ Page 25 ------------------------ 狂一郎です ログ・ホラ おもしろいです！ しかし、アカツキの 服どうなってるのか よくわからない とりあえずおっぱい見せようと 脱がしてみたら これまた よくわからん姿に なってしまった。 でわ また。 This is Kyouichirou. Log Horizon was great! I'm not sure what the deal is with Akatsuki's clothes, though, so I tried taking them off to show her boobs, but it got even more complicated. Anyway, see you around. ・奥付・ Publication data ２０１３．１２．３１ 初版 Date of release: December 31st, 2013 発行 スタジオた～ Publishing: Studio Tar 発行者 狂一郎 Publisher: Kyouichirou ＨＰ Homepage メール E-mail address 印刷 スズトウシャドウ印刷様 Printing: Suzutoushadou Printing １８歳未満の方の購読・貸出しを禁止します。 無断転載・無断配布・無断アップロードを禁止します。 Reading and lending is prohibited for those under 18 years of age. Reprinting, distributing or uploading without permission is strictly prohibited. |
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Oct 29 2015, 06:06
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Oct 29 2015, 11:26
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QUOTE(CapableScoutMan @ Oct 27 2015, 16:16)  Translation script for C85) [Studio Tar (Kyouichirou)] Gouhou! Chimikko Assassin!! (Log Horizon) for the bounty in https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=11673I read through it and didn't find anything wrong. |
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Oct 30 2015, 17:26
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Translation script for [Fujidana (Fujito)] Otome no Before After (Mai-Otome)----------------- Page 1 ----------------- 乙女のビフォーアフター Otome Before-After ----------------- Page 2 ----------------- 「パンチラ アリカさん」 “Arika-san's pantyshot” ガルデローベの制服で、元気よく跳ねまわるアリカさんです。うっすらと下着ごしに陰毛らしき翳りが見えます 。 Here we have Arika-san, energetically hopping around in her Garderobe uniform. A hint of pubic hair can be gleaned through her underwear. ----------------- Page 3 ----------------- 「ニナちゃん最悪の日」 “Nina-chan's worst day” プールで縮手に襲われるニナちゃんです。体中の敏感なところをまさぐられて痴態を晒し、人生最悪の日とぼや いてました。 Nina-chan being assaulted by tentacles in the pool. She complained that it was the worst day of her life, with the tentacles groping every sensitive spot in her body and humiliating her. ----------------- Page 4 ----------------- 「お化粧マシロきゅん」 “Mashiro-kyun's makeup” **TL note: -kyun is a cutesy version of -kun, which fits since he's a trap.** 未だに女装に慣れないマシロくんです。下着ももちろん女もの。しかもマシロ姫のお古を使用しているので、な んだかドキドキしてます。 Mashiro-kun still hasn't gotten used to crossdressing. His underwear is, of course, a girl's; Princess Mashiro's hand-me-down, in fact, which has gotten him somewhat excited. ----------------- Page 5 ----------------- 「ブルマジュリエット」 “Bloomer Juliet” 体育の授業中に雨に降られ、ぐっしょりのジュリエットさんです。透け具合からすると、どうやらノーブラらし いです。 During gym class, it suddenly started to rain, and Juliet-san got drenched. Looking at her semi-transparent shirt, we can see that she's not wearing a bra. ----------------- Page 6 ----------------- 「シズルさんの着替え」 “Shizuru-san, changing” 何の変哲もない、ガルデローベで着替えるシズルさんですが、実はこれは盗撮写真です。バックステージで高額 取引されてます。 A regular photo of Shizuru-san changing. What's special about it is that it was actually taken secretly. One can find them backstage, for a high price. ----------------- Page 7 ----------------- 「学長ヒッチハイク」 “Hitchhiking headmaster” エアリーズ共和国への道中、ヒッチハイクをする学長さんです。何人ものドライバーに股間を晒したあげく、よ うやく一台止まってくれました。 The headmaster, hitchhiking on her way to the Republic of Aries. After she exposed her nether regions to multiple drivers, one of them finally picked her up. ----------------- Page 8 ----------------- 『ミドリちゃんのパンツ」 “Midori-chan's panties” 2) どうした頭領？ What's wrong, boss? 替えのパンツが無い I don't have any spare panties. SFX: パチ - crackle 3) だがこの下着も連続で三日目。。。 I've been wearing this pair for three days... まだ穿けると思うか？ You think I can still wear them? 4) ど～れどれ？ Let me see... おっと！臭いフェチのワシを忘れるな Hey, let the smell fetishist have a whiff. 5) SFX: モワー - waft 6) 鼻の無い人々 They don't have noses 7) そんなことよりパパイヤの根はボイルできたのかい？ Never mind that, did you boil those papaya roots? ----------------- Page 9 ----------------- 「ソワールの朝」 “Soir's morning” 1) アカネ・ソワールの朝は早い Akane Soir always wakes up early. 2) ―フロリンス王は手コキ派マゾですから ---The king of Florence is a masochist with a thing for handjobs, so おきて～ Wakey wakey~ そう言ってしごき起こすソワールさんはどこか満足げだ with those words, Soir-san always strokes him awake. She appears to be satisfied with that. 3) こっちはおきてる～ You're already awake down here~ 4) おは～ Morning~ SFX: しゅっ - stroke 5) SFX: ガリッ - scrape 6) ぁ。。。ああっ！！ ah...AAH!! SFX: ビュビュ – spurt spurt 7) 上もおきた The upper half woke up. ----------------- Page 10 ----------------- 「アーミテージ准将のオトメの核心部」 Brigadier General Armitage's Otome Core 1) うじ虫ども！貴様等童貞犬に准将閣下が直々にオトメの何たるかを披露して下さる！ Pay attention, maggots! The Brigadier General herself will show you filthy virgins what an Otome is! 傾注！！ Eyes open!! 2) では准将閣下お願い致します！！ Brigadier General, if you will!! SFX: パン - slap 3) SFX: スー - inhale 4) SFX: バッ – sudden movement 5) SFX: スルッ - rustle 6) SFX: ガバッ - spread 7) よおし！！包茎下げっ！！マスかきはじめっ！！ Men!! Drop your pants!! Commence masturbation!! SFX: ビュッ - spurt ----------------- Page 11 ----------------- 「レナさんのたまご」 “Rena-san's ova” 1) ようこそジョン・スミスのオトメ研究所へ Welcome to John Smith's Otome research laboratory. 皆さんはオトメのローブが何なのかご存知ですか？ Do you know what an Otome's Robe is? 2) 細かく説明すれば ← 参照 For a detailed explanation, see here ← (reference) しかし、まあ要するに To put it simply, though 3) ローブとは！ A Robe! オトメの卵子の変異体なのですよ！ だからこそ！ Is a mutated form of an Otome's ovum! Therefore! 4) 精液で容易くマテリアライズ不可となるのです Their ability to Materialize can be neutralized with just a bit of semen. 5) 受精廃棄処分！ （うっ！） Fertilization and disposal! (Ugh!) SFX: ビュッ - spurt 6) ジョ～ン・スミスでした！ Brought to you by John Smith! SFX: チャラララチャチャチャチャー – commercial-like jingle (ta-da-da-dah or something like that) ----------------- Page 12 ----------------- 「ザーメントリガーアリカ」 “Semen Trigger Arika” 1) オッツー！！アリカ・ユメミヤです！ Sup!! I'm Yumemiya Arika! ガルデローベ中退の元コーラルオトメだよ♪ I used to be a Coral Otome at Garderobe, but I dropped out♪ SFX: ドン – boom (shocking appearance) 2) ＤＱＮ６人のレイプでロストバージン以来男性経験数百人！！ I lost my virginity when six guys raped me, and I've experienced hundreds more since then!! Icky, huh? SFX: ボタボタ - drip 3) SFX: モア - waft 4) SFX: ゴッ - gulp 5) 好物！ザーメン！！ I love cum!! SFX: カッ – sudden exhaling ----------------- Page 13 ----------------- 「タトゥーアリカさん」 “Arika-san, tattooed” 一年後、ストリップバーではしゃぐアリカさんです。どうやら、ナオ先輩に連れて行かれたＤＱＮスポットには まり、ガルデローベを中退になってしまったようです。足のタトゥーは男子の中絶回数をあらわしてます。女の 子だったら産んで、乙ーＨｉＭＥの夢を託すつもりだったそうですが。。。 Arika-san, enjoying herself in a strip club a year later. It appears she got addicted to it when Nao-senpai took her there, and ended up dropping out of Garderobe. The tattoos on her leg show the number of boys she's aborted. If she ends up with a girl, however, she plans to raise her and entrust her with her dreams of becoming an Otome... ----------------- Page 14 ----------------- 「ニナちゃん最良の日」 “Nina-chan's most wonderful day” ハルモニウムの事件の後、捕らえられて凌辱の日々を送っていたニナちゃんです。それでも一応王族ですので、 臨月間近の今日は肉棒をしゃぶるだけで牢に戻してもらえました 人生最良の日だとひそかに感謝しています。 After the Harmonium incident, Nina-chan has been imprisoned and constantly violated. She's still royalty, though, so for the last days of her pregnancy they've only been violating her mouth. She secretly feels that it's the most wonderful day of her life. ----------------- Page 15 ----------------- 「男娼 マシロきゅん」 “Mashiro-kyun, prostituting himself” ヴィンドブルームの経済を立て直すため、各国首脳のベッドを渡り歩くマシロくんです。変態揃いの王族達に嬲 られて少々やつれましたが、最近ようやく肛虐の快感を覚えはじめ、これで楽になれそうです。 In order to rebuild Windbloom's economy, Mashiro-kun has been spending time in the beds of various countries' leaders. His torment in the hands of the often-perverted royalty has left him thinner and worn out, but lately he's started to enjoy the anal tyranny he's always subjected to, so things may be looking up for him. ----------------- Page 16 ----------------- 「ポニーガール ジュリエット」 “Pony girl Juliet” 五柱に選ばれず、代わりに某辺境国の乙ーＨｉＭＥに選ばれたジュリエットさん。そこは、国外には秘密でした が、徹底的に男尊女卑の国で、ジュリエットさんもまた例外ではなく人馬あつかいを受けました。今日も明日も 、領主様を乗せて馬車を引きます。 Juliet-san ended up not being chosen as one of the Five Pillars, and became the Otome for a certain remote country. Unbeknownst to outsiders, however, that country was extremely chauvinistic, and the treatment she received was no better, being treated as nothing but a horse. Today we see her pulling the feudal lord's cart, just as she will tomorrow. ----------------- Page 17 ----------------- 「シズルさん 拷問の日々」 “Shizuru-san's daily torture” アルタイ公国に捕らえられ、抵抗の気力を殺ぐために徹底的に拷問されるシズルさんです。五体満足で、膣内射 精さえしなければ何をしても良いと言われてます。 Held prisoner in the Principality of Artai, Shizuru-san is constantly and heavily tortured, in order to stifle her resistance. Bound hand and foot, it's said that aside from intravaginal ejaculation, one can do anything to her. ----------------- Page 18 ----------------- 「学長 尻セックス」 “The headmaster having anal sex” ヒッチハイクで一台止まってくれたのは良いのですが、目的地には行ってくれず、学長さんはどこかの屋敷の地 下に監禁されてしまいました。どうか乙ーＨｉＭＥの資格だけは奪わないでくれと懇願する学長さんの願いに応 え、尻の穴を徹底調教。おかげで放屁でサックスを吹く芸を身につけることができました。 The car that stopped and picked up the Headmaster never took her to her destination. Instead, she's being held prisoner in a certain estate's basement. In response to her pleas not to be robbed of her qualifications as an Otome, they instead violate her anus. Because of that, she's now able to play the saxophone by farting. ----------------- Page 19 ----------------- 「お祭りアリカさん」 “Arika-san at the festival” ヴィンドブルーム名物のフンドシ水かけ祭りに参加する在りし日のアリカさんです。はだけた胸や日焼けあとが 群衆の目を引いたそうです。 A nostalgic photo of Arika-san, taking part in Windbloom's famous Fundoshi Splashing Festival. It seems her exposed chest and tanlines attracted everyone's attention. (Arika's ribbon) ガルデローベ Garderobe (Photo frame) ヴィンドマツリで At the Wind Festival ―あとがき― Postscript ずいぶん遅くなりましたが、Ｃ７０でプレビュー版だったブツを、完全版として出すことができるようです。そ れにしても、アニメ塗りとは気持ちの良いものですねえ。作業スピードだけではない、アニメの魅力の一つだと 思いました。 アニメ万歳！ It took me far longer than it should have, but I'm finally releasing the complete version of the work I previewed in C70. Anime-like coloring is wonderful, isn't it? Not only does it take relatively little time, but it also emphasizes one of the charms of the anime artform. Anime banzai! 藤渡 Fujito ----------------- Page 20 ----------------- 成人向 Adults only 藤棚 Fujidana This post has been edited by CapableScoutMan: Oct 30 2015, 17:27 |
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Oct 30 2015, 20:52
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Vilis
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Changes from the original are marked with red, deleted text is marked with a strikethrough. QUOTE(CapableScoutMan @ Oct 30 2015, 17:26) Translation script for [Fujidana (Fujito)] Otome no Before After (Mai-Otome)----------------- Page 1 ----------------- 乙女のビフォーアフター Otome Before-After ----------------- Page 2 ----------------- 「パンチラ アリカさん」 “Arika-san's pantyshot” ガルデローベの制服で、元気よく跳ねまわるアリカさんです。うっすらと下着ごしに陰毛らしき翳りが見えます 。 Here we have Arika-san, energetically hopping around in her Garderobe uniform. A hint of pubic hair can be gleamed through her underwear. ----------------- Page 3 ----------------- 「ニナちゃん最悪の日」 “Nina-chan's worst day” プールで縮手に襲われるニナちゃんです。体中の敏感なところをまさぐられて痴態を晒し、人生最悪の日とぼや いてました。 Nina-chan being assaulted by tentacles in the pool. She complained that it was the worst day of her life, with the tentacles groping every sensitive spot in her body and humiliating her. ----------------- Page 4 ----------------- 「お化粧マシロきゅん」 “Mashiro-kyun's makeup” **TL note: -kyun is a cutesy version of -kun, which fits since he's a trap.** 未だに女装に慣れないマシロくんです。下着ももちろん女もの。しかもマシロ姫のお古を使用しているので、な んだかドキドキしてます。 Mashiro-kun still hasn't gotten used to crossdressing. His underwear is, of course, a girl's; Princess Mashiro's hand-me-down, in fact, which has gotten him somewhat excited. ----------------- Page 5 ----------------- 「ブルマジュリエット」 “Bloomer Juliet” 体育の授業中に雨に降られ、ぐっしょりのジュリエットさんです。透け具合からすると、どうやらノーブラらし いです。 During gym class, it suddenly started to rain, and Juliet-san got drenched. Looking at her semi-transparent shirt, we can see that she's not wearing a bra. ----------------- Page 6 ----------------- 「シズルさんの着替え」 “Shizuru-san, changing” 何の変哲もない、ガルデローベで着替えるシズルさんですが、実はこれは盗撮写真です。バックステージで高額 取引されてます。 A regular photo of Shizuru-san changing. What's special about it is that it was actually taken secretly. One can find them backstage, for a high price. ----------------- Page 7 ----------------- 「学長ヒッチハイク」 “Hitchhiking headmaster” エアリーズ共和国への道中、ヒッチハイクをする学長さんです。何人ものドライバーに股間を晒したあげく、よ うやく一台止まってくれました。 The headmaster, hitchhiking on her way to the Republic of Aries. After she exposed her nether regions to multiple drivers, one of them finally picked her up. ----------------- Page 8 ----------------- 『ミドリちゃんのパンツ」 “Midori-chan's panties” 2) どうした頭領？ What's wrong, boss? 替えのパンツが無い I don't have any spare panties. SFX: パチ - crackle 3) だがこの下着も連続で三日目。。。 I've been wearing this pair for three days... まだ穿けると思うか？ You think I can still wear them? 4) ど～れどれ？ Let me see... おっと！臭いフェチのワシを忘れるな Hey, let the smell fetishist have a whiff. 5) SFX: モワー - waft 6) 鼻の無い人々 They don't have noses 7) そんなことよりパパイヤの根はボイルできたのかい？ Never mind that, did you boil those papaya roots? ----------------- Page 9 ----------------- 「ソワールの朝」 “Soir's morning” 1) アカネ・ソワールの朝は早い Akane Soir always wakes up early. 2) ―フロリンス王は手コキ派マゾですから ---The king of Florence is a masochist with a thing for handjobs, so おきて～ Wakey wakey~ そう言ってしごき起こすソワールさんはどこか満足げだ with those words, Soir-san always strokes him awake. She appears to be satisfied with that. 3) こっちはおきてる～ You're already awake down here~ 4) おは～ Morning~ SFX: しゅっ - stroke 5) SFX: ガリッ - scrape 6) ぁ。。。ああっ！！ ah...AAH!! SFX: ビュビュ – spurt spurt 7) 上もおきた The upper half woke up. ----------------- Page 10 ----------------- 「アーミテージ准将のオトメの核心部」 Brigadier General Armitage's Otome Core 1) うじ虫ども！貴様等童貞犬に准将閣下が直々にオトメの何たるかを披露して下さる！ Pay attention, maggots! The Brigadier General herself will show you filthy virgins what an Otome is! 傾注！！ Eyes open!! 2) では准将閣下お願い致します！！ Brigadier General, if you will!! SFX: パン - slap 3) SFX: スー - inhale 4) SFX: バッ – sudden movement 5) SFX: スルッ - rustle 6) SFX: ガバッ - spread 7) よおし！！包茎下げっ！！マスかきはじめっ！！ Men!! Drop your pants!! Commence masturbation!! SFX: ビュッ - spurt ----------------- Page 11 ----------------- 「レナさんのたまご」 “Rena-san's ova” 1) ようこそジョン・スミスのオトメ研究所へ Welcome to John Smith's Otome research laboratory. 皆さんはオトメのローブが何なのかご存知ですか？ Do you know what an Otome's Robe is? 2) 細かく説明すれば ← 参照 For a detailed explanation, see here ← (reference) しかし、まあ要するに To put it simply, though 3) ローブとは！ A Robe! オトメの卵子の変異体なのですよ！ だからこそ！ Is a mutated form of an Otome's ovum! Therefore! 4) 精液で容易くマテリアライズ不可となるのです Their ability to Materialize can be neutralized with just a bit of semen. 5) 受精廃棄処分！ （うっ！） Fertilization and disposal! (Ugh!) SFX: ビュッ - spurt 6) ジョ～ン・スミスでした！ Brought to you by John Smith! SFX: チャラララチャチャチャチャー – commercial-like jingle (ta-da-da-dah or something like that) ----------------- Page 12 ----------------- 「ザーメントリガーアリカ」 “Semen Trigger Arika” 1) オッツー！！アリカ・ユメミヤです！ Sup!! I'm Yumemiya Arika! ガルデローベ中退の元コーラルオトメだよ♪ I used to be a Coral Otome at Garderobe, but I dropped out♪ SFX: ドン – boom (shocking appearance) 2) ＤＱＮ６人のレイプでロストバージン以来男性経験数百人！！ I lost my virginity when six guys raped me, and I've experienced hundreds more since then!! Icky, huh? SFX: ボタボタ - drip 3) SFX: モア - waft 4) SFX: ゴッ - gulp 5) 好物！ザーメン！！ I love cum!! SFX: カッ – sudden exhaling ----------------- Page 13 ----------------- 「タトゥーアリカさん」 “Arika-san, tattooed” 一年後、ストリップバーではしゃぐアリカさんです。どうやら、ナオ先輩に連れて行かれたＤＱＮスポットには まり、ガルデローベを中退になってしまったようです。足のタトゥーは男子の中絶回数をあらわしてます。女の 子だったら産んで、乙ーＨｉＭＥの夢を託すつもりだったそうですが。。。 Arika-san, enjoying herself in a strip club a year later. It appears she got addicted to it when Nao-senpai took her there, and ended up dropping out of Garderobe. The tattoos on her leg show the number of boys she's aborted. If she ends up with a girl, however, she plans to raise her and entrust her with her dreams of becoming an Otome... ----------------- Page 14 ----------------- 「ニナちゃん最良の日」 “Nina-chan's most wonderful day” ハルモニウムの事件の後、捕らえられて凌辱の日々を送っていたニナちゃんです。それでも一応王族ですので、 臨月間近の今日は肉棒をしゃぶるだけで牢に戻してもらえました 人生最良の日だとひそかに感謝しています。 After the Harmonium incident, Nina-chan has been imprisoned and constantly violated. She's still royalty, though, so for the last days of her pregnancy they've only been violating her mouth. She secretly feels that it's the most wonderful day of her life. ----------------- Page 15 ----------------- 「男娼 マシロきゅん」 “Mashiro-kyun, prostituting himself” ヴィンドブルームの経済を立て直すため、各国首脳のベッドを渡り歩くマシロくんです。変態揃いの王族達に嬲 られて少々やつれましたが、最近ようやく肛虐の快感を覚えはじめ、これで楽になれそうです。 In order to rebuild Windbloom's economy, Mashiro-kun has been spending time in the beds of various countries' leaders. His torment in the hands of the often-perverted royalty has left him thinner and worn out, but lately he's started to enjoy the anal tyranny he's always subjected to, so things may be looking up for him. ----------------- Page 16 ----------------- 「ポニーガール ジュリエット」 “Pony girl Juliet” 五柱に選ばれず、代わりに某辺境国の乙ーＨｉＭＥに選ばれたジュリエットさん。そこは、国外には秘密でした が、徹底的に男尊女卑の国で、ジュリエットさんもまた例外ではなく人馬あつかいを受けました。今日も明日も 、領主様を乗せて馬車を引きます。 Juliet-san ended up not being chosen as one of the Five Pillars, and became the Otome for a certain remote country. Unbeknownst to outsiders, however, that country was extremely chauvinistic, and the treatment she received was no better, being treated as nothing but a horse. Today we see her pulling the feudal lord's cart, just as she will tomorrow. ----------------- Page 17 ----------------- 「シズルさん 拷問の日々」 “Shizuru-san's daily torture” アルタイ公国に捕らえられ、抵抗の気力を殺ぐために徹底的に拷問されるシズルさんです。五体満足で、膣内射 精さえしなければ何をしても良いと言われてます。 Held prisoner in the Principality of Artai, Shizuru-san is constantly and heavily tortured, in order to stifle her resistance. Bound hand and foot, it's said that aside from intravaginal ejaculation, one can do anything to her. ----------------- Page 18 ----------------- 「学長 尻セックス」 “The headmaster having anal sex” ヒッチハイクで一台止まってくれたのは良いのですが、目的地には行ってくれず、学長さんはどこかの屋敷の地 下に監禁されてしまいました。どうか乙ーＨｉＭＥの資格だけは奪わないでくれと懇願する学長さんの願いに応 え、尻の穴を徹底調教。おかげで放屁でサックスを吹く芸を身につけることができました。 The car that stopped and picked up the Headmaster never took her to her destination. Instead, she's being held prisoner in a certain estate's basement. In response to her pleas not to be robbed of her qualifications as an Otome, they instead violate her anus. Because of that, she's now able to play the saxophone by farting. ----------------- Page 19 ----------------- 「お祭りアリカさん」 “Arika-san at the festival” ヴィンドブルーム名物のフンドシ水かけ祭りに参加する在りし日のアリカさんです。はだけた胸や日焼けあとが 群衆の目を引いたそうです。 A nostalgic photo of Arika-san, taking part in Windbloom's famous Fundoshi Splashing Festival. It seems her exposed chest and tanlines attracted everyone's attention. (Arika's ribbon) ガルデローベ Garderobe (Photo frame) ヴィンドマツリで At the Wind Festival ―あとがき― Postscript ずいぶん遅くなりましたが、Ｃ７０でプレビュー版だったブツを、完全版として出すことができるようです。そ れにしても、アニメ塗りとは気持ちの良いものですねえ。作業スピードだけではない、アニメの魅力の一つだと 思いました。 アニメ万歳！ It took me far longer than it should have, but I'm finally releasing the complete version of the work I previewed in C70. Anime-like coloring is wonderful, isn't it? Not only does it take relatively little time, but it also emphasizes one of the charms of the anime artform. Anime banzai! 藤渡 Fujito ----------------- Page 20 ----------------- 成人向 Adults only 藤棚 Fujidana |
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Oct 31 2015, 16:06
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CapableScoutMan
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Translation script for [DIOGENES CLUB (Haikawa Hemlen)] Otome no Hon 2---------------- Page 1 ---------------- オトメノホン 準備号２ Otome book – preparation chapter 2 ---------------- Page 2 ---------------- ジュリエット・ナオ・チャン Juliet Nao Zhang ---------------- Page 3 ---------------- ハルカ・アーミテージ Haruka Armitage ---------------- Page 4 ---------------- サラ・ギャラガー Sara Gallagher ---------------- Page 6 ---------------- う、薄い。。。 再びのコピ本です。 新作予定をしながら この始末、 このまま夏コミまで 流されてしまいそうです。。。 お買い上げ下さった方 真にありがとうございます。 Wow, it's thin... Once again, I'm releasing a copy book. I was planning on releasing something new, but look at this mess. I get the feeling I'll stay like this until the summer Comiket. Thank you very much for purchasing this book. ---------------- Page 7 ---------------- 1) SFX: ズプ、ジュポ - squelch 2) 新作用の原稿の一部です。 。。。汚くてスイマセン。 A part of the original manuscript for my next book. ...Messy, right? I'm sorry. 灰川 ヘムレン Haikawa Hemlen |
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Oct 31 2015, 17:59
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Vilis
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QUOTE(CapableScoutMan @ Oct 31 2015, 16:06) Nothing wrong here. |
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Nov 5 2015, 04:03
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Here's the script for the [RED RIBBON REVENGER (Makoushi)] Mother's warmth (Sword Art Online) bounty. QUOTE page4
こんいち
"Hello" or "nice to meet you"!
I'm Makoushi from the circle "RED RIBBON REVENGER."
My sincerest thanks for picking up this circle's book this time!
当サークル
This is the fifth Sword Art Online volume released by this circle.
So far, I have drawn Asuna, Leafa and Sinon, but this time, what I really wanted to draw was Asuna x Yuuki!
I read the novel on an airplane to Chengdu and, even though I managed to hold back my tears during the flight, it was pretty tough...
And the last episode of the anime will be broadcast the day after tomorrow at last!
Uuuh... During the previous episode and the one before the dams of my tear collapsed, but maybe I'll be able to hold back during the final episode...
I mean, that scene in the OP where they're laughing together or how the lyrics of the ED fit Asuna being moved to tears... That's foul play already, isn't it?
マザーズ
The Mother's Rosario book really is a good story.
Yuuki, who is always smiling, her feelings towards Asuna and the worry of conflict, it's just...!!
It's just too gallant, enough to be heart wrenching.
Being just one volume long, it's a short story, but I wanted to give her the time to flirt more with Asuna...
そんな
It is with thoughts like those that this book was brought about.
(The application for Winter Comiket said Kancolle, but when I saw the Anime, I couldn't resist any longer...)
あ、
Ah, as for Kancolle books, the fourth has been published in November and the fifth is planned for publication early next year.
新刊
Plans for new releases and events are announced over Twitter and Facebook (Makoushi) and via the website (http://wr.sakura.ne.jp/~rrr) etc., so please look forward to them!
来年も
Next year, I plan to give my all during activities both in and out of the country again!
I want to live my life like Yuuki, always facing forward.
Well then, everyone, please have a good new year!
RED RIBBON REVENGER
Makoushi
page5
んふ
Nfufu...
ユウキは
Yuuki, you're so spoiled.
えへへ
Ehehe...
だって
That's because it's so comfy on your lap, Asuna.
スリスリ
*rustle*
あっ
Ah, hey, that tickles!
もうっ
Jeez!
アハハ
Ahaha!
page7
えへ
Eheh! The bath and Asuna are so warm♪
そんなに
If you stick to me like this, you won't be able to feel the warm water, right?
あっ
Ah, I'm sorry! Do you dislike it when I cling to you?
ううん
No, not at all!
でも
But Yuuki, you're pretty childish, huh?
ん…
Mh... You know, back in elementary school...
病気の事
When my illness came to light, my friends, who had until then been normally tapping my shoulder or holding my hand...
みんな
They all stopped touching me.
仕方が
I also think it can't be helped...
でもさ
But, you know, sometimes...
page8
無性
I asexually long to feel somebody's skin.
あはっ
Ahah, I'm sorry. I talked about something strange...
ぎゅっ
*grab*
アスナ
Asuna...?
page9
んっ…
Mhh...
んむっ
Nmuhh!
チュプ
*suck*
チュプ
*suck*
んんっ
Mmhh...
んふっ
Nfuhh!
くちゅ
*slurp*
くちゅ
*slurp*
ぷぁ…ぁ
Puah... Ah...
ちゅる
*suck*
page10
アスナ…
Asuna... Are you comforting me?
ううん
No.
私が
I want you, Yuuki.
あっ
Ah! Asuna...
きゅっ
*squeeze*
ビクッ
*twitch*
ユウキ…
Yuuki...
んっ！
Mhh!
つんっ
*stiffen*
ピクッ
*twitch*
ああっ！
Aahh!
キュッ
*squish*
page11
ひゃあああっ
Hyaaaahh!
びくんっ
*twitch*
あっ…ああ
Ahh... Aah!
ちゅ
*kiss*
あっ！
Ahh! I'm weak there, so...
ぺろ
*lick*
あ…
Ah...
チュプ
*shlip*
つぷぷっ
*push*
んっーーーー!!!
Nhhhhh!!!
ビクンッ
*tremble*
page12
今日の
You're kinda aggressive today, Asunaaa...
そう思う？
You think so? In that case, it's...
可愛すぎる
...your fault, Yuuki, for being way too cute!
ひゃあっ
Hyaahh!
ちゅうぅぅ
*suuuuck*
ここも
Here too...
ふあっ！？
Fuahh!?
そんなところ
That place is embarrassiiing!
くちゅ
*squish*
page13
ユウキの
You are really beautiful down here, Yuuki...
やあっ
Nooo! Don't look at me like that...!
ぴらっ
*spread*
んっ！
Mhh!
ふぁ…ぁ
Fuah... Ah...
ツプッ
*push*
あああっ！
Aaahh!
ズッ
*thrust*
だめぇ
Nooo! I... I'll...!
ぶる
*tremble*
ぶる
*tremble*
page14
あ…
Ah...
ふあぁ
Fuaah...
んんっ
Mmhh...
…っ！
...-!
ビクッ ビクッ
*twitch* *twitch*
チュー
*kiss*
グチュ グチュ
*shlurp* *shlurp*
はぁ…あ？
Haah... Ah?
アスナも
Asuna is getting wet too...
ひく ひく
*quiver* *quiver*
ちゅぷぅ
*suck*
あっ！
Ahh! Yuuki?
んんっ！！
Mmhh!!
ツプ
*push*
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んあっ
Nhahh... Right there... It feels so good!
ぴくっ
*twitch*
びちゃ
*shlip*
はあぁっ
Haaahh!
んくぅ…
Nkuuh...
ジュプ
*shlup*
ズチュ
*shlip*
ヌチュ
*squelch*
チュプ
*suck*
んぷぅ…ぁ
Npuuh... Ah...
くちゅ
*shlurp*
ちゅ
*kiss*
はぁ…あぁ
Haah... Aah...
ポタ…
*trickle*
ごめん
I'm sorry, Yuuki... I couldn't take it anymore.
いいよね？
You don't mind, right?
アスナ…
チュッ
*kiss*
page16
んっ…
Mhh...
んむっ…ぅ
Nmuhh... Uh...
ちゅう
*suck*
ちゅ
*kiss*
ちゅ
*kiss*
ポタ ポタ
*drip* *drip*
ユウキ…
Yuuki... I love you!
ボクも
I love you too, Asuna!
んっ！
Mhh!
ズッ
*slide*
はぁあぁぁっ
Haaaaahh!
ぬちゅ
*squelch*
にゅぷっ
*squish*
ぐちゅ
*squish*
ぶるっ
*tremble*
page17
ああっ
Aahh!
ふぁっ
Fuahh!
ピッ
*drip*
ピピッ
*drip drip*
んくっ…ぅ
Nkuhh... Uh...
つぅ〜
*lick*
ビクッ
*twitch*
はぁっ
Haahh, Asuna...
怖いよ
It's scary...
ボク
I feel strange...
ずっ
*shlip*
ずちゅ
*shlup*
ぐちゅ
*squish*
んっ 大丈夫
Mhh, don't worry... I'm by your side...
はぁっ
Haahh...
ふあ…ぁ
Fuah... Ah...
ズチュ
*shlup*
ムギュ
*squeeze*
アスナ…
Asuna... Aah... Asuna!
ギュッ
*squeeze*
page18
あぁあぁぁー
Aaaaahh!
ビクッ
*twitch*
ビクッ
*twitch*
ビクッ
*twitch*
ビクンッ
*twitch*
ううっ アスナ
Uuhh... I never imagined you were such a brute, Asuna...
ご ごめん
I-I'm sorry! I just couldn't take it anymore...
それじゃあ
In that case...
責任
Take responsibility, okay?♪
ちゅっ
Kiss♡
page19
艦これ
The fifth Kancolle book is a Wo-Kyuu&Hoppo-chan book!
ヲ級ちゃんと... 仲間に... 見ている
It looks like Wo-Kyuu-chan and Hoppo-chan have become comrades.
ヲ
Wo
夏コミ
It's a sequel to the Wo-Kyuu-chan book from summer Comiket. It's planned for Hoppo-chan and Harbour Princess to make an appearance too! Plans are to release it soon!
page20
SAO漫画
SAO Manga
彼女も
I have attained both a girlfriend and strength inside the game!!
BY たいれる
BY Taireru
SAO内
I'm polishing my Dual Blades skill that makes optimum use of my reaction speed, which is the best in SAO.
キャー
Kyaa, Kirito-kun!
もっと速く
Faster...!
And even faster...!
Faster than sound...!
Faster than light...!
キリト君
Kirito-kun, hug me!
フッ…
Puff...
キリトは
Kirito transcended light and crossed dimensions.
キリト君…!!
Kirito-kun...!!
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この距離
There's no way I'm gonna miss at this distance. What in the world is Kirito thinking...!?
バン！！
Bang!!
ブオン！！
Whoosh!!
パス
*pierce*
わ 私
I-I can't win...
女の子
I follow the rule of not cutting down girls.
直葉BOINBOIN
Suguha BOINBOIN
直葉です
I'm Suguha. Big brother is so cool, both in-game and in real life!
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
ばいん
*boing*
おわり
The End
page22
今後
Participation plans for future events
2015
25/1 Houraigekisen Yo-i! 14 - Tokyo Big Sight
31/1&1/2 Fancy Frontier 25 - Taiwan, Taipei
Feb-Mar Probably a Japanese culture event in Spain
28/3 Comiket Special 6 - Makuhari Messe, International Exhibition Hall
4&5/4 COMIDAY Chengdu Doujin Festival - China, Chengdu
Participation in other Kancolle-only exhibition and sales events in regional cities is currently under consideration.
C86
New for C86→Kancolle book
(For general audiences, Shigure, Kumano etc.)
SAO
SAO book
(For adults, compilation with Asuna, Leafa, Sinon)
各同人誌書店
All doujinshi bookstores have these on consignment sale!
発行日
Release date: First edition, 30/12/2014
Print shop: Ko-shin Shutsuban-sama (コーシン出版 様)
Editing: Makoushi
Front cover: Makoushi
Front cover CG: Kagura Kurosaki-sama (Thank you for the wonderful CG!!)
Main manga: Makoushi
※禁無断転載
※Unauthorized reproduction or copying prohibited.
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Translation for Love Dasi Vol. 6 Part. II (First Part TL by someone else #327)
For the Bounty: g.e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13172
Original Gallery: g.e-hentai.org/g/128511/23644fe988/
Keys:
panel number / bubble number
$ sfx
(Alternative Names/Translation)
[comments]
Recommended Sites:
jisho.org - Fast online accurate Eng-Jap dic.
thejadednetwork.com - Freq. updated SFX DB.
P23
1/1 (Based on my preference,) I’ll have this girl as the next Target.
2/1 I want to invade her so much! Just looking at her, she’s absolutely my dish! (orig. i can’t stop drooling looking at her)
2/ [on button, author name] Shakin Daijin
2/2 And . There. Fore.
2/3 These Photos have a rather strange point of view…
2/ [left, too small to read… =_= guessed to be:] She’s really happy / You really want to make her cry?
P24
1/1 Please let me have her!
3/1 There, I’ve brought her…
3/2 Woah~ in Uniform~
4/1 That’s quite something(, Sir). This ebony skin is really a turn on.
P25
1/1 Owwww…
2/1 Sorry to have you brought in like this…
3/1 But if we don’t do this, you(Suu-chan) won’t be able to play with me(Your Big Brother/Onii-chan).
3/2 Huh..?
P26
1/1 What kind of games are we playing? Onii-chan?
1/2 Well, it’s some kind where you get to use your body.
2/1 Really? Sus really loves to do games that involves her body.
2/2 Really, really! For starters, lie down on the bed first.
4/ $Lick
5/ $Wet
6/ $Open
7/ $Lick lick lick etc.
7/1 Wha? What are you doing?
P27
1/1 That was really not fun… and… I’m feeling somehow funny…
1/ $drip drip
2/1 It is… but it’s about to become a really good feeling now~
3/1 Next, it will be something that makes you Reeeeally feel good.
3/ $wet
4/1 Wh.. Wai… Onii-chan?
P28
1/1 OWW!
1/2 It HURTS! What are you doing?!
1/ $Creak creak[the bed]
2/1 Hey Stop being violent!
2/ $swing swing
3/1 Stop move…
3/1-2 Ugh!
3/ $Punch
5/1 …you’ve done it… And I was trying to be nice….
6/1 ahh…
7/1 We will not stop after we’ve come this far!(I’ll not have you back out of this after we’ve come this far!)
7/ $RAM
P29
2/1 Ow.. It… Hurts… It really Hurts!!
3/1 Woah… Nice~ This is really too good! And the fact it’s getting wet…
3/2 Ah.. ahh.. noo…~
P30
1/1 it’s really, really tight… I can’t hold it any longer…
2/1 it… it hurts… It’s hitting against my stomach [orig. rings in my belly], ah.. ahhh
2/ $shove shove
3/ $TWITCH TWITCH
4/1 I can’.. I’m Cumming…
4/ $PULL
5/ $SPURT
P31
1/1 Hey hey, Why did you cum outside, it’s a mess!
1/2 You don’t get it, see, I’d like to have her ebony skin fully covered in my white body fluid…
2/1 Suu-chan~
3/ $smear
3/1 I’ll have you thoroughly covered with these
P32
1/1 (#-_-) This sticky feeling makes me sick… Stop it
2/1 Well, Open your mouth
4/1 No!
4/2 Just open it
4/ $sick
5/1 There, there, have a good taste at them
P33
1/1 Do you want to have a try with these?
1/ $Tadahh $swing swing
3/1 Huh? I don’t like plays with these tho…
3/ $Fasten/Lock
3/2 Well, for me it’s really a turn on…
3/3 Wha.. What are you doing!? Take them off at once!
P34
1/ $Clatter clatter
1/1 Why can’t I take them off!? (even though I pull with all my strength)
1/2 Well it’s because they are made this way… kidding…
2/1 You’ve been acting up since a while now…
2/ $push
3/ $Wobble~!
3/1 wow, this view from behind is really something!!
4/1 Nice, she’s still this wet, great!
4/2 Stop alrea…
P35
1/ $Grope grope grope
2/1 I’m at my limit; She’s really spilling from her insides. And it looks so soft and so lewd…
3/1 Noo… Don’t look at that place!
P36
1/1 Hey, it’s about time that you get inside.
3/1 Wooah! It’s also amazing from behind. She has a lot of juices so it’s so easy so slide inside
3/ $Shove shove shove
3/2 Noo, stop, I Say It Hurts!
P37
1/1 NooOoo!
2/ $jolt
3/1 $SpUrT sPuRt SPURT
4/ $THUMP THUMP
4/1 Hey Suu-chan, can you feel it? I just came in your insides!
4/2 Pu.. Pull it out… (orig. you are pointing at me…)
P38
1/1 I’ve filled your sides to the brim!
3/1 Though I’m the one who came inside… I apologise if I knock you up
4/1 So You became Suu-chan’s first [man to came inside]
4/2 Isn’t that great? [small sfx inside]$haa.. haa..
P39
1/[no alt., () are author’s own] Nice to meet you. I’m the author, Shakin Daijin who’s been on hiatus.
… I’ll try make it more erotic in the next release. It will become better, so please look forward to it.
By the way, the 5th vol, that was awesome. Suu-chan had somehow become really important, Haruka-san was really cool (her bath robe was also really nice). It had been a really nice time for me (laugh).
I’m really grateful for you reading my work; And I’m really grateful for Gitei-san publishing it for me.
(On the side note, though it has nothing to do with this, I’m waiting on the confirmation on the Owner’s Club. [he doesn’t say what kind] I’m not really ready for it tho (laugh). Sorry if I’m not fit for it.)
P40
1/ Love Dasi 6
Published on 25th Jan. 2000
Editor MyMeloD!
Contact: [as it is written]
Adult only, 18+
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QUOTE(jfji552 @ Nov 5 2015, 04:03) Here's the script for the [RED RIBBON REVENGER (Makoushi)] Mother's warmth (Sword Art Online) bounty. page4 こんいち "Hello" or "nice to meet you"! I'm Makoushi from the circle "RED RIBBON REVENGER." My sincerest thanks for picking up this circle's book this time! 当サークル This is the fifth Sword Art Online volume released by this circle. So far, I have drawn Asuna, Leafa and Sinon, but this time, what I really wanted to draw was Asuna x Yuuki! I read the novel on an airplane to Chengdu and, even though I managed to hold back my tears during the flight, it was pretty tough... And the last episode of the anime will be broadcast the day after tomorrow at last! Uuuh... During the previous episode and the one before the dam of my tears collapsed, but maybe I'll be able to hold back during the final episode... I mean, that scene in the OP where they're laughing together or how the lyrics of the ED fit Asuna being moved to tears... That's foul play already, isn't it? Other than that minor change, I couldn't find any errors. |
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Red text indicates a change was made, red text with strikethrough means it needs to be deleted. QUOTE Part I
Love Dashi 6
by: Anonymous
Page 02
Even for Motoko's formerly virgin pussy, after slamming into it every day,
Sticking a dick in...
(black sfx = Squelch)
is pretty easy.
(thick black = Shove!)
(white sfx = Splat! + Squelch!)
Quit it...!
Don't stick it in!
page 03
Stop...!
(Splurt!)
(left of big sfx) Take this! I'm cumming inside!
(left of her face) Don't just fill in my insides so casually!
(top left sfx = Splurt x2)
Shut up! I'm cumming!
Stop! Not inside!
I'm cumming!
I'm cumming inside!
page 04
Even if you tell me not to cum inside, just what other purpose do you think your pussy serves?
Don't ask me! Just hurry and PULL OUT!
Pull out? Sure, once my balls are empty!
I'm cumming into your pussy!
Nooo!
You've got to cum inside a pussy in order for you to be impregnated. Didn't you learn that in Health class?
You're mad! You've all gone crazy...!
page 05
There! Get pregnant!
P...
(sfx = Kah!)
Pucchi Moni...
MOTOKO!* (TL Note: Confused? "プッチモニ" was a Japanese all-girl pop idol group, branching off from the better-known "Morning Musume" group in 1999-2000 (when this doujin was drawn))
Aaah! So hot! You're ejaculating right into my pussy!
I'm...I'm MATING with him!
I'll have children with a man I don't even like!
page 06
(bottom right) Here it comes, Motoko!
(bottom left) Uugh!
(panel 2, top right) I'm cumming!
(below mouth] Aau!
(bottom left of panel 2] Uu!
(panel 3, left] I'm gonna fill your womb...
(panel 4, bottom right] ...with every last drop of my seed! You'll be full of my milk!
You'll take it all!
Take it in your womb!
Get pregnant...!
page 07
Hnnnh! Injection of sperm into Motoko's womb, complete.
He...He's impregnated me...!
(small sfx at bottom right of panel 1 = Quiver x3]
I sure came a lot.
(panel 3, black = steam x2, thin black on ass = Kaplop!]
Uwaa! My thick stuff's coming out...
page 08
He's getting big in my mouth.
It's painful all the way to my throat...
I'm going to have to drink this man's semen again, aren't I...
Motoko's mouth...
(panel 3, far left] It feels so GOOD~! I'm gonna cum!
(bottom right] Motoko, I'm cumming!
(bottom left] I'm cumming!
(panel 4, top left] DRINK!
No! I won't swallow...!
(last panel, top right] I'm cumming in your mouth!
(upper left] Drink it!
(sfx = SPLUUUURT!)
page 09
Mnn! Mhhhh!
(panel 2, free sfx = Drip x3, sfx bubbles around throat = Gulp, sfx bubbles around balls = SPlurt + Spluuuurt]
Take the last of it on your face, Motoko.
GOOD! Here's your FACIAL!
So? How's it feel having a man's seed (left) all over your face?
Did it get you wet?
page 10
Stop...!
Not this sort of thing!
Marshmallow
Boob
Tit-Fuck!
Come on! I've squeezed out some more semen...
(thin white = Flop!, thick white = SPLURT! x2)
Out of my cock using Motoko's tits! Take this!!
page 11
My seed's welling up from my balls!
It's here, it's here...!
TORYAAA!
NOOOOO! STOOOP...!
Uaah! I totally came all over your face.
Your face, your tits...
You're completely soaked in semen, Motoko!
page 12
Nyahahahahaha!
Does that feel good~?
(sfx near hands = Squeeze!, sfx on leg and right of his hand + on his leg = Sway, sfx near feet = Clench!]
page 13
Aaah~!
Geez...!
Quit distracting me...!
Whatcha getting mad for!?
Sex is pretty fun, right...?
(Raise!]
Don't fuck with me! I'll teach you to behave...!
(SLAM!]
page 14
Ora!
Ora!
Ora!
Ora!
Ora!
(sfx are all slam!]
Huh~? Don't try to break me!
(white sfx = Boof! x2, tag = Pillow)
But when I'm in your pussy...
(tiny bubbles = Hah)
Your joking around isn't very cute.
Oh, all right~!
Let's do it right~!
I'll work with you!
page 15
Then...
I'm slamming into...
...that brown pussy...!
(top left) It's my first time, be gentler! (Lying)
AH!
(all sfx in mid page =Shove!)
TAKE THIS!
How's that, Indian girl? I'm diving all the way down to your womb!
No way!
If you fuck me this violently,
HYII!
...I'm gonna break!
(sfx at far right = Slam!)
Onii-chan's so big...!
page 016
Huh? (left] You were all soft earlier,
but now you've gotten (below] all hard inside me!
(sfx = Thrust!)
I got excited, Suu-chan! Show me your tits!
(big sfx = Grab!, white sfx = Boing!, thin black sfx = Flop!)
Oh no! But...even Nii-sama hasn't seen these...! (NOTE: in context, she is obviously referring to her ACTUAL brother here, not this random dude)
No!
Don't look at my boobs...!
page 17
Your cock's growing bigger inside my pussy!
(far left) Is my pussy making you feel that good!?
(far right] Woah!
You're super tight!
(under his face] It's like you'll tear it off...!
You're so big!
(white sfx = Shudder!, black = SHOVE!)
You're bulging outward! Is it swelling up with your sperm?
It's slowly growing all the way to my womb! It hurts!!
page 18
(black sfx = Pull..., white = PLUNGE!]
(bubble below black sfx] I-I can't take it...!
(panel 2] Suu, I'm cumming!
Ah!
I'M CUMMING!
(thin black = twitch!, white = Thump!)
I'm cumming...!
(black sfx = SPLUUUURT!, sfx bubbles = Spurt!)
I'm cumming inside!
AH! Oh no...!
page 19
I'll cum inside and get your womb all sticky!
(black = Splat, white = Splurt)
Suu-chan, I'm cumming...!
I'm letting out every last drop!
(all sfx around groin = Splurt/spurt/splat]
(upper left] You're cumming! You're cumming, you're cumming!! Your seed is filling my womb...!
(far right] Suu-chan, this is a "creampie." When I cum inside your pussy,
my sperm will splatter against your egg!
No, no!
You can't!
(black sfx around shoulders = Grab!)
page 20
If you fill my insides with that much,
YOU'LL GET ME PREGNANT!
You're fertilizing my pussy!
(sfx = Splurt/splat)
Am I going to have the child of some man I don't like!?
No, no! Onii-sama, save me...! (again, she's referring to her real brother here]
(sfx = Shudder!)
I'm going to have a baby!
(last panel sfx are one big sfx = KaSLAM!]
page 21
This isn't real, right? Did you really...
(far left] cum inside me?
Yup, of course!
I was shooting into Suu-chan's womb!
I made a big old mess in you with my seed.
(black = Kerplop!, white = Deflaaate, sfx bubble = Shrink..., white = Gurgle]
Fertilization, complete!
page 22
(sfx bubbles = twitch!)
Wow. That was really intense~!
I "came" a little bit too...
(white = Dribble...)
We half-Indian girls love this stuff...
JUST KIDDING! Nyahaha!
(white = Grin!) QUOTE(Toshatan @ Nov 6 2015, 04:09)
Translation for Love Dasi Vol. 6 Part. II (First Part TL by someone else #327)
For the Bounty: g.e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13172
Original Gallery: g.e-hentai.org/g/128511/23644fe988/
Keys:
panel number / bubble number
$ sfx
(Alternative Names/Translation)
(comments)
Recommended Sites:
jisho.org - Fast online accurate Eng-Jap dic.
thejadednetwork.com - Freq. updated SFX DB.
P23
1/1 (Based on my preference,) I’ll have this girl as the next Target.
2/1 I want to violate her so much! I can't stop drooling when I look at her!
2/ (on button, author name] Shakin Daijin
2/2 And . There. Fore.
2/3 These Photos have a rather strange point of view…
2/ (left, too small to read… =_= guessed to be:] She’s really happy / You really want to make her cry?
P24
1/1 Please let me have her!
3/1 There, I’ve brought her…
3/2 Woah~ in Uniform~
4/1 That’s quite something(, Sir). This ebony skin is really a turn on.
P25
1/1 Owwww…
2/1 Sorry to have you brought in like this…
3/1 But if we don’t do this, you(Suu-chan) won’t be able to play with me(Your Big Brother/Onii-chan).
3/2 Huh..?
P26
1/1 What kind of games are we playing? Onii-chan?
1/2 Well, it’s the kind where you get to use your body.
2/1 Really? Suu really loves playing games that involves her body.
2/2 Really, really! For starters, lie down on the bed first.
4/ $Lick
5/ $Wet
6/ $Open
7/ $Lick lick lick etc.
7/1 Wha? What are you doing?
P27
1/1 That wasn't really fun… and… I’m feeling somewhat funny…
1/ $drip drip
2/1 It is… but it’s about to become a really good feeling now~
3/1 Next, it will be something that makes you feel Reeeeally good.
3/ $wet
4/1 Wh.. Wai… Onii-chan?
P28
1/1 OWW!
1/2 It HURTS! What are you doing?!
1/ $Creak creak (the bed]
2/1 Hey, Stop being violent!
2/ $swing swing
3/1 Stop move…
3/1-2 Ugh!
3/ $Punch
5/1 …you’ve done it… And I was trying to be nice….
6/1 ahh…
7/1 We will not stop after we’ve come this far!(I’ll not have you back out of this after we’ve come this far!)
7/ $RAM
P29
2/1 Ow.. It… Hurts… It really Hurts!!
3/1 Woah… Nice~ This is really too good! And the fact it’s getting wet…
3/2 Ah.. ahh.. noo…~
P30
1/1 it’s really, really tight… I can’t hold it in any longer…
2/1 it… it hurts… It’s hitting against my stomach (orig. rings in my belly], ah.. ahhh
2/ $shove shove
3/ $TWITCH TWITCH
4/1 I can’t.. I’m Cumming…
4/ $PULL
5/ $SPURT
P31
1/1 Hey hey, Why did you cum outside, it’s a mess!
1/2 You don’t get it, see, I’d like to have her ebony skin fully covered in my white body fluid…
2/1 Suu-chan~
3/ $smear
3/1 I’ll have you thoroughly covered with these
P32
1/1 (#-_-) This sticky feeling makes me sick… Stop it
2/1 Well, Open your mouth
4/1 No!
4/2 Just open it
4/ $sick
5/1 There, there, have a good taste of them
P33
1/1 Do you want to have a try with these?
1/ $Tadahh $swing swing
3/1 Huh? I don’t like plays with these tho…
3/ $Fasten/Lock
3/2 Well, for me it’s really a turn on…
3/3 Wha.. What are you doing!? Take them off at once!
P34
1/ $Clatter clatter
1/1 Why can’t I take them off!? (even though I pull with all my strength)
1/2 Well it’s because they are made this way… kidding…
2/1 You’ve been acting up since a while now…
2/ $push
3/ $Wobble~!
3/1 wow, this view from behind is really something!!
4/1 Nice, she’s still this wet, great!
4/2 Stop alrea…
P35
1/ $Grope grope grope
2/1 I’m at my limit; She’s really spilling from her insides. And it looks so soft and so lewd…
3/1 Noo… Don’t look at that place!
P36
1/1 Hey, it’s about time that you get inside.
3/1 Wooah! It’s also amazing from behind. She has a lot of juices so it’s so easy to slide inside
3/ $Shove shove shove
3/2 Noo, stop, I Said It Hurts!
P37
1/1 NooOoo!
2/ $jolt
3/1 $SpUrT sPuRt SPURT
4/ $THUMP THUMP
4/1 Hey, Suu-chan, can you feel it? I just came in your insides!
4/2 Pu.. Pull it out… (orig. you are pointing at me…)
P38
1/1 I’ve filled your insides to the brim!
3/1 Though I’m the one who came inside… I apologize if I knock you up
4/1 So You became Suu-chan’s first (man to come inside)
4/2 Isn’t that great? [small sfx inside]$haa.. haa..
P39
1/[no alt., () are author’s own] Nice to meet you. I’m the author, Shakin Daijin who’s been on hiatus.
… I’ll try to make it more erotic in the next release. It will become better, so please look forward to it.
By the way, the 5th vol, that was awesome. Suu-chan had somehow become really important, Haruka-san was really cool (her bath robe was also really nice). It was a really nice time for me (laugh).
I’m really grateful for you reading my work; And I’m really grateful for Gitei-san publishing it for me.
(On the side note, though it has nothing to do with this, I’m waiting on the confirmation on the Owner’s Club. [he doesn’t say what kind] I’m not really ready for it tho (laugh). Sorry if I’m not fit for it.)
P40
1/ Love Dasi 6
Published on 25th Jan. 2000
Editor MyMeloD!
Contact: [as it is written]
Adult only, 18+
[irrelevant rest]
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2/1 I want to invade her so much! Just looking at her, she’s absolutely my dish! (orig. i can’t stop drooling looking at her)
I'd use the "I can't stop drooling looking at her". Also, wouldn't fuck be better than invade?
It's ok to be less literal, more natural-English-like.
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I decided to go with violate instead of invade.
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Here's the script for the very cute [Soukousen (Pizanuko)] Ka ga ku nochi kara? (Galilei Donna) bounty. The original title would be better spelled as: "Kagaku no chikara?" QUOTE page1
かがくのちから?
The power of science?
page2
それでねー
And that's why...
それで…
And that's...
ぶるっ
*quiver*
ーんっ
...Mhh
page3
ぽつんっ
*silence*
はーねぇ 元気かな… かーねぇ…は学校か
I wonder if Haa-nee is okay... And Kaa-nee... I guess she's at school.
ゴソゴソ
*rummage*
やっぱり作ってみようかな…
Maybe I should try making one after all...
アンドロイド
An android
page4
よしっ
Alright!
ふー
Fuuh
出来たっ
It's done!
えと…
Uhm...
ナンバー01 コードネーム ＫＡＤＵＫＩ 起動！
Number 01, code name KAZUKI, activate!
キュイイ…
*whirr*...
ナンバー01
Number 01,
カヅキ 起動します
KAZUKI is activating.
page5
Ho-zu-ki-sa-ma! How-may-I-as-sist-you!?
わっ
Eep!
ビクッ
*twitch*
あっ 作ったAI インストールするの忘れてた
Ah, I forgot to install the AI I made.
たはは
Tahaha
ピピッ
*beep* *beep*
インストール
Installing
な、なんだここは!?
W-where is this!?
暗いし 油くさいし こんなー
It's dark and smells of oil! This kind of...
ピッ
*beep*
ガーッ
Gaah!
もうちょっと 優しい感じで…
Let's up her niceness a little...
リアルすぎる…
That was too real...
ピッ ピッ
*beep* *beep*
ほっちび
Hocchibi
そんな格好でこんな所にこもってて寒くないのか？
Aren't you cold, holing yourself up in a place like this wearing an outfit like that?
あ 良い感じっ
Ah, that's a good feeling!
さ 寒いなら そのカヅキが あたためて
I-if you are cold, should I, KAZUKI,
あ あげようか？
w-warm you up?
もじっ
*fidget*
えっ
What!?
page6
それは…
That's...
どういう…
In what way-...
うわー かーねぇが赤面してる…
Uwah, Kaa-nee is blushing...
こういうー
In this...
ガシッ
*grab*
ビクッ
*twitch*
ーこと
...way
ちゅっ
*kiss*
はむっ
Hamuhh
んんー!?
Mmhh!?
ちゅっ
*kiss*
んちゅ
*shlup*
びくん
*twitch*
ぷはっ
Puhahh
ぴくっ
*twitch*
ぴくん
*twitch*
page7
へなへな
*slump*
ぴくっ
*twitch*
はっ
Hahh
あっ
Ahh
ぴくっ
*twitch*
かくっ
*wobble*
かくっ
*wobble*
ぺたん
*flop*
…えっ？
...Huh?
い 今のって
J-just now
あれっ
Uhh
キス？
A kiss?
ほんとに？
Really?
キスされた…？
I've been kissed...?
キス？
A kiss?
しゅ
I-
修正しなきゃー
I've gotta fix this!
バッ
*swift*
page8
きゃっ!?
Kyaa!?
むにゅ
*grope*
なっ
Wh-
な
Wh-
すぽーん
*slip*
ブンッ
*swoosh*
ななな
W-w-wha-
ガシャン
*crash*
あ…
Ah...
あああ
Aaah
サァァ
*pale*
だ 大丈夫…かな？
M-maybe it'll be... okay?
ほっちびー
Hocchibi!
セックスしよっ
Let's have sex!
大丈夫じゃなかった
It wasn't okay
page9
ん
Mh
ひ ひゃう
H-hyauh
こ こんなの かーねぇじゃ…
A-a Kaa-nee like this...
んっ
Mhh
ぐいっ
*grab*
ペロッ
*lick*
あっ
Ahh
いやっ
No-
ぴくっ
*twitch*
ぺろぺろ
*lick* *lick*
もともと…はぅっ かーねぇじゃないんだけど
She isn't Kaa-nee... hauhh... to begin with
えろっ
*slurp*
びくっ
*twitch*
ひゃっ!?
Hyahh!?
びくひくっ
*twitch* *twitch*
あっ
Ahh
はっ
Hahh
カプッ
*bite*
あ
Ah
ふあっ♥
Fuahh♥
ぞくぞく
*tremble*
びくっ
*twitch*
むにっ
*fondle*
ちくびやぁ♥
Not my nipples♥
きゅん
*tingle*
page10
はぁ
Haah
あっ♥
Ahh♥
はあ
Haah
スゥ…
*slide*
そこっ♥
That-♥
くぱぁ
*gape*
あ♥
Ah♥
そんなとこっ
That place-
はっ
Hahh
はあ
Haah
だめっ
Not there-
らめぇっ♥
Nooo♥
びくんっ
*twitch*
びくっ
*twitch*
もぞっ
*grope*
つぷっ
*push*
あっ♥
Ahh♥
気持ちいい?
Does it feel good?
はうっ
Hauhh
気持ちいいだろっ
It does, right?
コリコリ
*rub*
やっ♥
No♥
ぴゅっ
*squirt*
ブルッ
*tremble*
ひうんっ♥
Hiunhh♥
page11
やっ♥
No♥
やあぁ♥
Nooo♥
ふぁ
Fuah
はぅ♥
Hauh♥
ビクビクッ
*twitch*
プシャアァ
*splash*
ビクッ
*twitch*
はっ♥
Hahh♥
ぴゅっ
*squirt*
ぴゅっ
*squirt*
びくん
*twitch*
あっ
Ahh
うぅ♥
Uuh♥
ハッ
Hahh
ハッ
Hahh
完全に暴走してる…
She's completely out of control...
ここは一旦 強制的に終了させて…
I'll forcibly shut her down for now...
スッ
*pull*
スタンガン
Stun gun
page12
でも…
But...
チラッ
*glance*
ぬちゃぁ
*slippery*
かーねぇに…ううんかーねぇじゃないんだけど
Doing that to Kaa-nee... But no, it isn't Kaa-nee
これ使うのはー
Using this is-...
スッ
*sneak*
んん!?
Mmh!?
んーっ
Mmhh
な なに!?
W-what!?
ヌプッ
*plunge*
びく
*twitch*
びくびくっ
*twitch*
んふっ
Nfuhh
んむっ♥
Nmuhh♥
どうだ 自分のはしたない液は ーおいしいか？
How are they? Your slutty, own juices... Yummy?
page13
ふふっ 顔とろけさせちゃってかわいいな
Fufu, you are so cute with that expression...
んくっ♥
Nkuhh♥
あっ♥
Ahh♥
はぅ♥
Hauh♥
かーねぇ こんなことしないのに
Even though Kaa-nee wouldn't do something like this
姿がかーねぇだから なんだか…
She looks like Kaa-nee, so somehow...
ぴくっ
*twitch*
ぴくぴく
*twitch*
変な気分に…
I get these odd feelings...
ぞわぞわ
*quiver*
あっ
Ahh
にゃっ!?
Whya-!?
ぺろっ
*lick*
びくびくっ
*twitch*
きゃふっ♥
Kyafuhh♥
ビクッ
*twitch*
ビクッ
*twitch*
はふっ
Hafuhh
はっ♥
Hahh♥
ガクガク
*tremble*
page14
もっと奥までいじめてやるっ
I'll tease you even deeper
はっ♥
Hahh♥
あ♥
Ah♥
ヌプヌプッ
*squelch*
ぴく
*twitch*
ふあっ♥ 舌っ入ってっ♥
Fuahh♥ Her tongue is going in♥
はっ
Hahh
レロ
*lick*
ぢゅるっ
*slurp*
ふるるっ
*tremble*
ビクビクッ
*twitch*
あっそこっ♥
Ah, that place♥
きたなっー
is dirt-
ツプッ
*push*
ひゃいっ♥
Hyaihh♥
ヌプッ
*squelch*
ぴゅるっ
*splurt*
きゅんっ
*tingle*
らめぇっ♥
Nooo♥
はっ
Hahh
あっ
Ahh
ビクンッ
*twitch*
ねちょ
*squish*
ぬちょ
*squish*
とろぉ
*ooze*
page15
もぅ だめっ
No more
ここがっ
I'm hot
じんじんして 熱くてっ
and tingly down here
きゅん
*tingle*
きゅん
*tingle*
おっと 上の方もちゃんと いじめてやらないとな
Whoops, I've got to tease you properly up here too
ひぅぅっ
Hiuuhh
ふああ
Fuaah
やっ♥
No♥
ちくびっ♥
Nipples♥
びくっ
*twitch*
びくっ
*twitch*
頭の中 とろけそうだー
It feels like my mind is melting...
ろっ!
Shlub!
カプ
*chomp*
ビクッ
*twitch*
きゅっ
*squeeze*
ひんっ
Hinhh
あっ
Ahh
はっ♥
Hahh♥
やっ♥
No♥
あっ♥
Ahh♥
ぞぞぞ
*shiver*
カクカク
*tremble*
だめっ
No
はっ♥
Hahh♥
こへぇっ
Shdop
らめっ♥
thish♥
ぞくぞく
*quiver*
page16
まだ終わらせないよっ
I won't let you off yet!
ひゃうぅ♥
Hyauuh♥
むにっ
*grope*
やっ♥
No♥
くちゅ くちゅ
*squish* *squish*
じゅぷっ
*squelch*
むにゅ
*grope*
むにゅ
*grope*
はぁっ♥
Haahh♥
ひっ♥ はうぅ♥
Hihh♥ Hauuh♥
あっ♥
Ahh♥
あ♥
Ah♥
はっ♥
Hahh♥
ビクッ
*twitch*
ビクッ
*twitch*
じゅぷっ
*squelch*
じゅぷっ
*squelch*
は♥
Hah♥
せ
It
はっ
Hahh
切ないよぉ…
It's too muuuch...
くてんっ
*slump*
ほっちび…
Hocchibi...
ちゅっ
*kiss*
んん…っ
Mmh...
page17
ふぁ♥
Fuah♥
もう だー
No mo-
とろ〜ん
*ooooze*
ちゅっ
*kiss*
突然の尿意
A sudden urge to urinate
ーめ
-re
ぞわぞわ
*tremble*
ふーん…
Hmmm...
ニヤッ
*leer*
スッ
*pull*
ヴィーン
Whirrr
なにそれっ!? どっから出したの!?
What's that!? Where did you get that!?
やっ♥
No♥
でちゃうっ
It's gonna come out
おしっこでちゃうからぁ♥
I'm gonna pee, sooo♥
やめ(て)
stop it
あっ♥
Ahh♥
はっ♥
Hahh♥
やめない♪
I won't stop♪
ふあぁ♥
Fuaah♥
ひっ♥
Hihh♥
ビクッ
*twitch*
ビク
*twitch*
ヴヴヴ
*vrrrr*
page18
んきゅ♥
Nkyuh♥
あっ♥
Ahh♥
らへぇ♥♥
Shdoop♥♥
ビクッ
*twitch*
ヴィィン
*whirrrr*
ぴゅるっ
*splurt*
ビクンッ
*twitch*
ヴヴヴ
*vrrrr*
お
Oh
ああぅ♥♥
Aauh♥♥
プツン
*snap*
あっ♥
Ahh♥
はふっ♥
Hafuhh♥
あくっ♥
Akuhh♥
ビクンッ
*twitch*
ガクッ
*shake*
ガクッ
*shake*
page19
ひああ
Hiaah
でちゃ♥
It's coming out♥
あひぅっ♥♥
Ahiuhh♥♥
プシャア
*gush*
ビクッ
*twitch*
ふあっ♥
Fuahh♥
ビクン
*twitch*
ビクン
*twitch*
ちょろろろ
*trickle*
あー
Ahh
ビクッ
*twitch*
ビクッ
*twitch*
page20
ふふっ
Fufu
まだまだー
There's still much more...
カクッ
*twitch*
まだ続くの?
You're still gonna do more?
はっ♥
Hahh♥
はっ♥
Hahh♥
死んじゃー
I'm gonna die...
ーあれ?
...huh?
電池(エネルギー)切れ
Her power ran out
シーン
*freeze*
はぁー…
Haahh...
ひどいめに あちゃったなぁ…
I went through something terrible...
ハァ…
Haah...
でも思ってたより再現できたところもあったかな… 本当にかーねぇに見えたくらい…
But in some ways she was a better reproduction than I expected... So much so that she really looked like Kaa-nee...
今度は 制限をつけてー
Next time, I'll put some limits on her...
うーん
Hmm
ぶっぶっ
Hmhm
page21
あとがき
Afterword
最初は星月ちゃんが賊におそわれてげへへ…
At first Hozuki-chan was supposed to be attacked a robber, gehehe...
なものでも描こうと思ったのですが、
どうにも「ごめんあさい!」と言いながら機械類で撃退する図
しか思い浮かばず、裸オーバーオール描きたいしなぁと
なんとなく考えていたら機械を愛する者が機械に愛される話に
なりました。
I thought I'd like to draw that, but the only scene I could think off, was how he'd be repulsed with different machines while saying "I'm sorry"... So I thought it would be nice to draw her in her naked overall. When I thought about that, it somehow turned into a story of a machine lover being loved by a machine.
今回もまたはじめてづくしといいますか、
いつもは同人誌を描く時はそれだけに集中してやるのですが
今回はいろいろな事情があり他にいろいろやりながら描くことに。
This time there were various firsts again. Usually, when I draw doujinshi, I concentrate just on that, but this time there were various circumstances and I did other things while drawing.
スケジュール管理のずさんさがうきぼりになりましたとも、えぇ。
You could also say that I got distinctly sloppy managing my schedule, yes.
もうちょっと余裕をもって煮詰めてみたいなぁと思うのですが、
自身のズボラさもあってなかなかうまいこといかないですねぇ。
I think it would have been nice to try and distill it more with a bit more time, but with my own sloppiness it won't turn out well.
今度の夏コミは背景なども描けるように
余裕をもって描きたいです。
For the next Summer Comiket, I'd like to have enough time to draw backgrounds and stuff too.
受かれば、ですが。
If I'm accepted.
発行者: ぴざぬこ
Publisher: Pizanuko
サークル: 創攻線
Circle: Soukousen
連絡先
Contact address
印刷所: 株式会社サングループ様
Print office: Kabushiki Kaisha Sungroup-sama (株式会社サングループ様)
発行日
Date of publication
奥付
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Proofreader here. All changes will be marked in red, text that needs to be removed will also be marked with a strikethrough. QUOTE(jfji552 @ Dec 31 2015, 01:45) Here's the script for the very cute [Soukousen (Pizanuko)] Ka ga ku nochi kara? (Galilei Donna) bounty. The original title would be better spelled as: "Kagaku no chikara?" page1 かがくのちから? The power of science? page2 それでねー And that's why... それで… And that's... ぶるっ *quiver* ーんっ ...Mhh page3 ぽつんっ *silence* はーねぇ 元気かな… かーねぇ…は学校か I wonder if Haa-nee is okay... And Kaa-nee... I guess she's at school. ゴソゴソ *rummage* やっぱり作ってみようかな… Maybe I should try making one after all... アンドロイド An android page4 よしっ Alright! ふー Fuuh 出来たっ It's done! えと… Uhm... ナンバー01 コードネーム ＫＡＤＵＫＩ 起動！ Number 01, code name KAZUKI, activate! キュイイ… *whirr*... ナンバー01 Number 01, カヅキ 起動します KAZUKI is activating. page5 Ho-zu-ki-sa-ma! How-may-I-as-sist-you!? わっ Eep! ビクッ *twitch* あっ 作ったAI インストールするの忘れてた Ah, I forgot to install the AI I made. たはは Tahaha ピピッ *beep* *beep* インストール Installing な、なんだここは!? W-where is this!? 暗いし 油くさいし こんなー It's dark and smells of oil! This kind of... ピッ *beep* ガーッ Gaah! もうちょっと 優しい感じで… Let's increase her niceness a little... (PR Note: I feel like increase is more clear, but up is not technically wrong here.)リアルすぎる… That was too real... ピッ ピッ *beep* *beep* ほっちび Hocchibi そんな格好でこんな所にこもってて寒くないのか？ Aren't you cold, holing yourself up in a place like this wearing an outfit like that? あ 良い感じっ Ah, that's a good feeling! さ 寒いなら そのカヅキが あたためて I-if you are cold, should I, KAZUKI, あ あげようか？ w-warm you up? もじっ *fidget* えっ What!? page6 それは… That's... どういう… In what way-... うわー かーねぇが赤面してる… Uwah, Kaa-nee is blushing... こういうー In this... ガシッ *grab* ビクッ *twitch* ーこと ...way ちゅっ *kiss* はむっ Hamuhh んんー!? Mmhh!? ちゅっ *kiss* んちゅ *shlup* びくん *twitch* ぷはっ Puhahh ぴくっ *twitch* ぴくん *twitch* page7 へなへな *slump* ぴくっ *twitch* はっ Hahh あっ Ahh ぴくっ *twitch* かくっ *wobble* かくっ *wobble* ぺたん *flop* …えっ？ ...Huh? い 今のって J-just now あれっ Uhh キス？ A kiss? ほんとに？ Really? キスされた…？ I've been kissed...? キス？ A kiss? しゅ I- 修正しなきゃー I've gotta fix this! バッ *swift* page8 きゃっ!? Kyaa!? むにゅ *grope* なっ Wh- な Wh- すぽーん *slip* ブンッ *swoosh* ななな W-w-wha- ガシャン *crash* あ… Ah... あああ Aaah サァァ *pale* だ 大丈夫…かな？ M-maybe it'll be... okay? ほっちびー Hocchibi! セックスしよっ Let's have sex! 大丈夫じゃなかった It wasn't okay page9 ん Mh ひ ひゃう H-hyauh こ こんなの かーねぇじゃ… A-a Kaa-nee like this... んっ Mhh ぐいっ *grab* ペロッ *lick* あっ Ahh いやっ No- ぴくっ *twitch* ぺろぺろ *lick* *lick* もともと…はぅっ かーねぇじゃないんだけど She isn't Kaa-nee... hauhh... to begin with えろっ *slurp* びくっ *twitch* ひゃっ!? Hyahh!? びくひくっ *twitch* *twitch* あっ Ahh はっ Hahh カプッ *bite* あ Ah ふあっ♥ Fuahh♥ ぞくぞく *tremble* びくっ *twitch* むにっ *fondle* ちくびやぁ♥ Not my nipples♥ きゅん *tingle* page10 はぁ Haah あっ♥ Ahh♥ はあ Haah スゥ… *slide* そこっ♥ That-♥ くぱぁ *gape* あ♥ Ah♥ そんなとこっ That place- はっ Hahh はあ Haah だめっ Not there- らめぇっ♥ Nooo♥ びくんっ *twitch* びくっ *twitch* もぞっ *grope* つぷっ *push* あっ♥ Ahh♥ 気持ちいい? Does it feel good? はうっ Hauhh 気持ちいいだろっ It does, right? コリコリ *rub* やっ♥ No♥ ぴゅっ *squirt* ブルッ *tremble* ひうんっ♥ Hiunhh♥ page11 やっ♥ No♥ やあぁ♥ Nooo♥ ふぁ Fuah はぅ♥ Hauh♥ ビクビクッ *twitch* プシャアァ *splash* ビクッ *twitch* はっ♥ Hahh♥ ぴゅっ *squirt* ぴゅっ *squirt* びくん *twitch* あっ Ahh うぅ♥ Uuh♥ ハッ Hahh ハッ Hahh 完全に暴走してる… She's completely out of control... ここは一旦 強制的に終了させて… I'll forcibly shut her down for now... スッ *pull* スタンガン Stun gun page12 でも… But... チラッ *glance* ぬちゃぁ *slippery* かーねぇに…ううんかーねぇじゃないんだけど Doing that to Kaa-nee... But no, it isn't Kaa-nee これ使うのはー Using this is-... スッ *sneak* んん!? Mmh!? んーっ Mmhh な なに!? W-what!? ヌプッ *plunge* びく *twitch* びくびくっ *twitch* んふっ Nfuhh んむっ♥ Nmuhh♥ どうだ 自分のはしたない液は ーおいしいか？ How are they? Your own, slutty juices... Yummy? page13 ふふっ 顔とろけさせちゃってかわいいな Fufu, you are so cute with that expression... んくっ♥ Nkuhh♥ あっ♥ Ahh♥ はぅ♥ Hauh♥ かーねぇ こんなことしないのに Even though Kaa-nee wouldn't do something like this 姿がかーねぇだから なんだか… She looks like Kaa-nee, so somehow... ぴくっ *twitch* ぴくぴく *twitch* 変な気分に… I get these odd feelings... ぞわぞわ *quiver* あっ Ahh にゃっ!? Whya-!? ぺろっ *lick* びくびくっ *twitch* きゃふっ♥ Kyafuhh♥ ビクッ *twitch* ビクッ *twitch* はふっ Hafuhh はっ♥ Hahh♥ ガクガク *tremble* page14 もっと奥までいじめてやるっ I'll tease you even deeper はっ♥ Hahh♥ あ♥ Ah♥ ヌプヌプッ *squelch* ぴく *twitch* ふあっ♥ 舌っ入ってっ♥ Fuahh♥ Her tongue is going in♥ はっ Hahh レロ *lick* ぢゅるっ *slurp* ふるるっ *tremble* ビクビクッ *twitch* あっそこっ♥ Ah, that place♥ きたなっー is dirt- ツプッ *push* ひゃいっ♥ Hyaihh♥ ヌプッ *squelch* ぴゅるっ *splurt* きゅんっ *tingle* らめぇっ♥ Nooo♥ はっ Hahh あっ Ahh ビクンッ *twitch* ねちょ *squish* ぬちょ *squish* とろぉ *ooze* page15 もぅ だめっ No more ここがっ I'm hot じんじんして 熱くてっ and tingly down here きゅん *tingle* きゅん *tingle* おっと 上の方もちゃんと いじめてやらないとな Whoops, I've got to tease you properly up here too ひぅぅっ Hiuuhh ふああ Fuaah やっ♥ No♥ ちくびっ♥ Nipples♥ びくっ *twitch* びくっ *twitch* 頭の中 とろけそうだー It feels like my mind is melting... ろっ! Shlub! カプ *chomp* ビクッ *twitch* きゅっ *squeeze* ひんっ Hinhh あっ Ahh はっ♥ Hahh♥ やっ♥ No♥ あっ♥ Ahh♥ ぞぞぞ *shiver* カクカク *tremble* だめっ No はっ♥ Hahh♥ こへぇっ Shdop らめっ♥ thish♥ ぞくぞく *quiver* page16 まだ終わらせないよっ I won't let you off yet! ひゃうぅ♥ Hyauuh♥ むにっ *grope* やっ♥ No♥ くちゅ くちゅ *squish* *squish* じゅぷっ *squelch* むにゅ *grope* むにゅ *grope* はぁっ♥ Haahh♥ ひっ♥ はうぅ♥ Hihh♥ Hauuh♥ あっ♥ Ahh♥ あ♥ Ah♥ はっ♥ Hahh♥ ビクッ *twitch* ビクッ *twitch* じゅぷっ *squelch* じゅぷっ *squelch* は♥ Hah♥ せ It はっ Hahh 切ないよぉ… It's too muuuch... くてんっ *slump* ほっちび… Hocchibi... ちゅっ *kiss* んん…っ Mmh... page17 ふぁ♥ Fuah♥ もう だー No mo- とろ〜ん *ooooze* ちゅっ *kiss* 突然の尿意 A sudden urge to urinate ーめ -re ぞわぞわ *tremble* ふーん… Hmmm... ニヤッ *leer* スッ *pull* ヴィーン Whirrr なにそれっ!? どっから出したの!? What's that!? Where did you get that!? やっ♥ No♥ でちゃうっ It's gonna come out おしっこでちゃうからぁ♥ I'm gonna pee, sooo♥ やめ(て) stop it あっ♥ Ahh♥ はっ♥ Hahh♥ やめない♪ I won't stop♪ ふあぁ♥ Fuaah♥ ひっ♥ Hihh♥ ビクッ *twitch* ビク *twitch* ヴヴヴ *vrrrr* page18 んきゅ♥ Nkyuh♥ あっ♥ Ahh♥ らへぇ♥♥ Shdoop♥♥ ビクッ *twitch* ヴィィン *whirrrr* ぴゅるっ *splurt* ビクンッ *twitch* ヴヴヴ *vrrrr* お Oh ああぅ♥♥ Aauh♥♥ プツン *snap* あっ♥ Ahh♥ はふっ♥ Hafuhh♥ あくっ♥ Akuhh♥ ビクンッ *twitch* ガクッ *shake* ガクッ *shake* page19 ひああ Hiaah でちゃ♥ It's coming out♥ あひぅっ♥♥ Ahiuhh♥♥ プシャア *gush* ビクッ *twitch* ふあっ♥ Fuahh♥ ビクン *twitch* ビクン *twitch* ちょろろろ *trickle* あー Ahh ビクッ *twitch* ビクッ *twitch* page20 ふふっ Fufu まだまだー There's still much more... カクッ *twitch* まだ続くの? You're still gonna do more? はっ♥ Hahh♥ はっ♥ Hahh♥ 死んじゃー I'm gonna die... ーあれ? ...huh? 電池(エネルギー)切れ Her power ran out シーン *freeze* はぁー… Haahh... ひどいめに あちゃったなぁ… I went through something terrible... ハァ… Haah... でも思ってたより再現できたところもあったかな… 本当にかーねぇに見えたくらい… But in some ways she was a better reproduction than I expected... So much so that she really looked like Kaa-nee... 今度は 制限をつけてー Next time, I'll put some limits on her... うーん Hmm ぶっぶっ Hmhm page21 あとがき Afterword 最初は星月ちゃんが賊におそわれてげへへ… At first Hozuki-chan was supposed to be attacked by a robber, gehehe... なものでも描こうと思ったのですが、 どうにも「ごめんあさい!」と言いながら機械類で撃退する図 しか思い浮かばず、裸オーバーオール描きたいしなぁと なんとなく考えていたら機械を愛する者が機械に愛される話に なりました。 I thought I'd like to draw that, but the only scene I could think of was how he'd be repulsed with different machines while saying "I'm sorry"... So I thought it would be nice to draw her in her naked overall. When I thought about that, it somehow turned into a story of a machine lover being loved by a machine. 今回もまたはじめてづくしといいますか、 いつもは同人誌を描く時はそれだけに集中してやるのですが 今回はいろいろな事情があり他にいろいろやりながら描くことに。 This time there were various firsts again. Usually, when I draw doujinshi, I concentrate just on that, but this time there were various circumstances and I did other things while drawing. スケジュール管理のずさんさがうきぼりになりましたとも、えぇ。 You could also say that I got distinctly sloppy managing my schedule, yes. もうちょっと余裕をもって煮詰めてみたいなぁと思うのですが、 自身のズボラさもあってなかなかうまいこといかないですねぇ。 I think it would have been nice to try and distill it more with a bit more time, but with my own sloppiness it won't turn out well. 今度の夏コミは背景なども描けるように 余裕をもって描きたいです。 For the next Summer Comiket, I'd like to have enough time to draw backgrounds and stuff too. 受かれば、ですが。 If I'm accepted. 発行者: ぴざぬこ Publisher: Pizanuko サークル: 創攻線 Circle: Soukousen 連絡先 Contact address 印刷所: 株式会社サングループ様 Print office: Kabushiki Kaisha Sungroup-sama (株式会社サングループ様) 発行日 Date of publication 奥付 Colophon |
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(C60) [GUST (Harukaze Soyogu)] Aoi Shoudou 2 (Noir)
P19.
sfx: puchu...
1/4
Ah......
sfx: nichu...
It's alright
lower your hip slowly
2/5
sfx: gupupupu...
3/5
nn...
aah...
ah......
sfx: pu pu pu
4/5
ko...
Kouji's thing...
haa...
is...
hitting deep inside me...
sfx: kyun (squeeze) kyuun (squeeze)
5/5
Neya...
try moving...
......
ok...
P20.
1/4
nn
ah
ha
sfx: tapu tapu tapu (jiggle)
2/4
sfx: zu zu zu
Neya......
It feels great...
how does it feel Neya ......?
sfx: guchu zuchu guchu
3/4
I...
I don't know......
b......
but...
I want to keep doing this......
sfx: zunu zunu zunu zunu zunu
4/4
me too...
sfx: nuchu guchu zuchu
ah
aahn!
P21.
1/4
sfx: jupu jupu jupu jupu jupu
2/4
sfx: buru buru (shake/tremble)
3/4
sfx: kuchu...
4/4
sfx: zu (slide)
P22.
1/3
kouji......
2/3
i love you.....
kyun (blush)
sfx: chu chu (kiss)
i love you.....
3/3
ko...
koujii...!!!
sfx: nubu gupu zupu nupu
P23.
1/2
Neya's vagina...
its twitching...
are you... about to cum...?
i'm...
a...about to......!
sfx: gepu zupu gepu zunu nubu
2/2
cum...ahh!
haaa...nn
sfx: biku biku! (shudder)
sfx: zuku zu dopyu (spurt)
P24.
1/4
squeeze (kyun)
squ
squ...eeze (kyun)
ah......
Neya's......
insides are tightening......
2/4
same as aoi......
I wonder......
are all girls like this......?
3/4
Neya...
did you feel good on your first time?
4/4
because aoi was doing this......
eh?
P25.
1/3
aoi always thought...
that doing this would make kouji happy
so i tried imitating it......
2/3
......umm
that......
does that mean......
aoi is always doing that
kind of act...
3/3
ah! Neya
w, wait...
...!
myoi~~n
Koujiiii....
ah
aoi......!
hawawa!
sfx: paki! (knuckle crack)
P26
<When would i write this if not now?...before the carnage...kind of Noir afterword>
Hey, it's Harukaze Soyogu. The schedule this time around was a little dangerous!
But this was all due to my serious lack of will power, and ability... Other people might be thinking that I had plenty of time......
Uwah, sorry i started complaining all of the sudden......
I watched the first episode of Noir, and was like [Oh, this is pretty good] and had a high expectation, but I ended up recording it without watching it in real time for a while...after which, I started hearing some bad things about it.
I had some time, so I resolved myself to watch 10 or so episodes all at once!..... and it was relatively good. Well, there were some parts that bothered me but even if I take those negative parts into account, I felt the attractive characters and the world mood was good enough to make up for it.
And of course, Kirika! and the old guys were great. Or rather, all the female characters besides Kirika weren't that great...
As for Chloe....it would have been nice if her design were a little better.
I don't think anyone would doubt how cute Kirika is, but how about it?
I think those guys from the Taiwan black organization didn't shoot Kirika when she charged in by herself because of how cute she is.
Ah, maybe that only applies to asians since those middle eastern guerilla's gave her a beating.
That fat guy who seemed worried about Kirika might have been Japanese. After all, that identification paper was written in Japanese.
But seriously, the enemies were too weak...to the point of being pitiful.
On the other hand, all the girls, especially Kirika and Chloe were outrageous strong.
Luckly I enjoyed it so it was no-problem! I'm M towards females so.
Neya and Kirika. When you think about it, the heroines this time were both expressionless huh.
I thought it was unusual that I would fall for these characters...but Kirika's character design was perfect!
But these characters, if they make a harsh facial expressions they tend to look like different characters so I was worried about that.
The coloring on the front this time was done by KIN san.
Thank you very much!! for doing it despite being busy.
Well I guess I should start wrapping it up. If we meet again... it'll probably be Scryed...or Noir again... I haven't decided.
I'd be happy if you could send any thoughts or requests on my work by mail.
Well then...
Harukaze Soyogu
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