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over leveled white imo
details on cum stains are gone
[puu.sh] http://puu.sh/8f1tH.jpg

[www.pixiv.net] http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mod...2928&page=0

Here's the pixiv version of the cover, if it helps. That image is the back cover, but they're very similar.

I think her nipples are too dark in both edited versions, but I'm also not very good at identifying colors.

Hey folks. So I decided to give the editing bounty on MOVIE STAR IIIc a shot, but since I've no real experience with this sort of thing any feedback on what I've done so far would sure be welcome. I've got a first draft on the first 16 pages available for viewing here:[www.mediafire.com] MOVIE STAR IIIc

First thing. Never link break within a single bubble.

Second thing. Work on sizing and alignment of your lines. You were doing fine but it started to get wonky on page 8.

First thing. Never link break within a single bubble.

Second thing. Work on sizing and alignment of your lines. You were doing fine but it started to get wonky on page 8.

Aye, the sizing and alignment is still a work in progress. But I have a second draft, now up to page 28, so hopefully things have improved some. Here it is: [www.mediafire.com] MOVIE STAR IIIc (Second Draft)

Hello there, I'm new in editing. Please qc some picture.
ori - [postimg.org] http://postimg.org/image/qzunjkjch/
edit - [postimg.org] http://postimg.org/image/exk3y9tof/

Try to get pure white background and pure black at the head band. Still nub at selecting font.

This post has been edited by afire1: Jun 16 2014, 20:32

Hello there, I'm new in editing. Please qc some picture.
ori - [postimg.org] http://postimg.org/image/qzunjkjch/
edit - [postimg.org] http://postimg.org/image/exk3y9tof/

Try to get pure white background and pure black at the head band. Still nub at selecting font.

Just use the lasso tool, or switch to Quick Mask mode to select the head band and any other extra parts and level to perfection. For a font, Wild Words (in full caps), would be a decent pick for the regular bubbles and something like Evil Genius for the spiked bubbles or maybe Trash Hand.

Also, save as a PNG or else the jpeg will mess up the pristine white from the leveling.

This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Jun 16 2014, 21:30

Hello there, I'm new in editing. Please qc some picture.
ori - [postimg.org] http://postimg.org/image/qzunjkjch/
edit - [postimg.org] http://postimg.org/image/exk3y9tof/

Try to get pure white background and pure black at the head band. Still nub at selecting font.

i have read some guide in typography and common practice in manga editing. Please qc the image and suggest if there any improvement to be made.

[postimg.org] (IMG:[s4.postimg.org] http://s4.postimg.org/mum4geuux/0005c.jpg)

[postimg.org] (IMG:[s4.postimg.org] http://s4.postimg.org/xew1yzzcp/0005d.jpg)

[postimg.org] (IMG:[s4.postimg.org] http://s4.postimg.org/iwyur081l/0005e.jpg)

i have read some guide in typography and common practice in manga editing. Please qc the image and suggest if there any improvement to be made.

[postimg.org] (IMG:[s4.postimg.org] http://s4.postimg.org/mum4geuux/0005c.jpg)

[postimg.org] (IMG:[s4.postimg.org] http://s4.postimg.org/xew1yzzcp/0005d.jpg)

[postimg.org] (IMG:[s4.postimg.org] http://s4.postimg.org/iwyur081l/0005e.jpg)

pls choose another image site. all those adds make it nearly impossible to get to the img when on phone
also you can still see a bit of the original text in bubble 3

pls choose another image site. all those adds make it nearly impossible to get to the img when on phone
also you can still see a bit of the original text in bubble 3

Sorry.

ori - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yybR
edit 1 - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yyc4
edit 2 - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yycf
edit 3 - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yycp
edit 4 - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yycF

ori - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yybR
edit 1 - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yyc4
edit 2 - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yycf
edit 3 - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yycp
edit 4 - [puu.sh] http://puu.sh/9yycF

The name "Allen" appears to be correct (googled about Xenosaga).

Edit 2 looks best but please change the font for, "Hehe♪ Everyone will know this if you keep being so loud♪". I also think the line could be worded better, more like, "Hehe♪ They'll notice you if (you're / your voice is) too loud♪" or "Hehe♪ Keep your voice down or they'll notice you♪".

This post has been edited by freudia: Jun 19 2014, 02:51

Yep, that's a better wording (proofreader approval :>)

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I've stumbled upon something that you may find of use

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Hello fellow editors. Does anyone know of a good way to clean up the text in the semi-transparent bubble in the link below?
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/7x695sc2tqrp..._016_edited.png

This post has been edited by speedyth: Jun 22 2014, 19:27

Hello fellow editors. Does anyone know of a good way to clean up the text in the semi-transparent bubble in the link below?
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/7x695sc2tqrp..._016_edited.png

New layer, do some redrawing to reconnect the lines and clone stamp that stuff.

Okay. I managed to get the lines connected (using paths made connecting the details smoother), but I am still having a very hard time with finding a good match to clone the patterns (as this pattern has very subtle differences from one place to the next) here is where I am now.
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/4u3qwd5jg3wk..._016_edited.png

This post has been edited by speedyth: Jun 23 2014, 17:20

What Image Editor are you using? I messed with it and got like.... 80% accuracy with the pattern aside from the gradient. But it's only noticeable if you're looking for it.

GIMP.