Editing advice for whomever it may concern...
Practice with leveling. Next, the font positioning isn't too bad, but could use some improvement, and it looks liked the anti-aliasing was turned off. Also, the images should've been desaturated. <---That's something I notice with some stuff, where the scanner doesn't change it so it comes out with a slight color that only adds unnecessary size to the images. Easy fix, just go to Mode -> greyscale. All in all, it's not too bad.
This should be beneficial to your editor.
This post has been edited by Super Shanko: Nov 2 2013, 23:46