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> [Red's 48th Individual Bounty] [GOLD RUSH (Suzuki Address)] A Diva of Healing II (Gundam SEED D.) -> [English], Reward: 30,000 Credits + 30 Hath

 
post Jun 26 2013, 00:51
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Translate the linked gallery into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.<br /><br />This translation includes credit pages. Broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted.<br /><br />Gallery link: https://e-hentai.org/g/4438/22e1a9aad9/<br /><br />If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post in the relevant forum thread (which has more details on the bounty): <br /><br />Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.<br /><br />In addition to the carriers listed, you should post the translation in the forums.

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If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2-3 weeks and you are unresponsive, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.

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* Due to potential misunderstandings about how to split the bounty between translators and editors that resulted in my recent bounties costing me 50%-100% more than listed price, I am now splitting the bounty between translating and editing. The first bounty that goes up in the system is for translating only. Once I have the translation, I'll post the editing bounty;
* broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted;
* yes, please translate (or at least summarize) any existing author's rants, credits, titles of content, and so on, if present;
* yes, please translate into English non-moan SFXes (examples: bounce, giggle, jinngle, creak);
* if you do the translating, you should accept the bounty, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it;
* if you do the editing: please note I would like to upload the gallery to e-h system myself; I am not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What I pay out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year. If you end up posting the translated doujin to the e-h galleries, I'll probably halve the bounty (if you did the translation and editing), or refuse to pay (if you did the editing only; note that the translator will still get fully paid by me);
* crappy editing will not be accepted;
* please include credits with the translator name (unless they requested here to be anonymous), yourself as an editor (if you want), and my nickname (and those of others who contributed to this bounty significantly) as the sponsor, as well as the name of any other major sponsors for the translation and editing (check bounties). Also, note this is an [EHCOVE] release, add a link to the name of our site (E-hentai) as the host, and invite readers to use our bounty system or join us as editors/translators. Sample credit pages: link;link, link and (now that's cool!) link;
* those bounties are for the hard work (translation and editing). If you just found the gallery somewhere and just uploaded it here, you are not eligible for my bounties, but I will still give you a reward - 5+5 (apply for it here);
* if you find a hq version of the J raw, whether it has or hasn't been translated, I'll reward you for it with a 2+2 reward (apply for it here (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) );
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post Nov 11 2013, 11:55
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I'd like to accept this bounty; I will start work on it, and post translation here as well as PM the text to you. Hopefully it will take me about 1-2 weeks, although I may get it done faster.

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post Nov 13 2013, 17:52
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Excellent, we are looking forward t the translation!
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post Dec 12 2013, 04:35
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I've asked the translator for an update, if there's no reply the bounty will be considered open again
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post Dec 12 2013, 08:03
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Hi,

So as I said in my message, most of it is done, just the last 3 pages still need translation.

the link is here:
[www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/6n89y9pc9qz5...ranslation.docx

I can proceed, but it may be a while before I get around to finishing the last part (at least a week)
Or, you can decide what to do with the bounty.. accept, partially accept, reject altogether and find another translator...

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post Dec 13 2013, 07:06
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No worries, I am totally fine with waiting a little longer for you to finish the work.
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post Jan 2 2014, 04:37
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Finally finished this monster. If you look at the actual translation work, like 60% of it was the postscript =_=.

Anyway, happy new year everybody! glad to get this done and behind me

link: [www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/6n89y9pc9qz5...ranslation.docx
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post Jan 2 2014, 16:59
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Looks good to me. If there are no comments by others, I have no problem accepting this in few days and submitting it to editing.
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post Jan 5 2014, 02:47
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Editing bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=9555

Note: please use decensored scans

Don't forget about the credit page
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post Jan 7 2014, 17:38
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I'm interested in translating A Diva of Healing IV, should I start?
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post Jan 11 2014, 15:33
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QUOTE(CapableScoutMan @ Jan 7 2014, 10:38) *

I'm interested in translating A Diva of Healing IV, should I start?


Yes, please. I have not heard anything from any other interested party in days. But please confirm it here when or if you do start the work, and please mark the bounty as accepted.
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post Jan 12 2014, 16:07
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I accepted the bounty back when I made my previous post, so I'll just start working on it now. It shouldn't take too long.
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post Jan 13 2014, 14:03
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Note: There are some SFX that indicate actions more than sounds. I'll format those as "description/possible sound", if the latter is possible. Similarly, all the "haah" parts can be replaced with "pant". There are also many identical thrusting sounds, which can't be represented otherwise.

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Page 5
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1
-I'm putting it in, are you ready?
(sfx: press/squish)

2
-Yes...I must apologize for my selfishness in making such an unclean request of you...
-I'm the one who taught you how good it feels here, so I have to take responsibility. ♡
-Hyah!
-Nn...♡
-Mmmmm~
(sfx: slow insertion)

3
-There...it's all the way in ♡
-Ah...
-Ye...
-Yes...
(sfx: twitch)

4
-It feels...wonderful...I love anal penetration...
-Please, go ahead and move, Kira. ♡
(sfx bubble in the middle: squeeze)

5
-Yep! ♡
(sfx: pant pant)

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Page 6
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1
-Mm...mmnn~
(sfx: pull)

2
-Higuu...uuh~
(sfx: push)

3
-Mm- (four times)
(sfx: thrust thrust)

4
-Ah-
-Ha-
-Ha-
-Ha-ah!
(sfx: sounds of pulling out and thrusting in/squelch-schlick)

5
-Higu-uh!
-M-
-A-ah!
-Mm-♡
-Hya!♡
-A-aah!♡
-Ah!♡
(sfx: upper right and lower left - pull/push, lower right - twitch, upper left - slap slap)

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Page 7
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1
-Hyaah!
-You...you're too rough!
-Hiaah-Kira!
-Ah-please-aah!
-Please! Slower!
(sfx: right - thrust, left - pull, lower left - twitch)

2
-Stop-!
-Hyah!
-You'll break me!
-Ah!
(sfx: top - twitch, right - pull, left - thrust)

3
-No-not yet! I don't-!
-Hyah!
-I don't want to cum yet! I...
-I don't...

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Page 8
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1
-Hyaaaah! ♡
(sfx: right - spurt, left - twitch)

2
-Haah...haah...
-Your turn to be on top, Lacus...
-Certainly ♡
(sfx: rightmost bubble - squirt, center - drip)

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Page 9
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1
-Haah
-Haah...haah
-haah...haah...I guess...keeping it up for three hours...is a bit tiring...haah...haah...
-In...indeed it is...haah, haah...

2
-You're too rough, Kira ♡
-haah
-haah
-If you keep treating me so roughly, you'll break me.
-Please take it slowly and gently next time ♡

3
-O...okay! Haah...haah...I'll do so...next time! We hadn't done it in a while, so I couldn't help it this time...but your voice is too cute, Lacus, and I can't help giving it all I've got...you know?
-haah
-haah
-When you told me that you wanted it "from behind", you were so cute I thought I'd cum

right away ♡
(sfx in their bubbles: pant)

4
-No!
(sfx: blush)

5
-Kira! Don't!!
-Ahaha! Sorry, Lacus ♡
(bottom right text: Stop voicing those thoughts!)
(sfx: light hitting)

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Page 10
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1
-Your first time, you were so embarrassed you were blushing like a tomato ♡

2
-Tha- That's how everyone's first time is!
-You were nervous too, were you not!?
(sfx: blush)

3
That said, this will be a story about how their love began. The time period is close to "Between the Stars".

4
-The House of Prayers in Orb. Lacus and Kira are alone today.
-Cagalli has taken Malchio and the kids outside, to make some room for them (lol)

5
-Lacus ♡
-Kira...♡

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Page 11
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1
-This...is my first time doing this sort of...I do have theoretical knowledge, but...
-It's okay...I'll take the lead.

2
-Have you...done this before?
-Wha...uh...yeah...

3
sfx: unease

4
...Are you angry?

5
-Ah...
-I apologize...that's not it.

6
-I was jealous of the person you were in love with.
-She knew sides of you I don't...and you loved her, did you not? I do know that I am blessed with your love now, but...
-I cannot help feeling some jealousy...I'm sorry...

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Page 12
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1
-N-...mm...
(sfx: upper two - twitch, bottom - fondle/squeeze)

2
-Mfh! (heart)
(sfx: right - boing, left - stretch)

3
M...mm...
(sfx: roll)

4
-Mm...
-mph...
(sfx: twitch)

5
-Lacus...you don't need to hold your voice in.
-But...
-Would it not be...lewd?
-Of course not...I want to hear it ♡
-...Yes ♡

6
-Hyah!
-A-fwaah!
(sfx: twitch)

7
-Mm-
-Ah!
(sfx: right - slide, left - slow movement)

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Page 13
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1
-It's wet...
(sfx: schlick)

2
-Oh no!
-I-I'm sorry, I...
(sfx: blush)

3
-Your breasts felt good, didn't they?
(sfx: suuuck)

4
-...yes.
(sfx: upper - nod, lower - mega blush)

5
-That's good ♡
(sfx: pop)

6
-Hyaah, mm-!
-Nn-
-Haah-haah! ♡
-Nmu!
-Hya-a-AH! ♡
(sfx: right two - twitch, small bubble in the center - suck, left - squeeze)

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Page 14
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1
-Huh...?
-Kira...Are you really going to...?

2
-Hyaah!
(sfx: right - lick, left - twitch)

3
-No!! You can't - you mustn't lick there!! Kira!! Stop!!
-Hyaah!
-Kira, no!
-Ah!

4 (upper left panel)
-Hyaaah!
(sfx: right - suck, left - twitch)

5 (lower right panel)
-Hyan!
-Oh, Kira!
(sfx: twitch)

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Page 15
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1
-I don't want to stop... This place is so soft and delicious, and it looks like it feels good...
-It smells nice too, and it's really getting me in a dirty mood (laugh)
(sfx: right - squeeze, left - suck)

2
-No! Don't smell it!
(sfx: sniff)

3
-Do you enjoy licking there, Kira?
(sfx: panting)

4
-Do you hate it, Lacus?
-Hyan! Wai-don't spread it-!
(sfx: soft squeeze)

5
-Ah!
-Auh!
(sfx: twitch)

6
-Hah...hah... I'm not sure about that, but it's slightly embarrassing...especially since you keep teasing me like that!
-Plus...I feel bad about being the only one enjoying this...

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Page 16
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1
-Then will you lick me too?
-Aah!
(sfx: zoom)

2
-Ye...yes. ♡ I have no confidence in my skills, but if you want me to, I will do all I can!
-Mmm...n-
(sfx: suck)

3
-Aah...
(sfx: up - suck, down - lick)

4
-It's twitching...does it feel good here?
(sfx: top - lick, the rest - suck)

5
-I want to make him feel better.
(sfx: sucking on the side)

6
-Does it...feel good?
-Yep.
-I'm glad...
(sfx: fondle)

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Page 17
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1
-I got it ♡ He's twitching because he feels good, yes? Which means that if I get it all in my mouth...
-But he's so big...I wonder if I can do it...
(sfx: right - suck, left - twitch)

2
-Ah...
-Mm...
(sfx: open wide)

3
-M...mm...
(sfx: suuuck)

4
-It's too big...I can't get it in all the way to the base...
-Nn-
(sfx: gagging)

5
-Nmu-
-Nn-
-Mm-
(sfx: sucking)

6
-N-
-ng-
-Nn-
(sfx: long, wet sucking)

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Page 18
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1
-Guuh!!
-Lacu-
(sfx: twitch)

2
-Mgu-!!
-Mm-!! Mmmmm-
(sfx: right - spurt, left - squirt)

3
-Nn...
-Umm...
-Amazing...it's still not stopping...so much semen...♡
-Higuu...uuuh...
(sfx: top - spurt, middle right - gulp, middle left - squirt, far left - stroke)

4
-Nn...
-N...nnn...
-Lacus! You-you don't have to swallow it...
(sfx: shock)

5
-But I wanted to drink it, it's yours after all ♡
-I'm sorry, I went ahead and came by myself...
-Not at all ♡ I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♡ Besides, you're going to take very good care of me, are you not?

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Page 19
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1
-Yes ♡ Of course.
-Are you ready, Lacus?

2
-Yes ♡

3
sfx: top - push, bottom - schlick

4
-She's...shaking...
(sfx: grip)

5
-U...um...Kira...
-Yes?

6
-Could you please...hold me?
-Hold me tightly...

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Page 20
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1
-Yes ♡ I'll be very gentle with you, so relax...
-Kira...
(sfx: hug)

2
-Hyan-
-Hyuu-
(sfx: insertion)

3
-Nnnn!!
-Higuu ♡
(sfx: abrupt insertion/squelch)

4
-Are you okay?
-Ye...yes.
-Ki...raa...kiss...please kiss me ♡

5
-Nn (heart)
-M-mm-nn-mm!
-Hnn-
(sfx: wet thrusting sounds)

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Page 21
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1
-Ngu-
-Nn-
(sfx: right - twitch, left - kiss)

2
-Pwah-
-Haa-aah!♡

3
-Aah ♡
-Hyah-
-Ah-ah-hyaaah-
(sfx: right - twitch, left - thrusting sounds)

4
-Hya-ah-
-It feels so good inside you...it's so soft and wet ♡
-Hyah-no ♡ Don't-
(sfx: sticky, wet thrusting sounds)

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Page 22
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1
-Ah-
-Hya-ah ♡ Fwaah (heart) Aaah!
-Haaah-
-Nnah ♡
(sfx: sticky thrusting sounds)

2
-Kira ♡
-Kiraaa ♡

3
-I love-
-Kira ♡ I love you so much ♡
-Hyaah!
(sfx: thrusting sounds)

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Page 23
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1
-I-...I can't-...Hyaah!
-I'm going to...

2
-Kira! Kiraa!
-Please, Kira! Hold me- hold me tightly!
-Ah- ♡
(sfx: boing)

3
-Aah-
-Kira- Kiraa! ♡

4
-Gyuu!
(sfx: thrusting sounds)

5
-Hyuu!
(sfx: twitch)

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Page 24
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-N-haaaaaaah!
(sfx: top - twitch, bottom right - splort, bottom left - squirt)

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Page 25
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1
-Kira...you enjoyed it, didn't you...you came so much...
-Ah-m...mmmm-...
(sfx: right - squirt, left - twitch)

2
-Kira...could you hold me tightly ♡
-and kiss me? ♡

3
sfx: hug

4
Kira...I love you ♡

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Page 26
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1
-You were so innocent back then...
-And you were blushing so much ♡
(sfx: spacing off)

2
-Kiraaaaa!
(small letters in her bubble: You're making it sound like I'm an indecent woman now!)
(small letters left of his head - Ow, ow!)
(sfx: pinch)

3
-You're the one who turned me into who I am today!! I expect you to take responsibility!!

4
-Sure!

5
-Let's get married, Lacus!
-Wha- But...
-Huh?
-Ah-...Yes! ♡ Huh?
(sfx: blush)

6
-Could he be propo...

7
-On second thought, I must decline. Accepting this proposition after this flow of events would be...unsatisfying (wry smile)
-Ah...you're right...That wasn't my intention, but it sure would...Let's try again on another occasion...
-Yes ♡

The end

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Page 27
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AFTERWORD

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Page 28
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1
Afterword

2
Suzuki Address's..."May I be able to buy lots of figures and doujinshi this year" chapter. (My wish for the new year.)

3
-*pant pant* Lacus-taaan ♡
-S2OA Strike Freedom, you are clear for launch!
-Whoa! Good evening, I'm Suzuki Address! 00 has finally started! But I'll keep writing doujinshi about Lacus (lol)
(sfx: click)

4
-I rewatched the SEED series while writing the manuscript for this work, and it was just as good as I remembered it! And Lacus-tan is fap fap! (mystery)
-I'm worried about the movie not appearing in magazines and the like. I hope it doesn't get cancelled...Don't you want to see them all? Kira's growth! And Athrun's! And Lacus! And Mei Ling! And EVERYONE!

5
-This new work often made me think that maybe I'm a dangerous person. Partially because when I think about Lacus, my chest tightens! (rofl) No, don't run away! (rofl)
-But really, how can I say this...When I seriously think that Lacus-tan is an anime character, my chest hurts...I'm like "Is this what heartbreak is?" (rofl) An "Is this love!? Is it!?" sort of thing (rofl) Sigh...(<-lovesick sigh)

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Page 29
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1
-On another note, among the people who came to the Comiket venue, there were many who brought me things like SEED goods, or souvenirs from their birthplace, or doujinshi they made themselves.
-Among those, many had requests or impressions to tell me! Those will be a great point of reference, as well as encouragement!
(outside the bubbles: right - Happy New Year, left - squeak)

2
For that reason, I plan to write some things related to the "afterword" that left an impression in the summer Comiket. Many people told me that they were looking forward to the afterword, and a certain lady told me that it helped her in drawing H-manga. I don't think I wrote such an interesting afterword, but it's true that I put some of my personal rules for drawing in it. For instance, the most useful parts of an eromanga are always at the end, aren't they? The eroscenes, to put it bluntly? Have you ever experienced something like the following?
(text outside of bubble: It troubles me...)

3
-*pant...pant...*
(sfx: flap)

4
-I'll finish off with this page!
(sfx: flap)

5
-Whoa!
(sfx: slip)

6
-Practically speaking, isn't it a problem? I mean, doesn't this sort of thing happen while you're using the book and reach the final pages? With that in mind, my aim is to always put an afterword at the end, to prevent this sort of accident! I certainly didn't tack it on at the end, honest. (lol) I love it when manga have afterwords at the end, and I want to write one, too. (lol)
Text outside the bubble: It would be a disaster if the book got wet. (With what?)

7
-With that said, I plan to continue writing afterwords. Still, at my current rate of publicating new works, afterwords might get more difficult to write...I'm thinking of lowering my publication frequency for 2008. (wry smile)
-I hope to see you again, everyone! Please look forward to my next works too!
(text outside the bubble: See ya!)

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Page 30
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1
-The third day of Comiket begins now...
-Woooooooooo!

2
The customers are here!
(sfx: stampeding footsteps)

3
-Hm? Did they spot us?
-Whoa, they've begun to form a line!

4
-But now's not the time for commentary! DonDokoDon!
(sfx: threatening atmosphere/zawa zawa)

5
-Please form three lines!
-I said please!

6
-Zuowaouoeo!?
(sfx: DOOOOM)

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Page 31
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2
-Ah- however...
-Good morning...
-That cool-looking maid is holding up fine, even though she's sweating like a waterfall!

3
-Even though I'm so busy
-Thank you very much!
-The sense of completion I get from these few hours
-And the heart-warming exchanges with the customers
-Do your best!

4
-Are something I want to thank you for!
Text on top: Yeeeeeah!
Bottom right letters: Mission accomplished!
Middle left: Thank you too, miss maid!
Bottom left: Combustion

END
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post Jan 13 2014, 14:31
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Excellent. If there are no comments by others concerning the Japanese, I'll accept it after proofreading in the near future (quick scan suggests English is fine).
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QUOTE(CapableScoutMan @ Jan 13 2014, 07:03) *


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-Yes...I must apologize for my selfishness in making such an unclean request of you...


I'd say a dirty not an unclean

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post Jan 15 2014, 00:54
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editing bounty for IV posted https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=9628

still waiting for an editor for II
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post Jan 16 2014, 16:33
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i would like to try and edit this one, but i m pretty new(like how and where to upload when finish). how long do you expect this one to be done? (IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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post Jan 17 2014, 13:08
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Take few days, no problem. Also note that this thread has currently two editing bounties: for part II and part IV
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post Jan 18 2014, 16:16
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Since the editor has trouble accessing the script for Diva II, I am reposting it here

QUOTE


[GOLD RUSH (Suzuki Address)] A Diva of Healing II (Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED DESTINY)
Translated by: whowhatme
11/11/2013
Translation
Page 4:
Panel1: Ah <3
Panel1: Hya
Panel2: Haa
Panel2: Ah
Panel3: Haa aaah <3
Panel4: Uhh
Panel4: Kyaa
Panel4: Hyaa, aah, aahh <3
Panel5: Hyaaah <3
Panel5: Aaah <3
Panel5: Nnaah <3

Page 5:
Panel1: Kyaa!! Ahh ahhh ahh <3
Panel1: Hyaa <3
Panel1: Auhh Ahh <3
Panel2: NOO KIRA IT’S TOO INTENSE!!
Panel2: Hyaaa
Panel2: But..! But..! It feels so good <3
Page 6:
Panel1: Hyaa aaahh <3
Panel1: Haaa <3
Panel2: KIRA! KIRA! CUM WITH ME! CUUM!
Panel2: Hyaaaa aaaaaaaaaah <3 (etc…)
Page 7:
Panel3: For some reason, lately…
Panel3: Hm?
Panel4: It’s like… we’re in a rut… for real…
Panel5: …Kira?
Panel6 (Kira): U..uu…umm…
Panel6: Wha!? Um um um!!
Panel7: I didn’t mean it like that!!
Panel7 When I have sex with you, it’s not like you’re complacent, or that you’re always using the same positions, or that your movements are monotonous, it’s nothing like that!!
Page 8:
Panel1: It’s none of those things…
Panel 1: It’s just... well…
Panel2: Sorry… I must be too content… if I’m suddenly saying crazy things like that…
Panel3: Kira…
Panel3: …
Panel3: Yeah…
Panel4: Since then we’ve been loving each other every day, huh, there’s nothing you don’t know about sex, huh.
Panel5: I’m trying to have a serious conversation here :<
Panel5: Anyway you were the one who taught me most of those things!!
Panel5: It’s like you’re saying I’m the pervy girl here.. *sulk*
Panel6: Well then, how about… we hold off on the sex for a while?

Page 9:
Panel1: From this moment forth for one week I will not have sex!! Of course masturbation is out, too!
Panel2: You will use this and perform all your duties with regards to the Gundam.
Panel3: What’s that?
Panel4: Well, this will increase your sexual desire many times over.
Panel4(dialogue): “Ok, please do that for me, Issac-san”
Panel4(dialogue): “Ok! Leave it to me!”
Panel4: This is a biological vibrator that will stop you if you’re close to orgasm.
Panel5: Even if you want to cum, you won’t be able to for one week.
Panel7: Hyaa oh, no…. Just touching it makes me want to cum
Panel7: Just… one more day…
Page 10:
Panel1: United Emirates of Orb
Panel2: It’s been a while Lacus, how was your week?
Panel2: Um… that aside, why didn’t you drive today?
Panel3: Hm? Should I have driven?
Panel3: N..no…
Panel4: Kira…
Panel4: hm?
Panel4: ah.. um…
Panel5: Kira… is he feeling fine? As for me… it was so hard for me… was it just me who…
Panel6: No…
Panel6: KI..
Panel6: Gawd…!
Panle7 KI..RA!!!
Page 11:
Panel2: Kira… Please!! Right here!! Stick it in me right now!!
Panel2: Ehh? But.. Lacus…
Panel3: It’s ok! It’s fine!
Panel3: Mm <3
Panel3: Look.. I’m already… sooo… sooo sticky and wet down there!!
Panel3: La..! Lacus where are your panties?
Panel4: …Ok Lacusu <3 Ok, then I’ll just… stick it in while we’re standing here
Panel4: Uuhn!!

Page 12:
Panel1: Uhhn!!
Panel1: Noo!!
Panel2: Eh?
Panel3: Nooo! Not yet!
Panel3: HyaaaaaAaaaAaaAaa!!
Panel4 (inset): Ah.. aahhh..
Panel4: La.. Lacus…? Did you.. did you already cum..?
Panel5: I held it.. I held off for so long… but as soon as I thought I felt your cock… I couldn’t take it anymore…
Panel5: Sorry… it was just me… Kira, you…
Panel6: Wow… Kira your cock is pulsating…

Page 13:
Panel2: Kira’s penis it’s bulging… and it smells so dirty…
Panel3: *lick*
Panel4: Uuh
Panel5: *smooch*
Panel6: Ah…
Panel6: mm… mm…
Panel7: mm.. mmm~~….
Panel8 (inset): AH!!
Page 14:
Panel1: Ubu (sound of mouth filling)
Panel2: ~~~~!!
Panel3: … (bikun bikun = *twitch twitch*)
Panel5: mm… mmm..
Panel6: It’s soo thick… it’s hard to swallow…
Panel6: Looks like Kira was holding it in too…
Page 15:
Panel3: aaahh..
Panel3: Amazing… even though he just came…
Panel 4 (inset): I want it… Kira, your cock, I want it so much…
Panel4 (inset): Please, Kira, take your cock and roughly grind it around in my hot sticky pussy…
Panel4: OK! I wanted to stick it in you, too.
Panel5: aaahhh.. Kira…
Panel5: H..hurry….
Panel6: Ahhh!

Page 16:
Panel1: Hyaaahhaaaaahahaahh <3
Panel2: Mmmaaaahhhh<3 aaahh<3
Panel2: It’s.. It’s so good! More! Grind it in me more! <3
Page 17:
Panel1: (sex sounds etc.)
Panel2: NOoo! Just sticking it in me made me cum a second time!!
Panel2: If he keeps going like this… I’ll!!
Panel3: Ah, aah, ahyaa <3

Page 18:
Panel1: No, Kira, my tits.. no, if you squeeze my tits like that, I can’t.. I’m gonna…
Panel2: Hyaa, I can’t, I can’t stop myself!!
Panel3: NO!!
Panel3: I’M CUMMING!!
Panel3: I’M CUMMING AGAIN!!
Panel4: Nnn.. nn… Lacus… sorry, I’m almost..!!
Panel5: Yes!!
Panel5: Cum!! Cum for me Kira!! Cum, cum inside me, shoot it all inside me!!

Page 19:
Panel1: Mmm <3
Panel1: Mmmppff!!
Panel2: Mm.. <3
Panel3: *lick* *huff*
Panel4: Hyaa…n <3 It’s getting big again…
Panel5: Kira.. leave it in… and one more time… <3
Panel6: I’m moving it, k?
Panel6: ok <3
Panel6: Ahhh… <3

Page 20:
Panel1 (inset): Again!!? I’m cumming again!!? …aaah
Panel2: Um! Kira… that… you fucked me so much.. it’s starting to sting a little..
Panel3: Also, I want your cock in my asshole too.
Panel3: That is, this time I want you to put it in here…
Panel5: Ok! I get it Lacus.
Panel5: Mmn!!
Panel6: Upffh

Page 21:
Panel1: *sex sounds* etc..
Panel2: Hyaaaa <3
Panel2: No, even if it’s in my anus I’m about to cum!! I’m!! I can’t!!
Panel3: Haaaaaaa <3
Pannel3: hyaa aaaa aaa

Page 22:
Panel1: Hya aa haaa etc..
Panel2: Ahhh <3 etc.
Panel2: It’s coming it’s coming!!
Panel3: Aah!! No!! A huge one!!
Panel3: A huge one is coming!!
Panel3: I’M CUMMING I’M CUMMING!!

Page 23:
Panel1: KIRAaaaaa
Panel1: Ahhh KIRA I’m cumming!!MMM <3
Panel2: LACUS!! ME TOO!! I’M CUMMING WITH YOU!!
Panel3: HYAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Page 24:
Panel1: Lacus..
Panel1: Yes?
Panel1: So, I… I was thinking.. Is it ok for me to get used to this..?
Panel2: This kind of world… a world where peace is a matter of fact… is it ok for me to get used to it?
Panel2: Kira…
Panel5: Yeah… We are…

Page 25:
Postscript

Page 26:
GOLD RUSH Studio Diary
Panel1: Hello, it’s Address.
Panel1: I shut myself in the studio from Spring till Summer, and was working on manuscripts the whole time. I was working the whole time, but I couldn’t draw the rather large work I had intended (*cry*)
Panel2: In Kira’s words, “Even then there were a lot of things I couldn’t protect…” typical… “That’s how I really feel” by Kuesu Baraya (note… need help w/ this translation)
Panel2: …ah, I flew too high, going back to what I was saying ((IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)) but I wanted to feature a work with Lacus outdoors. I was able to finish a Geass continuation book, and the rather large LAGAN (tnsl note: Probably an abbreviation of a Gundam franchise) volume was limited to the summer venue, I could even come to understand all the copies that came out….
Panel3: Because of that, there were a lot of people who got their hands on the book from going to the summer venue, but if it sells favorably in the summer venue, there may be more copies available in the winter venue, it will definitely be something to laugh about. ((IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)) (tnsl note: this is really poorly translated, b/c I have no idea about the abbreviations he is using in the doujinshi publishing world… sorry)
Panel3: So, did everyone enjoy this fan book about Lacus? The people who bought my book may know this already, but I really like outdoor scenes and settings, and so I was really happy to be able to implement the wild idea of a “Kira x Lacus outdoor play!” book.

Page 27
Panel1: As for the last scene, the progression has a proper continuation, but this time I did not finish the lines and cut the last scene short. Fans who understand Lacus and are obsessed with SEED will probably be able to imagine what happens next, so I did not draw it out.
Panel1: 4 Years have passed since any activity has passed on SEED… it’s been a long time~ For other circles, SEED works have also been remarkably few in number, it’s a sad ending.
Panel2: But there’s still the movie, and GOLD RUSH also has plans to publish a new Lacus book at ComiKet ((IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)) Klein fans! May they continue to be “moe” to us! I don’t want it to end, at least until the movie premiere!
Panel3: For those who want to see the continuation in particular, a new GUNDAM has been announced, right? It’s called OO (Double O) or something like that, and I’m really looking forward to it but to think that SEED is completely over, and I feel really sad, too (bitter smile).
Panel4: I think I will probably release a new work about Double O in the winter ComiKet. I have a feeling that it will be oriented towards women and it’s in a delicate stage, but I think I’ve been sucked into the project so I will probably publish it ((IMG:[invalid] style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)).
Panel4: THE NEW GUNDAM WILL BE THE OPENING ACT OF A NEW GENERATION! (Uncertain Meaning)
Page 28
Panel1: Hello, it’s the assistant, Taizou, formerly known as Ossan. Normally, a lot of people mistake my face to be really aggressive but
Panel2: That’s not the case?
Panel2: Taiwanese Kan’u
Panel3: This time I received a lot of background support which allowed me to draw, but what about each perspective or drawn line or the ability to see fundamental space or dangerously fat body shapes or your dreams for the future??? (Kaosu announcement) (*tnsl note: this sentence? Made no sense to me)
Page 29 (read top to bottom, right to left)
Panel1: You can turn it on its side or stand it up
Panel1: My new PC and Monitor finally arrived!
Panel2: What’s more, this monitor…
Panel3: ..Revolves!!
Panel4 (speech bubble) Stop spinning it already!
Panel5: There’s nothing so fun as this.
Panel5: The more I paint
Panel6: and the more I erase
Panel7: and the more I save
Panel8: (the PC) the fun of never dropping anything…
Panel8: Thank god…
Page 30
Panel1(right): The first 10 days of June: When I asked Haru 3, “How is the manuscript progressing?” his actions clearly became suspicious.
Panel1(left): “Um… ah… er… now that you mention it have you seen the newly released CBR600RR?” he evasively responded.
Panel2(right): The last 3rd of June: Even when I text Haru 3, he will not respond.
Panel2(left): Choosing to believe that he must be busy with work, I waited. It’s not possible that he decided to stop working on the manuscript… He said he would be busy with his day job, too.
Panel3: The first 10 days of July: As the deadline draws near I could no longer get in touch with Haru 3 via cellphone. When I call his cellphone, “The customer whose number you have dialed is currently…” and so I ran into what is commonly known as “unknown whereabouts.”
Panel3: Even though I thought it a little strange, “He also mentioned that he was busy with work, he’s busy with payments and had no free time” ..was the excuse that I came up with to satisfy myself. So I decided to keep faith in Haru 3 and continue to wait.
Panel4: The middle of July: Without hearing anything from Haru 3 and with the deadline approaching, I visit Haru 3 at his house.
Panel4: When I knocked there was no reply. “It couldn’t be that he is sick and unable to move right??” as that unpleasant thought crossed my mind.

Page 31
Panel1 (right): There at the door I called a mutual friend of Haru 3 and myself. “I hung out with him yesterday?” ……………”I hung out with him yesterday”?
Panel1 (left): As I heard the words, a “CLICK” from the interior of the room betrayed a person’s presence! He was pretending to be out! Haru 3 secured.
Panel2 (right): The end of July: Haru 3 turns himself in.
Panel2 (left): I impulsively brought a ton of Japanese confectionary as omiyage. Please go ahead and have some.
Panel3: After we ate it, he told us “This is by way of apology for dropping the manuscript”, and we were so angry we became speechless.
Panel3: The moment when Haru 3’s normally dysfunctional brain makes a decision.
Panel4: Present: There on Haru 3’s discarded pages I draw manga, where you could find the charm of a man who was worried about his true friend.
Panel4: W… what…? My…. Tears….





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